Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
À la nuit noire
Shadowbox15 said:
Why are you using plural? Also “mort” is masculine.
December 27th, 2017 12:01
Shadowbox15 said:
Why are you using plural? Also “mort” is masculine.
December 27th, 2017 12:01
Death Becomes Me
orchidee said:
Oohh have a nice cup of tea instead, and not be too \'dark\'! The tea should sort out things, along with a slice of cake and a chat with a friend. lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:42
orchidee said:
Oohh have a nice cup of tea instead, and not be too \'dark\'! The tea should sort out things, along with a slice of cake and a chat with a friend. lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:42
Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one you have told to whom.
October 17th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one you have told to whom.
October 17th, 2017 00:50
Apparition
Mugsdaddy said:
Really really good I like the flow and the style excellent write.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 21:02
Mugsdaddy said:
Really really good I like the flow and the style excellent write.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 21:02
Apparition
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, perfect for this time of year. Very well written. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:20
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, perfect for this time of year. Very well written. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:20
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orchidee said:
You run out of \'E\'s on your keyboard?! heehee. A fin3 writ3 (lol) though not really my genre. It\'s odd - I heard of someone spelling their name \'Su3an\'.
October 2nd, 2017 14:32
orchidee said:
You run out of \'E\'s on your keyboard?! heehee. A fin3 writ3 (lol) though not really my genre. It\'s odd - I heard of someone spelling their name \'Su3an\'.
October 2nd, 2017 14:32
A House With No Mirrors
myself and me said:
not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us, so that we could all go blind.
August 15th, 2017 21:57
myself and me said:
not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us, so that we could all go blind.
August 15th, 2017 21:57
Afraid to Love
Night Owl said:
Thought provoking! Makes me remember and feel... Took me places I had buried... Yes this world can be argggggg...
August 5th, 2017 08:04
Night Owl said:
Thought provoking! Makes me remember and feel... Took me places I had buried... Yes this world can be argggggg...
August 5th, 2017 08:04
Unleashed
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of life\'s truest endeavors. I hope you find inspiration here sir, as I have in this poem. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 21:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of life\'s truest endeavors. I hope you find inspiration here sir, as I have in this poem. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 21:37
Our Eternal Slumber
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, I read this the other day and didn\'t comment. I can\'t remember why I didn\'t. Anyways, this is cool stuff. A fresh style and take on the feeling of being forsaken. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 19:48
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, I read this the other day and didn\'t comment. I can\'t remember why I didn\'t. Anyways, this is cool stuff. A fresh style and take on the feeling of being forsaken. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 19:48
Our Eternal Slumber
Trev said:
Wow, nice work. I feel like I\'m watching it unfold
July 11th, 2017 00:23
Trev said:
Wow, nice work. I feel like I\'m watching it unfold
July 11th, 2017 00:23
The Walls of Insanity
orchidee said:
That\'ll teach ya for watching the equivalent of \'Neighbours\' here in the UK. I went insane with it years ago! heehee. You see, I refuse to watch a programme that has a character named \'Toadfish\' in it, even though a nickname! lol. It don\'t sound human. Then again, the cast are all made of wood!
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
That\'ll teach ya for watching the equivalent of \'Neighbours\' here in the UK. I went insane with it years ago! heehee. You see, I refuse to watch a programme that has a character named \'Toadfish\' in it, even though a nickname! lol. It don\'t sound human. Then again, the cast are all made of wood!
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:51
The Walls of Insanity
swingline said:
What great poetry could come from those depths !
May 9th, 2017 01:50
swingline said:
What great poetry could come from those depths !
May 9th, 2017 01:50
The Abyss of Damnation
orchidee said:
Erm, should I book a holiday there? heehee.
May 7th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Erm, should I book a holiday there? heehee.
May 7th, 2017 01:51
The Abyss of Damnation
orchidee said:
Oohh apart from all that, everything\'s fine then! That\'s a line from an old comedy film, not my original line.
May 7th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Oohh apart from all that, everything\'s fine then! That\'s a line from an old comedy film, not my original line.
May 7th, 2017 01:51
Afraid to Love
Mandi said:
It\'s hard being considered ugly physically. I know that all to well. And people can be so cruel sometimes. But one needs to stay strong and push through the sadness even though it may be hard. I hope that this (\"ugly kid\")beautiful soul finds happiness.
Good write. Best wishes.
May 4th, 2017 08:17
Mandi said:
It\'s hard being considered ugly physically. I know that all to well. And people can be so cruel sometimes. But one needs to stay strong and push through the sadness even though it may be hard. I hope that this (\"ugly kid\")beautiful soul finds happiness.
Good write. Best wishes.
May 4th, 2017 08:17
Afraid to Love
SorrowfullyHappy said:
love is a scary thing but judging someone because of the way they look is somthing worse
May 4th, 2017 00:35
SorrowfullyHappy said:
love is a scary thing but judging someone because of the way they look is somthing worse
May 4th, 2017 00:35
Lost
Garry said:
Very good.
Everybody seems to be hooked on silence at the moment.
April 14th, 2017 14:45
Garry said:
Very good.
Everybody seems to be hooked on silence at the moment.
April 14th, 2017 14:45
Pride\'s Abode
Fay Slimm. said:
Pride certainly wreaks havoc and thanks for this needed reminder. Good read.
April 12th, 2017 02:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Pride certainly wreaks havoc and thanks for this needed reminder. Good read.
April 12th, 2017 02:55
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