Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Doom\'s Omen
L. B. Mek said:
\'but hunts now in crumbling walls
where once stood candelabra-lit halls\'
how we aspire to perfect that mansion
knowing, inevitably it will eventually
become just another decrepit ruin
of once immovable ambition
Time-wilted into yet another
Nature reclaimed hunting grounds
for those winged masters
to once more, reign supreme!
(how I missed your Genius, dear Fay
thank you!)
October 21st, 2022 03:59
L. B. Mek said:
\'but hunts now in crumbling walls
where once stood candelabra-lit halls\'
how we aspire to perfect that mansion
knowing, inevitably it will eventually
become just another decrepit ruin
of once immovable ambition
Time-wilted into yet another
Nature reclaimed hunting grounds
for those winged masters
to once more, reign supreme!
(how I missed your Genius, dear Fay
thank you!)
October 21st, 2022 03:59
Doom\'s Omen
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve caught in poetic form the image I have of owls buried in my mind, Fay.
October 21st, 2022 03:13
Doggerel Dave said:
You\'ve caught in poetic form the image I have of owls buried in my mind, Fay.
October 21st, 2022 03:13
Renewal
arqios said:
That\'s the most splendid way to face whatever approaches us! What an uplifting poem. Thanks Fay.
October 21st, 2022 00:37
arqios said:
That\'s the most splendid way to face whatever approaches us! What an uplifting poem. Thanks Fay.
October 21st, 2022 00:37
Renewal
orchidee said:
I will go and beat an egg, as Neville suggests, as I can\'t beat fine poems such as these!
October 20th, 2022 12:28
orchidee said:
I will go and beat an egg, as Neville suggests, as I can\'t beat fine poems such as these!
October 20th, 2022 12:28
Renewal
dusk arising said:
What else could ageing be, other than the ready relish upon the tongue of yesterdays youth and vigour?
October 20th, 2022 10:13
dusk arising said:
What else could ageing be, other than the ready relish upon the tongue of yesterdays youth and vigour?
October 20th, 2022 10:13
Renewal
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a bit of timeless poetry .. x
October 20th, 2022 10:04
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a bit of timeless poetry .. x
October 20th, 2022 10:04
Siblings
arqios said:
This speaks eloquently to a member of a rather large brood of eight, it was the worst of times and the best of times as well. Happy to walk on a sentimental journey of a brick road that at one time was kinda yellow. Thanks Fay!
October 20th, 2022 01:06
arqios said:
This speaks eloquently to a member of a rather large brood of eight, it was the worst of times and the best of times as well. Happy to walk on a sentimental journey of a brick road that at one time was kinda yellow. Thanks Fay!
October 20th, 2022 01:06
Siblings
Neville said:
this is truth personified in a poem and otherwise pen perfect :) x
October 19th, 2022 04:36
Neville said:
this is truth personified in a poem and otherwise pen perfect :) x
October 19th, 2022 04:36
Artful
arqios said:
Made me think of Dickensian Dodger. And then the clarifying stanza by stanza image of spiderwebs bring the interpretative allusion full circle. Some terrifying things are of such a beauty to behold that it inspires respect and beautiful poetry. Thanks Fay!
October 18th, 2022 07:53
arqios said:
Made me think of Dickensian Dodger. And then the clarifying stanza by stanza image of spiderwebs bring the interpretative allusion full circle. Some terrifying things are of such a beauty to behold that it inspires respect and beautiful poetry. Thanks Fay!
October 18th, 2022 07:53
Artful
dusk arising said:
Strange how most of us would admit therese creatures make our skin crawl yet their web creations we admire as things of treasure. Beauty and the beast made real.
October 18th, 2022 06:30
dusk arising said:
Strange how most of us would admit therese creatures make our skin crawl yet their web creations we admire as things of treasure. Beauty and the beast made real.
October 18th, 2022 06:30
Artful
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Two \'likes\' have appeared at end of your poem!
A blip on my PC maybe - or that ego trip of mine, of \'liking\' my own poems? Do I?! lol.
October 18th, 2022 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Two \'likes\' have appeared at end of your poem!
A blip on my PC maybe - or that ego trip of mine, of \'liking\' my own poems? Do I?! lol.
October 18th, 2022 01:55
Artful
Neville said:
Hey Fay .. you got that all sewed up nicely ... in fact, very nicely indeed x
Neville :)
October 17th, 2022 14:30
Neville said:
Hey Fay .. you got that all sewed up nicely ... in fact, very nicely indeed x
Neville :)
October 17th, 2022 14:30
Seize and See.
