Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Pantoum of Doom
sorenbarrett said:
Not to worry my friend there will be the next bus. There is a feeling of despair in this poem a darkness that pervades doom. So many times I have missed the bus that I arrive early to find that the bus is delayed or broke down. A most poetic write of feelings many carry. Nicely done my friend
October 14th, 2025 08:39
sorenbarrett said:
Not to worry my friend there will be the next bus. There is a feeling of despair in this poem a darkness that pervades doom. So many times I have missed the bus that I arrive early to find that the bus is delayed or broke down. A most poetic write of feelings many carry. Nicely done my friend
October 14th, 2025 08:39
Pantoum of Doom
Friendship said:
Wow, so many feels in this. Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around feelings of despair, disillusionment, and the search for meaning in a seemingly indifferent world. The repeated questioning, \"What is left for us?\" and \"Does anyone care?\" highlights a sense of abandonment and existential angst. The poem reflects on the futility of existence, implying that life can feel like a trap or a cycle of repetitive suffering, as demonstrated by phrases like \"Life\'s an evil stare\" and \"Are we caught unaware?\" The subject matter touches on themes of loss, resignation, and the struggle to find purpose amidst chaos.
October 14th, 2025 08:24
Friendship said:
Wow, so many feels in this. Well written, my friend, your poem revolves around feelings of despair, disillusionment, and the search for meaning in a seemingly indifferent world. The repeated questioning, \"What is left for us?\" and \"Does anyone care?\" highlights a sense of abandonment and existential angst. The poem reflects on the futility of existence, implying that life can feel like a trap or a cycle of repetitive suffering, as demonstrated by phrases like \"Life\'s an evil stare\" and \"Are we caught unaware?\" The subject matter touches on themes of loss, resignation, and the struggle to find purpose amidst chaos.
October 14th, 2025 08:24
Pantoum of Doom
orchidee said:
Dunno, but I thought I missed the No.7 bus. I waited 3 hours then someone passed by and said \'The No.7 bus don\'t run on Sundays now\' Doh!
October 14th, 2025 08:08
orchidee said:
Dunno, but I thought I missed the No.7 bus. I waited 3 hours then someone passed by and said \'The No.7 bus don\'t run on Sundays now\' Doh!
October 14th, 2025 08:08
Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal
sorenbarrett said:
An old story of betrayal of the most sacred, Love. An allegory as well of all cases of deceit in a relationship. Instead of the fires of hell he suffers the literal fires of the eternal flame as she murders him and burns the evidence. The repeating lines emphasize the passion of love and the flames or burning guilt and shame. It is interesting that it is cast in black and white good and evil no middle ground here. A wonderful write my friend.
October 13th, 2025 11:23
sorenbarrett said:
An old story of betrayal of the most sacred, Love. An allegory as well of all cases of deceit in a relationship. Instead of the fires of hell he suffers the literal fires of the eternal flame as she murders him and burns the evidence. The repeating lines emphasize the passion of love and the flames or burning guilt and shame. It is interesting that it is cast in black and white good and evil no middle ground here. A wonderful write my friend.
October 13th, 2025 11:23
Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal
Bella Shepard said:
Devilishly Dreadful, indeed. Your poem and graphic tell the story quite chillingly, with a beguiling twist of fate, which seems its just deserts. Well done!!
October 13th, 2025 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
Devilishly Dreadful, indeed. Your poem and graphic tell the story quite chillingly, with a beguiling twist of fate, which seems its just deserts. Well done!!
October 13th, 2025 11:19
Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan, talk about words written on paper, maybe, or on here🔥, I do love the picture choice, along came a song✨, masterpiece for sure 🤴, hands down 👌🏼👏🏻🥂
October 13th, 2025 11:00
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan, talk about words written on paper, maybe, or on here🔥, I do love the picture choice, along came a song✨, masterpiece for sure 🤴, hands down 👌🏼👏🏻🥂
October 13th, 2025 11:00
Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal
orchidee said:
Popeye flares up at times. What flares up on him? Don\'t answer that! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:20
orchidee said:
Popeye flares up at times. What flares up on him? Don\'t answer that! lol.
October 13th, 2025 10:20
Devilishly Dreadful: The Flames of Betrayal
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around betrayal, love, and the quest for freedom. It explores the complexities of a relationship steeped in racial and social dynamics, illustrating the pain of deceit and the struggle for autonomy. The subject matter focuses on a woman, Ada, who is betrayed by her husband and confronts the harsh realities of her identity as a Black woman in a society that seeks to commodify her.
October 13th, 2025 08:50
Friendship said:
Your poem revolves around betrayal, love, and the quest for freedom. It explores the complexities of a relationship steeped in racial and social dynamics, illustrating the pain of deceit and the struggle for autonomy. The subject matter focuses on a woman, Ada, who is betrayed by her husband and confronts the harsh realities of her identity as a Black woman in a society that seeks to commodify her.
