Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Springtime Silence
arqios said:
A moment alive, Spring\'s tender whisper breathes new. Wesley\'s paws, soft on Verdant bladesโhis world begins.
A break in the air, Scent shifts. Shadows swell heavy, Instinct falters.
Jaws crush the soft dawn, Rapture\'s song, devoured whole. Silence consumes day.
May 14th, 2025 16:56
arqios said:
A moment alive, Spring\'s tender whisper breathes new. Wesley\'s paws, soft on Verdant bladesโhis world begins.
A break in the air, Scent shifts. Shadows swell heavy, Instinct falters.
Jaws crush the soft dawn, Rapture\'s song, devoured whole. Silence consumes day.
May 14th, 2025 16:56
The Carousel of Critics
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh so clever, actually opinions are worth everything and nothing depending of the person recieving the words. Personally I have learnt that the people I\'ve met in London are the same as in Italy, different accents but the same ways. Such a fun and interesting subject ๐น
May 14th, 2025 16:38
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh so clever, actually opinions are worth everything and nothing depending of the person recieving the words. Personally I have learnt that the people I\'ve met in London are the same as in Italy, different accents but the same ways. Such a fun and interesting subject ๐น
May 14th, 2025 16:38
Springtime Silence
Muse of Calliope said:
Oh no! How sad for the poor little groundhog family ๐ข I love the chameleon cantos form though! โจ
May 14th, 2025 11:20
Muse of Calliope said:
Oh no! How sad for the poor little groundhog family ๐ข I love the chameleon cantos form though! โจ
May 14th, 2025 11:20
Springtime Silence
orchidee said:
Tricky to \'like\' this in a way, if you see what I mean, erm, Obi, erm Tristan! :)
May 14th, 2025 11:16
orchidee said:
Tricky to \'like\' this in a way, if you see what I mean, erm, Obi, erm Tristan! :)
May 14th, 2025 11:16
Springtime Silence
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened with my dog that used to root up moles and bring them to me and once he killed a racoon. My cat would bring in birds and baby rabbits. Sad but it is nature. Loved the poem Tristan
May 14th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened with my dog that used to root up moles and bring them to me and once he killed a racoon. My cat would bring in birds and baby rabbits. Sad but it is nature. Loved the poem Tristan
May 14th, 2025 10:36
The Carousel of Critics
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of the criticism cycle! Your words hit hard and resonate.
May 14th, 2025 09:31
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of the criticism cycle! Your words hit hard and resonate.
May 14th, 2025 09:31
The Carousel of Critics
Tony Grannell said:
\'Criticism is the only reliable form of autobiography\', Oscar Wild. I love the idea of \'The Carousel of Critics\', round and round in their lofty pronouncements, dizzy in their egos, spouting out their judgments on a foundation of nothing whilst wallowing in hate. Another excellent poem from your bureau.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:24
Tony Grannell said:
\'Criticism is the only reliable form of autobiography\', Oscar Wild. I love the idea of \'The Carousel of Critics\', round and round in their lofty pronouncements, dizzy in their egos, spouting out their judgments on a foundation of nothing whilst wallowing in hate. Another excellent poem from your bureau.
All the very best to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 11:24
The Carousel of Critics
NinjaGirl said:
What an interesting poem! Such an interesting idea, using a carousel. I like it!
May 13th, 2025 10:56
NinjaGirl said:
What an interesting poem! Such an interesting idea, using a carousel. I like it!
May 13th, 2025 10:56
The Carousel of Critics
Poetic Licence said:
Critic\'s,(we should bless them), for they lack the intelligence and ability to do anything else, how entertaining it must be to give advice on making something better that you actually know nothing about and you are useless at. It\'s a positive thing to keep them occupied, otherwise what else might they be doing!!!!, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 09:40
Poetic Licence said:
Critic\'s,(we should bless them), for they lack the intelligence and ability to do anything else, how entertaining it must be to give advice on making something better that you actually know nothing about and you are useless at. It\'s a positive thing to keep them occupied, otherwise what else might they be doing!!!!, enjoyed the read
May 13th, 2025 09:40
The Carousel of Critics
orchidee said:
Are there any critics of Popeye cartoons?! lol.
