Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Lost
Neville said:
not only excellent, but more cleverer than clever word play ma\'am ...........x
October 18th, 2021 06:53
Neville said:
not only excellent, but more cleverer than clever word play ma\'am ...........x
October 18th, 2021 06:53
Moonbaiting.
Neville said:
Not only a brilliant title .. but the whole page seems to glow with a kind of gentle radiance I have come to both admire and respect and which seems to spill from your palm or your pen with remarkable regularity ... x
October 18th, 2021 03:02
Neville said:
Not only a brilliant title .. but the whole page seems to glow with a kind of gentle radiance I have come to both admire and respect and which seems to spill from your palm or your pen with remarkable regularity ... x
October 18th, 2021 03:02
Coasting
Neville said:
made me smile no end ... well okay then, chuckle from end to end .. :) x
October 18th, 2021 02:45
Neville said:
made me smile no end ... well okay then, chuckle from end to end .. :) x
October 18th, 2021 02:45
Coasting
PrEm Ji said:
Neither Whiskey, nor Brandy, I consume the intoxication of your poetry!
October 17th, 2021 23:15
PrEm Ji said:
Neither Whiskey, nor Brandy, I consume the intoxication of your poetry!
October 17th, 2021 23:15
Coasting
orchidee said:
I too wash tipshy when writings a poemsh! lol. Good acting from both of us, innit? heehee.
October 16th, 2021 12:06
orchidee said:
I too wash tipshy when writings a poemsh! lol. Good acting from both of us, innit? heehee.
October 16th, 2021 12:06
Coasting
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking it ain\'t housework. lol
Where was randy Annie when I need her.
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Paul Bell said:
I\'m thinking it ain\'t housework. lol
Where was randy Annie when I need her.
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Coasting
Goldfinch60 said:
So you drink Irish Whiskey not Scottish Whisky Fay.
Good fun write.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Goldfinch60 said:
So you drink Irish Whiskey not Scottish Whisky Fay.
Good fun write.
Andy
October 16th, 2021 03:39
Solutions
Neville said:
.. One does not have to hit the heart shaped like button to know that these words hold the solution to a question asked untold times around the globe .. However, I have hit it so many times now that am beginning to feel rather guilty ........ Penned with customary Fay Slimm prowess, if you don\'t mind me just sayin ............ Ah\' tis good to be back ma\'am .... :) x
October 15th, 2021 09:16
Neville said:
.. One does not have to hit the heart shaped like button to know that these words hold the solution to a question asked untold times around the globe .. However, I have hit it so many times now that am beginning to feel rather guilty ........ Penned with customary Fay Slimm prowess, if you don\'t mind me just sayin ............ Ah\' tis good to be back ma\'am .... :) x
October 15th, 2021 09:16
Solutions
L. B. Mek said:
\'costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance\'..
this is poetry at its refined, finest!
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you, dear Fay
October 15th, 2021 03:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'costly perfume for tolerance factor.
The keeping of togetherness-fragrance\'..
this is poetry at its refined, finest!
\'in my humble opinion\'
thank you, dear Fay
October 15th, 2021 03:23
Solutions
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The \'like\' has gone wonky for your poem - on my screen anyway!
October 14th, 2021 08:41
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
The \'like\' has gone wonky for your poem - on my screen anyway!
October 14th, 2021 08:41
Bargaining
L. B. Mek said:
for me this is a study, of maturity
a hymn for the lost naivety of youth
where wishes and dreams
could be hoped and prayed, into reality..
a sobering, melancholic read
that manages to unearth
that tired smile,
we somehow still possess..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
October 14th, 2021 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
for me this is a study, of maturity
a hymn for the lost naivety of youth
where wishes and dreams
could be hoped and prayed, into reality..
a sobering, melancholic read
that manages to unearth
that tired smile,
we somehow still possess..
thanks for sharing, dear Fay
October 14th, 2021 02:52
Bargaining
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome poem on bay and shore scenes pictured eloquently. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 14:58
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow an awesome poem on bay and shore scenes pictured eloquently. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too
October 13th, 2021 14:58
Explosions
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, us early risers see some wonderful sights in our Natures world.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, us early risers see some wonderful sights in our Natures world.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:35
Explosions
Accidental Poet said:
I used to go out quite often before sunrise to take pictures in that Golden hour. And your poem here describes the feeling perfectly Fay. Makes me want to grab my camera, but it\'s only 8:30 PM here. Beautiful poem Fay. 👍
October 12th, 2021 19:34
Accidental Poet said:
I used to go out quite often before sunrise to take pictures in that Golden hour. And your poem here describes the feeling perfectly Fay. Makes me want to grab my camera, but it\'s only 8:30 PM here. Beautiful poem Fay. 👍
October 12th, 2021 19:34
Explosions
L. B. Mek said:
\'I stand dumbly, admiring
strident trills of fervent
dives\'..
its so impressive, how you word some lines
in a way, that we don\'t just comprehend or picture your portrayals,
its more like we actually feel them;
like this dive
that\'s full of aliveness and desperation, captured
in but a few words
and relayed in a manner, that has gasping
reliving, that same explosive sensation
that same - borrowed feeling...
you\'re gifted with a most unique poetic talent, dear Fay
thanks for sharing!
