Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Recalling
L. B. Mek said:
\'we
of midyears
met
new sensations
and loved
stirring up bated passion
by gentle yield.
Time\'s passing
has made satin
from drab
long-worn creased cotton
and now gone
that ready fever of fullest
acceptance
will, be never forgotten\'..
(this, dear Fay
is your Poetry
at its worded excellence
Best)
thank you!!!
\'a joy to read
an honour, to call upon
my own feelings, forth
from within
its imbued: emotive passion\'
Brilliant!
as-Ever
June 6th, 2022 07:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'we
of midyears
met
new sensations
and loved
stirring up bated passion
by gentle yield.
Time\'s passing
has made satin
from drab
long-worn creased cotton
and now gone
that ready fever of fullest
acceptance
will, be never forgotten\'..
(this, dear Fay
is your Poetry
at its worded excellence
Best)
thank you!!!
\'a joy to read
an honour, to call upon
my own feelings, forth
from within
its imbued: emotive passion\'
Brilliant!
as-Ever
June 6th, 2022 07:01
Recalling
arqios said:
Love in any season has its shining moment and with it its unique brilliance and timbre. These qualities make these uniquely wonderful and to be able to share that with someone enriches and deepens nuanced love that moves through the ages of human life. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
June 6th, 2022 06:04
arqios said:
Love in any season has its shining moment and with it its unique brilliance and timbre. These qualities make these uniquely wonderful and to be able to share that with someone enriches and deepens nuanced love that moves through the ages of human life. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem.
June 6th, 2022 06:04
Lasting
Goldfinch60 said:
That reversal can happen at any moment and be totally unexpected Fay.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 00:37
Goldfinch60 said:
That reversal can happen at any moment and be totally unexpected Fay.
Andy
June 6th, 2022 00:37
Lasting
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s like a Gothic novel with a happy ending, well at least a hopeful one.
The \"Darkest of worlds\" to \"can have lasting reversal,\" \"beckons to hope kept inside.\" At first, I was depressed, but then things became brighter. A real contrast in tone, _ Phil A.
June 5th, 2022 19:10
MendedFences27 said:
It\'s like a Gothic novel with a happy ending, well at least a hopeful one.
The \"Darkest of worlds\" to \"can have lasting reversal,\" \"beckons to hope kept inside.\" At first, I was depressed, but then things became brighter. A real contrast in tone, _ Phil A.
June 5th, 2022 19:10
Lasting
Morwenna said:
Such clever rhymes helping to make the poem move on from despair to anticipation and hope to reversal. Through Self. I guess it a lot of us can recognise someting of ourselves here.
June 5th, 2022 14:34
Morwenna said:
Such clever rhymes helping to make the poem move on from despair to anticipation and hope to reversal. Through Self. I guess it a lot of us can recognise someting of ourselves here.
June 5th, 2022 14:34
Lasting
Bella Shepard said:
I love the hopeful nature of your poem. In it I see the ability of the heart and mind to bounce back from despair, and use the experience to rekindle the self. So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:46
Bella Shepard said:
I love the hopeful nature of your poem. In it I see the ability of the heart and mind to bounce back from despair, and use the experience to rekindle the self. So well written!
June 5th, 2022 12:46
Lasting
Neville said:
bloomin heck Fay .. I see wot ya mean .. and so clearly x
June 5th, 2022 10:50
Neville said:
bloomin heck Fay .. I see wot ya mean .. and so clearly x
June 5th, 2022 10:50
Lasting
arqios said:
Rabid despair is quite a fearful thing. Thanks for sharing.
June 5th, 2022 03:06
arqios said:
Rabid despair is quite a fearful thing. Thanks for sharing.
June 5th, 2022 03:06
Trees and Me
Blueledge said:
I really enjoyed your poem.
We humans are so unnecessarely destructive. An increase in co2 levels in the atmosphere should be beneficial for trees, but not it we keep felling them for greed. I keep planting them. I feel emotionally attached to my trees.
June 4th, 2022 22:53
Blueledge said:
I really enjoyed your poem.
We humans are so unnecessarely destructive. An increase in co2 levels in the atmosphere should be beneficial for trees, but not it we keep felling them for greed. I keep planting them. I feel emotionally attached to my trees.
