Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
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spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful dear poet
So well you connect to Mother Nature….
November 3rd, 2021 08:53
spilleronsheet said:
Wonderful dear poet
So well you connect to Mother Nature….
November 3rd, 2021 08:53
Year\'s Yield.
Neville said:
this was not just hastily thrown together was it .. but superbly sown upon what would otherwise have been the barren plain of an empty page .............. my word, that\'s some harvest you just laid on me ... x
November 3rd, 2021 08:44
Neville said:
this was not just hastily thrown together was it .. but superbly sown upon what would otherwise have been the barren plain of an empty page .............. my word, that\'s some harvest you just laid on me ... x
November 3rd, 2021 08:44
Year\'s Yield.
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno, Harvest seems to last from mid-September until about a fortnight before Christmas! Well, not quite - say the end of October! lol.
November 3rd, 2021 06:50
orchidee said:
Well, I dunno, Harvest seems to last from mid-September until about a fortnight before Christmas! Well, not quite - say the end of October! lol.
November 3rd, 2021 06:50
Year\'s Yield.
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The sentiment of appreciating the seasons, and just life itself. Life becomes so much lighter when we do - Well written, fellow Poet!
November 3rd, 2021 05:11
Garth Rakumakoe said:
The sentiment of appreciating the seasons, and just life itself. Life becomes so much lighter when we do - Well written, fellow Poet!
November 3rd, 2021 05:11
Year\'s Yield.
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, we must always prepare for the future.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 04:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, we must always prepare for the future.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 04:50
Year\'s Yield.
spilleronsheet said:
A well scripted poetry dear Fay
The turning of seasons you captured so gracefully
I got enveloped in the words of yours and forgot the seasons as it grows
Have a great day ahead dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 04:28
spilleronsheet said:
A well scripted poetry dear Fay
The turning of seasons you captured so gracefully
I got enveloped in the words of yours and forgot the seasons as it grows
Have a great day ahead dear poet
November 3rd, 2021 04:28
Unlock
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Muse unlock many words in our lives Fay.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:34
Goldfinch60 said:
May that Muse unlock many words in our lives Fay.
Andy
November 3rd, 2021 01:34
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Neville said:
Those words in your header are are awesome .................
and I\'m with Mek as far as \'Unlock\' is concerned .. that\'s awesome too ... x
November 2nd, 2021 17:01
Neville said:
Those words in your header are are awesome .................
and I\'m with Mek as far as \'Unlock\' is concerned .. that\'s awesome too ... x
November 2nd, 2021 17:01
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orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in unlocking! Well, I know now!
I didn\'t quite get the hang of that quote. I tried a new path, and fell in a ditch! lol. The Perils of Orchi, or Porchi, as some call me.
November 2nd, 2021 10:50
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in unlocking! Well, I know now!
I didn\'t quite get the hang of that quote. I tried a new path, and fell in a ditch! lol. The Perils of Orchi, or Porchi, as some call me.
November 2nd, 2021 10:50
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spilleronsheet said:
It gave me the feel of the “Road not taken”
What an inquisitive mind you hold
With pen flowing with strokes
Such a deep insight dear poet you made a beautiful painting outside
Lovely
Thank you for sharing dear poet …
November 2nd, 2021 10:20
spilleronsheet said:
It gave me the feel of the “Road not taken”
What an inquisitive mind you hold
With pen flowing with strokes
Such a deep insight dear poet you made a beautiful painting outside
Lovely
Thank you for sharing dear poet …
November 2nd, 2021 10:20
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L. B. Mek said:
\'Break with staid
and let oddity, strip
tightly laced
then unrestraint, is able
to better
stretch credulity.\'..
(to the unknown, lets march dear Fay
side by side
sharing in this intoxication
of Poetic, inquisitive integrity
let us unmask
with pen in-hand,
all the miracles
in the white spaces of worth
in all that we ink,
and aspire to express, emote and portray
in this, our Poetry
of inked sincerity, to find meaning
in this thing
we celebrate with every breadth;
this embattled existence
of unquantifiable wondrousness: we\'ve titled, Life!)
November 2nd, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'Break with staid
and let oddity, strip
tightly laced
then unrestraint, is able
to better
stretch credulity.\'..
(to the unknown, lets march dear Fay
side by side
sharing in this intoxication
of Poetic, inquisitive integrity
let us unmask
with pen in-hand,
all the miracles
in the white spaces of worth
in all that we ink,
and aspire to express, emote and portray
in this, our Poetry
of inked sincerity, to find meaning
in this thing
we celebrate with every breadth;
this embattled existence
of unquantifiable wondrousness: we\'ve titled, Life!)
November 2nd, 2021 05:58
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dusk arising said:
LOL preaching to the converted here, I\'m everyday weird and try to think outside the box.
But isn\'t that a lot of what a modern poet is? Finding ones own perculiar way to achieve something. Originality of insight certainly abounds in your poetry Fay.
November 2nd, 2021 05:54
dusk arising said:
LOL preaching to the converted here, I\'m everyday weird and try to think outside the box.
But isn\'t that a lot of what a modern poet is? Finding ones own perculiar way to achieve something. Originality of insight certainly abounds in your poetry Fay.
November 2nd, 2021 05:54
Too Long
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it has been a bit damp here in Worcestershire as d a has said but at least I did not have to overcome any floods this time so all is well.
Good words Fay showing the way things can be in the pouring rain.
Andy
November 2nd, 2021 01:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes it has been a bit damp here in Worcestershire as d a has said but at least I did not have to overcome any floods this time so all is well.
Good words Fay showing the way things can be in the pouring rain.
