Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
Seasonals
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW UNCLE MIKE : You and Brian are always teaching me new poetic FORMS ! Its 11 pm (Thursday) so Im catching up in MPS before I hit the SACK ! I love this form because : like me : its Trim & Slim ! It is OBVIOUS but also SUBTLE ! Spring : Summer (x 2) Summer : Autumn (x 2) Autumn : Winter (x 2) and Winter : Spring (x 2) An OCTET of four DOUBLETS ! The Season is followed by a single word descriptor. Also the First Line & the Last Line must be IDENTICAL : I have a very analytical mind ! I have written mine to post tomorrow : please judge it on its structure ! I love all facets of MPS : it keeps me POETICAL ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 05:22
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WOW UNCLE MIKE : You and Brian are always teaching me new poetic FORMS ! Its 11 pm (Thursday) so Im catching up in MPS before I hit the SACK ! I love this form because : like me : its Trim & Slim ! It is OBVIOUS but also SUBTLE ! Spring : Summer (x 2) Summer : Autumn (x 2) Autumn : Winter (x 2) and Winter : Spring (x 2) An OCTET of four DOUBLETS ! The Season is followed by a single word descriptor. Also the First Line & the Last Line must be IDENTICAL : I have a very analytical mind ! I have written mine to post tomorrow : please judge it on its structure ! I love all facets of MPS : it keeps me POETICAL ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
November 15th, 2018 05:22
Seasonals
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Michael.
Where is Spring rolling to? Down a hill? Good wishes too.
November 15th, 2018 02:43
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic again Michael.
Where is Spring rolling to? Down a hill? Good wishes too.
November 15th, 2018 02:43
Seasonals
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been off the radar for 48 hours - all those who read the comments under my last posting will understand why. Anyway I\'m back and as for this posting it\'s yet another form I have devised and and is a good filler-in when you have just a few moments to spare. The \'rules\' are so obvious it\'s not even worth explaining them. Let me know what you think.
November 15th, 2018 02:08
Michael Edwards said:
Sorry I\'ve been off the radar for 48 hours - all those who read the comments under my last posting will understand why. Anyway I\'m back and as for this posting it\'s yet another form I have devised and and is a good filler-in when you have just a few moments to spare. The \'rules\' are so obvious it\'s not even worth explaining them. Let me know what you think.
November 15th, 2018 02:08
FORGOTTEN
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I was reading this masterfully penned poem, it made me think of “The Man In The Iron Mask”! An outstanding write!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 16:15
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
As I was reading this masterfully penned poem, it made me think of “The Man In The Iron Mask”! An outstanding write!
~Laura~
November 14th, 2018 16:15
FORGOTTEN
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, this poem is excellent. To date, I don\'t believe you\'ve written one better.
Yet, who is this man? Did he live in ancient Rome? One can only guess.
Perhaps this mystery man is Socrates - Mamertine Prison, ancient Rome? Yet, I do not know if he was denied reading material.
Great write, Edward. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:23
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Michael, this poem is excellent. To date, I don\'t believe you\'ve written one better.
Yet, who is this man? Did he live in ancient Rome? One can only guess.
Perhaps this mystery man is Socrates - Mamertine Prison, ancient Rome? Yet, I do not know if he was denied reading material.
Great write, Edward. :-)
November 13th, 2018 16:23
FORGOTTEN
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed best forgotten . A chill runs through every line Michael as we put ourselves into the places of vaults and chains.
November 13th, 2018 10:39
Fay Slimm. said:
A fine summary of attention paid to the words those whom the world deemed best forgotten . A chill runs through every line Michael as we put ourselves into the places of vaults and chains.
November 13th, 2018 10:39
FORGOTTEN
kingOfOne said:
wise man. lovely charcoal drawing, did you draw it?
November 13th, 2018 04:59
kingOfOne said:
wise man. lovely charcoal drawing, did you draw it?
November 13th, 2018 04:59
FORGOTTEN
dusk arising said:
Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard but did not listen.
