Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Corpse\'s Creed
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
God Cares
orchidee said:
I thought it said Get ET out. Doh! lol.
Not now, Popeye. Not what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
June 22nd, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
I thought it said Get ET out. Doh! lol.
Not now, Popeye. Not what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
June 22nd, 2025 12:10
God Cares
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like a balm to the soul - they touch the heart and bring a sense of peace. This poem is like a gentle reminder to let go and love fully. Well written dear Tittu 🌹❤️
June 22nd, 2025 11:47
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like a balm to the soul - they touch the heart and bring a sense of peace. This poem is like a gentle reminder to let go and love fully. Well written dear Tittu 🌹❤️
June 22nd, 2025 11:47
God Cares
sorenbarrett said:
To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
June 22nd, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
June 22nd, 2025 09:45
God Cares
Damaso said:
I like the short texts that say a lot! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
June 22nd, 2025 09:19
Damaso said:
I like the short texts that say a lot! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
June 22nd, 2025 09:19
God Cares
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful message that is so needed, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 08:28
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful message that is so needed, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 08:28
God Cares
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
short, sweet, and to the point. thanks for sharing!
June 22nd, 2025 08:22
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
short, sweet, and to the point. thanks for sharing!
June 22nd, 2025 08:22
The Stranger\'s Truth
arqios said:
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the strangeness that makes for ourselves a home with others.🕊🙏🏻
June 22nd, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the strangeness that makes for ourselves a home with others.🕊🙏🏻
June 22nd, 2025 06:36
The Answer is No
Doggerel Dave said:
I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function (that I opted out is neither here nor there). Beyond that is all societal norms and impositions.
What I cannot understand, and will never understand is why people would wish to subject their bodies to radical surgery and a lifetime of heavy duty medication to superficially appear to belong to the other side…
…I’m definitely too old, my ideas too antiquated…Thanks for putting up there a subject (if I’ve got it right) which gives me the irits from time to time, Tristan.😊
June 22nd, 2025 02:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function (that I opted out is neither here nor there). Beyond that is all societal norms and impositions.
What I cannot understand, and will never understand is why people would wish to subject their bodies to radical surgery and a lifetime of heavy duty medication to superficially appear to belong to the other side…
…I’m definitely too old, my ideas too antiquated…Thanks for putting up there a subject (if I’ve got it right) which gives me the irits from time to time, Tristan.😊
June 22nd, 2025 02:13
The Answer is No
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe you are a wonderful lyricist and this is exceptional. A Man is judged on a lot of things I know. A superb powerful piece. 🌹
June 21st, 2025 22:19
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe you are a wonderful lyricist and this is exceptional. A Man is judged on a lot of things I know. A superb powerful piece. 🌹
June 21st, 2025 22:19
The Answer is No
Cheeky Missy said:
So...lemme get this straight: I have six younger brothers who are all the best men in the universe, and you\'ll be my girlfriend?! Could you acquiesce to a more feminine angle to your given name? Or... was the call to be [whatever, it matters little] contrary to the physique originally given? I give up. I\'ve, in my regrettable lack of any sleep whatsoever, undue stress from management screwing me out of water when I paid my bills early, and third shift, third shift, third shift when I cannot sleep except after the sun sets, yes, I\'ve gotten me into a tangle from which I canna extricate meself. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and form, and an intriguing, baffling conclusion. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2025 11:27
Cheeky Missy said:
So...lemme get this straight: I have six younger brothers who are all the best men in the universe, and you\'ll be my girlfriend?! Could you acquiesce to a more feminine angle to your given name? Or... was the call to be [whatever, it matters little] contrary to the physique originally given? I give up. I\'ve, in my regrettable lack of any sleep whatsoever, undue stress from management screwing me out of water when I paid my bills early, and third shift, third shift, third shift when I cannot sleep except after the sun sets, yes, I\'ve gotten me into a tangle from which I canna extricate meself. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and form, and an intriguing, baffling conclusion. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2025 11:27
The Answer is No
orchidee said:
I thought the answer is/was \'always 42\', as someone said somewhere. Not 42 episodes of?..... you knows! heehee.
June 21st, 2025 11:05
orchidee said:
I thought the answer is/was \'always 42\', as someone said somewhere. Not 42 episodes of?..... you knows! heehee.
