Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Bounty
SureshG said:
Amazing how water falling can create such serene images, like a brides veil as in your image, and invoke poems such as yours
March 24th, 2021 15:07
SureshG said:
Amazing how water falling can create such serene images, like a brides veil as in your image, and invoke poems such as yours
March 24th, 2021 15:07
Conversion
SureshG said:
Try as we may
Influenced we are
And therein lies the mass
That weighs on how we react
Much appreciate your quote and your post
March 24th, 2021 11:28
SureshG said:
Try as we may
Influenced we are
And therein lies the mass
That weighs on how we react
Much appreciate your quote and your post
March 24th, 2021 11:28
Conversion
Doggerel Dave said:
Great the way out was found, Fay. And should perchance it happen again, the reassurance of a map out should make the way easier.
Neat little job means it took much effort?
March 24th, 2021 07:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Great the way out was found, Fay. And should perchance it happen again, the reassurance of a map out should make the way easier.
Neat little job means it took much effort?
March 24th, 2021 07:02
Conversion
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all repair ourselves Fay, it just needs something to fix your eyes or heart on.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 06:24
Goldfinch60 said:
We can all repair ourselves Fay, it just needs something to fix your eyes or heart on.
Andy
March 24th, 2021 06:24
Repose
SureshG said:
Transported to times past, both in verse and portrait.
Beautifully versed.
March 22nd, 2021 20:42
SureshG said:
Transported to times past, both in verse and portrait.
Beautifully versed.
March 22nd, 2021 20:42
Repose
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem reminded me of the times as a kid, standing beside the farmer milking his cow and him letting me drink some of the still warm milk. Beautiful choice of words, as usual!
March 22nd, 2021 11:09
FredPeyer said:
Your beautiful poem reminded me of the times as a kid, standing beside the farmer milking his cow and him letting me drink some of the still warm milk. Beautiful choice of words, as usual!
March 22nd, 2021 11:09
Repose
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read, dear Fay
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)
that illusive art of a subtle life: where self-worth\'s meaning
is imbued, in each completion
of incremental
self-set - itinerary ordered chores,
as our dream\'s: pathway
to those patiently actualised lofty goals..
March 22nd, 2021 07:26
L. B. Mek said:
(a wonderful read, dear Fay
and thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply)
that illusive art of a subtle life: where self-worth\'s meaning
is imbued, in each completion
of incremental
self-set - itinerary ordered chores,
as our dream\'s: pathway
to those patiently actualised lofty goals..
March 22nd, 2021 07:26
Repose
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and such descriptive words Fay, I was watching the cows and the maidens as your words took me there. This one must go into my favourites.
Andy
March 22nd, 2021 04:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful and such descriptive words Fay, I was watching the cows and the maidens as your words took me there. This one must go into my favourites.
Andy
March 22nd, 2021 04:54
Repose
Doggerel Dave said:
So pastoral and romantic Fay - warms the cockles of my heart, even though I\'m a denizen of the city.
March 22nd, 2021 03:55
Doggerel Dave said:
So pastoral and romantic Fay - warms the cockles of my heart, even though I\'m a denizen of the city.
March 22nd, 2021 03:55
Wild Beauty
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Beautiful depiction of a beautiful part of the UK. We used to get down to St Ives every year - till lockdown etc. I love your opening lines: \'Shot through with wild beauty
this almost-island is so hard to leave.\' You echo how a traveller feels after visiting this idyllic spot. Lovely poem, Fay.
March 21st, 2021 04:38
Kevin Michael Bloor said:
Beautiful depiction of a beautiful part of the UK. We used to get down to St Ives every year - till lockdown etc. I love your opening lines: \'Shot through with wild beauty
this almost-island is so hard to leave.\' You echo how a traveller feels after visiting this idyllic spot. Lovely poem, Fay.
March 21st, 2021 04:38
Wild Beauty
FredPeyer said:
While I am sure your beaches are different from ours, your beautiful poem does describe ours as well!
March 20th, 2021 21:18
FredPeyer said:
While I am sure your beaches are different from ours, your beautiful poem does describe ours as well!