October 13th, 2025 08:50
The Shape of Why
arqios said:
Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device 🙏🏻🕊️
October 12th, 2025 23:58
arqios said:
Like a cryptic crossword, in the middle there. Excellent device 🙏🏻🕊️
October 12th, 2025 23:58
The Shape of Why
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s cryptic and there\'s cryptic and there\'s Tristan Robert Lange🙃😊Almost inclined to go with Popeye, but don\'t know what that\'s about either. I try not to go \'where angels fear to tread\', but I\'ve still got some vision and still am anxious not to miss your gallery and poetic structures.....
October 12th, 2025 23:54
Doggerel Dave said:
There\'s cryptic and there\'s cryptic and there\'s Tristan Robert Lange🙃😊Almost inclined to go with Popeye, but don\'t know what that\'s about either. I try not to go \'where angels fear to tread\', but I\'ve still got some vision and still am anxious not to miss your gallery and poetic structures.....
October 12th, 2025 23:54
The Shape of Why
orchidee said:
Now don\'t answer this, nor finish the sentence - Why did Popeye........?! lol.
October 12th, 2025 11:43
orchidee said:
Now don\'t answer this, nor finish the sentence - Why did Popeye........?! lol.
October 12th, 2025 11:43
The Shape of Why
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this write starts right off with a puzzle and ends with a powerful statement that love won\'t wait. Emotions come and go unlike logic that only slowly erodes with additions to the puzzle with time.
October 12th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this write starts right off with a puzzle and ends with a powerful statement that love won\'t wait. Emotions come and go unlike logic that only slowly erodes with additions to the puzzle with time.
October 12th, 2025 08:40
The Shape of Why
Keyara S Trotman said:
“The Shape of Why”~ the title itself is mysterious, does it not make you think of letter “y” in itself ?
October 12th, 2025 07:34
Keyara S Trotman said:
“The Shape of Why”~ the title itself is mysterious, does it not make you think of letter “y” in itself ?
October 12th, 2025 07:34
The Shape of Why
Keyara S Trotman said:
I definitely loveeeee your picture choice Mr. Tristan. It represents you. The spiraling, etc it’s 👌🏼🥂. Appreciate your words. Your work here is splendid and inspiring work well done. 👏🏻✨
October 12th, 2025 07:32
Keyara S Trotman said:
I definitely loveeeee your picture choice Mr. Tristan. It represents you. The spiraling, etc it’s 👌🏼🥂. Appreciate your words. Your work here is splendid and inspiring work well done. 👏🏻✨
October 12th, 2025 07:32
imbued illumination
Friendship said:
Initially, this format drove me crazy, but I pushed myself to adapt to it. Although I\'m uncertain about the outcome, your poem skillfully explores themes of isolation, existential questioning, and the complexity of human emotions, particularly in the face of suffering and the pursuit of purity. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the search for understanding in a world that seems indifferent to their plight.
October 12th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Initially, this format drove me crazy, but I pushed myself to adapt to it. Although I\'m uncertain about the outcome, your poem skillfully explores themes of isolation, existential questioning, and the complexity of human emotions, particularly in the face of suffering and the pursuit of purity. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the search for understanding in a world that seems indifferent to their plight.
October 12th, 2025 07:17
imbued illumination
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt it was describing how I feel during those extreme emotional short bursts. Some words stretch themselves, finally dissolving into- why were they at all important. I know I got it wrong. But I thought of sharing my unfiltered feeling.
A fave.
October 12th, 2025 07:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt it was describing how I feel during those extreme emotional short bursts. Some words stretch themselves, finally dissolving into- why were they at all important. I know I got it wrong. But I thought of sharing my unfiltered feeling.
A fave.
October 12th, 2025 07:16
imbued illumination
Paul Bell said:
If you were confessing impure thoughts to the priest, you would be doing hail Marys till the day\'s end.
Just remember, you can look, but you cannot touch, well, not to you put a ring on a finger.
Glad, lookings free.
October 12th, 2025 05:49
Paul Bell said:
If you were confessing impure thoughts to the priest, you would be doing hail Marys till the day\'s end.
Just remember, you can look, but you cannot touch, well, not to you put a ring on a finger.
Glad, lookings free.
October 12th, 2025 05:49
imbued illumination
Doggerel Dave said:
A little like my dreams - after they\'ve been extended, distorted, they are often enjoyable in their own right, so I just accept without understanding.
And so it is here. Though I doffs me cap at the amount of energy it must take to construct one of your word, or rather letter sculptures, Tristan.