June 21st, 2025 11:05
The Answer is No
Poetic Licence said:
I like that each verse endorses the previous but at the same altering the end, very clever and interesting read, enjoyed very much
June 21st, 2025 09:29
Poetic Licence said:
I like that each verse endorses the previous but at the same altering the end, very clever and interesting read, enjoyed very much
June 21st, 2025 09:29
The Answer is No
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Tristan. This poem builds with each stanza reiterating each previous stanza and altering it to achieve a different end. Very nice
June 21st, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Tristan. This poem builds with each stanza reiterating each previous stanza and altering it to achieve a different end. Very nice
June 21st, 2025 08:21
The Stranger\'s Truth
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay? You\'ve got me...I remain baffled. This twisting, swirling discussion has taken me from the solid terra firma to the murky ether, leaving me dangling in freighted suspense, with no known future. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered as your capable wont, with superb imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2025 19:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay? You\'ve got me...I remain baffled. This twisting, swirling discussion has taken me from the solid terra firma to the murky ether, leaving me dangling in freighted suspense, with no known future. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered as your capable wont, with superb imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2025 19:25
The Stranger\'s Truth
Poetic Licence said:
I hate labels of all sorts, they lead to discrimination or justification. I worked with many children who were hard to control, some people were delighted if they got diagnosed ADH for example, from that point on they blamed everything on the ADH and most of the time their behaviour had nothing to do with ADH. Labelling someone is putting them in a box and they become more of an item than a person. As you rightly say most people do not really know themselves completely, so it is damagingly wrong for others to assume they do, Great Write, Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2025 14:45
Poetic Licence said:
I hate labels of all sorts, they lead to discrimination or justification. I worked with many children who were hard to control, some people were delighted if they got diagnosed ADH for example, from that point on they blamed everything on the ADH and most of the time their behaviour had nothing to do with ADH. Labelling someone is putting them in a box and they become more of an item than a person. As you rightly say most people do not really know themselves completely, so it is damagingly wrong for others to assume they do, Great Write, Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2025 14:45
The Stranger\'s Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting Tristan the concept of defining by what one is not. I hate labels whether social, medical, psychological, racial or any other. They do not tell who a person is and just lead to discrimination. A most lovely poem.
June 20th, 2025 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting Tristan the concept of defining by what one is not. I hate labels whether social, medical, psychological, racial or any other. They do not tell who a person is and just lead to discrimination. A most lovely poem.
June 20th, 2025 14:01
The Stranger\'s Truth
Caring dove said:
An interesting and engaging writing ..
I think we can know ourselves or think we do .. or we can feel like a stranger .
Maybe we can feel connected to ourselves .. or lost
It’s difficult to know and understand ourselves completely .. sometimes
June 20th, 2025 13:19
Caring dove said:
An interesting and engaging writing ..
I think we can know ourselves or think we do .. or we can feel like a stranger .
Maybe we can feel connected to ourselves .. or lost
It’s difficult to know and understand ourselves completely .. sometimes
June 20th, 2025 13:19
The Stranger\'s Truth
orchidee said:
Good write T. Ohh, us two know a couple of guys - Obi and Popeye, and........who else? lol.
June 20th, 2025 12:37
orchidee said:
Good write T. Ohh, us two know a couple of guys - Obi and Popeye, and........who else? lol.
June 20th, 2025 12:37
Got That Out
Doggerel Dave said:
.....And as you so rightly say, you got that out, didn\'t yer....
unapologetically and with great style.
June 19th, 2025 11:32
Doggerel Dave said:
.....And as you so rightly say, you got that out, didn\'t yer....
unapologetically and with great style.
June 19th, 2025 11:32
Got That Out
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes it just has to be done 🤣 and those who says they have never wanted too, are lying 🤥 🤣
June 19th, 2025 11:08
Teddy.15 said:
Sometimes it just has to be done 🤣 and those who says they have never wanted too, are lying 🤥 🤣
June 19th, 2025 11:08
Got That Out
orchidee said:
Sounds like a poem similar to mine. Here\'s verse 1 of it, being restrained:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
Steady on says Fido
That\'s a lot of F for one poem!
June 19th, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
Sounds like a poem similar to mine. Here\'s verse 1 of it, being restrained:
Ohhh, F, F, F, and F
And furthermore F, F, F, and F
Steady on says Fido
That\'s a lot of F for one poem!
June 19th, 2025 10:53
Got That Out
Poetic Licence said:
I for one have this feeling more than I should, what a mind cleanser it would be to just stand in the street and do that, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 09:10
Poetic Licence said:
I for one have this feeling more than I should, what a mind cleanser it would be to just stand in the street and do that, enjoyed the read
June 19th, 2025 09:10
To the Ones Who Go
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully captures the courage of those who seek truth beyond fear, with vivid cosmic imagery and a sense of quiet, powerful motion. Well done dear Tittu 🌹🌹
June 19th, 2025 09:03
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully captures the courage of those who seek truth beyond fear, with vivid cosmic imagery and a sense of quiet, powerful motion. Well done dear Tittu 🌹🌹
June 19th, 2025 09:03
Got That Out
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that screams out in frustration, anger, rage. And after a quieting the catharsis. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:16
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that screams out in frustration, anger, rage. And after a quieting the catharsis. Well done
June 19th, 2025 08:16
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