Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Be To Me
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
You want me to sing to you for eternity? It\'ll be torture for ya! I\'m a wag. lol.
November 23rd, 2021 03:12
orchidee said:
A fine write Fay.
You want me to sing to you for eternity? It\'ll be torture for ya! I\'m a wag. lol.
November 23rd, 2021 03:12
This Time
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia and the graceful acceptance of circumstance flow through me as I read your so well composed post today.
I suppose ageing and having lived a bit give us that grace to accept as our lives change and the taken for granted surrounding become ever dearer to our very existence as we blend with the turn of nature itself.
I know I shall want this for keeps, into my favourites for sure.
November 22nd, 2021 06:43
dusk arising said:
Nostalgia and the graceful acceptance of circumstance flow through me as I read your so well composed post today.
I suppose ageing and having lived a bit give us that grace to accept as our lives change and the taken for granted surrounding become ever dearer to our very existence as we blend with the turn of nature itself.
I know I shall want this for keeps, into my favourites for sure.
November 22nd, 2021 06:43
This Time
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bound by hilly heathers
this gentlest of valleys, strikes
tired heartstrings
when mem\'ries, start sinking.\'
(makes me want to get-up
put together a hiking backpack
and just get lost, in the hills
of our beloved Blighty\'s, abundant
Nature paths, to gift myself
a seasonal, last hurrah
healing escapade
before Winter, rushes-in
and makes it all
a pipe dream) lol
loved the way you accentuated, the intuitive conversational elements
that bonding with nature, sometimes yields
a great write, dear Fay
November 22nd, 2021 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'Bound by hilly heathers
this gentlest of valleys, strikes
tired heartstrings
when mem\'ries, start sinking.\'
(makes me want to get-up
put together a hiking backpack
and just get lost, in the hills
of our beloved Blighty\'s, abundant
Nature paths, to gift myself
a seasonal, last hurrah
healing escapade
before Winter, rushes-in
and makes it all
a pipe dream) lol
loved the way you accentuated, the intuitive conversational elements
that bonding with nature, sometimes yields
a great write, dear Fay
November 22nd, 2021 06:36
This Time
Doggerel Dave said:
Lost for words here, Fay - I can feel it - the embrace and rightness of this place. ...but appropriate expression not available to me. Your poem however.....
November 22nd, 2021 05:52
Doggerel Dave said:
Lost for words here, Fay - I can feel it - the embrace and rightness of this place. ...but appropriate expression not available to me. Your poem however.....
November 22nd, 2021 05:52
This Time
spilleronsheet said:
This sounds so energetic
It gave me feels of a traveller, a dreamer
And the words ornamented so well
Loved these lines of yours-
“Need\'s deep insistence pierces absence,
punctures stale failure
as her feet turn again to seek familiar
away from ambition and
when previous pleasures of ghost-like
nostalgia rustle worn chains
with notions for freedom she decides
that this time she must stay. “
November 22nd, 2021 05:11
spilleronsheet said:
This sounds so energetic
It gave me feels of a traveller, a dreamer
And the words ornamented so well
Loved these lines of yours-
“Need\'s deep insistence pierces absence,
punctures stale failure
as her feet turn again to seek familiar
away from ambition and
when previous pleasures of ghost-like
nostalgia rustle worn chains
with notions for freedom she decides
that this time she must stay. “
November 22nd, 2021 05:11
This Time
Neville said:
I often wonder whether there is an awareness of the precise moment when something clicks and .. bingo, one just knows for sure that moment is now and a decision has been made without it being consciously thought ... so apart from the obvious beauty of your words today, that is the dreamy place they took me ...................
Neville ....................................... x
November 22nd, 2021 04:01
Neville said:
I often wonder whether there is an awareness of the precise moment when something clicks and .. bingo, one just knows for sure that moment is now and a decision has been made without it being consciously thought ... so apart from the obvious beauty of your words today, that is the dreamy place they took me ...................
Neville ....................................... x
November 22nd, 2021 04:01
This Time
orchidee said:
This time I am reading your poem and saying good write Fay!
November 22nd, 2021 03:23
orchidee said:
This time I am reading your poem and saying good write Fay!
November 22nd, 2021 03:23
This Time
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words of wonderful memories Fay.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words of wonderful memories Fay.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 02:43
Spellbound
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I think the question is how real or how virtual is virtual reality, especially where feelings are involved. A tricky one indeed. Very well depicted Fay.
November 22nd, 2021 02:37
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I think the question is how real or how virtual is virtual reality, especially where feelings are involved. A tricky one indeed. Very well depicted Fay.
November 22nd, 2021 02:37
Spellbound
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, love must be seen face to face to have the right feelings.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 01:59
Goldfinch60 said:
Very true Fay, love must be seen face to face to have the right feelings.
Andy
November 22nd, 2021 01:59
Spellbound
spilleronsheet said:
Well chosen concept
In today’s time when man has become so connected to Internet that love you bich was once a chance encounter on streets maybe have become common through a chance encounter on chat
Well crafted dear Fay
November 21st, 2021 18:43
spilleronsheet said:
Well chosen concept
In today’s time when man has become so connected to Internet that love you bich was once a chance encounter on streets maybe have become common through a chance encounter on chat
Well crafted dear Fay
November 21st, 2021 18:43
Spellbound
Caring dove said:
A good writing , Fay 🙂🌸 I like your choice of words . How can we truly have feelings for someone online , and without meeting them in person .. it’s completely different , although maybe it could happen I guess
November 21st, 2021 06:09
Caring dove said:
A good writing , Fay 🙂🌸 I like your choice of words . How can we truly have feelings for someone online , and without meeting them in person .. it’s completely different , although maybe it could happen I guess
November 21st, 2021 06:09
Spellbound
dusk arising said:
Deep feelings in virtual relationships are a fools game. I\'ve been that fool.