I\'m left wondering about \"No empathetic thoughts are stretched
in sympathy with his domain\". Does that refer to his own thoughts or the thoughts of others?
November 13th, 2018 04:02
dusk arising said:
Ah, the thinker who spoke his mind to the wrong persons. People who heard but did not listen.
I\'m left wondering about \"No empathetic thoughts are stretched
in sympathy with his domain\". Does that refer to his own thoughts or the thoughts of others?
November 13th, 2018 04:02
FORGOTTEN
Debsspot said:
Your words draw a picture as clear and beautiful as the sketch above despite the stark subject. Great work.
November 13th, 2018 03:28
Debsspot said:
Your words draw a picture as clear and beautiful as the sketch above despite the stark subject. Great work.
November 13th, 2018 03:28
FORGOTTEN
sylviasearcher said:
I love the imagery you create with this piece.
My empathetic thoughts were stretched to this figure \'with nails that pierced his white clenched palms\'
November 13th, 2018 03:01
sylviasearcher said:
I love the imagery you create with this piece.
My empathetic thoughts were stretched to this figure \'with nails that pierced his white clenched palms\'
November 13th, 2018 03:01
FORGOTTEN
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. The next book I shall read is: \'All You Need To Know About Syllables And Metres\', by Miss C. Berles.
November 13th, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. The next book I shall read is: \'All You Need To Know About Syllables And Metres\', by Miss C. Berles.
November 13th, 2018 02:50
AND SO TO BED
dusk arising said:
Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now swears he\'s a plough and buried in his furrow.
Thanks for brightening up my day.
November 12th, 2018 12:47
dusk arising said:
Honey bunny swears shes funny and giggles in her burrow.
Here and now swears he\'s a plough and buried in his furrow.
Thanks for brightening up my day.
November 12th, 2018 12:47
AND SO TO BED
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Very amusing!
I hope Hairy Clare doesn’t catch a cold!
Love your drawing! It reminds me of my great grandparents’ estate where beyond that gate were many cows grazing! Beautiful memories!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 12:43
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Very amusing!
I hope Hairy Clare doesn’t catch a cold!
Love your drawing! It reminds me of my great grandparents’ estate where beyond that gate were many cows grazing! Beautiful memories!
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 12:43
RIOJA
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the shape poem and its subject matter! When I saw it, the adjective artful came to mind! Artful with your writing, artful with your artwork...intertwining your talents! Exceptional!
Cin 🍷cin🍷
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 11:01
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the shape poem and its subject matter! When I saw it, the adjective artful came to mind! Artful with your writing, artful with your artwork...intertwining your talents! Exceptional!
Cin 🍷cin🍷
~Laura~
November 12th, 2018 11:01
AND SO TO BED
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : For another Dotty Ditty ! UK poetic humour is often misunderstood once you\'re outside the Fishing Zone which is one of the 1001 reasons for BREXIT : We\'re Happiest when we\'re INSULAR (although I do value \"Mi sangre Espanola !) Thanks for Pome \'n Pic: lovely :
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We are in VANITY FAIR with Pilgrims Progress today : please check Thanks !
November 12th, 2018 04:31
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE : For another Dotty Ditty ! UK poetic humour is often misunderstood once you\'re outside the Fishing Zone which is one of the 1001 reasons for BREXIT : We\'re Happiest when we\'re INSULAR (although I do value \"Mi sangre Espanola !) Thanks for Pome \'n Pic: lovely :
LOVE ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
We are in VANITY FAIR with Pilgrims Progress today : please check Thanks !
November 12th, 2018 04:31
AND SO TO BED
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha - love the charcoal drawing.
November 12th, 2018 03:23
Fay Slimm. said:
Still giggling at these lines Michael - - I pity poor Beaty - - h aha - love the charcoal drawing.
November 12th, 2018 03:23
AND SO TO BED
orchidee said:
Should I meet Clare? Will Fido bark to deter me?!
Cooeee - I\'m not in bed, but my poem will be later today, after one \'blew up\' yesterday! I got to wait 24 hours.
