Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Making Plain
SureshG said:
Logic, step sibling of emotions, falters and succumbs in the presence of love, as so portrayed by these poetic words.
October 28th, 2021 20:33
SureshG said:
Logic, step sibling of emotions, falters and succumbs in the presence of love, as so portrayed by these poetic words.
October 28th, 2021 20:33
Making Plain
Neville said:
By jove, I do think she\'s got it .. How bloomin splendid our Fay .. this is one I dont recall .. absolutely delightful .. x
October 28th, 2021 12:29
Neville said:
By jove, I do think she\'s got it .. How bloomin splendid our Fay .. this is one I dont recall .. absolutely delightful .. x
October 28th, 2021 12:29
Making Plain
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey, so that\'s how the female brain fathoms out love or not is it? I get on better with animals, now i see why.
I am a typical male and...... remain confused.
October 28th, 2021 07:03
dusk arising said:
Cor blimey, so that\'s how the female brain fathoms out love or not is it? I get on better with animals, now i see why.
I am a typical male and...... remain confused.
October 28th, 2021 07:03
Making Plain
Paul Bell said:
The endorphins are going ten to the dozen. I would say you\'re in love.
October 28th, 2021 07:02
Paul Bell said:
The endorphins are going ten to the dozen. I would say you\'re in love.
October 28th, 2021 07:02
Making Plain
L. B. Mek said:
what a captivating first line
as our enticing introduction,
to a wonderful poem, dear Fay
October 28th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
what a captivating first line
as our enticing introduction,
to a wonderful poem, dear Fay
October 28th, 2021 04:12
Attack
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, I wonder what memories that garden would have.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words Fay, I wonder what memories that garden would have.
Andy
October 28th, 2021 00:34
Attack
SureshG said:
Reading your poem and your comment immediately reminded me of the book and movie “The Secret Garden”, which I never get tired to viewing. I am awed by deserted places and imagine the beauty they once held, that poets, such as yourself, ignite
October 27th, 2021 13:40
SureshG said:
Reading your poem and your comment immediately reminded me of the book and movie “The Secret Garden”, which I never get tired to viewing. I am awed by deserted places and imagine the beauty they once held, that poets, such as yourself, ignite
October 27th, 2021 13:40
Attack
Neville said:
How utterly amazing .. I thought your image resembled that of a well .. although looking at the scale, it would have been one helluva big well ...
You paint a fine picture of what remains of someone\'s previous dedication, love and hard graft ... Nature doesn\'t hang about when it wants to reclaim something neglected does it .. and I imagine in Kernow the pace is somewhat speeded up ................ Neville x
October 27th, 2021 13:26
Neville said:
How utterly amazing .. I thought your image resembled that of a well .. although looking at the scale, it would have been one helluva big well ...
You paint a fine picture of what remains of someone\'s previous dedication, love and hard graft ... Nature doesn\'t hang about when it wants to reclaim something neglected does it .. and I imagine in Kernow the pace is somewhat speeded up ................ Neville x
October 27th, 2021 13:26
Attack
Paul Bell said:
I suppose once upon a time the sea was in the distance, but as we see all around Britain, she\'s reclaiming the land.
October 27th, 2021 04:51
Paul Bell said:
I suppose once upon a time the sea was in the distance, but as we see all around Britain, she\'s reclaiming the land.
October 27th, 2021 04:51
Attack
dusk arising said:
Cornwall has so many relics of past activities. Plenty for the poetic mind to dream upon and play with whilst others ride the surf.
Ghosts of yesterdays stir the poets soul.
October 27th, 2021 04:28
dusk arising said:
Cornwall has so many relics of past activities. Plenty for the poetic mind to dream upon and play with whilst others ride the surf.
Ghosts of yesterdays stir the poets soul.
October 27th, 2021 04:28
Once
Goldfinch60 said:
That innocence and glory of childhood is so wonderful Fay, it is a shame we have to grow up.
