Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Somewhere
Neville said:
Share & share alike is what I say and often ......... My word Ms. Slimm you have captured that aah\' moment here perfectly and then some ... x
November 19th, 2022 04:13
Neville said:
Share & share alike is what I say and often ......... My word Ms. Slimm you have captured that aah\' moment here perfectly and then some ... x
November 19th, 2022 04:13
Mislaid
SureshG said:
The space that has become a chasm, which at one stage was sandwiched in loves embrace, has created vacuum that sounds of reconciliation can no longer traverse. But of course it takes a poet to paint the scene.
November 18th, 2022 17:13
SureshG said:
The space that has become a chasm, which at one stage was sandwiched in loves embrace, has created vacuum that sounds of reconciliation can no longer traverse. But of course it takes a poet to paint the scene.
November 18th, 2022 17:13
Remembering Them
Neville said:
I know I am late in getting here Fay but could not pass by without leaving my mark .. What a magnificent tribute to those who fell for their country and never again trod upon the soil of their homeland .. such an absolute waste and a crime unimaginable .. x
November 18th, 2022 13:57
Neville said:
I know I am late in getting here Fay but could not pass by without leaving my mark .. What a magnificent tribute to those who fell for their country and never again trod upon the soil of their homeland .. such an absolute waste and a crime unimaginable .. x
November 18th, 2022 13:57
Remembering Them
SureshG said:
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the old rule of war, not the sole son of the family,
so as their blood is shed in the warmth of their chorus, that you have so eloquently poetized,
there is someone back home to fulfill the final rites.
November 18th, 2022 09:30
SureshG said:
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the old rule of war, not the sole son of the family,
so as their blood is shed in the warmth of their chorus, that you have so eloquently poetized,
there is someone back home to fulfill the final rites.
November 18th, 2022 09:30
Blackrock
Neville said:
Black Rock knows best .. Love it but neva mess with it .. the sea that is .. nor it, for that matter, since both are clearly forces far greater than we are .. Quite literally poemed to perfection dear Fay ............ x
November 18th, 2022 04:23
Neville said:
Black Rock knows best .. Love it but neva mess with it .. the sea that is .. nor it, for that matter, since both are clearly forces far greater than we are .. Quite literally poemed to perfection dear Fay ............ x
November 18th, 2022 04:23
Mislaid
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have described a relationship crippled by what seem to be irreconcilable differences. The couple, staring at each other across the great divide, represent so well that inability to see each others side. That relationship worth saving begs silence and another chance. Love this, it\'s a fav!
November 16th, 2022 16:29
Bella Shepard said:
I love the way you have described a relationship crippled by what seem to be irreconcilable differences. The couple, staring at each other across the great divide, represent so well that inability to see each others side. That relationship worth saving begs silence and another chance. Love this, it\'s a fav!
November 16th, 2022 16:29
Mislaid
Doggerel Dave said:
You evoke for me a whole spectrum of silences in a relationship, Fay. I really should thank you for at least some of them, if by no means all.
November 14th, 2022 08:27
Doggerel Dave said:
You evoke for me a whole spectrum of silences in a relationship, Fay. I really should thank you for at least some of them, if by no means all.
November 14th, 2022 08:27
Mislaid
Neil Higgins said:
\"Loves ultimate non-sound got mislaid\" such an emotive line Fay,from a fine,well written piece.
November 14th, 2022 06:42
Neil Higgins said:
\"Loves ultimate non-sound got mislaid\" such an emotive line Fay,from a fine,well written piece.
November 14th, 2022 06:42
Mislaid
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(and what a breath-taking artwork
as accompaniment)
in my next life, let me come back as your pen
and exist in a state of perpetual poetic bliss
lol
November 14th, 2022 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(and what a breath-taking artwork
as accompaniment)
in my next life, let me come back as your pen
and exist in a state of perpetual poetic bliss
lol
November 14th, 2022 05:48
Mislaid
arqios said:
reconstructing silence is something we all have to do at some point and even several times a lifetime and it has been so underrated as well! Thanks Fay, for the uplift and the hope!
November 14th, 2022 05:44
arqios said:
reconstructing silence is something we all have to do at some point and even several times a lifetime and it has been so underrated as well! Thanks Fay, for the uplift and the hope!
November 14th, 2022 05:44
Mislaid
dusk arising said:
Love has an intrinsic value of being worth all the last twirls you can muster.
November 14th, 2022 05:35
dusk arising said:
Love has an intrinsic value of being worth all the last twirls you can muster.
November 14th, 2022 05:35
Mislaid
Caring dove said:
Interesting words fay . Good poem I really like the last few lines .. a dance )
November 14th, 2022 04:48
Caring dove said:
Interesting words fay . Good poem I really like the last few lines .. a dance )
November 14th, 2022 04:48
Remembering Them
SureshG said:
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the old rule of war, not the sole son of the family,
so as their blood is shed in the warmth of their chorus, that you have so eloquently poetized,
there is someone back home to fulfill the final rites.
November 11th, 2022 12:56
SureshG said:
It is the youth that is tapped for its:
Innocence
Fervor
and by the old rule of war, not the sole son of the family,
so as their blood is shed in the warmth of their chorus, that you have so eloquently poetized,
there is someone back home to fulfill the final rites.
