Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Back Then
arqios said:
Reminds me of how today’s are the nest eggs 🪺 for beautiful way back when’s! Truly inspiring.
November 25th, 2022 03:22
arqios said:
Reminds me of how today’s are the nest eggs 🪺 for beautiful way back when’s! Truly inspiring.
November 25th, 2022 03:22
Back Then
Doggerel Dave said:
Those last two lines really talked to me.. If only.
Is this your nostalgia phase, Fay? Your poem roars along, as, I have no doubt, did those times for you.
Too tired after my reading to say much more............ other than Thanks.
November 24th, 2022 18:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Those last two lines really talked to me.. If only.
Is this your nostalgia phase, Fay? Your poem roars along, as, I have no doubt, did those times for you.
Too tired after my reading to say much more............ other than Thanks.
November 24th, 2022 18:12
Back Then
Neville said:
Ah\' yes, back in the day .. bless you for taking this fan o yours for a trip down memory lane ........ x
November 24th, 2022 16:57
Neville said:
Ah\' yes, back in the day .. bless you for taking this fan o yours for a trip down memory lane ........ x
November 24th, 2022 16:57
Seeing
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and so true as age comes to us.
Andy
November 23rd, 2022 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and so true as age comes to us.
Andy
November 23rd, 2022 02:19
Seeing
Neil Higgins said:
I don\'t know.I go AWOL return then read your superb poetry Fay.This is a lovely treat 👏
November 22nd, 2022 19:43
Neil Higgins said:
I don\'t know.I go AWOL return then read your superb poetry Fay.This is a lovely treat 👏
November 22nd, 2022 19:43
Seeing
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this poem aloud, with all the emotion that reverberates within. You have managed to put into words the indescribable feeling of life\'s true measure. The awakening of the soul. Thank you dear friend for this piece of perfection.
November 22nd, 2022 17:37
Bella Shepard said:
I had to read this poem aloud, with all the emotion that reverberates within. You have managed to put into words the indescribable feeling of life\'s true measure. The awakening of the soul. Thank you dear friend for this piece of perfection.
November 22nd, 2022 17:37
Seeing
Doggerel Dave said:
What is left to say after Neville took his turn?
In addition I will add, if and then when I wake up tomorrow I\'m going to relish all the textures and happenings which are thrown at me.
And its textures, Fay, you fill your poetry with. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2022 07:43
Doggerel Dave said:
What is left to say after Neville took his turn?
In addition I will add, if and then when I wake up tomorrow I\'m going to relish all the textures and happenings which are thrown at me.
And its textures, Fay, you fill your poetry with. Thank you.
November 22nd, 2022 07:43
Seeing
dusk arising said:
life as it should be lived is a beauty in itself..
..but drugs and mind altering substances cloud its appreciation... though glimpses are still beautiful
thank you for a glimpse today
November 22nd, 2022 07:27
dusk arising said:
life as it should be lived is a beauty in itself..
..but drugs and mind altering substances cloud its appreciation... though glimpses are still beautiful
thank you for a glimpse today
November 22nd, 2022 07:27
Seeing
Neville said:
This is a remarkable poem so well crafted by the great mistress of words, our very own Fay Slimm .. Long admired by me and so many others ..
Characteristically written in such a way that those of us who stop by to ponder and gawp can\'t help but appreciate her perception and prowess with a pen ..
Indeed, those of us who may have a few years under our belts will also no doubt understand completely where she is coming from today and empathise accordingly .. x
Neville
November 22nd, 2022 06:25
Neville said:
This is a remarkable poem so well crafted by the great mistress of words, our very own Fay Slimm .. Long admired by me and so many others ..
Characteristically written in such a way that those of us who stop by to ponder and gawp can\'t help but appreciate her perception and prowess with a pen ..
Indeed, those of us who may have a few years under our belts will also no doubt understand completely where she is coming from today and empathise accordingly .. x
Neville
November 22nd, 2022 06:25
Kinship
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and those last two line are so true in this day and age.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay and those last two line are so true in this day and age.
