Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards
UNDER THE WEATHER?
Goldfinch60 said:
Another laugh Michael, thank you so much.
October 3rd, 2019 01:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Another laugh Michael, thank you so much.
October 3rd, 2019 01:44
WHY?
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
Clara said:
Oh, I was not expecting this from the first line. I actually laughed out loud at my desk at work. Excellent!
October 1st, 2019 06:42
WHY?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Sleeping NAKED on a JUMBO JET
Flying NUDO as nature intended
OK from the back (my buttocks are set)
But NOT THE FRONT ~ with my JOYSTICK extended !
Very DROLL Uncle Mike ~ Too much exposure on a Pubic Flight is a Dangerous Thing ! Youve been watching too many James Bond Films again ! Gives a MAN ideas beyond his destination ! Love the NAKED DAISIES !
BLESSINGS to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & Brian🧡💙🧡💙🧡
Please check our POEM on MONEY !
October 1st, 2019 04:51
WHY?
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
dusk arising said:
All eyes popped
what a an amazine scene
they began to shove and barge
for the strangest vision
his fuselage
October 1st, 2019 03:41
WHY?
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
orchidee said:
Oh lol, swoon! How does Miss Berles sleep? And how would we know?!
October 1st, 2019 01:50
DEFINITIONS
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
dusk arising said:
Invent a handy pocket tape measure encapsulating your points and you\'ll make an absolute..... erm, invention i guess.
September 30th, 2019 14:00
DEFINITIONS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI UNCLE MIKE ~ BRIAN HERE ! As you know I try to use Accepted Descriptive Poetic Language when refering to my own *CLASSICAL POETRY* and I encourage ANGELA to do likewise ! You are older than both of us together so I have copied your POEM to make (doubly ) sure we are right in future ~ AMEN ! Love the IRIS !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💙 🧡 💙 🧡 💙
Please check Angelas
MY OCTOBER BLUES !
PS For us any Poem with
14 lines is a SONNET ~ OK !
September 30th, 2019 09:40
DEFINITIONS
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
orchidee said:
I dunno if I did find out exactly about them iambic pentameters. I may have been using them without knowing it!
A metre - 39 inches!
September 30th, 2019 01:43
THE END YEARS
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
marijoy said:
Oh that sweet and secure love that only maturity can bring us. A safe and divine place. Lovely words Michael.
September 26th, 2019 21:13
THE END YEARS
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are multi-layered my friend.
September 26th, 2019 15:33
Fay Slimm. said:
An admirable write and what a lovely flower-painting. Your talents are multi-layered my friend.
September 26th, 2019 15:33
THE END YEARS
FredPeyer said:
This beautiful poem spoke to me. You are preaching to a believer.
September 26th, 2019 12:47
FredPeyer said:
This beautiful poem spoke to me. You are preaching to a believer.
September 26th, 2019 12:47
THE END YEARS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10:30pm FRIDAY) BLUE flowers always speak to Me of nostalgia ! Im getting nostalgic for ESSEX (Ive polished me White Stilletos & Handbag !) Love your tribute to *A LIFE WELL LIVED & LOVED* which is true of many Seniors on MPS. We look forward to joining the Married Ranks in 2020 !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 26th, 2019 05:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10:30pm FRIDAY) BLUE flowers always speak to Me of nostalgia ! Im getting nostalgic for ESSEX (Ive polished me White Stilletos & Handbag !) Love your tribute to *A LIFE WELL LIVED & LOVED* which is true of many Seniors on MPS. We look forward to joining the Married Ranks in 2020 !
Blessings to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela & BRIAN
🧡 💙 🧡 💙 🧡
September 26th, 2019 05:29
THE END YEARS
Neville said:
Both words and accompanying image are quite beautiful..... Yes indeed.
Neville
September 26th, 2019 04:49
Neville said:
Both words and accompanying image are quite beautiful..... Yes indeed.
Neville
September 26th, 2019 04:49
THE END YEARS
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never end Michael.
I like the painting.
September 26th, 2019 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will never end Michael.
I like the painting.
September 26th, 2019 01:19
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm WED in NZ) Hi Uncle Mike 11,500 miles away we are laffing our socks off at the DAILY CIRCUS with BOJO the Clown & JC the Lion Tamer ! The Mother of Parliaments on Laffing Gas ! I wish I could stay in NZ where sanity prevails but I am betrothed to BRIAN and I owe a lot to my Parents. I have asked the Hospital to keep my JOB open and the Applied Science Department @ the Uni have said they woud employ Brian as a Research Tecnician on *The Effects of Global Warming and Wind Farms on the NZ Environment !*
Boris J & Corbyn resolved to have a Battle
For Boris J said Corbyn had slandered him with Prattle
The faced across the PLAYPEN with a RED & BLUE RATTLE
What happened NEXT is in the TEXT
Writ large on the DAUB & WATTLE !
Thinking of you ALL in thes days of Political Gobble de Gook !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 05:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE (10pm WED in NZ) Hi Uncle Mike 11,500 miles away we are laffing our socks off at the DAILY CIRCUS with BOJO the Clown & JC the Lion Tamer ! The Mother of Parliaments on Laffing Gas ! I wish I could stay in NZ where sanity prevails but I am betrothed to BRIAN and I owe a lot to my Parents. I have asked the Hospital to keep my JOB open and the Applied Science Department @ the Uni have said they woud employ Brian as a Research Tecnician on *The Effects of Global Warming and Wind Farms on the NZ Environment !*
Boris J & Corbyn resolved to have a Battle
For Boris J said Corbyn had slandered him with Prattle
The faced across the PLAYPEN with a RED & BLUE RATTLE
What happened NEXT is in the TEXT
Writ large on the DAUB & WATTLE !
Thinking of you ALL in thes days of Political Gobble de Gook !
Love as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
September 25th, 2019 05:03
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
orchidee said:
A good clerihew M. Does Miss Berles know Cleri Hughes?
September 25th, 2019 01:24
orchidee said:
A good clerihew M. Does Miss Berles know Cleri Hughes?
September 25th, 2019 01:24
OUR LEADERS IN CLERIHEWS
dusk arising said:
And now the way forward
could become quite awkward
unless we get an erection
a general election
September 25th, 2019 00:38
dusk arising said:
And now the way forward
could become quite awkward
unless we get an erection
a general election
September 25th, 2019 00:38
REINCARNATION
Suresh said:
What a fantastic re-molecularization of that which is now you-
September 23rd, 2019 11:27
Suresh said:
What a fantastic re-molecularization of that which is now you-
September 23rd, 2019 11:27
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