Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Epiclesis
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully written write, the transformative power of power and truth to help face and conquer ones demons, in the journey to find inner peace and calm , so well written, enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 08:36
Poetic Licence said:
What a wonderfully written write, the transformative power of power and truth to help face and conquer ones demons, in the journey to find inner peace and calm , so well written, enjoyed
July 20th, 2025 08:36
Epiclesis
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem \"Epiclesis\" masterfully reveals the profoundly transformative power of divine love and spiritual awakening, illuminating the triumphant journey from despair to enlightenment. It thoughtfully underscores the imperative of confronting one\'s inner void to attain renewal and a deeply meaningful connection with a higher truth. The poet extends an inspiring invitation to confront one\'s inner void and wholeheartedly embrace the transformative power of love and truth. It gently yet persuasively suggests that neglecting this journey is a disservice to oneself, encouraging readers to seek enlightenment and a profound connection with the divine.
July 20th, 2025 08:21
Friendship said:
Well-written, your poem \"Epiclesis\" masterfully reveals the profoundly transformative power of divine love and spiritual awakening, illuminating the triumphant journey from despair to enlightenment. It thoughtfully underscores the imperative of confronting one\'s inner void to attain renewal and a deeply meaningful connection with a higher truth. The poet extends an inspiring invitation to confront one\'s inner void and wholeheartedly embrace the transformative power of love and truth. It gently yet persuasively suggests that neglecting this journey is a disservice to oneself, encouraging readers to seek enlightenment and a profound connection with the divine.
July 20th, 2025 08:21
Epiclesis
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem of contemplation and inner peace, may we all find it.
July 20th, 2025 08:06
Bella Shepard said:
A beautiful poem of contemplation and inner peace, may we all find it.
July 20th, 2025 08:06
Epiclesis
Priya Tomar said:
Profound metaphor for inner transformation.
Nice to read it.
July 20th, 2025 07:10
Priya Tomar said:
Profound metaphor for inner transformation.
Nice to read it.
July 20th, 2025 07:10
Something in the Mind
Demar Desu said:
I respect your consistency… it only makes me want to be more consistent!
July 19th, 2025 17:36
Demar Desu said:
I respect your consistency… it only makes me want to be more consistent!
July 19th, 2025 17:36
My Dream
Cheeky Missy said:
You wrote this, this irresistible beauty when you were 14?! I had my first \"official\" boyfriend when I was only 14, nor did I compose more than bitty stanzas and light poems when I was 14. Impressive! Wow. This pretty number, this invitation, this plea for purity rendered frankly in delicious simplicity with excellent imagery, has a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, LOVE it. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
July 19th, 2025 12:22
Cheeky Missy said:
You wrote this, this irresistible beauty when you were 14?! I had my first \"official\" boyfriend when I was only 14, nor did I compose more than bitty stanzas and light poems when I was 14. Impressive! Wow. This pretty number, this invitation, this plea for purity rendered frankly in delicious simplicity with excellent imagery, has a deeply haunting poignancy. I love, love, LOVE it. Thank you so very much for sharing. I love it.
July 19th, 2025 12:22
Something in the Mind
orchidee said:
How is Popeye\'s life going these days? lol. Erm, best not answer that? lol.
July 19th, 2025 01:46
orchidee said:
How is Popeye\'s life going these days? lol. Erm, best not answer that? lol.
July 19th, 2025 01:46
Something in the Mind
Keeter C said:
Some times leave the ones you love
Cleave to those that worry and build you.
July 18th, 2025 15:51
Keeter C said:
Some times leave the ones you love
Cleave to those that worry and build you.
July 18th, 2025 15:51
Something in the Mind
Damaso said:
Wow, friend, what a great song! I love that chorus, exploding with the distorted guitar and the totally raw and rebellious lyrics. It\'s incredible. Congratulations. Thanks so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 18th, 2025 13:03
Damaso said:
Wow, friend, what a great song! I love that chorus, exploding with the distorted guitar and the totally raw and rebellious lyrics. It\'s incredible. Congratulations. Thanks so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 18th, 2025 13:03
Something in the Mind
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
From the hip and with gusto as if composed in a fit of pique. Great song, great voice and great music, especially the intro - loved it. Much praise for this one.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 12:13
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
From the hip and with gusto as if composed in a fit of pique. Great song, great voice and great music, especially the intro - loved it. Much praise for this one.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 12:13
Something in the Mind
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes the darker side is that of truth life isn\'t all roses and diamonds and you show and share with such talent, wonderful lyrics my dear Tristan. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 12:07
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes the darker side is that of truth life isn\'t all roses and diamonds and you show and share with such talent, wonderful lyrics my dear Tristan. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 12:07
Something in the Mind
Poetic Licence said:
You did live in a dark world back in the day, and when you are there it feels like death is playing with you, it takes hold and squeezes but never enough for it to be final, nicely expressed and written and sung
July 18th, 2025 11:58
Poetic Licence said:
You did live in a dark world back in the day, and when you are there it feels like death is playing with you, it takes hold and squeezes but never enough for it to be final, nicely expressed and written and sung
July 18th, 2025 11:58
Something in the Mind
Priya Tomar said:
Lovely !
