Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
A Sonnet on Scroogery
arqios said:
Now that’s the way! Old Uncle McScrooge was an enigma but also a standing lesson for some reason now summed up in this engaging sonnet. Liked and Faved!
December 28th, 2024 19:10
arqios said:
Now that’s the way! Old Uncle McScrooge was an enigma but also a standing lesson for some reason now summed up in this engaging sonnet. Liked and Faved!
December 28th, 2024 19:10
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Teddy.15 said:
I have only ever been able to write one Italian sonnet and it took 3 years to write, hats off to you dear Tristan. 🌹 I do bow to thee 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:50
Teddy.15 said:
I have only ever been able to write one Italian sonnet and it took 3 years to write, hats off to you dear Tristan. 🌹 I do bow to thee 🌹
December 28th, 2024 13:50
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating
and evocative
Italian Sonnet I must say!!💯
The end couplet
blew me away! 😱
Wonderfully woven my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:21
Thad Wilk said:
A very captivating
and evocative
Italian Sonnet I must say!!💯
The end couplet
blew me away! 😱
Wonderfully woven my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 28th, 2024 13:21
A Sonnet on Scroogery
sorenbarrett said:
Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like scrooge. A most fun read and well written too.
December 28th, 2024 12:31
sorenbarrett said:
Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like scrooge. A most fun read and well written too.
December 28th, 2024 12:31
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Poetic Licence said:
Money to be made out of anything, a very entertaining read
December 28th, 2024 12:27
Poetic Licence said:
Money to be made out of anything, a very entertaining read
December 28th, 2024 12:27
A Sonnet on Scroogery
Neville said:
You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat Cheeky Missy for sonnets now can ya .. 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 10:24
Neville said:
You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat Cheeky Missy for sonnets now can ya .. 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 10:24
The Write Fright
Neville said:
Word blindness in its purest & most feared form .. now personified you canny so and so .. Neville 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 02:09
Neville said:
Word blindness in its purest & most feared form .. now personified you canny so and so .. Neville 😎👍
December 28th, 2024 02:09
The Write Fright
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write
on what you can\'t ✍️ write!🌟🤩
Thank you for sharing,
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards,
your muse will
return don\'t
give up the fight!! 💪
December 27th, 2024 23:20
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful write
on what you can\'t ✍️ write!🌟🤩
Thank you for sharing,
to read a delight!!! 😉
Best regards,
your muse will
return don\'t
give up the fight!! 💪
December 27th, 2024 23:20
The Write Fright
Cheeky Missy said:
Writer\'s Block is only a monster IF you let it exist. If fantasy plays your harp, she will vaporize. But reality is never not here. The moment that thought begins creeping up on you, just take a look around you and begin to describe what you find. Utilize metaphors and similes and you\'ve extra points.
That aside, how characteristically superb, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2024 21:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Writer\'s Block is only a monster IF you let it exist. If fantasy plays your harp, she will vaporize. But reality is never not here. The moment that thought begins creeping up on you, just take a look around you and begin to describe what you find. Utilize metaphors and similes and you\'ve extra points.
That aside, how characteristically superb, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
December 27th, 2024 21:56
The Write Fright
arqios said:
Just what you’re doing now, write about not being able to write. Get off the writing chair, desensitise…. go out, do something you haven’t done in a while, something that makes you forget and be lost in your moment. Enjoy. But take a on and pad with you or your ‘word processing device’, keep them within reach but out of sight (cargo pant pockets, rucksack, perhaps) . You’re not writing atm, but living out poetry. But that just imo, works a treat to truly let your hair down without any plan or motive, ngl. But I’m sure you already knew that. And this poem is proof that you’ve still got some juice in the tank.
December 27th, 2024 18:07
arqios said:
Just what you’re doing now, write about not being able to write. Get off the writing chair, desensitise…. go out, do something you haven’t done in a while, something that makes you forget and be lost in your moment. Enjoy. But take a on and pad with you or your ‘word processing device’, keep them within reach but out of sight (cargo pant pockets, rucksack, perhaps) . You’re not writing atm, but living out poetry. But that just imo, works a treat to truly let your hair down without any plan or motive, ngl. But I’m sure you already knew that. And this poem is proof that you’ve still got some juice in the tank.
