Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The P\'s of Poetry
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
so creative! I\'d like to hear someone rap this lol 💜
June 25th, 2025 13:11
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
so creative! I\'d like to hear someone rap this lol 💜
June 25th, 2025 13:11
The P\'s of Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Positively perfect alliteration nicely done Tristan. Every once in a while I get this alliteration urge it becomes like a chocolate binge. Loved this one P\'s are not that easy.
June 25th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
Positively perfect alliteration nicely done Tristan. Every once in a while I get this alliteration urge it becomes like a chocolate binge. Loved this one P\'s are not that easy.
June 25th, 2025 11:59
The P\'s of Poetry
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very clever, bet that wasn\'t easy, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 10:49
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very clever, bet that wasn\'t easy, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 10:49
The Corpse\'s Creed
orchidee said:
Ahh! I can read it now. I see it\'s a story about some mother-inlaws! heehee.
June 24th, 2025 02:00
orchidee said:
Ahh! I can read it now. I see it\'s a story about some mother-inlaws! heehee.
June 24th, 2025 02:00
God Cares
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and gets directly to the point - well done
extremely commendable
June 24th, 2025 01:27
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and gets directly to the point - well done
extremely commendable
June 24th, 2025 01:27
The Corpse\'s Creed
sorenbarrett said:
A ghoulish write full of foul and rancid images that slither off the page. Love your use of format to emphasize the words broken word on silence flowing words and the gurgles. A ghastly view of embalming and the surreal, fanciful life still present. I have never accompanied an actual embalming but had a neighbor that was a mortician and he had the most dark and bizarre sense of humor.
June 23rd, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A ghoulish write full of foul and rancid images that slither off the page. Love your use of format to emphasize the words broken word on silence flowing words and the gurgles. A ghastly view of embalming and the surreal, fanciful life still present. I have never accompanied an actual embalming but had a neighbor that was a mortician and he had the most dark and bizarre sense of humor.
June 23rd, 2025 13:01
The Corpse\'s Creed
Poetic Licence said:
Thats my aspirations to be a funeral director gone, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
Thats my aspirations to be a funeral director gone, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 11:34
The Corpse\'s Creed
orchidee said:
Did you type / post this a different way? It\'s all come up, literally. \'All Greek to me!\' The only word I recognised was \'Popeye\'. (Eh??).
June 23rd, 2025 09:28
orchidee said:
Did you type / post this a different way? It\'s all come up, literally. \'All Greek to me!\' The only word I recognised was \'Popeye\'. (Eh??).
June 23rd, 2025 09:28
The Corpse\'s Creed
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
God Cares
orchidee said:
I thought it said Get ET out. Doh! lol.
Not now, Popeye. Not what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
June 22nd, 2025 12:10
orchidee said:
I thought it said Get ET out. Doh! lol.
Not now, Popeye. Not what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
June 22nd, 2025 12:10
God Cares
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like a balm to the soul - they touch the heart and bring a sense of peace. This poem is like a gentle reminder to let go and love fully. Well written dear Tittu 🌹❤️
June 22nd, 2025 11:47
Salvia.S said:
Your words are like a balm to the soul - they touch the heart and bring a sense of peace. This poem is like a gentle reminder to let go and love fully. Well written dear Tittu 🌹❤️
June 22nd, 2025 11:47
God Cares
sorenbarrett said:
To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
June 22nd, 2025 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
To the point and direct. Nicely said if only people would listen
June 22nd, 2025 09:45
God Cares
Damaso said:
I like the short texts that say a lot! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
June 22nd, 2025 09:19
Damaso said:
I like the short texts that say a lot! Thank you very much for sharing it. Greetings!
June 22nd, 2025 09:19
God Cares
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful message that is so needed, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 08:28
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful message that is so needed, nicely done
June 22nd, 2025 08:28
God Cares
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
short, sweet, and to the point. thanks for sharing!
June 22nd, 2025 08:22
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
short, sweet, and to the point. thanks for sharing!
June 22nd, 2025 08:22
The Stranger\'s Truth
arqios said:
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the strangeness that makes for ourselves a home with others.🕊🙏🏻
June 22nd, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
Sometimes our strange is not what makes us strangers to others but the strangeness that makes for ourselves a home with others.🕊🙏🏻
June 22nd, 2025 06:36
The Answer is No
Doggerel Dave said:
I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function (that I opted out is neither here nor there). Beyond that is all societal norms and impositions.
What I cannot understand, and will never understand is why people would wish to subject their bodies to radical surgery and a lifetime of heavy duty medication to superficially appear to belong to the other side…
…I’m definitely too old, my ideas too antiquated…Thanks for putting up there a subject (if I’ve got it right) which gives me the irits from time to time, Tristan.😊
June 22nd, 2025 02:13
Doggerel Dave said:
I was born genetically male to perform a certain reproductive function (that I opted out is neither here nor there). Beyond that is all societal norms and impositions.
