Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Catching the Drift
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting , and engaging words , Fay 🙂 I liked reading this . I like your choice of words
March 17th, 2021 05:03
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Interesting , and engaging words , Fay 🙂 I liked reading this . I like your choice of words
March 17th, 2021 05:03
Bounty
Goldfinch60 said:
That water pouring over the stone brings such highlight to our lives, as do your words Fay.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:18
Goldfinch60 said:
That water pouring over the stone brings such highlight to our lives, as do your words Fay.
Andy
March 16th, 2021 01:18
Bounty
L. B. Mek said:
I understand dear Fay, although I haven\'t been to a lot of waterfalls in my life, I can appreciate that majestic quality they resonate, which you\'ve captured with such impassioned words in your write:
\'Sing with me this sacred-still place\'..
Amen!
March 15th, 2021 07:23
L. B. Mek said:
I understand dear Fay, although I haven\'t been to a lot of waterfalls in my life, I can appreciate that majestic quality they resonate, which you\'ve captured with such impassioned words in your write:
\'Sing with me this sacred-still place\'..
Amen!
March 15th, 2021 07:23
Bounty
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Was that Orchi singing too or another falling rock.
How easily I slip into these scenes you create Fay. I could feel the damp air from the water falling to the rocks, see the ever hunting birds too.
March 15th, 2021 06:24
dusk arising said:
Ouch! Was that Orchi singing too or another falling rock.
How easily I slip into these scenes you create Fay. I could feel the damp air from the water falling to the rocks, see the ever hunting birds too.
March 15th, 2021 06:24
Our Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there within our hearts no matter what circumstances come within.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:24
Goldfinch60 said:
That love will always be there within our hearts no matter what circumstances come within.
Andy
March 15th, 2021 01:24
Our Poem
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the sweetest words are, \"Goodbye my love,\" but they are also the most difficult to say. During these hard times, finding happiness is rare and maybe not meant to be, A return to normal may mean a return to loneliness. The unspoken truth is perhaps best to remain thus. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:40
MendedFences27 said:
Sometimes the sweetest words are, \"Goodbye my love,\" but they are also the most difficult to say. During these hard times, finding happiness is rare and maybe not meant to be, A return to normal may mean a return to loneliness. The unspoken truth is perhaps best to remain thus. - Phil A.
March 14th, 2021 19:40
Our Poem
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully expressed, Fay. The scar tissue of love runs deep.
March 14th, 2021 07:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully expressed, Fay. The scar tissue of love runs deep.
March 14th, 2021 07:56
Our Poem
dusk arising said:
How our endings have shaped our picture of a safer future. Who hasn\'t found themselves in a similar position to that you describe, overruled by a sense of self preservation. Until that final letting go when the floodgates of desire burst open. Oh the safety net lockdown has provided but shall we be so much more susceptible after? I imagine we will.
March 14th, 2021 06:05
dusk arising said:
How our endings have shaped our picture of a safer future. Who hasn\'t found themselves in a similar position to that you describe, overruled by a sense of self preservation. Until that final letting go when the floodgates of desire burst open. Oh the safety net lockdown has provided but shall we be so much more susceptible after? I imagine we will.
March 14th, 2021 06:05
Sundayness
Neville said:
Brought back some grand memories and a tear to the eye, so ya did ..
Particularly poignant and poetically pertinent this Mothering Sunday ..
... My word .. how I do so miss mine .. Thank you for this Fay ......... Neville x
March 14th, 2021 03:47
Neville said:
Brought back some grand memories and a tear to the eye, so ya did ..
Particularly poignant and poetically pertinent this Mothering Sunday ..
... My word .. how I do so miss mine .. Thank you for this Fay ......... Neville x
March 14th, 2021 03:47
Tudor Love-Note.
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words faire maiden taketh me into that place where hearts cryeth out for that love that will waiting there \'til the end of time.
Sir Andy of Rosegarden.
March 14th, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words faire maiden taketh me into that place where hearts cryeth out for that love that will waiting there \'til the end of time.
Sir Andy of Rosegarden.
March 14th, 2021 01:38
Tudor Love-Note.
dusk arising said:
Dearest one who doth yet place the fairest smile upon my lips with the airy taste of promise should soon the will of destiny place within our grasp the grace of an encounter. It is with a breath, which such modernity one would suggest be \'baited\', upon which I await such opportunity.
