Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Reinvention
MendedFences27 said:
I believe that it is human nature to see one\'s past through rose colored glasses and not through reality\'s lens. It is a matter of self-preservation.
Lots to like in this poem and I think you said it quite true with, \"Fate awaits for scribes who, fancy encased, can re-invent times before.\" Nice work Fay. - Phil A.
May 30th, 2022 13:08
MendedFences27 said:
I believe that it is human nature to see one\'s past through rose colored glasses and not through reality\'s lens. It is a matter of self-preservation.
Lots to like in this poem and I think you said it quite true with, \"Fate awaits for scribes who, fancy encased, can re-invent times before.\" Nice work Fay. - Phil A.
May 30th, 2022 13:08
Reinvention
L. B. Mek said:
\'Caught
by perfume of imagined lives
past ages glow
like a rose.
Poets can scent
the not
remembered\'..
(only a few innately gifted Poet\'s
like you, dear Fay)
simply beautiful
May 30th, 2022 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
\'Caught
by perfume of imagined lives
past ages glow
like a rose.
Poets can scent
the not
remembered\'..
(only a few innately gifted Poet\'s
like you, dear Fay)
simply beautiful
May 30th, 2022 06:20
Reinvention
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem fay 🙂 love your words 🌸
May 30th, 2022 03:50
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem fay 🙂 love your words 🌸
May 30th, 2022 03:50
Reinvention
JudyStella said:
In love with this verse🤩
Caught by perfume of imagined lives
past ages glow like a rose.
The use of perfume gives a strong nostalgic sense ❤️We remember some events by their scents. Love it!
May 30th, 2022 03:30
JudyStella said:
In love with this verse🤩
Caught by perfume of imagined lives
past ages glow like a rose.
The use of perfume gives a strong nostalgic sense ❤️We remember some events by their scents. Love it!
May 30th, 2022 03:30
Reinvention
dusk arising said:
All too true how we mentally tailor the past into a more palateable version than reality. May be it\'s a part of being positive minded for me, choosing to hold onto the good bits and let the not so good and bloody awful bits fall away. Well I think i prefer the rose tinted version which I live with. Lets me think I\'ve enjoyed myself.
May 30th, 2022 03:14
dusk arising said:
All too true how we mentally tailor the past into a more palateable version than reality. May be it\'s a part of being positive minded for me, choosing to hold onto the good bits and let the not so good and bloody awful bits fall away. Well I think i prefer the rose tinted version which I live with. Lets me think I\'ve enjoyed myself.
May 30th, 2022 03:14
Sensing.
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the beauty of that single rose from todays suitor and..... she was lost to its wanton ways having first felt it\'s prick.
A fine ending to the day once the currys digested.
Creating the right romantic mood and finding a suitable venue is I imagine (because I am so out of touch) quite a challenge these days and after lockdown who the heck can afford to dine out somewhere posh.
Ah but I have my memories which your poem brings slinking back. Those actual romantic times are truly a treasure and long may they be sought and found for all future generations to hold high in their cherished memories.
May 27th, 2022 12:13
dusk arising said:
Ah yes the beauty of that single rose from todays suitor and..... she was lost to its wanton ways having first felt it\'s prick.
A fine ending to the day once the currys digested.
Creating the right romantic mood and finding a suitable venue is I imagine (because I am so out of touch) quite a challenge these days and after lockdown who the heck can afford to dine out somewhere posh.
Ah but I have my memories which your poem brings slinking back. Those actual romantic times are truly a treasure and long may they be sought and found for all future generations to hold high in their cherished memories.
May 27th, 2022 12:13
Sensing.
Neville said:
seriously bloomin lovely .. didn\'t they once used to say roses grow on you :) x
May 27th, 2022 09:36
Neville said:
seriously bloomin lovely .. didn\'t they once used to say roses grow on you :) x
May 27th, 2022 09:36
Sensing.
Accidental Poet said:
Love strikes when least expected Fay. Wonderful write. 😊
May 27th, 2022 07:47
Accidental Poet said:
Love strikes when least expected Fay. Wonderful write. 😊
May 27th, 2022 07:47
Sensing.
