Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Does It Matter?
Tony Grannell said:
The blank space before the, \'never mind\', says it all, that is, saying nothing. Enough to dampen any, wow. Excellent, my friend.
All the very best,
Tony.
May 9th, 2025 10:57
Tony Grannell said:
The blank space before the, \'never mind\', says it all, that is, saying nothing. Enough to dampen any, wow. Excellent, my friend.
All the very best,
Tony.
May 9th, 2025 10:57
Does It Matter?
Poetic Licence said:
To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done
May 9th, 2025 10:42
Poetic Licence said:
To the point, nail on head time, very nicely done
May 9th, 2025 10:42
Does It Matter?
sorenbarrett said:
They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend
May 9th, 2025 09:58
sorenbarrett said:
They say that it is what is not said that matters and so it is in this poem. I love the white between the print in this work. Very nice my friend
May 9th, 2025 09:58
Does It Matter?
arqios said:
It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 09:33
arqios said:
It always matters. The why, the how, the because. 🙏🏻🕊️
May 9th, 2025 09:33
Betrayal
arqios said:
Looking at getting tone on paper… probably the toughest of these traitors. Subtle betrayals… breathe even makes the mark. A sure assassin. 🙏🏻🕊
May 8th, 2025 15:55
arqios said:
Looking at getting tone on paper… probably the toughest of these traitors. Subtle betrayals… breathe even makes the mark. A sure assassin. 🙏🏻🕊
May 8th, 2025 15:55
Betrayal
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write a sense of the double edged sword, and maybe some betrayal in the write, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:08
Poetic Licence said:
A cleverly crafted write a sense of the double edged sword, and maybe some betrayal in the write, enjoyed the read
May 8th, 2025 11:08
Betrayal
orchidee said:
Were we betrayed by Obi or Popeye, or both? And - don\'t I think of anyone else besides those two? LOL.
May 8th, 2025 10:29
orchidee said:
Were we betrayed by Obi or Popeye, or both? And - don\'t I think of anyone else besides those two? LOL.
May 8th, 2025 10:29
Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
So few words that also betray. Words are not always needed to betray one. A wonderful poetic write
May 8th, 2025 09:59
sorenbarrett said:
So few words that also betray. Words are not always needed to betray one. A wonderful poetic write
May 8th, 2025 09:59
Betrayal
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, but of course! And I\'d have it no other way. I\'m happy to be me. This gorgeous itty bitty pretty number packs a punch in tantalizing brevity. Superb. Thank you for sharing. I love it. Excellently rendered with a piercing poignancy and sparse imagery.
May 8th, 2025 09:50
Cheeky Missy said:
Hahaha, but of course! And I\'d have it no other way. I\'m happy to be me. This gorgeous itty bitty pretty number packs a punch in tantalizing brevity. Superb. Thank you for sharing. I love it. Excellently rendered with a piercing poignancy and sparse imagery.
May 8th, 2025 09:50
Don\'t Let It Own You
Damaso said:
Friend, I can feel the blood rushing as I read each line, and my heart fills with courage enough to take down an army single-handedly. Heroic. Greetings.
May 8th, 2025 09:00
Damaso said:
Friend, I can feel the blood rushing as I read each line, and my heart fills with courage enough to take down an army single-handedly. Heroic. Greetings.
May 8th, 2025 09:00
Don\'t Let It Own You
arqios said:
Being “owned” had quite a strong meaning in Gen Y and such. “Pwned” in gamer parlance. When we rise above we have a sense of not being owned or whatever the term is these days🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2025 00:59
arqios said:
Being “owned” had quite a strong meaning in Gen Y and such. “Pwned” in gamer parlance. When we rise above we have a sense of not being owned or whatever the term is these days🙏🏻🕊️
May 8th, 2025 00:59
Don\'t Let It Own You
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, \"... hath no fury like a woman scorned.\" Wasn\'t it? Concluding on that note, manhood seems to beautifully assert itself. Fascinating. This is a very pretty number in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a ringing, provocative poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:20
Cheeky Missy said:
Funny, \"... hath no fury like a woman scorned.\" Wasn\'t it? Concluding on that note, manhood seems to beautifully assert itself. Fascinating. This is a very pretty number in your characteristic style with gorgeous imagery and a ringing, provocative poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:20
The Laughing Matter
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There\'s so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:15
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee! Were we, every last one of us, clowns in our various circles before finally being shown as artists and poets/poetesses? There\'s so much in this pretty number which resonates and seems to reverberate as if--? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, fascinating effects, and a charming though painful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 7th, 2025 13:15
Don\'t Let It Own You
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your work truly captures a person Tristan. I hope you never stop writing. There’s always something to be learned.
May 7th, 2025 12:41
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Your work truly captures a person Tristan. I hope you never stop writing. There’s always something to be learned.
May 7th, 2025 12:41
Don\'t Let It Own You
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the issue of getting your permit to live in hell, as for most people life gets tough and one time or another. I understand the message of not letting it own you, which is a very positive statement, sometimes it\'s just not that simple, nicely crafted meaningful write
May 7th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Highlighting the issue of getting your permit to live in hell, as for most people life gets tough and one time or another. I understand the message of not letting it own you, which is a very positive statement, sometimes it\'s just not that simple, nicely crafted meaningful write
May 7th, 2025 12:33
Don\'t Let It Own You
orchidee said:
Erm spinach has no fury?! Good write Pop... erm Tristan. lol. I write some rubbish - sometimes! heehee.
May 7th, 2025 11:50
orchidee said:
Erm spinach has no fury?! Good write Pop... erm Tristan. lol. I write some rubbish - sometimes! heehee.
May 7th, 2025 11:50
Don\'t Let It Own You
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
Might be me and my mania for metaphor but I hear one here. Life can be tough and we call it hell sometime yes don\'t let it own you. Very nice Tristan
May 7th, 2025 10:12
The Laughing Matter
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
Poetic Licence said:
A very creative way of touching a very serious subject, relatable in so many ways, wonderful write
May 7th, 2025 06:20
The Laughing Matter
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
Salvia.S said:
Vivid and impactful imagery with palpable emotional depth. Well done!!!
May 6th, 2025 21:58
The Laughing Matter
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
NinjaGirl said:
A whole new meaning to class clown...maybe I was never laughed at but I certainly was made to feel stupid in school!
May 6th, 2025 18:49
The Laughing Matter
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
Could sound like an adventure of a certain Obi.... yes? LOL.
May 6th, 2025 11:11
The Laughing Matter
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
sorenbarrett said:
Reminiscent of a birth from the womb. This existential birth into a surreal world of observers with no understanding and no empathy where born naked one is who they are totally naive and ignorant in a new world. As for the clown others may laugh but they are the fools. A striking poem that forms thoughts in figures, numbers, shapes or lettering new to the eye. Most creative my friend.
May 6th, 2025 06:41
The Laughing Matter
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
arqios said:
Sometimes being the centre of attention is a very awkward thing🙏🏻🕊️
May 6th, 2025 06:25
Cross-Examination
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
NafisaSB said:
the construction of he poem is amazing and simply awesome
the question also is philosophical and deep, and emands soul-searching
enjoyed it
May 5th, 2025 23:34
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