Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Pottersville
Teddy.15 said:

One of my favourite themes are dreams, you make it look so easy, I see music so much music within this dear Tristan, these two lines stand out to me

Where the good get their wish to not be born

Wow a wonderful piece my friend. ๐ŸŒน

December 30th, 2024 10:30

Pottersville
sorenbarrett said:

Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world where there is only wrong and right, good and bad, sane and insane but no we are trapped in a world of color, shades and hues. A nightmare in black and white becomes a dream of serenity in color but also one of confusion with half rights and wrongs. A thought provoking write and I have to admit my knowledge of poetic form is quite limited to sonnets, limericks different rhyme schemes and free verse.

December 30th, 2024 10:15

Pottersville
Poetic Licence said:

It sounds like a very accurate description of the world we already live in, i really enjoyed the read, thank you

December 30th, 2024 10:06

Pottersville
orchidee said:

Sounds like a good place to live? (eh?) lol.

December 30th, 2024 09:40

Depth of Height
Neville said:


Wow .. its as long as its wide and as deep as its broad .. a proper little cracker .. ๐Ÿ‘

December 30th, 2024 03:20

Depth of Height
Thad Wilk said:

Clapping!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
What a captivating
senryu!! ๐Ÿ‘
So eloquently
penned my friend!! ๐Ÿฅ‡
Much enjoyed this form!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Wonderfully woven!! ๐Ÿ˜
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 29th, 2024 21:35

Depth of Height
Thomas W Case said:

Superb.

December 29th, 2024 20:10

Depth of Height
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Tristan.

December 29th, 2024 15:56

Depth of Height
Cassie58 said:

There is much depth here and a long way to climb. Much contrast, but the point is to keep trying. Beautiful Tristen.

December 29th, 2024 13:14

Depth of Height
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

December 29th, 2024 10:44

Depth of Height
Michael Edwards said:

Another little gem Tristan

December 29th, 2024 10:41

Depth of Height
orchidee said:

Good write T. I descended to the depths of my brain for some deep thinking - nothing there, as I had already passed my 3 brain cells at surface level. lol.

December 29th, 2024 09:11

Depth of Height
arqios said:

Nice Tristan; loving the contrasts of heights and depths, pulling as it would in different directions and yet still โ€˜under.โ€™ ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป

December 29th, 2024 09:03

Depth of Height
Poetic Licence said:

A clever piece and the picture backs up the emotion, Really enjoyed

December 29th, 2024 08:51

Depth of Height
Teddy.15 said:

Senryu it\'s all about the emotion and you have it all. Beautifully done dear Tristan. ๐ŸŒน

December 29th, 2024 08:16

Depth of Height
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful Haiku for the New Year. Very nicely constructed

December 29th, 2024 08:09

The Write Fright
Dan Williams said:

Ah yes, the logjam. Sometimes I just have to let it alone for a while, no one is really pressuring me for output except me. Nice.

December 28th, 2024 19:58

A Sonnet on Scroogery
arqios said:

Now thatโ€™s the way! Old Uncle McScrooge was an enigma but also a standing lesson for some reason now summed up in this engaging sonnet. Liked and Faved!

December 28th, 2024 19:10

A Sonnet on Scroogery
Teddy.15 said:

I have only ever been able to write one Italian sonnet and it took 3 years to write, hats off to you dear Tristan. ๐ŸŒน I do bow to thee ๐ŸŒน

December 28th, 2024 13:50

A Sonnet on Scroogery
Thad Wilk said:

A very captivating
and evocative
Italian Sonnet I must say!!๐Ÿ’ฏ
The end couplet
blew me away! ๐Ÿ˜ฑ
Wonderfully woven my friend!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 28th, 2024 13:21

A Sonnet on Scroogery
sorenbarrett said:

Now I have to say that I have never heard a sonnet about the grinch like scrooge. A most fun read and well written too.

December 28th, 2024 12:31

A Sonnet on Scroogery
Poetic Licence said:

Money to be made out of anything, a very entertaining read

December 28th, 2024 12:27

A Sonnet on Scroogery
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

December 28th, 2024 11:59

A Sonnet on Scroogery
orchidee said:

Good write T.

December 28th, 2024 10:31

A Sonnet on Scroogery
Neville said:



You can beat an egg but you just can\'t beat Cheeky Missy for sonnets now can ya .. ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 28th, 2024 10:24

The Write Fright
Neville said:



Word blindness in its purest & most feared form .. now personified you canny so and so .. Neville ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 28th, 2024 02:09

The Write Fright
Thad Wilk said:

A wonderful write
on what you can\'t โœ๏ธ write!๐ŸŒŸ๐Ÿคฉ
Thank you for sharing,
to read a delight!!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
Best regards,
your muse will
return don\'t
give up the fight!! ๐Ÿ’ช


December 27th, 2024 23:20

The Write Fright
Cheeky Missy said:

Writer\'s Block is only a monster IF you let it exist. If fantasy plays your harp, she will vaporize. But reality is never not here. The moment that thought begins creeping up on you, just take a look around you and begin to describe what you find. Utilize metaphors and similes and you\'ve extra points.
That aside, how characteristically superb, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

December 27th, 2024 21:56

The Write Fright
arqios said:

Just what youโ€™re doing now, write about not being able to write. Get off the writing chair, desensitiseโ€ฆ. go out, do something you havenโ€™t done in a while, something that makes you forget and be lost in your moment. Enjoy. But take a on and pad with you or your โ€˜word processing deviceโ€™, keep them within reach but out of sight (cargo pant pockets, rucksack, perhaps) . Youโ€™re not writing atm, but living out poetry. But that just imo, works a treat to truly let your hair down without any plan or motive, ngl. But Iโ€™m sure you already knew that. And this poem is proof that youโ€™ve still got some juice in the tank.

December 27th, 2024 18:07

The Write Fright
Thomas W Case said:

Exactly. Fantastic.

December 27th, 2024 14:25



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