Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
It\'s Christmas (or A Christmas Haiku)
Kevin Hulme said:
A wonderful treat indeed.
Nice poem.
January 9th, 2025 20:13
Kevin Hulme said:
A wonderful treat indeed.
Nice poem.
January 9th, 2025 20:13
Twenty-Five
Mutley Ravishes said:
If only I knew then what I....! How I have wished to go back somedays and start again. Then I remembered a priest saying how about this deal? You can go back, but on one condition. You have to live the exact same life again. I think I\'d lose my mind!
Now I feel a rhyme coming on. Great write, Tristan.
January 9th, 2025 18:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
If only I knew then what I....! How I have wished to go back somedays and start again. Then I remembered a priest saying how about this deal? You can go back, but on one condition. You have to live the exact same life again. I think I\'d lose my mind!
Now I feel a rhyme coming on. Great write, Tristan.
January 9th, 2025 18:24
Twenty-Five
arqios said:
You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of Alexandrine 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 17:24
arqios said:
You’ve done the monorhyme justice! And definitely took ownership of Alexandrine 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 9th, 2025 17:24
Twenty-Five
Poetic Licence said:
The things we did not understand or achieve in our younger days, and how we even as we enter older years still be looking to understand that. Enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:12
Poetic Licence said:
The things we did not understand or achieve in our younger days, and how we even as we enter older years still be looking to understand that. Enjoyed the read
January 9th, 2025 12:12
Twenty-Five
LP2187 said:
The dreams we could never accomplish when we were younger, I like the theme on searching for meaning. I love this poem!
January 9th, 2025 12:09
LP2187 said:
The dreams we could never accomplish when we were younger, I like the theme on searching for meaning. I love this poem!
January 9th, 2025 12:09
Twenty-Five
sorenbarrett said:
Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word that one as enough options for rhyme on to finish each line with the same is difficult at best and I have tried some in the past myself. Nicely done
January 9th, 2025 10:05
sorenbarrett said:
Musings of the past? The what ifs in life and the what is. To find a word that one as enough options for rhyme on to finish each line with the same is difficult at best and I have tried some in the past myself. Nicely done
January 9th, 2025 10:05
between
NinjaGirl said:
i really really like this poem, and it really seems that the between changes. sometimes the line between everything and nothing is blurred, and the two worlds seem more like one. have you ever felt absolutely nothing and everything at the same time? and what boundaries are there between the seen and unseen? is wind really all that different from fog?
January 8th, 2025 19:54
NinjaGirl said:
i really really like this poem, and it really seems that the between changes. sometimes the line between everything and nothing is blurred, and the two worlds seem more like one. have you ever felt absolutely nothing and everything at the same time? and what boundaries are there between the seen and unseen? is wind really all that different from fog?
January 8th, 2025 19:54
between
Thad Wilk said:
Another poetic
masterpiece
superbly penned my friend!! 🤩
Captivating and thought
provoking throughout and
I totally enjoyed the read indeed!!🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 18:32
Thad Wilk said:
Another poetic
masterpiece
superbly penned my friend!! 🤩
Captivating and thought
provoking throughout and
I totally enjoyed the read indeed!!🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 8th, 2025 18:32
between
Teddy.15 said:
This is really stunning filled with reflection and emotion. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 12:21
Teddy.15 said:
This is really stunning filled with reflection and emotion. 🌹
January 8th, 2025 12:21
between
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed reading this puzzle, i have read it 3 times and i am still not sure if i would say nothing or everything to all. Great Poem
January 8th, 2025 10:38
Poetic Licence said:
I have enjoyed reading this puzzle, i have read it 3 times and i am still not sure if i would say nothing or everything to all. Great Poem
January 8th, 2025 10:38
between
orchidee said:
There will be serious tut-tuttings in some places, if there is even a whiff of anyone saying \'Wooh!\' or \'Yeah!\' at the end of any particularly joyful hymn or song. And don\'t dare cough or sneeze once during the sermon! lol. I saw the latter as a notice in a convent-cum-church, adding \'sneezing loudly can distract from silent worship\' Doh!
January 8th, 2025 09:44
orchidee said:
There will be serious tut-tuttings in some places, if there is even a whiff of anyone saying \'Wooh!\' or \'Yeah!\' at the end of any particularly joyful hymn or song. And don\'t dare cough or sneeze once during the sermon! lol. I saw the latter as a notice in a convent-cum-church, adding \'sneezing loudly can distract from silent worship\' Doh!
January 8th, 2025 09:44
between
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful poetry. So many of these questions the difference between brilliant and insane, our catigorization in which one must be one or another. I see the world without categories. So there is no distance between. A most beautiful write
January 8th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you have grown very philisophical and versed it in beautiful poetry. So many of these questions the difference between brilliant and insane, our catigorization in which one must be one or another. I see the world without categories. So there is no distance between. A most beautiful write
January 8th, 2025 09:26
Final Retreat
Demar Desu said:
Do you ever do spoken word poetry? I feel like this would be amazing to hear, just as it’s amazing to read
January 7th, 2025 21:43
Demar Desu said:
Do you ever do spoken word poetry? I feel like this would be amazing to hear, just as it’s amazing to read
January 7th, 2025 21:43
Final Retreat
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
What an awesomazing poem,
strong feelings and message.
