Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
LET\'S
Goldfinch60 said:
Kissing time is always the right time.
Love the model.
October 14th, 2018 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Kissing time is always the right time.
Love the model.
October 14th, 2018 01:06
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FISH ~ looks good al fresco ! Love the shorties DRINKING ~ BLOOMING & DREAMING ~ Please check OUR Sailing ~ Bailing ~ Wailing ~ Thanks for comment on FUSION. Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 13th, 2018 11:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Love the FISH ~ looks good al fresco ! Love the shorties DRINKING ~ BLOOMING & DREAMING ~ Please check OUR Sailing ~ Bailing ~ Wailing ~ Thanks for comment on FUSION. Yours as always BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
October 13th, 2018 11:10
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Michael.
I am very impressed with the table that you have carved - did it take long to carve and polish?
October 13th, 2018 03:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful Michael.
I am very impressed with the table that you have carved - did it take long to carve and polish?
October 13th, 2018 03:50
ROMANTIC SHORTIES
orchidee said:
I tried drinking ice water, but only got tummy ache. doh!
Sshh Fido - ready to bark at No.3!
Fine writes and pic Michael.
See ya at Hastings!
October 13th, 2018 01:40
orchidee said:
I tried drinking ice water, but only got tummy ache. doh!
Sshh Fido - ready to bark at No.3!
Fine writes and pic Michael.
See ya at Hastings!
October 13th, 2018 01:40
SOME QUATRAINS
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for me (BRIAN) a perfect POEM is a set of Quatrains with xaxa xbxb etc Rhyme Pattern. Isolated Q\'s are a bit like HAIKU & SENRYU which are best described as STATEMENTS rather than POEMS. But there are UNIKUS ~ Three prime Examples are BREXIT ~ EXIT ~ FIXIT all of which are deeply profound. Thanks for your famous four:
1. TOMATO SOUP ART IS NOT
2. PORQUOI DROIT O GAUCHE ?
3. I COME ~ I GO ~ I NO COME BACK AGAIN
4. LAVENDER ~ BENDER !
Please check my latest FUSION ~ What makes you HAPPY ?
Yours as ever BRIAN alias BRAIN !
Love the primitive sculptings ~ ace !
October 12th, 2018 15:32
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE for me (BRIAN) a perfect POEM is a set of Quatrains with xaxa xbxb etc Rhyme Pattern. Isolated Q\'s are a bit like HAIKU & SENRYU which are best described as STATEMENTS rather than POEMS. But there are UNIKUS ~ Three prime Examples are BREXIT ~ EXIT ~ FIXIT all of which are deeply profound. Thanks for your famous four:
1. TOMATO SOUP ART IS NOT
2. PORQUOI DROIT O GAUCHE ?
3. I COME ~ I GO ~ I NO COME BACK AGAIN
4. LAVENDER ~ BENDER !
Please check my latest FUSION ~ What makes you HAPPY ?
Yours as ever BRIAN alias BRAIN !
Love the primitive sculptings ~ ace !
October 12th, 2018 15:32
SOME QUATRAINS
orchidee said:
You polishing that armour this evening, ready for 1066?!
October 12th, 2018 13:50
orchidee said:
You polishing that armour this evening, ready for 1066?!
October 12th, 2018 13:50
SOME QUATRAINS
dusk arising said:
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud... onwards.....
last one modified:-
As church bells struck the quarter,
his mind relaxed
his life intact
he\'d had the vicar\'s daughter
always with a smile, love the humour in your writing.
October 12th, 2018 09:01
dusk arising said:
Well here we go, i have just read the first piece and im laughing aloud... onwards.....
last one modified:-
As church bells struck the quarter,
his mind relaxed
his life intact
he\'d had the vicar\'s daughter
always with a smile, love the humour in your writing.
October 12th, 2018 09:01
SOME QUATRAINS
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Mother said, the first was a tad \"Abstruse\"
She\'s sucha puritan...
I thought they were all excellent.
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 07:58
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Mother said, the first was a tad \"Abstruse\"
She\'s sucha puritan...
I thought they were all excellent.
Bravo!
October 12th, 2018 07:58
SOME QUATRAINS
Christina8 said:
Your first quatrain gave me a good laugh---first one of the day. Thank you! All great ones.
October 12th, 2018 07:48
Christina8 said:
Your first quatrain gave me a good laugh---first one of the day. Thank you! All great ones.
October 12th, 2018 07:48
SOME QUATRAINS
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. What\'s Miss Berles doing in the bath with lavender water at that time of day? Ain\'t she at church?!
You off to the wedding today?! See you there?
October 12th, 2018 01:44
orchidee said:
Good writes and pic Michael. What\'s Miss Berles doing in the bath with lavender water at that time of day? Ain\'t she at church?!
You off to the wedding today?! See you there?
October 12th, 2018 01:44
SOME QUATRAINS
Goldfinch60 said:
Four very good fours Michael. The first one gave me my first laugh of the day and for that I am very grateful.
October 12th, 2018 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Four very good fours Michael. The first one gave me my first laugh of the day and for that I am very grateful.
