Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dark Age Descended
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute: To the richness of the history, about which I know nothing; the validity of our earthbound situation as depicted here, the form and the prose with which it is defined.
That form itself is something to behold, and as I struggle to publish my simple verse, I shall be forever intimidated by thoughts of your monumental effort, Tristan. 🥹
February 25th, 2025 18:46
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute: To the richness of the history, about which I know nothing; the validity of our earthbound situation as depicted here, the form and the prose with which it is defined.
That form itself is something to behold, and as I struggle to publish my simple verse, I shall be forever intimidated by thoughts of your monumental effort, Tristan. 🥹
February 25th, 2025 18:46
Dark Age Descended
NinjaGirl said:
The shape is beautiful, I can tell a lot of time was put into this and it was worth it! Wonderful writing as well.
February 25th, 2025 13:02
NinjaGirl said:
The shape is beautiful, I can tell a lot of time was put into this and it was worth it! Wonderful writing as well.
February 25th, 2025 13:02
Dark Age Descended
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some piece of writing, knowledge has always been power, that\'s why they like to keep us minions in the dark. If we had more knowledge we would challenge that power. Regarding history it astonishes me how little some people know of the worlds history and the actual facts, if we do not acknowledge our history and learn from it, we can never make progress, a really great read
February 25th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some piece of writing, knowledge has always been power, that\'s why they like to keep us minions in the dark. If we had more knowledge we would challenge that power. Regarding history it astonishes me how little some people know of the worlds history and the actual facts, if we do not acknowledge our history and learn from it, we can never make progress, a really great read
February 25th, 2025 09:51
Dark Age Descended
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem pulled me along through this universe of history that I had learned long ago one of many human tragedies that have held us back where we are. A sad commentary on what one man values another sees as not just trash but evil. A wonderful write my friend.
February 25th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem pulled me along through this universe of history that I had learned long ago one of many human tragedies that have held us back where we are. A sad commentary on what one man values another sees as not just trash but evil. A wonderful write my friend.
February 25th, 2025 08:53
Pontiac
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Tristan. I guess there\'s always two sides to a coin - oppression on one side, and (relative) freedom on the other.
February 24th, 2025 18:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Tristan. I guess there\'s always two sides to a coin - oppression on one side, and (relative) freedom on the other.
February 24th, 2025 18:47
Pontiac
Poetic Licence said:
The native American Indian history is something i have a great interest in, so I am delighted to see someone giving a nod there way and touching lightly on the way they were and are being treated , Loved the read
February 24th, 2025 11:51
Poetic Licence said:
The native American Indian history is something i have a great interest in, so I am delighted to see someone giving a nod there way and touching lightly on the way they were and are being treated , Loved the read
February 24th, 2025 11:51
Pontiac
sorenbarrett said:
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on Native American history. It has been a long time since I have written about this. Cars well I have to leave that up to my little brother that built funny cars. He had so many tickets that any pocket of his one could be found. A most unique write where lines were woven like an Indian blanket. This must have taken a good deal of time and effort. Lovely and a definite fav
February 24th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on Native American history. It has been a long time since I have written about this. Cars well I have to leave that up to my little brother that built funny cars. He had so many tickets that any pocket of his one could be found. A most unique write where lines were woven like an Indian blanket. This must have taken a good deal of time and effort. Lovely and a definite fav
February 24th, 2025 11:06
Dunk Tank
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is possible to over-like the sentiment contained herein .. or to dislike and disapprove of the moron that clearly inspired it more than I do .. Neville 🐝👍
February 24th, 2025 03:46
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is possible to over-like the sentiment contained herein .. or to dislike and disapprove of the moron that clearly inspired it more than I do .. Neville 🐝👍
February 24th, 2025 03:46
Dunk Tank
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if you\'ve seen this, but if not it\'s worth the watch! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wiyGScJ7iWQ&pp=ygUUYSBwbGFjZSBmb3IgdHJ1bXAgYWQ%3D
February 23rd, 2025 15:27
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if you\'ve seen this, but if not it\'s worth the watch! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wiyGScJ7iWQ&pp=ygUUYSBwbGFjZSBmb3IgdHJ1bXAgYWQ%3D
February 23rd, 2025 15:27
Dunk Tank
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the Sunday chuckle, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
Thank you for the Sunday chuckle, enjoyed the read
February 23rd, 2025 12:23
Dunk Tank
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write. I wonder how much money could be made with this? Maybe enough to pay off the National debt.
February 23rd, 2025 08:11
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write. I wonder how much money could be made with this? Maybe enough to pay off the National debt.
February 23rd, 2025 08:11
Dunk Tank
arqios said:
Good dunk there! Love the twist to poetic expression 🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 07:26
arqios said:
Good dunk there! Love the twist to poetic expression 🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 07:26
Deep Freeze Daze
arqios said:
If there’s zen, then it will be contained, otherwise anxiety attacks are imminent…🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 03:00
arqios said:
If there’s zen, then it will be contained, otherwise anxiety attacks are imminent…🙏🏻🕊
February 23rd, 2025 03:00
Deep Freeze Daze
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
Poetic Licence said:
Very nicely written with an easy going flow as you read it, very enjoyable
February 22nd, 2025 13:38
Deep Freeze Daze
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 11:53
sorenbarrett said:
I liked this one very much Tristan the rhyme the flow and the message all came together. Very nice
February 22nd, 2025 11:53
Deep Freeze Daze
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of \'em! lol.
February 22nd, 2025 10:22
orchidee said:
A fine write T. I gotta reduce these syllables in my poems - or maybe waffle on and use more of \'em! lol.
February 22nd, 2025 10:22
The Cult
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Evil\" is working overtime to wake us up. In that sense you gotta admire it! If only folks showed as much dedication to the cause as it does!
February 21st, 2025 20:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
\"Evil\" is working overtime to wake us up. In that sense you gotta admire it! If only folks showed as much dedication to the cause as it does!
February 21st, 2025 20:03
The Cult
Cassie58 said:
I came back to read again. An additional note. It ‘s an acrostic poem.
Long Live The King
Couldn’t edit my earlier comment.
February 21st, 2025 12:52
Cassie58 said:
I came back to read again. An additional note. It ‘s an acrostic poem.
Long Live The King
Couldn’t edit my earlier comment.
February 21st, 2025 12:52
« Return to the profile of Tristan Robert Lange
