Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Non-Event Horizon
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
Terzenelle of Turmoil
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
Terzenelle of Turmoil
Rin the Magnificent said:
Masterfully written, Tristan!
November 2nd, 2024 00:33
Rin the Magnificent said:
Masterfully written, Tristan!
November 2nd, 2024 00:33
Terzenelle of Turmoil
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem ,cause i can relate to it i feel my life sometimes is like the poem, i fuck up,i watch my dreams flush away then.....its a big star to the writer ,
November 1st, 2024 11:41
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem ,cause i can relate to it i feel my life sometimes is like the poem, i fuck up,i watch my dreams flush away then.....its a big star to the writer ,
November 1st, 2024 11:41
Exclusion
Dan Williams said:
I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get you excluded but sometimes that is a good thing. Excluded from the mass rudeness and stupidity I encounter every day, eh?
October 31st, 2024 23:55
Dan Williams said:
I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get you excluded but sometimes that is a good thing. Excluded from the mass rudeness and stupidity I encounter every day, eh?
October 31st, 2024 23:55
Exclusion
NinjaGirl said:
Isn\'t it so interesting to be thought of as weird, just because they don\'t understand us? Our health defining our social status? Our reactions showing our worth? Beautiful work, relatable by many I\'m sure.
October 31st, 2024 22:55
NinjaGirl said:
Isn\'t it so interesting to be thought of as weird, just because they don\'t understand us? Our health defining our social status? Our reactions showing our worth? Beautiful work, relatable by many I\'m sure.
October 31st, 2024 22:55
Exclusion
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. Isolation isn\'t fun nor what most of us desired but it\'s our lot and we must figure out how to exist within its parameters. Excellently rendered with a seeming refrain which is forever useful in driving home whichever point. Thank you for sharing.
October 31st, 2024 09:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. Isolation isn\'t fun nor what most of us desired but it\'s our lot and we must figure out how to exist within its parameters. Excellently rendered with a seeming refrain which is forever useful in driving home whichever point. Thank you for sharing.
October 31st, 2024 09:42
Exclusion
sorenbarrett said:
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others think be you. A poem of an existential nature. We all have our demons to fight and I know that many have fewer and lessor that cause less exclusion and less loneliness. A great write that captures the heart of all that are different and that\'s all of us.
October 31st, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others think be you. A poem of an existential nature. We all have our demons to fight and I know that many have fewer and lessor that cause less exclusion and less loneliness. A great write that captures the heart of all that are different and that\'s all of us.
October 31st, 2024 09:35
Corridors of Decaying Dreams
Neville said:
Excellent wordsmithing my friend and just ripe for Halloween .. 🎃🦇🦇👻🎃🦇🦇
October 30th, 2024 09:28
Neville said:
Excellent wordsmithing my friend and just ripe for Halloween .. 🎃🦇🦇👻🎃🦇🦇
October 30th, 2024 09:28
Corridors of Decaying Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky story told. This was a pleasure to read
October 30th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky story told. This was a pleasure to read
October 30th, 2024 04:41
Corridors of Decaying Dreams
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a super write.
October 30th, 2024 02:19
Michael Edwards said:
A great form and a super write.
October 30th, 2024 02:19
The Invisible
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation felt more by some than others. Humans are social animals and we all feel lonliness from time to time but always would be very depressing and anger provoking. Ignored one of the worst punishments. A sad and powerful poem
October 29th, 2024 12:18
sorenbarrett said:
Isolation felt more by some than others. Humans are social animals and we all feel lonliness from time to time but always would be very depressing and anger provoking. Ignored one of the worst punishments. A sad and powerful poem
October 29th, 2024 12:18
The Invisible
orchidee said:
A spot of dark humour from me - eh? where\'s this poem; can\'t see it; it\'s invisible! heehee.
Hope I\'ve not put my big foot in it. I\'ve been known to make crass comments occasionally, which could be taken as insensitive.
Bit like - I phoned the Samaritans but they were engaged! An awful joke there.
October 29th, 2024 11:31
orchidee said:
A spot of dark humour from me - eh? where\'s this poem; can\'t see it; it\'s invisible! heehee.
Hope I\'ve not put my big foot in it. I\'ve been known to make crass comments occasionally, which could be taken as insensitive.
Bit like - I phoned the Samaritans but they were engaged! An awful joke there.
October 29th, 2024 11:31
Soul Ascendant
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and message indeed! 👍
Last stanza says it all!! ⭐
Thanks for sharing,
my pleasure to read,!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 28th, 2024 15:20
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful poem,
thoughts and message indeed! 👍
Last stanza says it all!! ⭐
Thanks for sharing,
my pleasure to read,!!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
October 28th, 2024 15:20
Soul Ascendant
sorenbarrett said:
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign of humility and the starting place for change and openness to improvement. Said in a most lovely way
October 28th, 2024 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
The recognition of strength in another and one\'s own weakness\' is a sign of humility and the starting place for change and openness to improvement. Said in a most lovely way
October 28th, 2024 09:55
Nothing
sorenbarrett said:
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be taken a number of ways the first that came to mind was poetry itself is just a series of lines not really anything. Words that are empty to some have great meaning to others. (There\'s more than nothing) Second we are all alone and all else is nothing but our illusions. Lonely alone yet (there\'s more than nothing) I have a poem on the drawing board with this theme as well and progresses oh so slow it is hard to write about nothing yet you have. This poem deserves more reads my friend.
October 28th, 2024 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
So true at face vallue and underneath lies a deeper meaning. It may be taken a number of ways the first that came to mind was poetry itself is just a series of lines not really anything. Words that are empty to some have great meaning to others. (There\'s more than nothing) Second we are all alone and all else is nothing but our illusions. Lonely alone yet (there\'s more than nothing) I have a poem on the drawing board with this theme as well and progresses oh so slow it is hard to write about nothing yet you have. This poem deserves more reads my friend.
October 28th, 2024 08:42
Osseous Oubliette
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
October 26th, 2024 17:49
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting inside view. Meditation from the inside out. Lovely
October 26th, 2024 17:49
Color Captivation
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? Are you very certain the unknown voices called out to you to take you from the party? How very lovely and excellently rendered with captivating imagery and a frightening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 16:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh? Are you very certain the unknown voices called out to you to take you from the party? How very lovely and excellently rendered with captivating imagery and a frightening poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
October 25th, 2024 16:33
Color Captivation
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull poetic write
October 25th, 2024 14:06
sorenbarrett said:
Such a great start to the revelation of the autum tree. A lovely colorfull poetic write
October 25th, 2024 14:06
avalanche
arqios said:
As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and should be tended to with great care!
October 24th, 2024 20:40
arqios said:
As scary as it can get, our inner mental/emotional state is precious and should be tended to with great care!
October 24th, 2024 20:40
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