May 13th, 2025 09:31
orchidee said:
Are there any critics of Popeye cartoons?! lol.
May 13th, 2025 09:31
The Carousel of Critics
sorenbarrett said:
So many critics that at the artists expense gain entry and complain about the quality of the ride. They could not build it but feel they must give their input on how it could be better. Very nice Tristan
May 13th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
So many critics that at the artists expense gain entry and complain about the quality of the ride. They could not build it but feel they must give their input on how it could be better. Very nice Tristan
May 13th, 2025 09:26
The Carousel of Critics
arqios said:
You know it! Shark infested waters we swim in daily ๐๐ป๐
May 13th, 2025 08:55
arqios said:
You know it! Shark infested waters we swim in daily ๐๐ป๐
May 13th, 2025 08:55
The Carousel of Critics
Cheeky Missy said:
What? Your head?! Yes, at some point it\'ll fall right off and the corpse will be declared \"decapitated.\" Consider the term under discussion: \"critic/s....\" it carries in its essence the ensuing chagrin and grief of its prey. On the other hand, its root owns salvation for whom will hearken. Thus the conundrum. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2025 08:18
Cheeky Missy said:
What? Your head?! Yes, at some point it\'ll fall right off and the corpse will be declared \"decapitated.\" Consider the term under discussion: \"critic/s....\" it carries in its essence the ensuing chagrin and grief of its prey. On the other hand, its root owns salvation for whom will hearken. Thus the conundrum. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 13th, 2025 08:18
Scars Like Fathers
Tony Grannell said:
An intriguing way you have with words, captivating the reader with the bleak truth dressed down to a bare knuckled verse of bulling. Uniquely proffered with skill, honesty and insight. Excellent!
My kind regards to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:51
Tony Grannell said:
An intriguing way you have with words, captivating the reader with the bleak truth dressed down to a bare knuckled verse of bulling. Uniquely proffered with skill, honesty and insight. Excellent!
My kind regards to you,
Tony.
May 13th, 2025 07:51
The Laughing Matter
NafisaSB said:
sometimes it is embarrassing to be the centre of such attention, especially when surrounded by unsympathetic people who can neither understand nor give the support one seeks
the tension is palpable, and the poem beautifully written
May 12th, 2025 23:57
NafisaSB said:
sometimes it is embarrassing to be the centre of such attention, especially when surrounded by unsympathetic people who can neither understand nor give the support one seeks
the tension is palpable, and the poem beautifully written
May 12th, 2025 23:57
Scars Like Fathers
NinjaGirl said:
Pity for the perpetrator is not something I usually feel. When raised that way, though, I don\'t know if there is any choice really. They may not know the consequences of their actions, not until the kid kills himself and instead of feeling bad they teach their sons to hate.
May 12th, 2025 17:08
NinjaGirl said:
Pity for the perpetrator is not something I usually feel. When raised that way, though, I don\'t know if there is any choice really. They may not know the consequences of their actions, not until the kid kills himself and instead of feeling bad they teach their sons to hate.
May 12th, 2025 17:08
Scars Like Fathers
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
I\'m sure most people can relate all too well. Enjoyed the read, per usual!
May 12th, 2025 15:42
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
I\'m sure most people can relate all too well. Enjoyed the read, per usual!
May 12th, 2025 15:42
Scars Like Fathers
orchidee said:
Oohh, I\'m gonna watch episodes of Popeye! ๐๐
May 12th, 2025 13:27
orchidee said:
Oohh, I\'m gonna watch episodes of Popeye! ๐๐
May 12th, 2025 13:27
Scars Like Fathers
Poetic Licence said:
Very sad and touching write of the continued cycle of bullying and it\'s ongoing consequences, although these days it is done more with the tongue and technology than the fist of the past it is as common. Brings sad reminders of younger days, nicely crafted and expressed
May 12th, 2025 08:54
Poetic Licence said:
Very sad and touching write of the continued cycle of bullying and it\'s ongoing consequences, although these days it is done more with the tongue and technology than the fist of the past it is as common. Brings sad reminders of younger days, nicely crafted and expressed
May 12th, 2025 08:54
Scars Like Fathers
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s the point of having kids, right? Add to that, we never left the playground. Hollywood\'s most obvious tribute to that phenomenon was Romy and Michelle\'s Highschool Reunion....the bullies and losers facing up again where nothing\'s changed except our ages. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, this meat wasn\'t tenderized sufficiently and is still too tough to chew.
