Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Window
orchidee said:
Don\'t look in Popeye\'s window. Why not? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 28th, 2025 11:09
orchidee said:
Don\'t look in Popeye\'s window. Why not? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 28th, 2025 11:09
The Window
arqios said:
That has brought me back to certain recurring dreams that I thought had been forgotten. Good to know we’re not alone; that the occurrence is something others have and get past as well. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 28th, 2025 08:57
arqios said:
That has brought me back to certain recurring dreams that I thought had been forgotten. Good to know we’re not alone; that the occurrence is something others have and get past as well. 🕊️🙏🏻
August 28th, 2025 08:57
The Window
Damaso said:
Wow, what an intense post today, my friend. I\'m completely captivated by it. I can relate to the feeling of dismay, a very sincere line from the bottom of my heart. It\'s always a blessing to stop by and read your post. Inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 28th, 2025 08:33
Damaso said:
Wow, what an intense post today, my friend. I\'m completely captivated by it. I can relate to the feeling of dismay, a very sincere line from the bottom of my heart. It\'s always a blessing to stop by and read your post. Inspiring. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
August 28th, 2025 08:33
The Window
sorenbarrett said:
Okay Tristan I\'m going to give you my take although I am not at all sure what you had in mind. A window is what we use to see the world outside and this one dark and dull clouds the view of what can be seen. Sitting in the middle of nowhere gives me a feeling of being lost and not knowing where one is. A rock is something firm and hard what things are built on and I see knowledge as a rock breaking the window of ignorance and the shards of broken ignorance hurt. Being overwhelmed with blackness leaves feelings of being engulfed by nothingness and its darkness. This seems like a deep existential crisis and fear. Thats my first take
August 28th, 2025 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Okay Tristan I\'m going to give you my take although I am not at all sure what you had in mind. A window is what we use to see the world outside and this one dark and dull clouds the view of what can be seen. Sitting in the middle of nowhere gives me a feeling of being lost and not knowing where one is. A rock is something firm and hard what things are built on and I see knowledge as a rock breaking the window of ignorance and the shards of broken ignorance hurt. Being overwhelmed with blackness leaves feelings of being engulfed by nothingness and its darkness. This seems like a deep existential crisis and fear. Thats my first take
August 28th, 2025 08:15
The Window
Teddy.15 said:
I have repeating nightmares from childhood, something that truly fascinates me, They have faded with time yet creep in rarely, your dream poetry is amazing, i know for a fact that brick will never hit you because your courage and determination is your protection. 🌹
August 28th, 2025 07:05
Teddy.15 said:
I have repeating nightmares from childhood, something that truly fascinates me, They have faded with time yet creep in rarely, your dream poetry is amazing, i know for a fact that brick will never hit you because your courage and determination is your protection. 🌹
August 28th, 2025 07:05
Les Fleurs du Mal
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent poem, if you love gothic, I would suggest take a trip of a lifetime one day to Prague. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 16:58
Teddy.15 said:
What a magnificent poem, if you love gothic, I would suggest take a trip of a lifetime one day to Prague. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 16:58
Les Fleurs du Mal
orchidee said:
What poems would Baudelaire write about Popeye? Don\'t answer that, of course! lol.
August 27th, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
What poems would Baudelaire write about Popeye? Don\'t answer that, of course! lol.
August 27th, 2025 12:10
Les Fleurs du Mal
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the duality of the poet\'s role, portraying them as both an observer and a conduit of profound truths and experiences. The poem explores the burdens of artistic expression, the struggle between creativity and the weight of harsh realities, and the complexities of existence. the poet\'s connection to the world, the sensory experiences that influence their work, and the darker aspects of life that inform their art.
August 27th, 2025 09:48
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around the duality of the poet\'s role, portraying them as both an observer and a conduit of profound truths and experiences. The poem explores the burdens of artistic expression, the struggle between creativity and the weight of harsh realities, and the complexities of existence. the poet\'s connection to the world, the sensory experiences that influence their work, and the darker aspects of life that inform their art.
