Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



FOUR SHORTIES
orchidee said:

PS. Any more guests for 1066?

October 10th, 2018 02:04

FOUR SHORTIES
orchidee said:

A fine set of writes Michael. Fido and I here!
No.1 - Well, it wasn\'t me singing then at dawn.
No.3 - Well, it\'s the \'workers\' who do all the work, yes?
No.4 - Woof! Fido read that one! lol.


October 10th, 2018 01:54

ABSTRACT ART
Unobtrusive Sun said:

Beautiful and engaging is both the portrait and the writing. Breaking the chains of convention is my cup of coffee. Fine work!

October 10th, 2018 01:18

FOUR SHORTIES
Goldfinch60 said:

Four good ones there Michael.

Will Orchi\'s Fido bark at the last one.

October 10th, 2018 00:26

ABSTRACT ART
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Another great haiku with food for thought, Michael.

You are quickly becoming \"King of Haiku.\" An excellent write :)

October 9th, 2018 16:23

ABSTRACT ART
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Sublime...your painting and your senryu! I thoroughly enjoyed both!

~Laura~

October 9th, 2018 07:40

ABSTRACT ART
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Mmmm

October 9th, 2018 04:00

ABSTRACT ART
kevin browne said:

The image and the words are very fitting. Small thoughtful words can mean so much more. You covered it beautifully.

October 9th, 2018 02:30

ABSTRACT ART
Goldfinch60 said:

Another glorious abstract Michael.

The words describe your abstract paintings to a tee.

Strictly speaking it is not a haiku but a senryu, emotion not nature.

October 9th, 2018 02:06

ABSTRACT ART
orchidee said:

Good write and pic Michael. Miss Berles got any in her house?

October 9th, 2018 01:26

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
Fay Slimm. said:

So realistic I was almost there with you dear Michael - - firs rate read.

October 8th, 2018 16:52

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
Christina8 said:

A wonderful poem! With such description I felt like I was taken there. Loved it!

October 8th, 2018 06:27

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Nice \"Doff\" to the Hock Michael... any pams to follow him into Stained glass?
Shame he didn\'t use a british manufaturer ooh! I feel a rant coming on better cease
Bravo! again

October 8th, 2018 05:28

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
onepauly said:

and return I hope.

October 8th, 2018 04:06

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Thanks for keeping my brain entertained too - all 3 brain cells! They are due for a holiday soon. When will they be back?!

October 8th, 2018 02:02

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and description, love the Hockney reference.

October 8th, 2018 01:31

SUNDAY MORNING AT LOUGHTON POOL
Unobtrusive Sun said:

Michael, I\'ve read quite a bit of your work here and have to say, you are by far my favorite so far. I love your style and can tell that you really have a knack for poetry. Thanks for keeping my brain entertained!

October 8th, 2018 00:40

SHORELINE
Christina8 said:

Wonderful imagery of the shoreline, Michael. Your poetry is a breath of fresh air!

October 7th, 2018 12:57

SHORELINE
orchidee said:

That evening going OK? Let\'s have an evening in with Miss Berles, and all the other Berles, Fido, Kay Nine, and that Manny Festation guy I heard of recently.
Can we invite anyone else?
You coming to the 1066 reunion too?!

October 7th, 2018 12:17

SHORELINE
FineB said:

Hello Michael.

Beautiful write!\' Beautiful and vivid!

I love the cute picture too!

Keep writing
FineB

October 7th, 2018 10:11

SHORELINE
dusk arising said:

Greenery along the coastline tends to be coarse and a conflict to the beach or rocks. I caught the motion and contrast here.
Slow to realise a mental picture, several re-reads were rewarding.

October 7th, 2018 08:34

SHORELINE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Geat write Michael
So pleased to get wet
By this haunting septet
Bravo

October 7th, 2018 05:06

SHORELINE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE MIKE : Love your free verse SEPTET ! It has such rhythm it almost rhymes ! I could smell the briney : Loved the sculpture : CUTE : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡 Please check UTOPIA SONNET 3 : Ta !

October 7th, 2018 03:58

SHORELINE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. That your house-boat there in the pic? Looks like it! Miss Berles gone to sea? Or gone to the dogs?

October 7th, 2018 01:12

SHORELINE
onepauly said:

described with great meaning

October 7th, 2018 00:54

SHORELINE
Goldfinch60 said:

Shorelines can be so emotive, as are your words.

October 7th, 2018 00:39

LAMPOONING
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lol,i can relate,leave them alone

October 6th, 2018 17:32

LAMPOONING
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Great writes!
I enjoyed reading them!

~Laura~

October 6th, 2018 17:28

LAMPOONING
Jooles said:

Love your writes

October 6th, 2018 16:00

LAMPOONING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS UNCLE MIKE : The bold PC : doth write and having writ moves on : You have insulted all our Friends & Enemies (China France America Germany !) where does that leave us Post-Brexit ? Love the Harbour Scene : Make me homesick ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡

October 6th, 2018 15:35



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