Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Never the Destination
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I sat for a few minutes after reading. This one is a slow burner. Fantastic
August 15th, 2025 06:54
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I sat for a few minutes after reading. This one is a slow burner. Fantastic
August 15th, 2025 06:54
The Unveiling
NinjaGirl said:
The truth tastes bitter, but isn\'t it better? Lovely write!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
NinjaGirl said:
The truth tastes bitter, but isn\'t it better? Lovely write!
August 14th, 2025 20:02
The Unveiling
Neville said:
These are never as easy as you make them seem and this one in particular .. But hey .. Tittu clearly knows a thing or two too don\'tcha know .. 😎🐦⬛🐧🐈⬛👍
August 14th, 2025 13:15
Neville said:
These are never as easy as you make them seem and this one in particular .. But hey .. Tittu clearly knows a thing or two too don\'tcha know .. 😎🐦⬛🐧🐈⬛👍
August 14th, 2025 13:15
The Unveiling
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A stunningly crafted acrostic that feels both timely and timeless. The imagery crackles with intensity—\'burning lightning blue\' stayed with me—and the message lands with weight and clarity. It’s not just a reckoning, but a call to rise above the chaos through truth and love. A bold, lyrical revelation in every sense. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹 A fave for sure!!!!
August 14th, 2025 12:01
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
A stunningly crafted acrostic that feels both timely and timeless. The imagery crackles with intensity—\'burning lightning blue\' stayed with me—and the message lands with weight and clarity. It’s not just a reckoning, but a call to rise above the chaos through truth and love. A bold, lyrical revelation in every sense. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹 A fave for sure!!!!
August 14th, 2025 12:01
The Unveiling
orchidee said:
Is Popeye noxious at all? Best not answer that! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:44
orchidee said:
Is Popeye noxious at all? Best not answer that! lol.
August 14th, 2025 10:44
The Unveiling
Poetic Licence said:
This is written with passion, you feel it the words. Love is like an invading army, storms in and conquers, but if you want it to last, you have to adapt and change along the way relinquishing some of that initial control, great write, Artist At Work, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
This is written with passion, you feel it the words. Love is like an invading army, storms in and conquers, but if you want it to last, you have to adapt and change along the way relinquishing some of that initial control, great write, Artist At Work, enjoyed
August 14th, 2025 10:22
Something in the Mind
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, I had to press the fave button. The emphasis being on the ‘had’.
August 14th, 2025 10:14
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Well, I had to press the fave button. The emphasis being on the ‘had’.
August 14th, 2025 10:14
The Unveiling
sorenbarrett said:
So true Tristan love is never a surrender but instead an invasion that takes all that it encounters not by force but by conversion. A most lovely write
August 14th, 2025 09:55
sorenbarrett said:
So true Tristan love is never a surrender but instead an invasion that takes all that it encounters not by force but by conversion. A most lovely write
August 14th, 2025 09:55
The Unveiling
Cheeky Missy said:
[The last decent boyfriend I had too many years, nay, decades ago, had your first name. Curious.] Forsooth, I believe the way the Scriptures put it is something like, \"He, that being often reproved hardeneth his neck, shall suddenly be destroyed, and that without remedy.\" (Prov 29:1) Guess that leaves discussion out of the picture. After that you leave me uncertain, the message at odds seemingly with the same quote. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 09:35
Cheeky Missy said:
[The last decent boyfriend I had too many years, nay, decades ago, had your first name. Curious.] Forsooth, I believe the way the Scriptures put it is something like, \"He, that being often reproved hardeneth his neck, shall suddenly be destroyed, and that without remedy.\" (Prov 29:1) Guess that leaves discussion out of the picture. After that you leave me uncertain, the message at odds seemingly with the same quote. Excellently rendered with superb imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 14th, 2025 09:35
The Unveiling
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, what a beautiful message I can feel that lightning dear Tristan. ⚡ 🌹 I can feel the passion in your words.
August 14th, 2025 09:25
Teddy.15 said:
Yes, what a beautiful message I can feel that lightning dear Tristan. ⚡ 🌹 I can feel the passion in your words.