May 12th, 2025 08:50
Cheeky Missy said:
That\'s the point of having kids, right? Add to that, we never left the playground. Hollywood\'s most obvious tribute to that phenomenon was Romy and Michelle\'s Highschool Reunion....the bullies and losers facing up again where nothing\'s changed except our ages. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing, this meat wasn\'t tenderized sufficiently and is still too tough to chew.
May 12th, 2025 08:50
Scars Like Fathers
sorenbarrett said:
There has always been bullying, some it destroys others it makes stronger. I was the subject until I fought and then the bully became a friend that often came to me for help. Even animals bully, look at chickens. Evolution at work. This poem was a sad reminder of the consequences of some of this behavior. A rather raw write of this in childhood. So well written it leaves memories of the past.
May 12th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
There has always been bullying, some it destroys others it makes stronger. I was the subject until I fought and then the bully became a friend that often came to me for help. Even animals bully, look at chickens. Evolution at work. This poem was a sad reminder of the consequences of some of this behavior. A rather raw write of this in childhood. So well written it leaves memories of the past.
May 12th, 2025 08:43
Scars Like Fathers
arqios said:
A sad cycle that keeps spinning on. ๐๐๐ป
May 12th, 2025 08:33
arqios said:
A sad cycle that keeps spinning on. ๐๐๐ป
May 12th, 2025 08:33
Mother
Teddy.15 said:
My mother passed away when I was 38, she died of a broken heart. Way to make a woman cry dear Tristan, make every moment matter with your Mother, mine used to tell me I was a poet, I used to giggle at her. Tristan my darling, this is so heartfelt. โค๏ธ Unconditional Love is part of being a mother, never worry she will always and forever be your most loyal love. ๐น Ps is that you in the artwork?
May 11th, 2025 15:40
Teddy.15 said:
My mother passed away when I was 38, she died of a broken heart. Way to make a woman cry dear Tristan, make every moment matter with your Mother, mine used to tell me I was a poet, I used to giggle at her. Tristan my darling, this is so heartfelt. โค๏ธ Unconditional Love is part of being a mother, never worry she will always and forever be your most loyal love. ๐น Ps is that you in the artwork?
May 11th, 2025 15:40
Mother
Poetic Licence said:
This is so honest, open,raw,sad touching poignant it has the lot, they say most mothers love is unconditional and will last forever, she might how your life has gone and how you are, but it matter to her she will always love you. Best read of the week by a mile
May 11th, 2025 10:06
Poetic Licence said:
This is so honest, open,raw,sad touching poignant it has the lot, they say most mothers love is unconditional and will last forever, she might how your life has gone and how you are, but it matter to her she will always love you. Best read of the week by a mile
May 11th, 2025 10:06
Mother
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful write and a fave. It speaks to me and not being a mother I never understood that it does not apply to them and them alone. Mother\'s are a malleable mold of what is desired and expected that changes not with time but with us. The true model of unconditional love and with it unconditional expectations, one that will accept you no matter what. Such open and raw writing in this poem with its power will be heard in heaven. Absolutely Lovely Tristan
May 11th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
A masterful write and a fave. It speaks to me and not being a mother I never understood that it does not apply to them and them alone. Mother\'s are a malleable mold of what is desired and expected that changes not with time but with us. The true model of unconditional love and with it unconditional expectations, one that will accept you no matter what. Such open and raw writing in this poem with its power will be heard in heaven. Absolutely Lovely Tristan
May 11th, 2025 09:20
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