Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Numbers
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
orchidee said:
This is like a hybrid of my FFF poem and the New Testament book of Revelation - numbers in there - 666, etc, many of them symbolic.
December 4th, 2024 09:37
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Neville said:
How extraordinarily noir .. and likewise enjoyed .. Neville
December 4th, 2024 02:06
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
FrasMac said:
Oh, I can so relate to these emotions. Really well expressed and without any pretence or complications. Well played on the form too!
December 3rd, 2024 13:38
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
TobaniNataiella said:
Well written, takes you on a little journey a lot of people have travelled, enjoyed the read.
December 3rd, 2024 10:47
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
sorenbarrett said:
A read on the darker side it seems to have a feel of Gothic to it. That’s OK though I like cloudy days from time to time. Written with great imagery and a sense of pathos.
December 3rd, 2024 10:32
Holiday Jazz and Raven Claws
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we can’t find happiness even if we want to feel that way . Sounds like the state of mind and environment isn’t helping. I guess we can be stuck with how we feel ,sometimes
December 3rd, 2024 09:43
Caring dove said:
Sometimes we can’t find happiness even if we want to feel that way . Sounds like the state of mind and environment isn’t helping. I guess we can be stuck with how we feel ,sometimes
December 3rd, 2024 09:43
Cryogenic Catharsis
orchidee said:
You tried that cryogenic therapy - a tub at about a million degrees below freezing? Well, up about -200C really.
Yes - barber-surgeons in days of old. Were people there just for a haircut? Their red and white poles are ominous. The red is for.....argh!
December 3rd, 2024 03:14
orchidee said:
You tried that cryogenic therapy - a tub at about a million degrees below freezing? Well, up about -200C really.
Yes - barber-surgeons in days of old. Were people there just for a haircut? Their red and white poles are ominous. The red is for.....argh!
December 3rd, 2024 03:14
Cryogenic Catharsis
arqios said:
As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be, more dancing we will see!
December 2nd, 2024 22:53
arqios said:
As long as they are red dancing shoes, however ill-fitting they may be, more dancing we will see!
December 2nd, 2024 22:53
Cryogenic Catharsis
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it difficult to speak when it feels like a knife is in your throat? how long will the roses remain rotting... release is relief.
December 2nd, 2024 20:42
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it difficult to speak when it feels like a knife is in your throat? how long will the roses remain rotting... release is relief.
December 2nd, 2024 20:42
Cryogenic Catharsis
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
sorenbarrett said:
Bleeding is cathartic seems like a term used in the days when they did bleeding as a surgical procedure. A most interesting poem, full of introjections. Cryogenics do they still do that?
December 2nd, 2024 20:24
Hourglass
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏
A wonderful shape poem,
captivating and
thought provoking must say!! 🤔
The older I get time just
seems to quickly slip away!!¿
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 2nd, 2024 15:06
Hourglass
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Cassie58 said:
Shape poetry. A double helping of creativity Tristan. Time - a Grand Canyon or a speck of sand. Love the imagery that comes to mind here. For me, it is speeding up as the sand shifts through the hour glass timer. When young, the days seemed endless. Wonderful write. Thank you.
December 2nd, 2024 07:28
Hourglass
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
Teddy.15 said:
And in hourglass form this is superb dear Tristan I seem to have my own love affair with time, it\'s a truly fascinating theme. Beautifully done. 🌹 ⏳🌹
December 2nd, 2024 01:42
Hourglass
Cheeky Missy said:
With such a discussion, to think there\'s such an unavoidable reality coming upon us as \"...there shall be time no longer--\"(Rev 10:6b). I like your none too subtle point that it\'s not a trivial matter. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:16
Cheeky Missy said:
With such a discussion, to think there\'s such an unavoidable reality coming upon us as \"...there shall be time no longer--\"(Rev 10:6b). I like your none too subtle point that it\'s not a trivial matter. Beautifully rendered with an excellently haunting poignancy and great imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 1st, 2024 16:16
Hourglass
arqios said:
Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes I’ve pondered upon this many a moment. And speaking of mythology; the Greek kairos and kronos are excellent clues to how we perceive time.
December 1st, 2024 10:35
arqios said:
Good one Tristan! Down to the shapely hourglass ⌛️ curves; and Yes I’ve pondered upon this many a moment. And speaking of mythology; the Greek kairos and kronos are excellent clues to how we perceive time.
December 1st, 2024 10:35
Hourglass
orchidee said:
I was ranting, sort of, in a recent poem, of people who say \'This moment in time\' or other naff expressions. I wouldn\'t mind, but they say them about 10 million times a day! lol.
