Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



THEY DANCE
Lorna said:

oooooo shades of Celtic woodlands in the mist....... let\'s go hug a tree! I once knew an woman whose Italian husband left her to run away to England to become a Druid.... with a young nymph of course..... she just sighed and said \"he\'s old, bald and broke - she won\'t stay long\"....... what got me going on that! Having gone off like that should add that I love your imagery and words of course!!!

September 8th, 2018 08:56

THEY DANCE
Laura🌻 said:

Michael,

I’ve been reading your poem over and over! Your choice of words keep dancing in my mind!
I’m enjoying the read and the “dance”!
Beautiful art piece!

Have a wonderful Saturday!

~Laura~


September 8th, 2018 07:26

THEY DANCE
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Great job...

September 8th, 2018 07:20

THEY DANCE
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very nice...brief to the point and can relate

September 8th, 2018 07:19

THEY DANCE
fuche_bu said:

Nice work. Good imagery--both the words and the picture.

September 8th, 2018 06:54

THEY DANCE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

DANCE MICHAEL ~ Is the oldest Art Form and soon it will be STRICTLY SEASON again. ANGELA is thrilled she can get it in NEW ZEALAND. She is a born Dancer and it teaching me all the Spanish Dances including the Flamenco ~ Tight Black Trousers & Cuban Heels ! She is also teaching me Latin~American ~ like the Argentinian Tango. Love your POEM today ~ like you i adore the infinity of the English Language and confusing STEVE ! Please check AUTUMN HAIKU ~ you will love the Spanish Guitar ~ Mystical ~ Your as always BRIAN 😎

September 8th, 2018 03:36

THEY DANCE
orchidee said:

A lovely write and pic M, of opa-wotsit and nebu-wotsit. I can\'t say these long words! heehee.

September 8th, 2018 01:21

THEY DANCE
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful Michael.

September 8th, 2018 00:32

PRAGMATIC REALISM
fuche_bu said:

I often wonder if pragmatism and ideology can co-exist--especially extreme ideology.

September 7th, 2018 11:05

PRAGMATIC REALISM
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Sitting on the Philosophers Stone ; TODAY ?
PRAGMATISM : Dealing with things Sensibly & Reasonably in a way that is based on Practical and Realistic consideration rather than intellectual & Theoretical. Brian & I both base our Philosophy and life Style on GODS WORD the BIBLE which is a very practical Guidebook for Living (and surviving) as a Young Couple in the 21st C ! So I guess you could call us EVANGELICAL CHRISTIAN PRAGMATISTS & REALISTS. What I have found encouraging is that This Philosophy works on the other side of the World in New Zealand especially among the MAORIS who respect my FAITH in their Creator God. Im not PREACHING Uncle Mike : just TESTIFYING ~ OK. Love in the Spirit as always ANGELA 🧡

September 7th, 2018 05:26

PRAGMATIC REALISM
Lorna said:

May I be excused? My brain is full........... (politics will be the death of me)............

September 7th, 2018 04:16

PRAGMATIC REALISM
dusk arising said:

And then you get Corbyn yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy yoy my life awlready.



September 7th, 2018 02:40

PRAGMATIC REALISM
onepauly said:

a fine way to introduce
ideology.

September 7th, 2018 02:17

PRAGMATIC REALISM
orchidee said:

A different tack maybe from me - I feel, spiritually anyway, that the Enlightenment era caused people to be more in the dark. \'Liberal\' can bring supposed freedom, but may end up bring more traps and snares.
Now - where\'s me torch to enlighten me? And where\'s the key to the padlock on these chains, trapping me in this liberal stuff?!

September 7th, 2018 01:26

PRAGMATIC REALISM
Goldfinch60 said:

The truth and freedom in our lives are certainly being eroded in our lives by those in power. Ideology is different for each individual.
My ideal life is mine alone, other may like my ideals but they should not be forced on others.

The postcard is on the way.

Good Morning Michael.

September 7th, 2018 00:47

THE MONTHS
dusk arising said:

Eeeh bah gum lad, memories of when i wor a lad in t\'countryside. Norrabit like round \'ere where springtime heralds new generation of thugs on the streets and March brings forth a fleet of pushchairs bearing their newborn.
Bring back the good old days.

September 6th, 2018 13:35

THE MONTHS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW UNCLE MIKE ~ A Biggy ! ~ So glad we fused your MUSE. In my BOOK The evocative (Hysterical & Historical) names of DAYS ~ MONTHS ~ SEASONS etc always light my MUSE. When I tackle a NEW LANGUAGE they are the first things I learn ! For my FAVOURITE I will have to chose M A R C H cos I\'m an ACROSTOPHILE ~ Yours as always BRIAN😎 & ANGELA 🧡 Please check our latest POEM ~ CHILDREN (NO we haven\'t jumped the GUN !)

September 6th, 2018 08:55

THE MONTHS
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Wow wow you did a fantastic lil poem describing each season how it is in your place so I get the idea of exotic seasonal wonders. My fav were the march acrostic and May and nov but u did justice poetically to each month and the imagery. I have an unposted poem on each season and month how it is where I live but yours is of course more eloquent and impressive. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 08:38

FINE WINE
Lorna said:

I\'ve sat with people who do this.......... trying not to laugh. Pomposity is embarrassing if you really see through it. Let\'s separate the pompous from the really knowledgeable who can actually tell you all about the wine you are drinking - a sort of clever hobby or brain game..........

