Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Cross-Examination
Teddy.15 said:
lol none of us perfect, although I confess I\'ve never been to confession 🤣
April 30th, 2025 01:02
Teddy.15 said:
lol none of us perfect, although I confess I\'ve never been to confession 🤣
April 30th, 2025 01:02
Cross-Examination
Mutley Ravishes said:
Feel a lot of remorse, yet still indulge in it! The work goes on...
April 29th, 2025 19:37
Mutley Ravishes said:
Feel a lot of remorse, yet still indulge in it! The work goes on...
April 29th, 2025 19:37
Cross-Examination
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile - being daft - bit dark there! Ooh!
And - you can call me just about any name, even Fred or Freda - but don\'t call me Obi....... you knows it! 🤣🙄
April 29th, 2025 14:59
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile - being daft - bit dark there! Ooh!
And - you can call me just about any name, even Fred or Freda - but don\'t call me Obi....... you knows it! 🤣🙄
April 29th, 2025 14:59
Cross-Examination
arqios said:
Sometimes so much more than “soteros” that’s been compassionately provided.🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 14:18
arqios said:
Sometimes so much more than “soteros” that’s been compassionately provided.🙏🏻🕊️
April 29th, 2025 14:18
Cross-Examination
Cheeky Missy said:
Terrifying, when you put it that way, downright terrifying. The inherent caustic tone blatently querying owns such pride, as it were, the soul shivers. She took of the tree because it--and thereafter they clothed themselves with fig leaves, whilst hiding from the LORD God walking in the garden in the cool of the day. Piercingly rendered with excellent imagery and a killer poignancy.
April 29th, 2025 12:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Terrifying, when you put it that way, downright terrifying. The inherent caustic tone blatently querying owns such pride, as it were, the soul shivers. She took of the tree because it--and thereafter they clothed themselves with fig leaves, whilst hiding from the LORD God walking in the garden in the cool of the day. Piercingly rendered with excellent imagery and a killer poignancy.
April 29th, 2025 12:19
Cross-Examination
sorenbarrett said:
Always looking at the form of your poems Tristan I was first taken by the horizontal and then vertical read. The dual meaning woven when putting the two together. The question (doubtful of the cursory answer usually given to such a question) Followed by the vertical follow up implied in if you do prove it by admitting remorse. Here the mind falls into weaving out of thin air what the remorse is about. The word sin is introduced and one can take it as betrayal or as involvement with the one speaking. Are you feeling bad for betraying me or conversely do you feel bad about your involvement with me. The duality is a great mix. I may be well off base but this came through to me. Loved the creativity and for that a fave
April 29th, 2025 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Always looking at the form of your poems Tristan I was first taken by the horizontal and then vertical read. The dual meaning woven when putting the two together. The question (doubtful of the cursory answer usually given to such a question) Followed by the vertical follow up implied in if you do prove it by admitting remorse. Here the mind falls into weaving out of thin air what the remorse is about. The word sin is introduced and one can take it as betrayal or as involvement with the one speaking. Are you feeling bad for betraying me or conversely do you feel bad about your involvement with me. The duality is a great mix. I may be well off base but this came through to me. Loved the creativity and for that a fave
April 29th, 2025 09:05
Cross-Examination
Salvia.S said:
Short but strong. It asks deep questions and makes the reader stop and think about their actions and feelings. Well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 08:36
Salvia.S said:
Short but strong. It asks deep questions and makes the reader stop and think about their actions and feelings. Well written!!!
