Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the damnedest destinations
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is raw the format well planned and I imagine took a good deal of work. A powerful poem with a sad meaning. Well done my friend a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:30
sorenbarrett said:
The wording is raw the format well planned and I imagine took a good deal of work. A powerful poem with a sad meaning. Well done my friend a fave
August 23rd, 2025 09:30
the damnedest destinations
Teddy.15 said:
The fact that your poem is in the shape of wind itself just makes this even more exciting to read and very creative, underestimation can also lead to a suprise success. Best wishes with your website my dear Tristan 🌹
August 23rd, 2025 09:27
Teddy.15 said:
The fact that your poem is in the shape of wind itself just makes this even more exciting to read and very creative, underestimation can also lead to a suprise success. Best wishes with your website my dear Tristan 🌹
August 23rd, 2025 09:27
the damnedest destinations
Salvia.S said:
This captures the feeling of being hurt by someone you once trusted. It\'s raw, honest and powerful, especially the way the form mirrors the emotions. I’m really curious about the line “the words are now” followed by the scattered letters.Is it meant to show how words lose meaning or get jumbled after a painful experience? Or is there a specific word or feeling you were trying to express? Anyway well written dearest Tittu!!!
A fave ❤️
August 23rd, 2025 09:11
Salvia.S said:
This captures the feeling of being hurt by someone you once trusted. It\'s raw, honest and powerful, especially the way the form mirrors the emotions. I’m really curious about the line “the words are now” followed by the scattered letters.Is it meant to show how words lose meaning or get jumbled after a painful experience? Or is there a specific word or feeling you were trying to express? Anyway well written dearest Tittu!!!
A fave ❤️
August 23rd, 2025 09:11
Alone
arqios said:
In the still between heartbeats
A spark still glows unseen
Even the deepest night
Holds the shape of dawn
August 21st, 2025 18:39
arqios said:
In the still between heartbeats
A spark still glows unseen
Even the deepest night
Holds the shape of dawn
August 21st, 2025 18:39
Alone
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those teenage years. A psychological torture chamber for some of us. May I never have to go through that again in all eternity. Great write, Tristan!
August 21st, 2025 18:20
Mutley Ravishes said:
Those teenage years. A psychological torture chamber for some of us. May I never have to go through that again in all eternity. Great write, Tristan!
August 21st, 2025 18:20
Alone
Teddy.15 said:
Where do I begin? Darling Tristan we have lived the same life my friend, I have fought all my life for love, I am 50 years old and this past month I realised it\'s not me it\'s them, my blood family who have no values for love for their blood it took me 50 years to understand. I\'m not even sad because I have built a wonderful life in Italy surrounded by love I myself chose. Kudos you brought me so much emotion, going back home a month ago I was suddenly 15 again and baffled as to why I have to fight my own people for their love. Not anymore. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 14:49
Teddy.15 said:
Where do I begin? Darling Tristan we have lived the same life my friend, I have fought all my life for love, I am 50 years old and this past month I realised it\'s not me it\'s them, my blood family who have no values for love for their blood it took me 50 years to understand. I\'m not even sad because I have built a wonderful life in Italy surrounded by love I myself chose. Kudos you brought me so much emotion, going back home a month ago I was suddenly 15 again and baffled as to why I have to fight my own people for their love. Not anymore. 🌹
August 21st, 2025 14:49
Alone
Cheeky Missy said:
The sheer beauty of poetry like this particular piece is how easily it resonates with humanity, the cry of countless voiced as if to beg an answer. What might be too perfect is the answer from God, the Scriptures. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heartbreaking poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 21st, 2025 11:32
Cheeky Missy said:
The sheer beauty of poetry like this particular piece is how easily it resonates with humanity, the cry of countless voiced as if to beg an answer. What might be too perfect is the answer from God, the Scriptures. Very beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a heartbreaking poignancy. Thank you so very much for sharing.
August 21st, 2025 11:32
Alone
Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and heartfelt. It captures deep emotions of loneliness, struggle, and the longing for freedom in such a raw and honest way. Truly relatable! Absolutely love it !!!! Very nicely expressed, dearest Tittu ❤️🌹
August 21st, 2025 09:13
Salvia.S said:
This is so powerful and heartfelt. It captures deep emotions of loneliness, struggle, and the longing for freedom in such a raw and honest way. Truly relatable! Absolutely love it !!!! Very nicely expressed, dearest Tittu ❤️🌹
August 21st, 2025 09:13
Alone
sorenbarrett said:
I can take the first few lines literally for none of us remember our beginning. My first memories come around 18 months to two years of age with snapshot like pictures in my mind before that all is black. This live is a trap in a way and the only freedom comes in death and I haven\'t reached that yet. A most lovely write my firend.
