Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Friendship said:
The poet speaks to the human experience of pain and the journey toward restoration through truth and creativity. It touches on the importance of vulnerability in the face of societal expectations and the liberation that comes from being open about one\'s struggles.
August 17th, 2025 13:32
Friendship said:
The poet speaks to the human experience of pain and the journey toward restoration through truth and creativity. It touches on the importance of vulnerability in the face of societal expectations and the liberation that comes from being open about one\'s struggles.
August 17th, 2025 13:32
The Open Door
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To paraphrase, The Three Musketeers - \'all for love and love for all\', in the light of whatever one\'s beliefs, where there is love there is deliverance and come that day, cometh the Man. This poem of yours is a wonder, so , too, wonderful. Accolades galore, once again.
Do take care now, you hear,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:39
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
To paraphrase, The Three Musketeers - \'all for love and love for all\', in the light of whatever one\'s beliefs, where there is love there is deliverance and come that day, cometh the Man. This poem of yours is a wonder, so , too, wonderful. Accolades galore, once again.
Do take care now, you hear,
Tony.
August 17th, 2025 12:39
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Neville said:
Now ya talkin kiddo .. we call that a wrap around these here ports .. I love the concept of eternal nowism .. we just gotta form that bloomin cult bro .. šš¦āā¬šāā¬āš
August 17th, 2025 11:56
Neville said:
Now ya talkin kiddo .. we call that a wrap around these here ports .. I love the concept of eternal nowism .. we just gotta form that bloomin cult bro .. šš¦āā¬šāā¬āš
August 17th, 2025 11:56
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
orchidee said:
Good write T. All I know is, Popeye continued and continues yesterday, today, and tomorrow, for ever. Continues what? Don\'t answer that! lol :)
August 17th, 2025 11:52
orchidee said:
Good write T. All I know is, Popeye continued and continues yesterday, today, and tomorrow, for ever. Continues what? Don\'t answer that! lol :)
August 17th, 2025 11:52
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Poetic Licence said:
Now is right up my street, I try to live by honesty everything I do, however difficult that can be. No good wrapping things up in candy floss so it looks good to appease yourself and others,the candy floss will melt and the truth will eventually show , has been a wonderful series, enjoyed
August 17th, 2025 09:42
Poetic Licence said:
Now is right up my street, I try to live by honesty everything I do, however difficult that can be. No good wrapping things up in candy floss so it looks good to appease yourself and others,the candy floss will melt and the truth will eventually show , has been a wonderful series, enjoyed
August 17th, 2025 09:42
Puritanical
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Please pardon me if I misunderstood. The poem took me few reads... everytime thinking was I getting it right...an almost inversion of what we commonly think. A powerful work.
August 17th, 2025 09:10
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Please pardon me if I misunderstood. The poem took me few reads... everytime thinking was I getting it right...an almost inversion of what we commonly think. A powerful work.
August 17th, 2025 09:10
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
sorenbarrett said:
A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds (Emmerson) I hear this coming through in this poem. Nicely done Tristan
August 17th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of little minds (Emmerson) I hear this coming through in this poem. Nicely done Tristan
August 17th, 2025 07:28
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Teddy.15 said:
I can see great triumph nakedness speaks of it\'s vulnerability yet out of the ashes a lion is born. š¹
August 17th, 2025 07:13
Teddy.15 said:
I can see great triumph nakedness speaks of it\'s vulnerability yet out of the ashes a lion is born. š¹
August 17th, 2025 07:13
Today Ain\'t What Tomorrow Is
Salvia.S š¹ said:
Thereās so much truth and fire in this. Itās brave and beautifully written ā really made me stop and think. Well done dearest Tittu ā¤ļø A fave for sure š¹
August 17th, 2025 06:54
Salvia.S š¹ said:
Thereās so much truth and fire in this. Itās brave and beautifully written ā really made me stop and think. Well done dearest Tittu ā¤ļø A fave for sure š¹
August 17th, 2025 06:54
The Open Door
Neville said:
Universal truths are few and far between .. but if one should ever stumble on one, then be sure to hold on to it tight and spread the word .. Let their always be love & light ..
August 17th, 2025 00:54
Neville said:
Universal truths are few and far between .. but if one should ever stumble on one, then be sure to hold on to it tight and spread the word .. Let their always be love & light ..
August 17th, 2025 00:54
The Open Door
NinjaGirl said:
Certainly a truth, not that I should be surprised, your messages often scream truth. I like it.
