Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Incoming
L. B. Mek said:
\'Now windless calm covers the distance
between shore and ship in misty-grey haze
and she in her Sunday-best
waves to the horizon and incoming\'..
so immersive and beautiful!
wish I could freely curse without offending people
cause some things are that good
only swear words can express
just how much, they force us to feel: alive...
a great read dear Fay!
\'worded so intimate
like, we need but close our eyes
to feel
that depicted warmth
on our very own cheeks\'
April 22nd, 2021 03:50
L. B. Mek said:
\'Now windless calm covers the distance
between shore and ship in misty-grey haze
and she in her Sunday-best
waves to the horizon and incoming\'..
so immersive and beautiful!
wish I could freely curse without offending people
cause some things are that good
only swear words can express
just how much, they force us to feel: alive...
a great read dear Fay!
\'worded so intimate
like, we need but close our eyes
to feel
that depicted warmth
on our very own cheeks\'
April 22nd, 2021 03:50
Incoming
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, so many must be so happy to see their loved ones return from the sea.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, so many must be so happy to see their loved ones return from the sea.
Andy
April 22nd, 2021 00:18
Incoming
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Easy to go where you were taking me.
April 21st, 2021 09:12
Jerry Reynolds said:
Well done, Fay. Easy to go where you were taking me.
April 21st, 2021 09:12
Incoming
dusk arising said:
You tease the longing, in this my solo heart, to be the hero arriving upon high tide. So easily today I take your words and create a scene in my minds eye.
Poetry that massages an ache.
Quite wonderful.
April 21st, 2021 09:09
dusk arising said:
You tease the longing, in this my solo heart, to be the hero arriving upon high tide. So easily today I take your words and create a scene in my minds eye.
Poetry that massages an ache.
Quite wonderful.
April 21st, 2021 09:09
Incoming
Doggerel Dave said:
A boat comes in - waiting...
This one evokes memories,,,
Thanks for that Fay.
April 21st, 2021 07:11
Doggerel Dave said:
A boat comes in - waiting...
This one evokes memories,,,
Thanks for that Fay.
April 21st, 2021 07:11
Incoming
Neville said:
lovely words indeed ... sent a shiver write through me so they did .. you cant beat a foam soaked dress ... wish I had thought of that ..
whoa .. there goes another one ...
April 21st, 2021 03:35
Neville said:
lovely words indeed ... sent a shiver write through me so they did .. you cant beat a foam soaked dress ... wish I had thought of that ..
whoa .. there goes another one ...
April 21st, 2021 03:35
Incoming
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , Fay 🙂I enjoyed reading your words
April 21st, 2021 03:22
Caring dove said:
Lovely words , Fay 🙂I enjoyed reading your words
April 21st, 2021 03:22
Readied
Goldfinch60 said:
Your knight will ride into your life very soon with words like these pulling him to you Fay.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Your knight will ride into your life very soon with words like these pulling him to you Fay.
Andy
April 21st, 2021 01:10
Readied
Michael Edwards said:
Just looked in and found this - I now know everything is still tickety boo here on MPS.
April 20th, 2021 15:48
Michael Edwards said:
Just looked in and found this - I now know everything is still tickety boo here on MPS.
April 20th, 2021 15:48
Readied
Neville said:
Oh upon my every word .. such an invitation should not be deferred .. I shall hasten to thy chamber forthwith my lady ............... hold on while I cometh .................... x
April 20th, 2021 11:05
Neville said:
Oh upon my every word .. such an invitation should not be deferred .. I shall hasten to thy chamber forthwith my lady ............... hold on while I cometh .................... x
April 20th, 2021 11:05
Readied
dusk arising said:
My word, this \'virgin\' bride has been well schooled and readied for her grooms attentions and desires. So much so that one worries about the possibility of...... nah, i\'m too twenty first century..... is there such a thing as a virgin bride any more?
OOOH Fay, the messes you get me into. Now look wht you\'ve done.
April 20th, 2021 09:37
dusk arising said:
My word, this \'virgin\' bride has been well schooled and readied for her grooms attentions and desires. So much so that one worries about the possibility of...... nah, i\'m too twenty first century..... is there such a thing as a virgin bride any more?
