Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dark Alchemy
Bella Shepard said:
Deliciously occultish, and when set to music it pulls you into the beat and rhythm, couldn\'t sit still. Loved it!
September 19th, 2025 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Deliciously occultish, and when set to music it pulls you into the beat and rhythm, couldn\'t sit still. Loved it!
September 19th, 2025 14:14
Dark Alchemy
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my goodness, this is fabulous, dark delicious and harassing in mood. Kudos my dear Tristan.
September 19th, 2025 12:38
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my goodness, this is fabulous, dark delicious and harassing in mood. Kudos my dear Tristan.
September 19th, 2025 12:38
Dark Alchemy
sorenbarrett said:
A great reliance on the occult the use of three as in the three time repetition in stanzas. Nice work my friends. The use of inversions, inverted smiles are frowns. The sign of the inverted cross. A most interesting song
September 19th, 2025 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great reliance on the occult the use of three as in the three time repetition in stanzas. Nice work my friends. The use of inversions, inverted smiles are frowns. The sign of the inverted cross. A most interesting song
September 19th, 2025 11:03
To Soak in Reality
Friendship said:
The poem expresses a deep concern for the state of the world, highlighting the destructive consequences of human actions driven by hate, neglect, and environmental degradation. It serves as a warning about the impending self-destruction of the planet if humanity does not change its ways.
September 19th, 2025 06:57
Friendship said:
The poem expresses a deep concern for the state of the world, highlighting the destructive consequences of human actions driven by hate, neglect, and environmental degradation. It serves as a warning about the impending self-destruction of the planet if humanity does not change its ways.
September 19th, 2025 06:57
To Soak in Reality
Keyara S Trotman said:
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September 18th, 2025 21:22
Keyara S Trotman said:
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September 18th, 2025 21:22
To Soak in Reality
Doggerel Dave said:
Still dozing...everywhere \'Defense\' spending is on the rise, while the guy in the White House has reverted the name to \'War\'. May be the most honest thing he has ever said... or may ever say...
Prophetic in 1996, even more pertinent today, Tristan.
September 18th, 2025 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Still dozing...everywhere \'Defense\' spending is on the rise, while the guy in the White House has reverted the name to \'War\'. May be the most honest thing he has ever said... or may ever say...
Prophetic in 1996, even more pertinent today, Tristan.
September 18th, 2025 16:53
To Soak in Reality
orchidee said:
I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even knew Tom & Co then. lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:36
orchidee said:
I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even knew Tom & Co then. lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:36
Orchi\'s Own
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
To Soak in Reality
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasnβt even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan youβve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasnβt even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan youβve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
To Soak in Reality
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
To Soak in Reality
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. πΉ
September 18th, 2025 10:22
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. πΉ
September 18th, 2025 10:22
To Soak in Reality
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
To Soak in Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
Orchi\'s Own
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
Orchi\'s Own
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Hate\'s Finality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragicβ¦the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...βknowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within meβ...really struck me, and that closing vow to βdie unsungβ lingers painfully. Itβs simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragicβ¦the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...βknowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within meβ...really struck me, and that closing vow to βdie unsungβ lingers painfully. Itβs simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Orchi\'s Own
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Orchi\'s Own
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
The Harder Way
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the tension between love and hate, particularly in the context of differing worldviews. The speaker grapples with the pain of losing someone while simultaneously rejecting their hateful perspectives. The poet matter addresses themes of acceptance, forgiveness, and the struggle to maintain love in the face of ideological differences
September 16th, 2025 20:16
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the tension between love and hate, particularly in the context of differing worldviews. The speaker grapples with the pain of losing someone while simultaneously rejecting their hateful perspectives. The poet matter addresses themes of acceptance, forgiveness, and the struggle to maintain love in the face of ideological differences
September 16th, 2025 20:16
The Harder Way
NinjaGirl said:
This--this is it. It\'s not that I agreed with all he said, but often he was kind, and understanding. There were times where he wasn\'t, perhaps several, but the celebration of his death is where I can turn against my own.
September 16th, 2025 09:33
NinjaGirl said:
This--this is it. It\'s not that I agreed with all he said, but often he was kind, and understanding. There were times where he wasn\'t, perhaps several, but the celebration of his death is where I can turn against my own.
September 16th, 2025 09:33
The Harder Way
RSM0812 said:
I liked your poem. I agree with much of your main poi t also. Please dont forget though that ecery human being deservs to have their own opinions. His death is trajic and hostile. It et again proves the confusion a.d mental processes of a society that renders the heart only to the money and increase in capaplist ideolgy. However imperfect our best is. Live and let live. That always been my philosophy. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:21
RSM0812 said:
I liked your poem. I agree with much of your main poi t also. Please dont forget though that ecery human being deservs to have their own opinions. His death is trajic and hostile. It et again proves the confusion a.d mental processes of a society that renders the heart only to the money and increase in capaplist ideolgy. However imperfect our best is. Live and let live. That always been my philosophy. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:21
The Harder Way
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant write.
A great poem of values....
September 16th, 2025 08:17
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant write.
A great poem of values....
September 16th, 2025 08:17
The Harder Way
Demar Desu said:
Way to empathize and still dance with your own feelings. I find it very strange that the people who are mourning his death is wanting the death penalty for the one who committed the crime⦠it just never makes sense to me. Still all life has value⦠today I lost my beta fish⦠sigh
September 16th, 2025 08:12
Demar Desu said:
Way to empathize and still dance with your own feelings. I find it very strange that the people who are mourning his death is wanting the death penalty for the one who committed the crime⦠it just never makes sense to me. Still all life has value⦠today I lost my beta fish⦠sigh
September 16th, 2025 08:12
The Harder Way
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant poem. Humane, empathetic, yet unwavering on the moral stance. I wouldn\'t diminsh it\'s impact with a mere \'loved it\'. Let me say- I respected it.
September 16th, 2025 08:04
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant poem. Humane, empathetic, yet unwavering on the moral stance. I wouldn\'t diminsh it\'s impact with a mere \'loved it\'. Let me say- I respected it.
September 16th, 2025 08:04
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