Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Ready
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I don\'t like some surveys. They may give a choice \'Never married\'. That makes us sound like fogey bachelors or spinsters - both hideous words!
July 6th, 2022 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I don\'t like some surveys. They may give a choice \'Never married\'. That makes us sound like fogey bachelors or spinsters - both hideous words!
July 6th, 2022 02:09
Dream Keepers
Goldfinch60 said:
May that aliveness that comes every day be forever with us all Fay.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
May that aliveness that comes every day be forever with us all Fay.
Andy
July 6th, 2022 00:13
Regeneration
Neville said:
Hey Fay, you just nailed nature and the way of it so bloomin well .. and in a style so aesthetically and uniquely yours .................. Neville x
July 5th, 2022 07:52
Neville said:
Hey Fay, you just nailed nature and the way of it so bloomin well .. and in a style so aesthetically and uniquely yours .................. Neville x
July 5th, 2022 07:52
Hypnotic
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is mesmerising to see snakes.
Andy
July 1st, 2022 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, it is mesmerising to see snakes.
Andy
July 1st, 2022 00:08
Hypnotic
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Girls and snakes. My daughter had one as a pet and carried it around in a bag. Would bite anybody but her.
June 30th, 2022 10:00
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Fay.
Girls and snakes. My daughter had one as a pet and carried it around in a bag. Would bite anybody but her.
June 30th, 2022 10:00
Hypnotic
Doggerel Dave said:
To come in actual contact with a snake (and I don\'t mean bitten by one) is a very different experience to expectations. You captured that beautifully, Fay. Thanks.
June 30th, 2022 07:59
Doggerel Dave said:
To come in actual contact with a snake (and I don\'t mean bitten by one) is a very different experience to expectations. You captured that beautifully, Fay. Thanks.
June 30th, 2022 07:59
Hypnotic
L. B. Mek said:
I remember this read, a recent write
right? lol
and yes, snake\'s be everywhere
definitely worth a re-share...
thank you, dear Fay
(just glad you\'re free
of their poisonous, dead weight
sorry for your troubles
stay Strong!)
June 30th, 2022 06:23
L. B. Mek said:
I remember this read, a recent write
right? lol
and yes, snake\'s be everywhere
definitely worth a re-share...
thank you, dear Fay
(just glad you\'re free
of their poisonous, dead weight
sorry for your troubles
stay Strong!)
June 30th, 2022 06:23
I Am Cloud
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, as are clouds, I look at clouds so very much, their uniqueness says a great deal to me.
Andy
June 28th, 2022 00:23
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, as are clouds, I look at clouds so very much, their uniqueness says a great deal to me.
Andy
June 28th, 2022 00:23
I Am Cloud
Doggerel Dave said:
As an avid cloud watcher (this has led me to some dark places - such as flat on my face in the grass) I completely relate. Your rich lines confirm similar preoccupations and evoke many a memory image, Fay.
PS: Have you by any chance heard from Neville?
June 27th, 2022 08:03
Doggerel Dave said:
As an avid cloud watcher (this has led me to some dark places - such as flat on my face in the grass) I completely relate. Your rich lines confirm similar preoccupations and evoke many a memory image, Fay.
PS: Have you by any chance heard from Neville?
June 27th, 2022 08:03
I Am Cloud
Caring dove said:
So beautiful Fay 🙂 such an engaging gentle read .. love this 🌸
June 27th, 2022 05:48
Caring dove said:
So beautiful Fay 🙂 such an engaging gentle read .. love this 🌸
June 27th, 2022 05:48
I Am Cloud
L. B. Mek said:
\'and if I feel inclined after night, come the morning my
yawn drenches all below me in dew.\'
beautiful characterisation
and such vivid imagery..
I felt as light as a cloud
while reading your words, dear Fay
such delicate poetry, beautiful
June 27th, 2022 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'and if I feel inclined after night, come the morning my
yawn drenches all below me in dew.\'
beautiful characterisation
and such vivid imagery..
I felt as light as a cloud
while reading your words, dear Fay
such delicate poetry, beautiful
June 27th, 2022 05:29
Chimes
Goldfinch60 said:
Those chimes can bring a feeling of peace over you except in the night when you are trying to get to sleep. Good words Fay.
