Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Happenings
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The constant of us\" will always be there as will your words showing us all that life is so diverse Fay.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The constant of us\" will always be there as will your words showing us all that life is so diverse Fay.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:15
This Heart
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the sadness your words are conveying. You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
P.S.- Fay, I like your new pic. Lovely😊
September 24th, 2021 15:23
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the sadness your words are conveying. You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
P.S.- Fay, I like your new pic. Lovely😊
September 24th, 2021 15:23
Happenings
L. B. Mek said:
this write exemplifies you, in your free flowing best, dear Fay
there\'s a oneness between your words and that picture
a shared sense of serenity, you invite your readers to search for in themselves,
what a wonderfully Poetic gift, in a read
September 24th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
this write exemplifies you, in your free flowing best, dear Fay
there\'s a oneness between your words and that picture
a shared sense of serenity, you invite your readers to search for in themselves,
what a wonderfully Poetic gift, in a read
September 24th, 2021 05:44
Happenings
dusk arising said:
Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level often not perceived by the human eye.
Here you take us on a short trip of reality\'s bite neath sycamore autumnal beauty.
September 24th, 2021 03:40
dusk arising said:
Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level often not perceived by the human eye.
Here you take us on a short trip of reality\'s bite neath sycamore autumnal beauty.
September 24th, 2021 03:40
Happenings
Neville said:
poets don\'t just pen the big things .. they have the capacity to notice and poem even the most minutiae of situations, circumstances and events .. those that oft go unnoticed but are in their own write huge & correspondingly massively important ............... You just proved my point dear lady Fay ................ x
September 24th, 2021 03:35
Neville said:
poets don\'t just pen the big things .. they have the capacity to notice and poem even the most minutiae of situations, circumstances and events .. those that oft go unnoticed but are in their own write huge & correspondingly massively important ............... You just proved my point dear lady Fay ................ x
September 24th, 2021 03:35
This Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that emotion pours from your words.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that emotion pours from your words.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 00:47
This Heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to express it - I leave that to people (this person -you) who can do the job properly.
September 22nd, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to express it - I leave that to people (this person -you) who can do the job properly.
September 22nd, 2021 20:44
This Heart
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You keep setting the bar higher as you go. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2021 09:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You keep setting the bar higher as you go. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2021 09:24
This Heart
Caring dove said:
Very beautiful , Fay 🙂 you truly have a lovely way with words ... a lovely read 🌸
September 22nd, 2021 07:53
Caring dove said:
Very beautiful , Fay 🙂 you truly have a lovely way with words ... a lovely read 🌸
September 22nd, 2021 07:53
This Heart
dusk arising said:
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here. Every line beautifully crafted and full of emotion. Worthy in today\'s english yet referencing back to classic poetry giving a timeless presence.
I can\'t praise this piece enough, full of admiration of your poetic enchantment here.
Tops the bill in my favourites.
P.S. did i mention I like it?
September 22nd, 2021 05:54
dusk arising said:
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here. Every line beautifully crafted and full of emotion. Worthy in today\'s english yet referencing back to classic poetry giving a timeless presence.
I can\'t praise this piece enough, full of admiration of your poetic enchantment here.
Tops the bill in my favourites.
P.S. did i mention I like it?
September 22nd, 2021 05:54
This Heart
Noah said:
love the imagery and the way you word it. good write indeed
September 22nd, 2021 03:40
Noah said:
love the imagery and the way you word it. good write indeed
September 22nd, 2021 03:40
Reminders
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a beautiful time of the year Fay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a beautiful time of the year Fay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:20
Reminders
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautiful season indeed. Your choice of words to remind us that autumn is moving in is superb. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 23:07
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautiful season indeed. Your choice of words to remind us that autumn is moving in is superb. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 23:07
Reminders
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a sublime depiction dear Fay:
\'lust and lilt of summer
will linger
while dusk striates, luring skies
yet twilight chill, creates mauves
for: reminders\'
September 21st, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a sublime depiction dear Fay:
\'lust and lilt of summer
will linger
while dusk striates, luring skies
yet twilight chill, creates mauves
for: reminders\'
September 21st, 2021 05:43
Reminders
dusk arising said:
Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking in such painted atmosphere and felt the dusk advance the waiting winter\'s air as late hurry took me toward stoveside warmth.
Yep, felt this one poet. You sure can paint them Fay.
September 21st, 2021 05:30
dusk arising said:
Oh i lazily walked that lane from low tide through the afternoon drinking in such painted atmosphere and felt the dusk advance the waiting winter\'s air as late hurry took me toward stoveside warmth.
Yep, felt this one poet. You sure can paint them Fay.
September 21st, 2021 05:30
Bridges
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those bridges in life MUST BE built together Fay.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
So very true, those bridges in life MUST BE built together Fay.
Andy
September 21st, 2021 00:54
Bridges
Doggerel Dave said:
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the United Nations....
Beautiful frameable piece, Fay.
September 20th, 2021 18:25
Doggerel Dave said:
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the United Nations....
Beautiful frameable piece, Fay.
September 20th, 2021 18:25
Bridges
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Forgiveness solid foundation for bridges.
September 20th, 2021 09:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Fay.
Forgiveness solid foundation for bridges.
September 20th, 2021 09:45
Bridges
dusk arising said:
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a deep sorrow. Two again become one, healing as a wound closes over and no scar remains.
September 20th, 2021 07:59
dusk arising said:
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a deep sorrow. Two again become one, healing as a wound closes over and no scar remains.
September 20th, 2021 07:59
Bridges
Neville said:
This is as near to perfect as it gets ..
a succinct message very much to the point and oh\' so meaningful ... Not only that though, it looks so bloomin good pinned as it is to the page ........................ Bravo Fay ... x
September 20th, 2021 07:01
Neville said:
This is as near to perfect as it gets ..
a succinct message very much to the point and oh\' so meaningful ... Not only that though, it looks so bloomin good pinned as it is to the page ........................ Bravo Fay ... x
September 20th, 2021 07:01
Favours
Neville said:
just my cuppa mead .. bless thee my lady ..................................................x
September 19th, 2021 12:00
Neville said:
just my cuppa mead .. bless thee my lady ..................................................x
September 19th, 2021 12:00
Favours
Michael Edwards said:
What a treat to see you haven\'t lost your unique poetic touch - great read dear Fay.
September 19th, 2021 08:04
Michael Edwards said:
What a treat to see you haven\'t lost your unique poetic touch - great read dear Fay.
September 19th, 2021 08:04
Favours
dusk arising said:
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s going to leap on someone....
Yeah forsooth and chivalry wi\' chips and mushy peas.
September 19th, 2021 05:00
dusk arising said:
That gal on that there horse is beyond the need for wooing.... She\'s going to leap on someone....
Yeah forsooth and chivalry wi\' chips and mushy peas.
September 19th, 2021 05:00
Favours
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely as every lady should! Splendid first Sunday morning read, thank you kindly. May you always shine brightly!
September 19th, 2021 04:51
Poetic Dan said:
Absolutely as every lady should! Splendid first Sunday morning read, thank you kindly. May you always shine brightly!
September 19th, 2021 04:51
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