October 11th, 2025 15:57
Doggerel Dave said:
A little like my dreams - after they\'ve been extended, distorted, they are often enjoyable in their own right, so I just accept without understanding.
And so it is here. Though I doffs me cap at the amount of energy it must take to construct one of your word, or rather letter sculptures, Tristan.
October 11th, 2025 15:57
imbued illumination
Poetic Licence said:
This is only my take, someone is laughing and mocking at the misery (possibly that they have caused), only to happy to highlight it to everyone. Then seen as damaged goods they walk away, apart from that I have no idea!!. A enjoyable mind bender this one
October 11th, 2025 14:59
Poetic Licence said:
This is only my take, someone is laughing and mocking at the misery (possibly that they have caused), only to happy to highlight it to everyone. Then seen as damaged goods they walk away, apart from that I have no idea!!. A enjoyable mind bender this one
October 11th, 2025 14:59
imbued illumination
orchidee said:
Not now Tom! How did he get on here? lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:03
orchidee said:
Not now Tom! How did he get on here? lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:03
imbued illumination
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting shape and manner of format. As direction changes and one letter runs into another. As the use special characters replace a normal letter they take on new meaning. To an obtuse soul like me a bit obscure. Mind provoking none the less. If I were to put myself in the place of the writer with no one touching impurity I would be left a lonely soul with no human touch.
October 11th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting shape and manner of format. As direction changes and one letter runs into another. As the use special characters replace a normal letter they take on new meaning. To an obtuse soul like me a bit obscure. Mind provoking none the less. If I were to put myself in the place of the writer with no one touching impurity I would be left a lonely soul with no human touch.
October 11th, 2025 08:43
Bed of My Beloved
arqios said:
This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you cared” works like a haunting echo, turning tenderness into something macabre. The imagery of coldness, rigor, and ghostly return makes the poem feel like a gothic ballad of love and possession. It’s unsettling, but in the best way possible, the kind of poem that lingers long after reading.
October 10th, 2025 20:25
arqios said:
This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you cared” works like a haunting echo, turning tenderness into something macabre. The imagery of coldness, rigor, and ghostly return makes the poem feel like a gothic ballad of love and possession. It’s unsettling, but in the best way possible, the kind of poem that lingers long after reading.
October 10th, 2025 20:25
Bed of My Beloved
Poetic Licence said:
That is one hell of a way to describe a relationship that died a slow painful death. The coldness and despair that descended on the emotions until everything fell apart. even after experiencing that kind of emotional torment some will still carry the torch of love to their grave and beyond. Right i have finished waffling, great write, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 13:44
Poetic Licence said:
That is one hell of a way to describe a relationship that died a slow painful death. The coldness and despair that descended on the emotions until everything fell apart. even after experiencing that kind of emotional torment some will still carry the torch of love to their grave and beyond. Right i have finished waffling, great write, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 13:44
Bed of My Beloved
Neville said:
I was contemplating trying to poem something witty about form .. but then realised you know far more about that than yours truly .. and so instead I\'ll just nod my head and write Spooky or wot .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤😎now if that aint a murder, I\'ll be flocked .. 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:33
Neville said:
I was contemplating trying to poem something witty about form .. but then realised you know far more about that than yours truly .. and so instead I\'ll just nod my head and write Spooky or wot .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤😎now if that aint a murder, I\'ll be flocked .. 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:33
Grande Gauleiter of Grotesquery
David Hopkins said:
So appropriate for this day of age and I hope the people hear it well …as everyone needs to acknowledge this bad hair day .
October 9th, 2025 20:55
David Hopkins said:
So appropriate for this day of age and I hope the people hear it well …as everyone needs to acknowledge this bad hair day .
October 9th, 2025 20:55
Bed of My Beloved
Doggerel Dave said:
Tristan -when I first looked, I misread ‘ghazal form’ as ‘ghastly form’ 😅(You said it first!)
Do you need me to acknowledge the amount of sweat, energy and time you put into that, me old mate?
October 9th, 2025 17:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Tristan -when I first looked, I misread ‘ghazal form’ as ‘ghastly form’ 😅(You said it first!)
Do you need me to acknowledge the amount of sweat, energy and time you put into that, me old mate?
October 9th, 2025 17:09
Bed of My Beloved
vicecream said:
i love that the order of reflection/ realization seems to be the reverse of how it happened chronologically. really cool!
October 9th, 2025 11:37
vicecream said:
i love that the order of reflection/ realization seems to be the reverse of how it happened chronologically. really cool!
October 9th, 2025 11:37
Bed of My Beloved
orchidee said:
Ohh, she\'s only swooned really - she read a hot poem! heehee.
October 9th, 2025 09:21
orchidee said:
Ohh, she\'s only swooned really - she read a hot poem! heehee.
October 9th, 2025 09:21
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