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present and one should live in it. Well done.
October 17th, 2022 11:47
sorenbarrett said:
Carpe diem! Well expressed. I too believe that there only is the present and one should live in it. Well done.
October 17th, 2022 11:47
Seize and See.
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this Fay, thanks for your unending wisdom and sagacity. This feels like a warm embrace with the present. I feel like oftentimes we tend to dread the future, especially the mysterious afterlife, but I think living in the \"now\" brings so much more peace. Glorious poem!
October 17th, 2022 08:24
Rocky Lagou said:
I love this Fay, thanks for your unending wisdom and sagacity. This feels like a warm embrace with the present. I feel like oftentimes we tend to dread the future, especially the mysterious afterlife, but I think living in the \"now\" brings so much more peace. Glorious poem!
October 17th, 2022 08:24
Seize and See.
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem, Fay. And as a solid reinforcement for my attempted focus on the here and now, it is strong enough to need no additional supplement...... for now!
October 16th, 2022 18:17
Doggerel Dave said:
A little gem, Fay. And as a solid reinforcement for my attempted focus on the here and now, it is strong enough to need no additional supplement...... for now!
October 16th, 2022 18:17
Seize and See.
Neville said:
Powerful poetry indeed Fay .. Can I take two big slices & a smaller one for Ron ... that\'s not a friend or relative by the way, I mean later Ron ..... :) x
October 16th, 2022 12:53
Neville said:
Powerful poetry indeed Fay .. Can I take two big slices & a smaller one for Ron ... that\'s not a friend or relative by the way, I mean later Ron ..... :) x
October 16th, 2022 12:53
Seize and See.
orchidee said:
\'Now\' I say it\'s a good write. Erm, not this moment \'now\'. The moment 5 seconds ago when I first typed \'now\'.
And now I\'m a confused laddie! lol.
October 16th, 2022 11:33
orchidee said:
\'Now\' I say it\'s a good write. Erm, not this moment \'now\'. The moment 5 seconds ago when I first typed \'now\'.
And now I\'m a confused laddie! lol.
October 16th, 2022 11:33
Voiceless
Neville said:
sometimes your insight & words leave me speechless x
October 13th, 2022 07:39
Neville said:
sometimes your insight & words leave me speechless x
October 13th, 2022 07:39
Voiceless
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true in your wonderful words Fay.
Andy
October 13th, 2022 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That last line is so true in your wonderful words Fay.
Andy
October 13th, 2022 00:32
Voiceless
Paul Bell said:
Yes, love can be silent, and most of the time probably is. Sometimes words just get in the way of a cheery wave.
October 12th, 2022 04:29
Paul Bell said:
Yes, love can be silent, and most of the time probably is. Sometimes words just get in the way of a cheery wave.
October 12th, 2022 04:29
Voiceless
orchidee said:
A good....{........................}.
I started to comment, but me comment shall be voiceless! Notice the silence there in brackets. I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
True though. Sometimes we feel we HAVE TO or MUST say something. It can sort of interfere with, or disrupt the silence at times.
October 12th, 2022 04:13
orchidee said:
A good....{........................}.
I started to comment, but me comment shall be voiceless! Notice the silence there in brackets. I talk some rubbish sometimes! lol.
True though. Sometimes we feel we HAVE TO or MUST say something. It can sort of interfere with, or disrupt the silence at times.
October 12th, 2022 04:13
Voiceless
arqios said:
A muted world should reveal un-muted feelings and vibes. It would feel different but they exist nonetheless. Profound thoughts in verse. Thanks Fay!
October 12th, 2022 04:03
arqios said:
A muted world should reveal un-muted feelings and vibes. It would feel different but they exist nonetheless. Profound thoughts in verse. Thanks Fay!
October 12th, 2022 04:03
Approach
arqios said:
When far-off disappears into proximity, that is bliss! Thanks Fay
October 12th, 2022 01:31
arqios said:
When far-off disappears into proximity, that is bliss! Thanks Fay
October 12th, 2022 01:31
Approach
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Feels so close I could actually touch your poem :) I like the first question!
October 11th, 2022 17:53
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Feels so close I could actually touch your poem :) I like the first question!
October 11th, 2022 17:53
Approach
Neville said:
Here you kick off with a question that has intrigued me for ever .. and then you sum it all up in eight words and two lines at the end ... magic Fay :) x
October 11th, 2022 10:25
Neville said:
Here you kick off with a question that has intrigued me for ever .. and then you sum it all up in eight words and two lines at the end ... magic Fay :) x
October 11th, 2022 10:25
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