Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Our Bitter End
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
Masquerade
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Masquerade
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
Masquerade
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
Black Onyx Eyes
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
Pen
orchidee said:
Doh! Now a tercet. What\'s that when it\'s \'at home\', as they say?!
Is poetic ignorance of styles, forms, etc, bliss to me? lol.
October 3rd, 2024 02:10
orchidee said:
Doh! Now a tercet. What\'s that when it\'s \'at home\', as they say?!
Is poetic ignorance of styles, forms, etc, bliss to me? lol.
October 3rd, 2024 02:10
The Killing Word
orchidee said:
I dunno about them iambic things, not being into poetry styles much! I\'m sure it\'s a good write, iambic thingy or not! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:11
orchidee said:
I dunno about them iambic things, not being into poetry styles much! I\'m sure it\'s a good write, iambic thingy or not! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:11
Strangers in the Sun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. It\'s awesome you noticed that! Thank you so much! I am glad it resonated with you!
September 29th, 2024 22:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. It\'s awesome you noticed that! Thank you so much! I am glad it resonated with you!
September 29th, 2024 22:59
Strangers in the Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions no need to rhyme in rhyme a fun read that gives pause to thought as well
September 29th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions no need to rhyme in rhyme a fun read that gives pause to thought as well
September 29th, 2024 07:03
All Growed Up
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Puerility mixed with willful senility\' - I knowed people like that....couldn\'t be me, though.......
Fun write.
September 28th, 2024 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Puerility mixed with willful senility\' - I knowed people like that....couldn\'t be me, though.......
Fun write.
September 28th, 2024 18:19
All Growed Up
Cheeky Missy said:
What initially caught my eye was the language of your title...and here I stupidly thought I was alone in using that terminology. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Too perfect!
September 28th, 2024 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
What initially caught my eye was the language of your title...and here I stupidly thought I was alone in using that terminology. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Too perfect!
September 28th, 2024 17:58
Hello World
sorenbarrett said:
A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a message of defiance and anger. Very nice. It must have been a lot of work
September 26th, 2024 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a message of defiance and anger. Very nice. It must have been a lot of work
September 26th, 2024 13:12
Away From You
orchidee said:
Now why you disagreeing with me? I am he who must be obeyed! lol.
September 21st, 2024 10:23
orchidee said:
Now why you disagreeing with me? I am he who must be obeyed! lol.
September 21st, 2024 10:23
Pocket Publish
orchidee said:
Or similarly - someone comes knocking at your front door just as you\'ve got in the bath or shower! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:20
orchidee said:
Or similarly - someone comes knocking at your front door just as you\'ve got in the bath or shower! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:20
Broken
sorenbarrett said:
Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the cost of repairing it is not worth the money or effort. And I always wonder why I keep those things. I got the message and have felt that way myself many times afeeling of loss that goes deeper than the object itself.
September 16th, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the cost of repairing it is not worth the money or effort. And I always wonder why I keep those things. I got the message and have felt that way myself many times afeeling of loss that goes deeper than the object itself.
September 16th, 2024 09:02
Broken
orchidee said:
Doh! Now why did I not obey: \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it\'. It\'s broke now! heehee.
We\'re \'broken\' in a bereavement here though.
September 16th, 2024 08:38
orchidee said:
Doh! Now why did I not obey: \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it\'. It\'s broke now! heehee.
We\'re \'broken\' in a bereavement here though.
September 16th, 2024 08:38
The Stare
Doggerel Dave said:
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then discretion would suggest a retreat to another venue. I know.........
A very real and truthful write.
September 11th, 2024 20:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then discretion would suggest a retreat to another venue. I know.........
A very real and truthful write.
September 11th, 2024 20:34
The Stare
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! Yous been taken prisoner without any grand disruption of the situation nor uproar, simply taken captive.
Excellent details with a haunting poignancy, beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! Yous been taken prisoner without any grand disruption of the situation nor uproar, simply taken captive.
Excellent details with a haunting poignancy, beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:28
Visions of Death
orchidee said:
I wish I would stop eating [poisonous] apple pips. Doh! (heehee).
Note to self: Noooo, Orchi, don\'t eat the apple AND the pips!
September 8th, 2024 11:45
orchidee said:
I wish I would stop eating [poisonous] apple pips. Doh! (heehee).
Note to self: Noooo, Orchi, don\'t eat the apple AND the pips!
September 8th, 2024 11:45
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