Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
A Dance With Death
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark
and haunting poem,
strong feelings and
message so eloquently
penned my friend,!! 👍
Much enjoyed!!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 ✌️🕊️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:18
Thad Wilk said:
A deep, dark
and haunting poem,
strong feelings and
message so eloquently
penned my friend,!! 👍
Much enjoyed!!! 😊
Best wishes 🍀 ✌️🕊️ Thad
December 11th, 2024 21:18
A Dance With Death
orchidee said:
Ooh, I\'ve vipers too, in my poem of today! A nice, joyful poem T. \'Think sensible, man\' says Fido to me. lol.
December 11th, 2024 11:00
orchidee said:
Ooh, I\'ve vipers too, in my poem of today! A nice, joyful poem T. \'Think sensible, man\' says Fido to me. lol.
December 11th, 2024 11:00
A Dance With Death
Neville said:
They simply don\'t get much darker than this .. I think I\'ll stick to the hot potato & the hand jive with the light on and a spare set of batteries and bulbs .. 🖤🐧👍
December 11th, 2024 09:36
Neville said:
They simply don\'t get much darker than this .. I think I\'ll stick to the hot potato & the hand jive with the light on and a spare set of batteries and bulbs .. 🖤🐧👍
December 11th, 2024 09:36
A Dance With Death
TobaniNataiella said:
The only truth we know is what someone has told is the truth, so it is not our truth and the truth we all search for deep down, will never really be found. I really enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 11th, 2024 09:29
TobaniNataiella said:
The only truth we know is what someone has told is the truth, so it is not our truth and the truth we all search for deep down, will never really be found. I really enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 11th, 2024 09:29
A Dance With Death
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are hollow shells, A dark and macabre write that tells it as it is. Points of truth told in the tale we do not know the truth. A good read
December 11th, 2024 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed we are hollow shells, A dark and macabre write that tells it as it is. Points of truth told in the tale we do not know the truth. A good read
December 11th, 2024 08:46
Maria\'s Last Dance
NafisaSB said:
hauntingly sad poem. impressed by the deep emotions
December 11th, 2024 06:59
NafisaSB said:
hauntingly sad poem. impressed by the deep emotions
December 11th, 2024 06:59
CHANGE
Caring dove said:
Love the last few lines ..
makes me think of self love
Good writing
December 11th, 2024 02:53
Caring dove said:
Love the last few lines ..
makes me think of self love
Good writing
December 11th, 2024 02:53
The Endless Spectator
Dan Williams said:
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his past. So sad that \"The plea falls on deaf ears
As the torture is meant to be infinite\", this is what hell would be like. Very Nice.
December 11th, 2024 01:40
Dan Williams said:
\"Countless ages of uselessness\" can truly separate any man from his past. So sad that \"The plea falls on deaf ears
As the torture is meant to be infinite\", this is what hell would be like. Very Nice.
December 11th, 2024 01:40
The Endless Spectator
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan this is certainly dark and has a deeply sad tone, beautifully done, the emotion is palpable. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan this is certainly dark and has a deeply sad tone, beautifully done, the emotion is palpable. 🌹
December 11th, 2024 00:50
The Wolf at the Door
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Grrrr8 read thought
provoking too! 🤔
Never know till it\'s
too late sometimes
what the other will do!
These days it\'s better
to be safe than sorry! 😔
Loved this, thanks for sharing! ❤️
B res t regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 21:55
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Grrrr8 read thought
provoking too! 🤔
Never know till it\'s
too late sometimes
what the other will do!
These days it\'s better
to be safe than sorry! 😔
Loved this, thanks for sharing! ❤️
B res t regards ✌️ Thad
December 10th, 2024 21:55
The Wolf at the Door
Neville said:
Not everything is what it may seem .. some things need to appear as something else in order to survive .. whilst other things thrive only by being themselves .. or by virtue of their reputation .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:33
Neville said:
Not everything is what it may seem .. some things need to appear as something else in order to survive .. whilst other things thrive only by being themselves .. or by virtue of their reputation .. maybe .. Neville
December 10th, 2024 11:33
The Wolf at the Door
sorenbarrett said:
It is often hard to tell the difference between charity and self preservation, between truth and lies, those that intend us harm and those that need our help. My wife said she is not taking that chance, she gives rides to anyone on the highway day or night.