August 21st, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
I can take the first few lines literally for none of us remember our beginning. My first memories come around 18 months to two years of age with snapshot like pictures in my mind before that all is black. This live is a trap in a way and the only freedom comes in death and I haven\'t reached that yet. A most lovely write my firend.
August 21st, 2025 09:04
Core
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
An Idiosyncratic observation of a poet escaping from the dismay of oblivion and the pretentious associations (bridges) lost in the translations of life by boring down into the core of his own love and therein the four poles of life: faith, hope, love, and charity as displayed in the poem’s finishing arrangement - (+)………..I think. A tough one, this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 21st, 2025 04:05
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
An Idiosyncratic observation of a poet escaping from the dismay of oblivion and the pretentious associations (bridges) lost in the translations of life by boring down into the core of his own love and therein the four poles of life: faith, hope, love, and charity as displayed in the poem’s finishing arrangement - (+)………..I think. A tough one, this.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 21st, 2025 04:05
Core
arqios said:
The poem collapses language into feeling.
Connection isn’t absent—it’s shattered.
Grief lives in the space where meaning fails.
Love, once central, now spirals—
fragmented, erotic, falling inward.
It doesn’t speak. It disintegrates
August 20th, 2025 16:47
arqios said:
The poem collapses language into feeling.
Connection isn’t absent—it’s shattered.
Grief lives in the space where meaning fails.
Love, once central, now spirals—
fragmented, erotic, falling inward.
It doesn’t speak. It disintegrates
August 20th, 2025 16:47
Core
Teddy.15 said:
There ain\'t no mountain high enough to keep me from you, love is nothing without the drama and you got it going on here. Brilliant dearest Tristan. 🎻 ❤️
August 20th, 2025 12:33
Teddy.15 said:
There ain\'t no mountain high enough to keep me from you, love is nothing without the drama and you got it going on here. Brilliant dearest Tristan. 🎻 ❤️
August 20th, 2025 12:33
The Open Door
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Only to be lost on the lost.\" - it will take quite some time for me to forget. Powerful poem!
August 20th, 2025 12:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Only to be lost on the lost.\" - it will take quite some time for me to forget. Powerful poem!
August 20th, 2025 12:30
Core
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is a googly. However, I avoided being clean bowled by reading erocore as \"cross\"...😃. However, jokes apart, I sensed the poem to be an arresting portrayal of language to convey the deepest meanings. Perhaps, I was off the mark. A poem which makes one reflect... wonderful
August 20th, 2025 12:06
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is a googly. However, I avoided being clean bowled by reading erocore as \"cross\"...😃. However, jokes apart, I sensed the poem to be an arresting portrayal of language to convey the deepest meanings. Perhaps, I was off the mark. A poem which makes one reflect... wonderful
August 20th, 2025 12:06
Core
sorenbarrett said:
Reading this in the image as opposed to the poem beneath I am left with the feeling that it deserves great reflection that symbolic meaning is deeply planted in the images as well as the letters and words. I feel that I may be missing a bit here in that erocore an organization does not fit, ero has diverse meanings none of which seem to fit as well unless you are Finnish where it means individuality or differ. and if it were eros well that would be different again but it is not. You have puzzled me my friend.
August 20th, 2025 10:38
sorenbarrett said:
Reading this in the image as opposed to the poem beneath I am left with the feeling that it deserves great reflection that symbolic meaning is deeply planted in the images as well as the letters and words. I feel that I may be missing a bit here in that erocore an organization does not fit, ero has diverse meanings none of which seem to fit as well unless you are Finnish where it means individuality or differ. and if it were eros well that would be different again but it is not. You have puzzled me my friend.
