Comments received on poems by Fay Slimm.
Meditation
ron parrish aka wordman said:
meditation is the way to release,been around since time began,loved the way you expressed it
May 9th, 2021 09:37
ron parrish aka wordman said:
meditation is the way to release,been around since time began,loved the way you expressed it
May 9th, 2021 09:37
Meditation
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad my few words of tribute to small things helped you find quiet and peace dear friend - - and when summer arrives your garden insect aliveness will no doubt find you plenty of which to absorb and fill your poet\'s fancy as to happenings under your own feet. Thanking you for an engaging comment on Meditation.
May 8th, 2021 13:01
Fay Slimm. said:
Glad my few words of tribute to small things helped you find quiet and peace dear friend - - and when summer arrives your garden insect aliveness will no doubt find you plenty of which to absorb and fill your poet\'s fancy as to happenings under your own feet. Thanking you for an engaging comment on Meditation.
May 8th, 2021 13:01
Meditation
dusk arising said:
Today in the rainfall i tried to imagine meditation out there in the wetness. I feel my human frailty would fail me today. However....
... here in the warm sat before a laptop, your words took me to the place my mind found peace and contemplated your well chosen words. A meditation in itself which i fell to quite easily.
On a summers day in my garden, were you to plonk yourself down upon the grass, you would be only too aware of the amazing quantity of little black spiders which scurry out of your way and the soft mounds where ants have made their nests.
May 8th, 2021 12:52
dusk arising said:
Today in the rainfall i tried to imagine meditation out there in the wetness. I feel my human frailty would fail me today. However....
... here in the warm sat before a laptop, your words took me to the place my mind found peace and contemplated your well chosen words. A meditation in itself which i fell to quite easily.
On a summers day in my garden, were you to plonk yourself down upon the grass, you would be only too aware of the amazing quantity of little black spiders which scurry out of your way and the soft mounds where ants have made their nests.
May 8th, 2021 12:52
Meditation
jarcher54 said:
Interesting, compelling stanza form... that last offset word waits like a gift to be opened, a treat behind the little window of the advent calendar. Laughed when your nose popped out! Sighed when nature\'s great... what??? poem! emerged.
May 7th, 2021 22:41
jarcher54 said:
Interesting, compelling stanza form... that last offset word waits like a gift to be opened, a treat behind the little window of the advent calendar. Laughed when your nose popped out! Sighed when nature\'s great... what??? poem! emerged.
May 7th, 2021 22:41
Meditation
myself and me said:
Such a wonderful state of mind. I really need such a meditation.
May 7th, 2021 19:57
myself and me said:
Such a wonderful state of mind. I really need such a meditation.
May 7th, 2021 19:57
Meditation
Neville said:
... every now and zen .. I get that same old feeling ..... perfectly put dear poet ..................... Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:16
Neville said:
... every now and zen .. I get that same old feeling ..... perfectly put dear poet ..................... Neville
May 7th, 2021 08:16
Meditation
L. B. Mek said:
we could spend a few hundred words, detailing
the transcendent effect we experience
while reading your work, dear Fay..
or - like you\'ve showcased to us, we can learn and simply
breath - in and out, one treasured - blink, of life: at a time...
brilliantly executed!
May 7th, 2021 07:04
L. B. Mek said:
we could spend a few hundred words, detailing
the transcendent effect we experience
while reading your work, dear Fay..
or - like you\'ve showcased to us, we can learn and simply
breath - in and out, one treasured - blink, of life: at a time...
brilliantly executed!
May 7th, 2021 07:04
Meditation
Doggerel Dave said:
How did you do that Fay?
First stanza - at back of mind (easiest way to describe) an almost meditative state,
Second Stanza - an indeterminate but certain feeling of the process all around me. What more to say?
May 7th, 2021 06:57
Doggerel Dave said:
How did you do that Fay?
First stanza - at back of mind (easiest way to describe) an almost meditative state,
Second Stanza - an indeterminate but certain feeling of the process all around me. What more to say?
May 7th, 2021 06:57
More
L. B. Mek said:
and more than that
you not only grasped all that instinctive emotionality
we experience but can barely express,
but much more than that
you meaningfully chose to share
within goosebump inducing, emotive choice wordage;
feeling\'s reimagined and conveyed within poetry
we can all relate with, so easily..
another sumptuous read, dear Fay
May 7th, 2021 04:52
L. B. Mek said:
and more than that
you not only grasped all that instinctive emotionality
we experience but can barely express,
but much more than that
you meaningfully chose to share
within goosebump inducing, emotive choice wordage;
feeling\'s reimagined and conveyed within poetry
we can all relate with, so easily..
another sumptuous read, dear Fay
May 7th, 2021 04:52
More
Neville said:
I first read these words last eve ... and just knew I would return this mane, drawn back t\'ward the light
........ You have such a way with em Fay .... with words I mean ... so deftly placed pon page after page .. how this old fella envies ya pen ....
May 7th, 2021 03:25
Neville said:
I first read these words last eve ... and just knew I would return this mane, drawn back t\'ward the light
........ You have such a way with em Fay .... with words I mean ... so deftly placed pon page after page .. how this old fella envies ya pen ....
