Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
HAIKU OR SENRYU _ WHO CARES?
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some intriguing verses there Michael, I like them all.
Strangely whether it is haiku, senryu or not is strangely one of the things that I bother about so here goes
1 - haiku
2 - neither
3 - senryu
4 - senryu
5 - is a 5,8,5
to get over this problem where a 5,7,5 is neither I have used the term goldiku.
December 22nd, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
There are some intriguing verses there Michael, I like them all.
Strangely whether it is haiku, senryu or not is strangely one of the things that I bother about so here goes
1 - haiku
2 - neither
3 - senryu
4 - senryu
5 - is a 5,8,5
to get over this problem where a 5,7,5 is neither I have used the term goldiku.
December 22nd, 2018 01:57
ONIONS AND BEANS
Neville said:
keep your friends close.. but keep your enemies closer...
December 21st, 2018 18:24
Neville said:
keep your friends close.. but keep your enemies closer...
December 21st, 2018 18:24
ONIONS AND BEANS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very DROLL UNCLE MIKE : Beans can produce flatus ! Because my JOB is hands~on I have to be careful : what I eat & drink ! The Aromatherapy Oils I use perfume the Salon so I dont have to worry about negative odours ! Its all taken care of under Health & Safety : Smell Good & Feel Good . Love through ODES :
Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the PINGUS we do have them in S Island NZ !
December 21st, 2018 16:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Very DROLL UNCLE MIKE : Beans can produce flatus ! Because my JOB is hands~on I have to be careful : what I eat & drink ! The Aromatherapy Oils I use perfume the Salon so I dont have to worry about negative odours ! Its all taken care of under Health & Safety : Smell Good & Feel Good . Love through ODES :
Angela 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Love the PINGUS we do have them in S Island NZ !
December 21st, 2018 16:27
ONIONS AND BEANS
orchidee said:
Yes, night time now. Why are the nights always dark? Did they always used to be dark? Hmm.
December 21st, 2018 15:25
orchidee said:
Yes, night time now. Why are the nights always dark? Did they always used to be dark? Hmm.
December 21st, 2018 15:25
ONIONS AND BEANS
orchidee said:
That evening is here super-quick - the Shortest Day. Tomorrow\'s not much more daylight either! lol.
December 21st, 2018 10:54
orchidee said:
That evening is here super-quick - the Shortest Day. Tomorrow\'s not much more daylight either! lol.
December 21st, 2018 10:54
ONIONS AND BEANS
orchidee said:
Oh lol M/ How\'s that daylight? Getting lighter again soon.
December 21st, 2018 02:49
orchidee said:
Oh lol M/ How\'s that daylight? Getting lighter again soon.
December 21st, 2018 02:49
ONIONS AND BEANS
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant.
The cartoon brought a big smile to my face, thank you Michael.
December 21st, 2018 02:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Brilliant.
The cartoon brought a big smile to my face, thank you Michael.
December 21st, 2018 02:16
IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD
Neville said:
My immediate reaction is that you may be writing about your own art.. and may be imagining it set and mounted within a golden frame.. I may be miles off mark but hey....
\"It was mine Art,
When I arrived and heard thee, that made gape
The pine and let thee out.\"....
and so say all of us.. N
December 20th, 2018 11:18
Neville said:
My immediate reaction is that you may be writing about your own art.. and may be imagining it set and mounted within a golden frame.. I may be miles off mark but hey....
\"It was mine Art,
When I arrived and heard thee, that made gape
The pine and let thee out.\"....
and so say all of us.. N
December 20th, 2018 11:18
IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I agree, this write is a “tad enigmatic”! As I’m reading and read the words “Prospero’s wand”, it immediately made me think of the Tempest! I can’t get that play’s message out of my mind!
I need to reread it a few times and come back to you with a comment.
Love the painting!
~Laura~
December 20th, 2018 10:56
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I agree, this write is a “tad enigmatic”! As I’m reading and read the words “Prospero’s wand”, it immediately made me think of the Tempest! I can’t get that play’s message out of my mind!
I need to reread it a few times and come back to you with a comment.
Love the painting!
~Laura~
December 20th, 2018 10:56
IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : Very oriental Picture an area I am exploring a bit while in NZ ! You are waxing lyrical ! I am a Romantic : one of brother Corben\'s \"Stupid (Love besotted) Women !\" I interpret your enigmatic Ode as : Someone in LOVE : sliding deeper & deeper into a relationship without counting the cost ! My interpretations of Romance are always encapsulated in a \"Frame of Antique Gold\" !
Love in the Muse : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 20th, 2018 06:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : Very oriental Picture an area I am exploring a bit while in NZ ! You are waxing lyrical ! I am a Romantic : one of brother Corben\'s \"Stupid (Love besotted) Women !\" I interpret your enigmatic Ode as : Someone in LOVE : sliding deeper & deeper into a relationship without counting the cost ! My interpretations of Romance are always encapsulated in a \"Frame of Antique Gold\" !
Love in the Muse : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 20th, 2018 06:31
IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD
orchidee said:
Yes, somewhat like Goldie says, I agree. Or are we the antique frame - very old, that is?!
December 20th, 2018 03:22
orchidee said:
Yes, somewhat like Goldie says, I agree. Or are we the antique frame - very old, that is?!
December 20th, 2018 03:22
IN FRAMES OF ANTIQUE GOLD
Goldfinch60 said:
I see a persons mind creating a painting within them before putting it onto canvas.
December 20th, 2018 03:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I see a persons mind creating a painting within them before putting it onto canvas.
