Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



LAMPOONING
FineB said:

Hello Michael.

Excellent write.

Keep writing Michael
FineB

October 6th, 2018 14:43

LAMPOONING
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening? Cooeee. Aww, I saw over 250 cats at a cat show, a lot of which were pedigree cats.
How can one not like cats?! Awww.

October 6th, 2018 12:37

LAMPOONING
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Thank you, Michael. A little humor goes a long way. A witty and enjoyable read to be sure. :)

Thanks for posting!

October 6th, 2018 11:57

LAMPOONING
Crystal Hope said:

a superb and fantastic piece. :D

October 6th, 2018 10:57

LAMPOONING
dusk arising said:

Though your words have amused me
let me please clearly state
you won\'t find that cuisine
on my dinner plate

From my very first quiche
to my very last balti
i\'m reminded my tummy
soon after went faulty

So bangers and mash
or even toad in the hole
maybe a weetabix biscuit
for my brexit bowl

keep it simple and english
cooking frenchies call plain
but at least i\'ll survive
to eat it again


October 6th, 2018 06:47

LAMPOONING
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael lol.Might have to swoon at the last one. You best hope I don\'t see a hidden meaning in it! heehee.

October 6th, 2018 01:45

LAMPOONING
Goldfinch60 said:

My first smile of the day Michael, thank you so much.

October 6th, 2018 00:12

EDELECTS BY THREE
myself and me said:

Very creative. And as always, the first to post.
Poem read
rules learned
wonderful work

October 5th, 2018 20:05

EDELECTS BY THREE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA here its 8:30 pm in NZ! Brian is earning a crust to buy us a HOUSE in the UK (or NZ) so I thought I had better respond : Im working on EDELECTS. Love you trio on : Tomes Tears Temperature! Have a nice WEEKEND : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love your HARBOUR SCENES you would be inspired by AUCKLAND! You have dropped not an H but an E in your title : A!

October 5th, 2018 03:40

EDELECTS BY THREE
dusk arising said:

There was a young man from Bengal
who had a hexagonal ball
its volume times weight
divided by eight
was twice the square root of f..k all

I\'m sticking to what i know.

October 5th, 2018 02:39

EDELECTS BY THREE
orchidee said:

A fine set of writes and pic Michael. In the first one - you read those books yet? you said those words yet?
You speak with forked tongue, or correct number of syllables? Miss Berles will check them.
Do shut up Orchi, you\'re rambling!(how many miles is your ramble?).

October 5th, 2018 01:30

EDELECTS BY THREE
Goldfinch60 said:

Three god ones Michael.

I have not mentioned your sculptures, I think they are wonderful and lift my days.

October 5th, 2018 00:51

TO JEANNE
orchidee said:

How\'s that evening going? It\'s no ordinary one, ya know. It\'s the evening of National Poetry Day, and World Animal Day.

October 4th, 2018 10:12

TO JEANNE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

“and I know I always will”💞

Congratulations to both of you in celebrating 54 years of not “knowing the meaning of love”! In my humble opinion, that is the meaning of LOVE!♥️

As we say in Italian...
Altri Cento(another hundred)!
Only forty-six more to go!

All the best...

~Laura~

P.S. - Love the piece of artwork.

October 4th, 2018 09:45

TO JEANNE
dusk arising said:

Does the meaning of love matter so much when your very existence is within love itself.
You know you love. She knows you love. Together you ARE love.
And long may it be so.

October 4th, 2018 02:39

TO JEANNE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful write. Many congratulations Michael.

October 4th, 2018 02:22

TO JEANNE
orchidee said:

A lovely write Michael. Who loves my singing?!

October 4th, 2018 01:17

TO JEANNE
Fay Slimm. said:

Your wife will adore this one Mike. Simply lovely.

October 4th, 2018 01:05

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

Wow...
An outstanding write!
I liked it very much!

A great piece of artwork!

~Laura~



October 3rd, 2018 17:32

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Fay Slimm. said:

A miss-match of marital needs hidden in sensitive imagery Mike - - I know \"fire suppressed\" can cause one-sided torment. A sensuous read.

October 3rd, 2018 13:15

HE SPURNS APPROACH
orchidee said:

Another good evening there?

October 3rd, 2018 13:09

HE SPURNS APPROACH
orchidee said:

A fine write Michael. Could be me - spurning any approach to anything \'exciting\'. Fido always barks to warn me off!

October 3rd, 2018 01:28

HE SPURNS APPROACH
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful emotive write Michael.

October 3rd, 2018 01:02

THE SAME MISTAKE
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

To be sure it\'s a mstake
You MUST make it again
Like leaving your coat
When you know it will rain...
again

Nice Michael I like it!

October 2nd, 2018 10:29

THE SAME MISTAKE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michal. Miss Berles will help you not make any mistakes with syllables.

October 2nd, 2018 01:29

THE SAME MISTAKE
Goldfinch60 said:

We must be certain that all is right as we move on in life. At our age Michael we seem to have done pretty well in our lives.

October 2nd, 2018 01:04

LIMERICK No 56
Goldfinch60 said:

At least on then floor you could walk around it, on the ceiling it could drop on you.

September 28th, 2018 00:50

LIMERICK No 56
orchidee said:

Did he defy gravity then?! lol.

September 27th, 2018 01:49

LIMERICK No 56
dusk arising said:

The dirty old bishop of Birmingham,
Buggered his flock whilst confirming \'em,
he sat on his hassock,
and lifted his cassock,
and slipped his episcopal worm in \'em

September 27th, 2018 01:33

A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Goldfinch60 said:

a fine collection Michael.

September 27th, 2018 00:38



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