August 27th, 2025 09:48
Les Fleurs du Mal
sorenbarrett said:
Raw it bleeds and the reader\'s hands are bloodied. An albatross a symbol of freedom and fair winds for sailing becomes an ill omen if killed it is a burden of guilt leading to misfortune. I have seen the albatross in life and metaphysically. This is a graphic and vivid poem speaking existentially and the reference to prophet seems tied to the spiritual portion and vision needed with one head of eyes that see what others don\'t, one with ears that hear the pain and bleeding of the world and the third that of experience having lived the bloodiness and carry it with him (ironically like the mariner that kills the albatross that must wear it around the neck as a reminder) Nicely done Tristan a fave
August 27th, 2025 07:29
sorenbarrett said:
Raw it bleeds and the reader\'s hands are bloodied. An albatross a symbol of freedom and fair winds for sailing becomes an ill omen if killed it is a burden of guilt leading to misfortune. I have seen the albatross in life and metaphysically. This is a graphic and vivid poem speaking existentially and the reference to prophet seems tied to the spiritual portion and vision needed with one head of eyes that see what others don\'t, one with ears that hear the pain and bleeding of the world and the third that of experience having lived the bloodiness and carry it with him (ironically like the mariner that kills the albatross that must wear it around the neck as a reminder) Nicely done Tristan a fave
August 27th, 2025 07:29
The Ones Behind
Teddy.15 said:
Acceptance of ones self is the strongest form of power one can have dear Tristan, despite it all, you came through. Kudos. Love yourself and remember that emotional attachment to anyone but your own soul can fail you. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:55
Teddy.15 said:
Acceptance of ones self is the strongest form of power one can have dear Tristan, despite it all, you came through. Kudos. Love yourself and remember that emotional attachment to anyone but your own soul can fail you. 🌹
August 27th, 2025 05:55
Cold As Hell
NafisaSB said:
one sided unrequited love - awareness and despair woven together so beautifully - well done, dear poet...you have captured the intensity of emotions in contrast with the cold shoulder given in a very descriptive way
August 26th, 2025 23:07
NafisaSB said:
one sided unrequited love - awareness and despair woven together so beautifully - well done, dear poet...you have captured the intensity of emotions in contrast with the cold shoulder given in a very descriptive way
August 26th, 2025 23:07
The Ones Behind
Neville said:
Never fear, I\'m just one of many that\'s got your back covered .. 😎🐈⬛🐦⬛👍
August 26th, 2025 16:10
Neville said:
Never fear, I\'m just one of many that\'s got your back covered .. 😎🐈⬛🐦⬛👍
August 26th, 2025 16:10
The Ones Behind
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Never dabbled meself in the vicinity of the deity invoked, or if I have then he was addressed by the name the Scriptures gave, I hope. Creepy and macabre with a frightening import. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a ghastly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 10:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Never dabbled meself in the vicinity of the deity invoked, or if I have then he was addressed by the name the Scriptures gave, I hope. Creepy and macabre with a frightening import. Excellently rendered with perfect imagery and a ghastly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 10:18
The Ones Behind
orchidee said:
All I know is - Popeye\'s never mediocre. Why not? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 26th, 2025 09:14
orchidee said:
All I know is - Popeye\'s never mediocre. Why not? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 26th, 2025 09:14
The Ones Behind
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Congruence is a congregational farce.\" not going to forget soon. What a poem. I always rebelled (quite foolishly if I may add) against having to conform. Somehow this poem is going to be an anthem for me. Do I need to spend even a single thought about pressing \"fave\"- you be the judge.
August 26th, 2025 09:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Congruence is a congregational farce.\" not going to forget soon. What a poem. I always rebelled (quite foolishly if I may add) against having to conform. Somehow this poem is going to be an anthem for me. Do I need to spend even a single thought about pressing \"fave\"- you be the judge.
August 26th, 2025 09:13
The Ones Behind
sorenbarrett said:
The power of accepting oneself as sufficient and changing only for oneself is a primary recognition in identity. A lovely and powerful write
August 26th, 2025 07:57
sorenbarrett said:
The power of accepting oneself as sufficient and changing only for oneself is a primary recognition in identity. A lovely and powerful write
August 26th, 2025 07:57
Skeleton Key
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a delicious pleasure which practically leads to reveling in the indulgence of such skills as you trot forth as clothing for your message. Gorgeously rendered with exceptional imagery and a ghastly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 07:04
Cheeky Missy said:
There\'s a delicious pleasure which practically leads to reveling in the indulgence of such skills as you trot forth as clothing for your message. Gorgeously rendered with exceptional imagery and a ghastly poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 26th, 2025 07:04
Skeleton Key
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of darkness here with feelings of self cannibalism. A powerful sense of being consumed. Well done
August 25th, 2025 14:57
sorenbarrett said:
There is a lot of darkness here with feelings of self cannibalism. A powerful sense of being consumed. Well done
August 25th, 2025 14:57
Skeleton Key
orchidee said:
Obi\'s dastardly in his actions. What actions? Don\'t answer that, of course! lol.
