Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Restored
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to night and day. Well, I know now from this fine write!
August 27th, 2022 05:00
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to night and day. Well, I know now from this fine write!
August 27th, 2022 05:00
Conceding
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fay for the rich expression of the abandonment of self I can feel when I embrace the night sky, the complete oneness of it all.
Here in the southern hemisphere, the black velvet is almost completely shredded…….
August 26th, 2022 07:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks Fay for the rich expression of the abandonment of self I can feel when I embrace the night sky, the complete oneness of it all.
Here in the southern hemisphere, the black velvet is almost completely shredded…….
August 26th, 2022 07:43
Conceding
Neville said:
magnificent in its entirety .. but my word, that fourth stanza is surely to die for .. and I would have willingly, had I got to it first ......... Neville x
August 26th, 2022 06:57
Neville said:
magnificent in its entirety .. but my word, that fourth stanza is surely to die for .. and I would have willingly, had I got to it first ......... Neville x
August 26th, 2022 06:57
Conceding
dusk arising said:
Oh such sights to behold indeed for they do things to our wellbeing, notleast reminding us that we are indeed stardust ourselves and most importantly, we belong.
With talk of energy shut downs (like we had in early 1970\'s) where cities turn off their night time lighting there should be much more opportunity to see the stars etc a lot clearer than at present.
August 26th, 2022 06:14
dusk arising said:
Oh such sights to behold indeed for they do things to our wellbeing, notleast reminding us that we are indeed stardust ourselves and most importantly, we belong.
With talk of energy shut downs (like we had in early 1970\'s) where cities turn off their night time lighting there should be much more opportunity to see the stars etc a lot clearer than at present.
August 26th, 2022 06:14
Appetite
Neville said:
enjoyed over breakfast, before work & I feel sure it will be enjoyed again at the end of the day, after tea, maybe .. x
August 26th, 2022 02:14
Neville said:
enjoyed over breakfast, before work & I feel sure it will be enjoyed again at the end of the day, after tea, maybe .. x
August 26th, 2022 02:14
Appetite
arqios said:
Turning the page is quite a release with relish. The tale moves along at an agreeable pace. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2022 03:35
arqios said:
Turning the page is quite a release with relish. The tale moves along at an agreeable pace. Thanks for sharing.
August 25th, 2022 03:35
Appetite
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I got no appetite for them figs. I dare not risk it! It\'s TMI (Too Much Information) to tell ya more.
Poor Orchi and his fig troubles. lol.
August 25th, 2022 03:02
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I got no appetite for them figs. I dare not risk it! It\'s TMI (Too Much Information) to tell ya more.
Poor Orchi and his fig troubles. lol.
August 25th, 2022 03:02
Sweet Sensuality
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful fruit Fay.
Andy
August 25th, 2022 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about a wonderful fruit Fay.
Andy
August 25th, 2022 01:24
Sweet Sensuality
Doggerel Dave said:
I can almost slurp your piece, Fay - pity me, all mine come bubble wrapped from the supermarket.
My salivary glands are working overtime....
August 24th, 2022 06:59
Doggerel Dave said:
I can almost slurp your piece, Fay - pity me, all mine come bubble wrapped from the supermarket.
My salivary glands are working overtime....
August 24th, 2022 06:59
Sweet Sensuality
orchidee said:
Good write Fay
Ooh, I can\'t have figs, they give me the trots! lol.
August 24th, 2022 06:03
orchidee said:
Good write Fay
Ooh, I can\'t have figs, they give me the trots! lol.
August 24th, 2022 06:03
Sweet Sensuality
Neville said:
This is so good and for so many reasons that I myself hold so very dear ..
Indeed, my own fig originally planted by my great grandfather is bursting with succulent goodness ... again this year ......... Neville x
August 24th, 2022 05:18
Neville said:
This is so good and for so many reasons that I myself hold so very dear ..
Indeed, my own fig originally planted by my great grandfather is bursting with succulent goodness ... again this year ......... Neville x
August 24th, 2022 05:18
Abundance
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful tribute to my very favorite season. Through your gentle words I can see it, smell it, feel it. On my autumnal walks my goal is always to catch a falling leaf. I Keep them in a sealed bag and each time I add
one I marvel at their color and shape, something tangible to always remind me of how incredible nature is.
August 22nd, 2022 14:54
Bella Shepard said:
Such a beautiful tribute to my very favorite season. Through your gentle words I can see it, smell it, feel it. On my autumnal walks my goal is always to catch a falling leaf. I Keep them in a sealed bag and each time I add
one I marvel at their color and shape, something tangible to always remind me of how incredible nature is.
