Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Springtime Silence
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, having more or less damned dearest Chloe with an exposé of her previous exploits, who could have dreamed she\'d join her victims?! I\'m so very sorry you\'ve lost her. This gorgeous first piece in a series of three so very dark in its implications, I never thought--. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Alas, having more or less damned dearest Chloe with an exposé of her previous exploits, who could have dreamed she\'d join her victims?! I\'m so very sorry you\'ve lost her. This gorgeous first piece in a series of three so very dark in its implications, I never thought--. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a painfully haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:53
Gospel off the Serpent\'s Tongue
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a riot. If only...Frank Peretti, that\'s who you remind me of, yes. La dee, a verbal tour de force of the darker side of protestantism and who will enter may hug their coats to themselves. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:48
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'re a riot. If only...Frank Peretti, that\'s who you remind me of, yes. La dee, a verbal tour de force of the darker side of protestantism and who will enter may hug their coats to themselves. Gorgeously rendered with superb imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
May 28th, 2025 10:48
Gospel off the Serpent\'s Tongue
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly I am sorry to hear your sad news, I hope it was a peaceful departure. I am starting to think you might have direct access to someone in hell!!!, this is a complicated and deep write, with a few ways to interpret the wonderful writing, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 10:29
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly I am sorry to hear your sad news, I hope it was a peaceful departure. I am starting to think you might have direct access to someone in hell!!!, this is a complicated and deep write, with a few ways to interpret the wonderful writing, enjoyed the read
May 28th, 2025 10:29
Gospel off the Serpent\'s Tongue
sorenbarrett said:
Ah this time you have gone metaphoric on steroids. Well done Tristan
May 28th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
Ah this time you have gone metaphoric on steroids. Well done Tristan
May 28th, 2025 10:13
Chloe
orchidee said:
RIP Chloe. Similar to me, when one of our guinea pigs got elderly and poorly, in my poem \'Goodbye little friend\'.
May 28th, 2025 08:50
orchidee said:
RIP Chloe. Similar to me, when one of our guinea pigs got elderly and poorly, in my poem \'Goodbye little friend\'.
May 28th, 2025 08:50
Mother
teardrop said:
Out of any person in a lifetime it seems we all seek the approval of our mothers. You, like I just happen to be one of those deep emotional thinkers. I think it is a good thing yet, at times for me, can be a curse. I love reading your thoughts,
May 28th, 2025 03:42
teardrop said:
Out of any person in a lifetime it seems we all seek the approval of our mothers. You, like I just happen to be one of those deep emotional thinkers. I think it is a good thing yet, at times for me, can be a curse. I love reading your thoughts,
May 28th, 2025 03:42
Nigrum Pactum
NafisaSB said:
this calls for a lot of deep thought - very interesting read - can almost visualize the black goat..
May 28th, 2025 02:48
NafisaSB said:
this calls for a lot of deep thought - very interesting read - can almost visualize the black goat..
May 28th, 2025 02:48
The Birthing Fuck
Doggerel Dave said:
If It were always as complicated as that, It might save many unnecessary births!!
Rich imagery which brings perspiration to me brow.
May 27th, 2025 16:20
Doggerel Dave said:
If It were always as complicated as that, It might save many unnecessary births!!
Rich imagery which brings perspiration to me brow.
May 27th, 2025 16:20
The Birthing Fuck
Poetic Licence said:
This sounds like one hell of a disturbing trip, not that I have been there, of course, loved the word play, wow bring me down
May 27th, 2025 13:00
Poetic Licence said:
This sounds like one hell of a disturbing trip, not that I have been there, of course, loved the word play, wow bring me down
May 27th, 2025 13:00
The Birthing Fuck
sorenbarrett said:
Screwed on hallucinogens what a trip. Enjoyed you word play very cunning for a linguist. As for the snake I was suspicious of why snuck unto the garden. What a trip!
May 27th, 2025 10:34
sorenbarrett said:
Screwed on hallucinogens what a trip. Enjoyed you word play very cunning for a linguist. As for the snake I was suspicious of why snuck unto the garden. What a trip!
May 27th, 2025 10:34
The Birthing Fuck
orchidee said:
Erm, some ones seem to be having fun! Are they related to Obi and Popeye? (don\'t answer that! lol.)