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
and in June\'s PRIDE
we get to celebrate
the embattled, freedom
for all sexual preferences
to enjoy, such moments..
a Timely and poignant, read
thank you! dear Fay
so deliciously worded:
\'sensing closeness
on the brink of something
bigger than, then
and as everyone knows
love struck, again\'
May 27th, 2022 06:22
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful!
and in June\'s PRIDE
we get to celebrate
the embattled, freedom
for all sexual preferences
to enjoy, such moments..
a Timely and poignant, read
thank you! dear Fay
so deliciously worded:
\'sensing closeness
on the brink of something
bigger than, then
and as everyone knows
love struck, again\'
May 27th, 2022 06:22
Sensing.
orchidee said:
I met a gal, but rather ruined things.
In the middle of saying sweet nothings, as this couple may be, I said \'Oh no, I forgot to buy me new long johns before the sale ends!\' heehee.
May 27th, 2022 05:58
orchidee said:
I met a gal, but rather ruined things.
In the middle of saying sweet nothings, as this couple may be, I said \'Oh no, I forgot to buy me new long johns before the sale ends!\' heehee.
May 27th, 2022 05:58
Sensing.
arqios said:
A rose by any other name... Such a tender piece but filled with such anticipation and laced with such a connection. Truly a poem to relish. Thanks for sharing, Faye. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:49
arqios said:
A rose by any other name... Such a tender piece but filled with such anticipation and laced with such a connection. Truly a poem to relish. Thanks for sharing, Faye. /Rik.
May 27th, 2022 04:49
One More
Neville said:
my word Fay, what a delightful trip down memory lane you just took me on .. back to tadpolling days in Dallington & down Kingsthorpe Mill .. and then later to my biology class with Miss Weaver .. and moving forward in time to those happiest days when I took my own kids tadpolling too ... what could possibly be better than the simple things and nature eh\' ..................... x
May 26th, 2022 02:25
Neville said:
my word Fay, what a delightful trip down memory lane you just took me on .. back to tadpolling days in Dallington & down Kingsthorpe Mill .. and then later to my biology class with Miss Weaver .. and moving forward in time to those happiest days when I took my own kids tadpolling too ... what could possibly be better than the simple things and nature eh\' ..................... x
May 26th, 2022 02:25
One More
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay on the wonder that Nature can bring to our lives.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:24
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay on the wonder that Nature can bring to our lives.
Andy
May 26th, 2022 00:24
One More
Rozina said:
Did this in school too. It was so exciting for us. This brings back lots of school memories, biology, science.
May 25th, 2022 21:06
Rozina said:
Did this in school too. It was so exciting for us. This brings back lots of school memories, biology, science.
May 25th, 2022 21:06
One More
orchidee said:
I\'m liking one more of your poems Fay - this one!
Frogspawn at school = that tapioca stuff! Maybe an age-related thing, depending on when we were at school?
May 25th, 2022 07:03
orchidee said:
I\'m liking one more of your poems Fay - this one!
Frogspawn at school = that tapioca stuff! Maybe an age-related thing, depending on when we were at school?
May 25th, 2022 07:03
One More
JudyStella said:
A creative poem of nature ❤️ Just brought to my memory that time when I recited a poem about tadpoles in elementary school. Thank you for this beautiful piece of work!
May 25th, 2022 06:44
JudyStella said:
A creative poem of nature ❤️ Just brought to my memory that time when I recited a poem about tadpoles in elementary school. Thank you for this beautiful piece of work!
May 25th, 2022 06:44
One More
dusk arising said:
I remember as a schoolboy how someone would bring in a wodge of frogspawn and teacer would find an aquarium where it was plonked and over the weeks we watched the hatching tadpoles turn into tiny little frogs. Wonderful.
There was a pond in a field along the lane where we used to watch and catch common and crested newts amid the frogs. I suppose the newts dined upon the tadpoles but we never gave that sort of thing a second thought.
Isn\'t it great when poetry spurs memories. Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2022 05:09
dusk arising said:
I remember as a schoolboy how someone would bring in a wodge of frogspawn and teacer would find an aquarium where it was plonked and over the weeks we watched the hatching tadpoles turn into tiny little frogs. Wonderful.
