Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Open Door
NafisaSB said:
noble thought worth sharing - glad you did - kinship over kingship is indeed the need of the hour
August 19th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
noble thought worth sharing - glad you did - kinship over kingship is indeed the need of the hour
August 19th, 2025 23:39
Cold As Hell
Salvia.S said:
This is like a love letter turned elegy - a heartbreaking and beautiful exploration of love, loss, and longing. The language is rich and evocative, with imagery that cuts deep. Your words convey the complexity of emotions with stunning clarity. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️
August 19th, 2025 20:05
Salvia.S said:
This is like a love letter turned elegy - a heartbreaking and beautiful exploration of love, loss, and longing. The language is rich and evocative, with imagery that cuts deep. Your words convey the complexity of emotions with stunning clarity. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️
August 19th, 2025 20:05
Cold As Hell
arqios said:
This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not as possession, but as luminous endurance in the face of decay. The speaker’s refusal to hate, even while tasting bitterness, gives the piece its haunting edge. “Necrosis best goes down cold as hell” is a devastating closer: elegant, brutal, and strangely tender. It’s a portrait of knowing someone deeply, surviving the wreckage, and choosing grace over corrosion. The language is rich, almost ceremonial, yet it cuts like frost. Beautifully bitter. And it could all be talking about the self...even. very compelling.
August 19th, 2025 19:54
arqios said:
This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not as possession, but as luminous endurance in the face of decay. The speaker’s refusal to hate, even while tasting bitterness, gives the piece its haunting edge. “Necrosis best goes down cold as hell” is a devastating closer: elegant, brutal, and strangely tender. It’s a portrait of knowing someone deeply, surviving the wreckage, and choosing grace over corrosion. The language is rich, almost ceremonial, yet it cuts like frost. Beautifully bitter. And it could all be talking about the self...even. very compelling.
August 19th, 2025 19:54
Cold As Hell
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co. are always hot. Why? Cos they...... Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co. are always hot. Why? Cos they...... Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:32
Cold As Hell
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all they that hate me love Death.\" (Prov 8:36) Cold, eh? Exceptional. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2025 10:35
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all they that hate me love Death.\" (Prov 8:36) Cold, eh? Exceptional. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2025 10:35
South of Me
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
A subterranean encounter with the prince of hell and little ol\' you. Little did he know who he was up against. Onwards and upwards to hell and how awfully strange that may sound - such is life. Great to see you are on a roll again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:16
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
A subterranean encounter with the prince of hell and little ol\' you. Little did he know who he was up against. Onwards and upwards to hell and how awfully strange that may sound - such is life. Great to see you are on a roll again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:16
Cold As Hell
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cold and dark it breaths the air of the tomb. It smells of dying and carries with that feel. Emotion or maybe lack of it that gives it power. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is cold and dark it breaths the air of the tomb. It smells of dying and carries with that feel. Emotion or maybe lack of it that gives it power. Nicely written
August 19th, 2025 09:16
Cold As Hell
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love and emotional intimacy, contrasted with themes of pain, bitterness, and acceptance. The poet considers a deep yet non-possessive connection to someone described as \"cold as hell,\" indicating a thorough understanding of their flaws and struggles. This includes love, emotional intimacy, brokenness, and the acceptance of both beauty and pain in relationships.
August 19th, 2025 09:14
Friendship said:
Your poem explores the complexities of love and emotional intimacy, contrasted with themes of pain, bitterness, and acceptance. The poet considers a deep yet non-possessive connection to someone described as \"cold as hell,\" indicating a thorough understanding of their flaws and struggles. This includes love, emotional intimacy, brokenness, and the acceptance of both beauty and pain in relationships.
August 19th, 2025 09:14
South of Me
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
Devil got roasted in rhyme — love the twisted humor here.
Never thought I’d feel bad for the devil until now. This is wickedly good.
August 19th, 2025 08:11
REBELLIOUS SOUL said:
Devil got roasted in rhyme — love the twisted humor here.
Never thought I’d feel bad for the devil until now. This is wickedly good.
August 19th, 2025 08:11
South of Me
Neville said:
Jeeeez I just luv it when ya talk dirty to me you little devil you .. Bravo our Tris .. 😎🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧👍
August 19th, 2025 02:48
Neville said:
Jeeeez I just luv it when ya talk dirty to me you little devil you .. Bravo our Tris .. 😎🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧👍
August 19th, 2025 02:48
South of Me
sorenbarrett said:
Living under hell what a most interesting concept. Basement please. A fun poem Tristan nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:00
sorenbarrett said:
Living under hell what a most interesting concept. Basement please. A fun poem Tristan nicely done
August 18th, 2025 14:00
South of Me
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh yes, did you know that Dante Alighieri really enjoyed the Devil.
That satanic guy and I,
Went to the bathroom
So he could therein cry.
Tried to console him, did I.
I know, you must be asking,
“What the hell—why?”
It’s because he’s blind,
And now afraid to die!
You see, I stole his horn,
Poked the fucker in his eye,
I loooove this. 🌹
August 18th, 2025 12:16
Teddy.15 said:
LOL oh yes, did you know that Dante Alighieri really enjoyed the Devil.
That satanic guy and I,
Went to the bathroom
So he could therein cry.
Tried to console him, did I.
I know, you must be asking,
“What the hell—why?”
It’s because he’s blind,
And now afraid to die!