Andy
November 22nd, 2022 02:44
Kinship
Neville said:
Dear mistress F you have only just gone and done it again ma\'am .. penned to poetic perfection & yes .. absolutely uncanny ....... Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:59
Neville said:
Dear mistress F you have only just gone and done it again ma\'am .. penned to poetic perfection & yes .. absolutely uncanny ....... Neville
November 21st, 2022 13:59
Kinship
arqios said:
kinship is a kind of kingship
wherein all that in one\'s domain
all things and all hearts display
an harmony and conviviality
that would never lead astray
November 21st, 2022 08:32
arqios said:
kinship is a kind of kingship
wherein all that in one\'s domain
all things and all hearts display
an harmony and conviviality
that would never lead astray
November 21st, 2022 08:32
Kinship
Doggerel Dave said:
Fay, \"those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer\" - First there\'s Andy, then Neville and finally adorning their memories, you. And in this you form a bonded trio today.
November 21st, 2022 07:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Fay, \"those lazy, hazy, crazy days of summer\" - First there\'s Andy, then Neville and finally adorning their memories, you. And in this you form a bonded trio today.
November 21st, 2022 07:36
Kinship
L. B. Mek said:
\'Exchanged wet whispers
in tide-washed caves.
We stole carefree hours
with no guilt\'
(this, that rarity of sky on earth
synergy
destined to path existence side by side
even if only for a while
smiles as gifts, distance as punishment
this kinship we treasure, once discovered
can\'t fathom, a time before
or a time, without
we love before our heart\'s find out
pulsing sensations, familiarity
in each breath of shared intimacy
knowing each other better
than we do our family
within a second of greeting each other
this, that kinship fantasy
we all spire for in reality
and dream of consistently...)
just Brilliant, dear Fay
thank you!
for inspiring me yet again
November 21st, 2022 06:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Exchanged wet whispers
in tide-washed caves.
We stole carefree hours
with no guilt\'
(this, that rarity of sky on earth
synergy
destined to path existence side by side
even if only for a while
smiles as gifts, distance as punishment
this kinship we treasure, once discovered
can\'t fathom, a time before
or a time, without
we love before our heart\'s find out
pulsing sensations, familiarity
in each breath of shared intimacy
knowing each other better
than we do our family
within a second of greeting each other
this, that kinship fantasy
we all spire for in reality
and dream of consistently...)
just Brilliant, dear Fay
thank you!
for inspiring me yet again
November 21st, 2022 06:00
Somewhere
L. B. Mek said:
as-if your words plucked the best bits
of my memories, then distilled it all
in poetic eloquence
a great write dear Fay, so relatable
November 21st, 2022 03:57
L. B. Mek said:
as-if your words plucked the best bits
of my memories, then distilled it all
in poetic eloquence
a great write dear Fay, so relatable
November 21st, 2022 03:57
Intake
L. B. Mek said:
really like the last line dear Fay
brings into context
the overwhelming experience of waiting, for
then witnessing the gradual sunset/sunrise
experience
before it actually begins, like
a behind the scenes of nature\'s preshow highlights..
yet another memorably vivid read, thank you!
November 21st, 2022 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
really like the last line dear Fay
brings into context
the overwhelming experience of waiting, for
then witnessing the gradual sunset/sunrise
experience
before it actually begins, like
a behind the scenes of nature\'s preshow highlights..
yet another memorably vivid read, thank you!
November 21st, 2022 03:54
Intake
Neville said:
Splendid in both form and content .. even dawn herself would blush with pride ........................ Neville x
November 20th, 2022 13:17
Neville said:
Splendid in both form and content .. even dawn herself would blush with pride ........................ Neville x
November 20th, 2022 13:17
Intake
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing Fay especially like these lines
oceans of jewelled diamanté darting
to coat each breaker in glitter
November 20th, 2022 05:14
Caring dove said:
Lovely writing Fay especially like these lines
oceans of jewelled diamanté darting
to coat each breaker in glitter
November 20th, 2022 05:14
Intake
arqios said:
The dawn watch! A wonderful experience in moderation filled with memory and lasting promise, the power of the day and the cycling of time. Glad to be here at this weekend\'s airing.
November 20th, 2022 04:34
arqios said:
The dawn watch! A wonderful experience in moderation filled with memory and lasting promise, the power of the day and the cycling of time. Glad to be here at this weekend\'s airing.
November 20th, 2022 04:34
Somewhere
arqios said:
That is a beauty and chemistry shared between perfectly matched pairs. And the sharing thereof between the two, oasis upon oasis of their rousing belief.
November 19th, 2022 04:22
arqios said:
That is a beauty and chemistry shared between perfectly matched pairs. And the sharing thereof between the two, oasis upon oasis of their rousing belief.
November 19th, 2022 04:22
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