Comments received on poems by Michael Edwards



From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
orchidee said:

Oh lol good write and pic M. Why are farts always old?!

June 16th, 2019 01:25

From \'A COLLECTION\' (12)
dusk arising said:

Charts don\'t do anything. Farts can do lots.

Take that as definite from this old fart.

June 16th, 2019 01:19

SUMMER IDYL
Suresh said:

In my hunt for piece left to time, I landed on this today - it reminds me of one I have been formulating for a week, and thus - your poem resonates.
A fine description of a day to daydream and I shall love to lie down with your pic, under a shady three on field of green grass.

June 15th, 2019 12:19

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A good write and a bit naughty too.

Ha! Ha!:Good stuff!

Arabella, the name conjures up for me a woman who\'d appear in a Thomas Hardy novel.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:42

MILE OVEN DYE
Neville said:

splendid.. I like everything about this little pearl of a poem.... nowt lost in translation neither.... Neville

June 15th, 2019 08:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

A super write with a superb picture too.

Lovely.

Keep writing FineB

June 15th, 2019 08:38

FIVE THIRTY PM
Suresh said:

A simple moment in time, yet so poetically expressed

June 12th, 2019 11:08

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Neville said:

Twixt or tween if ya know what I mean...
Ah\' our Arabella was fair
when she let em come up for air... there\'s nowt like a sensual interlude, is there....... N



June 11th, 2019 17:17

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Suresh said:

The innocence of Arabella and the town are both evident as displayed here.

June 11th, 2019 16:13

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Fay Slimm. said:

Love it - your rhyming in this four liner is perfect - the watercolour makes me want to move into the house on far right - -another delightful read and view Michael.

June 11th, 2019 11:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BON APRES MIDI ~ Mon Oncle Mike ~ BRIAN HERE ! Love all the Village Scenes ~ so so Cotswoldy ! Give me Rubenesque Ladies ~ Plenty of Places to lay my weary HEAD ! Size ZERO & Anorexic Ladies do NOT reflect the ample proportions of EVE ~ Earth*s Eternal Mother ! What is ANGELA like ? Well she is a PHYSIO and has to subdue MALE ATHLETES ! She is very Beautiful and also very FIT ! For Men your age think GINA LOLLABRIGIA ~ OK

Blessings & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours as always ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check TOOTHACHE ~ Thanks B !

June 11th, 2019 10:09

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
MendedFences27 said:

Makes one wonder what\'s going on behind the closed doors of your pictured village street? The art is idyllic and causes one to want to be there, likewise the poetry.I\'m guessing Arabella lives in the red house second on the right. A very invigorating morning greeting for me. Thank you. - Phil A.

June 11th, 2019 09:27

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
dusk arising said:

Is that where the axe hit her. Some cleavage it left,
Your pic is similar to my mental picture of a nice game of Monopoly before some bugger goes and puts hotels all over it.

June 11th, 2019 03:07

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Poetic Dan said:

Splendid as ever and have a thought now of visiting an open day of yours!

June 11th, 2019 02:27

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
orchidee said:

A fine write and pic M. Oohh Ara Berla - the farmer\'s daughter?!

June 11th, 2019 01:26

From \'A COLLECTION\' (11)
Goldfinch60 said:

Now, I wonder who Arabella is?

June 11th, 2019 00:51

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
MendedFences27 said:

I think the art depicts the trap within the words.
Now in Vegas, this would have been possible, so don\'t go there.
Catchy bit of wisdom and a terrific piece of art. - Phil A.

June 10th, 2019 13:48

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Suresh said:

.....so you stayed up all night......

June 10th, 2019 11:42

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Neville said:

been there, done that & still got the scars.....

a cracking little post that will surely make a few of us wince back in regret......... great bit o artwork you put on show for us too Michael.... N

June 10th, 2019 10:39

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
dusk arising said:

Ha! Trust a female to try entrapment at a time like that!

Great picture reminds me of the foggy view from my window as i peer over my bowl of porridge.

June 10th, 2019 04:15

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING UNCLE MIKE : ANGELA here @ 10 pm NZ time ! Another day spent Visiting Vineyards and tasting Wine. PAPA has paid for a chauffeured car so we can enjoy the Wine Trail ! love the MELANCHOLLY pic today we*ll have to commission some for our New House in Essex ! We both love original ART ! Your Poem is very salutary today Many Young People today dont wait to *Tie the Knot* before they *Knot the Tie* ! BRIAN & I are 11,500 miles apart which is the best contraceptive ! Also we have to set a good example as we both work with TEENS in the Church !

Blessings & Joy to You & Yours
Yours as aways ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please add a MONTH to our FUSION : Thanks !

June 10th, 2019 04:10

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Goldfinch60 said:

That takes me back, half past nine was the time I had to get my girlfriend back to her parents - back in the days of my youth.

That artwork is so wonderful Michael. Thank you for posting it.

June 10th, 2019 01:51

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
orchidee said:

Oh lo, good write and pic M.

June 10th, 2019 01:43

NOBLETS OF NONESENSE (1)
Suresh said:

OOPPSS!! I misread your intent. I asked trouble (children) to leave.

Entertaining as always,

June 9th, 2019 13:29

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Suresh said:

OOOUCH!
Either way it\'s only my head that gets hurt, and if it could - leaving the nail laughing.
I do love the colors of the setting sun, as so beautifully painted here.




June 9th, 2019 12:58

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
dusk arising said:

You definitely nailed it M.E.

June 9th, 2019 11:46

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Neville said:

By Jove I think he\'s got it...

no, he\'s definitely got it.... Neville

June 9th, 2019 11:45

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Both sound like DIY to me Michael... Wrrrrw makes me shiver
Pic gives me a warm glow though I like that one... That looks like the end of a GOOD day

June 9th, 2019 05:56

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
Poetic Dan said:

Wow.... Either works but what a sight! If just put tools down and enjoy the view ;)

June 9th, 2019 03:50

From \'A COLLECTION\' (10)
FineB said:

Hello Michael,

Another excellent write.

One must always accomplish our objectives in life. Hitting the nail on the head so to speak.

You are a brilliant artist Michael- I love the picture. When I see the picture I think of Turner.

Keep writing FineB

June 9th, 2019 03:19



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