December 10th, 2024 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
It is often hard to tell the difference between charity and self preservation, between truth and lies, those that intend us harm and those that need our help. My wife said she is not taking that chance, she gives rides to anyone on the highway day or night.
December 10th, 2024 10:51
The Wolf at the Door
TobaniNataiella said:
A very valid lesson told in this entertaining poem, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:56
TobaniNataiella said:
A very valid lesson told in this entertaining poem, enjoyed the read, thank you
December 10th, 2024 08:56
The Wolf at the Door
orchidee said:
Ahh, keeping the wolf from the door? Would wolves eat pigs, if they had let the wolf in?!
December 10th, 2024 08:30
orchidee said:
Ahh, keeping the wolf from the door? Would wolves eat pigs, if they had let the wolf in?!
December 10th, 2024 08:30
The Endless Spectator
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
The Endless Spectator
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
The Endless Spectator
TobaniNataiella said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
TobaniNataiella said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
Lies
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
A Tale of Two Journeys
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
Maria\'s Last Dance
Teddy.15 said:
An amazing and outstanding piece of poetry dear Tristan, kudos on the emotion and language my friend 💜
December 8th, 2024 18:24
Teddy.15 said:
An amazing and outstanding piece of poetry dear Tristan, kudos on the emotion and language my friend 💜
December 8th, 2024 18:24
A Tale of Two Journeys
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, rendered with a haunting poignancy dropping like blood down, down the page, so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 18:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, rendered with a haunting poignancy dropping like blood down, down the page, so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 18:01
Maria\'s Last Dance
cellinic said:
\'And here we are
In a parking lot of past regret—broken dreams—
Stuck between then and everything after.\' - really very impressively and poetically narrated story... best wishes,
December 8th, 2024 09:41
cellinic said:
\'And here we are
In a parking lot of past regret—broken dreams—
Stuck between then and everything after.\' - really very impressively and poetically narrated story... best wishes,
December 8th, 2024 09:41
Maria\'s Last Dance
Dan Williams said:
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about mental health, having struggled to find my way in it for too many years now. Very nice work here.
December 8th, 2024 01:26
Dan Williams said:
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about mental health, having struggled to find my way in it for too many years now. Very nice work here.
December 8th, 2024 01:26
Crowing Time
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me a bit of this image: https://img.huffingtonpost.com/asset/596a6f352100008860fc70c1.jpg?ops=scalefit_500_noupscale Music is medicine...words for those of us who can\'t find our own.
December 7th, 2024 22:16
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me a bit of this image: https://img.huffingtonpost.com/asset/596a6f352100008860fc70c1.jpg?ops=scalefit_500_noupscale Music is medicine...words for those of us who can\'t find our own.
December 7th, 2024 22:16
A Tale of Two Journeys
NinjaGirl said:
Great to know the name for a poem like this! Amazing successful writing of one!
December 7th, 2024 22:12
NinjaGirl said:
Great to know the name for a poem like this! Amazing successful writing of one!
December 7th, 2024 22:12
Maria\'s Last Dance
NinjaGirl said:
How easy is it, to ignore one\'s screams, when chasing our own dreams? How tragic is it, that one must die, for us to realize what was a cry? Failing to understand their pain is a burden we carry, aren\'t you glad we didn\'t give anyone a burden for us?
December 7th, 2024 22:08
NinjaGirl said:
How easy is it, to ignore one\'s screams, when chasing our own dreams? How tragic is it, that one must die, for us to realize what was a cry? Failing to understand their pain is a burden we carry, aren\'t you glad we didn\'t give anyone a burden for us?
December 7th, 2024 22:08
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