Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
This Sunday Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh does not wike dreary nights? Winter must be a cruel drag. I mean, I struggle every January anyway, but it\'s only November and you\'s lamenting its \"dreary\" sight. I wishes you success in charming off its nastiness. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 17th, 2024 17:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh does not wike dreary nights? Winter must be a cruel drag. I mean, I struggle every January anyway, but it\'s only November and you\'s lamenting its \"dreary\" sight. I wishes you success in charming off its nastiness. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 17th, 2024 17:15
Satanic Panic
NinjaGirl said:
in my state, there was a candidate on the ballot named \"Lucifer\" and I often wonder if it would have been better or worse under him..? Obviously unlikely to win, but a funny prospect
November 17th, 2024 17:03
NinjaGirl said:
in my state, there was a candidate on the ballot named \"Lucifer\" and I often wonder if it would have been better or worse under him..? Obviously unlikely to win, but a funny prospect
November 17th, 2024 17:03
Satanic Panic
James Michael said:
“Stealing souls for Satan to deflower.”, resonates.
Glad to see you’re still cranking ‘em out!
November 16th, 2024 22:40
James Michael said:
“Stealing souls for Satan to deflower.”, resonates.
Glad to see you’re still cranking ‘em out!
November 16th, 2024 22:40
Satanic Panic
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be terribly depressing - Santa is an anagram of..... argh!! No relation though. Phew! Bit of Luther there, in the other comment?
November 16th, 2024 12:51
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be terribly depressing - Santa is an anagram of..... argh!! No relation though. Phew! Bit of Luther there, in the other comment?
November 16th, 2024 12:51
Satanic Panic
MendedFences27 said:
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the effort to learn the truth. If Satan exists it is in the hearts of those who fill the crap-trough.
The orange-man leads the way. He cannot exist a day without telling us several lies. He is, in fact Evil incarnate. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2024 11:38
MendedFences27 said:
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the effort to learn the truth. If Satan exists it is in the hearts of those who fill the crap-trough.
The orange-man leads the way. He cannot exist a day without telling us several lies. He is, in fact Evil incarnate. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2024 11:38
Satanic Panic
Neville said:
I think it is imperative that I take to my bunker as soon as it is fully stocked .. and hide down there awhile where it is thought to be satan proof (please note satan with a small s) .. Hell yeah, down there where I think I\'ll be pretty safe .. for a while anyway .. I thought orange was the new black by the way .. or maybe that was fake news too .. Neville 🐧👍
November 16th, 2024 10:30
Neville said:
I think it is imperative that I take to my bunker as soon as it is fully stocked .. and hide down there awhile where it is thought to be satan proof (please note satan with a small s) .. Hell yeah, down there where I think I\'ll be pretty safe .. for a while anyway .. I thought orange was the new black by the way .. or maybe that was fake news too .. Neville 🐧👍
November 16th, 2024 10:30
Satanic Panic
Teddy.15 said:
I truly feel this in all it\'s force. Kudos. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 09:04
Teddy.15 said:
I truly feel this in all it\'s force. Kudos. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 09:04
Satanic Panic
sorenbarrett said:
A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews out its message with power
November 16th, 2024 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews out its message with power
November 16th, 2024 08:30
RESIST
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
HATE
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
RESIST
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
HATE
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
HATE
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate has its place as well as love and happiness and so on..
Warning well posted however.
November 14th, 2024 16:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Obviously bad when it is as all encompassing as that, but selective hate has its place as well as love and happiness and so on..
Warning well posted however.
November 14th, 2024 16:36
HATE
sorenbarrett said:
He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can burn the hand of the one that holds it, as well as to whom it is directed well written.
November 14th, 2024 14:30
sorenbarrett said:
He is a two edged sword that cuts both ways. Period. Anger likewise can burn the hand of the one that holds it, as well as to whom it is directed well written.
