Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dark Alchemy
Salvia.S said:
I absolutely loved this!!!!!!!!!!!! Itβs powerful and haunting. The dark imagery and repetition create such an intense atmosphere. The theme of inversion and inner decay really struck meβitβs brilliant and gave me chills!!!! Very well written dearest Tittu πΉ
A fave for sure!!!!
September 20th, 2025 09:57
Salvia.S said:
I absolutely loved this!!!!!!!!!!!! Itβs powerful and haunting. The dark imagery and repetition create such an intense atmosphere. The theme of inversion and inner decay really struck meβitβs brilliant and gave me chills!!!! Very well written dearest Tittu πΉ
A fave for sure!!!!
September 20th, 2025 09:57
And They Call It Patriotism
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is intense and thought-provoking. The imagery is sharp, and the message about fear, identity, and blind patriotism comes through clearly. It challenges the reader and leaves a strong emotional impression. Well done dearest Tittu πΉ β€οΈ A fave for sure!!!!
September 20th, 2025 09:53
Salvia.S said:
Your poem is intense and thought-provoking. The imagery is sharp, and the message about fear, identity, and blind patriotism comes through clearly. It challenges the reader and leaves a strong emotional impression. Well done dearest Tittu πΉ β€οΈ A fave for sure!!!!
September 20th, 2025 09:53
And They Call It Patriotism
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Let us read it aloud together. RESPECT
September 20th, 2025 09:51
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Let us read it aloud together. RESPECT
September 20th, 2025 09:51
And They Call It Patriotism
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I\'m surprised you haven\'t yet mentioned freedom of speech, and the Jimmy Kimmel story, because it truly shows the America of today, where Trump truly does rule... π’ There is patriotism and there is extremism I truly in my 50 long years never thought I would see this divide so divided. Also in Europe we are having a moment, just the other day the red carpet was rolled out for Trump, we have been putting up with right extremists trite for so long, we don\'t even know how to begin to complain anymore, one rule for us one for them, but Trump owns the channel and takes Kimmel off, ever heard of Silvio Berlusconi? follow the link of David\'s poem, read what I and others have written lol π€£ stay cool dearest Tristan.
September 20th, 2025 09:15
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I\'m surprised you haven\'t yet mentioned freedom of speech, and the Jimmy Kimmel story, because it truly shows the America of today, where Trump truly does rule... π’ There is patriotism and there is extremism I truly in my 50 long years never thought I would see this divide so divided. Also in Europe we are having a moment, just the other day the red carpet was rolled out for Trump, we have been putting up with right extremists trite for so long, we don\'t even know how to begin to complain anymore, one rule for us one for them, but Trump owns the channel and takes Kimmel off, ever heard of Silvio Berlusconi? follow the link of David\'s poem, read what I and others have written lol π€£ stay cool dearest Tristan.
September 20th, 2025 09:15
And They Call It Patriotism
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve had a gin or three. I never got passed the first line - Freedomsh frackedsh by fearsh fomentedsh....
A lot of F\'s anyway! lol. Not now Popeye, have a spare minute, though you do the same thing 23 hrs 59 mins each day Do what? Don\'t answer that! lol ππ
September 20th, 2025 08:41
orchidee said:
Erm, I\'ve had a gin or three. I never got passed the first line - Freedomsh frackedsh by fearsh fomentedsh....
A lot of F\'s anyway! lol. Not now Popeye, have a spare minute, though you do the same thing 23 hrs 59 mins each day Do what? Don\'t answer that! lol ππ
September 20th, 2025 08:41
And They Call It Patriotism
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t get me started on Patriotism, Tristan. Try this contribution (plus comments) for size:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-191148
September 20th, 2025 05:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t get me started on Patriotism, Tristan. Try this contribution (plus comments) for size:
https://mypoeticside.com/show-poem-191148
September 20th, 2025 05:56
And They Call It Patriotism
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration begins this piece without peace. Short and to the point like a bullet it pierces hardened skin and sinks to the heart. Well written my friend and a fave
September 20th, 2025 05:42
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration begins this piece without peace. Short and to the point like a bullet it pierces hardened skin and sinks to the heart. Well written my friend and a fave
September 20th, 2025 05:42
Dark Alchemy
orchidee said:
Bit dark in \'ere. Turn that light on! lol. Or if Popeye\'s in the room - don\'t turn that light on, cos..........don\'t finish that sentence. lol.