August 16th, 2025 15:00
NinjaGirl said:
Certainly a truth, not that I should be surprised, your messages often scream truth. I like it.
August 16th, 2025 15:00
The Open Door
Salvia.S š¹ said:
A powerful and beautifully layered piece. I love how it speaks to unity, truth, and spiritual clarity without preaching. The contrast between ākinship not kingshipā sets the tone perfectly, - inviting rather than commanding. And the use of āIehi Aourā gives it a sacred, timeless weight. The final line really stays with me: āall are welcome in loveāāsuch a gentle yet profound reminder. Thank you for sharing this. Very well written dearest Tittu š¹ā¤ļø a fave š¹
August 16th, 2025 11:35
Salvia.S š¹ said:
A powerful and beautifully layered piece. I love how it speaks to unity, truth, and spiritual clarity without preaching. The contrast between ākinship not kingshipā sets the tone perfectly, - inviting rather than commanding. And the use of āIehi Aourā gives it a sacred, timeless weight. The final line really stays with me: āall are welcome in loveāāsuch a gentle yet profound reminder. Thank you for sharing this. Very well written dearest Tittu š¹ā¤ļø a fave š¹
August 16th, 2025 11:35
The Open Door
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend. We come together for the good of all, for the bonds of love that are selfless cannot be broken. Beautifully written in the mind and the heart!!
August 16th, 2025 11:22
Bella Shepard said:
Amen, my friend. We come together for the good of all, for the bonds of love that are selfless cannot be broken. Beautifully written in the mind and the heart!!
August 16th, 2025 11:22
The Open Door
Poetic Licence said:
For me this was quite a complex one, as you know I am not off faith but I am on the the belief all are equal and should be treated so, regardless of faith, beliefs, customs etc. a mind tingler for me which was very enjoyable
August 16th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
For me this was quite a complex one, as you know I am not off faith but I am on the the belief all are equal and should be treated so, regardless of faith, beliefs, customs etc. a mind tingler for me which was very enjoyable
August 16th, 2025 10:44
The Open Door
Cheeky Missy said:
Freaky, mon, freaky. The image is too perfect as all shall be wearing sunglasses, regardless the day, and in funky postures sinuously engaging in conversation, pressing the flesh as we go along. I\'ll pass, frankly. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Freaky, mon, freaky. The image is too perfect as all shall be wearing sunglasses, regardless the day, and in funky postures sinuously engaging in conversation, pressing the flesh as we go along. I\'ll pass, frankly. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 16th, 2025 10:39
The Open Door
orchidee said:
Good write T. Dunno how Popeye got into this, but he {don\'t complete this} opened the door to something, when he first started............! heehee.
August 16th, 2025 09:52
orchidee said:
Good write T. Dunno how Popeye got into this, but he {don\'t complete this} opened the door to something, when he first started............! heehee.
August 16th, 2025 09:52
The Open Door
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses spiritual themes, exploring concepts of divinity, inclusivity, and the importance of communal well-being over individualism. It critiques superficial understandings of faith and underscores the significance of genuine connection and understanding among people.
August 16th, 2025 08:41
Friendship said:
Your poem addresses spiritual themes, exploring concepts of divinity, inclusivity, and the importance of communal well-being over individualism. It critiques superficial understandings of faith and underscores the significance of genuine connection and understanding among people.