November 14th, 2024 14:30
HATE
NinjaGirl said:
hate is something that will destroy the hater more than whom they hate
November 14th, 2024 12:50
NinjaGirl said:
hate is something that will destroy the hater more than whom they hate
November 14th, 2024 12:50
HATE
orchidee said:
I hate to say, as one said somewhere on several poems (not on this site!) and incurred poet\'s wrath: \'I don\'t much care for this poem\'. It wouldn\'t be so bad if he said it just on one or two poems, but no, it was on several poets poems.
November 14th, 2024 09:48
orchidee said:
I hate to say, as one said somewhere on several poems (not on this site!) and incurred poet\'s wrath: \'I don\'t much care for this poem\'. It wouldn\'t be so bad if he said it just on one or two poems, but no, it was on several poets poems.
November 14th, 2024 09:48
HATE
Neville said:
Fuck that\'s the most offensive four letter word known to mankind in my humble opinion .. but a brilliant acronym & acrostic all rolled into one .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 08:56
Neville said:
Fuck that\'s the most offensive four letter word known to mankind in my humble opinion .. but a brilliant acronym & acrostic all rolled into one .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 08:56
HATE
Cassie58 said:
A powerful illustration to accompany your acrostic. Such a destructive emotion. Well penned brevity.
November 14th, 2024 08:03
Cassie58 said:
A powerful illustration to accompany your acrostic. Such a destructive emotion. Well penned brevity.
November 14th, 2024 08:03
Through a Window Darkly
Cassie58 said:
Superbly written. Dark and heavy. Relatable to many who have experienced the black hole of depression. Well done Tristan.
November 14th, 2024 07:47
Cassie58 said:
Superbly written. Dark and heavy. Relatable to many who have experienced the black hole of depression. Well done Tristan.
November 14th, 2024 07:47
FEAR
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, \"...fear hath torment--\" of which I know too keenly well. If only--ah. Lovely in charming brevity with superb poignancy and great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Ya, \"...fear hath torment--\" of which I know too keenly well. If only--ah. Lovely in charming brevity with superb poignancy and great imagery. Thank you very much for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:18
Through a Window Darkly
Neville said:
This can not have been easy to write surely .. so many exceptional turns of phrase it would be nigh on impossible to single each one out and place them in any preferred or chronological order .. the black dog becomes a paler genus but we all see beneath the grim façade .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
This can not have been easy to write surely .. so many exceptional turns of phrase it would be nigh on impossible to single each one out and place them in any preferred or chronological order .. the black dog becomes a paler genus but we all see beneath the grim façade .. Neville
November 14th, 2024 02:09
Through a Window Darkly
Cheeky Missy said:
I stumbled after the resonating lines took an unexpected turn, leaving me at the crossroads looking after the speaker who disappeared in the murkier fog. Excellently rendered with a deeply haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:00
Cheeky Missy said:
I stumbled after the resonating lines took an unexpected turn, leaving me at the crossroads looking after the speaker who disappeared in the murkier fog. Excellently rendered with a deeply haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
November 14th, 2024 02:00
Through a Window Darkly
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
What a powerful and captivating
and emotional write on the
feelings and emotions depression
any person can be trapped in! 😢
Awesomazing imagery and
word choices, brilliantly composed!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 13th, 2024 23:35
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
What a powerful and captivating
and emotional write on the
feelings and emotions depression
any person can be trapped in! 😢
Awesomazing imagery and
word choices, brilliantly composed!!💯
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 13th, 2024 23:35
Through a Window Darkly
sorenbarrett said:
Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber tones.
November 13th, 2024 21:42
sorenbarrett said:
Depression rides a gray horse. This poem speaks darkly and in somber tones.
November 13th, 2024 21:42
Through a Window Darkly
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious, i would say \'Good write, putrid one\'! (yuk. lol).
November 13th, 2024 10:54
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious, i would say \'Good write, putrid one\'! (yuk. lol).
November 13th, 2024 10:54
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