Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Blackrock
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have got that just about right, Fay - \" BlackRock is the world\'s largest asset manager, with US$10 trillion in assets under management as of January 2022\" .... That should be enough of a dire warning, alone....
However, with a modest amount of effort, I could imagine that it was conceivable that you were referring to something else entirely, and the more I thought about it, but above all read it rich fresh storm tossed images formed....
November 5th, 2022 08:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I think you have got that just about right, Fay - \" BlackRock is the world\'s largest asset manager, with US$10 trillion in assets under management as of January 2022\" .... That should be enough of a dire warning, alone....
However, with a modest amount of effort, I could imagine that it was conceivable that you were referring to something else entirely, and the more I thought about it, but above all read it rich fresh storm tossed images formed....
November 5th, 2022 08:21
Blackrock
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
A Carry On film had a \'hurricane season\', and a \'monsoon season\'. They named the latter something swoony for me! lol.
November 5th, 2022 03:55
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
A Carry On film had a \'hurricane season\', and a \'monsoon season\'. They named the latter something swoony for me! lol.
November 5th, 2022 03:55
Recharging
L. B. Mek said:
\'the quiet withdrawal, the root refuel\'
simply Beautiful!
November 4th, 2022 03:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'the quiet withdrawal, the root refuel\'
simply Beautiful!
November 4th, 2022 03:39
Recharging
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we must all recharge in the glory of Autumn Fay.
Andy
November 2nd, 2022 01:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes we must all recharge in the glory of Autumn Fay.
Andy
November 2nd, 2022 01:36
Recharging
arqios said:
Ah yes! Recharging is so much more vibrant than hibernating!
November 2nd, 2022 00:28
arqios said:
Ah yes! Recharging is so much more vibrant than hibernating!
November 2nd, 2022 00:28
Look At Me
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I am caught up in a wonderful swirl of color, texture, such tangible imagery that it feels dreamlike. You indeed do justice to that beautiful flower pictured, more than justice, you immortalize it. Beautiful write dear Fay, and such a fav!
November 1st, 2022 10:41
Bella Shepard said:
As I read I am caught up in a wonderful swirl of color, texture, such tangible imagery that it feels dreamlike. You indeed do justice to that beautiful flower pictured, more than justice, you immortalize it. Beautiful write dear Fay, and such a fav!
November 1st, 2022 10:41
Recharging
Ninkasi said:
What summing up of the advent of Nature and its extravaganza in a lulling way . Great usage of metaphors Fay!
November 1st, 2022 04:38
Ninkasi said:
What summing up of the advent of Nature and its extravaganza in a lulling way . Great usage of metaphors Fay!
November 1st, 2022 04:38
Look At Me
Caring dove said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay , and interesting words .. lovely to read this . Nature can be so nice )
October 31st, 2022 10:43
Caring dove said:
This is a beautiful poem Fay , and interesting words .. lovely to read this . Nature can be so nice )
October 31st, 2022 10:43
Look At Me
orchidee said:
I\'m looking at this fine pic and poem - and reading it!
October 31st, 2022 09:29
orchidee said:
I\'m looking at this fine pic and poem - and reading it!
October 31st, 2022 09:29
Look At Me
Neville said:
this one\'s a keeper for sure .. she looks just like the one pressed many many years ago between the pages of our family bible .. still retaining her mauve overcoat & yellow petticoats ........ Neville x
October 31st, 2022 08:27
Neville said:
this one\'s a keeper for sure .. she looks just like the one pressed many many years ago between the pages of our family bible .. still retaining her mauve overcoat & yellow petticoats ........ Neville x
October 31st, 2022 08:27
Look At Me
Doggerel Dave said:
Why do botanical catalogues resort to such dry technical terminology when they could utilise your poetry instead, Fay?
And I haven\'t ignored the last five lines....
October 31st, 2022 08:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Why do botanical catalogues resort to such dry technical terminology when they could utilise your poetry instead, Fay?
And I haven\'t ignored the last five lines....
October 31st, 2022 08:18
Look At Me
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wear a mauve overcoat
of plushest velvet, woven
to cope with English weather.\'
that\'s just Nature\'s beauty
distilled succinctly vivid
in precision poetry
another memorable love letter, to Nature
you\'ve penned dear Fay
thank you!