There was a pond in a field along the lane where we used to watch and catch common and crested newts amid the frogs. I suppose the newts dined upon the tadpoles but we never gave that sort of thing a second thought.
Isn\'t it great when poetry spurs memories. Thank you Fay.
May 25th, 2022 05:09
Seasoned.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , Fay 🙂soft gentle lovely words .. liked reading this . Spring can be so nice . It was raining a lot here yesterday and thundering at times .. never like it
May 25th, 2022 01:18
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Beautiful poem , Fay 🙂soft gentle lovely words .. liked reading this . Spring can be so nice . It was raining a lot here yesterday and thundering at times .. never like it
May 25th, 2022 01:18
Seasoned.
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be poeticizing. What a lovely capture of a fresh Spring day as seen through a window. \"while sunlight races to split open more\" is a great phrase. Your \"wakening\" has made my day. Loved it.- Phil A.
May 24th, 2022 18:23
MendedFences27 said:
Oh, the season brings, bird songs and flowerings. Oh, I must be poeticizing. What a lovely capture of a fresh Spring day as seen through a window. \"while sunlight races to split open more\" is a great phrase. Your \"wakening\" has made my day. Loved it.- Phil A.
May 24th, 2022 18:23
Seasoned.
dusk arising said:
Eee by \'eck luv.. Tha\'s gorrit in but a few lines. Glory be!
Fay, you are like the springtime itself in poetic form. I knew something was missing and then i read this. You have a magic which captures the essence of the thing.
May 24th, 2022 10:54
dusk arising said:
Eee by \'eck luv.. Tha\'s gorrit in but a few lines. Glory be!
Fay, you are like the springtime itself in poetic form. I knew something was missing and then i read this. You have a magic which captures the essence of the thing.
May 24th, 2022 10:54
Seasoned.
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Fay, what a marvelous view. I wish for the day in which I can find that peace with nature, and just unwind all my tribulations onto a trellis window.
May 24th, 2022 09:23
Rocky Lagou said:
Wow Fay, what a marvelous view. I wish for the day in which I can find that peace with nature, and just unwind all my tribulations onto a trellis window.
May 24th, 2022 09:23
Seasoned.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nature\'s aesthetic, seasonings
in our ever-so, visceral Lives...\'
Brilliant! dear Fay
as-ever
May 24th, 2022 06:15
L. B. Mek said:
\'Nature\'s aesthetic, seasonings
in our ever-so, visceral Lives...\'
Brilliant! dear Fay
as-ever
May 24th, 2022 06:15
Seasoned.
Distant View said:
Spring is a joyous season! Visual delights, coupled with a sense of optimism! We all need optimism - especially in the worrying world of 2022! A highly enjoyable read, Fay!
May 24th, 2022 04:40
Distant View said:
Spring is a joyous season! Visual delights, coupled with a sense of optimism! We all need optimism - especially in the worrying world of 2022! A highly enjoyable read, Fay!
May 24th, 2022 04:40
Seasoned.
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay showing Nature in all its glory.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 02:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay showing Nature in all its glory.
Andy
May 24th, 2022 02:55
Diversity
Neville said:
I\'m with all them who visited before me .................................. Neville x
May 24th, 2022 02:35
Neville said:
I\'m with all them who visited before me .................................. Neville x
May 24th, 2022 02:35
Seasoned.
Neville said:
Spring is well n truly sprung .. your words here are truly uplifting Fay .. thank you and kindly after a very long day ...................... Neville x
May 24th, 2022 02:32
Neville said:
Spring is well n truly sprung .. your words here are truly uplifting Fay .. thank you and kindly after a very long day ...................... Neville x
May 24th, 2022 02:32
Seasoned.
Rozina said:
How lovely to see this through the window on waking up in the morning. I wish I could. I\'ll read it again in the morning and imagine the scene.....
May 24th, 2022 02:31
Rozina said:
How lovely to see this through the window on waking up in the morning. I wish I could. I\'ll read it again in the morning and imagine the scene.....
May 24th, 2022 02:31
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