Got That Out
arqios said:

Here is a raw, primal, and defiantly honest poetic equivalent of a scream into the void—part rage, part release, and completely unapologetic. There’s something universally human about that moment of boiling over and finally letting it rip, no filter, no finesse. Just truth, snarling and unshackled.

June 19th, 2025 08:09

In the Legs of Loss
Teddy.15 said:

Quite magnificent drama. 🌹

June 19th, 2025 00:57

In the Legs of Loss
wildecho14 said:

This piece is hauntingly intimate. The progression from mind to body to soul feels like a slow unraveling, each layer more raw than the last. I’m especially struck by the mythic undertones like Eros, wyrd, enigma, woven with such vulnerability. Thank you for sharing something so soul-bared and visceral.

June 18th, 2025 13:08

In the Legs of Loss
Poetic Licence said:

Raw, passionate declaration off everything they gave culminating in the, ,pouring out of the soul, nicely done

June 18th, 2025 09:51

In the Legs of Loss
arqios said:

The poem evokes much more than a physical longing; it delves into metaphysicality, of how desire and passion intertwine with identity and meaning. And through its evocative imagery (\"warmed by wyrd’s wet warren\" or \"enigma’s ejaculate\"), the poem captures the balance between creation and annihilation, highlighting the transformative yet often destructive nature of such intimate surrender. Sensuality here, becomes a lens for both connection and loss, illustrating how the act of giving oneself can feel both expansive and diminishing; that in the grander context of being, this interplay asks whether selfhood is shaped more by what we hold onto or what we release. The speaker’s resolution of \"no more\" marks a turning point—a reclamation of wholeness after an act of total giving. Sensuality, then, is not merely indulgence but a poignant metaphor for the cyclical depths of human experience. Or something to a similar end. 🙏🏻🕊

June 18th, 2025 06:39

In the Legs of Loss
Cheeky Missy said:

It\'s actually not surprising the extent to which you sacrificed your very being on the altar of alleged heights of aka love, nor is the aftermath of such depths terribly shocking, nor the disavowel so confusing, ergo what is it? Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a deliciously haunting poignancy. I\'m not sufficiently awake to but mull this beauty. Thank you for sharing.

June 18th, 2025 06:08

To the Ones Who Go
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous work.

June 17th, 2025 14:07

To the Ones Who Go
Poetic Licence said:

In out quest for freedom we have to battle for the knowledge and truth, which if we persevere we will eventually find in the black hole somewhere, enjoyed todays offering, thank you

June 17th, 2025 10:44

To the Ones Who Go
sorenbarrett said:

Knowledge and the truth will set you free. Salvation by knowledge. The black hole where gravity is so strong that not even light (knowledge) can escape. A very thoughtful write.

June 17th, 2025 10:04

And They Call It Science
arqios said:

Here is the ability to see through the façade, to challenge the structures that feel unjust, is powerful. The world sometimes rewards the loudest voices, the most cunning, but real strength lies in clarity, in not getting swept away by manufactured perfection or hollow authority. To keep our fire, keep our perspective, and know that even in a stormy sea to be navigating something real. 🙏🏻🕊️

June 16th, 2025 20:40

And They Call It Science
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

June 16th, 2025 09:41

And They Call It Science
sorenbarrett said:

Oh Tristan so many ways to take this. But since it seems so blatant let me follow the first thing comes to mind. With phakic form this poem already stiffens then falls as it is pointed downward. To have penis envy you must not have one or maybe one that doesn\'t work. Interesting that it rises, if you don\'t have one how can it rise? (The scent of cons) is that short for condoms? (Fucking piracy) is that butt pirates? (Yo ho ho Mother fuckers) Now that just has to be Freudian psychology and the Oedipal complex. At least is is backed up with the next line speaking of power trip where one kills the father to take over the kingship with the mother. It did bring Oedipus to hell as he put out his eyes and died in exile. Was that another word play on the word come or cum? Well you can see how crazy I am maybe I should go on to a different interpretation

June 16th, 2025 08:12

Come With Me
Teddy.15 said:

Wow not only special poetry but special to meet your voice, love will come. So very powerful. 🌹

June 15th, 2025 15:43

Come With Me
orchidee said:

I thought this was about Obi..... Don\'t explain the title to me! LOL.

June 15th, 2025 10:19

Come With Me
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful and broad offering that calls out to all. A most giving and resplendent write that feel almost religious.

June 15th, 2025 07:06