Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Sullen Swimmer
Salvia.S said:
This poem effectively conveys a feeling of quiet isolation. The language is expressive, and the mood is consistent throughout. It’s a thoughtful and engaging piece. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️ A fave ❤️
September 11th, 2025 22:37
Salvia.S said:
This poem effectively conveys a feeling of quiet isolation. The language is expressive, and the mood is consistent throughout. It’s a thoughtful and engaging piece. Well done dearest Tittu 🌹❤️ A fave ❤️
September 11th, 2025 22:37
Under the Corn Moon Spell
Salvia.S said:
I absolutely love this poem — it resonated with me on such a deep level. The atmosphere, the raw emotion, the haunting transformation… it all comes together in such a powerful, unforgettable way. The final lines especially gave me chills — that twist with the blood-red moon being your own eyes is just brilliant. This isn’t just a poem; it feels like a dark myth or a vivid nightmare come to life. Truly unforgettable. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹❤️ A fave for sure!!!!
September 11th, 2025 22:32
Salvia.S said:
I absolutely love this poem — it resonated with me on such a deep level. The atmosphere, the raw emotion, the haunting transformation… it all comes together in such a powerful, unforgettable way. The final lines especially gave me chills — that twist with the blood-red moon being your own eyes is just brilliant. This isn’t just a poem; it feels like a dark myth or a vivid nightmare come to life. Truly unforgettable. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹❤️ A fave for sure!!!!
September 11th, 2025 22:32
In This Land
arqios said:
I must have jumped the gun on #tbt (throwback Thursday) with posting up \"the old home\" and \"child, ONE child.\" 🤣 This unflinching lament from 2011, is built on a chain of rhetorical questions and stark imagery that interrogates the human condition. It features a tone of relentless pessimism yet, its very persistence suggests a refusal to be numbed, making it both a cry for meaning as well as a declaration of despair.
September 11th, 2025 18:51
arqios said:
I must have jumped the gun on #tbt (throwback Thursday) with posting up \"the old home\" and \"child, ONE child.\" 🤣 This unflinching lament from 2011, is built on a chain of rhetorical questions and stark imagery that interrogates the human condition. It features a tone of relentless pessimism yet, its very persistence suggests a refusal to be numbed, making it both a cry for meaning as well as a declaration of despair.
September 11th, 2025 18:51
In This Land
NinjaGirl said:
Honestly, while I agree with this interpretation, I also find it comforting that there is a constant in life.
September 11th, 2025 18:15
NinjaGirl said:
Honestly, while I agree with this interpretation, I also find it comforting that there is a constant in life.
September 11th, 2025 18:15
In This Land
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So much truth and knowledge here. Heavy hearts today for so many. Great write my friend 🙏
September 11th, 2025 17:21
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
So much truth and knowledge here. Heavy hearts today for so many. Great write my friend 🙏
September 11th, 2025 17:21
In This Land
Teddy.15 said:
We are now closer to world war 3 than we have ever been, this world is a dark place right now, and it\'s not just in America that theirs a great divide it\'s also in Europe. A profoundly powerful piece of poetry 🌹
September 11th, 2025 11:12
Teddy.15 said:
We are now closer to world war 3 than we have ever been, this world is a dark place right now, and it\'s not just in America that theirs a great divide it\'s also in Europe. A profoundly powerful piece of poetry 🌹
September 11th, 2025 11:12
In This Land
orchidee said:
In this land... lives Obi & Co. Well, Popeye had enough mentions. What do they do in the land? Don\'t answer that! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:58
orchidee said:
In this land... lives Obi & Co. Well, Popeye had enough mentions. What do they do in the land? Don\'t answer that! lol.
September 11th, 2025 10:58
In This Land
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem with some great lines and concepts. One that stands out particularly to me is:
Who\'s free while still entombed?
Whose fears ever find release?
We are all exiled from the womb.
Death owns us, we have no peace.
Very nicely worded my friend
September 11th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful poem with some great lines and concepts. One that stands out particularly to me is:
Who\'s free while still entombed?
Whose fears ever find release?
We are all exiled from the womb.
Death owns us, we have no peace.
Very nicely worded my friend
September 11th, 2025 08:44
Original Sin
NafisaSB said:
it is true that there are some such who breathe fire on all ordinary mortals with sad results
beautifully explained
September 11th, 2025 00:52
NafisaSB said:
it is true that there are some such who breathe fire on all ordinary mortals with sad results
beautifully explained
September 11th, 2025 00:52
Under the Corn Moon Spell
Tom Dylan said:
A great write, love the way its laid out on the page.
September 10th, 2025 06:11
Tom Dylan said:
A great write, love the way its laid out on the page.
September 10th, 2025 06:11
Under the Corn Moon Spell
NinjaGirl said:
That\'s a pretty sweet photo! I love the way you experiment with shape and form. There\'s always something most haunting from nature...
September 9th, 2025 19:50
NinjaGirl said:
That\'s a pretty sweet photo! I love the way you experiment with shape and form. There\'s always something most haunting from nature...
September 9th, 2025 19:50
Under the Corn Moon Spell
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan this gave me goosebumps, I also took loads of photos but here in Italy I saw the eclipse but not the red moon. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 15:38
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan this gave me goosebumps, I also took loads of photos but here in Italy I saw the eclipse but not the red moon. 🌹
September 9th, 2025 15:38
Under the Corn Moon Spell
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
Honestly, I didn\'t try to analyse this. I really enjoyed it for what it is; a poem full of the horrors of night. Obviously you are in your element for it is brilliantly composed. If I can\'t sleep tonight, it\'s your fault.
