Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Muscle Car
arqios said:
That was my dad’s generation, after the oppression of the 40s they were kings in the late 50s to the mid70s, the muscle car their god of choice. So many memories and psychoanalytic fodder… much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊
April 10th, 2025 21:48
arqios said:
That was my dad’s generation, after the oppression of the 40s they were kings in the late 50s to the mid70s, the muscle car their god of choice. So many memories and psychoanalytic fodder… much enjoyed🙏🏻🕊
April 10th, 2025 21:48
Muscle Car
Cheeky Missy said:
[I just had a ball commenting, and in attempting to eliminate the idiotic slash marks punishing the use of apostrophes, it vaporized in a heartbeat, in lieu of opening the edit page. Being fucked isn\'t fun when you felt inspired. Argh.] What in the world are you about in this pretty number regarding an American classic? Ah, but now I see. That generation gone unto the dogs, there\'s truly naught left but haints to troll the streets and alleyways looking for a place, roaming near and far, displaced by the 80\'s and what followed, til naught but ghosts indeed are at the wheel. Even the Fast and the Furious didn\'t drive that Amer\'can phenomenon. La dee. How delectably rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy I swear is subtly laced by a note of humor. Stupendous. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 18:24
Cheeky Missy said:
[I just had a ball commenting, and in attempting to eliminate the idiotic slash marks punishing the use of apostrophes, it vaporized in a heartbeat, in lieu of opening the edit page. Being fucked isn\'t fun when you felt inspired. Argh.] What in the world are you about in this pretty number regarding an American classic? Ah, but now I see. That generation gone unto the dogs, there\'s truly naught left but haints to troll the streets and alleyways looking for a place, roaming near and far, displaced by the 80\'s and what followed, til naught but ghosts indeed are at the wheel. Even the Fast and the Furious didn\'t drive that Amer\'can phenomenon. La dee. How delectably rendered with superb imagery and a haunting poignancy I swear is subtly laced by a note of humor. Stupendous. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
April 10th, 2025 18:24
Muscle Car
Poetic Licence said:
Killed by there passion, never driven in one, would love to, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 12:07
Poetic Licence said:
Killed by there passion, never driven in one, would love to, enjoyed the read
April 10th, 2025 12:07
Muscle Car
sorenbarrett said:
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with oversized engine he had more speeding tickets than the glovebox could hold. Great poem Tristan
April 10th, 2025 10:57
sorenbarrett said:
My brother was into that type of car making his own funny-car with oversized engine he had more speeding tickets than the glovebox could hold. Great poem Tristan
April 10th, 2025 10:57
The Pecking
Mutley Ravishes said:
Raven and co just keep on pecking! They must be trying to tell us something. I wonder who they work for?
Great write, Tristan.
April 9th, 2025 19:53
Mutley Ravishes said:
Raven and co just keep on pecking! They must be trying to tell us something. I wonder who they work for?
Great write, Tristan.
April 9th, 2025 19:53
Leave Little Room
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easier to tell people to hope than to find some ourselves... you have a few typos (lol)
April 9th, 2025 14:27
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easier to tell people to hope than to find some ourselves... you have a few typos (lol)
April 9th, 2025 14:27
Blind
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, but you must wonder, friend, did you see the knife and ignore it because you felt loved? Beautifully heartbreaking.
April 9th, 2025 14:12
NinjaGirl said:
Ah, but you must wonder, friend, did you see the knife and ignore it because you felt loved? Beautifully heartbreaking.
April 9th, 2025 14:12
The Pecking
Cheeky Missy said:
Pecking order, eh? The messenger with freighted news by the conclusion is an excellent twist, whereas the initial character conjures effigies to haunt the landscape as a deterrence. Fascinating indeed. My, my, my. The few saved shall receive your message who first was misperceived as a pest. Superb! Did I hit the jackpot? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, grand style and effects, and oh me! what a chilling poignancy!
April 9th, 2025 13:35
Cheeky Missy said:
Pecking order, eh? The messenger with freighted news by the conclusion is an excellent twist, whereas the initial character conjures effigies to haunt the landscape as a deterrence. Fascinating indeed. My, my, my. The few saved shall receive your message who first was misperceived as a pest. Superb! Did I hit the jackpot? Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery, grand style and effects, and oh me! what a chilling poignancy!
April 9th, 2025 13:35
The Pecking
Poetic Licence said:
The mind in chaos and darkness being peck at by its thoughts, gaps between the pecks allowing the mind to panic and fear the pecks, aided and abetted by the tools of the poets trade, wonderful write.
