Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



1933/2016/2024
Poetic Licence said:

Powerful statement and one i totally agree with, enjoyed the read

January 31st, 2025 11:38

1933/2016/2024
sorenbarrett said:

I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you well. Powerfully written.

January 31st, 2025 09:12

Would It Be?
Tom Dylan said:

Hmmm... a thought-provoking piece. A fine write. Nicely done.

January 31st, 2025 08:35

Would It Be?
arqios said:

It does make one wonder. Almost like the chicken or the egg scenario ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 31st, 2025 08:18

Would It Be?
Dan Williams said:

The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can accept that and reach some level or contentment or struggle flutily against it. Well said.

January 31st, 2025 00:00

Would It Be?
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

January 30th, 2025 20:39

Would It Be?
Thomas W Case said:

Great questions.

January 30th, 2025 19:31

Would It Be?
NinjaGirl said:

to live, to love, to long, to lose ...concern yourself not with what was or what will be... you\'re alive, quite the miracle itself. you have already been born, might as well have fun with it

January 30th, 2025 16:09

Would It Be?
Poetic Licence said:

Well where would you start, so many equations. For me i survived but i would not want to do it again, enjoyed the read

January 30th, 2025 12:11

Would It Be?
Cheeky Missy said:

Depends on what follows, I say. If nothing at all, I\'ve nary use for existing. If what the Scriptures promise, then everything is worth the prize. But enough of me. Charmingly rendered in tantalizing brevity with an almost sneakily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.

January 30th, 2025 12:06

Would It Be?
orchidee said:

What I want to know is - would it have been better in the USA to have trusted someone without such a dodgy barnet (hairstyle), or rug on their head, to lead them? Doh!

January 30th, 2025 10:51

Would It Be?
sorenbarrett said:

Great questions that I am sure have many opinions. As for me I had a good time but wouldn\'t do it again. Fun read

January 30th, 2025 10:31

Would It Be?
Thad Wilk said:

Great read,
thought provoking and
wonderful brevity!! ๐Ÿ’ฏ
At this point it really
doesn\'t matter to me! ๐Ÿ˜Š
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

January 30th, 2025 10:29

Would It Be?
Demar Desu said:

Ah the old age philosophical question. Does it even matterโ€ฆ a great artist I know believed nothing even mattersโ€ฆ shout out to Lauryn Hill

January 30th, 2025 09:19

Echoes of Inevitability
Tom Dylan said:

Wow, a powerful. thought-provoking piece.

January 30th, 2025 05:16

Echoes of Inevitability
Neville said:



Profound but also imminently understandable .. because we see and because poetry allows us to .. Neville

January 30th, 2025 01:41

Echoes of Inevitability
NinjaGirl said:

To love is accepting that one day you will lose, but in the moment you can enjoy their company

January 29th, 2025 19:24

Echoes of Inevitability
Demar Desu said:

Unfortunately

January 29th, 2025 12:58

Echoes of Inevitability
orchidee said:

Then again, some ghouls only turn up at the reading of the Will, hoping to cash in!

January 29th, 2025 12:09

Echoes of Inevitability
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

January 29th, 2025 10:58

Echoes of Inevitability
Poetic Licence said:

This one could easily have many answers, but i have often wondered why people in general only remember the good memories, is it because that is what they remember or are they protecting their own emotions and feelings from the pain. I guess everyone has their own way. Loved reading this and a Fav for today

January 29th, 2025 10:44

Echoes of Inevitability
sorenbarrett said:

A question I have heard form books, films, and many people and all have a different answer. Well expressed in your poem are the different aspects of loss and in fine can we console ourselves with the transcience of life and relationships? Or do we invent ways to hold on through belief, hope and memories. Lovely write

January 29th, 2025 09:05

You
arqios said:

What Iโ€™ve observed in such โ€œentanglement โ€œ is that they choose to be somewhat close by but never participate in or build the other or the relationship, always with the upper hand and most possibly always calling the shots, taking for granted the other who makes up the tandem. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š

January 29th, 2025 08:22

The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
NafisaSB said:

i agree with you - good write
so many amendments, and yet has it brought about positive change ? i wonder

January 29th, 2025 07:35

You
Thad Wilk said:

Awww, a very
touching, poignant ๐Ÿ˜ข
and heart breaking write! ๐Ÿ’”
Skillfully expressed my friend!!๐Ÿ’ฏ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ peace Thad


January 28th, 2025 20:32

You
Mutley Ravishes said:

Have you heard the story of Hakuin (Japanese Zen priest) and the baby he supposedly fathered? That guy was on another level!
If a stranger says something \"hurtful\" to us it\'s not usually such a big deal. If someone we love says it then it\'s a big deal, isn\'t it?! I think this is one of the biggest challenges we face as people. One I still struggle with!

January 28th, 2025 18:30

You
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

January 28th, 2025 15:22

You
NinjaGirl said:

No, they don\'t know how it hurts us

January 28th, 2025 12:14

You
sorenbarrett said:

A poem percieved deprication by one that should be important to the narrator. It speaks to many or our inner selves that feel neglected and overlooked. Nicely written

January 28th, 2025 11:41

You
Poetic Licence said:

This very much reminds me of when i was married, completely unaware of the hurt she was causing, enjoyed the read

January 28th, 2025 09:50



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