October 12th, 2018 00:43
WORDS UNSAID
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ All the lonely people ~ where do they all come from ? Love the POEM ~ Love the FISH ! Thanks for your comment on FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ All the lonely people ~ where do they all come from ? Love the POEM ~ Love the FISH ! Thanks for your comment on FLAMINGOS ~ Yours as always BRIAN
October 11th, 2018 16:20
WORDS UNSAID
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. He won\'t be alone. Mr (Outward) Manny Festation will visit him.
October 11th, 2018 01:39
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic Michael. He won\'t be alone. Mr (Outward) Manny Festation will visit him.
October 11th, 2018 01:39
WORDS UNSAID
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see him dreaming. Nobody need be alone.
October 11th, 2018 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
I can see him dreaming. Nobody need be alone.
October 11th, 2018 01:34
FOUR SHORTIES
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
four gems Michael
Will you be revealing they way to his heart in any sequels?
I really can\'t imagine...
Bravo!
October 10th, 2018 14:57
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
four gems Michael
Will you be revealing they way to his heart in any sequels?
I really can\'t imagine...
Bravo!
October 10th, 2018 14:57
FOUR SHORTIES
orchidee said:
How\'s the evening going? You invited Miss Berles over for a social evening of dominoes?
October 10th, 2018 12:57
orchidee said:
How\'s the evening going? You invited Miss Berles over for a social evening of dominoes?
October 10th, 2018 12:57
FOUR SHORTIES
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love the wit in number two but that third shortie ticked every box for me -- who indeed can sit high over he who has but the one who works !!! Great little collection Michael.
October 10th, 2018 12:20
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - love the wit in number two but that third shortie ticked every box for me -- who indeed can sit high over he who has but the one who works !!! Great little collection Michael.
October 10th, 2018 12:20
FOUR SHORTIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Four great shorties SINGING ~ FORKING ~ RANKING ~ PORKING ! Thanks for sharing four smilers ! Please check ANGELA\'S POEM ~ BIRDS OF FLIGHT ~ THANKS Blessings & Love BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡 Love the SCULPTINGS !
October 10th, 2018 11:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Four great shorties SINGING ~ FORKING ~ RANKING ~ PORKING ! Thanks for sharing four smilers ! Please check ANGELA\'S POEM ~ BIRDS OF FLIGHT ~ THANKS Blessings & Love BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡 Love the SCULPTINGS !
October 10th, 2018 11:08
FOUR SHORTIES
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Four great shorties SINGING ~ FORKING ~ RANKING ~ PORKING ! Thanks for sharing four smilers ! Please check ANGELA\'S POEM ~ BIRDS OF FLIGHT ~ THANKS Blessings & Love BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 10th, 2018 11:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks UNCLE MIKE ~ Four great shorties SINGING ~ FORKING ~ RANKING ~ PORKING ! Thanks for sharing four smilers ! Please check ANGELA\'S POEM ~ BIRDS OF FLIGHT ~ THANKS Blessings & Love BRIAN 😎 & ANGELA 🧡
October 10th, 2018 11:08
FOUR SHORTIES
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thank you!
Four perfect poems - a wonderful write.
The Four Shorties put a smile on my face!
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 06:05
FineB said:
Hi Michael,
Thank you!
Four perfect poems - a wonderful write.
The Four Shorties put a smile on my face!
Keep writing
FineB
October 10th, 2018 06:05
FOUR SHORTIES
orchidee said:
A fine set of writes Michael. Fido and I here!
No.1 - Well, it wasn\'t me singing then at dawn.
No.3 - Well, it\'s the \'workers\' who do all the work, yes?
No.4 - Woof! Fido read that one! lol.
October 10th, 2018 01:54
orchidee said:
A fine set of writes Michael. Fido and I here!
No.1 - Well, it wasn\'t me singing then at dawn.
No.3 - Well, it\'s the \'workers\' who do all the work, yes?
No.4 - Woof! Fido read that one! lol.
October 10th, 2018 01:54
ABSTRACT ART
Unobtrusive Sun said:
Beautiful and engaging is both the portrait and the writing. Breaking the chains of convention is my cup of coffee. Fine work!
October 10th, 2018 01:18
Unobtrusive Sun said:
Beautiful and engaging is both the portrait and the writing. Breaking the chains of convention is my cup of coffee. Fine work!
October 10th, 2018 01:18
FOUR SHORTIES
Goldfinch60 said:
Four good ones there Michael.
Will Orchi\'s Fido bark at the last one.
October 10th, 2018 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Four good ones there Michael.
Will Orchi\'s Fido bark at the last one.
October 10th, 2018 00:26
ABSTRACT ART
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another great haiku with food for thought, Michael.
You are quickly becoming \"King of Haiku.\" An excellent write :)
October 9th, 2018 16:23
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Another great haiku with food for thought, Michael.
You are quickly becoming \"King of Haiku.\" An excellent write :)
October 9th, 2018 16:23
ABSTRACT ART
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Sublime...your painting and your senryu! I thoroughly enjoyed both!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:40
Laura🌻 said:
Michael,
Sublime...your painting and your senryu! I thoroughly enjoyed both!
~Laura~
October 9th, 2018 07:40
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