April 29th, 2025 08:36
i wish i always knew
orchidee said:
Fido always knows - well, 99% of all there is to know! LOL. :)
April 29th, 2025 02:06
orchidee said:
Fido always knows - well, 99% of all there is to know! LOL. :)
April 29th, 2025 02:06
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NafisaSB said:
there are times when one needs to be alone, and times when we desperately seek someone to talk to
innermost feelings well described - good job
April 29th, 2025 00:46
NafisaSB said:
there are times when one needs to be alone, and times when we desperately seek someone to talk to
innermost feelings well described - good job
April 29th, 2025 00:46
i wish i always knew
Salvia.S said:
Your words convey a deep longing for self-awareness and confidence in one\'s unique value. It\'s a relatable and inspiring sentiment! Well done 🌹
April 28th, 2025 23:20
Salvia.S said:
Your words convey a deep longing for self-awareness and confidence in one\'s unique value. It\'s a relatable and inspiring sentiment! Well done 🌹
April 28th, 2025 23:20
i wish i always knew
Cheeky Missy said:
...there is just one you/Not twenty, or ten, or two/In all of the whole world through/God only made one YOU.\" How you remind me of that song from the 90\'s. Forsooth, while many before us have whatever, still you\'re you and there\'s only one you. I inherited much of my loving daddy, and of my loving mommy, but I\'m not nor ever could be either of them. Beautiful isn\'t it? Adroitly rendered in strikingly eloquent brevity with excellent imagery and those delightful poetic effects such as rhyming, and the play on words etc. I love it. Thank you for sharing, dear Tristan.
April 28th, 2025 16:21
Cheeky Missy said:
...there is just one you/Not twenty, or ten, or two/In all of the whole world through/God only made one YOU.\" How you remind me of that song from the 90\'s. Forsooth, while many before us have whatever, still you\'re you and there\'s only one you. I inherited much of my loving daddy, and of my loving mommy, but I\'m not nor ever could be either of them. Beautiful isn\'t it? Adroitly rendered in strikingly eloquent brevity with excellent imagery and those delightful poetic effects such as rhyming, and the play on words etc. I love it. Thank you for sharing, dear Tristan.
April 28th, 2025 16:21
i wish i always knew
orchidee said:
Now I said Fido knows 99% of everything - except that thing you asked me on another poem! lol.
Ahh, a light bulb flashed above your head, saying \'Idea\'?!
April 28th, 2025 11:46
orchidee said:
Now I said Fido knows 99% of everything - except that thing you asked me on another poem! lol.
Ahh, a light bulb flashed above your head, saying \'Idea\'?!
April 28th, 2025 11:46
i wish i always knew
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 I love the humour in here and yes a very special soul you are. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 10:54
Teddy.15 said:
🤣 I love the humour in here and yes a very special soul you are. 🌹
April 28th, 2025 10:54
i wish i always knew
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing what one is and has to offer is key to valuing who you are. A beautiful write using alliteration as well as a wonderful message. If we had always known.
April 28th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Knowing what one is and has to offer is key to valuing who you are. A beautiful write using alliteration as well as a wonderful message. If we had always known.
April 28th, 2025 09:20
i wish i always knew
arqios said:
You! That’s what you bring to us each and every single day. And that’s so much more than sufficient in terms of value, significance and worth. We haven’t been taught well enough that to merely show up is desirable and beautiful 🤩🙏🏻🕊
April 28th, 2025 09:02
arqios said:
You! That’s what you bring to us each and every single day. And that’s so much more than sufficient in terms of value, significance and worth. We haven’t been taught well enough that to merely show up is desirable and beautiful 🤩🙏🏻🕊
April 28th, 2025 09:02
i wish i always knew
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hey Orchi, I turned the lights on, mate! 😏
April 28th, 2025 08:44
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Hey Orchi, I turned the lights on, mate! 😏
April 28th, 2025 08:44
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Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Love the flow and structure.
April 27th, 2025 22:51
Thomas W Case said:
Tremendous work. Love the flow and structure.
April 27th, 2025 22:51
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Teddy.15 said:
You have really described what it\'s like to be me, sometimes I think it is because I have to speak Italian, which is my second language and I\'m also a person who hates confrontation so my nervousness comes right to the surface when I have to discuss matters I dislike, a superb write which is more than just a bit relatable I thought it was just me... Your first 3 lines are exactly me. Kudos. Maybe that is why we can actually write our emotions.... 🌹
April 27th, 2025 14:21
Teddy.15 said:
You have really described what it\'s like to be me, sometimes I think it is because I have to speak Italian, which is my second language and I\'m also a person who hates confrontation so my nervousness comes right to the surface when I have to discuss matters I dislike, a superb write which is more than just a bit relatable I thought it was just me... Your first 3 lines are exactly me. Kudos. Maybe that is why we can actually write our emotions.... 🌹
April 27th, 2025 14:21
Tail Between My Dreams
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Absolutely love your work! Very well written!