Cor luvvaduck an all that maam, bless ya rosey cheeks, for ya dun got me all enthralled there dintcha. I steal an apple for ya smile to see another verse.
March 13th, 2021 14:08
dusk arising said:
Dearest one who doth yet place the fairest smile upon my lips with the airy taste of promise should soon the will of destiny place within our grasp the grace of an encounter. It is with a breath, which such modernity one would suggest be \'baited\', upon which I await such opportunity.
Cor luvvaduck an all that maam, bless ya rosey cheeks, for ya dun got me all enthralled there dintcha. I steal an apple for ya smile to see another verse.
March 13th, 2021 14:08
Tudor Love-Note.
FredPeyer said:
You transported me back into the middle ages, Fay! Makes me think that it would be great to write like that again. It is much more romantic!
March 13th, 2021 11:32
FredPeyer said:
You transported me back into the middle ages, Fay! Makes me think that it would be great to write like that again. It is much more romantic!
March 13th, 2021 11:32
Tudor Love-Note.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Fay. At times like those, it feels the poems find you and not the other way round.
March 13th, 2021 08:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well written, Fay. At times like those, it feels the poems find you and not the other way round.
March 13th, 2021 08:45
Tudor Love-Note.
Neville said:
Gadzooks, forsooth and by Saint John
my lady has a way with ye words .... x
March 13th, 2021 07:48
Neville said:
Gadzooks, forsooth and by Saint John
my lady has a way with ye words .... x
March 13th, 2021 07:48
Tudor Love-Note.
Doggerel Dave said:
Verily Ye shall have my response forthwith, Madam..
Cor it ain\'t half good - got me going there, Fay.
March 13th, 2021 07:29
Doggerel Dave said:
Verily Ye shall have my response forthwith, Madam..
Cor it ain\'t half good - got me going there, Fay.
March 13th, 2021 07:29
Tide-Turn.
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging lovely read , Fay 🙂 nice choice of words
March 13th, 2021 06:32
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Engaging lovely read , Fay 🙂 nice choice of words
March 13th, 2021 06:32
Carrying On
Neville said:
its what they have had to do since for ever, isn\'t it .. to the outsider .. my word it might look romantic .. to those that live it .. its a matter of survival innit ..........
I swear I could taste salt just then and hear the thud of a fisherman\'s keel against hidden shingle n rocks ..
March 12th, 2021 05:41
Neville said:
its what they have had to do since for ever, isn\'t it .. to the outsider .. my word it might look romantic .. to those that live it .. its a matter of survival innit ..........
I swear I could taste salt just then and hear the thud of a fisherman\'s keel against hidden shingle n rocks ..
March 12th, 2021 05:41
Carrying On
dusk arising said:
A time when a land lubber is well away from the coast.
Your post brings to mind the force which has left such ragged torn evidence of it\'s power to many coastlines and many a widows face.
But how you weave words to create this picture is such art Fay.
March 11th, 2021 09:28
dusk arising said:
A time when a land lubber is well away from the coast.
Your post brings to mind the force which has left such ragged torn evidence of it\'s power to many coastlines and many a widows face.
But how you weave words to create this picture is such art Fay.
March 11th, 2021 09:28
Carrying On
L. B. Mek said:
been a gusty last few days around my way, so your words read very timely dear Fay..
so too is that timeless lesson, for us to continue and fight, through the storms of life..
another wonderful read you\'ve shared,
I like the picture as well, dramatic
a scene from our landscape view but I imagine those busily trying to survive and offer a helping hand, see a much more windowed view of existence in that moment, such is life
March 11th, 2021 07:07
L. B. Mek said:
been a gusty last few days around my way, so your words read very timely dear Fay..
so too is that timeless lesson, for us to continue and fight, through the storms of life..
another wonderful read you\'ve shared,
I like the picture as well, dramatic
a scene from our landscape view but I imagine those busily trying to survive and offer a helping hand, see a much more windowed view of existence in that moment, such is life
March 11th, 2021 07:07
Carrying On
orchidee said:
Stormy time again for you. Good write Fay. I\'m not near the coast myself.
March 11th, 2021 05:20
orchidee said:
Stormy time again for you. Good write Fay. I\'m not near the coast myself.
March 11th, 2021 05:20
By Verse
Neville said:
seriously well crafted poems like this are timeless ...............
March 10th, 2021 15:52
Neville said:
seriously well crafted poems like this are timeless ...............
March 10th, 2021 15:52
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