Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Listeners
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words can come to us in the strangest of places and 3 o\'clock in the morning seems to be the time that many words come to us. Perhaps that when Calliope is awake.
Good words Fay.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Those words can come to us in the strangest of places and 3 o\'clock in the morning seems to be the time that many words come to us. Perhaps that when Calliope is awake.
Good words Fay.
Andy
October 23rd, 2021 00:35
Mutation
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
I personally am interested in how the processes in native can be metaphors for pretty much anything . I would love to do a piece together with this theme, how about it ?
October 22nd, 2021 15:18
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
I personally am interested in how the processes in native can be metaphors for pretty much anything . I would love to do a piece together with this theme, how about it ?
October 22nd, 2021 15:18
Bargaining
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
Innocence kicking the sand.
Troubled girl praying as men haul in vessels.
This is something that stopped time for me.
You may be one the most relatable poets I’ve had the pleasure of coming across in a while., interesting, how that style comes to fruition. Any thoughts on this observation?
October 22nd, 2021 15:15
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
Innocence kicking the sand.
Troubled girl praying as men haul in vessels.
This is something that stopped time for me.
You may be one the most relatable poets I’ve had the pleasure of coming across in a while., interesting, how that style comes to fruition. Any thoughts on this observation?
October 22nd, 2021 15:15
Bargaining
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
Innocence kicking the sand.
Troubled girl praying as men haul in vessels.
This is something that stopped time for me.
You may be one the most relatable poets I’ve had the pleasure of coming across in a while., interesting, how that style comes to fruition. Any thoughts on this observation?
October 22nd, 2021 15:15
Bill Smith Parker Sr. said:
Innocence kicking the sand.
Troubled girl praying as men haul in vessels.
This is something that stopped time for me.
You may be one the most relatable poets I’ve had the pleasure of coming across in a while., interesting, how that style comes to fruition. Any thoughts on this observation?
October 22nd, 2021 15:15
Listeners
Neville said:
even a double cocktail of Horlicks & nitrazepam plus a couple of herbal Nytol thrown in gets in the way of my muse when she wants to have her way .................................. :) x
October 22nd, 2021 07:21
Neville said:
even a double cocktail of Horlicks & nitrazepam plus a couple of herbal Nytol thrown in gets in the way of my muse when she wants to have her way .................................. :) x
October 22nd, 2021 07:21
Listeners
L. B. Mek said:
\'on some passing ideal where
behind screens
another reality exists hiding
behind norm ;
glowing in *poetic alchemy\'..
and I for one, am all ears, dear Fay
a wonderful write,
loved the whole \'hitch a night ride\' metaphor, as well;
and is today Calliope\'s day, cos Andy mentioned her as well?
but lets spare a thought, for those poor sisters, forgotten
in the shade of that shinning Calliope, 😞
lol
October 22nd, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'on some passing ideal where
behind screens
another reality exists hiding
behind norm ;
glowing in *poetic alchemy\'..
and I for one, am all ears, dear Fay
a wonderful write,
loved the whole \'hitch a night ride\' metaphor, as well;
and is today Calliope\'s day, cos Andy mentioned her as well?
but lets spare a thought, for those poor sisters, forgotten
in the shade of that shinning Calliope, 😞
lol
October 22nd, 2021 05:30
Listeners
dusk arising said:
That just about sums up my muse and me. Scribblers in the early hours we be.
October 22nd, 2021 03:31
dusk arising said:
That just about sums up my muse and me. Scribblers in the early hours we be.
October 22nd, 2021 03:31
Mutation
Goldfinch60 said:
May that applause for Autumn keep her coming back for more applause Fay.
Andy
October 22nd, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May that applause for Autumn keep her coming back for more applause Fay.
Andy
October 22nd, 2021 00:45
Mutation
dusk arising said:
And what a bow this flourish of autumnal beauty presents to our eye before the stark colours of winter once again teach us appreciation.
Seductive poetry of the wild Fay.
October 21st, 2021 06:37
dusk arising said:
And what a bow this flourish of autumnal beauty presents to our eye before the stark colours of winter once again teach us appreciation.
Seductive poetry of the wild Fay.
October 21st, 2021 06:37
Mutation
L. B. Mek said:
sumptuously worded, yet again dear Fay
such a wonderful reading experience and a beautifully weaved take
of comparative analogy
juxtaposing the serene grace in nature\'s autumnal season,
aside humanity\'s current claustrophobically \'melancholic\' climate,
thank you!
October 21st, 2021 06:20
L. B. Mek said:
sumptuously worded, yet again dear Fay
such a wonderful reading experience and a beautifully weaved take
of comparative analogy
juxtaposing the serene grace in nature\'s autumnal season,
aside humanity\'s current claustrophobically \'melancholic\' climate,
thank you!
October 21st, 2021 06:20
Mutation
Neville said:
She sure has got hold and is tightening her golden grip, even as I type ... it seems we think on similar lines the fine mane ...................... beautiful as always ma\'am both poem and autumn herself ... x
October 21st, 2021 04:10
Neville said:
She sure has got hold and is tightening her golden grip, even as I type ... it seems we think on similar lines the fine mane ...................... beautiful as always ma\'am both poem and autumn herself ... x
October 21st, 2021 04:10
Lessons
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we must always keep moving forward and that wonder of life will be with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, we must always keep moving forward and that wonder of life will be with us.
