Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Invisible
orchidee said:
A spot of dark humour from me - eh? where\'s this poem; can\'t see it; it\'s invisible! heehee.
Hope I\'ve not put my big foot in it. I\'ve been known to make crass comments occasionally, which could be taken as insensitive.
Bit like - I phoned the Samaritans but they were engaged! An awful joke there.
October 29th, 2024 11:31
orchidee said:
A spot of dark humour from me - eh? where\'s this poem; can\'t see it; it\'s invisible! heehee.
Hope I\'ve not put my big foot in it. I\'ve been known to make crass comments occasionally, which could be taken as insensitive.
Bit like - I phoned the Samaritans but they were engaged! An awful joke there.
October 29th, 2024 11:31
Soul Ascendant
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and message indeed! 👍
Last stanza says it all!! ⭐
Thanks for sharing,
my pleasure to read,!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 28th, 2024 15:20
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and message indeed! 👍
Last stanza says it all!! ⭐
Thanks for sharing,
my pleasure to read,!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 28th, 2024 15:20
Soul Ascendant
sorenbarrett said:
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign of humility and the starting place for change and openness to improvement. Said in a most lovely way
October 28th, 2024 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign of humility and the starting place for change and openness to improvement. Said in a most lovely way
October 28th, 2024 09:55
Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be taken a number of ways the first that came to mind was poetry itself is just a series of lines not really anything. Words that are empty to some have great meaning to others. (There\'s more than nothing) Second we are all alone and all else is nothing but our illusions. Lonely alone yet (there\'s more than nothing) I have a poem on the drawing board with this theme as well and progresses oh so slow it is hard to write about nothing yet you have. This poem deserves more reads my friend.
October 28th, 2024 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be taken a number of ways the first that came to mind was poetry itself is just a series of lines not really anything. Words that are empty to some have great meaning to others. (There\'s more than nothing) Second we are all alone and all else is nothing but our illusions. Lonely alone yet (there\'s more than nothing) I have a poem on the drawing board with this theme as well and progresses oh so slow it is hard to write about nothing yet you have. This poem deserves more reads my friend.
October 28th, 2024 08:42
Osseous Oubliette
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
October 26th, 2024 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
October 26th, 2024 17:49
Color Captivation
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? Are you very certain the unknown voices called out to you to take you from the party? How very lovely and excellently rendered with captivating imagery and a frightening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 16:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? Are you very certain the unknown voices called out to you to take you from the party? How very lovely and excellently rendered with captivating imagery and a frightening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 16:33
Color Captivation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull poetic write
October 25th, 2024 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull poetic write
October 25th, 2024 14:06
avalanche
arqios said:
As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and should be tended to with great care!
October 24th, 2024 20:40
arqios said:
As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and should be tended to with great care!
October 24th, 2024 20:40
avalanche
orchidee said:
Good write T, but of course, not a good thing to experience.
October 24th, 2024 13:55
orchidee said:
Good write T, but of course, not a good thing to experience.
October 24th, 2024 13:55
avalanche
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read and yes the mind holds broken shards that it tries to put togeather into something meaningful and beautiful. Lovely
October 24th, 2024 13:38
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting read and yes the mind holds broken shards that it tries to put togeather into something meaningful and beautiful. Lovely
October 24th, 2024 13:38
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
sorenbarrett said:
A most poignant poem written in great metaphor. As a psychologist I believe as you we all suffer from our own mental illness to greater or lessor degrees and we need to be sensitive to others. A beautiful wirte
October 24th, 2024 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A most poignant poem written in great metaphor. As a psychologist I believe as you we all suffer from our own mental illness to greater or lessor degrees and we need to be sensitive to others. A beautiful wirte
October 24th, 2024 13:01
Sunbeams and Trinkets
NafisaSB said:
such a vivid picture - can almost see myself queuing up to buy a trinket..
October 24th, 2024 00:09
NafisaSB said:
such a vivid picture - can almost see myself queuing up to buy a trinket..
October 24th, 2024 00:09
Sunbeams and Trinkets
Cheeky Missy said:
These are very charming and all the more too delightful thus rendered in tasteful bite-size senryu stanzas. I love it! Winsome with a subtle, joyous poignancy in tow, haunted by the sense I can\'t pin down, it\'s too beautiful with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 24th, 2024 00:02
Cheeky Missy said:
These are very charming and all the more too delightful thus rendered in tasteful bite-size senryu stanzas. I love it! Winsome with a subtle, joyous poignancy in tow, haunted by the sense I can\'t pin down, it\'s too beautiful with excellent imagery. Thank you very much for sharing!
October 24th, 2024 00:02
Sunbeams and Trinkets
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I thought it was someone sneezing - all those Haikus (Ahh-choos!). Corny joke from me there! lol.
October 23rd, 2024 08:33
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I thought it was someone sneezing - all those Haikus (Ahh-choos!). Corny joke from me there! lol.
October 23rd, 2024 08:33
Sunbeams and Trinkets
sorenbarrett said:
The group togeather makes for more of an atmosphere good choice
October 23rd, 2024 05:14
sorenbarrett said:
The group togeather makes for more of an atmosphere good choice
October 23rd, 2024 05:14
Beneath the Surgical Sky
aDarkerMind said:
rather than my telling you what a wonderful work of art this is....
I would suggest you stand back and enjoy the applause Tristan.
bitter sweet at it\'s very best.
and yes, your poem delivered!
October 21st, 2024 13:39
aDarkerMind said:
rather than my telling you what a wonderful work of art this is....
I would suggest you stand back and enjoy the applause Tristan.
bitter sweet at it\'s very best.
and yes, your poem delivered!
October 21st, 2024 13:39
Beneath the Surgical Sky
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I think of an onion the surface shell then another beneath and another until reaching center there is no more. Thought provoking with strong imagery that evokes strong visceral reactions.
October 21st, 2024 05:13
sorenbarrett said:
As I read this I think of an onion the surface shell then another beneath and another until reaching center there is no more. Thought provoking with strong imagery that evokes strong visceral reactions.
October 21st, 2024 05:13
Beneath the Surgical Sky
orchidee said:
Why did I read this just before dinner - it\'s put me off food now! lol. Plus a bit of ontological stuff *gets out dictionary*.
October 21st, 2024 04:00
orchidee said:
Why did I read this just before dinner - it\'s put me off food now! lol. Plus a bit of ontological stuff *gets out dictionary*.
October 21st, 2024 04:00
Ice Lions
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture crafted with care and consistent without. Open to interpretation, it hit me as a metaphor for relationships. Although the weather seems fine around them when it comes to speech or communication everything freezes up causing tremendous pain and spliting, fracturing the relationship. (lover\'s mouths\' a frosty drain, Outpouring bloody ice spears, Their eyes instantly insane)
October 20th, 2024 05:11
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely picture crafted with care and consistent without. Open to interpretation, it hit me as a metaphor for relationships. Although the weather seems fine around them when it comes to speech or communication everything freezes up causing tremendous pain and spliting, fracturing the relationship. (lover\'s mouths\' a frosty drain, Outpouring bloody ice spears, Their eyes instantly insane)
October 20th, 2024 05:11
Caverns of the Heart
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of all the facets of emotion good and bad. Very nicely worded with great images
October 19th, 2024 10:39
sorenbarrett said:
A beautiful write of all the facets of emotion good and bad. Very nicely worded with great images
October 19th, 2024 10:39
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