August 16th, 2025 08:41
The Open Door
sorenbarrett said:
Prometheus -Zhu Rong -Mixcoatl -Tiāitiāi -Maui, the trickster gods of Native America all brought light by way of fire to man. Ra the sun god gave light to the Egyptians and so in Christianity light associated with truth and god himself. From kinship to kingship to democracy back to kinship a cycle not a circle but elevating upward like a screw in three dimensions not two. God is the creator and so are all we gods in our own right and above all the force of love for those we create or were created by thus kinship. All of us kin coming from the same line. A powerful and beautiful write with deep philosophy underlying it. A fave
August 16th, 2025 08:26
sorenbarrett said:
Prometheus -Zhu Rong -Mixcoatl -Tiāitiāi -Maui, the trickster gods of Native America all brought light by way of fire to man. Ra the sun god gave light to the Egyptians and so in Christianity light associated with truth and god himself. From kinship to kingship to democracy back to kinship a cycle not a circle but elevating upward like a screw in three dimensions not two. God is the creator and so are all we gods in our own right and above all the force of love for those we create or were created by thus kinship. All of us kin coming from the same line. A powerful and beautiful write with deep philosophy underlying it. A fave
August 16th, 2025 08:26
The Open Door
Teddy.15 said:
The only language of love is the one you yourself choose to follow. Bravo Tristan. š¹
August 16th, 2025 07:55
Teddy.15 said:
The only language of love is the one you yourself choose to follow. Bravo Tristan. š¹
August 16th, 2025 07:55
The Open Door
arqios said:
Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love; rejecting hierarchy for kinship, grounding faith in the real, and ending with an openāarmed inclusivity that lingers like an open door itself. \'Let there be light!\'
August 16th, 2025 07:50
arqios said:
Stripped back yet resonant, this feels like a manifesto of light and love; rejecting hierarchy for kinship, grounding faith in the real, and ending with an openāarmed inclusivity that lingers like an open door itself. \'Let there be light!\'
August 16th, 2025 07:50
The Descendant of Dereliction
Cheeky Missy said:
Say you so, eh? Hmm. This piece looks like it was fun to write, tripping down the page unrolling a dirty carpet for whose feet? Methinks consonance and assonance have danced herein, and the dark ambiance cannot be shifted. Interesting. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 22:49
Cheeky Missy said:
Say you so, eh? Hmm. This piece looks like it was fun to write, tripping down the page unrolling a dirty carpet for whose feet? Methinks consonance and assonance have danced herein, and the dark ambiance cannot be shifted. Interesting. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a curious poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 15th, 2025 22:49
The Descendant of Dereliction
arqios said:
This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a warning, but a verdict already unfolding. The imagery of āmaggot breadā and āderelictionās descendantā evokes a world where corruption is consumed and decay breeds destruction. Nemesis isnāt approaching; sheās arrived. A powerful, rhythmic reckoning that spares no one.
August 15th, 2025 20:24
arqios said:
This sixth vision in The Book of Tittu is searing and immediate; not a warning, but a verdict already unfolding. The imagery of āmaggot breadā and āderelictionās descendantā evokes a world where corruption is consumed and decay breeds destruction. Nemesis isnāt approaching; sheās arrived. A powerful, rhythmic reckoning that spares no one.
August 15th, 2025 20:24
The Descendant of Dereliction
Teddy.15 said:
Totally powerful and so very relatable on today of all days. I am a huge fan of justice and not of haughty (love that word) it\'s new to me. I feel your heart on your sleeve my dear Tristan š¹
August 15th, 2025 13:37
Teddy.15 said:
Totally powerful and so very relatable on today of all days. I am a huge fan of justice and not of haughty (love that word) it\'s new to me. I feel your heart on your sleeve my dear Tristan š¹
August 15th, 2025 13:37
The Descendant of Dereliction
Poetic Licence said:
Another strong feeling rite of forthcoming doom and gloom, or should I say the arrival off, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:23
Poetic Licence said:
Another strong feeling rite of forthcoming doom and gloom, or should I say the arrival off, enjoyed the read
August 15th, 2025 12:23
The Descendant of Dereliction
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
\'nay, it\'s here.\' A lightning strike to the stomach of the \'haughty hiders\'. Another actioned packed verse of horrors powerfully expressed without inhibitions or pity as a poem of the like should be. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:25
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
\'nay, it\'s here.\' A lightning strike to the stomach of the \'haughty hiders\'. Another actioned packed verse of horrors powerfully expressed without inhibitions or pity as a poem of the like should be. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 11:25
The Unveiling
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Short, sharp, shock and the power of love in a poem to catch the reader head on and demand - \'live love\'. Your poetry is so energetic, an old bard like me could lose weight just reading it. Excellent, my fine fellow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Short, sharp, shock and the power of love in a poem to catch the reader head on and demand - \'live love\'. Your poetry is so energetic, an old bard like me could lose weight just reading it. Excellent, my fine fellow.
Fond regards,
Tony.
August 15th, 2025 10:28
The Descendant of Dereliction
sorenbarrett said:
Impending doom in this poem. Alliteration aids in its flow as does some powerful words. Nicely composed it casts its shadow
August 15th, 2025 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Impending doom in this poem. Alliteration aids in its flow as does some powerful words. Nicely composed it casts its shadow
August 15th, 2025 10:26
The Descendant of Dereliction
orchidee said:
Nay, Popeye, we say - but he ignores us! lol.
August 15th, 2025 10:15
orchidee said:
Nay, Popeye, we say - but he ignores us! lol.
August 15th, 2025 10:15
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