Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Inbringing
Neville said:
what a picture you have poemed here dear Fay .. a veritable masterpiece .. x
July 21st, 2022 12:00
Neville said:
what a picture you have poemed here dear Fay .. a veritable masterpiece .. x
July 21st, 2022 12:00
Love\'s Odour
siranswerer said:
What fantastic word Fay. Love them, and feel them.
July 21st, 2022 05:51
siranswerer said:
What fantastic word Fay. Love them, and feel them.
July 21st, 2022 05:51
Love\'s Odour
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, meaningful words Fay.
Into favourites.
Andy
July 21st, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful, meaningful words Fay.
Into favourites.
Andy
July 21st, 2022 00:24
Love\'s Odour
AlitaOpal said:
A wonderful and sentimental piece, great write Fay 🌹
July 20th, 2022 09:04
AlitaOpal said:
A wonderful and sentimental piece, great write Fay 🌹
July 20th, 2022 09:04
Love\'s Odour
Neville said:
Powerful, punchy and probably one of the most poignant poems I have had the pleasure of reading for quite some time .............. Neville x
July 20th, 2022 06:40
Neville said:
Powerful, punchy and probably one of the most poignant poems I have had the pleasure of reading for quite some time .............. Neville x
July 20th, 2022 06:40
Windfalls
Goldfinch60 said:
Such great times Fay, I have eaten many a windfall apple in my life and when we were kids I even went scrumping! LOL
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such great times Fay, I have eaten many a windfall apple in my life and when we were kids I even went scrumping! LOL
Andy
July 20th, 2022 01:10
Windfalls
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poetry ofttimes evokes nostalgia, Fay. This piece is one such.
My craving for a Cox\'s Orange Pippin has just awoken once more, so if you could stand under the tree and catch one as it drops to save it from the worms, then throw it in my direction, gratitude shall forever live in my heart....
July 19th, 2022 23:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poetry ofttimes evokes nostalgia, Fay. This piece is one such.
My craving for a Cox\'s Orange Pippin has just awoken once more, so if you could stand under the tree and catch one as it drops to save it from the worms, then throw it in my direction, gratitude shall forever live in my heart....
July 19th, 2022 23:45
Windfalls
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit a truly soft spot in my heart with this one. I live for fall, when apples are ripe. We have an orchard near by, and the first day they\'re open for picking, I\'m there when the gate opens. If if I\'m lucky I\'m the only one there for a while, wandering from tree to tree, picking the best one from each, munching on one as I go, the smell of fermenting apples that have fallen to the ground. A homegrown apple each day, pies, cobblers, until they\'re gone, and I begin the wait all over again. Don\'t mean to go on and on, but I love what this poem kindles in me, thank you .
July 19th, 2022 13:12
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve hit a truly soft spot in my heart with this one. I live for fall, when apples are ripe. We have an orchard near by, and the first day they\'re open for picking, I\'m there when the gate opens. If if I\'m lucky I\'m the only one there for a while, wandering from tree to tree, picking the best one from each, munching on one as I go, the smell of fermenting apples that have fallen to the ground. A homegrown apple each day, pies, cobblers, until they\'re gone, and I begin the wait all over again. Don\'t mean to go on and on, but I love what this poem kindles in me, thank you .
July 19th, 2022 13:12
Windfalls
Neville said:
mine are going to be turned into cider before they drop this year ..
but I can see precisely where you are coming from our Fay ..
golden delicious n otherwise luverly ... x
July 19th, 2022 07:44
Neville said:
mine are going to be turned into cider before they drop this year ..
but I can see precisely where you are coming from our Fay ..
golden delicious n otherwise luverly ... x
July 19th, 2022 07:44
Windfalls
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, a while back
I used to go
with a group of friends
to work on farms over a day
to help gather their harvest
and we\'d get paid
with a few boxes of what we helped
pick, such a fun way
to spend time with your close ones
and enjoy, summer\'s
fruits..
literally!)
lol
this is a lovely read, dear Fay
thank you!
July 19th, 2022 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
(yeah, a while back
I used to go
with a group of friends
to work on farms over a day
to help gather their harvest
and we\'d get paid
with a few boxes of what we helped
pick, such a fun way
to spend time with your close ones
and enjoy, summer\'s
fruits..
literally!)
lol
this is a lovely read, dear Fay
thank you!
July 19th, 2022 06:28
Windfalls
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Sadly a lot of plums from our hedge go to waste each July.
July 19th, 2022 04:49
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Sadly a lot of plums from our hedge go to waste each July.
July 19th, 2022 04:49
This Day.
