Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Thinnest Divide
Neville said:
there is summat more than just fishy going on here ......... yet only a fool would fail to catch on and miss the poetry that both underpins and likewise upholds this particular page ..... Neville x
September 23rd, 2022 02:04
Neville said:
there is summat more than just fishy going on here ......... yet only a fool would fail to catch on and miss the poetry that both underpins and likewise upholds this particular page ..... Neville x
September 23rd, 2022 02:04
Night-Stained
Neville said:
one simply has to look up to at the write moment to appreciate the truth you have pinned down here .......... x
September 22nd, 2022 02:05
Neville said:
one simply has to look up to at the write moment to appreciate the truth you have pinned down here .......... x
September 22nd, 2022 02:05
Thinnest Divide
Bella Shepard said:
The picture is so touching, that wondering little fish. But there is also such wonder on our side, or there should be. What a simple, but wonderful experience you had. Thank you for sharing.
September 20th, 2022 10:37
Bella Shepard said:
The picture is so touching, that wondering little fish. But there is also such wonder on our side, or there should be. What a simple, but wonderful experience you had. Thank you for sharing.
September 20th, 2022 10:37
Thinnest Divide
Doggerel Dave said:
Fish visualised from your words in full colour and movement, Fay.
Very much enjoyed
September 19th, 2022 09:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Fish visualised from your words in full colour and movement, Fay.
Very much enjoyed
September 19th, 2022 09:13
Thinnest Divide
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay 🙂I really liked reading your words .. nice to be inspired by this picture
September 19th, 2022 07:51
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely writing Fay 🙂I really liked reading your words .. nice to be inspired by this picture
September 19th, 2022 07:51
Night-Stained
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagery is priceless! A sumptuous, mouthwatering meal, however I\'ll pass on the soured milk. I think I know what we\'ll be having for supper, great menu.
September 15th, 2022 11:23
Bella Shepard said:
Your imagery is priceless! A sumptuous, mouthwatering meal, however I\'ll pass on the soured milk. I think I know what we\'ll be having for supper, great menu.
September 15th, 2022 11:23
Night-Stained
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, can I come to tea without the soured milk.
Andy
September 15th, 2022 01:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, can I come to tea without the soured milk.
Andy
September 15th, 2022 01:52
Night-Stained
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I am now wanting to go to the kitchen and cook something. Hi Fay - WriteBeLight now PoetVids.
September 14th, 2022 17:31
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
I am now wanting to go to the kitchen and cook something. Hi Fay - WriteBeLight now PoetVids.
September 14th, 2022 17:31
Night-Stained
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
amazing words Fay
amazing picture
Thank you
September 14th, 2022 11:38
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
amazing words Fay
amazing picture
Thank you
September 14th, 2022 11:38
Abating
Neville said:
I note that there are some lines herein that will without doubt now be as firmly imprinted upon my memory as Daphne du Maurier\'s mackerel skies have been imprinted .. I just love \'Abating\' .. x
September 9th, 2022 04:37
Neville said:
I note that there are some lines herein that will without doubt now be as firmly imprinted upon my memory as Daphne du Maurier\'s mackerel skies have been imprinted .. I just love \'Abating\' .. x
September 9th, 2022 04:37
Abating
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely gentle words fay 🙂 I liked reading your poem
September 8th, 2022 02:34
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Lovely gentle words fay 🙂 I liked reading your poem
September 8th, 2022 02:34
Abating
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful romantic words Fay, walking alone with the beach and with Nature can be so uplifting.
Andy
September 8th, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful romantic words Fay, walking alone with the beach and with Nature can be so uplifting.
Andy
September 8th, 2022 00:44
Abating
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful picture to accompany this beautiful poem. It evokes a dreamscape of precious memories, lingering in wakefulness. Lovely write dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 15:15
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful picture to accompany this beautiful poem. It evokes a dreamscape of precious memories, lingering in wakefulness. Lovely write dear friend.
September 7th, 2022 15:15
Abating
dusk arising said:
I think you bring forth the fact that we romantic poets are never alone whilst walking and daydreaming as you describe today on your beach. Something of past loves stays within our joyous hearts. Oh we wonder whether we are fools imagining if they too dream of the past but I know that they do too in similar times.
After all, love is joy at its purest and who among us does not recall such joys of byegone days.
Your words took me to the sunny beach days I have shared and enjoyed knowing that such memories are shared too, somewhere, sometime.
September 7th, 2022 03:15
dusk arising said:
I think you bring forth the fact that we romantic poets are never alone whilst walking and daydreaming as you describe today on your beach. Something of past loves stays within our joyous hearts. Oh we wonder whether we are fools imagining if they too dream of the past but I know that they do too in similar times.