August 22nd, 2022 14:54
Abundance
Neville said:
Poetic tributes to this, the most golden of seasons just dont get any better dear lady Fay ....... I have no doubt whatsoever that Keats would give you a thumbs up .... x
August 21st, 2022 04:40
Neville said:
Poetic tributes to this, the most golden of seasons just dont get any better dear lady Fay ....... I have no doubt whatsoever that Keats would give you a thumbs up .... x
August 21st, 2022 04:40
Abundance
MendedFences27 said:
Loved your lush description of Autumn. A time of plenty, of brilliant colors, of fruitful fields, and what seems a a time of gathering.
Your poem also, was descriptively luscious. Loved it.
August 20th, 2022 15:25
MendedFences27 said:
Loved your lush description of Autumn. A time of plenty, of brilliant colors, of fruitful fields, and what seems a a time of gathering.
Your poem also, was descriptively luscious. Loved it.
August 20th, 2022 15:25
Abundance
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words on Autumn, my favourite season of them all.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words on Autumn, my favourite season of them all.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:19
Abundance
Doggerel Dave said:
Fills me with nostalgia Fay. The seasons (and Autumn especially) aren\'t the same where I live; although a trip to the Blue Mountains in March/April provides a flavour.
Your poem renders the richest of supplements.
August 19th, 2022 07:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Fills me with nostalgia Fay. The seasons (and Autumn especially) aren\'t the same where I live; although a trip to the Blue Mountains in March/April provides a flavour.
Your poem renders the richest of supplements.
August 19th, 2022 07:06
Abundance
dusk arising said:
Wonderful celebration of Autumn or as the americans call it, rather solemly, the fall. For autumn is possibly the most magnificent of seasons belching ripeness, health and readyness for the gruelling winter ahead. A celebration of a successful summer.
The romance of village communities coming together as one to bring home the richness of the harvest and sate the hardworked bodies with fine ale and pies full of hedge row bounty fruits and sturdy british apples.
Once again you paint wonderful pictures with your love of words.
Another \'must\' for my favourites.
August 19th, 2022 04:32
dusk arising said:
Wonderful celebration of Autumn or as the americans call it, rather solemly, the fall. For autumn is possibly the most magnificent of seasons belching ripeness, health and readyness for the gruelling winter ahead. A celebration of a successful summer.
The romance of village communities coming together as one to bring home the richness of the harvest and sate the hardworked bodies with fine ale and pies full of hedge row bounty fruits and sturdy british apples.
Once again you paint wonderful pictures with your love of words.
Another \'must\' for my favourites.
August 19th, 2022 04:32
Abundance
L. B. Mek said:
\'to shed quiet
on growth\'s gaudy face
and lace
with dampening change
Sol\'s great\'..
simply Beautiful, dear Fay
I read and imagine the breeze, gathering
and autumn\'s wings, hovering
whispering, its coming arrival:
\' Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;\'
August 19th, 2022 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'to shed quiet
on growth\'s gaudy face
and lace
with dampening change
Sol\'s great\'..
simply Beautiful, dear Fay
I read and imagine the breeze, gathering
and autumn\'s wings, hovering
whispering, its coming arrival:
\' Sometimes whoever seeks abroad may find
Thee sitting careless on a granary floor,
Thy hair soft-lifted by the winnowing wind;\'
August 19th, 2022 04:13
Covert
Neville said:
Hue would have thought it possible to capture so many colours and shades of shades even covertly held yet freely available to those who want to see them at each end of the day .......................... x
August 18th, 2022 10:49
Neville said:
Hue would have thought it possible to capture so many colours and shades of shades even covertly held yet freely available to those who want to see them at each end of the day .......................... x
August 18th, 2022 10:49
Intent
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, looking at small lie can be so uplifting in our lives.
Andy
August 17th, 2022 01:16
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, looking at small lie can be so uplifting in our lives.
Andy
August 17th, 2022 01:16
Intent
Bella Shepard said:
Simply beautiful my dear friend. How often do we neglect those precious moments of contemplation, hurrying through our busy day, when the true worth of life is right before our very eyes. Thank you for reminding us to stop and smell the roses, admire the light that illuminates all. Once again you gently stroke the words to create a poem of pure joy.
August 16th, 2022 12:28
Bella Shepard said:
Simply beautiful my dear friend. How often do we neglect those precious moments of contemplation, hurrying through our busy day, when the true worth of life is right before our very eyes. Thank you for reminding us to stop and smell the roses, admire the light that illuminates all. Once again you gently stroke the words to create a poem of pure joy.
August 16th, 2022 12:28
Intent
dusk arising said:
Beautiful poetry Fay. For me, you have a way of placing life\'s romance into the tiny, day by day, things we overlook.
Left me feeling that us humans are mostly so out of tune with the nature of our home.
August 16th, 2022 08:23
dusk arising said:
Beautiful poetry Fay. For me, you have a way of placing life\'s romance into the tiny, day by day, things we overlook.
Left me feeling that us humans are mostly so out of tune with the nature of our home.
August 16th, 2022 08:23
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