Thekkinkkattil said:
A beautiful write Fay . You have caught the essence of nature
July 18th, 2022 19:10
Thekkinkkattil said:
A beautiful write Fay . You have caught the essence of nature
July 18th, 2022 19:10
This Day.
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is just breathtaking to me. You possess an intrinsic gift of expression that I marvel at. You lovingly finesse words into being, and they take on a life of their own. This is a beautiful piece of verse, truly loved.
July 18th, 2022 13:15
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is just breathtaking to me. You possess an intrinsic gift of expression that I marvel at. You lovingly finesse words into being, and they take on a life of their own. This is a beautiful piece of verse, truly loved.
July 18th, 2022 13:15
This Day.
orchidee said:
Sounds like a fine day to me Fay!
Neville\'s poem has started Fido barking! lol.
July 18th, 2022 06:27
orchidee said:
Sounds like a fine day to me Fay!
Neville\'s poem has started Fido barking! lol.
July 18th, 2022 06:27
This Day.
Neville said:
I know I must read like a stuck record must sound, but when it comes to poetry, they just don\'t get much better than this ... x
p.s.
you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a herons egg, now can ya :)
July 18th, 2022 05:30
Neville said:
I know I must read like a stuck record must sound, but when it comes to poetry, they just don\'t get much better than this ... x
p.s.
you can beat an egg, but you can\'t beat a herons egg, now can ya :)
July 18th, 2022 05:30
This Day.
L. B. Mek said:
\'intriguing gifts from the coffers
of Nature who arranges a calm
waking to bathe minds in balm
of simplicity\'..
Brilliant!
(Nature\'s, gifts of serenity
unfurled in vivid, ink
by your majestic Poetry
dear Fay)
July 18th, 2022 04:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'intriguing gifts from the coffers
of Nature who arranges a calm
waking to bathe minds in balm
of simplicity\'..
Brilliant!
(Nature\'s, gifts of serenity
unfurled in vivid, ink
by your majestic Poetry
dear Fay)
July 18th, 2022 04:50
This Day.
Doggerel Dave said:
Stop boasting, Fay - I\'m getting very envious....... 😊
A standout example of structure and controlled form - I hesitate to ask, but how much effort did that take?
Great stuff.
July 18th, 2022 04:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Stop boasting, Fay - I\'m getting very envious....... 😊
A standout example of structure and controlled form - I hesitate to ask, but how much effort did that take?
Great stuff.
July 18th, 2022 04:20
Boisterous
Neville said:
it\'s all very cool on a hot summers day but that summative and unexpected line of yours was absolutely to die for x
July 17th, 2022 11:59
Neville said:
it\'s all very cool on a hot summers day but that summative and unexpected line of yours was absolutely to die for x
July 17th, 2022 11:59
Boisterous
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful imagery of your words. To dare the ocean is a remarkable game, it is a formidable opponent.
July 17th, 2022 10:54
Bella Shepard said:
I love the beautiful imagery of your words. To dare the ocean is a remarkable game, it is a formidable opponent.
July 17th, 2022 10:54
Battle
Neville said:
I guess if there was ever such a word as \'wordsmithess\' .. you would be appointed queen, mistress Fay ... x
July 17th, 2022 00:45
Neville said:
I guess if there was ever such a word as \'wordsmithess\' .. you would be appointed queen, mistress Fay ... x
July 17th, 2022 00:45
Reasons
Neville said:
Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip Pettitt say\'s it\'s a ruff tuff life having to look after his Neville in all weathers and particularly when he needs to go out for a run when I want to paws and put all four feet up in front of the fire .... N :)
July 15th, 2022 12:06
Neville said:
Brulee Bru Bruiser Parsley Parsnip Pettitt say\'s it\'s a ruff tuff life having to look after his Neville in all weathers and particularly when he needs to go out for a run when I want to paws and put all four feet up in front of the fire .... N :)
July 15th, 2022 12:06
Reasons
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve written beautifully of the relationship between dog, or should I say friend, and owner. A walk becomes so much more.
July 15th, 2022 07:43
Bella Shepard said:
You\'ve written beautifully of the relationship between dog, or should I say friend, and owner. A walk becomes so much more.
July 15th, 2022 07:43
Reasons
orchidee said:
Yes, really beneficial and for companionship. I saw someone walking a cat on a lead! Not the same as walking a dog, as cat laid down and decided to have a wash. Owner had to wait until cat had finished - or carry the cat!
July 15th, 2022 04:43
orchidee said:
Yes, really beneficial and for companionship. I saw someone walking a cat on a lead! Not the same as walking a dog, as cat laid down and decided to have a wash. Owner had to wait until cat had finished - or carry the cat!
July 15th, 2022 04:43
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