June 4th, 2022 22:53
Sea Swell
Neville said:
you have captured my early morning walk along the coast road (more of a single track lane really) .. all my senses now tweaked I dont know how you do it ........ x
June 4th, 2022 11:45
Neville said:
you have captured my early morning walk along the coast road (more of a single track lane really) .. all my senses now tweaked I dont know how you do it ........ x
June 4th, 2022 11:45
Sea Swell
dusk arising said:
I wish I was there to see feel and smell it. Envigorating memories of rough and threatening sea coastlines fill my mind. So exciting for land lubbers like me.
June 4th, 2022 04:50
dusk arising said:
I wish I was there to see feel and smell it. Envigorating memories of rough and threatening sea coastlines fill my mind. So exciting for land lubbers like me.
June 4th, 2022 04:50
Sea Swell
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read , Fay 🙂 strong words . Like your poem
June 4th, 2022 04:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging read , Fay 🙂 strong words . Like your poem
June 4th, 2022 04:03
Trees and Me
SureshG said:
We see it all, yet what will it take for our individual greed to change the course - maybe when we have depleted the source of our breath - the trees. As always, beautifully prosed!
June 3rd, 2022 09:53
SureshG said:
We see it all, yet what will it take for our individual greed to change the course - maybe when we have depleted the source of our breath - the trees. As always, beautifully prosed!
June 3rd, 2022 09:53
Trees and Me
Neville said:
Treemendous write from the topmost buds budding write down to those hairy toes of yours ....... x
June 3rd, 2022 01:59
Neville said:
Treemendous write from the topmost buds budding write down to those hairy toes of yours ....... x
June 3rd, 2022 01:59
Trees and Me
Bella Shepard said:
I am the biggest tree hugger, so if you were a beautiful tree I would give you the biggest hug. We marvel at their beauty, but never really understand the intricate horticultural workings it takes for trees to be. You have stated this so beautifully, and our own peril should we continue to destroy them. Beautifully written, I enjoyed every word.
June 1st, 2022 11:54
Bella Shepard said:
I am the biggest tree hugger, so if you were a beautiful tree I would give you the biggest hug. We marvel at their beauty, but never really understand the intricate horticultural workings it takes for trees to be. You have stated this so beautifully, and our own peril should we continue to destroy them. Beautifully written, I enjoyed every word.
June 1st, 2022 11:54
Trees and Me
Saxon Crow said:
A beautifully written poem Fay. It would be rather pleasent to be a tree I think.
June 1st, 2022 11:34
Saxon Crow said:
A beautifully written poem Fay. It would be rather pleasent to be a tree I think.
June 1st, 2022 11:34
Out of Nowhere.
Goldfinch60 said:
This is so true to what has happened to me Fay and we do not understand from where this love of ours has come from, but it is there for us both.
Wonderful words.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
This is so true to what has happened to me Fay and we do not understand from where this love of ours has come from, but it is there for us both.
Wonderful words.
Andy
June 1st, 2022 00:44
Out of Nowhere.
MendedFences27 said:
Later in life it\'s more difficult to climb those \"mountains\" and find those \"horizons,\" and maybe that makes them all the more pleasurable.
A wonderful poem and a great perspective on life Loved it. Phil A.
May 31st, 2022 16:06
MendedFences27 said:
Later in life it\'s more difficult to climb those \"mountains\" and find those \"horizons,\" and maybe that makes them all the more pleasurable.
A wonderful poem and a great perspective on life Loved it. Phil A.
May 31st, 2022 16:06
Out of Nowhere.
Neville said:
I know for an absolute fact it can happen exactly as you have so perfectly poemed our Fay ........... x
May 31st, 2022 12:22
Neville said:
I know for an absolute fact it can happen exactly as you have so perfectly poemed our Fay ........... x
May 31st, 2022 12:22
Out of Nowhere.
dusk arising said:
Reading this it occurs to me just how gob smacking it would be to be at the start of something really mutually meaningful in late years. Ho-hum, meanwhile back to whatever it was that i\'ve forgotten i was doing.
May 31st, 2022 07:55
dusk arising said:
Reading this it occurs to me just how gob smacking it would be to be at the start of something really mutually meaningful in late years. Ho-hum, meanwhile back to whatever it was that i\'ve forgotten i was doing.
May 31st, 2022 07:55
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