Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
unexpected snowfall
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
Neville said:
You just draughted the blizzard from hell .. and such a pretty one too .. blindingly brill my friend .. and with no time to prep, it was a pleasure to get caught out in it .. Neville
January 20th, 2025 04:03
unexpected snowfall
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful poem, thoughts
and message, skillfully expressed!!
Brilliantly composed,
poetic awesomeness!!! 🥇
Thank you for sharing 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 19th, 2025 21:43
unexpected snowfall
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
NinjaGirl said:
the snow is the cold blanket offered to the empty world
January 19th, 2025 16:41
unexpected snowfall
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
Cheeky Missy said:
Come, come, take a second look and see the darling flakes all jostling as they descend impetuously, the silence of falling snow very much alive and listening, listening without a voice to break the almost hallowed silence which half seems to beg a reverence even while we trudge in lonely naught to our tasks. [I\'m dreadfully overtired and rambling, please forgive me.]
Exquisite and rendered to effect with a painful poignancy and such delicious imagery. Thank you, thank you for sharing.
January 19th, 2025 09:00
unexpected snowfall
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
Cassie58 said:
How heartfelt is this poem Tristen. The silence and coldness felt amid the crystal beauty.
Snowflakes are so delicate yet the mood in this poem hangs heavy. Have a wonderful Sunday.
January 19th, 2025 08:13
unexpected snowfall
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
Once again the format enhances the feel of falling snow and its blanketing of the ground as it piles higher. The metaphor works well and the feeling of being abandoned and isolated in the masses is clear to me. Snow is deafening in its silence.
January 19th, 2025 08:00
riverbeds
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message
on the subject of
suicide prevention,
loved the AN if anyone
in need of help!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:39
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A powerful poem,
thoughts and message
on the subject of
suicide prevention,
loved the AN if anyone
in need of help!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 18th, 2025 22:39
riverbeds
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
Mutley Ravishes said:
A cry for help
I hurt myself
Am I this way
Because I’m ready to break
Out of the cage ?
Haunting writing and imagery, Tristan.
January 18th, 2025 19:00
riverbeds
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
arqios said:
Rivulets like the branches of veins, nerves and arteries… a fitting image; quite powerful. My choice back then was a more noose type affair… but I’ve since walked away from that, although there are days when the option presents itself in passing. Your courage registers clearly. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 18th, 2025 14:56
riverbeds
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
NinjaGirl said:
I never would have thought to use a dry riverbed for symbolism! I absolutely love that idea, the flowing of blood and the scars like the cracked soil. I seriously love this poem.
January 18th, 2025 14:14
riverbeds
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
isa kemmy said:
excellent write , i like it, sometimes we go through this .
January 18th, 2025 13:07
riverbeds
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
Neville said:
Quite possibly the single most important public service announcement in poetic form that I have ever come across .. indeed, I know for a fact that self harm in any and all of its many forms is a huge global issue because I encounter it almost every day .. Neville
January 18th, 2025 13:01
riverbeds
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting format Tristan and it appears to be a dried river bed. A great message and much needed
January 18th, 2025 11:20
Passion\'s Paradox
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
Two thumbs up
a sexSational poem!! 😍
SensualSational imagery too
I must say!!👌
Great use of that form
just blew me away!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 17th, 2025 21:00
Passion\'s Paradox
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
NinjaGirl said:
Dark and haunting I find commitment scarce.. it\'s much easier to have a sex partner than it is to have a \"let\'s tackle life together\" partner
January 17th, 2025 19:11
Passion\'s Paradox
arqios said:
Even here there is a divide like gulfs that clash but never consummate, so near and yet so far! Brillig 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 17th, 2025 18:18
arqios said:
Even here there is a divide like gulfs that clash but never consummate, so near and yet so far! Brillig 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 17th, 2025 18:18
Passion\'s Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
Passion\'s Paradox
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
Passion\'s Paradox
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
The House at Demon\'s Alley
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
The House at Demon\'s Alley
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
The Sound of Rain
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
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