May 7th, 2021 03:25
More
Goldfinch60 said:
A great deal to think about in your wonderful words Fay and so much said in that last stanza.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
A great deal to think about in your wonderful words Fay and so much said in that last stanza.
Andy
May 7th, 2021 00:26
Instinctive
L. B. Mek said:
\'and with dawn\'s tinted shimmer
blue high-light\'s sky.\'
\'and I just stare quietly admiring
wings in strident zest\'..
such unassuming elegance within words, you\'ve shared
simply beautiful, dear Fay
May 6th, 2021 04:48
L. B. Mek said:
\'and with dawn\'s tinted shimmer
blue high-light\'s sky.\'
\'and I just stare quietly admiring
wings in strident zest\'..
such unassuming elegance within words, you\'ve shared
simply beautiful, dear Fay
May 6th, 2021 04:48
Instinctive
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an ‘early bird riser’ myself I see and here all these wonderful glories of nature at dawn. Good write Fay.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Being an ‘early bird riser’ myself I see and here all these wonderful glories of nature at dawn. Good write Fay.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:09
Instinctive
Neville said:
I just kinda knew you had something like this up ya sleeve Fay ... I am a horneythologist after all ......... never thought it might read quite so beautiful tho\' .....
Neville
May 5th, 2021 14:51
Neville said:
I just kinda knew you had something like this up ya sleeve Fay ... I am a horneythologist after all ......... never thought it might read quite so beautiful tho\' .....
Neville
May 5th, 2021 14:51
Instinctive
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll settle for the last - so we have almost got it covered.
\'Pity \'your\' birds don\'t appreciate the great write ups you bestow on their behalf, Fay.
May 5th, 2021 07:17
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ll settle for the last - so we have almost got it covered.
\'Pity \'your\' birds don\'t appreciate the great write ups you bestow on their behalf, Fay.
May 5th, 2021 07:17
Instinctive
rebmasters said:
Beautiful and evocative language. A treat for the eyes. I particularly love the 2nd stanza
May 5th, 2021 05:36
rebmasters said:
Beautiful and evocative language. A treat for the eyes. I particularly love the 2nd stanza
May 5th, 2021 05:36
Invincible
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, desire is within all of us and, as you say, it is invincible.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Fay, desire is within all of us and, as you say, it is invincible.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 00:21
Invincible
Doggerel Dave said:
I am somewhat occasionally relieved Fay, that after all these years Big D has mostly got tired of calling.
However this should not be seen as a dismissal - it is a well honed delightful reminder which bought back.....memories....and... well... um...
May 4th, 2021 21:46
Doggerel Dave said:
I am somewhat occasionally relieved Fay, that after all these years Big D has mostly got tired of calling.
However this should not be seen as a dismissal - it is a well honed delightful reminder which bought back.....memories....and... well... um...
May 4th, 2021 21:46
Invincible
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, Fay will be thinking about this one for a while.
May 4th, 2021 08:56
Jerry Reynolds said:
Wow, Fay will be thinking about this one for a while.
May 4th, 2021 08:56
Invincible
L. B. Mek said:
\'enthralment
drenches repression
with selfhood\'s long needed proof
of awesome emancipation.\'
\'for I am Desire
and subjugate moves to check my
intention of more extrication.\'
\'Oppose me and subjection replaces
resolution\'..
your wondrous poetic genius, never ceases to amaze me, dear Fay..
simply a class above: outstanding!
May 4th, 2021 06:36
L. B. Mek said:
\'enthralment
drenches repression
with selfhood\'s long needed proof
of awesome emancipation.\'
\'for I am Desire
and subjugate moves to check my
intention of more extrication.\'
\'Oppose me and subjection replaces
resolution\'..
your wondrous poetic genius, never ceases to amaze me, dear Fay..
simply a class above: outstanding!
May 4th, 2021 06:36
Invincible
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I never knew desire had so much. Well, I know now!
May 4th, 2021 05:07
orchidee said:
Good write Fay.
I never knew desire had so much. Well, I know now!
May 4th, 2021 05:07
Unrivaled
L. B. Mek said:
\'Praise be for unrivaled female dedication to
successful survival of the closely knit family\'..
Amen!
I read your words a few times to get a good grasp
of the subtle brilliance you\'ve utilised, to create
such a tangibly immersive dedication, dear Fay
and I agree with mr wise Neville\'s comment
one of your best, for me too
May 4th, 2021 04:23
L. B. Mek said:
\'Praise be for unrivaled female dedication to
successful survival of the closely knit family\'..
Amen!
I read your words a few times to get a good grasp
of the subtle brilliance you\'ve utilised, to create
such a tangibly immersive dedication, dear Fay
and I agree with mr wise Neville\'s comment
one of your best, for me too
May 4th, 2021 04:23
Unrivaled
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Fay, I was there with this very hardworking lady due to your words.
Andy
May 4th, 2021 00:08
Goldfinch60 said:
What wonderful words Fay, I was there with this very hardworking lady due to your words.
Andy
May 4th, 2021 00:08
Unrivaled
Neville said:
... this just happens to be quite simply ... the great Lady Fay at her most bestest ...
May 3rd, 2021 13:54
Neville said:
... this just happens to be quite simply ... the great Lady Fay at her most bestest ...
May 3rd, 2021 13:54
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