Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Reminders
dusk arising said:
Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking in such painted atmosphere and felt the dusk advance the waiting winter\'s air as late hurry took me toward stoveside warmth.
Yep, felt this one poet. You sure can paint them Fay.
September 21st, 2021 05:30
dusk arising said:
Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking in such painted atmosphere and felt the dusk advance the waiting winter\'s air as late hurry took me toward stoveside warmth.
Yep, felt this one poet. You sure can paint them Fay.
September 21st, 2021 05:30
Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those bridges in life MUST BE built together Fay.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those bridges in life MUST BE built together Fay.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:54
Bridges
Accidental Poet said:
Very inspiring write Fay. Reminds me of a song by a mother/daughter singing duo \"The Judds\". The song of \"Love Can Build a Bridge\".
https://youtu.be/bWdjRJGhYbs
September 20th, 2021 19:02
Accidental Poet said:
Very inspiring write Fay. Reminds me of a song by a mother/daughter singing duo \"The Judds\". The song of \"Love Can Build a Bridge\".
https://youtu.be/bWdjRJGhYbs
September 20th, 2021 19:02
Bridges
Doggerel Dave said:
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the United Nations....
Beautiful frameable piece, Fay.
September 20th, 2021 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the United Nations....
Beautiful frameable piece, Fay.
September 20th, 2021 18:25
Bridges
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Forgiveness solid foundation for bridges.
September 20th, 2021 09:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Forgiveness solid foundation for bridges.
September 20th, 2021 09:45
Bridges
dusk arising said:
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a deep sorrow. Two again become one, healing as a wound closes over and no scar remains.
September 20th, 2021 07:59
dusk arising said:
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a deep sorrow. Two again become one, healing as a wound closes over and no scar remains.
September 20th, 2021 07:59
Bridges
Neville said:
This is as near to perfect as it gets ..
a succinct message very much to the point and oh\' so meaningful ... Not only that though, it looks so bloomin good pinned as it is to the page ........................ Bravo Fay ... x
September 20th, 2021 07:01
Neville said:
This is as near to perfect as it gets ..
a succinct message very much to the point and oh\' so meaningful ... Not only that though, it looks so bloomin good pinned as it is to the page ........................ Bravo Fay ... x
September 20th, 2021 07:01
Favours
Neville said:
just my cuppa mead .. bless thee my lady ..................................................x
September 19th, 2021 12:00
Neville said:
just my cuppa mead .. bless thee my lady ..................................................x
September 19th, 2021 12:00
Favours
Michael Edwards said:
What a treat to see you haven\'t lost your unique poetic touch - great read dear Fay.
September 19th, 2021 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
What a treat to see you haven\'t lost your unique poetic touch - great read dear Fay.
September 19th, 2021 08:04
Favours
dusk arising said:
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s going to leap on someone....
Yeah forsooth and chivalry wi\' chips and mushy peas.
September 19th, 2021 05:00
dusk arising said:
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s going to leap on someone....
Yeah forsooth and chivalry wi\' chips and mushy peas.
September 19th, 2021 05:00
Favours
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely as every lady should! Splendid first Sunday morning read, thank you kindly. May you always shine brightly!
September 19th, 2021 04:51
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely as every lady should! Splendid first Sunday morning read, thank you kindly. May you always shine brightly!
September 19th, 2021 04:51
Who Knows ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay. We have that \'What if....\' again, what if we had not declared war......
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay. We have that \'What if....\' again, what if we had not declared war......
Andy
September 19th, 2021 00:22
Who Knows ?
Jerry Reynolds said:
Strong write, Fay.
We are wondering in some fragile times again.
September 18th, 2021 15:58
Jerry Reynolds said:
Strong write, Fay.
We are wondering in some fragile times again.
September 18th, 2021 15:58
Who Knows ?
orchidee said:
A bit of a different angle from me on this.
The words came to mind \'Honi Soit Qui Mal Y Pense\'. It appears the English version of this is: \'Evil be to him/her who evil thinks\'.
Yet I read a snippet in a book of \'the beauty of war\'. It jarred with me, I couldn\'t agree with it.
Bit of French there too (heehee)..
September 18th, 2021 11:32
orchidee said:
A bit of a different angle from me on this.
The words came to mind \'Honi Soit Qui Mal Y Pense\'. It appears the English version of this is: \'Evil be to him/her who evil thinks\'.
Yet I read a snippet in a book of \'the beauty of war\'. It jarred with me, I couldn\'t agree with it.
Bit of French there too (heehee)..
September 18th, 2021 11:32
Who Knows ?
Accidental Poet said:
Some wage war in efforts to gain for themselves. Some are dragged into war to defend themselves from being overtaken, but want only peace. Well penned Fay.