OOOH Fay, the messes you get me into. Now look wht you\'ve done.
April 20th, 2021 09:37
Readied
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Rose...Thanks for that, Fay - a little eroticsm can go a long way.
Enjoyed muchly.
April 20th, 2021 08:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Ah Rose...Thanks for that, Fay - a little eroticsm can go a long way.
Enjoyed muchly.
April 20th, 2021 08:09
Unreal
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, taking back to Nature\'s Realm once more.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words Fay, taking back to Nature\'s Realm once more.
Andy
April 20th, 2021 00:13
Unreal
dusk arising said:
You do paint with words so well Fay. Worthy of my several re-reads to soak into the canvas and glean the richness of colour and gentle sheen of trout silken motion.
A air of peace came upon me with the vision I reached and inspired me to write.
April 19th, 2021 07:00
dusk arising said:
You do paint with words so well Fay. Worthy of my several re-reads to soak into the canvas and glean the richness of colour and gentle sheen of trout silken motion.
A air of peace came upon me with the vision I reached and inspired me to write.
April 19th, 2021 07:00
Unreal
L. B. Mek said:
\'with light\'s lacy fingers, weaving
watery lines on sleepy lake.\'
\'as the beautiful ghost
of a fading rainbow dances its last
and night closes the show.\'
sensuality of sumptuously worded poetry
exemplified with skilled delicacy
attesting to a poet\'s love for all the wondrous - nuance
within this artform of indulgently inked: decadence...
simply brilliant! yet again dear Fay
April 19th, 2021 05:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'with light\'s lacy fingers, weaving
watery lines on sleepy lake.\'
\'as the beautiful ghost
of a fading rainbow dances its last
and night closes the show.\'
sensuality of sumptuously worded poetry
exemplified with skilled delicacy
attesting to a poet\'s love for all the wondrous - nuance
within this artform of indulgently inked: decadence...
simply brilliant! yet again dear Fay
April 19th, 2021 05:48
Unreal
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I never knew there was so much in the sky. Well, I know now! lol.
April 19th, 2021 04:01
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I never knew there was so much in the sky. Well, I know now! lol.
April 19th, 2021 04:01
Listening
Goldfinch60 said:
A great deal of emotion in your words Fay, looking at the sea can bring us so many ideas from te past.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
A great deal of emotion in your words Fay, looking at the sea can bring us so many ideas from te past.
Andy
April 17th, 2021 00:21
Listening
dusk arising said:
Water brings to us a tranquillity of reflective mood whether it be stillness of lake or crashing of storm waves observed from safety. You placed me in a mental picture of a peaceful place with sounds playing a weeping sorrow for the lives lost in another futility which infests the human condition.
\'War\' a history of human kind.
April 16th, 2021 12:41
dusk arising said:
Water brings to us a tranquillity of reflective mood whether it be stillness of lake or crashing of storm waves observed from safety. You placed me in a mental picture of a peaceful place with sounds playing a weeping sorrow for the lives lost in another futility which infests the human condition.
\'War\' a history of human kind.
April 16th, 2021 12:41
Listening
L. B. Mek said:
\'Drew young men and women toward battles over
nothing but misapplied fears.
Lifetimes float hormonally by in river-side history
as pride\'s facade leaves its action.\'
how timely and current your words read
sad - how much we regress yearly
from our collective: dreams of unity..
such a poignant write dear Fay, wonderfully worded!
April 16th, 2021 05:00
L. B. Mek said:
\'Drew young men and women toward battles over
nothing but misapplied fears.
Lifetimes float hormonally by in river-side history
as pride\'s facade leaves its action.\'
how timely and current your words read
sad - how much we regress yearly
from our collective: dreams of unity..
such a poignant write dear Fay, wonderfully worded!
April 16th, 2021 05:00
Movement
SureshG said:
You have so romanticized that sliver of moment which separates us from the heavenly dream state and nudges us towards the eventuality of another day.
April 13th, 2021 22:01
SureshG said:
You have so romanticized that sliver of moment which separates us from the heavenly dream state and nudges us towards the eventuality of another day.
April 13th, 2021 22:01
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