March 20th, 2021 21:18
Wild Beauty
Dove said:
Awe, just mentioning Cornwall reminds me of my dearly departed friend! The picture is lovely, as are your words! Thanks for sharing
March 20th, 2021 08:29
Dove said:
Awe, just mentioning Cornwall reminds me of my dearly departed friend! The picture is lovely, as are your words! Thanks for sharing
March 20th, 2021 08:29
Wild Beauty
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. \'O to be in Cornwall, now that April\'s nearly there?!\'
March 20th, 2021 07:16
orchidee said:
Good write Fay. \'O to be in Cornwall, now that April\'s nearly there?!\'
March 20th, 2021 07:16
Wild Beauty
Doggerel Dave said:
I live in Australia which can be quite fanatical about the quality of its beaches. From London, either as a kid or my stay later, the quality of the beaches there ain’t great. A visit to the West Country (Cornwall, Devon) came therefore as something of a revelation.
Anything you can do Fay (Sorry – you’ve done it) to promote the quality of your beaches has to be a worthwhile project.
March 20th, 2021 06:09
Doggerel Dave said:
I live in Australia which can be quite fanatical about the quality of its beaches. From London, either as a kid or my stay later, the quality of the beaches there ain’t great. A visit to the West Country (Cornwall, Devon) came therefore as something of a revelation.
Anything you can do Fay (Sorry – you’ve done it) to promote the quality of your beaches has to be a worthwhile project.
March 20th, 2021 06:09
Bonds
Jerry Reynolds said:
A tribute to mothers is always timely.
Good write, Fay.
March 18th, 2021 15:41
Jerry Reynolds said:
A tribute to mothers is always timely.
Good write, Fay.
March 18th, 2021 15:41
Bonds
L. B. Mek said:
a timely dedication, championing acute brevity dear Fay..
sad how society is marginalising mother\'s day and father\'s importance more and more, while continually screaming for more family unity and integrity, as the answer to our problems..
March 18th, 2021 06:11
L. B. Mek said:
a timely dedication, championing acute brevity dear Fay..
sad how society is marginalising mother\'s day and father\'s importance more and more, while continually screaming for more family unity and integrity, as the answer to our problems..
March 18th, 2021 06:11
Bonds
Amon said:
sounds just like how I love my mom the same way she does to me
March 18th, 2021 05:24
Amon said:
sounds just like how I love my mom the same way she does to me
March 18th, 2021 05:24
Catching the Drift
L. B. Mek said:
\'In a tremulous breeze chimera quivers
And metallic poles shudder with myriads
Of different tones from hung wind-chimes.\'
yet another beautifully worded poem dear Fay,
the literary - literal, flurry
of Spring\'s humming murmur celebrating
its imminent budding
captured so poetically acutely..
in my humble opinion
March 18th, 2021 04:37
L. B. Mek said:
\'In a tremulous breeze chimera quivers
And metallic poles shudder with myriads
Of different tones from hung wind-chimes.\'
yet another beautifully worded poem dear Fay,
the literary - literal, flurry
of Spring\'s humming murmur celebrating
its imminent budding
captured so poetically acutely..
in my humble opinion
March 18th, 2021 04:37
Catching the Drift
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, those chimes combine with Nature\'s Symphony giving us more glory.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words Fay, those chimes combine with Nature\'s Symphony giving us more glory.
Andy
March 18th, 2021 01:28
Catching the Drift
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I enjoy your writing! Good write 👌👌👌
March 17th, 2021 11:42
Mottakeenur Rehman said:
I enjoy your writing! Good write 👌👌👌
March 17th, 2021 11:42
Catching the Drift
AuburnScribbler said:
Loving the breezy like style here Fay, as I was reading, I really felt that I was enraptured in the outdoors; hearing those chimes.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
March 17th, 2021 10:04
AuburnScribbler said:
Loving the breezy like style here Fay, as I was reading, I really felt that I was enraptured in the outdoors; hearing those chimes.
Bravo, and I hope all is well.
March 17th, 2021 10:04
Catching the Drift
Doggerel Dave said:
A well engineered set of chimes does lend something almost magical in the right position. Did have such a set once; I\'m afraid no more. There\'s no \'right position\' now. Your well engineered poem must be the substitute, Fay.
March 17th, 2021 07:02
Doggerel Dave said:
A well engineered set of chimes does lend something almost magical in the right position. Did have such a set once; I\'m afraid no more. There\'s no \'right position\' now. Your well engineered poem must be the substitute, Fay.
March 17th, 2021 07:02
Catching the Drift
Classicmister said:
Lovely words Faye and a fine tribute to Aeolus - the God of Winds!
March 17th, 2021 06:18
Classicmister said:
Lovely words Faye and a fine tribute to Aeolus - the God of Winds!
March 17th, 2021 06:18
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