Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



A Little Mad
NinjaGirl said:

\"Compassion has an expiration date.\" What a line! It\'s all too true...the people are willing to help...until they aren\'t.

May 5th, 2025 16:22

What If?
orchidee said:

Erm, what if Obi is all there is - or isn\'t?! Whops! You knew I was gonna say that - yes? LOL.

May 5th, 2025 10:27

What If?
sorenbarrett said:

Another banger. So philosophical yet practical and yes it matters not we are hear. Lovely a vave

May 5th, 2025 10:12

What If?
aDarkerMind said:

wise words indeed my friend;

May 5th, 2025 09:45

What If?
arqios said:

We are here๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

May 5th, 2025 09:09

What If?
Salvia.S said:

Thought provoking and beautifully written!!!

May 5th, 2025 08:53

Sleepy Hollow
Damaso said:

๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

May 4th, 2025 15:29

The Roads Desire Built
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Definitely a gem!

May 4th, 2025 12:41

Sleepy Hollow
orchidee said:

But we have just had a few days of a heatwave here! LOL. That you in that field? Or it could be you-know-who Obi. Heehee.

May 4th, 2025 12:33

Sleepy Hollow
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

May 4th, 2025 09:25

Sleepy Hollow
Salvia.S said:

A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!


May 4th, 2025 08:53

Sleepy Hollow
Thomas W Case said:

Tremendous imagery.

May 4th, 2025 08:45

Sleepy Hollow
Cheeky Missy said:

\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.

May 4th, 2025 08:09

Sleepy Hollow
sorenbarrett said:

The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep carrying on? What is the meaning of life? Such an existential question. Here it is brought to the page in metaphor and with great textual design representing the bowing of the grass (wheat) and the fading into forgottenness. A lovely portrayal of the demise in form and thought. A fave

May 4th, 2025 07:28

Sleepy Hollow
arqios said:

Oh, good old Ichabod Crane- he was a childhood companion as much as Tom and Huck were๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

May 4th, 2025 06:56

A Little Mad
Michael Edwards said:

My family think I\'m a tad eccentric but that\'s not the case - I could even be classed as slightly mad - but in truth I simply retain a streak of childish humour which keeps my brain working looking for the next humerous poem to post here on MPS.

May 4th, 2025 00:56

A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:

As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.

However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)

May 3rd, 2025 21:17

A Little Mad
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

May 3rd, 2025 18:12

A Little Mad
orchidee said:

How come you know my alias name - Mr OWK? Ooh! LOL.

May 3rd, 2025 12:56

A Little Mad
Cheeky Missy said:

Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.

May 3rd, 2025 11:46

A Little Mad
Salvia.S said:

This is deeply honest and movingโ€”captures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.


May 3rd, 2025 09:46

A Little Mad
orchidee said:

Did Norman write this. Good write, Obi, erm, Tristan. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿคฃ

May 3rd, 2025 08:32

A Little Mad
lewisgale mental hospital said:

like Jesus, we must sometimes: show the way (even to ourselves, and not follow any of the ways or mindsets of others around us). but I doubt your poem, though i hear and understand too. perhaps it is a state of mind?

May 3rd, 2025 08:19

Bald Is the New Beautiful
dimpy said:

excellent... pic n obviously your words...

May 3rd, 2025 07:52

i wish i always knew
dimpy said:

nice one...

May 3rd, 2025 07:51

A Little Mad
sorenbarrett said:

Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the time. Freud said that we are either psychotic or neurotic take your pick. After all what is madness anyway just being too much different from the others. And what of when the majority is unloving, uncaring, selfish, depressed does that mean that to be giving, loving, happy is madness? A lovely write Tristan.

May 3rd, 2025 07:44

A Little Mad
arqios said:

Sometimes the madness in me is what others find interesting and adorable, so I pack it away neat and tidy until itโ€™s called for ๐Ÿ•Š๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป

May 3rd, 2025 07:41


The Skull Tumbler Below
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Loved it! It\'s easy to write when an idea floats in on the wings of an angel. But it\'s a big challenge to wrestle back ideas from the devil. You accomplished that with aplomb. Well done ๐Ÿ‘

May 2nd, 2025 12:19

The Skull Tumbler Below
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

May 2nd, 2025 09:52



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