Andy
October 27th, 2021 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That innocence and glory of childhood is so wonderful Fay, it is a shame we have to grow up.
Andy
October 27th, 2021 01:33
Once
dusk arising said:
Oh for those sunshine days of childhood lost.... a longing refreshed in your wonderfully crafted joyride poetry today..... where did the zest and energy go, the excitement of being entertained by fresh adventures each new day.
Thoroughly enjoyed this and want to read many times again, so into my fav\'s it goes... thank you Fay.
October 26th, 2021 13:32
dusk arising said:
Oh for those sunshine days of childhood lost.... a longing refreshed in your wonderfully crafted joyride poetry today..... where did the zest and energy go, the excitement of being entertained by fresh adventures each new day.
Thoroughly enjoyed this and want to read many times again, so into my fav\'s it goes... thank you Fay.
October 26th, 2021 13:32
Once
Neville said:
deliriously delightful our Fay .. took me back yonks so ya did .. and all in characteristic Slimm style ... x
October 26th, 2021 10:30
Neville said:
deliriously delightful our Fay .. took me back yonks so ya did .. and all in characteristic Slimm style ... x
October 26th, 2021 10:30
Once
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This gem of a poem reminded me of my beautiful childhood in Italy…especially the years I lived with my nonna(grandmother).
Love the last two lines…they ‘speak’ the truth.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 26th, 2021 10:25
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
This gem of a poem reminded me of my beautiful childhood in Italy…especially the years I lived with my nonna(grandmother).
Love the last two lines…they ‘speak’ the truth.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
October 26th, 2021 10:25
No Regret
Neville said:
\"A lust full of Karma passed and eagerness lessened\"
Now that, is write up my street dear friend & poet .. as of course is the remainder of what is more than just poetry but a lesson on how to carry oneself throughout the days made available to us ................ x
October 25th, 2021 03:57
Neville said:
\"A lust full of Karma passed and eagerness lessened\"
Now that, is write up my street dear friend & poet .. as of course is the remainder of what is more than just poetry but a lesson on how to carry oneself throughout the days made available to us ................ x
October 25th, 2021 03:57
No Regret
dusk arising said:
The suffering heart hides through seasons of essential healing yet has so much to offer when loves springtime blossoms.
October 24th, 2021 14:21
dusk arising said:
The suffering heart hides through seasons of essential healing yet has so much to offer when loves springtime blossoms.
October 24th, 2021 14:21
No Regret
Paul Bell said:
What\'s good for the goose is good for the gander. Karma in the shadows providing nectar for past neglect.
October 24th, 2021 06:50
Paul Bell said:
What\'s good for the goose is good for the gander. Karma in the shadows providing nectar for past neglect.
October 24th, 2021 06:50
No Regret
Caring dove said:
Interesting choice of words , Fay 🙂 I liked the read
October 24th, 2021 02:47
Caring dove said:
Interesting choice of words , Fay 🙂 I liked the read
October 24th, 2021 02:47
First
dusk arising said:
Oh no you couldn\'t LOL for there is so very much of it in your poetry you tease.
Sensual as ever in the garden of love.
October 23rd, 2021 12:05
dusk arising said:
Oh no you couldn\'t LOL for there is so very much of it in your poetry you tease.
Sensual as ever in the garden of love.
October 23rd, 2021 12:05
First
Neville said:
Now don\'t get this old fella going .. I could rant forever extolling the various virtues and merits of this passionate post of yours ..
Four perfectly formed stanza\'s stacked with such precision that even before reading I just knew I was gonna fall head over heels for them .......... Neville x
October 23rd, 2021 07:44
Neville said:
Now don\'t get this old fella going .. I could rant forever extolling the various virtues and merits of this passionate post of yours ..
Four perfectly formed stanza\'s stacked with such precision that even before reading I just knew I was gonna fall head over heels for them .......... Neville x
October 23rd, 2021 07:44
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