October 31st, 2022 08:10
L. B. Mek said:
\'I wear a mauve overcoat
of plushest velvet, woven
to cope with English weather.\'
that\'s just Nature\'s beauty
distilled succinctly vivid
in precision poetry
another memorable love letter, to Nature
you\'ve penned dear Fay
thank you!
October 31st, 2022 08:10
Matched
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is with us now Fay, good true words.
Andy
October 31st, 2022 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
That feeling is with us now Fay, good true words.
Andy
October 31st, 2022 02:49
Matched
Bella Shepard said:
An incredible graphic to accompany this soul consuming poem dear Fay. Such bliss is etched indelibly in the heart and mind. You make it tangible and beautiful with your amazing verse.
October 30th, 2022 14:23
Bella Shepard said:
An incredible graphic to accompany this soul consuming poem dear Fay. Such bliss is etched indelibly in the heart and mind. You make it tangible and beautiful with your amazing verse.
October 30th, 2022 14:23
Matched
Neville said:
it feels so good to know you\'re not alone, doesn\'t it ........ lovely words indeed Fay ............... x Neville :)
October 30th, 2022 06:44
Neville said:
it feels so good to know you\'re not alone, doesn\'t it ........ lovely words indeed Fay ............... x Neville :)
October 30th, 2022 06:44
Caught
Goldfinch60 said:
Vivid words Fay on a tragedy that I have luckily never witnessed.
Andy
October 30th, 2022 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Vivid words Fay on a tragedy that I have luckily never witnessed.
Andy
October 30th, 2022 02:42
Caught
Bella Shepard said:
We have wildfires burning in 8 states right now due to drought, and it\'s only getting worse. The scenes of destruction are devastating. Your words capture the total consumption of flora, fauna and human life by insatiable fire. A great write dear Fay.
October 29th, 2022 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
We have wildfires burning in 8 states right now due to drought, and it\'s only getting worse. The scenes of destruction are devastating. Your words capture the total consumption of flora, fauna and human life by insatiable fire. A great write dear Fay.
October 29th, 2022 14:14
Caught
orchidee said:
A dramatic write Fay.
I\'m busy deciding if I should meet some of \'Neville\'s women\'. I might swoon! lol.
October 29th, 2022 11:26
orchidee said:
A dramatic write Fay.
I\'m busy deciding if I should meet some of \'Neville\'s women\'. I might swoon! lol.
October 29th, 2022 11:26
Caught
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanking you nudely - no I meant truly - - oh yes Nev- - fire out of control in forested areas creates fear in any who witness its sheer devastation. Glad you approve of the style I felt guided to use.............x
October 29th, 2022 09:36
Fay Slimm. said:
Thanking you nudely - no I meant truly - - oh yes Nev- - fire out of control in forested areas creates fear in any who witness its sheer devastation. Glad you approve of the style I felt guided to use.............x
October 29th, 2022 09:36
Caught
Neville said:
in all my years, I have personally witnessed two of these & on both occasions from my friends villa in La Spezia Italy overlooking the bay where Shelley drowned .. five years apart but will never forget the heat & the hunger of them .. mighty well poemed Fay ............. Neville x
October 29th, 2022 08:52
Neville said:
in all my years, I have personally witnessed two of these & on both occasions from my friends villa in La Spezia Italy overlooking the bay where Shelley drowned .. five years apart but will never forget the heat & the hunger of them .. mighty well poemed Fay ............. Neville x
October 29th, 2022 08:52
Beached
Neville said:
I do the very same thing .. a lovely well-rounded poem too dear Fay x
October 29th, 2022 03:52
Neville said:
I do the very same thing .. a lovely well-rounded poem too dear Fay x
October 29th, 2022 03:52
Beached
arqios said:
A family tradition whenever by the shore, to pick up a couple or so of these beauties! TFS Faye.
October 29th, 2022 02:47
arqios said:
A family tradition whenever by the shore, to pick up a couple or so of these beauties! TFS Faye.
October 29th, 2022 02:47
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