Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
orchidee said:

Ooh a fine write and pic Michael. Ahh I get it. Bit like a guy who went to docs and said :
\'Doc I feel intense\'. Doc replied:
\'Well, stop camping then\' (in tents)! lol.

September 18th, 2018 01:19

OCEANS TEARS
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Wow...this write is incredible!
I totally agree with Fay’s comment!
An amazing read indeed!

Love your art piece with the added touch of the clothes line!

~Laura~


September 17th, 2018 09:59

OCEANS TEARS
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for this read - - - such linguistic pleasure to catch the nuances behind these lines - another gem Michael.

September 17th, 2018 06:00

OCEANS TEARS
dusk arising said:

I came out of a fog to read this. Its filled with sombre mystery. Much like my fog.

September 17th, 2018 05:09

OCEANS TEARS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh I\'m gonna be eidetic today! Any relation to Ida Tick?

September 17th, 2018 01:26

OCEANS TEARS
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderfully emotive write Michael.

September 17th, 2018 00:37

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
dusk arising said:

The scaffold of your mind erected around the nuance of a blueprint brings forth the buyers interest.

September 16th, 2018 17:48

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
rrodriguez said:

Nicely put... words are for building beautiful ideas and concepts.

September 16th, 2018 17:37

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
w c said:

Very nice! I enjoyed your construction.

September 16th, 2018 15:48

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
fuche_bu said:

love the pictures. Are these models your own constructions? Nice poem too.

September 16th, 2018 08:33

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Well crafted almost a GEO - Metrical composition you might say... Loving the sculptures by the way,
A poem away keeps the rants away?

September 16th, 2018 04:24

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks MIKE for reminding us of the fragility of the building blocks of POETRY ~ However thankfully the WHOLE of the WORDS is always GREATER than just the SUM of the WORDS. Alas MODERN POETRY is just WORDS ~ without structure - rhyme - rhythm or reason ! So the WHOLE is worst than the SUM of the WORDS ! CLASSICAL POETRY ~ has Structure - Rhyme - Rhythm & Reason in abundance ! Love the WATER MILL ~ A friend of mine lived in one in YORKSHIRE. Please CHECK ANGELAS poem today ID RATHER HAVE JESUS ~ YOURS AS ALWAYS ~ BRIAN !

September 16th, 2018 03:38

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
Goldfinch60 said:

Those letters, words and punctuation can show so many ideas.

September 16th, 2018 01:35

POETIC CONSTRUCTION
orchidee said:

a fine write and pic Michael. Yes, if no punctuation we may go on and on and on...... Maybe we do anyway.
Ask Mr Punk Tuation. Dunno his real first name.

September 16th, 2018 01:25

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
A.H. Browning said:

Thank you for making me smile... really smile... and maybe laugh 😆 a little.

A.H. Browning

September 15th, 2018 22:04

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
dusk arising said:

Women can be awful touchy about other peoples cooking. Now my mum was a terrible cook, i was brought up eating Heinz 57 varieties. My ex on the other hand was a fine cook. I shall never forget when mum and dad came around for sunday tea near christmas (a rare event for them to visit) and Ex had cooked some mince pies, dad was stuffing his face saying how delicious they were, mother was prodding a mince pie around her plate with a fork.

September 15th, 2018 14:55

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:

You seen Mr Chris Tation - Christopher? Or is it Miss Chris Tation (Christine)? Maybe it\'s husband and wife, both named Chris? (crustacean).

September 15th, 2018 09:41

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the Houses I love bespoke ART however PRIMITIVE ! Angela and I are both foodies ~ Angela\'s job is very physical so she needs lots of carbs & proteins & enough fats etc. The first time I took her to my Fave Restaurant ~ she chose the WINE (Spanish Rioja of course !) and ate every gram of the three courses (Pate ~ Sirloin Steak ~ Apple & Blackberry Pie with ice cream ~ chocolate mints & coffee ! I fell in love with her appetite ! I don\'t like PICKY EATERS or VEGANS. Thanks for sharing ~ Yours as always BRIAN

September 15th, 2018 07:33

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Michael!
It\'ll soon be Christmas

September 15th, 2018 06:09

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

A fun read!
You mouthing something rude?!...
I don’t believe it!

Are “fat balls” like meatballs?

Beautiful art piece!

~Laura~

September 15th, 2018 04:44

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic Michael. You giving her mealworms too?!

September 15th, 2018 01:45

SHE EATS LIKE A BIRD
Goldfinch60 said:

So the Beef Wellington with onion gravy, roast potatoes and asparagus was not appreciated then Michael.

September 15th, 2018 00:50

REINCARNATION
Brycycle said:

Haha very good write

September 14th, 2018 15:10

REINCARNATION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SQUID PRO QUO !

Thanks UNCLE MIKE loved the droll ditty and the sculpting ~ another CHURCH ~ you\'ll be going inside next ! Blessings & Love BRIAN and ANGELA 🧡🧡


September 14th, 2018 03:39

REINCARNATION
onepauly said:

I agree.
and did you know a squid will eat anything? even rocks.

September 14th, 2018 03:21

REINCARNATION
dusk arising said:

I swear the taller house has a Formica roof.
An old friend passing in the street suddenly threw a five legged octopus at me saying \'here\'s that sick squid i owe you\'.
Did you now that there are more believers in reincarnation upon planet earth than those who believe in a christian \'heaven\'. In fact until 11th century (or was it 9th) reincarnation was a part of christian belief.
I know your piece is a tease but as a believer in the big \'R\' I felt the need to pontificate a bit.
A good fun write which reminded me of a statement made by a certain Mr Tony Blair \'I dont like predictions, I don\'t make them, and I never will\".

September 14th, 2018 01:59

REINCARNATION
Goldfinch60 said:

You just wait, I will be back.

September 14th, 2018 01:45

REINCARNATION
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic Michael. Did we meet? I was a fellow squid too. But seriously, reincarnation is bunkum to me! Bah humbug!

September 14th, 2018 01:32

IRONY
dusk arising said:

I got caught out around this time last year when i\'d had my new car a few days. I put it down to unfamiliarity.
I was offered the choice of points and a fine or a speeding course.
The course turned out to be the second most boring four hours of my life but i was very surprised by how many drivers had no clue of speed restrictions on our roads.
So many drivers appear to regard the highway code as a crib book on how to get a driving licence and then forget its contents.

September 13th, 2018 09:25

IRONY
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Michael, i guess the Police just wanted a picture of your nice new car too? you can\'t blame them I bet it\'s very nice.
You\'re in good company

September 13th, 2018 02:55



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