What I cannot understand, and will never understand is why people would wish to subject their bodies to radical surgery and a lifetime of heavy duty medication to superficially appear to belong to the other side…
…I’m definitely too old, my ideas too antiquated…Thanks for putting up there a subject (if I’ve got it right) which gives me the irits from time to time, Tristan.😊
June 22nd, 2025 02:13
The Answer is No
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe you are a wonderful lyricist and this is exceptional. A Man is judged on a lot of things I know. A superb powerful piece. 🌹
June 21st, 2025 22:19
Teddy.15 said:
I always believe you are a wonderful lyricist and this is exceptional. A Man is judged on a lot of things I know. A superb powerful piece. 🌹
June 21st, 2025 22:19
The Answer is No
Cheeky Missy said:
So...lemme get this straight: I have six younger brothers who are all the best men in the universe, and you\'ll be my girlfriend?! Could you acquiesce to a more feminine angle to your given name? Or... was the call to be [whatever, it matters little] contrary to the physique originally given? I give up. I\'ve, in my regrettable lack of any sleep whatsoever, undue stress from management screwing me out of water when I paid my bills early, and third shift, third shift, third shift when I cannot sleep except after the sun sets, yes, I\'ve gotten me into a tangle from which I canna extricate meself. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and form, and an intriguing, baffling conclusion. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2025 11:27
Cheeky Missy said:
So...lemme get this straight: I have six younger brothers who are all the best men in the universe, and you\'ll be my girlfriend?! Could you acquiesce to a more feminine angle to your given name? Or... was the call to be [whatever, it matters little] contrary to the physique originally given? I give up. I\'ve, in my regrettable lack of any sleep whatsoever, undue stress from management screwing me out of water when I paid my bills early, and third shift, third shift, third shift when I cannot sleep except after the sun sets, yes, I\'ve gotten me into a tangle from which I canna extricate meself. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and form, and an intriguing, baffling conclusion. Thank you for sharing.
June 21st, 2025 11:27
The Answer is No
orchidee said:
I thought the answer is/was \'always 42\', as someone said somewhere. Not 42 episodes of?..... you knows! heehee.
June 21st, 2025 11:05
orchidee said:
I thought the answer is/was \'always 42\', as someone said somewhere. Not 42 episodes of?..... you knows! heehee.
June 21st, 2025 11:05
The Answer is No
Poetic Licence said:
I like that each verse endorses the previous but at the same altering the end, very clever and interesting read, enjoyed very much
June 21st, 2025 09:29
Poetic Licence said:
I like that each verse endorses the previous but at the same altering the end, very clever and interesting read, enjoyed very much
June 21st, 2025 09:29
The Answer is No
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Tristan. This poem builds with each stanza reiterating each previous stanza and altering it to achieve a different end. Very nice
June 21st, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely done Tristan. This poem builds with each stanza reiterating each previous stanza and altering it to achieve a different end. Very nice
June 21st, 2025 08:21
The Stranger\'s Truth
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay? You\'ve got me...I remain baffled. This twisting, swirling discussion has taken me from the solid terra firma to the murky ether, leaving me dangling in freighted suspense, with no known future. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered as your capable wont, with superb imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2025 19:25
Cheeky Missy said:
Okay? You\'ve got me...I remain baffled. This twisting, swirling discussion has taken me from the solid terra firma to the murky ether, leaving me dangling in freighted suspense, with no known future. Fascinating. Beautifully rendered as your capable wont, with superb imagery and a curious, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2025 19:25
The Stranger\'s Truth
Poetic Licence said:
I hate labels of all sorts, they lead to discrimination or justification. I worked with many children who were hard to control, some people were delighted if they got diagnosed ADH for example, from that point on they blamed everything on the ADH and most of the time their behaviour had nothing to do with ADH. Labelling someone is putting them in a box and they become more of an item than a person. As you rightly say most people do not really know themselves completely, so it is damagingly wrong for others to assume they do, Great Write, Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2025 14:45
Poetic Licence said:
I hate labels of all sorts, they lead to discrimination or justification. I worked with many children who were hard to control, some people were delighted if they got diagnosed ADH for example, from that point on they blamed everything on the ADH and most of the time their behaviour had nothing to do with ADH. Labelling someone is putting them in a box and they become more of an item than a person. As you rightly say most people do not really know themselves completely, so it is damagingly wrong for others to assume they do, Great Write, Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2025 14:45
The Stranger\'s Truth
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting Tristan the concept of defining by what one is not. I hate labels whether social, medical, psychological, racial or any other. They do not tell who a person is and just lead to discrimination. A most lovely poem.
June 20th, 2025 14:01
sorenbarrett said:
Most interesting Tristan the concept of defining by what one is not. I hate labels whether social, medical, psychological, racial or any other. They do not tell who a person is and just lead to discrimination. A most lovely poem.
June 20th, 2025 14:01
The Stranger\'s Truth
Caring dove said:
An interesting and engaging writing ..
I think we can know ourselves or think we do .. or we can feel like a stranger .
Maybe we can feel connected to ourselves .. or lost
It’s difficult to know and understand ourselves completely .. sometimes
June 20th, 2025 13:19
Caring dove said:
An interesting and engaging writing ..
I think we can know ourselves or think we do .. or we can feel like a stranger .
Maybe we can feel connected to ourselves .. or lost
It’s difficult to know and understand ourselves completely .. sometimes
June 20th, 2025 13:19
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