Poetic perfection, a fight
between dark 🌑 and light! 🦇
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:40
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
What an awesomazing poem,
strong feelings and message.
Poetic perfection, a fight
between dark 🌑 and light! 🦇
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 7th, 2025 20:40
rejected
Dan Williams said:
You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
January 7th, 2025 20:33
Dan Williams said:
You maybe need to rethink your definition of friendship, eh?
January 7th, 2025 20:33
Final Retreat
Mutley Ravishes said:
I read somewhere that the \"law\" is, one must go down before one can rise!
January 7th, 2025 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
I read somewhere that the \"law\" is, one must go down before one can rise!
January 7th, 2025 18:40
Final Retreat
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful poem, it\'s hard to step into the light when it\'s not what we\'re used to. you know, the light always eats the darkness though, darkness cannot overtake light, not unless you surrender
January 7th, 2025 12:08
NinjaGirl said:
Very beautiful poem, it\'s hard to step into the light when it\'s not what we\'re used to. you know, the light always eats the darkness though, darkness cannot overtake light, not unless you surrender
January 7th, 2025 12:08
Final Retreat
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite touching, the battle within of different emotions and the contrast of being in the light yet finding yourself in complete darkness and so much more, very complex piece of writing, thoroughly enjoyable read.
January 7th, 2025 11:11
Poetic Licence said:
I found this quite touching, the battle within of different emotions and the contrast of being in the light yet finding yourself in complete darkness and so much more, very complex piece of writing, thoroughly enjoyable read.
January 7th, 2025 11:11
Final Retreat
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of light and dark where a black hole beyond the event horizon draws light inward to be swallowed in what becomes invisible in its blackness. A conceptual poem of the fight between light and dark and in metaphor good and evil. Great use of dualities
January 7th, 2025 10:17
sorenbarrett said:
The contrast of light and dark where a black hole beyond the event horizon draws light inward to be swallowed in what becomes invisible in its blackness. A conceptual poem of the fight between light and dark and in metaphor good and evil. Great use of dualities
January 7th, 2025 10:17
Final Retreat
orchidee said:
Yep, this is probably existential - if I knew what it meant exactly! heehee. Not to rubbish others comments though.
January 7th, 2025 09:52
orchidee said:
Yep, this is probably existential - if I knew what it meant exactly! heehee. Not to rubbish others comments though.
January 7th, 2025 09:52
Final Retreat
arqios said:
This poem is a powerful exploration of the human condition, touching on themes of courage, pain, and the search for meaning. It resonates with a haunting beauty, capturing the complexity of our emotional and existential struggles.
Thank you for sharing this deeply moving piece. It\'s an evocative and thought-provoking reflection on the interplay between light and darkness, hope and despair. And did I say, quite moving!? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 7th, 2025 09:42
arqios said:
This poem is a powerful exploration of the human condition, touching on themes of courage, pain, and the search for meaning. It resonates with a haunting beauty, capturing the complexity of our emotional and existential struggles.
Thank you for sharing this deeply moving piece. It\'s an evocative and thought-provoking reflection on the interplay between light and darkness, hope and despair. And did I say, quite moving!? 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 7th, 2025 09:42
Final Retreat
rin said:
I think the process of a person\'s heart becoming insane is beautiful. I can\'t really put it into words, but that\'s how it feels.
January 7th, 2025 09:41
rin said:
I think the process of a person\'s heart becoming insane is beautiful. I can\'t really put it into words, but that\'s how it feels.
January 7th, 2025 09:41
rejected
Cassie58 said:
A senryu. A sad one. You always get rejected? Dear Tristen, you come across as mighty popular on MPS? I hope this isn’t about you.
January 7th, 2025 01:48
Cassie58 said:
A senryu. A sad one. You always get rejected? Dear Tristen, you come across as mighty popular on MPS? I hope this isn’t about you.
January 7th, 2025 01:48
rejected
Kevin Hulme said:
The People who reject you, What’s wrong with them I would say.
January 6th, 2025 21:58
Kevin Hulme said:
The People who reject you, What’s wrong with them I would say.
January 6th, 2025 21:58
rejected
Thad Wilk said:
A poignant
and touching senryu! 😢
So sad to be rejected
that\'s so true!☹️
Thank you for sharing
much enjoyed thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
A poignant
and touching senryu! 😢
So sad to be rejected
that\'s so true!☹️
Thank you for sharing
much enjoyed thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:38
rejected
NinjaGirl said:
I say you have a lot of friends here! the missing puzzle piece is in others, not yourself
January 6th, 2025 20:55
NinjaGirl said:
I say you have a lot of friends here! the missing puzzle piece is in others, not yourself
January 6th, 2025 20:55
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