Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
THE SAME MISTAKE
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michal. Miss Berles will help you not make any mistakes with syllables.
October 2nd, 2018 01:29
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michal. Miss Berles will help you not make any mistakes with syllables.
October 2nd, 2018 01:29
THE SAME MISTAKE
Goldfinch60 said:
We must be certain that all is right as we move on in life. At our age Michael we seem to have done pretty well in our lives.
October 2nd, 2018 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
We must be certain that all is right as we move on in life. At our age Michael we seem to have done pretty well in our lives.
October 2nd, 2018 01:04
LIMERICK No 56
Goldfinch60 said:
At least on then floor you could walk around it, on the ceiling it could drop on you.
September 28th, 2018 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
At least on then floor you could walk around it, on the ceiling it could drop on you.
September 28th, 2018 00:50
LIMERICK No 56
dusk arising said:
The dirty old bishop of Birmingham,
Buggered his flock whilst confirming \'em,
he sat on his hassock,
and lifted his cassock,
and slipped his episcopal worm in \'em
September 27th, 2018 01:33
dusk arising said:
The dirty old bishop of Birmingham,
Buggered his flock whilst confirming \'em,
he sat on his hassock,
and lifted his cassock,
and slipped his episcopal worm in \'em
September 27th, 2018 01:33
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME UNCLE MICHAEL : We have missed your quirky Art and Odd Odes. I love this melancholy trio : I am nostalgic too missing \"Autumn in Essex\" September does not sit well with Spring. I have composed some KIWI CINQUAINS for tomorrow!
Your Trio deserve titles:
Abandoned House
Abandoned Honour
Abandoned Hope
Every blessing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 16:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME UNCLE MICHAEL : We have missed your quirky Art and Odd Odes. I love this melancholy trio : I am nostalgic too missing \"Autumn in Essex\" September does not sit well with Spring. I have composed some KIWI CINQUAINS for tomorrow!
Your Trio deserve titles:
Abandoned House
Abandoned Honour
Abandoned Hope
Every blessing : Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 26th, 2018 16:41
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
dusk arising said:
Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream and express your feelings to the following formula my dear Robot\'
Transgression will result in a circuit replacement, yes dear Robot we shall remove a chip off the old block.
September 26th, 2018 16:04
dusk arising said:
Formula belong in mathematics not in poetry in my book. \'You shall dream and express your feelings to the following formula my dear Robot\'
Transgression will result in a circuit replacement, yes dear Robot we shall remove a chip off the old block.
September 26th, 2018 16:04
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Christina8 said:
Really great set of cinquains Michael!
September 26th, 2018 13:14
Christina8 said:
Really great set of cinquains Michael!
September 26th, 2018 13:14
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Take your time, Michael.
There\'s no rush for my poetry. Enjoy your time at home. :)
I\'m glad I found your poetry site and will be reading more of your poems later on today. :)
September 26th, 2018 12:52
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Take your time, Michael.
There\'s no rush for my poetry. Enjoy your time at home. :)
I\'m glad I found your poetry site and will be reading more of your poems later on today. :)
September 26th, 2018 12:52
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, your collection of cinquains are truth spoken in so few words.
A joy to read. :)
September 26th, 2018 05:42
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, your collection of cinquains are truth spoken in so few words.
A joy to read. :)
September 26th, 2018 05:42
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
orchidee said:
Did you call her, to come over on the bus? Did you say \'Coooeeee\' (hi) - that\'s two syllables - when you met here?
And furthermore, why am I spouting rubbish?!
September 26th, 2018 02:58
orchidee said:
Did you call her, to come over on the bus? Did you say \'Coooeeee\' (hi) - that\'s two syllables - when you met here?
And furthermore, why am I spouting rubbish?!
September 26th, 2018 02:58
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
orchidee said:
A fine set of writes and pic Michael. Did Miss Berles check all those syllables? Can\'t have one extra sneaking in!
September 26th, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine set of writes and pic Michael. Did Miss Berles check all those syllables? Can\'t have one extra sneaking in!
September 26th, 2018 01:52
A CINQUAIN COLLECTION
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - what power in each of these cinquains Michael - - my favourite is the third but they all speak with force.
September 26th, 2018 01:33
Fay Slimm. said:
Wow - - what power in each of these cinquains Michael - - my favourite is the third but they all speak with force.
September 26th, 2018 01:33
OUCH
Gogeta said:
Ha ha ha, loved the wordplay and the humour. Bravo good sir 😁
September 25th, 2018 12:00
Gogeta said:
Ha ha ha, loved the wordplay and the humour. Bravo good sir 😁
September 25th, 2018 12:00
OUCH
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A witty entertaining poem. Wonderful!
Keep writing
FineB
September 22nd, 2018 10:51
FineB said:
Hello Michael,
A witty entertaining poem. Wonderful!
Keep writing
FineB
September 22nd, 2018 10:51
OUCH
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That poor green thumb which I venture to guess is no longer green! 😂 🌈😂
A fun read. Enjoyed it!
Great art piece! How many of them have you made?
~Laura~
September 20th, 2018 11:19
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That poor green thumb which I venture to guess is no longer green! 😂 🌈😂
A fun read. Enjoyed it!
