Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Sad Reminders
Doggerel Dave said:
If it\'s not tin it was/is gold and sundry other of today\'s precious metals - in their mining, refining, manufacture, one and all, world wide even today.
Beautifully descriptive and full of compassion, Fay. Thank you.
December 12th, 2022 17:14
Doggerel Dave said:
If it\'s not tin it was/is gold and sundry other of today\'s precious metals - in their mining, refining, manufacture, one and all, world wide even today.
Beautifully descriptive and full of compassion, Fay. Thank you.
December 12th, 2022 17:14
Sad Reminders
Neville said:
a sad & telling reminder of those days of yore when young lads grew old in the dark .. if indeed they grew old at all ....... penned perfectly Fay x
December 12th, 2022 08:46
Neville said:
a sad & telling reminder of those days of yore when young lads grew old in the dark .. if indeed they grew old at all ....... penned perfectly Fay x
December 12th, 2022 08:46
Less Trodden
Bella Shepard said:
I love this poem, and the third stanza leaves me breathless. Rereading aloud, felt I had to speak it in a rush because it is so invigorating. And the graphic that accompanies this gem is priceless. This is such a fav!
December 11th, 2022 13:40
Bella Shepard said:
I love this poem, and the third stanza leaves me breathless. Rereading aloud, felt I had to speak it in a rush because it is so invigorating. And the graphic that accompanies this gem is priceless. This is such a fav!
December 11th, 2022 13:40
Less Trodden
Goldfinch60 said:
May those paths less trodden take us to the wonders in our lives Fay.
Andy
December 10th, 2022 02:56
Goldfinch60 said:
May those paths less trodden take us to the wonders in our lives Fay.
Andy
December 10th, 2022 02:56
Less Trodden
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fay – At first read (usually fairly superficial) methought this could be a gentle crit of formalised structure… Second read your advocacy of fresh, outside the accepted norms, ideas shone through. (Should I, as the result of some mental aberration, have completely misinterpreted you….. do let me know, and we can have a brawl…. Conduct a civilized discussion, I mean…🙂)
December 9th, 2022 17:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fay – At first read (usually fairly superficial) methought this could be a gentle crit of formalised structure… Second read your advocacy of fresh, outside the accepted norms, ideas shone through. (Should I, as the result of some mental aberration, have completely misinterpreted you….. do let me know, and we can have a brawl…. Conduct a civilized discussion, I mean…🙂)
December 9th, 2022 17:37
Less Trodden
Neville said:
this is a FAB poem Fay & I think it is a lot more cleverer than sum might at first imagine ......... tis terribly good ma\'am .............. Neville x
December 9th, 2022 08:04
Neville said:
this is a FAB poem Fay & I think it is a lot more cleverer than sum might at first imagine ......... tis terribly good ma\'am .............. Neville x
December 9th, 2022 08:04
Less Trodden
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I did not get the hang of it. I went down a new path and fell in a bog! lol.
December 9th, 2022 07:01
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I did not get the hang of it. I went down a new path and fell in a bog! lol.
December 9th, 2022 07:01
Less Trodden
L. B. Mek said:
\'fly
with versing profound,
think
more about quirky and less
around the accepted. .
Keeping an ear close
to authentic\'..
Brilliant!
how I cherish your Poetry dear Fay
and try to heed your wise words
at every gifted opportunity
December 9th, 2022 06:18
L. B. Mek said:
\'fly
with versing profound,
think
more about quirky and less
around the accepted. .
Keeping an ear close
to authentic\'..
Brilliant!
how I cherish your Poetry dear Fay
and try to heed your wise words
at every gifted opportunity
December 9th, 2022 06:18
Changes
Doggerel Dave said:
A meditative moving word picture of smooth trouble free change, Fay.
December 9th, 2022 01:31
Doggerel Dave said:
A meditative moving word picture of smooth trouble free change, Fay.
December 9th, 2022 01:31
Changes
Neville said:
the word magical springs to mind & then leaves me speechless .. x
December 9th, 2022 00:41
Neville said:
the word magical springs to mind & then leaves me speechless .. x
December 9th, 2022 00:41
Changes
L. B. Mek said:
I couldn\'t help but read a playful
take
on those morning-after scenes
when
nerves make things that much more
spine-tinglingly awkward, to experience
and you\'re just glad you have the weather
to talk about...
(\'\'...erm
still kinda dark, moon\'s still out\'\'
\'\'oh yeah?\'\'
\'\'yeah - kinda
so erm, sleep well...\'?\')
my fingers and toes want to curl just remembering it
no idea how we survive life\'s awkward moments
lol
sorry dear Fay
I read these in a playful mood
but as-ever
beautifully worded:
\'She bleeds grey into Sol\'s late complexion
by brooming out heat with regal
drift\'
that Moonlight silvery grace
arriving early
to keep winter\'s bleakness
at bay
December 5th, 2022 06:29
L. B. Mek said:
I couldn\'t help but read a playful
take
on those morning-after scenes
when
nerves make things that much more
spine-tinglingly awkward, to experience
and you\'re just glad you have the weather
to talk about...