Sweet dreams?
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:54
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
Honestly, I didn\'t try to analyse this. I really enjoyed it for what it is; a poem full of the horrors of night. Obviously you are in your element for it is brilliantly composed. If I can\'t sleep tonight, it\'s your fault.
Sweet dreams?
Tony.
September 9th, 2025 10:54
Under the Corn Moon Spell
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about my corn - corny - jokes! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:53
orchidee said:
I thought this was gonna be about my corn - corny - jokes! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:53
Under the Corn Moon Spell
Friendship said:
Wow, an amazing poem, my friend. This poem explores themes of fear, mortality, and the struggle between the natural and the supernatural. It presents a vivid confrontation with death and the primal instincts that arise in the face of existential dread. It is set against the imagery of a dark, foreboding night under a full moon, where the poet experiences a transformative encounter with death, embodied as a predator. The poem evokes feelings of terror and vulnerability, highlighting the fragility of existence.
September 9th, 2025 10:50
Friendship said:
Wow, an amazing poem, my friend. This poem explores themes of fear, mortality, and the struggle between the natural and the supernatural. It presents a vivid confrontation with death and the primal instincts that arise in the face of existential dread. It is set against the imagery of a dark, foreboding night under a full moon, where the poet experiences a transformative encounter with death, embodied as a predator. The poem evokes feelings of terror and vulnerability, highlighting the fragility of existence.
September 9th, 2025 10:50
Original Sin
orchidee said:
Oops! Sent empty message by mistake. So I didn\'t answer that! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
Oops! Sent empty message by mistake. So I didn\'t answer that! lol.
September 9th, 2025 10:47
Under the Corn Moon Spell
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Took me three reads to crystalize the impression it left on my mind.
I felt ( I am sure quite erroneously) it depicted the visceral process of loss of innocence as we grow up. It almost drew the picture of struggle...
September 9th, 2025 08:57
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Took me three reads to crystalize the impression it left on my mind.
I felt ( I am sure quite erroneously) it depicted the visceral process of loss of innocence as we grow up. It almost drew the picture of struggle...
September 9th, 2025 08:57
Under the Corn Moon Spell
2781 said:
We had a blood moon Saturday or Sunday night?
I slept through it!
September 9th, 2025 08:06
2781 said:
We had a blood moon Saturday or Sunday night?
I slept through it!
September 9th, 2025 08:06
Under the Corn Moon Spell
sorenbarrett said:
Harrowing, haunting, hair raising a poem of darkness with things that go bump in the night. It holds the feeling of fear and trepidation. Nicely penned with great experimental formatting.
September 9th, 2025 06:24
sorenbarrett said:
Harrowing, haunting, hair raising a poem of darkness with things that go bump in the night. It holds the feeling of fear and trepidation. Nicely penned with great experimental formatting.
September 9th, 2025 06:24
The Usurper\'s Call
NinjaGirl said:
A good arrogant character, well-written
September 8th, 2025 18:35
NinjaGirl said:
A good arrogant character, well-written
September 8th, 2025 18:35
The Usurper\'s Call
Friendship said:
The poem reflects on the dangers of false humility and the hypocrisy that can arise in the guise of spiritual or moral superiority. It critiques individuals who occupy positions of authority or influence while lacking genuine virtue, ultimately suggesting that such pretentiousness will lead to a downfall
September 8th, 2025 15:30
Friendship said:
The poem reflects on the dangers of false humility and the hypocrisy that can arise in the guise of spiritual or moral superiority. It critiques individuals who occupy positions of authority or influence while lacking genuine virtue, ultimately suggesting that such pretentiousness will lead to a downfall
September 8th, 2025 15:30
The Usurper\'s Call
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love the clever wordplay and ironic tone very impactful. Sharp imagery ‘riding atop a horse named Grace’ is brilliant!”
September 8th, 2025 12:29
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
I love the clever wordplay and ironic tone very impactful. Sharp imagery ‘riding atop a horse named Grace’ is brilliant!”
September 8th, 2025 12:29
The Usurper\'s Call
sorenbarrett said:
Hanging humility on the loose nail of pretense often results in one\'s pants falling down. A fun read Tristan with more metaphor than I was in for. Well penned my friend
September 8th, 2025 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
Hanging humility on the loose nail of pretense often results in one\'s pants falling down. A fun read Tristan with more metaphor than I was in for. Well penned my friend
September 8th, 2025 07:51
The Usurper\'s Call
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s not usurped anything. He\'s had it from the start. Had what? Don\'t answer that of course! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:37
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s not usurped anything. He\'s had it from the start. Had what? Don\'t answer that of course! lol.
September 8th, 2025 07:37
The Usurper\'s Call
arqios said:
Nice one! With Grace as a horse, how would we handle her and for how long? Very interesting to follow the thinking trail here. 🕊️🙏
September 8th, 2025 07:29
arqios said:
Nice one! With Grace as a horse, how would we handle her and for how long? Very interesting to follow the thinking trail here. 🕊️🙏
September 8th, 2025 07:29
Original Sin
Neville said:
Very well through and executed my friend .. it say\'s it exactly as it is .. n that\'s most probably a fact .. Neville 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤👍
September 8th, 2025 05:30
Neville said:
Very well through and executed my friend .. it say\'s it exactly as it is .. n that\'s most probably a fact .. Neville 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤👍
September 8th, 2025 05:30
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