November 12th, 2018 02:44
orchidee said:
Should I meet Clare? Will Fido bark to deter me?!
Cooeee - I\'m not in bed, but my poem will be later today, after one \'blew up\' yesterday! I got to wait 24 hours.
November 12th, 2018 02:44
AND SO TO BED
Goldfinch60 said:
Different Michael.
I still want to know what is through that gate.
November 12th, 2018 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Different Michael.
I still want to know what is through that gate.
November 12th, 2018 01:26
RIOJA
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias Tio Michael : You\'re in my Territory here and La Territoria Rioja de mi Padre ! I was weaned on Rioja Tinta and have visited the Vineyards with lots of Tastings & Tapas. Rioja y Cava (Spanish Champagne) are two of Spain\'s finest Wines. Thanks for your excellent endorsement. Being a Christian I do try never to be Drunk (3 large glasses of Rioja Tinta ?) but the Good Book does encourage us to \"Take a little wine for your tummy\'s sake\" and most Catholic Church Halls do have a licence and a Bar. For me an evening meal without Una Botella del Vino is NOT a meal ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the glass shaped ode and the charcoal pencil drawing simple but effective : ANGELA
November 11th, 2018 17:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Gracias Tio Michael : You\'re in my Territory here and La Territoria Rioja de mi Padre ! I was weaned on Rioja Tinta and have visited the Vineyards with lots of Tastings & Tapas. Rioja y Cava (Spanish Champagne) are two of Spain\'s finest Wines. Thanks for your excellent endorsement. Being a Christian I do try never to be Drunk (3 large glasses of Rioja Tinta ?) but the Good Book does encourage us to \"Take a little wine for your tummy\'s sake\" and most Catholic Church Halls do have a licence and a Bar. For me an evening meal without Una Botella del Vino is NOT a meal ! Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 Love the glass shaped ode and the charcoal pencil drawing simple but effective : ANGELA
November 11th, 2018 17:53
RIOJA
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening going M? I will settle down with a pork pie and water!
November 11th, 2018 13:01
orchidee said:
How\'s that evening going M? I will settle down with a pork pie and water!
November 11th, 2018 13:01
RIOJA
dusk arising said:
What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL
Such a lovely idea and carried off to perfection.
Excellent!
November 11th, 2018 11:17
dusk arising said:
What are you, an artist or somethimg?? LOL
Such a lovely idea and carried off to perfection.
Excellent!
November 11th, 2018 11:17
RIOJA
orchidee said:
Me poem \'blew up\' for today, while trying to upload a clip. Will try again...
C\'mon Orchi, you\'re having us on. You was blotto, and forgot poems, cos you had sherry without water!
November 11th, 2018 08:29
orchidee said:
Me poem \'blew up\' for today, while trying to upload a clip. Will try again...
C\'mon Orchi, you\'re having us on. You was blotto, and forgot poems, cos you had sherry without water!
November 11th, 2018 08:29
RIOJA
Lorna said:
Very clever Michael! I didn\'t see the glass I scrolled for the end of the poem! Thank you for the tour of Rioja!
November 11th, 2018 04:55
Lorna said:
Very clever Michael! I didn\'t see the glass I scrolled for the end of the poem! Thank you for the tour of Rioja!
November 11th, 2018 04:55
A FEW BITS AND PIECES
Leisa Niamh said:
Your poem stuck a chord with me as it made me think about how I always turn to nature and a walk in the hills and mountains of North wales I am feeling low . I always come back with a little hope and feeling better.
November 11th, 2018 03:58
Leisa Niamh said:
Your poem stuck a chord with me as it made me think about how I always turn to nature and a walk in the hills and mountains of North wales I am feeling low . I always come back with a little hope and feeling better.
November 11th, 2018 03:58
RIOJA
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Just don\'t invite me. They\'ll hate you for it. I will only add water to it! heehee.
November 11th, 2018 02:41
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Just don\'t invite me. They\'ll hate you for it. I will only add water to it! heehee.
November 11th, 2018 02:41
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