Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
POETICAL OUTTAKES
orchidee said:
How about the Bolics? Can they help me out of this ash heap? And does anyone else but you know what I\'m wittering on about?!
August 13th, 2018 02:36
orchidee said:
How about the Bolics? Can they help me out of this ash heap? And does anyone else but you know what I\'m wittering on about?!
August 13th, 2018 02:36
HE THOUGHT
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad...
“He went and did it.”!!
Such a handsome couple!
54 years..that’s awesome!
“The sags and wrinkles” mean nothing! It’s the lasting love that matters!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:38
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
So glad...
“He went and did it.”!!
Such a handsome couple!
54 years..that’s awesome!
“The sags and wrinkles” mean nothing! It’s the lasting love that matters!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:38
POETICAL OUTTAKES
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting and your idea of the outtake folder! I’m looking forward to the poem you’ll derive from it!
This approach reminds me a bit of the “brainstorming” of ideas for writing that I used with my elementary school students! It was a group activity...
promoting self confidence!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:21
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting and your idea of the outtake folder! I’m looking forward to the poem you’ll derive from it!
This approach reminds me a bit of the “brainstorming” of ideas for writing that I used with my elementary school students! It was a group activity...
promoting self confidence!
~Laura~
August 13th, 2018 01:21
POETICAL OUTTAKES
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a file of ideas that were never brought to fruition. This reminded me of a poem that I wrote many years ago and I will put on here to today.
August 13th, 2018 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
I too have a file of ideas that were never brought to fruition. This reminded me of a poem that I wrote many years ago and I will put on here to today.
August 13th, 2018 01:14
POETICAL OUTTAKES
orchidee said:
Hmm, a fine write M. But I don\'t know, can\'t comment much on this style. I tend to use all my lines there and then. Well, I make deletions and alterations as I go along. Not that many, to be honest, when I get in the flow of writing!
August 13th, 2018 01:09
orchidee said:
Hmm, a fine write M. But I don\'t know, can\'t comment much on this style. I tend to use all my lines there and then. Well, I make deletions and alterations as I go along. Not that many, to be honest, when I get in the flow of writing!
August 13th, 2018 01:09
HE THOUGHT
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the PHOTO ~ very CLARK KENT and LOIS LANE ~ love the 60\'s I have photos of my Grandparents looking like that ! Loved the POEM ~ gives me the resolve to \"Grasp the Nettle\" on Monday Morning to get more funding for my new MICROBIOLOGY LAB ! Yours BRIAN.
They said it was IMPOSSIBLE
But MARIE CURIE was UNSTOPPABLE
So with PIERRE\'S smart proclivity
They solved the mystery of ...........
R A D I O A C T I V I T Y !
August 12th, 2018 03:49
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the PHOTO ~ very CLARK KENT and LOIS LANE ~ love the 60\'s I have photos of my Grandparents looking like that ! Loved the POEM ~ gives me the resolve to \"Grasp the Nettle\" on Monday Morning to get more funding for my new MICROBIOLOGY LAB ! Yours BRIAN.
They said it was IMPOSSIBLE
But MARIE CURIE was UNSTOPPABLE
So with PIERRE\'S smart proclivity
They solved the mystery of ...........
R A D I O A C T I V I T Y !
August 12th, 2018 03:49
HE THOUGHT
orchidee said:
Any more info on this and I might swoon! A fine write Michael.
August 12th, 2018 01:15
orchidee said:
Any more info on this and I might swoon! A fine write Michael.
August 12th, 2018 01:15
TO SLEEP
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael. I can fall asleep as soon as my head hits the pillow.
The discussion about the painting is interesting as I believe this one or one very similar has been posted before, or was that one of a pub. No matter it is always good to see your art.
August 12th, 2018 00:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write Michael. I can fall asleep as soon as my head hits the pillow.
The discussion about the painting is interesting as I believe this one or one very similar has been posted before, or was that one of a pub. No matter it is always good to see your art.
August 12th, 2018 00:02
TO SLEEP
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! The pastel colors are very pleasing to the eye!
I believe you posted this one with another poem. If I remember correctly, I think there’s a second painting you posted about the same subject!
As far as sleeping patterns, I’m glad I don’t have any issues with that...yet!
I love how you weaved the words DELTA, ALPHA, BETA into your poem!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 10:25
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love the painting! The pastel colors are very pleasing to the eye!
I believe you posted this one with another poem. If I remember correctly, I think there’s a second painting you posted about the same subject!
As far as sleeping patterns, I’m glad I don’t have any issues with that...yet!
I love how you weaved the words DELTA, ALPHA, BETA into your poem!