You see, I stole his horn,
Poked the fucker in his eye,
I loooove this. 🌹
August 18th, 2025 12:16
South of Me
Poetic Licence said:
The devil below the devil, now we are getting to the bottom of the truth, great write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 11:46
Poetic Licence said:
The devil below the devil, now we are getting to the bottom of the truth, great write, enjoyed the read
August 18th, 2025 11:46
South of Me
Salvia.S said:
So you’re the devil below the devil? That’s next-level. I guess a known devil is better than an unknown one. Lol 😂
August 18th, 2025 11:05
Salvia.S said:
So you’re the devil below the devil? That’s next-level. I guess a known devil is better than an unknown one. Lol 😂
August 18th, 2025 11:05
South of Me
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat so, Reverend? You musta not actually played with him or you\'d not speak so saucily, methinks. He\'s a character to be reckoned with according to the Scriptures, nor is jocularity effective. Cute and sassy, excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a curiously triumphant poignancy which belies itself.
August 18th, 2025 10:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Dat so, Reverend? You musta not actually played with him or you\'d not speak so saucily, methinks. He\'s a character to be reckoned with according to the Scriptures, nor is jocularity effective. Cute and sassy, excellently rendered with gorgeous imagery and a curiously triumphant poignancy which belies itself.
August 18th, 2025 10:13
The Paradox of Living
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems compell one to hit the fave...this one is one of those
August 18th, 2025 09:01
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Some poems compell one to hit the fave...this one is one of those
August 18th, 2025 09:01
Never the Destination
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How the journey is so different for each of us. The journey is more important than destination.
August 17th, 2025 15:42
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How the journey is so different for each of us. The journey is more important than destination.
August 17th, 2025 15:42
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How true. Well written Tristan
August 17th, 2025 15:37
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
How true. Well written Tristan
August 17th, 2025 15:37
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
I\'m always pretending, I\'m okay, when deep down I think I have every disease possible, when in fact, as you say, I should be worrying about others and as a consequence alleviating my own unnecessary anxieties. Restoring my tomorrows and into the truth. A profound passage of poetry. If I may suggest; you should collect the eight verses and publish them as one complete poem - please.
Fond regards,
Tony
August 17th, 2025 15:09
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
I\'m always pretending, I\'m okay, when deep down I think I have every disease possible, when in fact, as you say, I should be worrying about others and as a consequence alleviating my own unnecessary anxieties. Restoring my tomorrows and into the truth. A profound passage of poetry. If I may suggest; you should collect the eight verses and publish them as one complete poem - please.
Fond regards,
Tony
August 17th, 2025 15:09
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Friendship said:
The poet speaks to the human experience of pain and the journey toward restoration through truth and creativity. It touches on the importance of vulnerability in the face of societal expectations and the liberation that comes from being open about one\'s struggles.
August 17th, 2025 13:32
Friendship said:
The poet speaks to the human experience of pain and the journey toward restoration through truth and creativity. It touches on the importance of vulnerability in the face of societal expectations and the liberation that comes from being open about one\'s struggles.
August 17th, 2025 13:32
The Open Door
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To paraphrase, The Three Musketeers - \'all for love and love for all\', in the light of whatever one\'s beliefs, where there is love there is deliverance and come that day, cometh the Man. This poem of yours is a wonder, so , too, wonderful. Accolades galore, once again.
Do take care now, you hear,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:39
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To paraphrase, The Three Musketeers - \'all for love and love for all\', in the light of whatever one\'s beliefs, where there is love there is deliverance and come that day, cometh the Man. This poem of yours is a wonder, so , too, wonderful. Accolades galore, once again.
Do take care now, you hear,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:39
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Neville said:
Now ya talkin kiddo .. we call that a wrap around these here ports .. I love the concept of eternal nowism .. we just gotta form that bloomin cult bro .. 😎🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 17th, 2025 11:56
Neville said:
Now ya talkin kiddo .. we call that a wrap around these here ports .. I love the concept of eternal nowism .. we just gotta form that bloomin cult bro .. 😎🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 17th, 2025 11:56
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
orchidee said:
Good write T. All I know is, Popeye continued and continues yesterday, today, and tomorrow, for ever. Continues what? Don\'t answer that! lol :)
August 17th, 2025 11:52
orchidee said:
Good write T. All I know is, Popeye continued and continues yesterday, today, and tomorrow, for ever. Continues what? Don\'t answer that! lol :)
August 17th, 2025 11:52
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Poetic Licence said:
Now is right up my street, I try to live by honesty everything I do, however difficult that can be. No good wrapping things up in candy floss so it looks good to appease yourself and others,the candy floss will melt and the truth will eventually show , has been a wonderful series, enjoyed
August 17th, 2025 09:42
Poetic Licence said:
Now is right up my street, I try to live by honesty everything I do, however difficult that can be. No good wrapping things up in candy floss so it looks good to appease yourself and others,the candy floss will melt and the truth will eventually show , has been a wonderful series, enjoyed
August 17th, 2025 09:42
Puritanical
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Please pardon me if I misunderstood. The poem took me few reads... everytime thinking was I getting it right...an almost inversion of what we commonly think. A powerful work.
August 17th, 2025 09:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Please pardon me if I misunderstood. The poem took me few reads... everytime thinking was I getting it right...an almost inversion of what we commonly think. A powerful work.
August 17th, 2025 09:10
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