May 27th, 2025 10:12
orchidee said:
Erm, some ones seem to be having fun! Are they related to Obi and Popeye? (don\'t answer that! lol.)
May 27th, 2025 10:12
Springtime Silence Stirs
Teddy.15 said:
And in the norm of day we find such reflections to write. Wonderful. 🌹
May 26th, 2025 16:35
Teddy.15 said:
And in the norm of day we find such reflections to write. Wonderful. 🌹
May 26th, 2025 16:35
Nigrum Pactum
orchidee said:
Me again - ooh!
I\'m not keen on \'dark\' genre poems myself, or at least I\'m not keen on writing in that genre. Not that I\'m \'holier than thou\' or \'super-spiritual\' but I start to feel uneasy or even a bit unwell if I dwell on \'dark\' things too much.
I suspect the devil is some beautiful being, though his is the kingdom of darkness. If he was ugly, we wouldn\'t be drawn to him but would run from him.
May 25th, 2025 09:54
orchidee said:
Me again - ooh!
I\'m not keen on \'dark\' genre poems myself, or at least I\'m not keen on writing in that genre. Not that I\'m \'holier than thou\' or \'super-spiritual\' but I start to feel uneasy or even a bit unwell if I dwell on \'dark\' things too much.
I suspect the devil is some beautiful being, though his is the kingdom of darkness. If he was ugly, we wouldn\'t be drawn to him but would run from him.
May 25th, 2025 09:54
Nigrum Pactum
orchidee said:
Ohh, it\'s only a relative of Darth Vader - or Obi! heehee.
Ahh, and a bit of French there - Nigrum wotsit. lol.
May 25th, 2025 09:38
orchidee said:
Ohh, it\'s only a relative of Darth Vader - or Obi! heehee.
Ahh, and a bit of French there - Nigrum wotsit. lol.
May 25th, 2025 09:38
Nigrum Pactum
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly welcome back hope all is well now and you have clearly been busy. A dark, satanic and incredibly deep read, this has alot to digest and for me needs many readings, I think you say back with a bang, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly welcome back hope all is well now and you have clearly been busy. A dark, satanic and incredibly deep read, this has alot to digest and for me needs many readings, I think you say back with a bang, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 09:32
Nigrum Pactum
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem is highly complex in structure and meaning. I love the most artistic forms used in its lettering and flow they add a great deal of interest. The forward and backward reading is quite mystic and satanic as is the embedded which is common as a secretive form of magic meaning. Very nicely written
May 25th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem is highly complex in structure and meaning. I love the most artistic forms used in its lettering and flow they add a great deal of interest. The forward and backward reading is quite mystic and satanic as is the embedded which is common as a secretive form of magic meaning. Very nicely written
May 25th, 2025 08:21
Scars Like Fathers
Isabella Morgan said:
I very much like how this is written and how it is expressed that they only matured to be as bad as the adults that led them there. An excellent read!
May 20th, 2025 09:35
Isabella Morgan said:
I very much like how this is written and how it is expressed that they only matured to be as bad as the adults that led them there. An excellent read!
May 20th, 2025 09:35
Springtime Silence Stirs
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember Joseph Campbell saying one of Life\'s first commands is to feed on itself. The beauty of nature, and the horror!
May 16th, 2025 22:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember Joseph Campbell saying one of Life\'s first commands is to feed on itself. The beauty of nature, and the horror!
May 16th, 2025 22:52
Springtime Silence Stirs
sorenbarrett said:
A sequel and then a trilogy it is difficult to defeat trauma. Another good write Tristan
May 16th, 2025 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A sequel and then a trilogy it is difficult to defeat trauma. Another good write Tristan
May 16th, 2025 11:08
Springtime Silence Stirs
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the write, wishing you well on your journey to recovery, take care
May 16th, 2025 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the write, wishing you well on your journey to recovery, take care
May 16th, 2025 10:47
Springtime Silence Stirs
orchidee said:
Erm, don\'t reply at length to this - Good write Popeye (?), erm Tristan! From Ken - I forget my surname. 😁
May 16th, 2025 10:10
orchidee said:
Erm, don\'t reply at length to this - Good write Popeye (?), erm Tristan! From Ken - I forget my surname. 😁
May 16th, 2025 10:10
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