Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Wishful
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, may that wishful hope be with us all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:36
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, may that wishful hope be with us all.
Andy
October 3rd, 2021 00:36
Wishful
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
Now I fully understand what you (and certainly the above commentary interpreted you as) were saying….I think…..
However (not to detract from your meaning at all) it evoked in me a different feeling , of polluted waterways caused by large corporations who left behind very small amounts of compensation….
October 2nd, 2021 18:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
Now I fully understand what you (and certainly the above commentary interpreted you as) were saying….I think…..
However (not to detract from your meaning at all) it evoked in me a different feeling , of polluted waterways caused by large corporations who left behind very small amounts of compensation….
October 2nd, 2021 18:58
Such Plenty
Goldfinch60 said:
The upsets of autumn are certainly there Fay but with the beauty of Nature\'s Artwork and the knowledge that new life will be born shows us the wonder of Nature.
Andy
September 27th, 2021 01:06
Goldfinch60 said:
The upsets of autumn are certainly there Fay but with the beauty of Nature\'s Artwork and the knowledge that new life will be born shows us the wonder of Nature.
Andy
September 27th, 2021 01:06
Such Plenty
Dove said:
As all things wither , but this is uniquely autumns footprints! Lovely poem dear Fay
September 26th, 2021 10:42
Dove said:
As all things wither , but this is uniquely autumns footprints! Lovely poem dear Fay
September 26th, 2021 10:42
Happenings
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The constant of us\" will always be there as will your words showing us all that life is so diverse Fay.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:15
Goldfinch60 said:
\"The constant of us\" will always be there as will your words showing us all that life is so diverse Fay.
Andy
September 25th, 2021 00:15
This Heart
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the sadness your words are conveying. You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
P.S.- Fay, I like your new pic. Lovely😊
September 24th, 2021 15:23
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
As I read your incredible poem, I sense and feel the sadness your words are conveying. You are a master at your craft. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
P.S.- Fay, I like your new pic. Lovely😊
September 24th, 2021 15:23
Happenings
L. B. Mek said:
this write exemplifies you, in your free flowing best, dear Fay
there\'s a oneness between your words and that picture
a shared sense of serenity, you invite your readers to search for in themselves,
what a wonderfully Poetic gift, in a read
September 24th, 2021 05:44
L. B. Mek said:
this write exemplifies you, in your free flowing best, dear Fay
there\'s a oneness between your words and that picture
a shared sense of serenity, you invite your readers to search for in themselves,
what a wonderfully Poetic gift, in a read
September 24th, 2021 05:44
Happenings
dusk arising said:
Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level often not perceived by the human eye.
Here you take us on a short trip of reality\'s bite neath sycamore autumnal beauty.
September 24th, 2021 03:40
dusk arising said:
Nature\'s tale. It\'s a cruel world of strange beauty on a certain level often not perceived by the human eye.
Here you take us on a short trip of reality\'s bite neath sycamore autumnal beauty.
September 24th, 2021 03:40
Happenings
Neville said:
poets don\'t just pen the big things .. they have the capacity to notice and poem even the most minutiae of situations, circumstances and events .. those that oft go unnoticed but are in their own write huge & correspondingly massively important ............... You just proved my point dear lady Fay ................ x
September 24th, 2021 03:35
Neville said:
poets don\'t just pen the big things .. they have the capacity to notice and poem even the most minutiae of situations, circumstances and events .. those that oft go unnoticed but are in their own write huge & correspondingly massively important ............... You just proved my point dear lady Fay ................ x
September 24th, 2021 03:35
This Heart
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that emotion pours from your words.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, that emotion pours from your words.
Andy
September 23rd, 2021 00:47
This Heart
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to express it - I leave that to people (this person -you) who can do the job properly.
September 22nd, 2021 20:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Fay - I\'ve felt all of that, but there\'s no way I would attempt to express it - I leave that to people (this person -you) who can do the job properly.
September 22nd, 2021 20:44
This Heart
Accidental Poet said:
What can I say that hasn\'t already been said here Fay. A deserving romantic read. 🌹
September 22nd, 2021 19:15
Accidental Poet said:
What can I say that hasn\'t already been said here Fay. A deserving romantic read. 🌹
September 22nd, 2021 19:15
This Heart
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You keep setting the bar higher as you go. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2021 09:24
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautiful, Fay.
You keep setting the bar higher as you go. Thank you.
September 22nd, 2021 09:24
This Heart
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very beautiful , Fay 🙂 you truly have a lovely way with words ... a lovely read 🌸
September 22nd, 2021 07:53
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Very beautiful , Fay 🙂 you truly have a lovely way with words ... a lovely read 🌸
September 22nd, 2021 07:53
This Heart
dusk arising said:
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here. Every line beautifully crafted and full of emotion. Worthy in today\'s english yet referencing back to classic poetry giving a timeless presence.
I can\'t praise this piece enough, full of admiration of your poetic enchantment here.
Tops the bill in my favourites.
P.S. did i mention I like it?
September 22nd, 2021 05:54
dusk arising said:
Stunning! Beautiful! Fay you have created a magnificent work of art here. Every line beautifully crafted and full of emotion. Worthy in today\'s english yet referencing back to classic poetry giving a timeless presence.
I can\'t praise this piece enough, full of admiration of your poetic enchantment here.
Tops the bill in my favourites.
P.S. did i mention I like it?
September 22nd, 2021 05:54
This Heart
Noah said:
love the imagery and the way you word it. good write indeed
September 22nd, 2021 03:40
Noah said:
love the imagery and the way you word it. good write indeed
September 22nd, 2021 03:40
Reminders
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a beautiful time of the year Fay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:20
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words about a beautiful time of the year Fay.
Andy
September 22nd, 2021 00:20
Reminders
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautiful season indeed. Your choice of words to remind us that autumn is moving in is superb. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 23:07
Laura🌻 said:
My Dear Fay,
A beautiful season indeed. Your choice of words to remind us that autumn is moving in is superb. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
September 21st, 2021 23:07
Reminders
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a sublime depiction dear Fay:
\'lust and lilt of summer
will linger
while dusk striates, luring skies
yet twilight chill, creates mauves
for: reminders\'
September 21st, 2021 05:43
L. B. Mek said:
beautifully worded, a sublime depiction dear Fay:
\'lust and lilt of summer
will linger
while dusk striates, luring skies
yet twilight chill, creates mauves
for: reminders\'
September 21st, 2021 05:43
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