Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
NOW THEN
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, but didn\'t we have that conversion in a years time where we talked about all our nows in the future and all our whens with Orchi in the present or maybe back in the days of 2043.
\"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday\"
October 28th, 2018 02:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael, but didn\'t we have that conversion in a years time where we talked about all our nows in the future and all our whens with Orchi in the present or maybe back in the days of 2043.
\"Today is the tomorrow that you worried about yesterday\"
October 28th, 2018 02:38
NOW THEN
orchidee said:
Did our discussion lead you (or both of us) up the garden path? And why would it lead us up a garden, of all things?! It was good to have that chat with you tomorrow (eh?).
October 28th, 2018 02:25
orchidee said:
Did our discussion lead you (or both of us) up the garden path? And why would it lead us up a garden, of all things?! It was good to have that chat with you tomorrow (eh?).
October 28th, 2018 02:25
TIME
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In some ways UNCLE MIKE we take time & the passage of time for granted. Because the Earth rotates round the SUN in 24 hours. We call that a DAY and divide it into 24 hours (and minutes & seconds etc) and we carry devices to keep track of time. There are also natural markers which Man used before Clocks were invented. Sunrise ~ Sunset and Day (bright) & Night (dark). So Man developed a routine Wake up ~ Work for eight hours ~ Leisure for eight hours ~ Sleep for eight hours and so on ad finitum. This is the pattern I have grown used to over the past 18 years ~ it seems kinda natural & human ! Are all Solar Planets the same ? No ! A day on Mercury is 60 Earthdays and a day on Venus is 210 Earthdays ~ so three days in Prison on Venus would be a whole Earth Year. MARS (which BUZZ ALDRIN has chosen as an Earth Overspill) has a 25 hour day ~ BUT No liquid water ~ Oxygen ~ Fertile Soil and its too cold etc ~ A NON-STARTER ! The four outer planets have shorter days the Earth (in hours) J (10) S (11) U (17) N (16) This would cause headaches for the Unions if ever we colonised them ! So we come back to the BIG QUESTION which Science cannot answer ! Why is the EARTH the only Habitable planet we have found in the Milky Way so far. Why is a 24 hour day so suitable for H Sapiens ~ Why is our Climate (average temperature 16C and rising !) Atmosphere just right 1 part O2 to 4 parts N2 (inert carrier gas) Abundant liquid water which cycles & purifies itself ~ free Energy from the Sun and a symbiotic Flora & Fauna etc etc ! Did it all happen by chance OR is there a CREATOR ? When we talk about time ~ We open Pandora Box ! Stephen Hawkins is reputed to have once said \"Evangelical Christians\" know were all the Matter in the Universe came from and why there is Design Beauty Purpose & Order on Planet Earth ~ GOD CREATED IT & CONTROLS IT ~ Science has no explanation ! Thanks for raising the question of TIME ~ Yours as always BRIAN Love the CHEE CHEE GOOSE !
October 27th, 2018 16:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
In some ways UNCLE MIKE we take time & the passage of time for granted. Because the Earth rotates round the SUN in 24 hours. We call that a DAY and divide it into 24 hours (and minutes & seconds etc) and we carry devices to keep track of time. There are also natural markers which Man used before Clocks were invented. Sunrise ~ Sunset and Day (bright) & Night (dark). So Man developed a routine Wake up ~ Work for eight hours ~ Leisure for eight hours ~ Sleep for eight hours and so on ad finitum. This is the pattern I have grown used to over the past 18 years ~ it seems kinda natural & human ! Are all Solar Planets the same ? No ! A day on Mercury is 60 Earthdays and a day on Venus is 210 Earthdays ~ so three days in Prison on Venus would be a whole Earth Year. MARS (which BUZZ ALDRIN has chosen as an Earth Overspill) has a 25 hour day ~ BUT No liquid water ~ Oxygen ~ Fertile Soil and its too cold etc ~ A NON-STARTER ! The four outer planets have shorter days the Earth (in hours) J (10) S (11) U (17) N (16) This would cause headaches for the Unions if ever we colonised them ! So we come back to the BIG QUESTION which Science cannot answer ! Why is the EARTH the only Habitable planet we have found in the Milky Way so far. Why is a 24 hour day so suitable for H Sapiens ~ Why is our Climate (average temperature 16C and rising !) Atmosphere just right 1 part O2 to 4 parts N2 (inert carrier gas) Abundant liquid water which cycles & purifies itself ~ free Energy from the Sun and a symbiotic Flora & Fauna etc etc ! Did it all happen by chance OR is there a CREATOR ? When we talk about time ~ We open Pandora Box ! Stephen Hawkins is reputed to have once said \"Evangelical Christians\" know were all the Matter in the Universe came from and why there is Design Beauty Purpose & Order on Planet Earth ~ GOD CREATED IT & CONTROLS IT ~ Science has no explanation ! Thanks for raising the question of TIME ~ Yours as always BRIAN Love the CHEE CHEE GOOSE !
October 27th, 2018 16:27
TIME
dusk arising said:
At last, praise comes home! My great great great grandpa invented time, or was it his dad?... Anyway appreciation at last.
