Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
FLY TIPPING
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a good write Michael. I forgot - was you at Agincourt yesterday for the 1415 reunion?!
October 26th, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a good write Michael. I forgot - was you at Agincourt yesterday for the 1415 reunion?!
October 26th, 2018 01:52
FLY TIPPING
sylviasearcher said:
Somehow you made me think of an elephant scratching his head on his way to an evening out.
October 26th, 2018 01:46
sylviasearcher said:
Somehow you made me think of an elephant scratching his head on his way to an evening out.
October 26th, 2018 01:46
FLY TIPPING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael, I too have never been served by a fly.
October 26th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael, I too have never been served by a fly.
October 26th, 2018 01:09
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
dusk arising said:
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33
dusk arising said:
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~love the CHEEKY CHEEKY GEESE in flight ~ awesome ! You really have pushed the POETIC BOAT out with this one ! I remember the DIAMANTE FORM ~ Mine is rotated triangle ! Also I like the introduction of Barringtons Lady friends SYNDI ~ GNOME and his AUNTY ~ GNOME !
Here is my contribution LOVE ~ HATE Marks out of ten please !
LOVE
BEAUTIFUL ~ PEACEFUL
HUGGING ~ CARESSING ~ PULSATING
POSITIVE ~ DIVINE ~ NEGATIVE SATANIC
FIGHTING ~ HURTING ~ DESTROYING
UGLY ~ AGGRESSIVE
HATE
Thanks for lifting us to higher poetic plane !
Please check my POEM ~VILLAGE BY THE LAKE which is based on a PAINTING ~ OK Yours as always BRIAN.
ANGELA is sleeping peacfully in BED ~ Its 2:30 am in Aukland.
October 25th, 2018 09:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~love the CHEEKY CHEEKY GEESE in flight ~ awesome ! You really have pushed the POETIC BOAT out with this one ! I remember the DIAMANTE FORM ~ Mine is rotated triangle ! Also I like the introduction of Barringtons Lady friends SYNDI ~ GNOME and his AUNTY ~ GNOME !
Here is my contribution LOVE ~ HATE Marks out of ten please !
LOVE
BEAUTIFUL ~ PEACEFUL
HUGGING ~ CARESSING ~ PULSATING
POSITIVE ~ DIVINE ~ NEGATIVE SATANIC
FIGHTING ~ HURTING ~ DESTROYING
UGLY ~ AGGRESSIVE
HATE
Thanks for lifting us to higher poetic plane !
Please check my POEM ~VILLAGE BY THE LAKE which is based on a PAINTING ~ OK Yours as always BRIAN.
ANGELA is sleeping peacfully in BED ~ Its 2:30 am in Aukland.
October 25th, 2018 09:28
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
I absolutely love this minimalist artwork.
October 25th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
I absolutely love this minimalist artwork.
October 25th, 2018 01:43
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
orchidee said:
Phew! What with \'ing\'s\' and \'Antonys\' (what about Antony?) I\'m in a twirl.
The explanation helps us to see how involved this poem is. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this!
A great write Michael. I\'m off to find Antony Berles or Berling now.
October 25th, 2018 01:37
orchidee said:
Phew! What with \'ing\'s\' and \'Antonys\' (what about Antony?) I\'m in a twirl.
The explanation helps us to see how involved this poem is. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this!
A great write Michael. I\'m off to find Antony Berles or Berling now.
October 25th, 2018 01:37
BIG FEET
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! My feet have served me well!👣 I enjoyed the read and artwork!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2018 18:31
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! My feet have served me well!👣 I enjoyed the read and artwork!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2018 18:31
BIG FEET
dusk arising said:
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more comfortable. Waddle i find next?
i found this by the ink spots (original by fats waller) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzLwpSnUj9Y
October 24th, 2018 06:38
dusk arising said:
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more comfortable. Waddle i find next?
i found this by the ink spots (original by fats waller) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzLwpSnUj9Y
October 24th, 2018 06:38
BIG FEET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING UNCLE MIKE : I LOVE YA BUT YA FEETS TO BIG ! Love the Fungi
Love ANGELA (size 5 !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please to check my SUNRISE : SUNSET : Thanks A !
October 24th, 2018 05:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING UNCLE MIKE : I LOVE YA BUT YA FEETS TO BIG ! Love the Fungi
Love ANGELA (size 5 !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please to check my SUNRISE : SUNSET : Thanks A !
October 24th, 2018 05:43
BIG FEET
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Has Miss Berles tried clowning, or any of her relatives, whose names I may not have heard of yet?
October 24th, 2018 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Has Miss Berles tried clowning, or any of her relatives, whose names I may not have heard of yet?
October 24th, 2018 01:37
BIG FEET
sylviasearcher said:
Made me smile. As I do have big feet for a small lady. But I never much fancied the life of a clown
October 24th, 2018 01:36
sylviasearcher said:
Made me smile. As I do have big feet for a small lady. But I never much fancied the life of a clown
October 24th, 2018 01:36
BIG FEET
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
You are so right my UK size is a 10 but occasionally with some shoes I need an 11 - very strange.
October 24th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
You are so right my UK size is a 10 but occasionally with some shoes I need an 11 - very strange.
October 24th, 2018 00:27
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
dusk arising said:
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing from young ladies in MPS who will be no odalisque. But whilst they feel the pain, they lack your poetic ability.
October 23rd, 2018 15:44
dusk arising said:
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing from young ladies in MPS who will be no odalisque. But whilst they feel the pain, they lack your poetic ability.
October 23rd, 2018 15:44
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
dusk arising said:
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the back!
October 23rd, 2018 11:44
dusk arising said:
For being clever enough to sleep in the cowshed,
He got a pat on the back!