And - Ohh, they say \'Time goes fast when you\'re enjoying yourself\' Does it?!
December 1st, 2024 10:07
orchidee said:
I was ranting, sort of, in a recent poem, of people who say \'This moment in time\' or other naff expressions. I wouldn\'t mind, but they say them about 10 million times a day! lol.
And - Ohh, they say \'Time goes fast when you\'re enjoying yourself\' Does it?!
December 1st, 2024 10:07
Hourglass
sorenbarrett said:
The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it goes, and the more joy one finds the faster it runs. I have spent many hours thinking about what time really is a fifth dimension bent by gravity Einstein’s view simply an issue of movement in space, I have no idea, but I know that it has gone too fast for me. A wonderful poem, brilliant !!!
December 1st, 2024 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
The paradox of time to me is that the more miserable one is the slower it goes, and the more joy one finds the faster it runs. I have spent many hours thinking about what time really is a fifth dimension bent by gravity Einstein’s view simply an issue of movement in space, I have no idea, but I know that it has gone too fast for me. A wonderful poem, brilliant !!!
December 1st, 2024 09:16
Enough
TobaniNataiella said:
I think a lot of people can identify with this subject, Well written, Enjoyable read
November 30th, 2024 21:36
TobaniNataiella said:
I think a lot of people can identify with this subject, Well written, Enjoyable read
November 30th, 2024 21:36
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity involved
2. Beautiful to look at and read.
3. Are you aware there are only 24 hours available each day?
Great to see your name on the roll call so regularly.
November 30th, 2024 17:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Thoughts on your piece, Tristan:
1. Stunning ingenuity involved
2. Beautiful to look at and read.
3. Are you aware there are only 24 hours available each day?
Great to see your name on the roll call so regularly.
November 30th, 2024 17:06
Enough
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it hard to be enough when they expect so much? must you be rich, hard-working, family-loving, vacation-seeking, world-traveling, business-creating, and already-on-retirement to be enough? the paradox is evident: you must love working for your family but must love family over work, value relationships more yet sacrifice relationships for success.
November 30th, 2024 16:52
NinjaGirl said:
isn\'t it hard to be enough when they expect so much? must you be rich, hard-working, family-loving, vacation-seeking, world-traveling, business-creating, and already-on-retirement to be enough? the paradox is evident: you must love working for your family but must love family over work, value relationships more yet sacrifice relationships for success.
November 30th, 2024 16:52
Strolling Down Christmas Lanes
NinjaGirl said:
beautiful lights, jolly old saint nick, and gifts galore--starving kids, houseless humans, all to ignore. christians who don\'t act like Christ; the name only to show others they are a \'good person\'
November 30th, 2024 16:47
NinjaGirl said:
beautiful lights, jolly old saint nick, and gifts galore--starving kids, houseless humans, all to ignore. christians who don\'t act like Christ; the name only to show others they are a \'good person\'
November 30th, 2024 16:47
Echoes
NinjaGirl said:
Did AI create this scene? I can only imagine the humorous prompt. Echoes remain of what once was... great poem
November 30th, 2024 16:41
NinjaGirl said:
Did AI create this scene? I can only imagine the humorous prompt. Echoes remain of what once was... great poem
November 30th, 2024 16:41
Labeled
NinjaGirl said:
A label is trying to sum up an entire person in one word. making them smaller, less than what they are. if all one ever is is \"weak\" they won\'t know if they can ever be strong in anything.
November 30th, 2024 16:38
NinjaGirl said:
A label is trying to sum up an entire person in one word. making them smaller, less than what they are. if all one ever is is \"weak\" they won\'t know if they can ever be strong in anything.
November 30th, 2024 16:38
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Tristan
November 30th, 2024 15:58
Tony36 said:
Excellent write Tristan
November 30th, 2024 15:58
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
Neville said:
well thats a couple of birds killed with a single stone in my book .. a great concept almost like a star burst .. and free plugs all round .. you really are a fungi to have around our Tristan .. 🍄🍄🐧👍
November 30th, 2024 11:01
Neville said:
well thats a couple of birds killed with a single stone in my book .. a great concept almost like a star burst .. and free plugs all round .. you really are a fungi to have around our Tristan .. 🍄🍄🐧👍
November 30th, 2024 11:01
within (a response to Sophie Ange’s Cosmic Kaleidoscope)
sorenbarrett said:
I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal rhyme and the meaning behind it. Well thought out and thought provoking it has dropped its spores.
November 30th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
I like the form of this poem, but even more I liked some of the internal rhyme and the meaning behind it. Well thought out and thought provoking it has dropped its spores.
November 30th, 2024 10:18
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