December 27th, 2024 18:07
The Write Fright
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that everyone goes through this. I have been there and you have to let go to find something. Great write
December 27th, 2024 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that everyone goes through this. I have been there and you have to let go to find something. Great write
December 27th, 2024 12:00
The Write Fright
Teddy.15 said:
I always find when the inspiration isn\'t there it\'s just a pause and we must all take advantage of that peace, it will certainly be turned back on again in the switch of a light. So I\'m sorry I\'m not a believer in writers block, it should be called writers holiday lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 💜
December 27th, 2024 10:49
Teddy.15 said:
I always find when the inspiration isn\'t there it\'s just a pause and we must all take advantage of that peace, it will certainly be turned back on again in the switch of a light. So I\'m sorry I\'m not a believer in writers block, it should be called writers holiday lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 💜
December 27th, 2024 10:49
The Write Fright
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that contradicts itself in a fun way, not knowing what to write, so wrote about not knowing what to write hence knew what to write. A very enjoyable read
December 27th, 2024 10:34
Poetic Licence said:
A poem that contradicts itself in a fun way, not knowing what to write, so wrote about not knowing what to write hence knew what to write. A very enjoyable read
December 27th, 2024 10:34
This Christmas Night
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem 😢
articulately penned!! 🌟
Love the repeated lines!😍
A captivating form
you have created,
much enjoyed my friend!👍
Best regards ✌️😁 Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:22
Thad Wilk said:
A very touching and
poignant poem 😢
articulately penned!! 🌟
Love the repeated lines!😍
A captivating form
you have created,
much enjoyed my friend!👍
Best regards ✌️😁 Thad
December 26th, 2024 22:22
This Christmas Night
arqios said:
Oh, awesome to get into: cascading revelations! Quite a technical triumph here married to substance and significance of content! Liked and Faved! 👍🏻👍🏻
December 26th, 2024 19:59
arqios said:
Oh, awesome to get into: cascading revelations! Quite a technical triumph here married to substance and significance of content! Liked and Faved! 👍🏻👍🏻
December 26th, 2024 19:59
This Christmas Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Why are you absent from the merriment and festivities, dear, beloved poet? Imagery so exquisite I nearly swoon, indulging vicariously until I nearly hug myself, and very beautifully rendered with a heartbreaking poignancy whose import begs intrigue come capering, thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Why are you absent from the merriment and festivities, dear, beloved poet? Imagery so exquisite I nearly swoon, indulging vicariously until I nearly hug myself, and very beautifully rendered with a heartbreaking poignancy whose import begs intrigue come capering, thank you for sharing.
December 26th, 2024 17:27
This Christmas Night
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful lyrical write. So emotionally heartbreaking, but so clever in its composition. How do you do it Tristan? You are a master of words. Wishing you all the very best.
December 26th, 2024 14:23
Cassie58 said:
A beautiful lyrical write. So emotionally heartbreaking, but so clever in its composition. How do you do it Tristan? You are a master of words. Wishing you all the very best.
December 26th, 2024 14:23
This Christmas Night
Teddy.15 said:
I see all the talents of a truly great songwriter, when something has flames our heart yet fizzled out can make us feel grief, but one can find that true passion once more here I feel a longing to be able to share ones true talent and this is about writing music. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 12:57
Teddy.15 said:
I see all the talents of a truly great songwriter, when something has flames our heart yet fizzled out can make us feel grief, but one can find that true passion once more here I feel a longing to be able to share ones true talent and this is about writing music. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 12:57
This Christmas Night
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A contrast of emotions searching for an answer, then coming to an understanding, really enjoyed the read. Thank you for explanation, more confused now!!!.
December 26th, 2024 12:10
This Christmas Night
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! 😁 A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
orchidee said:
I of course include all this in my poetic compositions and me pentameter thingys! 😁 A lot of crackling, etc, going on here.
It\'s more complicated than my \'formats\' 8.8.8.8. Or could be, e.g. 47.35.82.26. syllables per line - summat like that anyway!
I used to say \'metre\' but that\'s more technical with some stressed syllables, which I get too stressed working them out. Doh! lol.
December 26th, 2024 11:36
This Christmas Night
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
sorenbarrett said:
This could well be a song although sad and mournful it calls out with loss and yet memories of family and warmth. Beautiful in its darkness
December 26th, 2024 10:14
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
That woodpecker looks ready to go!
December 26th, 2024 05:30
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
aDarkerMind said:
don\'t know how I missed this one Tristan, but found it eventually.
a dark write at it\'s very best.
December 26th, 2024 04:29
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
orchidee said:
A fine write and pic T.
December 26th, 2024 03:19
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:12
Teddy.15 said:
Oh so beautiful my dear Tristan. 🌹
December 26th, 2024 02:12
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