October 23rd, 2018 11:44
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
sylviasearcher said:
The opening was such a contrast from the image of the title.
Such a beautiful write, it is more than bittersweet. It reminds me of young girls who fall victim to grooming. In the past they would have been demonised and shamed but your falling stars mark the loss of their innocent dreams in a poisonous world.
It reminded me of a song by birdy too.
October 23rd, 2018 07:06
sylviasearcher said:
The opening was such a contrast from the image of the title.
Such a beautiful write, it is more than bittersweet. It reminds me of young girls who fall victim to grooming. In the past they would have been demonised and shamed but your falling stars mark the loss of their innocent dreams in a poisonous world.
It reminded me of a song by birdy too.
October 23rd, 2018 07:06
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I find the HAREM : SCAREM
I would not risk
To be a Rich Man\'s
ODALISQUE !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE you have excelled
yourself today Pictorally & Poetically
Perfect POEM and I have fallen in Love
With the beautiful CHEE CHEE DUCKS !
Please check my Exercise Poem
Not that you need it : always TRIM !
Love & Blessings : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 05:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
I find the HAREM : SCAREM
I would not risk
To be a Rich Man\'s
ODALISQUE !
Thanks UNCLE MIKE you have excelled
yourself today Pictorally & Poetically
Perfect POEM and I have fallen in Love
With the beautiful CHEE CHEE DUCKS !
Please check my Exercise Poem
Not that you need it : always TRIM !
Love & Blessings : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 23rd, 2018 05:02
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the concubine list in an Eastern Palace and this finely tuned warning of poisoned outcome gives proof which poetically put could not be bettered - - great first read of my morning dear Michael - - - and that wonderful line-art of yours is my daily delight.
October 23rd, 2018 02:44
Fay Slimm. said:
\"Finely seasoned flattery\" phrases the treatment of many on the concubine list in an Eastern Palace and this finely tuned warning of poisoned outcome gives proof which poetically put could not be bettered - - great first read of my morning dear Michael - - - and that wonderful line-art of yours is my daily delight.
October 23rd, 2018 02:44
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
orchidee said:
Arggh! Fido barked to warn me of \'odalisque\'. I looked it up and swooned. heehee. Is this about you and Miss Berles? Or me and her?!
October 23rd, 2018 02:22
orchidee said:
Arggh! Fido barked to warn me of \'odalisque\'. I looked it up and swooned. heehee. Is this about you and Miss Berles? Or me and her?!
October 23rd, 2018 02:22
A RAMBLE IN THE BRAMBLE
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another wonderfully penned verse for the readers to enjoy. :)
Michael, are you an artist, as well. Are those drawings on you page, your own?
October 22nd, 2018 15:18
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another wonderfully penned verse for the readers to enjoy. :)
Michael, are you an artist, as well. Are those drawings on you page, your own?
October 22nd, 2018 15:18
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I love these words of wisdom, Michael, especially the one about the lead balloon. I use that all the time. :)
Thanks for posting these, they\'re great.
October 22nd, 2018 15:15
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
I love these words of wisdom, Michael, especially the one about the lead balloon. I use that all the time. :)
Thanks for posting these, they\'re great.
October 22nd, 2018 15:15
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Three of lifes PARADOXES !
He liked Wine but could never fathom how
Wine containing 85% water could be termed DRY
My favorite is Number Three ~ because I believe in GRAVITY !
Love the GEESE ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 22nd, 2018 10:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Three of lifes PARADOXES !
He liked Wine but could never fathom how
Wine containing 85% water could be termed DRY
My favorite is Number Three ~ because I believe in GRAVITY !
Love the GEESE ~ thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
October 22nd, 2018 10:10
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great couplets! 🤣🤣Love them! Keep them coming!
Of course, super artwork!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Great couplets! 🤣🤣Love them! Keep them coming!
Of course, super artwork!
~Laura~
October 22nd, 2018 07:58
CRAZY COUPLETS (2)
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. Ahh, we should have thought of those things! I got a talking dog - Fido!
October 22nd, 2018 01:46
orchidee said:
Fine writes and pic Michael. Ahh, we should have thought of those things! I got a talking dog - Fido!
October 22nd, 2018 01:46
A RECOLLECTION
dusk arising said:
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl sports hero on the TV advert for.... blowed if i recall the product but the advert is excellent. Likewise your poem.
October 21st, 2018 16:06
dusk arising said:
He he, excellent. What picture my mind creates. Similar to the little girl sports hero on the TV advert for.... blowed if i recall the product but the advert is excellent. Likewise your poem.
October 21st, 2018 16:06
A RECOLLECTION
A.H. Browning said:
Really enjoyed reading this. Your words are quick to transform into images in my mind as I read.
October 21st, 2018 13:52
A.H. Browning said:
Really enjoyed reading this. Your words are quick to transform into images in my mind as I read.
October 21st, 2018 13:52
A RECOLLECTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Fine line drawing and equally fine ~ poema nostalgica ! Even I remember such freedom in the late 1980\'s when I was SIX ! Alas we seem to have morphed into a pardoxical Lawless but Nannie State ! Most days Im glad Im 35 (not 15) but I sure would not wish to be 55 and miss all the FUN (?) of early matrimony ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 21st, 2018 11:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Fine line drawing and equally fine ~ poema nostalgica ! Even I remember such freedom in the late 1980\'s when I was SIX ! Alas we seem to have morphed into a pardoxical Lawless but Nannie State ! Most days Im glad Im 35 (not 15) but I sure would not wish to be 55 and miss all the FUN (?) of early matrimony ! Yours as ever BRIAN
October 21st, 2018 11:56
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