Andy
November 2nd, 2021 01:22
Too Long
Paul Bell said:
Did we sort of walk into winter this year, autumn leaves have either been cleaned away very quickly or they\'re still on the trees? Mind you, the rain has been a bit rainy lately.
November 1st, 2021 11:06
Paul Bell said:
Did we sort of walk into winter this year, autumn leaves have either been cleaned away very quickly or they\'re still on the trees? Mind you, the rain has been a bit rainy lately.
November 1st, 2021 11:06
Too Long
Doggerel Dave said:
Great mood and atmosphere there, Fay - something I know quite well - Still, it can be some consolation that it spreads itself, and doesn\'t all come down in one 24 hours....
November 1st, 2021 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
Great mood and atmosphere there, Fay - something I know quite well - Still, it can be some consolation that it spreads itself, and doesn\'t all come down in one 24 hours....
November 1st, 2021 07:35
Too Long
L. B. Mek said:
its funny, but here
in our blinkered
concrete of a curtained-off, city existence
we choose to see the romance
in the rainy season\'s
look out of our windows
once we\'ve showered and changed into something dry,
pitying those poor, unlucky
still forging a path through those stormy conditions, we just escaped
sipping, from our cup of hot beverage
or something distilled, to heat us up, from deep inside..
but never, ever
wondering
about those thousands of families, we rely upon
to feed us, year in and year out
for whom this very same weather conditions
can equate to losses, not merely in profit margins
but their way of life...
(thanks for sharing, dear Fay)
November 1st, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
its funny, but here
in our blinkered
concrete of a curtained-off, city existence
we choose to see the romance
in the rainy season\'s
look out of our windows
once we\'ve showered and changed into something dry,
pitying those poor, unlucky
still forging a path through those stormy conditions, we just escaped
sipping, from our cup of hot beverage
or something distilled, to heat us up, from deep inside..
but never, ever
wondering
about those thousands of families, we rely upon
to feed us, year in and year out
for whom this very same weather conditions
can equate to losses, not merely in profit margins
but their way of life...
(thanks for sharing, dear Fay)
November 1st, 2021 07:23
Too Long
spilleronsheet said:
What a wonderful poetry dear poet
You aired the grievances of the climate change so well
The long rains can create huge problems
So well crafted
November 1st, 2021 07:19
spilleronsheet said:
What a wonderful poetry dear poet
You aired the grievances of the climate change so well
The long rains can create huge problems
So well crafted
November 1st, 2021 07:19
Too Long
Neville said:
we expect a bit o wet at this time o year dont we. but hey .. someone\'s having a larf aint they ... masterfully written mistress Fay .. I am indeed moistly overcome ............. x
November 1st, 2021 06:54
Neville said:
we expect a bit o wet at this time o year dont we. but hey .. someone\'s having a larf aint they ... masterfully written mistress Fay .. I am indeed moistly overcome ............. x
November 1st, 2021 06:54
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dusk arising said:
What a delightfully miserable picture you paint today. Immediately I enjoy more the sunshine on my shoulders through a window here in falling Worcestershire.
Great use of words to create the gloomy feeling drizzly misery drapes across the land dearest poet.
November 1st, 2021 04:51
dusk arising said:
What a delightfully miserable picture you paint today. Immediately I enjoy more the sunshine on my shoulders through a window here in falling Worcestershire.
Great use of words to create the gloomy feeling drizzly misery drapes across the land dearest poet.
November 1st, 2021 04:51
Best
Neville said:
This is hot stuff Fay .. maybe too hot for an old fella to handle .. so well poemed tho\' I am sure some geezer out there is gonna be bright pink and gushing warmly all day .. x
October 31st, 2021 04:19
Neville said:
This is hot stuff Fay .. maybe too hot for an old fella to handle .. so well poemed tho\' I am sure some geezer out there is gonna be bright pink and gushing warmly all day .. x
October 31st, 2021 04:19
Sounds
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a lovely read , Fay 🙂🌸
Beautiful . I read it a few times …
There is such comfort and softness in these words of yours
October 31st, 2021 02:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Such a lovely read , Fay 🙂🌸
Beautiful . I read it a few times …
There is such comfort and softness in these words of yours
October 31st, 2021 02:41
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Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Love, love, love…
What a wonderful word…
What a wonderful feeling…
What a wonderful gift!
A beautiful read,
to say the least.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
October 31st, 2021 00:10
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
Love, love, love…
What a wonderful word…
What a wonderful feeling…
What a wonderful gift!
A beautiful read,
to say the least.
Thank you for sharing the gift of your pen.
Laura🌻
October 31st, 2021 00:10
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SureshG said:
While the fire of lust is easily quenched
The fire of true love cannot be drenched
and your poetry proves it again and again
October 30th, 2021 20:12
SureshG said:
While the fire of lust is easily quenched
The fire of true love cannot be drenched
and your poetry proves it again and again
October 30th, 2021 20:12
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Paul Bell said:
Okay step back from the man quencher, you don\'t know where he\'s been. Actually, step forward to the man quencher, who cares where he\'s been.
October 30th, 2021 04:05
Paul Bell said:
Okay step back from the man quencher, you don\'t know where he\'s been. Actually, step forward to the man quencher, who cares where he\'s been.
October 30th, 2021 04:05
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dusk arising said:
My word, what have you been drinking? There\'s a lot of love in your poetry lately.... who is he?
Hope springs eternal for a conclusion of love here but i don\'t mind admitting i\'m hiding from it.
October 30th, 2021 03:03
dusk arising said:
My word, what have you been drinking? There\'s a lot of love in your poetry lately.... who is he?
Hope springs eternal for a conclusion of love here but i don\'t mind admitting i\'m hiding from it.
October 30th, 2021 03:03
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