September 20th, 2025 02:23
orchidee said:
Bit dark in \'ere. Turn that light on! lol. Or if Popeye\'s in the room - don\'t turn that light on, cos..........don\'t finish that sentence. lol.
September 20th, 2025 02:23
Dark Alchemy
Bella Shepard said:
Deliciously occultish, and when set to music it pulls you into the beat and rhythm, couldn\'t sit still. Loved it!
September 19th, 2025 14:14
Bella Shepard said:
Deliciously occultish, and when set to music it pulls you into the beat and rhythm, couldn\'t sit still. Loved it!
September 19th, 2025 14:14
Dark Alchemy
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my goodness, this is fabulous, dark delicious and harassing in mood. Kudos my dear Tristan.
September 19th, 2025 12:38
Teddy.15 said:
Oh my goodness, this is fabulous, dark delicious and harassing in mood. Kudos my dear Tristan.
September 19th, 2025 12:38
Dark Alchemy
sorenbarrett said:
A great reliance on the occult the use of three as in the three time repetition in stanzas. Nice work my friends. The use of inversions, inverted smiles are frowns. The sign of the inverted cross. A most interesting song
September 19th, 2025 11:03
sorenbarrett said:
A great reliance on the occult the use of three as in the three time repetition in stanzas. Nice work my friends. The use of inversions, inverted smiles are frowns. The sign of the inverted cross. A most interesting song
September 19th, 2025 11:03
To Soak in Reality
Friendship said:
The poem expresses a deep concern for the state of the world, highlighting the destructive consequences of human actions driven by hate, neglect, and environmental degradation. It serves as a warning about the impending self-destruction of the planet if humanity does not change its ways.
September 19th, 2025 06:57
Friendship said:
The poem expresses a deep concern for the state of the world, highlighting the destructive consequences of human actions driven by hate, neglect, and environmental degradation. It serves as a warning about the impending self-destruction of the planet if humanity does not change its ways.
September 19th, 2025 06:57
To Soak in Reality
Keyara S Trotman said:
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September 18th, 2025 21:22
Keyara S Trotman said:
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September 18th, 2025 21:22
To Soak in Reality
Doggerel Dave said:
Still dozing...everywhere \'Defense\' spending is on the rise, while the guy in the White House has reverted the name to \'War\'. May be the most honest thing he has ever said... or may ever say...
Prophetic in 1996, even more pertinent today, Tristan.
September 18th, 2025 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Still dozing...everywhere \'Defense\' spending is on the rise, while the guy in the White House has reverted the name to \'War\'. May be the most honest thing he has ever said... or may ever say...
Prophetic in 1996, even more pertinent today, Tristan.
September 18th, 2025 16:53
To Soak in Reality
orchidee said:
I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even knew Tom & Co then. lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:36
orchidee said:
I not got any poems from 1996. I will post a blank page! lol. I never even knew Tom & Co then. lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:36
Orchi\'s Own
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
To Soak in Reality
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasnβt even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan youβve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasnβt even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan youβve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
To Soak in Reality
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
To Soak in Reality
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. πΉ
September 18th, 2025 10:22
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. πΉ
September 18th, 2025 10:22
To Soak in Reality
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
To Soak in Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
Orchi\'s Own
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
FΓna Elara π Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
Orchi\'s Own
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Hate\'s Finality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragicβ¦the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...βknowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within meβ...really struck me, and that closing vow to βdie unsungβ lingers painfully. Itβs simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragicβ¦the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...βknowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within meβ...really struck me, and that closing vow to βdie unsungβ lingers painfully. Itβs simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. πΉπ€ππ―οΈπ¦ββ¬ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Orchi\'s Own
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Orchi\'s Own
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
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