August 14th, 2025 09:25
The Gauntlet
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This poem is a powerful reflection on the journey of self-discovery. It encourages facing truth over illusion and embracing the unknown within. Thoughtful and quietly bold. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️
August 13th, 2025 20:13
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This poem is a powerful reflection on the journey of self-discovery. It encourages facing truth over illusion and embracing the unknown within. Thoughtful and quietly bold. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️
August 13th, 2025 20:13
Never the Destination
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautifully reflective poem—quietly powerful, with a deep sense of reverence. The message that the journey itself holds the meaning, not the destination, is timeless and moving. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave for sure 🌹
August 13th, 2025 20:09
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
This is a beautifully reflective poem—quietly powerful, with a deep sense of reverence. The message that the journey itself holds the meaning, not the destination, is timeless and moving. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave for sure 🌹
August 13th, 2025 20:09
Never the Destination
Teddy.15 said:
Superb last lines. It is in fact the journey more so than the destination. I hear, live for today and enjoy every second, in this 🌹 beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:13
Teddy.15 said:
Superb last lines. It is in fact the journey more so than the destination. I hear, live for today and enjoy every second, in this 🌹 beautiful. 🌹
August 13th, 2025 12:13
Never the Destination
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does Popeye \'arrive\' sometimes, always, or never? Arrive where? Don\'t answer that! LOL.
August 13th, 2025 11:37
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does Popeye \'arrive\' sometimes, always, or never? Arrive where? Don\'t answer that! LOL.
August 13th, 2025 11:37
Never the Destination
Poetic Licence said:
The journey and searching of a way home that cannot be found, enjoying the series,
August 13th, 2025 10:53
Poetic Licence said:
The journey and searching of a way home that cannot be found, enjoying the series,
August 13th, 2025 10:53
Never the Destination
Cheeky Missy said:
What, dearest me, is it about aught \"twisty\" erm, for lack of a better word: stuff, that we like cats cannot avoid entangling ourselves therein, to our ultimate detriment? Rarer know than most whom Jesus is, and apparently therefore, what or whom love is, is that? And thus the philosopher unrolls another tapestry for our indulgence, feigning, like a certain individual in Genesis 3, we\'ll be enlightened if only we partake. Where the KJV renders it \"...He hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.\" (Ecc 3:11b) all the rest render it that \"...He put eternity in their hearts--\" and fewer know than not how tis all perverted. Pardon me, please.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 13th, 2025 10:51
Cheeky Missy said:
What, dearest me, is it about aught \"twisty\" erm, for lack of a better word: stuff, that we like cats cannot avoid entangling ourselves therein, to our ultimate detriment? Rarer know than most whom Jesus is, and apparently therefore, what or whom love is, is that? And thus the philosopher unrolls another tapestry for our indulgence, feigning, like a certain individual in Genesis 3, we\'ll be enlightened if only we partake. Where the KJV renders it \"...He hath set the world in their heart, so that no man can find out the work that God maketh from the beginning to the end.\" (Ecc 3:11b) all the rest render it that \"...He put eternity in their hearts--\" and fewer know than not how tis all perverted. Pardon me, please.
Beautifully rendered with exceptional imagery and a tantalizing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
August 13th, 2025 10:51
Never the Destination
sorenbarrett said:
Bold and powerful words that expand the vista to horizons beyond reach and the desire to return home that can no longer be found. Well written and a fave
August 13th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Bold and powerful words that expand the vista to horizons beyond reach and the desire to return home that can no longer be found. Well written and a fave
August 13th, 2025 08:59
The Gauntlet
Neville said:
What an amazingly insightful deduction .. am loving each step of the way .. both a telling and leading light lies ahead of the anticipated darkness .. the gauntlet is indeed thrown .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 13th, 2025 02:15
Neville said:
What an amazingly insightful deduction .. am loving each step of the way .. both a telling and leading light lies ahead of the anticipated darkness .. the gauntlet is indeed thrown .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛⭐👍
August 13th, 2025 02:15
The Gauntlet
Damaso said:
Wow, what a mystery it is to know how it continues. Although something inside me tells me I know what it\'s about; you remind me of tales of pagan rituals from my homeland where healing and prayer were taught, where you could fall into trances of terrifying visions of aliens and many illusions of the worst human fears. All in order to reach the master\'s final enlightenment, understanding that it was all an illusion of their minds. I\'ve enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Greetings.
August 12th, 2025 12:25
Damaso said:
Wow, what a mystery it is to know how it continues. Although something inside me tells me I know what it\'s about; you remind me of tales of pagan rituals from my homeland where healing and prayer were taught, where you could fall into trances of terrifying visions of aliens and many illusions of the worst human fears. All in order to reach the master\'s final enlightenment, understanding that it was all an illusion of their minds. I\'ve enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Greetings.
