Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Hello World
sorenbarrett said:
A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a message of defiance and anger. Very nice. It must have been a lot of work
September 26th, 2024 13:12
sorenbarrett said:
A very compplex write in structure rhyme scheme and message. It delivers a message of defiance and anger. Very nice. It must have been a lot of work
September 26th, 2024 13:12
Away From You
orchidee said:
Now why you disagreeing with me? I am he who must be obeyed! lol.
September 21st, 2024 10:23
orchidee said:
Now why you disagreeing with me? I am he who must be obeyed! lol.
September 21st, 2024 10:23
Pocket Publish
orchidee said:
Or similarly - someone comes knocking at your front door just as you\'ve got in the bath or shower! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:20
orchidee said:
Or similarly - someone comes knocking at your front door just as you\'ve got in the bath or shower! lol.
September 20th, 2024 14:20
Broken
sorenbarrett said:
Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the cost of repairing it is not worth the money or effort. And I always wonder why I keep those things. I got the message and have felt that way myself many times afeeling of loss that goes deeper than the object itself.
September 16th, 2024 09:02
sorenbarrett said:
Broken does not necessarily mean not able to be repaired its just that the cost of repairing it is not worth the money or effort. And I always wonder why I keep those things. I got the message and have felt that way myself many times afeeling of loss that goes deeper than the object itself.
September 16th, 2024 09:02
Broken
orchidee said:
Doh! Now why did I not obey: \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it\'. It\'s broke now! heehee.
We\'re \'broken\' in a bereavement here though.
September 16th, 2024 08:38
orchidee said:
Doh! Now why did I not obey: \'If it ain\'t broke, don\'t fix it\'. It\'s broke now! heehee.
We\'re \'broken\' in a bereavement here though.
September 16th, 2024 08:38
The Stare
Doggerel Dave said:
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then discretion would suggest a retreat to another venue. I know.........
A very real and truthful write.
September 11th, 2024 20:34
Doggerel Dave said:
Unease isn\'t the half of it. If a return stare doesn\'t fix, then discretion would suggest a retreat to another venue. I know.........
A very real and truthful write.
September 11th, 2024 20:34
The Stare
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! Yous been taken prisoner without any grand disruption of the situation nor uproar, simply taken captive.
Excellent details with a haunting poignancy, beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:28
Cheeky Missy said:
Yikes! Yous been taken prisoner without any grand disruption of the situation nor uproar, simply taken captive.
Excellent details with a haunting poignancy, beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2024 08:28
Visions of Death
orchidee said:
I wish I would stop eating [poisonous] apple pips. Doh! (heehee).
Note to self: Noooo, Orchi, don\'t eat the apple AND the pips!
September 8th, 2024 11:45
orchidee said:
I wish I would stop eating [poisonous] apple pips. Doh! (heehee).
Note to self: Noooo, Orchi, don\'t eat the apple AND the pips!
September 8th, 2024 11:45
Visions of Death
aDarkerMind said:
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening line
and kept me there throughout.
one to fave for sure.
September 8th, 2024 11:12
aDarkerMind said:
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening line
and kept me there throughout.
one to fave for sure.
September 8th, 2024 11:12
Those Who Lie In Wait
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
The Tempest\'s Strike
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
The Tempest\'s Strike
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
The Tempest\'s Strike
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
The Sullen Swimmer
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
The Sullen Swimmer
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
The Sullen Swimmer
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
To Sophie
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
To Sophie
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
The Endless Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
The Endless Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
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