~Laura~
August 11th, 2018 10:25
TO SLEEP
Heartwriter said:
You are the artist we like to see each morning! Enjoyed.
August 11th, 2018 06:16
Heartwriter said:
You are the artist we like to see each morning! Enjoyed.
August 11th, 2018 06:16
TO SLEEP
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, the two buildings on either side are played down well, with the lighter tones. I think.
Doh! I gotta study a bit of Greek now, before I know what sleep patterns I\'m having. Can one dream in Greek?! You asleep now, and can\'t reply yet?
August 11th, 2018 03:19
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic M. Yes, the two buildings on either side are played down well, with the lighter tones. I think.
Doh! I gotta study a bit of Greek now, before I know what sleep patterns I\'m having. Can one dream in Greek?! You asleep now, and can\'t reply yet?
August 11th, 2018 03:19
THEIR SANCTUARY
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely forest scene love the visual too ~ more plese BRIAN. Please check Five Fabulos Females ~ Thanks B !
August 10th, 2018 05:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks MIKE ~ Lovely forest scene love the visual too ~ more plese BRIAN. Please check Five Fabulos Females ~ Thanks B !
August 10th, 2018 05:00
THEIR SANCTUARY
FineB said:
A vivid, poignant write.
Thanks Michael
Beautiful and awesome.
The watercolour is beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:48
FineB said:
A vivid, poignant write.
Thanks Michael
Beautiful and awesome.
The watercolour is beautiful!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:48
THEIR SANCTUARY
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a pleasure to catch your work.
August 10th, 2018 03:32
Fay Slimm. said:
First class writing and painting Michael - - a delightful posting and a pleasure to catch your work.
August 10th, 2018 03:32
THEIR SANCTUARY
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I forgot what dryads are!
You got any little acorns? From them mighty oaks grow, as is said!
August 10th, 2018 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write Michael. I forgot what dryads are!
You got any little acorns? From them mighty oaks grow, as is said!
August 10th, 2018 02:01
THEIR SANCTUARY
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, love the last line.
\"where dryads seek their sanctuary.\"
August 10th, 2018 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write Michael, love the last line.
\"where dryads seek their sanctuary.\"
August 10th, 2018 00:56
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
Fay Slimm. said:
I am still giggling at your clever image - small is big to a palette like yours Mike - -- as for cloud numbers I favour the nine for drifting me into my own little paradise. Great stuff.
August 9th, 2018 16:42
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
orchidee said:
Ma again! Thoughts of death - I\'m about to sing! lol.
August 9th, 2018 10:00
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
Heartwriter said:
Michael if goodness gets one there. Perhaps we will pass on a cloud and share some poems written in the sky!!!!!! Great write.
August 9th, 2018 09:52
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A MAN lay down by a SEWER
And by that SEWER died
At the Coroners inquest
They called it SEWERSIDE !
Thanks for another Poeme de Morte ~ very droll
My COMPUTER does not have a CELESTIAL KEY
Perhaps one day it will~ a direct line to JEHOVAH !
Yours as always BRIAN.
August 9th, 2018 08:19
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve not been there (as yet) to find out! I expect it\'s as Goldie says.
Oh lol, good write and pic M.
August 9th, 2018 01:31
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (2)
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
There is no need for any of these in heaven, including computers. See you there Michael.
August 9th, 2018 00:45
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
Heartwriter said:
Haha! You too funny. They gonna smell it up?
August 8th, 2018 09:29
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Love it!
No worries...
sharing is good!
Only one thing...
let’s not forget the wine!🍷
~Laura ~
August 8th, 2018 06:05
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !
Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.
August 8th, 2018 04:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
McTavish is dead ~ an\' his Brother don\'t know it
His Brother is dead ~ an\' McTavish don\'t know it
There\'s both o\' them dead ~ an\' they\'re in the same bed
And neither one knows that t\'other one\'s DEAD !
At the inquest they blamed CO from parafine heater !
Thanks for sharing MIKE Morbid poems often funniest
Please check my Poem today \"Dancing & Romancing\"
Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA.
August 8th, 2018 04:48
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
dusk arising said:
That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.
August 8th, 2018 02:02
dusk arising said:
That\'ll be a smelly place! I do so hope that you don\'t find a certain \'trump\' there as well.
August 8th, 2018 02:02
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.
August 8th, 2018 01:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha ha - who but you could think up an last line like that !! A smilngly good read.
August 8th, 2018 01:39
THOUGHTS OF DEATH (1)
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?
August 8th, 2018 00:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes, I will be there as well, shall we share a bottle of red or white?
August 8th, 2018 00:42
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