December 20th, 2018 03:00
STONES
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOT STONES placed on Back
In MASSAGE THERAPY
Eases muscle tension
Hi Uncle MIKE this is a treatment I use in the Health Spa ! The Stones are heated in hot water : dried and the placed on the patients BACK on strategic points. It is very TENSION releasing : you should try it ! Love your Poems and the English Village scene. I close my eyes and I am posting a LETTER ! BRIAN sent me a set of POSTCARD with the UK Christmas Stamps all very POSTBOXY ! THE NZ ones are always Spiritual ! Thanks for caring : Love @ Christmas ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 19th, 2018 12:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HOT STONES placed on Back
In MASSAGE THERAPY
Eases muscle tension
Hi Uncle MIKE this is a treatment I use in the Health Spa ! The Stones are heated in hot water : dried and the placed on the patients BACK on strategic points. It is very TENSION releasing : you should try it ! Love your Poems and the English Village scene. I close my eyes and I am posting a LETTER ! BRIAN sent me a set of POSTCARD with the UK Christmas Stamps all very POSTBOXY ! THE NZ ones are always Spiritual ! Thanks for caring : Love @ Christmas ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
December 19th, 2018 12:20
STONES
orchidee said:
Arrghh, another evening on the horizon - dreaded or welcome?!
December 19th, 2018 11:17
orchidee said:
Arrghh, another evening on the horizon - dreaded or welcome?!
December 19th, 2018 11:17
STONES
Neville said:
as stones placed on scales
tis those kilograms that tell tales
oh\' how the truth hurts...
December 19th, 2018 03:09
Neville said:
as stones placed on scales
tis those kilograms that tell tales
oh\' how the truth hurts...
December 19th, 2018 03:09
STONES
orchidee said:
A true and fine write and pic Michael. There\'s too many evenings - 365 of them in a year. Doh!
December 19th, 2018 02:35
orchidee said:
A true and fine write and pic Michael. There\'s too many evenings - 365 of them in a year. Doh!
December 19th, 2018 02:35
DOGS AND CATS
Neville said:
I think you pretty much hit the nail on its head
another nice painting too
December 18th, 2018 13:27
Neville said:
I think you pretty much hit the nail on its head
another nice painting too
December 18th, 2018 13:27
DOGS AND CATS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : The Annual Battle of MOGGIES vs DOGGIES ! In my poem today (BABY BIRD) I mentioned my dog PERRO (A Golden Lab) but dont tell BRIAN as you know he is a No. 1 Felineophile ! We need to remember our Pets over Christmas. Ruth & I only have TROPICAL FISH in the house we Share but we have met many KIWI CATS & DOGS and they are just as pampered as in the UK !
Love & Blessings @ Yuletide : ANGELA
🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Painting : made me homesick for the COTSWOLDS : especially the Phone Box !
December 18th, 2018 06:58
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE : The Annual Battle of MOGGIES vs DOGGIES ! In my poem today (BABY BIRD) I mentioned my dog PERRO (A Golden Lab) but dont tell BRIAN as you know he is a No. 1 Felineophile ! We need to remember our Pets over Christmas. Ruth & I only have TROPICAL FISH in the house we Share but we have met many KIWI CATS & DOGS and they are just as pampered as in the UK !
Love & Blessings @ Yuletide : ANGELA
🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the Painting : made me homesick for the COTSWOLDS : especially the Phone Box !
December 18th, 2018 06:58
DOGS AND CATS
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. I like both cats and dogs!
December 18th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
Oh lol, good write and pic M. I like both cats and dogs!
December 18th, 2018 02:44
DOGS AND CATS
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
In the words of my father \"Cats are arrogant creatures!\"
December 18th, 2018 02:23
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true.
In the words of my father \"Cats are arrogant creatures!\"
December 18th, 2018 02:23
VICE VERSA
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WHAT A GAY DAY ! In my book VERSA ~ would indeed be VICE ~ but millions would disagree ~ C\'est la Vie ~ au jour d\'hui ! Love today\'s Painting especially the CROSS ~ GOD is omnipresent ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 17:48
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WHAT A GAY DAY ! In my book VERSA ~ would indeed be VICE ~ but millions would disagree ~ C\'est la Vie ~ au jour d\'hui ! Love today\'s Painting especially the CROSS ~ GOD is omnipresent ~ AMEN ! Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN
December 17th, 2018 17:48
VICE VERSA
Neville said:
would this be a whimsy... whatever the case, now ya talking.. N
December 17th, 2018 11:58
Neville said:
would this be a whimsy... whatever the case, now ya talking.. N
December 17th, 2018 11:58
VICE VERSA
dusk arising said:
Flippin artistic types! One never knows if they\'re coming or going.
Or vice versa.
December 17th, 2018 11:43
dusk arising said:
Flippin artistic types! One never knows if they\'re coming or going.
Or vice versa.
December 17th, 2018 11:43
VICE VERSA
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk having \'vice versa\'! I should like to have the time for it. Swoon! heehee.
December 17th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
It\'s all right for some folk having \'vice versa\'! I should like to have the time for it. Swoon! heehee.
December 17th, 2018 02:58
MY SPIRIT
orchidee said:
Coooeeeee M. That evening OK? Got any bottle for the evening?!
December 16th, 2018 14:32
orchidee said:
Coooeeeee M. That evening OK? Got any bottle for the evening?!
December 16th, 2018 14:32
MY SPIRIT
dusk arising said:
Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
December 16th, 2018 13:32
dusk arising said:
Always plenty of spirit to be found in the next bottle sir.
December 16th, 2018 13:32
MY SPIRIT
Neville said:
I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers
December 16th, 2018 06:31
Neville said:
I was not expecting the end, but it made me chuckle, no end.. cheers
December 16th, 2018 06:31
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