September 18th, 2021 10:59
Accidental Poet said:
Some wage war in efforts to gain for themselves. Some are dragged into war to defend themselves from being overtaken, but want only peace. Well penned Fay.
September 18th, 2021 10:59
Who Knows ?
Neville said:
You raise an interesting question that many may think they know the answer to .. But who can put their hand on their heart and say this, this or this would have been the outcome had things been any different back in the day ............. A timely but most unexpected post today seriously enjoyed and demonstrating your unquestionable poetic versatility our lady Fay ...................... x
September 18th, 2021 07:16
Neville said:
You raise an interesting question that many may think they know the answer to .. But who can put their hand on their heart and say this, this or this would have been the outcome had things been any different back in the day ............. A timely but most unexpected post today seriously enjoyed and demonstrating your unquestionable poetic versatility our lady Fay ...................... x
September 18th, 2021 07:16
Who Knows ?
dusk arising said:
England declares war on Germany. How different could it have been had we not been so hasty. Would he have continued east to russia, ignoring blighty and we could have peace till the USA came onboard and we declare war together. How many brit lives would have been saved? Cos declaring war in sept 39 cost us heavy in lives lost both abroad and at home before USA joined in. Our biggest defeat Dunkirk.
At home was a \'phoney war\' we really put our foot in it for blighty sending troops into France. Are we popular in France?
Where next? Recent history shouts it\'s question.... Maggie and Blair constructed and conspired jingoistically for their false popularity to ensure re-election but with blood on their hands.
Very provokative writing from you today Fay.... a good one.
September 18th, 2021 06:24
dusk arising said:
England declares war on Germany. How different could it have been had we not been so hasty. Would he have continued east to russia, ignoring blighty and we could have peace till the USA came onboard and we declare war together. How many brit lives would have been saved? Cos declaring war in sept 39 cost us heavy in lives lost both abroad and at home before USA joined in. Our biggest defeat Dunkirk.
At home was a \'phoney war\' we really put our foot in it for blighty sending troops into France. Are we popular in France?
Where next? Recent history shouts it\'s question.... Maggie and Blair constructed and conspired jingoistically for their false popularity to ensure re-election but with blood on their hands.
Very provokative writing from you today Fay.... a good one.
September 18th, 2021 06:24
Who Knows ?
Doggerel Dave said:
Doom , doom. We are not far off the same position today Fay, IMHO.
What will avert? We each can only do what we can peacefully do.... In this case it is your poem - Thanks.
Tell Governments how wrong they are?
September 18th, 2021 06:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Doom , doom. We are not far off the same position today Fay, IMHO.
What will avert? We each can only do what we can peacefully do.... In this case it is your poem - Thanks.
Tell Governments how wrong they are?
September 18th, 2021 06:10
Adorning
Neville said:
Yes, indeed .. am struck dumb for words ... but Fabtastic will hopefully suffice until I am reloaded ... Neville x
September 18th, 2021 03:44
Neville said:
Yes, indeed .. am struck dumb for words ... but Fabtastic will hopefully suffice until I am reloaded ... Neville x
September 18th, 2021 03:44
Adorning
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay \"poets slip out of reality\".
Great words.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Fay \"poets slip out of reality\".
Great words.
Andy
September 17th, 2021 00:44
Adorning
The elder poet said:
I enjoyed reading this . I\'ve never seen a poem written in this way . Thank you for sharing.
September 16th, 2021 18:08
The elder poet said:
I enjoyed reading this . I\'ve never seen a poem written in this way . Thank you for sharing.
September 16th, 2021 18:08
Adorning
dusk arising said:
Pixels my dear pixels. LOL (sorry bout the sexist part of that).
Hey, thats wot i duz... or swat i tries innit..
Lovely shapely lyrical poetry from Fay the shapely poet of MPS. (sorry for the shapist comment in that).
September 16th, 2021 14:04
dusk arising said:
Pixels my dear pixels. LOL (sorry bout the sexist part of that).
Hey, thats wot i duz... or swat i tries innit..
Lovely shapely lyrical poetry from Fay the shapely poet of MPS. (sorry for the shapist comment in that).
September 16th, 2021 14:04
Adorning
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I understand a little better romantic poetry now - the embroidery which enhances the ordinary - and believe me, to convince a hard head, that\'s some achievement, Fay.
Cannot pass on without mentioning the physical structure here - worth a frame.....
September 16th, 2021 07:21
Doggerel Dave said:
I think I understand a little better romantic poetry now - the embroidery which enhances the ordinary - and believe me, to convince a hard head, that\'s some achievement, Fay.
Cannot pass on without mentioning the physical structure here - worth a frame.....
September 16th, 2021 07:21
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