(\'\'...erm
still kinda dark, moon\'s still out\'\'
\'\'oh yeah?\'\'
\'\'yeah - kinda
so erm, sleep well...\'?\')
my fingers and toes want to curl just remembering it
no idea how we survive life\'s awkward moments
lol
sorry dear Fay
I read these in a playful mood
but as-ever
beautifully worded:
\'She bleeds grey into Sol\'s late complexion
by brooming out heat with regal
drift\'
that Moonlight silvery grace
arriving early
to keep winter\'s bleakness
at bay
December 5th, 2022 06:29
Changes
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
i was in good time - in June I said \'Only 6 months to Christmas\'.
And now \'only about 17 more days to go and it gets lighter again!\'. Darkness does not seem so gloomy saying it that way.
December 4th, 2022 08:00
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
i was in good time - in June I said \'Only 6 months to Christmas\'.
And now \'only about 17 more days to go and it gets lighter again!\'. Darkness does not seem so gloomy saying it that way.
December 4th, 2022 08:00
Covert
Neville said:
this is write up my street Fay .. just my poetic cuppa tea my friend .. x
December 3rd, 2022 02:47
Neville said:
this is write up my street Fay .. just my poetic cuppa tea my friend .. x
December 3rd, 2022 02:47
Covert
Neil Higgins said:
Me again.
\"Night\'s satin sheet rises\"
Not going to \"expand\" on that Fay,but what a wonderful love poem.Oozing with well,love 🌹
December 2nd, 2022 16:21
Neil Higgins said:
Me again.
\"Night\'s satin sheet rises\"
Not going to \"expand\" on that Fay,but what a wonderful love poem.Oozing with well,love 🌹
December 2nd, 2022 16:21
Covert
Bella Shepard said:
The dark of night adds an alluring dimension to passions that daylight never seems to hold. Such an appropriate title and so beautifully phrased. A real gem dear friend.
December 2nd, 2022 15:16
Bella Shepard said:
The dark of night adds an alluring dimension to passions that daylight never seems to hold. Such an appropriate title and so beautifully phrased. A real gem dear friend.
December 2nd, 2022 15:16
Covert
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Another Masterpiece Fay!
December 2nd, 2022 12:11
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Another Masterpiece Fay!
December 2nd, 2022 12:11
Covert
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a twist, Fay. But both must know...otherwise....
Reminds me of something I wish........
December 2nd, 2022 08:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Such a twist, Fay. But both must know...otherwise....
Reminds me of something I wish........
December 2nd, 2022 08:28
Covert
dusk arising said:
wanting more when even the kisses are illegal is treading on dangerous ground
December 2nd, 2022 06:21
dusk arising said:
wanting more when even the kisses are illegal is treading on dangerous ground
December 2nd, 2022 06:21
Covert
arqios said:
Kind of like role playing but with a more romantic bent. Reminds me of an Audrey Hepburn movie \"Paris When It Sizzles.\"
December 2nd, 2022 06:08
arqios said:
Kind of like role playing but with a more romantic bent. Reminds me of an Audrey Hepburn movie \"Paris When It Sizzles.\"
December 2nd, 2022 06:08
Covert
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Fido won\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. lol
December 2nd, 2022 05:24
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Fido won\'t let me have any \'ardour\'. lol
December 2nd, 2022 05:24
Covert
L. B. Mek said:
sizzling sensuality, and yet
I sense the brevity waters you ink upon
I may have to come back to read again on Monday, dear Fay
dive a little deeper
oh and just gorgeously worded
what a reading treat
December 2nd, 2022 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
sizzling sensuality, and yet
I sense the brevity waters you ink upon
I may have to come back to read again on Monday, dear Fay
dive a little deeper
oh and just gorgeously worded
what a reading treat
December 2nd, 2022 05:00
Emerging December.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sun\'s smut-red lips\'
that\'s gonna be ringin in me head all weekend, lol
thank you! dear Fay
great skill
December 2nd, 2022 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'Sun\'s smut-red lips\'
that\'s gonna be ringin in me head all weekend, lol
thank you! dear Fay
great skill
December 2nd, 2022 04:55
Emerging December.
Neil Higgins said:
\"Suns smut red lips\" 😁 You knew I would pick up on that didn\'t you Fay.A wonderful poem 👏
December 1st, 2022 17:49
Neil Higgins said:
\"Suns smut red lips\" 😁 You knew I would pick up on that didn\'t you Fay.A wonderful poem 👏
December 1st, 2022 17:49
Emerging December.
MendedFences27 said:
December - We have 5 grandkids and 1 daughter-in-law with December birthdays + Christmas. So, a lot of time spent shopping and the days keep getting shorter (daylightwise}.
But hey, it\'s a truly festive time and our tradition is what we call \"Scrooge Night,\" a family gathering and gift exchange. Needless to say it\'s a very BIG month to us. Loved your poem. It is all truth that you speak _ Phil A.
December 1st, 2022 13:13
MendedFences27 said:
December - We have 5 grandkids and 1 daughter-in-law with December birthdays + Christmas. So, a lot of time spent shopping and the days keep getting shorter (daylightwise}.
But hey, it\'s a truly festive time and our tradition is what we call \"Scrooge Night,\" a family gathering and gift exchange. Needless to say it\'s a very BIG month to us. Loved your poem. It is all truth that you speak _ Phil A.
December 1st, 2022 13:13
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