September 6th, 2018 07:53

THE MONTHS
Lorna said:

These are beautiful pictures Michael! You even make the dreary months sound good - but you are forgetting climate change and microburst storms and ice storms that knock down trees and floods and heat waves that cook gardens. That was all this year....... may we all see a more normal flow of months to come!

September 6th, 2018 07:25

THE MONTHS
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Ohh, I can\'t wait until October - all that coruscating and crenellating!

September 6th, 2018 01:39

THE MONTHS
Goldfinch60 said:

Doesn\'t the time fly when you are having fun.

Love the sculpture.

September 6th, 2018 01:30

FINE WINE
rrodriguez said:

Michael, I come to your poem wanting to read them. Because they are short and so saturated with meaning and strength. You\'re an artist with the brush and the pen.

September 5th, 2018 20:54

FINE WINE
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

SHE was only the Wine Merchants Daughter but Plonkers never got their way with HER. All her Beaus were Full Bodies & Fino !

UNCLE MIKE : My glass was HALF FULL when I read the TITLE but HALF EMPTY when I read the Poem ! Because my Dad is a respected Wine Merchant I was the President of the College Eonophilic Society and took great pleasure in sharing the Vintners description of the Wine before a tasting! My knowledge of Wine was one of the 250 reasons Brian fell in love with Me and his love of fine wine that made Me fall in love with Him. Competent Sommelier adds great value to a High Class Restaurant : OK. When my DAD describes a £20+ bottle of Red Rioja as having a mellow palette, with coconut & soft red fruit character with soft tannins, a pleasing nose & perfect with steak! He is only doing his JOB! It ameliorates the experience ad when I open the bottle (with reverence) pour a little into my glass swirl it and test its nose and then sip it to savour its quality : I agree with my DAD that it is everything it says on the bottle and it is worth every penny! English People who \"Buy a Bottle with a meal\" make three mistakes. 1. They wont ask for the Sommeliers advice (they assume he suggest an expensive bottle) 2. They tend to choose the cheaper wines 3. They have a \"One Bottle fits all\" mentality when the mains chosen may be Beef, Lamb, Chicken, Fish, Vegetarian etc all of which really require a DIFFERENT WINE. If I take Friends to a decent restaurant (with a Somellier) and everyone has ordered their Main : I ask him to suggest an appropriate WINE by the GLASS for each main. If someone queries the cost I always offer to pay the Drinks Bill (dont tell BRIAN its the House fund!). In that way everyone gets a Glass of Wine to their Palate (dry or medium dry) and on which complements the food. Whe I go out with the Staff from the Physio & Radio Department at least I persuade them to order an agreed Bottle of Red & White initially : OK. I have 2O years of Wine Tasting : My DAD strated educating our palettes @ 10 so I suppose I am not your average \"Dolly on a Date\" who always chooses ROSE because its Barbie Doll Pink. I like the 21st C because Men under 40 will accept that a Lady may possibly : just possible know something about FINE WINE! Love the HOUSE sculptures and BRIAN & I want to order one for our New Home. We intend to BUY or long term rent when I get back to Essex in NOVEMBER 2019. Feddback welcome on my OENOIC observations : I still Love YOU : ANGELA XXXX

September 5th, 2018 13:57

FINE WINE
orchidee said:

I didn\'t realise wine was wet and comes in bottles? Hmm, what have I been drinking all these years?
Just call me if your wine is too acidic. I\'m always obliging to add water to any alcoholic beverage.
Am I trying to poison everyone? I used some out-of-date grape juice that a church used instead of wine for Communion. No standing on ceremony. Someone nipped to the shops, then \'sanctified\' the grape juice with a prayer over it.

September 5th, 2018 09:34

FINE WINE
dusk arising said:

I must be everso sophisticated because there are actually wines i wouldn\'t bother buying again because they didn\'t please my palate. I have no idea why but most certainly its not as simple as it\'s either red, white or rose.

September 5th, 2018 07:32

FINE WINE
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Michael, like art, music and wine there are only two types that which you like and that which you do not, the expositions of the so called experts need no further explanation.

September 5th, 2018 02:10

FINE WINE
Fay Slimm. said:

This perceptive write brings out the ire in me as I can never follow the taster\'s assessment of flavours in wine -like your fun-verse states Mike it just tastes like wine - -- thanks for exposing the great divide between ignorant peasants and those whose imagination runs wild. Ha ha .

September 5th, 2018 01:48

FINE WINE
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic Michael. Can\'t understand this wine-tasting. They spit it out again. Don\'t they like it? Or was it cos I added water to it?! Hmmm.

September 5th, 2018 01:36

DIGITAL ART
Lorna said:

I love your comments about finding art everywhere Michael - so much that is beautiful if people look. It\'s the fakeness of the art world when it involves money that gets me - I\'ll never get over seeing a white canvas painted white in the Guggenheim (years ago) called White on White....... ummmmmmmmm really?

September 4th, 2018 06:31



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