Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Satisfaction
MendedFences27 said:
Two great questions, Fay.
The \"satisfaction\" of which you speak does \"breach mind and soul,\" as well as \"flesh.\"
\"How best to share feelings,\" is one of the great quests of humankind, many a relationship, gets spoiled due a lack of it.
Great words, Fay. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2022 15:09
MendedFences27 said:
Two great questions, Fay.
The \"satisfaction\" of which you speak does \"breach mind and soul,\" as well as \"flesh.\"
\"How best to share feelings,\" is one of the great quests of humankind, many a relationship, gets spoiled due a lack of it.
Great words, Fay. - Phil A.
August 1st, 2022 15:09
Satisfaction
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing here not to absolutely love .................................................... x
August 1st, 2022 07:23
Neville said:
there is absolutely nothing here not to absolutely love .................................................... x
August 1st, 2022 07:23
Satisfaction
Neil Higgins said:
Saw the image you chose,
\"And on this Sunday morning,all was good\"
Move along.Nothing to see here 😎
Naughty.
August 1st, 2022 04:56
Neil Higgins said:
Saw the image you chose,
\"And on this Sunday morning,all was good\"
Move along.Nothing to see here 😎
Naughty.
August 1st, 2022 04:56
Satisfaction
Caring dove said:
Interesting words Fay . Nicely expressed . I like your questions in this ))
August 1st, 2022 04:45
Caring dove said:
Interesting words Fay . Nicely expressed . I like your questions in this ))
August 1st, 2022 04:45
Invited
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poetess, I\'m hanging on every word. This coupling beautifully and elegantly told. One can dream!
July 31st, 2022 10:58
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poetess, I\'m hanging on every word. This coupling beautifully and elegantly told. One can dream!
July 31st, 2022 10:58
Invited
Neville said:
you are indeed the mistress of subtle and tasteful erotica my lady .. more power to thy nibs .. Neville x
July 31st, 2022 08:13
Neville said:
you are indeed the mistress of subtle and tasteful erotica my lady .. more power to thy nibs .. Neville x
July 31st, 2022 08:13
Invited
orchidee said:
Fido might not let me read this, if it\'s too \'exciting!\' lol. I will put him out the back garden a while. Quiet, Fido! heehee.
July 31st, 2022 07:15
orchidee said:
Fido might not let me read this, if it\'s too \'exciting!\' lol. I will put him out the back garden a while. Quiet, Fido! heehee.
July 31st, 2022 07:15
Invited
Neil Higgins said:
\"If thou be the spear that pierces my soul\"
She waits her lover with bated breath, methinks.A man who \"maybe\" already married? Or maybe lost over the hills,or dales and awaiting his return.We \"know\" that she is his,due to the writing Fay
Goodness me,and it\'s Sunday!!
Back to the Commonwealth Games 🥵
July 31st, 2022 06:01
Neil Higgins said:
\"If thou be the spear that pierces my soul\"
She waits her lover with bated breath, methinks.A man who \"maybe\" already married? Or maybe lost over the hills,or dales and awaiting his return.We \"know\" that she is his,due to the writing Fay
Goodness me,and it\'s Sunday!!
Back to the Commonwealth Games 🥵
July 31st, 2022 06:01
Lunacy
MendedFences27 said:
A very important issue that you have expressed brilliantly. Why can\'t we reach a balance of Reforestation=Deforestation? If we replace every tree with a new planting and then some, we perhaps might survive. Unfortunately, this does not happen. Forests are cleared for mankind\'s expansion. So, it becomes More People= FewerTrees.
Thanks for bringing your light to this subject. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:41
MendedFences27 said:
A very important issue that you have expressed brilliantly. Why can\'t we reach a balance of Reforestation=Deforestation? If we replace every tree with a new planting and then some, we perhaps might survive. Unfortunately, this does not happen. Forests are cleared for mankind\'s expansion. So, it becomes More People= FewerTrees.
Thanks for bringing your light to this subject. - Phil A.
July 30th, 2022 21:41
Lunacy
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully written dear friend. I\'ve seen a number of trees go down in my subdivision, and the dead ones I understand, they could fall on you. But healthy trees cleared for a better view, it seems like murder. I pass them every day, and when they\'re gone I\'m sad. Now when I see documentaries on deforestation I\'m heartbroken. They are indeed the \"breath of life\", how hard is that to understand?
July 30th, 2022 13:28
Bella Shepard said:
This is so beautifully written dear friend. I\'ve seen a number of trees go down in my subdivision, and the dead ones I understand, they could fall on you. But healthy trees cleared for a better view, it seems like murder. I pass them every day, and when they\'re gone I\'m sad. Now when I see documentaries on deforestation I\'m heartbroken. They are indeed the \"breath of life\", how hard is that to understand?
