Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Solutions
L. B. Mek said:
\'costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance\'..
this is poetry at its refined, finest!
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you, dear Fay
October 15th, 2021 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance\'..
this is poetry at its refined, finest!
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you, dear Fay
October 15th, 2021 03:23
Solutions
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The \'like\' has gone wonky for your poem - on my screen anyway!
October 14th, 2021 08:41
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The \'like\' has gone wonky for your poem - on my screen anyway!
October 14th, 2021 08:41
Bargaining
L. B. Mek said:
for me this is a study, of maturity
a hymn for the lost naivety of youth
where wishes and dreams
could be hoped and prayed, into reality..
a sobering, melancholic read
that manages to unearth
that tired smile,
we somehow still possess..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
October 14th, 2021 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
for me this is a study, of maturity
a hymn for the lost naivety of youth
where wishes and dreams
could be hoped and prayed, into reality..
a sobering, melancholic read
that manages to unearth
that tired smile,
we somehow still possess..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
October 14th, 2021 02:52
Bargaining
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome poem on bay and shore scenes pictured eloquently. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 14:58
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome poem on bay and shore scenes pictured eloquently. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 14:58
Explosions
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, us early risers see some wonderful sights in our Natures world.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, us early risers see some wonderful sights in our Natures world.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:35
Explosions
L. B. Mek said:
\'I stand dumbly, admiring
strident trills of fervent
dives\'..
its so impressive, how you word some lines
in a way, that we don\'t just comprehend or picture your portrayals,
its more like we actually feel them;
like this dive
that\'s full of aliveness and desperation, captured
in but a few words
and relayed in a manner, that has gasping
reliving, that same explosive sensation
that same - borrowed feeling...
you\'re gifted with a most unique poetic talent, dear Fay
thanks for sharing!
October 12th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'I stand dumbly, admiring
strident trills of fervent
dives\'..
its so impressive, how you word some lines
in a way, that we don\'t just comprehend or picture your portrayals,
its more like we actually feel them;
like this dive
that\'s full of aliveness and desperation, captured
in but a few words
and relayed in a manner, that has gasping
reliving, that same explosive sensation
that same - borrowed feeling...
you\'re gifted with a most unique poetic talent, dear Fay
thanks for sharing!
October 12th, 2021 05:29
Captured
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures captured in your words Fay.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures captured in your words Fay.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:18
Captured
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Remember fondly milking cows, feeding livestock, slopping hogs on Grandpa\'s farm.
October 7th, 2021 08:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Remember fondly milking cows, feeding livestock, slopping hogs on Grandpa\'s farm.
October 7th, 2021 08:36
Captured
L. B. Mek said:
but their chores came with some unique, rewards
as there\'s no experience that can duplicate, sipping
from a bucket full of warm, fresh organic milk..
and while wiping away their milky
grins, they soldier-on
to that next task, awaiting
for a life full of meaning,
in doing
in working
in cooperating, as part
of that tight-nit family, or community;
depicting a Time, long lost to the absurdity of modernity
when the word, \'We\'
encompassed loyalty and sacrifice, for the well being: of those we Love!
(ah, dear Fay
how diverse your poetic talent
how endless your wisdom
how privileged we are, you choose to share your beautiful Poetry,
thank you! with the utmost sincerity)
October 7th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
but their chores came with some unique, rewards
as there\'s no experience that can duplicate, sipping
from a bucket full of warm, fresh organic milk..
and while wiping away their milky
grins, they soldier-on
to that next task, awaiting
for a life full of meaning,
in doing
in working
in cooperating, as part
of that tight-nit family, or community;
depicting a Time, long lost to the absurdity of modernity
when the word, \'We\'
encompassed loyalty and sacrifice, for the well being: of those we Love!
(ah, dear Fay
how diverse your poetic talent
how endless your wisdom
how privileged we are, you choose to share your beautiful Poetry,
thank you! with the utmost sincerity)
October 7th, 2021 05:32
Moonbaiting.
L. B. Mek said:
eloquence, decorated
with such mesmeric, imagery jewels
yet again beautifully worded, dear Fay
October 7th, 2021 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
eloquence, decorated
with such mesmeric, imagery jewels
yet again beautifully worded, dear Fay
October 7th, 2021 02:38
Moonbaiting.
The elder poet said:
A beautiful way to describe the moon. The light that has shined down on lovers fo so many years . Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2021 19:29
The elder poet said:
A beautiful way to describe the moon. The light that has shined down on lovers fo so many years . Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2021 19:29
Respite
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay. Yes that respite is hear as the glory of autumn fills our hearts and minds.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay. Yes that respite is hear as the glory of autumn fills our hearts and minds.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:21
Respite
MendedFences27 said:
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is just around the corner, but the beauty of the fall is worth the wait for winter.
\"Oh the gold of an autumn sun\" I love it. And those \"respite times\" are much needed. Just a beauty, Fay. And a fave.
October 3rd, 2021 17:45
MendedFences27 said:
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is just around the corner, but the beauty of the fall is worth the wait for winter.
\"Oh the gold of an autumn sun\" I love it. And those \"respite times\" are much needed. Just a beauty, Fay. And a fave.
October 3rd, 2021 17:45
Respite
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂 there is such softness in your words ..,
Very lovely poem ,
October 3rd, 2021 08:23
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂 there is such softness in your words ..,
Very lovely poem ,
October 3rd, 2021 08:23
Wishful
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, may that wishful hope be with us all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, may that wishful hope be with us all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:36
Wishful
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
Now I fully understand what you (and certainly the above commentary interpreted you as) were saying….I think…..
However (not to detract from your meaning at all) it evoked in me a different feeling , of polluted waterways caused by large corporations who left behind very small amounts of compensation….
October 2nd, 2021 18:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
Now I fully understand what you (and certainly the above commentary interpreted you as) were saying….I think…..
However (not to detract from your meaning at all) it evoked in me a different feeling , of polluted waterways caused by large corporations who left behind very small amounts of compensation….
October 2nd, 2021 18:58
Such Plenty
Goldfinch60 said:
The upsets of autumn are certainly there Fay but with the beauty of Nature\'s Artwork and the knowledge that new life will be born shows us the wonder of Nature.
Andy
September 27th, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
The upsets of autumn are certainly there Fay but with the beauty of Nature\'s Artwork and the knowledge that new life will be born shows us the wonder of Nature.
Andy
September 27th, 2021 01:06
Such Plenty
Dove said:
As all things wither , but this is uniquely autumns footprints! Lovely poem dear Fay
September 26th, 2021 10:42
Dove said:
As all things wither , but this is uniquely autumns footprints! Lovely poem dear Fay
September 26th, 2021 10:42
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