It took its time.
October 27th, 2018 09:21
dusk arising said:
At last, praise comes home! My great great great grandpa invented time, or was it his dad?... Anyway appreciation at last.
It took its time.
October 27th, 2018 09:21
TIME
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Was time really invented?
I enjoyed your shortie and your goose in flight is awesome!
~Laura~
October 27th, 2018 08:48
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Was time really invented?
I enjoyed your shortie and your goose in flight is awesome!
~Laura~
October 27th, 2018 08:48
FLY TIPPING
orchidee said:
Yes, why do they say Basil Brush is daft? I\'ve met many talking foxes in my time. You too?!
October 27th, 2018 01:32
orchidee said:
Yes, why do they say Basil Brush is daft? I\'ve met many talking foxes in my time. You too?!
October 27th, 2018 01:32
TIME
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Now, I\'m all in a muddle. When is \'now\'? One second later and that \'now\' has gone, and it\'s a new \'now\'. that\'s a lot of \'nows\' - every second of the day. Will there be enough nows to go round?
You spending the extra hour tonight visiting all the Berles at home?
October 27th, 2018 01:30
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. Now, I\'m all in a muddle. When is \'now\'? One second later and that \'now\' has gone, and it\'s a new \'now\'. that\'s a lot of \'nows\' - every second of the day. Will there be enough nows to go round?
You spending the extra hour tonight visiting all the Berles at home?
October 27th, 2018 01:30
FLY TIPPING
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That is funny!🤣🤣
I guess there are many “generous individuals” out there!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 22:01
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
That is funny!🤣🤣
I guess there are many “generous individuals” out there!
~Laura~
October 26th, 2018 22:01
FLY TIPPING
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! Fido and I say Hi, and how\'s the evening going?!
Hmm yes, How do we get out if there\'s a fire? Why keep the fire exits clear if the door is kept closed?
Oh well, let\'s do what a manageress did - ignore fire practices and burn up if there really was a fire - daft as a brush!
October 26th, 2018 12:36
orchidee said:
Woof, woof! Fido and I say Hi, and how\'s the evening going?!
Hmm yes, How do we get out if there\'s a fire? Why keep the fire exits clear if the door is kept closed?
Oh well, let\'s do what a manageress did - ignore fire practices and burn up if there really was a fire - daft as a brush!
October 26th, 2018 12:36
FLY TIPPING
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Notices can be confusing ! My DAD said there were notices saying ~
BILL STICKERS WILL BE PROSICUTED
His friend Bill Stickers complained to the POLICE and they replaced BS with BILL POSTERS a week later they had another complaint from MRS POSTERS ........... !
One which worked to advantage was
NOSMO KING who got free publicity in every Railway Carriage
Those were the DAYS ! I was on the ISLE of MAN Railway recently and every carriage had a NOSMO KING Message !
Love the ELEFUMP you dont see those in NEW ZEALAND
Blessings & Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 10:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS UNCLE MIKE ~ Notices can be confusing ! My DAD said there were notices saying ~
BILL STICKERS WILL BE PROSICUTED
His friend Bill Stickers complained to the POLICE and they replaced BS with BILL POSTERS a week later they had another complaint from MRS POSTERS ........... !
One which worked to advantage was
NOSMO KING who got free publicity in every Railway Carriage
Those were the DAYS ! I was on the ISLE of MAN Railway recently and every carriage had a NOSMO KING Message !
Love the ELEFUMP you dont see those in NEW ZEALAND
Blessings & Love BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 26th, 2018 10:52
FLY TIPPING
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks for todays smile AGAIN Michael... Long may this light hearted remission from seriousness continue... It inspired my poem today
October 26th, 2018 04:09
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Thanks for todays smile AGAIN Michael... Long may this light hearted remission from seriousness continue... It inspired my poem today
October 26th, 2018 04:09
FLY TIPPING
Fay Slimm. said:
Your artistic mind works yet another amazing image with such few lines -
great effalunt picture Mike along with a flying witty surprise - -ha ha .
October 26th, 2018 02:13
Fay Slimm. said:
Your artistic mind works yet another amazing image with such few lines -
great effalunt picture Mike along with a flying witty surprise - -ha ha .
October 26th, 2018 02:13
FLY TIPPING
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a good write Michael. I forgot - was you at Agincourt yesterday for the 1415 reunion?!
October 26th, 2018 01:52
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a good write Michael. I forgot - was you at Agincourt yesterday for the 1415 reunion?!
October 26th, 2018 01:52
FLY TIPPING
sylviasearcher said:
Somehow you made me think of an elephant scratching his head on his way to an evening out.
October 26th, 2018 01:46
sylviasearcher said:
Somehow you made me think of an elephant scratching his head on his way to an evening out.
October 26th, 2018 01:46
FLY TIPPING
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael, I too have never been served by a fly.
October 26th, 2018 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write Michael, I too have never been served by a fly.
October 26th, 2018 01:09
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
dusk arising said:
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33
dusk arising said:
Hmmmm interesting concept. Training to be a poet.
