Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Sleepy Hollow
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Salvia.S said:
A haunting and beautifully written poem that captures the cycle of life and death in nature with vivid imagery and emotional depth. Well written!!!!
May 4th, 2025 08:53
Sleepy Hollow
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...vanity of vanities, saith the Preacher, vanity of vanities; all is vanity.\" (Ecc 1:2) And whom but the poets to echo that while man seems to chase his tail madly, deluded by dreams of grandeur which eventually leave him chagrined. Excellently rendered with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy.
May 4th, 2025 08:09
Sleepy Hollow
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep carrying on? What is the meaning of life? Such an existential question. Here it is brought to the page in metaphor and with great textual design representing the bowing of the grass (wheat) and the fading into forgottenness. A lovely portrayal of the demise in form and thought. A fave
May 4th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life seen through other glasses. Futility, why just keep carrying on? What is the meaning of life? Such an existential question. Here it is brought to the page in metaphor and with great textual design representing the bowing of the grass (wheat) and the fading into forgottenness. A lovely portrayal of the demise in form and thought. A fave
May 4th, 2025 07:28
Sleepy Hollow
arqios said:
Oh, good old Ichabod Crane- he was a childhood companion as much as Tom and Huck were๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 4th, 2025 06:56
arqios said:
Oh, good old Ichabod Crane- he was a childhood companion as much as Tom and Huck were๐๐ป๐๏ธ
May 4th, 2025 06:56
A Little Mad
Michael Edwards said:
My family think I\'m a tad eccentric but that\'s not the case - I could even be classed as slightly mad - but in truth I simply retain a streak of childish humour which keeps my brain working looking for the next humerous poem to post here on MPS.
May 4th, 2025 00:56
Michael Edwards said:
My family think I\'m a tad eccentric but that\'s not the case - I could even be classed as slightly mad - but in truth I simply retain a streak of childish humour which keeps my brain working looking for the next humerous poem to post here on MPS.
May 4th, 2025 00:56
A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
Doggerel Dave said:
As per (most of) the conversation above, madness is a relative concept. And you have nailed it nicely Tristan.
However let\'s not forget the deeply psychotic for whom madness is a disabling curse. (Not you - otherwise you would be incapable of your lines here.)
May 3rd, 2025 21:17
A Little Mad
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
Cheeky Missy said:
Not me. I\'m just a little crazy all the time, and that\'s just me, my personality. It is indeed a cruel world, and bullies will target you in lieu of their victims if you stand in their way, but, that\'s just the way it goes. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy indeed! Thank you for sharing.
May 3rd, 2025 11:46
A Little Mad
Salvia.S said:
This is deeply honest and movingโcaptures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
Salvia.S said:
This is deeply honest and movingโcaptures the quiet pain of daily survival with sharp clarity.
May 3rd, 2025 09:46
A Little Mad
orchidee said:
Did Norman write this. Good write, Obi, erm, Tristan. ๐๐คฃ
May 3rd, 2025 08:32
orchidee said:
Did Norman write this. Good write, Obi, erm, Tristan. ๐๐คฃ
May 3rd, 2025 08:32
A Little Mad
lewisgale mental hospital said:
like Jesus, we must sometimes: show the way (even to ourselves, and not follow any of the ways or mindsets of others around us). but I doubt your poem, though i hear and understand too. perhaps it is a state of mind?
May 3rd, 2025 08:19
lewisgale mental hospital said:
like Jesus, we must sometimes: show the way (even to ourselves, and not follow any of the ways or mindsets of others around us). but I doubt your poem, though i hear and understand too. perhaps it is a state of mind?
May 3rd, 2025 08:19
A Little Mad
sorenbarrett said:
Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the time. Freud said that we are either psychotic or neurotic take your pick. After all what is madness anyway just being too much different from the others. And what of when the majority is unloving, uncaring, selfish, depressed does that mean that to be giving, loving, happy is madness? A lovely write Tristan.
May 3rd, 2025 07:44
sorenbarrett said:
Madness a matter of degree, yes we all are a little mad most all of the time. Freud said that we are either psychotic or neurotic take your pick. After all what is madness anyway just being too much different from the others. And what of when the majority is unloving, uncaring, selfish, depressed does that mean that to be giving, loving, happy is madness? A lovely write Tristan.
May 3rd, 2025 07:44
A Little Mad
arqios said:
Sometimes the madness in me is what others find interesting and adorable, so I pack it away neat and tidy until itโs called for ๐๐๐ป
May 3rd, 2025 07:41
arqios said:
Sometimes the madness in me is what others find interesting and adorable, so I pack it away neat and tidy until itโs called for ๐๐๐ป
May 3rd, 2025 07:41
The Skull Tumbler Below
โโฑ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑโฑโ said:
reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe!