August 25th, 2025 12:01
orchidee said:
Obi\'s dastardly in his actions. What actions? Don\'t answer that, of course! lol.
August 25th, 2025 12:01
Skeleton Key
Bella Shepard said:
I feel I am being lead through a labyrinth of mental illness with all of its abberations, where only death shows the way out. If this is the case, it is a horrifying glimpse into the mind of one so afflicted. It is a graphic masterpiece, frighteningly so.
August 25th, 2025 11:47
Bella Shepard said:
I feel I am being lead through a labyrinth of mental illness with all of its abberations, where only death shows the way out. If this is the case, it is a horrifying glimpse into the mind of one so afflicted. It is a graphic masterpiece, frighteningly so.
August 25th, 2025 11:47
Skeleton Key
Neville said:
You are the master of noir Tristan .. Ozzy had nowt on you brother .. and be sure I shall obtain said anthology if you provide an appropriate link and visit your website as often as I am able .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐧🐦⬛🐦⬛🎶🎶🐧🐦⬛😎👍
August 25th, 2025 10:15
Neville said:
You are the master of noir Tristan .. Ozzy had nowt on you brother .. and be sure I shall obtain said anthology if you provide an appropriate link and visit your website as often as I am able .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐧🐦⬛🐦⬛🎶🎶🐧🐦⬛😎👍
August 25th, 2025 10:15
Alone
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
And you say I’m the blessing? This can help so many young lives who struggle with aloneness and isolation today. Such a relatable write. It touches the depth of those who are too ashamed to speak. Or can not find their voice. You my friend are too a blessing! 🙏
August 25th, 2025 07:45
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
And you say I’m the blessing? This can help so many young lives who struggle with aloneness and isolation today. Such a relatable write. It touches the depth of those who are too ashamed to speak. Or can not find their voice. You my friend are too a blessing! 🙏
August 25th, 2025 07:45
Outcasts\' Oculus
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of resilience, community, and sanctuary in the face of adversity. It represents a haven for those who have been marginalized, highlighting the coexistence of fear and faith in a space built for healing and belonging.
August 25th, 2025 06:38
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of resilience, community, and sanctuary in the face of adversity. It represents a haven for those who have been marginalized, highlighting the coexistence of fear and faith in a space built for healing and belonging.
August 25th, 2025 06:38
the damnedest destinations
Cheeky Missy said:
Underestimation, eh? Ah, but this is bound to resonate with countless give or take a few points, the very concept of those false sweets echoing and reverbersting on the winds in seeming calm where the soul cannot find solace superbly rendered in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a lingering poignancy haunting. Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Underestimation, eh? Ah, but this is bound to resonate with countless give or take a few points, the very concept of those false sweets echoing and reverbersting on the winds in seeming calm where the soul cannot find solace superbly rendered in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a lingering poignancy haunting. Thank you for sharing.
August 24th, 2025 19:17
Outcasts\' Oculus
orchidee said:
Bit dark in there. Put some lights on - or more lights! lol. is that Popeye, one of those guys in that semi-circle? He gets in everywhere. lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:03
orchidee said:
Bit dark in there. Put some lights on - or more lights! lol. is that Popeye, one of those guys in that semi-circle? He gets in everywhere. lol.
August 24th, 2025 12:03
Outcasts\' Oculus
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely fantastic! Great work!
August 24th, 2025 10:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Absolutely fantastic! Great work!
August 24th, 2025 10:10
Outcasts\' Oculus
sorenbarrett said:
The format again emulates the theme. A poetic metaphor as well. A sanctuary within volcanic rock lovely
August 24th, 2025 06:45
sorenbarrett said:
The format again emulates the theme. A poetic metaphor as well. A sanctuary within volcanic rock lovely
August 24th, 2025 06:45
Outcasts\' Oculus
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible strength in this dear Tristan may it never be torn down and those who want to tear it down should simply go to hell. 🌹
August 24th, 2025 06:32
Teddy.15 said:
An incredible strength in this dear Tristan may it never be torn down and those who want to tear it down should simply go to hell. 🌹
August 24th, 2025 06:32
the damnedest destinations
Neville said:
I\'m near blown away don\'tcha know .. unique in every sense of the word .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🐦⬛👍
August 24th, 2025 03:14
Neville said:
I\'m near blown away don\'tcha know .. unique in every sense of the word .. Neville ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐💛🐦⬛👍
August 24th, 2025 03:14
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