November 11th, 2022 12:56
Remembering Them
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Veterans day here always brings death close to mind.
November 11th, 2022 09:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Veterans day here always brings death close to mind.
November 11th, 2022 09:42
Remembering Them
Neil Higgins said:
Beautifully composed Fay.A total waste of youth.Lions led by donkeys always comes to mind.
November 11th, 2022 08:39
Neil Higgins said:
Beautifully composed Fay.A total waste of youth.Lions led by donkeys always comes to mind.
November 11th, 2022 08:39
Remembering Them
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'as going down
behind black hills in yellow dust-ring
the day\'s sun died\'
just so poignant, dear Fay
November 11th, 2022 07:47
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
\'as going down
behind black hills in yellow dust-ring
the day\'s sun died\'
just so poignant, dear Fay
November 11th, 2022 07:47
Remembering Them
arqios said:
It\'s a high price to pay and for far too many a right of passage without return or reprieve.
November 11th, 2022 07:07
arqios said:
It\'s a high price to pay and for far too many a right of passage without return or reprieve.
November 11th, 2022 07:07
The Undisturbed
L. B. Mek said:
\'you\'ve got me packing me bags,\' lol
an idyllic portrait of a rejuvenating, hike
accompanying a most worthy ode,
so wonderfully worded dear Fay
November 11th, 2022 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
\'you\'ve got me packing me bags,\' lol
an idyllic portrait of a rejuvenating, hike
accompanying a most worthy ode,
so wonderfully worded dear Fay
November 11th, 2022 06:22
Blackrock
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, there must be so many forgotten tales
and Sea-swallowed despairing screams
buried within those thundering waves..
only those towering rocks left as witness
till they too fall victim to nature\'s eroding, indifference
(such a thought provoking read, dear Fay)
November 11th, 2022 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
indeed, there must be so many forgotten tales
and Sea-swallowed despairing screams
buried within those thundering waves..
only those towering rocks left as witness
till they too fall victim to nature\'s eroding, indifference
(such a thought provoking read, dear Fay)
November 11th, 2022 06:18
The Undisturbed
arqios said:
Awesome place Fay! I was walking in such a locale some months ago and it was breathtaking. And as it goes, a poem issues soon after, and just as serene.
November 10th, 2022 04:34
arqios said:
Awesome place Fay! I was walking in such a locale some months ago and it was breathtaking. And as it goes, a poem issues soon after, and just as serene.
November 10th, 2022 04:34
The Undisturbed
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature in the woodland is so calming Fay.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature in the woodland is so calming Fay.
Andy
November 10th, 2022 02:55
The Undisturbed
dusk arising said:
long ago myths and legends given to our minds allow poetry to luxuriate when alone in the right places. those stories live-on in your words.
November 9th, 2022 16:15
dusk arising said:
long ago myths and legends given to our minds allow poetry to luxuriate when alone in the right places. those stories live-on in your words.
November 9th, 2022 16:15
The Undisturbed
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, you express so beautifully natures balm upon the soul. I love the pic of the solitary walker who stands and appreciates the forest, both undisturbed. You were truly inspired to write this gem on a poem, and it can\'t help but be a fav for me
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November 9th, 2022 15:43
Bella Shepard said:
Dear Fay, you express so beautifully natures balm upon the soul. I love the pic of the solitary walker who stands and appreciates the forest, both undisturbed. You were truly inspired to write this gem on a poem, and it can\'t help but be a fav for me
1
November 9th, 2022 15:43
The Undisturbed
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine write Fay, and a fine thing to do, to walk in woods.
November 9th, 2022 13:51
orchidee said:
Yes, a fine write Fay, and a fine thing to do, to walk in woods.
November 9th, 2022 13:51
Recharging
SureshG said:
Our unrelenting pursuit of happiness, unfortunately, doesn’t allow us the natural cycle to pause and reflect, otherwise we would take your verses to heart to refresh and recharge.
November 9th, 2022 07:36
SureshG said:
Our unrelenting pursuit of happiness, unfortunately, doesn’t allow us the natural cycle to pause and reflect, otherwise we would take your verses to heart to refresh and recharge.
November 9th, 2022 07:36
Blackrock
SureshG said:
Blackrocks like these have for eons reminded men to stay clear, for even the mightiest of vessels have lost and left many in tears. Your homage to them is well prosed indeed.
November 7th, 2022 17:02
SureshG said:
Blackrocks like these have for eons reminded men to stay clear, for even the mightiest of vessels have lost and left many in tears. Your homage to them is well prosed indeed.
November 7th, 2022 17:02
Blackrock
Bella Shepard said:
Such a tale of woe, told so well dear Fay. We truly are no match for this natural world and all it\'s pitfalls. Whatever makes us think that we are masters. Such a good write!
November 7th, 2022 15:24
Bella Shepard said:
Such a tale of woe, told so well dear Fay. We truly are no match for this natural world and all it\'s pitfalls. Whatever makes us think that we are masters. Such a good write!
November 7th, 2022 15:24
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