August 20th, 2025 10:38
Core
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Sayest thou so, mon? I call fie on that assertion though I do know thou thinkest thou hast love in thy endeavors. But contradict me. Fascinating and curiously rendered with interesting effects and an undefined, weighty poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 09:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Forsooth. Sayest thou so, mon? I call fie on that assertion though I do know thou thinkest thou hast love in thy endeavors. But contradict me. Fascinating and curiously rendered with interesting effects and an undefined, weighty poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 20th, 2025 09:07
The Acceptable Ways to Die
NafisaSB said:
sad but true - too many cases these days - and it\'s time they realized ,reached out, repented - turned over a new leaf and got on with their life
August 20th, 2025 07:14
NafisaSB said:
sad but true - too many cases these days - and it\'s time they realized ,reached out, repented - turned over a new leaf and got on with their life
August 20th, 2025 07:14
Cold As Hell
Neville said:
Blimey, this is more noir than black light bouncing off the walls of a black hole on a dark night .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧👍
August 20th, 2025 05:13
Neville said:
Blimey, this is more noir than black light bouncing off the walls of a black hole on a dark night .. Neville 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧👍
August 20th, 2025 05:13
Cold As Hell
orchidee said:
Has Popeye warmed up yet? If so, spare us the details! heehee.
August 20th, 2025 02:42
orchidee said:
Has Popeye warmed up yet? If so, spare us the details! heehee.
August 20th, 2025 02:42
Seven Lines to Burn
NafisaSB said:
a different interpretation of \'prophet\' : what a well-defined acrostic poem..keep them coming
August 20th, 2025 02:20
NafisaSB said:
a different interpretation of \'prophet\' : what a well-defined acrostic poem..keep them coming
August 20th, 2025 02:20
South of Me
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. What a ride! Absolutely love your style. Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 20th, 2025 00:53
Poetic Dan said:
Wow. What a ride! Absolutely love your style. Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
August 20th, 2025 00:53
The Open Door
NafisaSB said:
noble thought worth sharing - glad you did - kinship over kingship is indeed the need of the hour
August 19th, 2025 23:39
NafisaSB said:
noble thought worth sharing - glad you did - kinship over kingship is indeed the need of the hour
August 19th, 2025 23:39
Cold As Hell
Salvia.S said:
This is like a love letter turned elegy - a heartbreaking and beautiful exploration of love, loss, and longing. The language is rich and evocative, with imagery that cuts deep. Your words convey the complexity of emotions with stunning clarity. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️
August 19th, 2025 20:05
Salvia.S said:
This is like a love letter turned elegy - a heartbreaking and beautiful exploration of love, loss, and longing. The language is rich and evocative, with imagery that cuts deep. Your words convey the complexity of emotions with stunning clarity. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️
August 19th, 2025 20:05
Cold As Hell
arqios said:
This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not as possession, but as luminous endurance in the face of decay. The speaker’s refusal to hate, even while tasting bitterness, gives the piece its haunting edge. “Necrosis best goes down cold as hell” is a devastating closer: elegant, brutal, and strangely tender. It’s a portrait of knowing someone deeply, surviving the wreckage, and choosing grace over corrosion. The language is rich, almost ceremonial, yet it cuts like frost. Beautifully bitter. And it could all be talking about the self...even. very compelling.
August 19th, 2025 19:54
arqios said:
This poem drips with visceral intimacy and emotional precision; love not as possession, but as luminous endurance in the face of decay. The speaker’s refusal to hate, even while tasting bitterness, gives the piece its haunting edge. “Necrosis best goes down cold as hell” is a devastating closer: elegant, brutal, and strangely tender. It’s a portrait of knowing someone deeply, surviving the wreckage, and choosing grace over corrosion. The language is rich, almost ceremonial, yet it cuts like frost. Beautifully bitter. And it could all be talking about the self...even. very compelling.
August 19th, 2025 19:54
Cold As Hell
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co. are always hot. Why? Cos they...... Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co. are always hot. Why? Cos they...... Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 19th, 2025 11:32
Cold As Hell
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all they that hate me love Death.\" (Prov 8:36) Cold, eh? Exceptional. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2025 10:35
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all they that hate me love Death.\" (Prov 8:36) Cold, eh? Exceptional. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 19th, 2025 10:35
South of Me
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
A subterranean encounter with the prince of hell and little ol\' you. Little did he know who he was up against. Onwards and upwards to hell and how awfully strange that may sound - such is life. Great to see you are on a roll again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:16
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
A subterranean encounter with the prince of hell and little ol\' you. Little did he know who he was up against. Onwards and upwards to hell and how awfully strange that may sound - such is life. Great to see you are on a roll again.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 19th, 2025 09:16
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