Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Broken-Winged Butterfly
WG7 said:
I\'ve danced with the devil more times than I want to admit. All you need to remember the devil is just trying to show you the painful truth, and the angel is showing you the beautiful lie. You might can\'t escape hell, but you can try to stay away from it. Your poem is wonderfully amazing.
February 14th, 2017 12:20
WG7 said:
I\'ve danced with the devil more times than I want to admit. All you need to remember the devil is just trying to show you the painful truth, and the angel is showing you the beautiful lie. You might can\'t escape hell, but you can try to stay away from it. Your poem is wonderfully amazing.
February 14th, 2017 12:20
Teacher
Tony36 said:
Sounds like some of the teachers I have known. Great write
February 9th, 2017 20:23
Tony36 said:
Sounds like some of the teachers I have known. Great write
February 9th, 2017 20:23
A Dance With Death
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you my friend! Much appreciated!
February 9th, 2017 18:56
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you my friend! Much appreciated!
February 9th, 2017 18:56
A Vampyre\'s Lament
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! I didn\'t know it was for sale! Thanks for the feedback!
February 6th, 2017 21:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! I didn\'t know it was for sale! Thanks for the feedback!
February 6th, 2017 21:00
A Vampyre\'s Lament
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! I didn\'t know it was for sale! Thanks for the feedback!
February 6th, 2017 21:00
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Haha! I didn\'t know it was for sale! Thanks for the feedback!
February 6th, 2017 21:00
The Machine
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed. I wrote a poem called \"The Machine\" you should look it up sometime.
February 4th, 2017 15:11
Tony36 said:
Well written and expressed. I wrote a poem called \"The Machine\" you should look it up sometime.
February 4th, 2017 15:11
The Machine
Antoinette said:
I really enjoyed this It\'s actually amazing and so (unfortunately) relateable .
xx
February 4th, 2017 11:35
Antoinette said:
I really enjoyed this It\'s actually amazing and so (unfortunately) relateable .
xx
February 4th, 2017 11:35
Haunted
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you so much. It\'s a pleasure to meet you!
February 4th, 2017 10:03
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you so much. It\'s a pleasure to meet you!
February 4th, 2017 10:03
Haunted
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is the first I have come upon from you..and its absolutely stunning in its imagery and such...I like how you used the term Haunted to represent the entire body of work... I have a poem with the same title and that is what drew me to read yours and I was pleased to see that it was completely and totally unlike mine nd also, another look at the concept of being Haunted all together..I guess its hard to explain how this moved me to you, as you and I have never conversed but you get the idea,..Brilliant write and now I will look forward to reading more of your work..
February 4th, 2017 01:25
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
This is the first I have come upon from you..and its absolutely stunning in its imagery and such...I like how you used the term Haunted to represent the entire body of work... I have a poem with the same title and that is what drew me to read yours and I was pleased to see that it was completely and totally unlike mine nd also, another look at the concept of being Haunted all together..I guess its hard to explain how this moved me to you, as you and I have never conversed but you get the idea,..Brilliant write and now I will look forward to reading more of your work..
February 4th, 2017 01:25
The Necromancer
P.H.Rose said:
This is so bloody good
I absolutely love it
Very descriptive
Flows wonderfully well
And a great story to boot.
Well done !!!
February 1st, 2017 19:38
P.H.Rose said:
This is so bloody good
I absolutely love it
Very descriptive
Flows wonderfully well
And a great story to boot.
Well done !!!
February 1st, 2017 19:38
Who Am I?
Michael Edwards said:
Thank you thank you for posting a bit of (extra good) whimsical - there is much, what I call, WOE IS ME on the site so its nice to lighten up from time to time.
January 31st, 2017 15:16
Michael Edwards said:
Thank you thank you for posting a bit of (extra good) whimsical - there is much, what I call, WOE IS ME on the site so its nice to lighten up from time to time.
January 31st, 2017 15:16
ALIVE
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is illusive darkness everywhere and we search for intense light. Being buried alive is so sad. Mother might be hearing agony. This is sad and thought provoking. God bestows us and we feel his mercy. His light of wisdom protects us here. Very amazing poem is shared.
January 28th, 2017 00:09
Pintu Mahakul said:
There is illusive darkness everywhere and we search for intense light. Being buried alive is so sad. Mother might be hearing agony. This is sad and thought provoking. God bestows us and we feel his mercy. His light of wisdom protects us here. Very amazing poem is shared.
January 28th, 2017 00:09
Plastic Pawns
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thanks! I can only imagine what you and her went through. With that said, I am thankful that you shared with me what this poem powerfully evoked and that you related with it. Many thanks!
January 25th, 2017 21:51
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thanks! I can only imagine what you and her went through. With that said, I am thankful that you shared with me what this poem powerfully evoked and that you related with it. Many thanks!
January 25th, 2017 21:51
In the Endless Sea
Edthepoet said:
Reminds me of an Alan watts quote \"imagine what it\'s like to wake up, having never been to sleep\" excellent poem, really enjoyed it.
January 23rd, 2017 12:42
Edthepoet said:
Reminds me of an Alan watts quote \"imagine what it\'s like to wake up, having never been to sleep\" excellent poem, really enjoyed it.
January 23rd, 2017 12:42
Willow Tree
Pintu Mahakul said:
Very amazing poem is composed in rhyme manner. With the weeping tears of a willow tree this conveys interesting message.
January 20th, 2017 20:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
Very amazing poem is composed in rhyme manner. With the weeping tears of a willow tree this conveys interesting message.
January 20th, 2017 20:26
The Anxious Morning
NB said:
brilliant.. the last two lines really make it :)
January 20th, 2017 07:46
NB said:
brilliant.. the last two lines really make it :)
January 20th, 2017 07:46
Lurking Demons
Augustus said:
I always feel subject to temptations and have at times give in to the dark side. I pray there is forgiveness in the end. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 13:02
Augustus said:
I always feel subject to temptations and have at times give in to the dark side. I pray there is forgiveness in the end. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 13:02
The Withered Garden
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Excellent structure. Hope to read more tomorrow! Again, great job!--Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:20
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Excellent structure. Hope to read more tomorrow! Again, great job!--Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:20
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