August 12th, 2025 12:25
The Gauntlet
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous, I saw so much imagery whilst reading. Love your last lines. 🌹
August 12th, 2025 12:24
Teddy.15 said:
Gorgeous, I saw so much imagery whilst reading. Love your last lines. 🌹
August 12th, 2025 12:24
The Gauntlet
Poetic Licence said:
For some the truth is the ultimate nightmare in each if us, but with yourself and the world you cannot move forward or embrace the world if you do not know the truth, another goodun, enjoyed
August 12th, 2025 11:39
Poetic Licence said:
For some the truth is the ultimate nightmare in each if us, but with yourself and the world you cannot move forward or embrace the world if you do not know the truth, another goodun, enjoyed
August 12th, 2025 11:39
The Gauntlet
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks I\'ve figured out why there\'s such an instinctive familiarity to your lines...like Garrison Keillor, you\'re from the inside, whence you know best how to crucify. And like Keillor, you can laugh loudest at the foibles therein. Excellently rendered with well-nigh exquisite imagery, a haunting poignancy, and a devilish bent. Thank you for sharing.
August 12th, 2025 10:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Methinks I\'ve figured out why there\'s such an instinctive familiarity to your lines...like Garrison Keillor, you\'re from the inside, whence you know best how to crucify. And like Keillor, you can laugh loudest at the foibles therein. Excellently rendered with well-nigh exquisite imagery, a haunting poignancy, and a devilish bent. Thank you for sharing.
August 12th, 2025 10:16
The Gauntlet
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read it thrice. Every time the line \"Every wilderness is a wonder to behold.\" leaped up and said \"realise me\". A wonderful work 🙏
August 12th, 2025 10:09
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I read it thrice. Every time the line \"Every wilderness is a wonder to behold.\" leaped up and said \"realise me\". A wonderful work 🙏
August 12th, 2025 10:09
The Gauntlet
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the truth has a long history in man in general and in each individual. A lovely write that has deep philosophical, religious and psychological implications. Very nice Tristan
August 12th, 2025 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
Fear of the truth has a long history in man in general and in each individual. A lovely write that has deep philosophical, religious and psychological implications. Very nice Tristan
August 12th, 2025 09:35
Broken
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Pulpit pounders pounding righteousness whilst abusing alter boys, orphans in their care and condemning single mothers to the fires of hell. When exposed; punished with a slap on the hand and a transfer by the Holy See. A sad history of, Ireland. Your poem got me all fired up, in how you have expressed it with gusto, hardness and down right anger. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 06:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Pulpit pounders pounding righteousness whilst abusing alter boys, orphans in their care and condemning single mothers to the fires of hell. When exposed; punished with a slap on the hand and a transfer by the Holy See. A sad history of, Ireland. Your poem got me all fired up, in how you have expressed it with gusto, hardness and down right anger. Very well done, my friend.
Wishing you all the very best,
Tony.
August 12th, 2025 06:32
Broken
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve never been a Shepherd nor a sheep, powerful stuff my friend. 🌹
August 12th, 2025 06:23
Teddy.15 said:
I\'ve never been a Shepherd nor a sheep, powerful stuff my friend. 🌹
August 12th, 2025 06:23
Broken
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does our Popeye chat come under \'nasty, naughty, nebulous gossipers\'? lol. I won\'t give any examples here. Oops!
\'Naughty\' has some old-fashioned meanings. There are \'naughty figs\' in the Old Testament. Why? What have they done?! lol.
August 12th, 2025 02:22
orchidee said:
Good write T. Does our Popeye chat come under \'nasty, naughty, nebulous gossipers\'? lol. I won\'t give any examples here. Oops!
\'Naughty\' has some old-fashioned meanings. There are \'naughty figs\' in the Old Testament. Why? What have they done?! lol.
August 12th, 2025 02:22
Broken
arqios said:
Sometimes the loudest voices in faith are the ones furthest from grace. True righteousness isn’t found in gossip or judgment; it’s in quiet integrity, in choosing compassion over spectacle. Let them chase their fix; we’ll hold onto what’s real. Faith, at its core, is less about performance and more about perseverance. Superb poetic effusion 🙏🏻🕊️
August 11th, 2025 23:53
arqios said:
Sometimes the loudest voices in faith are the ones furthest from grace. True righteousness isn’t found in gossip or judgment; it’s in quiet integrity, in choosing compassion over spectacle. Let them chase their fix; we’ll hold onto what’s real. Faith, at its core, is less about performance and more about perseverance. Superb poetic effusion 🙏🏻🕊️
August 11th, 2025 23:53
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