May 2nd, 2025 14:50
โโฑ๐ฑ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑโฑโ said:
reminds me of Edgar Allan Poe!
May 2nd, 2025 14:50
The Skull Tumbler Below
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it! It\'s easy to write when an idea floats in on the wings of an angel. But it\'s a big challenge to wrestle back ideas from the devil. You accomplished that with aplomb. Well done ๐
May 2nd, 2025 12:19
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Loved it! It\'s easy to write when an idea floats in on the wings of an angel. But it\'s a big challenge to wrestle back ideas from the devil. You accomplished that with aplomb. Well done ๐
May 2nd, 2025 12:19
The Skull Tumbler Below
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan you found something to write about and any season can be one of fright. A fun read my friend
May 2nd, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan you found something to write about and any season can be one of fright. A fun read my friend
May 2nd, 2025 09:46
The Skull Tumbler Below
Cheeky Missy said:
Miss you dreadfully cuz you\'re never absent, and what do you do?! Dredge lines from the refuse of damnation, polish it off like a happy child [like me in grade school when we moved to the Colorado prairies and I first discovered an actual junk yard....oh the junk I brought home like from a ghastly treasure chest, and which my loving mother accepted!], pleased as punch with your prize. Well, well, well. Where I\'ll actually refuse to write until after sunrise, you\'ll eagerly howl at the moon at the witching hour. La dee. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly, macabre poignancy. Thank you for sharing, I\'ve missed you, Tristan.
May 2nd, 2025 08:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Miss you dreadfully cuz you\'re never absent, and what do you do?! Dredge lines from the refuse of damnation, polish it off like a happy child [like me in grade school when we moved to the Colorado prairies and I first discovered an actual junk yard....oh the junk I brought home like from a ghastly treasure chest, and which my loving mother accepted!], pleased as punch with your prize. Well, well, well. Where I\'ll actually refuse to write until after sunrise, you\'ll eagerly howl at the moon at the witching hour. La dee. Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a ghastly, macabre poignancy. Thank you for sharing, I\'ve missed you, Tristan.
May 2nd, 2025 08:43
The Skull Tumbler Below
arqios said:
Not a block nor an impediment but a setback momentary or otherwiseโฆ. Which in and of itself is also a subject matter that may be written about in various ways. Love it๐๐๐ป
May 2nd, 2025 08:40
arqios said:
Not a block nor an impediment but a setback momentary or otherwiseโฆ. Which in and of itself is also a subject matter that may be written about in various ways. Love it๐๐๐ป
May 2nd, 2025 08:40
The Skull Tumbler Below
Salvia.S said:
Really cool poem! I like the spooky feel and how it shows that even scary moments can spark creativity.
May 2nd, 2025 08:36
Salvia.S said:
Really cool poem! I like the spooky feel and how it shows that even scary moments can spark creativity.
May 2nd, 2025 08:36
murder
Tony Grannell said:
This is so well written, I was engrossed from start to finish. This is nature as it truly is; fierce, ugly and unapologetic as a murder of crows go about their daily business. Well done Tristan. Excellent and then some.
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 12:04
Tony Grannell said:
This is so well written, I was engrossed from start to finish. This is nature as it truly is; fierce, ugly and unapologetic as a murder of crows go about their daily business. Well done Tristan. Excellent and then some.
All the best,
Tony.
May 1st, 2025 12:04
Tail Between My Dreams
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, these days where it\'s trendy to divorce, what a winner this heartbreaking number is in the field of castoffs. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a wrenching poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 15:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, these days where it\'s trendy to divorce, what a winner this heartbreaking number is in the field of castoffs. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and a wrenching poignancy, thank you so very much for sharing.
April 30th, 2025 15:54
murder
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Grizzly for certain. A well written piece!
April 30th, 2025 12:00
GenXer Shamrocker โ๏ธ said:
Grizzly for certain. A well written piece!
April 30th, 2025 12:00
murder
Muse of Calliope said:
Vivid Edgar Allen Poe- esque description; quite chilling! โ ๏ธ ๐ฅ ๐ฅ
April 30th, 2025 11:08
Muse of Calliope said:
Vivid Edgar Allen Poe- esque description; quite chilling! โ ๏ธ ๐ฅ ๐ฅ
April 30th, 2025 11:08
murder
orchidee said:
That person has been waiting too long at the bus stop. Someone should have told him/her they changed the route 500 years ago! lol.
April 30th, 2025 09:36
orchidee said:
That person has been waiting too long at the bus stop. Someone should have told him/her they changed the route 500 years ago! lol.
April 30th, 2025 09:36
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