October 12th, 2021 05:29
L. B. Mek said:
\'I stand dumbly, admiring
strident trills of fervent
dives\'..
its so impressive, how you word some lines
in a way, that we don\'t just comprehend or picture your portrayals,
its more like we actually feel them;
like this dive
that\'s full of aliveness and desperation, captured
in but a few words
and relayed in a manner, that has gasping
reliving, that same explosive sensation
that same - borrowed feeling...
you\'re gifted with a most unique poetic talent, dear Fay
thanks for sharing!
October 12th, 2021 05:29
Captured
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures captured in your words Fay.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful pictures captured in your words Fay.
Andy
October 8th, 2021 00:18
Captured
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Remember fondly milking cows, feeding livestock, slopping hogs on Grandpa\'s farm.
October 7th, 2021 08:36
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Remember fondly milking cows, feeding livestock, slopping hogs on Grandpa\'s farm.
October 7th, 2021 08:36
Captured
L. B. Mek said:
but their chores came with some unique, rewards
as there\'s no experience that can duplicate, sipping
from a bucket full of warm, fresh organic milk..
and while wiping away their milky
grins, they soldier-on
to that next task, awaiting
for a life full of meaning,
in doing
in working
in cooperating, as part
of that tight-nit family, or community;
depicting a Time, long lost to the absurdity of modernity
when the word, \'We\'
encompassed loyalty and sacrifice, for the well being: of those we Love!
(ah, dear Fay
how diverse your poetic talent
how endless your wisdom
how privileged we are, you choose to share your beautiful Poetry,
thank you! with the utmost sincerity)
October 7th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
but their chores came with some unique, rewards
as there\'s no experience that can duplicate, sipping
from a bucket full of warm, fresh organic milk..
and while wiping away their milky
grins, they soldier-on
to that next task, awaiting
for a life full of meaning,
in doing
in working
in cooperating, as part
of that tight-nit family, or community;
depicting a Time, long lost to the absurdity of modernity
when the word, \'We\'
encompassed loyalty and sacrifice, for the well being: of those we Love!
(ah, dear Fay
how diverse your poetic talent
how endless your wisdom
how privileged we are, you choose to share your beautiful Poetry,
thank you! with the utmost sincerity)
October 7th, 2021 05:32
Moonbaiting.
L. B. Mek said:
eloquence, decorated
with such mesmeric, imagery jewels
yet again beautifully worded, dear Fay
October 7th, 2021 02:38
L. B. Mek said:
eloquence, decorated
with such mesmeric, imagery jewels
yet again beautifully worded, dear Fay
October 7th, 2021 02:38
Moonbaiting.
The elder poet said:
A beautiful way to describe the moon. The light that has shined down on lovers fo so many years . Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2021 19:29
The elder poet said:
A beautiful way to describe the moon. The light that has shined down on lovers fo so many years . Thank you for sharing.
October 6th, 2021 19:29
Respite
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay. Yes that respite is hear as the glory of autumn fills our hearts and minds.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
beautiful words Fay. Yes that respite is hear as the glory of autumn fills our hearts and minds.
Andy
October 4th, 2021 00:21
Respite
MendedFences27 said:
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is just around the corner, but the beauty of the fall is worth the wait for winter.
\"Oh the gold of an autumn sun\" I love it. And those \"respite times\" are much needed. Just a beauty, Fay. And a fave.
October 3rd, 2021 17:45
MendedFences27 said:
As beautiful as an autumn day. My favorite time of the year. Yes winter is just around the corner, but the beauty of the fall is worth the wait for winter.
\"Oh the gold of an autumn sun\" I love it. And those \"respite times\" are much needed. Just a beauty, Fay. And a fave.
October 3rd, 2021 17:45
Respite
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂 there is such softness in your words ..,
Very lovely poem ,
October 3rd, 2021 08:23
Caring dove said:
Beautiful writing , Fay 🙂 there is such softness in your words ..,
Very lovely poem ,
October 3rd, 2021 08:23
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