Andy
June 21st, 2022 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those chimes can bring a feeling of peace over you except in the night when you are trying to get to sleep. Good words Fay.
Andy
June 21st, 2022 00:26
Chimes
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Someone fixed up an amplifier for my chimes, so they would sound 100 times louder and drown out my singing. Doh! lol. Such are my adventures.
June 20th, 2022 08:42
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
Someone fixed up an amplifier for my chimes, so they would sound 100 times louder and drown out my singing. Doh! lol. Such are my adventures.
June 20th, 2022 08:42
Chimes
dusk arising said:
Oh that wind or breeze playing on a sympathetic instrument can cast it\'s spell over you and before you know it the afternoon is gone and you are waking from a blissful snooze.
Yes i have heard these gentle sounds radiating their air of peace. Very chilled and relaxing, thieves of the active day.
Do i like them? Yes but no.
June 20th, 2022 06:06
dusk arising said:
Oh that wind or breeze playing on a sympathetic instrument can cast it\'s spell over you and before you know it the afternoon is gone and you are waking from a blissful snooze.
Yes i have heard these gentle sounds radiating their air of peace. Very chilled and relaxing, thieves of the active day.
Do i like them? Yes but no.
June 20th, 2022 06:06
Chimes
L. B. Mek said:
\'of sonorous change catching the drift\'
\'of leaves partaking in air\'s new bustle \'
\'of transfixing music, ringing in chorus\'..
(who can resist, such eloquence
in poetry\'s vividly inked, imagery?!)
as-Ever wonderfully worded, dear poet
and yes, i too
find the random, melody
of wind blown chimes, somewhat
mesmeric and magical
June 20th, 2022 05:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'of sonorous change catching the drift\'
\'of leaves partaking in air\'s new bustle \'
\'of transfixing music, ringing in chorus\'..
(who can resist, such eloquence
in poetry\'s vividly inked, imagery?!)
as-Ever wonderfully worded, dear poet
and yes, i too
find the random, melody
of wind blown chimes, somewhat
mesmeric and magical
June 20th, 2022 05:31
Co-Existence
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature is wonderful and a great excuse for abandoning chores Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2022 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Walking with Nature is wonderful and a great excuse for abandoning chores Fay.
Andy
June 17th, 2022 00:29
Co-Existence
Caring dove said:
Lovely read Fay 🙂 especially love the last verse .. your mention of mindfulness and child like awe . Beautiful words . Just to be in the moment with nature , Is so nice
June 16th, 2022 15:57
Caring dove said:
Lovely read Fay 🙂 especially love the last verse .. your mention of mindfulness and child like awe . Beautiful words . Just to be in the moment with nature , Is so nice
June 16th, 2022 15:57
Co-Existence
Michael Edwards said:
Been away for a few days and back posting today - glad I am as I\'ve just read and enjoyed this beauty.
June 16th, 2022 11:14
Michael Edwards said:
Been away for a few days and back posting today - glad I am as I\'ve just read and enjoyed this beauty.
June 16th, 2022 11:14
Co-Existence
dusk arising said:
Shame that we have to wait until our autumn years to love the beauty all around which we took for granted.
How wonderful it would be with our autumn eyes to play once again as we surely used to in those now memories of meadows and valleys, wildflower and daisychains. Such thoughts.
These days I purposely take a short drive into the greenery to inhale the countryside and settle into it\'s peaceful rythmn to recharge my verve for life batteries.
Into my favourites should I ever need reminding to go out there and feel the natural world.
June 16th, 2022 09:16
dusk arising said:
Shame that we have to wait until our autumn years to love the beauty all around which we took for granted.
How wonderful it would be with our autumn eyes to play once again as we surely used to in those now memories of meadows and valleys, wildflower and daisychains. Such thoughts.
These days I purposely take a short drive into the greenery to inhale the countryside and settle into it\'s peaceful rythmn to recharge my verve for life batteries.
Into my favourites should I ever need reminding to go out there and feel the natural world.
June 16th, 2022 09:16
Regeneration
Goldfinch60 said:
Meditation in Natures realm shown to its full delight in your words Fay.
Andy
June 15th, 2022 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Meditation in Natures realm shown to its full delight in your words Fay.
Andy
June 15th, 2022 00:35
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