July 30th, 2022 13:28
Lunacy
orchidee said:
Yes, and even some snooty ones arguing over a poor tree in their village. It probably obscured some of the views from twitching curtains!
July 30th, 2022 08:21
orchidee said:
Yes, and even some snooty ones arguing over a poor tree in their village. It probably obscured some of the views from twitching curtains!
July 30th, 2022 08:21
Lunacy
Neville said:
No one in their write mind would either care or dare to argue with you over this important issue Fay .. I\'m with you all the way ................ x
July 30th, 2022 08:12
Neville said:
No one in their write mind would either care or dare to argue with you over this important issue Fay .. I\'m with you all the way ................ x
July 30th, 2022 08:12
Lunacy
Neil Higgins said:
Hallo Fay.I’m back!!! And reading your splendid work again
Neil
July 30th, 2022 07:55
Neil Higgins said:
Hallo Fay.I’m back!!! And reading your splendid work again
Neil
July 30th, 2022 07:55
One Patch
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see those patches of blue Fay. Wonderful words.
Andy
July 30th, 2022 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
It is so wonderful to see those patches of blue Fay. Wonderful words.
Andy
July 30th, 2022 01:00
One Patch
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. So says Patch too, my other imaginary dog. Please excuse me talking rubbish sometimes! lol.
July 29th, 2022 13:24
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay. So says Patch too, my other imaginary dog. Please excuse me talking rubbish sometimes! lol.
July 29th, 2022 13:24
One Patch
KRWonder said:
Aww, how beautifully captured in your words, such a vivid way to describe day turning to night, I really loved this.
July 29th, 2022 08:13
KRWonder said:
Aww, how beautifully captured in your words, such a vivid way to describe day turning to night, I really loved this.
July 29th, 2022 08:13
One Patch
dusk arising said:
OK so theres a tear in the seat of my trousers with me blue undies showing through.
For me the dusk light arises from ground level or sea level as shapes become less distinct whilst skyward there is light. Hence my nom de plume.
A romantic sight to linger over before one leaves deck for warmth of a cabin.
July 29th, 2022 05:26
dusk arising said:
OK so theres a tear in the seat of my trousers with me blue undies showing through.
For me the dusk light arises from ground level or sea level as shapes become less distinct whilst skyward there is light. Hence my nom de plume.
A romantic sight to linger over before one leaves deck for warmth of a cabin.
July 29th, 2022 05:26
One Patch
L. B. Mek said:
firstly
what a stunning image, dear Fay
and your words take me back
to all those days I have witnessed
the gradual arrival of twlight
while driving long distance
or in the morning train to scotland;
there is such a lovely fluidity
to nature\'s artistry, but
every once in a while, a rebellious corner
of sky, lingers
and drags it all out.. so much fun
to witness
lol
such a lovely aspect of nature you\'ve captured
with these succinct words..
beautiful!
July 29th, 2022 04:25
L. B. Mek said:
firstly
what a stunning image, dear Fay
and your words take me back
to all those days I have witnessed
the gradual arrival of twlight
while driving long distance
or in the morning train to scotland;
there is such a lovely fluidity
to nature\'s artistry, but
every once in a while, a rebellious corner
of sky, lingers
and drags it all out.. so much fun
to witness
lol
such a lovely aspect of nature you\'ve captured
with these succinct words..
beautiful!
July 29th, 2022 04:25
One Patch
Neville said:
I think I caught a glimpse of it too ..
delightful and truly .................. x
July 29th, 2022 03:42
Neville said:
I think I caught a glimpse of it too ..
delightful and truly .................. x
July 29th, 2022 03:42
Somewhere
L. B. Mek said:
soul nourishing!
whoever these words are for, I hope
they realise how lucky they are:
\'So think not then dear lover and friend
of coping alone.\'
Beautiful!
as ever, dear Fay
so much grace in these lines
July 28th, 2022 03:55
L. B. Mek said:
soul nourishing!
whoever these words are for, I hope
they realise how lucky they are:
\'So think not then dear lover and friend
of coping alone.\'
Beautiful!
as ever, dear Fay
so much grace in these lines
July 28th, 2022 03:55
Somewhere
dusk arising said:
One of the rewards of gaining a good few years is just how much sense the message in your words today makes.
When so much good has been grown and nurtured by two people...
July 28th, 2022 03:38
dusk arising said:
One of the rewards of gaining a good few years is just how much sense the message in your words today makes.
When so much good has been grown and nurtured by two people...
July 28th, 2022 03:38
Somewhere
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing fay .. some connections can be so very strong .. I understand ) sometimes we can feel so at one with someone else can’t you . Their is beauty in your words but also sadness ..
July 28th, 2022 03:24
Caring dove said:
A lovely writing fay .. some connections can be so very strong .. I understand ) sometimes we can feel so at one with someone else can’t you . Their is beauty in your words but also sadness ..
July 28th, 2022 03:24
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