Great art piece! How many of them have you made?
~Laura~
September 20th, 2018 11:19
OUCH
dusk arising said:
I had a green one yesterday
chopped it off with grandads cutter
damn things got a life of its own
it ran off along the gutter.
I do like a light hearted lift amidst the doom and gloom misery of poetic cast offs.
September 19th, 2018 18:18
dusk arising said:
I had a green one yesterday
chopped it off with grandads cutter
damn things got a life of its own
it ran off along the gutter.
I do like a light hearted lift amidst the doom and gloom misery of poetic cast offs.
September 19th, 2018 18:18
OUCH
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
They call him thumby Edwards
He strugles with his sums
He only counts in lots of eight
For he hasn\'t any thumbs
An apt title Michael... how will you paint now? you\'re an Octodigitalis
September 19th, 2018 15:15
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
They call him thumby Edwards
He strugles with his sums
He only counts in lots of eight
For he hasn\'t any thumbs
An apt title Michael... how will you paint now? you\'re an Octodigitalis
September 19th, 2018 15:15
OUCH
orchidee said:
That thumb OK now? Was it the same one you used to turn caps on by mistake? \'Digit slipped\' as some say - or I\'ve heard it day!
September 19th, 2018 07:56
orchidee said:
That thumb OK now? Was it the same one you used to turn caps on by mistake? \'Digit slipped\' as some say - or I\'ve heard it day!
September 19th, 2018 07:56
OUCH
kevin browne said:
I think probably we have all created such pain by the action of a hammer. The nail is missed and then bang you take a quick glance at a beautiful butterfly passing by and a finger is crucified by it. Well written and well done, but leave the hammer alone for a bit now for recovery of broken fingers and thumbs. I like the poem, but your poor thumb needs a rest up.
September 19th, 2018 05:34
kevin browne said:
I think probably we have all created such pain by the action of a hammer. The nail is missed and then bang you take a quick glance at a beautiful butterfly passing by and a finger is crucified by it. Well written and well done, but leave the hammer alone for a bit now for recovery of broken fingers and thumbs. I like the poem, but your poor thumb needs a rest up.
September 19th, 2018 05:34
OUCH
Nicholas Browning said:
A good bit of fun. I enjoyed the wordplay more than the humor though.
September 19th, 2018 05:00
Nicholas Browning said:
A good bit of fun. I enjoyed the wordplay more than the humor though.
September 19th, 2018 05:00
OUCH
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
Goldie\'s father had the same trouble then, as your recent poem - broke finger in three places. Was that England, Spain, and France, the three places? Hmm.
No joke though when it happens.
September 19th, 2018 01:45
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write and pic Michael.
Goldie\'s father had the same trouble then, as your recent poem - broke finger in three places. Was that England, Spain, and France, the three places? Hmm.
No joke though when it happens.
September 19th, 2018 01:45
OUCH
Goldfinch60 said:
Many years ago my father used to work shift work at Grain Oil Refinery. One Sunday afternoon my Mum brother and I were watching cricket, the John Player League, when Dad walked in with his hand bandaged, we asked what had happened, he said he had hit his finger with a spanner - we all fell about laughing.
He had broken the top bone in his middle finger in three places.
I hope the bucket was clean.
September 19th, 2018 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Many years ago my father used to work shift work at Grain Oil Refinery. One Sunday afternoon my Mum brother and I were watching cricket, the John Player League, when Dad walked in with his hand bandaged, we asked what had happened, he said he had hit his finger with a spanner - we all fell about laughing.
He had broken the top bone in his middle finger in three places.
I hope the bucket was clean.
September 19th, 2018 01:40
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
dusk arising said:
Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word more difficult than the spoken word.
September 18th, 2018 10:04
dusk arising said:
Ha ha nice one. Playing with words is fun. Playing with the written word more difficult than the spoken word.
September 18th, 2018 10:04
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I hope he learned his lesson!
A great fun read! Thank you for your wonderful shares!
Love your art piece! It reminds me of a special location I visit anytime I’m in New York. When I’m there I visit the Montauk Point Lighthouse! An amazing site!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 09:41
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
I hope he learned his lesson!
A great fun read! Thank you for your wonderful shares!
Love your art piece! It reminds me of a special location I visit anytime I’m in New York. When I’m there I visit the Montauk Point Lighthouse! An amazing site!
~Laura~
September 18th, 2018 09:41
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Daily you \"Fill up our senses ~ with NONSENSE!\" It lifts the gloom & doom of BREXIT ! Love the LIGHT HOUSE etc very nauti-cal Love BRIAN and ANGELA XOX Please check JOHN DENVER ~ Thanks.
September 18th, 2018 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ Daily you \"Fill up our senses ~ with NONSENSE!\" It lifts the gloom & doom of BREXIT ! Love the LIGHT HOUSE etc very nauti-cal Love BRIAN and ANGELA XOX Please check JOHN DENVER ~ Thanks.
September 18th, 2018 04:48
HE\'LL NOT VISIT EITHER AGAIN
Goldfinch60 said:
Oops! Good fun write Michael.
September 18th, 2018 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Oops! Good fun write Michael.
September 18th, 2018 01:28
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