October 25th, 2018 12:33
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~love the CHEEKY CHEEKY GEESE in flight ~ awesome ! You really have pushed the POETIC BOAT out with this one ! I remember the DIAMANTE FORM ~ Mine is rotated triangle ! Also I like the introduction of Barringtons Lady friends SYNDI ~ GNOME and his AUNTY ~ GNOME !
Here is my contribution LOVE ~ HATE Marks out of ten please !
LOVE
BEAUTIFUL ~ PEACEFUL
HUGGING ~ CARESSING ~ PULSATING
POSITIVE ~ DIVINE ~ NEGATIVE SATANIC
FIGHTING ~ HURTING ~ DESTROYING
UGLY ~ AGGRESSIVE
HATE
Thanks for lifting us to higher poetic plane !
Please check my POEM ~VILLAGE BY THE LAKE which is based on a PAINTING ~ OK Yours as always BRIAN.
ANGELA is sleeping peacfully in BED ~ Its 2:30 am in Aukland.
October 25th, 2018 09:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~love the CHEEKY CHEEKY GEESE in flight ~ awesome ! You really have pushed the POETIC BOAT out with this one ! I remember the DIAMANTE FORM ~ Mine is rotated triangle ! Also I like the introduction of Barringtons Lady friends SYNDI ~ GNOME and his AUNTY ~ GNOME !
Here is my contribution LOVE ~ HATE Marks out of ten please !
LOVE
BEAUTIFUL ~ PEACEFUL
HUGGING ~ CARESSING ~ PULSATING
POSITIVE ~ DIVINE ~ NEGATIVE SATANIC
FIGHTING ~ HURTING ~ DESTROYING
UGLY ~ AGGRESSIVE
HATE
Thanks for lifting us to higher poetic plane !
Please check my POEM ~VILLAGE BY THE LAKE which is based on a PAINTING ~ OK Yours as always BRIAN.
ANGELA is sleeping peacfully in BED ~ Its 2:30 am in Aukland.
October 25th, 2018 09:28
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
I absolutely love this minimalist artwork.
October 25th, 2018 01:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Clever write Michael.
I absolutely love this minimalist artwork.
October 25th, 2018 01:43
INACTIVE, EXERCISE.
orchidee said:
Phew! What with \'ing\'s\' and \'Antonys\' (what about Antony?) I\'m in a twirl.
The explanation helps us to see how involved this poem is. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this!
A great write Michael. I\'m off to find Antony Berles or Berling now.
October 25th, 2018 01:37
orchidee said:
Phew! What with \'ing\'s\' and \'Antonys\' (what about Antony?) I\'m in a twirl.
The explanation helps us to see how involved this poem is. I doubt I could do a hymn-poem like this!
A great write Michael. I\'m off to find Antony Berles or Berling now.
October 25th, 2018 01:37
BIG FEET
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! My feet have served me well!👣 I enjoyed the read and artwork!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2018 18:31
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Nice one! My feet have served me well!👣 I enjoyed the read and artwork!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2018 18:31
BIG FEET
dusk arising said:
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more comfortable. Waddle i find next?
i found this by the ink spots (original by fats waller) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzLwpSnUj9Y
October 24th, 2018 06:38
dusk arising said:
Quack quack, wide elevens here, quack quack! Recently found twelves more comfortable. Waddle i find next?
i found this by the ink spots (original by fats waller) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kzLwpSnUj9Y
October 24th, 2018 06:38
BIG FEET
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING UNCLE MIKE : I LOVE YA BUT YA FEETS TO BIG ! Love the Fungi
Love ANGELA (size 5 !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please to check my SUNRISE : SUNSET : Thanks A !
October 24th, 2018 05:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
MORNING UNCLE MIKE : I LOVE YA BUT YA FEETS TO BIG ! Love the Fungi
Love ANGELA (size 5 !) 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please to check my SUNRISE : SUNSET : Thanks A !
October 24th, 2018 05:43
BIG FEET
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Has Miss Berles tried clowning, or any of her relatives, whose names I may not have heard of yet?
October 24th, 2018 01:37
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. Has Miss Berles tried clowning, or any of her relatives, whose names I may not have heard of yet?
October 24th, 2018 01:37
BIG FEET
sylviasearcher said:
Made me smile. As I do have big feet for a small lady. But I never much fancied the life of a clown
October 24th, 2018 01:36
sylviasearcher said:
Made me smile. As I do have big feet for a small lady. But I never much fancied the life of a clown
October 24th, 2018 01:36
BIG FEET
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
You are so right my UK size is a 10 but occasionally with some shoes I need an 11 - very strange.
October 24th, 2018 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good fun write.
You are so right my UK size is a 10 but occasionally with some shoes I need an 11 - very strange.
October 24th, 2018 00:27
FOR SHE WOULD BE NO ODALISQUE
dusk arising said:
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing from young ladies in MPS who will be no odalisque. But whilst they feel the pain, they lack your poetic ability.
October 23rd, 2018 15:44
dusk arising said:
Beautifully crafted poetry ME. So often we see a lengthy piece of writing from young ladies in MPS who will be no odalisque. But whilst they feel the pain, they lack your poetic ability.
October 23rd, 2018 15:44
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