Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Visions of Death
aDarkerMind said:
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening line
and kept me there throughout.
one to fave for sure.
September 8th, 2024 11:12
aDarkerMind said:
as impressive a write as I have read Tristan.
grabbed me on the opening line
and kept me there throughout.
one to fave for sure.
September 8th, 2024 11:12
Those Who Lie In Wait
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
Cassie58 said:
Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.
September 7th, 2024 09:02
The Tempest\'s Strike
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
Doggerel Dave said:
I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.
September 5th, 2024 21:20
The Tempest\'s Strike
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
orchidee said:
Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.
September 5th, 2024 08:51
The Tempest\'s Strike
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
sorenbarrett said:
Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.
September 5th, 2024 08:19
The Sullen Swimmer
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
Dan Williams said:
Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.
September 2nd, 2024 00:39
The Sullen Swimmer
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.
September 1st, 2024 21:18
The Sullen Swimmer
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
aDarkerMind said:
top marks from me Tristan.
a most impressive write;
September 1st, 2024 12:45
Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
sorenbarrett said:
What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write
August 31st, 2024 09:31
To Sophie
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
orchidee said:
RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.
August 30th, 2024 01:42
To Sophie
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.
August 29th, 2024 20:18
The Endless Muse
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
sorenbarrett said:
Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth
August 26th, 2024 15:59
The Endless Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!
August 26th, 2024 15:34
Meltdown
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
aDarkerMind said:
a most impressive write Tristan.
thoroughly enjoyed the read.
August 25th, 2024 08:21
Meltdown
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!
August 24th, 2024 01:35
Meltdown
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.
August 23rd, 2024 17:07
Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
sorenbarrett said:
It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice
August 23rd, 2024 17:01
An Ode to Heartache
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
sorenbarrett said:
Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice
August 15th, 2024 19:53
An Ode to Heartache
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
Doggerel Dave said:
Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................
August 15th, 2024 18:26
The Planet
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
Doggerel Dave said:
Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.
August 14th, 2024 16:49
The Planet
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
sorenbarrett said:
Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!
August 14th, 2024 13:07
Tomb of Obscurity
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse
August 11th, 2024 12:44
Inclusive
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
jarcher54 said:
At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!
August 8th, 2024 03:43
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