After all, love is joy at its purest and who among us does not recall such joys of byegone days.
Your words took me to the sunny beach days I have shared and enjoyed knowing that such memories are shared too, somewhere, sometime.
September 7th, 2022 03:15
This Time
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay. You capture September like it is.
September 5th, 2022 17:10
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay. You capture September like it is.
September 5th, 2022 17:10
This Time
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful reconnection with a place that evokes beloved memories. Lovingly written and beautifully phrased! It is truly a fav.
September 5th, 2022 13:26
Bella Shepard said:
What a wonderful reconnection with a place that evokes beloved memories. Lovingly written and beautifully phrased! It is truly a fav.
September 5th, 2022 13:26
This Time
orchidee said:
This time - but not only this time - I say \'Good write Fay!\'
September 5th, 2022 12:01
orchidee said:
This time - but not only this time - I say \'Good write Fay!\'
September 5th, 2022 12:01
This Time
SureshG said:
Warmth of a mother’s bosom, whether of flesh or soil, is for ever etched in our psyche, always welcoming.
Your words have so romanticized the urge to return.
September 5th, 2022 10:36
SureshG said:
Warmth of a mother’s bosom, whether of flesh or soil, is for ever etched in our psyche, always welcoming.
Your words have so romanticized the urge to return.
September 5th, 2022 10:36
This Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Sooner or later we must settle - and you, utilising memories richly textured have given perfect reasons for doing so. Your homecoming infused with those memories leaves a satisfied feeling of completion, Fay.
September 5th, 2022 07:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Sooner or later we must settle - and you, utilising memories richly textured have given perfect reasons for doing so. Your homecoming infused with those memories leaves a satisfied feeling of completion, Fay.
September 5th, 2022 07:31
Duet
Neville said:
perfectly poemed .. who needs a camera or a tape recorder these days when words will more than suffice ... x
September 4th, 2022 03:49
Neville said:
perfectly poemed .. who needs a camera or a tape recorder these days when words will more than suffice ... x
September 4th, 2022 03:49
Duet
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bird song and ripples\" appearing tonight \"in concord\" at your local pub. This dynamic duo of feathery lightness and rock-solid bass will play favorites from their latest album entitled, \"Melodious Symphonics.\" Tickets on sale now. LOL.
A lovely tribute to the music of Mother Nature, and itself very \"dulcet.\" Reading this I could hear the tonal impressions. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:52
MendedFences27 said:
\"Bird song and ripples\" appearing tonight \"in concord\" at your local pub. This dynamic duo of feathery lightness and rock-solid bass will play favorites from their latest album entitled, \"Melodious Symphonics.\" Tickets on sale now. LOL.
A lovely tribute to the music of Mother Nature, and itself very \"dulcet.\" Reading this I could hear the tonal impressions. - Phil A.
September 3rd, 2022 17:52
Duet
dusk arising said:
ee by eck, there yu are again gal in ya wellies capturin the rarest sounds of nature and how well your dedication pays off once again.
Once again Fay it\'s a pleasure to relax with your words and feel the damp coolness as i picture the moonlit scene and audition rare beauty.
An air of peace is present whenever i read your poetic insights into natures beauties.
September 3rd, 2022 13:11
dusk arising said:
ee by eck, there yu are again gal in ya wellies capturin the rarest sounds of nature and how well your dedication pays off once again.
Once again Fay it\'s a pleasure to relax with your words and feel the damp coolness as i picture the moonlit scene and audition rare beauty.
An air of peace is present whenever i read your poetic insights into natures beauties.
September 3rd, 2022 13:11
Abandon
Doggerel Dave said:
Practice, as in your poetry, can make perfect, Fay. Not that when it comes to the subject of your piece should one believe that perfection has been achieved.... more practice, I say, more practice...
September 2nd, 2022 20:18
Doggerel Dave said:
Practice, as in your poetry, can make perfect, Fay. Not that when it comes to the subject of your piece should one believe that perfection has been achieved.... more practice, I say, more practice...
September 2nd, 2022 20:18
Abandon
MendedFences27 said:
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem, Fay. It is difficult to write erotica and not fall into the obscene. Here you skate along beautifully. Your poem becomes \"delectably beautiful\" as you progress. This is a poem worth reading. - Phil A.
September 2nd, 2022 19:13
MendedFences27 said:
My stimulation for the day, Thank You.
Seriously, this is a lovely poem, Fay. It is difficult to write erotica and not fall into the obscene. Here you skate along beautifully. Your poem becomes \"delectably beautiful\" as you progress. This is a poem worth reading. - Phil A.
September 2nd, 2022 19:13
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