Andy
October 21st, 2021 00:53
Lessons
Neville said:
Sounds so darn good when both read out loud and again in my head ..
and a real treat for these tired old eyes .. x4 perfectly formed three lined stanzas ..
now permanently pinned to this particular page and ever ripe for re-visiting ................... Neville x
October 20th, 2021 11:55
Neville said:
Sounds so darn good when both read out loud and again in my head ..
and a real treat for these tired old eyes .. x4 perfectly formed three lined stanzas ..
now permanently pinned to this particular page and ever ripe for re-visiting ................... Neville x
October 20th, 2021 11:55
Beautiful
MendedFences27 said:
To see such beauty in the evening sky and to capture it so eloquently is truly a wonder. Have seen the \"fading rainbow dances\" several times, but the rest that you describe I thank you for letting me experience it through your poetry. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:28
MendedFences27 said:
To see such beauty in the evening sky and to capture it so eloquently is truly a wonder. Have seen the \"fading rainbow dances\" several times, but the rest that you describe I thank you for letting me experience it through your poetry. - Phil A.
October 19th, 2021 18:28
Beautiful
Neville said:
... :)
in a single word, your title say\'s it all ... :) x
... :)
October 19th, 2021 09:19
Neville said:
... :)
in a single word, your title say\'s it all ... :) x
... :)
October 19th, 2021 09:19
Beautiful
L. B. Mek said:
who needs, an Astronaut\'s training or a plain ticket
to experience: Flight
when we can just read your poetry and close our eyes, dear Fay...
a rainbow of gratitude, your way!
October 19th, 2021 06:09
L. B. Mek said:
who needs, an Astronaut\'s training or a plain ticket
to experience: Flight
when we can just read your poetry and close our eyes, dear Fay...
a rainbow of gratitude, your way!
October 19th, 2021 06:09
Lost
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be found soon and these wonderful words show the freedom in your heart.
Andy
October 19th, 2021 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
May that freedom be found soon and these wonderful words show the freedom in your heart.
Andy
October 19th, 2021 00:45
Lost
L. B. Mek said:
... \' but not - defiantly!
my lost sense of self\'...
(many caged, literally or by influence of restrictive barbaric mindset\'s (Sappho),
who refused to succumb
and instead
chose to poetically demonstrate
that the Caging of flesh, is nothing
compared
to the caging of our minds...)
a wonderful poem, dear Fay
oceans deep, in poetic brevity
October 18th, 2021 07:39
L. B. Mek said:
... \' but not - defiantly!
my lost sense of self\'...
(many caged, literally or by influence of restrictive barbaric mindset\'s (Sappho),
who refused to succumb
and instead
chose to poetically demonstrate
that the Caging of flesh, is nothing
compared
to the caging of our minds...)
a wonderful poem, dear Fay
oceans deep, in poetic brevity
October 18th, 2021 07:39
Lost
Neville said:
not only excellent, but more cleverer than clever word play ma\'am ...........x
October 18th, 2021 06:53
Neville said:
not only excellent, but more cleverer than clever word play ma\'am ...........x
October 18th, 2021 06:53
Moonbaiting.
Neville said:
Not only a brilliant title .. but the whole page seems to glow with a kind of gentle radiance I have come to both admire and respect and which seems to spill from your palm or your pen with remarkable regularity ... x
October 18th, 2021 03:02
Neville said:
Not only a brilliant title .. but the whole page seems to glow with a kind of gentle radiance I have come to both admire and respect and which seems to spill from your palm or your pen with remarkable regularity ... x
October 18th, 2021 03:02
Coasting
Neville said:
made me smile no end ... well okay then, chuckle from end to end .. :) x
October 18th, 2021 02:45
Neville said:
made me smile no end ... well okay then, chuckle from end to end .. :) x
October 18th, 2021 02:45
Coasting
PrEm Ji said:
Neither Whiskey, nor Brandy, I consume the intoxication of your poetry!
October 17th, 2021 23:15
PrEm Ji said:
Neither Whiskey, nor Brandy, I consume the intoxication of your poetry!
October 17th, 2021 23:15
Coasting
orchidee said:
I too wash tipshy when writings a poemsh! lol. Good acting from both of us, innit? heehee.
October 16th, 2021 12:06
orchidee said:
I too wash tipshy when writings a poemsh! lol. Good acting from both of us, innit? heehee.
October 16th, 2021 12:06
Coasting
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking it ain\'t housework. lol
Where was randy Annie when I need her.
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking it ain\'t housework. lol
Where was randy Annie when I need her.
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Coasting
Goldfinch60 said:
So you drink Irish Whiskey not Scottish Whisky Fay.
Good fun write.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So you drink Irish Whiskey not Scottish Whisky Fay.
Good fun write.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Solutions
Neville said:
.. One does not have to hit the heart shaped like button to know that these words hold the solution to a question asked untold times around the globe .. However, I have hit it so many times now that am beginning to feel rather guilty ........ Penned with customary Fay Slimm prowess, if you don\'t mind me just sayin ............ Ah\' tis good to be back ma\'am .... :) x
October 15th, 2021 09:16
Neville said:
.. One does not have to hit the heart shaped like button to know that these words hold the solution to a question asked untold times around the globe .. However, I have hit it so many times now that am beginning to feel rather guilty ........ Penned with customary Fay Slimm prowess, if you don\'t mind me just sayin ............ Ah\' tis good to be back ma\'am .... :) x
October 15th, 2021 09:16
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