April 27th, 2025 12:58
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Absolutely love your work! Very well written!
April 27th, 2025 12:58
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Tony Grannell said:
It\'s like reading a stunning confession to the self and it is stunning, in word and image. I beheld the image as the bell of a Horne, as in: \'blow your own horn,\' that is to the tune of lies to conceal the jester, as it were. A brilliant poem, exceptionally so. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 10:22
Tony Grannell said:
It\'s like reading a stunning confession to the self and it is stunning, in word and image. I beheld the image as the bell of a Horne, as in: \'blow your own horn,\' that is to the tune of lies to conceal the jester, as it were. A brilliant poem, exceptionally so. Very well done indeed.
Kind regards,
Tony.
April 27th, 2025 10:22
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Cheeky Missy said:
This should be printed in a Gothic script and framed likewise, then hung at the entry to all houses of assembly. When some would feign deny it\'s reality, fearing innately the sheer madness, they must be calmed since this is a cute definition of aka reality. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 08:47
Cheeky Missy said:
This should be printed in a Gothic script and framed likewise, then hung at the entry to all houses of assembly. When some would feign deny it\'s reality, fearing innately the sheer madness, they must be calmed since this is a cute definition of aka reality. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
April 27th, 2025 08:47
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sorenbarrett said:
For most poems I ignore the form of the print on the page but for yours I have learned that there is a message there as well. At first I saw a martini glass and thought of how alcohol greases the mouth. Then I saw the upper half of an hourglass and speech flowing while life is going. The poem itself speaks to me of of covering with words what one does not want others to see. A distraction and when alone I distract myself with speech as well. The final few lines indicate change in a way (Stop it epic fail just drop it) the end of speech and therefore the distraction. Most lovely my friend
April 27th, 2025 08:22
sorenbarrett said:
For most poems I ignore the form of the print on the page but for yours I have learned that there is a message there as well. At first I saw a martini glass and thought of how alcohol greases the mouth. Then I saw the upper half of an hourglass and speech flowing while life is going. The poem itself speaks to me of of covering with words what one does not want others to see. A distraction and when alone I distract myself with speech as well. The final few lines indicate change in a way (Stop it epic fail just drop it) the end of speech and therefore the distraction. Most lovely my friend
April 27th, 2025 08:22
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Salvia.S said:
Beautifully raw and honest. Your words resonate deeply.
April 27th, 2025 07:18
Salvia.S said:
Beautifully raw and honest. Your words resonate deeply.
April 27th, 2025 07:18
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arqios said:
Wordy! Talkative was a term used and when the mouth shut, the pen began to go overdrive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 27th, 2025 07:04
arqios said:
Wordy! Talkative was a term used and when the mouth shut, the pen began to go overdrive 🙏🏻🕊️
April 27th, 2025 07:04
Tail Between My Dreams
orchidee said:
Erm, that picture\'s a bit dark there. LOL.
April 27th, 2025 02:23
orchidee said:
Erm, that picture\'s a bit dark there. LOL.
April 27th, 2025 02:23
Tail Between My Dreams
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh what motivated ye, o poor impoverished one? Fear of total loneliness? Masochistic tendencies? A great portrait of someone (because I doubt that is really you, Tristan) with dependency issues.
April 26th, 2025 17:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh what motivated ye, o poor impoverished one? Fear of total loneliness? Masochistic tendencies? A great portrait of someone (because I doubt that is really you, Tristan) with dependency issues.
April 26th, 2025 17:32
Tail Between My Dreams
Teddy.15 said:
The emotions and visuals here make me relive a part of my younger self, I\'ve been reading a lot of Sylvia Plath who I regards a friend now, as she has truly given me a light of inspiration, your poetry is as exquisite as ever. 🌹
April 26th, 2025 15:12
Teddy.15 said:
The emotions and visuals here make me relive a part of my younger self, I\'ve been reading a lot of Sylvia Plath who I regards a friend now, as she has truly given me a light of inspiration, your poetry is as exquisite as ever. 🌹
April 26th, 2025 15:12
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