A wise warning in these days of virtual anything.
November 21st, 2021 06:03
dusk arising said:
Deep feelings in virtual relationships are a fools game. I\'ve been that fool.
A wise warning in these days of virtual anything.
November 21st, 2021 06:03
Spellbound
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written - you must have volumes of poetry like this deserving great recognition.
November 21st, 2021 05:37
Michael Edwards said:
Beautifully written - you must have volumes of poetry like this deserving great recognition.
November 21st, 2021 05:37
Spellbound
Neville said:
.. Wise words woven well .. and that\'s an understatement if ever there was .. .. x
November 21st, 2021 04:35
Neville said:
.. Wise words woven well .. and that\'s an understatement if ever there was .. .. x
November 21st, 2021 04:35
Sensuality
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, belly dancing is great to watch.
Andy
November 21st, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good one Fay, belly dancing is great to watch.
Andy
November 21st, 2021 01:47
Sensuality
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I felt every sway and movement there, Fay. A silhouette-like flow to your structure as well. Beautiful!
November 20th, 2021 18:02
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I felt every sway and movement there, Fay. A silhouette-like flow to your structure as well. Beautiful!
November 20th, 2021 18:02
Sensuality
spilleronsheet said:
Well it may be pleasing to eye
But dancing to tune is just a different thing
Well crafted dear Fay
November 20th, 2021 11:35
spilleronsheet said:
Well it may be pleasing to eye
But dancing to tune is just a different thing
Well crafted dear Fay
November 20th, 2021 11:35
Sensuality
dusk arising said:
mmmm sensuality indeed but.... i recall asa 16 year old accompanying my sister to the local coal miners pub on a saturday night whereupon at the end of the evening a somewhat large lady gained a table top to much applause and after removing several garments proceeded to perform her belly dance. Sensual it was not.
So, starting agian, it\'s not just the dance, but the dancer and her style I\'m thinking.
Now look what a mess you\'ve gotten me into Ms Slimm. Stop that wriggling and put those robes back on.
Definitely an attempt to unnerve the male of the MPS contingent today.
November 20th, 2021 10:53
dusk arising said:
mmmm sensuality indeed but.... i recall asa 16 year old accompanying my sister to the local coal miners pub on a saturday night whereupon at the end of the evening a somewhat large lady gained a table top to much applause and after removing several garments proceeded to perform her belly dance. Sensual it was not.
So, starting agian, it\'s not just the dance, but the dancer and her style I\'m thinking.
Now look what a mess you\'ve gotten me into Ms Slimm. Stop that wriggling and put those robes back on.
Definitely an attempt to unnerve the male of the MPS contingent today.
November 20th, 2021 10:53
Sensuality
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a bit o eastern promise now can ya folks ... penned to perfection mistress Fay ... and quite made this reader come over all hot under the collar and unnecessary .. x
November 20th, 2021 08:25
Neville said:
you can beat an egg, but you just can\'t beat a bit o eastern promise now can ya folks ... penned to perfection mistress Fay ... and quite made this reader come over all hot under the collar and unnecessary .. x
November 20th, 2021 08:25
Sensuality
Paul Bell said:
Nearly went for a naked run in your honour there, Fay. Though I did do a belly dance running down a hill once.
November 20th, 2021 08:05
Paul Bell said:
Nearly went for a naked run in your honour there, Fay. Though I did do a belly dance running down a hill once.
November 20th, 2021 08:05
Sensuality
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh...............................................................Oh where am I?
Thank you Fay................................
November 20th, 2021 03:54
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh...............................................................Oh where am I?
Thank you Fay................................
November 20th, 2021 03:54
Never Enough
Caring dove said:
Very lovely words 🙂🌸 beautiful poem Fay .., such softness I’m your words
November 19th, 2021 13:04
Caring dove said:
Very lovely words 🙂🌸 beautiful poem Fay .., such softness I’m your words
November 19th, 2021 13:04
Never Enough
Neville said:
superbly stated throughout as one has long come to expect from such a mistress of words .. but that concluding line - \'to the wonder of sense-satisfaction\' simply left me gagging for more ........................ x
November 19th, 2021 08:08
Neville said:
superbly stated throughout as one has long come to expect from such a mistress of words .. but that concluding line - \'to the wonder of sense-satisfaction\' simply left me gagging for more ........................ x
November 19th, 2021 08:08
Never Enough
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Fay
You gave me a nostalgia
I wish to play
Play on the beach
Running behind the waves
Sinking deep in the sand that lay astray
Wonderfully penned
I could feel each line in a different way
November 19th, 2021 07:14
spilleronsheet said:
Dear Fay
You gave me a nostalgia
I wish to play
Play on the beach
Running behind the waves
Sinking deep in the sand that lay astray
Wonderfully penned
I could feel each line in a different way
November 19th, 2021 07:14
Never Enough
dusk arising said:
One thought says put down that book pf learning and go out there to feel the sand between your toes. Only then can you return to the book and KNOW what the many textures of sand wet and dry feel like in welcome and unwelcome places against our flesh of experience.
Love the lustful energy of the last verse.
November 19th, 2021 05:57
dusk arising said:
One thought says put down that book pf learning and go out there to feel the sand between your toes. Only then can you return to the book and KNOW what the many textures of sand wet and dry feel like in welcome and unwelcome places against our flesh of experience.
Love the lustful energy of the last verse.
November 19th, 2021 05:57
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