April 9th, 2025 11:55
Poetic Licence said:
The mind in chaos and darkness being peck at by its thoughts, gaps between the pecks allowing the mind to panic and fear the pecks, aided and abetted by the tools of the poets trade, wonderful write.
April 9th, 2025 11:55
The Pecking
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
Mourgana of the Fey said:
This poem felt like you have melted crow and raven into one knowing that one day from a Ravens nest transformation might awaken.
I felt there were many other small clues though the quill is one that can be feathered and there were times scribes and poets dipped feathers into ink.
Fountain pens, fountains of words is yet another clue I got from these riddled words.
be well
bright blessings
R
April 9th, 2025 08:45
The Pecking
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
I remember my first typewriter a black Royal that persecuted me with typos and smudged erasure marks, before white out. The carbon copies were the worst. This poem speaks from the dank quarters of the mind of the poet. The pecking seen in the print. Each key a peck and in this poem emphasized by the spaces between in the expanded print. Wondering if those spaces are the mind in blank between thoughts. Raven writer or muse one and the same it speaks out of darkness. Lovely
April 9th, 2025 08:27
The Pecking
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
arqios said:
Using a traditional (black Royal) typewriter makes this even more tactile! Funny I never thought of the writer themselves as the crow; or could it be the Muse, or both? Alter-ego? 🙏🏻🕊
April 9th, 2025 07:31
Blind
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
Demar Desu said:
Why do you copy write your poems? Do you have a LLC for poetry ?
April 8th, 2025 18:27
Blind
arqios said:
And there appears yet again the fine edge of that reckless knife. Saw for the first time today the finished product of a 3D printer and it happened to be a dark rose… what a tandem coincidence, this poem and the printer’s cutting edge. 🕊🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 17:42
arqios said:
And there appears yet again the fine edge of that reckless knife. Saw for the first time today the finished product of a 3D printer and it happened to be a dark rose… what a tandem coincidence, this poem and the printer’s cutting edge. 🕊🙏🏻
April 8th, 2025 17:42
Blind
Cheeky Missy said:
Adroitly twisting at least one word herein, bittersweet brevity sweetly renders an all too common case superbly. Exquisitely painful with gorgeous imagery, how very poignant it is. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Adroitly twisting at least one word herein, bittersweet brevity sweetly renders an all too common case superbly. Exquisitely painful with gorgeous imagery, how very poignant it is. Thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:45
Nightshade
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rather intricately woven to effect, you remind me of how I loved to wander in the moonlit nights, trying for solace therein, but to little effect. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and an haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:43
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and rather intricately woven to effect, you remind me of how I loved to wander in the moonlit nights, trying for solace therein, but to little effect. Beautifully rendered with exquisite imagery and an haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
April 8th, 2025 16:43
Blind
orchidee said:
Well - if ya can do anything about the blindness and darkness - sometimes we can\'t change blindness, but if ya can - switch a light on. Doh! lol. You knew I was gonna say that!
April 8th, 2025 10:58
orchidee said:
Well - if ya can do anything about the blindness and darkness - sometimes we can\'t change blindness, but if ya can - switch a light on. Doh! lol. You knew I was gonna say that!
April 8th, 2025 10:58
Blind
Poetic Licence said:
It initially paints a very vivid image of pain and hurt, but something says there is more tomorrow to this than meets the eye, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
It initially paints a very vivid image of pain and hurt, but something says there is more tomorrow to this than meets the eye, very enjoyable read
April 8th, 2025 10:55
Defy
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again,
While reading the poem I was in for some pending shake ups and felt like becoming part of a storm erupting. There is a lot I can say about this poem but I will save you my looking glass telescopic eye and just lean back letting the poem unfold. Into yet new images, I really like the tree that felt like rooting the piece into solid soil. The end was a yah oh yah part, I defy.....
splendid!
I will surely read more of your works!
April 8th, 2025 09:41
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello again,
While reading the poem I was in for some pending shake ups and felt like becoming part of a storm erupting. There is a lot I can say about this poem but I will save you my looking glass telescopic eye and just lean back letting the poem unfold. Into yet new images, I really like the tree that felt like rooting the piece into solid soil. The end was a yah oh yah part, I defy.....
splendid!
I will surely read more of your works!
April 8th, 2025 09:41
Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
Blind
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
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