Ultimately death is the harsh truth....
Your word play loveable.
July 18th, 2025 11:11
Priya Tomar said:
Lovely !
Ultimately death is the harsh truth....
Your word play loveable.
July 18th, 2025 11:11
Something in the Mind
sorenbarrett said:
And so it does around all of us sooner or later in live\'s game of tag. A suddery poem for a weekend. Lovely
July 18th, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
And so it does around all of us sooner or later in live\'s game of tag. A suddery poem for a weekend. Lovely
July 18th, 2025 09:46
My Dream
Damaso said:
Passionate and sincere, a long-cherished dream that manifests itself. I enjoyed it very much. I hope the character comes to fruition. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 17:48
Damaso said:
Passionate and sincere, a long-cherished dream that manifests itself. I enjoyed it very much. I hope the character comes to fruition. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 17:48
My Dream
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The innocence of a young lad\'s dream seeking the feminine heart for companionship. To wonder, where is she now, what colour are her eyes, her hair, where is she from, her music, the books she reads but no need for answers - it\'s the beauty of the dream, the excitement and adventure in the wonderings. A lovely, lovely poem and a complete joy to read.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:56
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The innocence of a young lad\'s dream seeking the feminine heart for companionship. To wonder, where is she now, what colour are her eyes, her hair, where is she from, her music, the books she reads but no need for answers - it\'s the beauty of the dream, the excitement and adventure in the wonderings. A lovely, lovely poem and a complete joy to read.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:56
My Dream
orchidee said:
A fine write T, without reference to Tom, Popeye, Obi, or.......... whowver. lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:21
orchidee said:
A fine write T, without reference to Tom, Popeye, Obi, or.......... whowver. lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:21
My Dream
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A throw back that is well written even then.
July 17th, 2025 10:03
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A throw back that is well written even then.
July 17th, 2025 10:03
My Dream
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
Lyrical love song .
It is not your story but for all young .
Your writing style is very lovely . Your questioning heart touching
July 17th, 2025 09:27
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
Lyrical love song .
It is not your story but for all young .
Your writing style is very lovely . Your questioning heart touching
July 17th, 2025 09:27
My Dream
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem you spoke from your heart, even as in your youth. I think we all have been there in our youth - the desire, the dreams, the compassion, the love that we wanted, and yet I could feel it even to this day. Well written, my friend. Your poem serves as a powerful exploration of desire and the complexities of romantic longing, illuminating the human quest for connection and the pursuit of dreams. It resonates deeply with anyone who has experienced the transformative power of unfulfilled desire or idealized love. The poet serves as a beacon of hope, exploring the intricate dance between dreams and reality, and the profound human longing for connection. It inspires anyone who has ever experienced the bittersweet nature of unfulfilled desire or the redemptive power of idealized love.
July 17th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem you spoke from your heart, even as in your youth. I think we all have been there in our youth - the desire, the dreams, the compassion, the love that we wanted, and yet I could feel it even to this day. Well written, my friend. Your poem serves as a powerful exploration of desire and the complexities of romantic longing, illuminating the human quest for connection and the pursuit of dreams. It resonates deeply with anyone who has experienced the transformative power of unfulfilled desire or idealized love. The poet serves as a beacon of hope, exploring the intricate dance between dreams and reality, and the profound human longing for connection. It inspires anyone who has ever experienced the bittersweet nature of unfulfilled desire or the redemptive power of idealized love.
July 17th, 2025 08:45
My Dream
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed poem .. think we all need a connection .. friendship / relationships etc
I guess sometimes people might feel like there’s someone’s out there for them .. but they havnt met them yet .
Soulmates / twin flames ..soul connections etc
A good writing ..
July 17th, 2025 08:35
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed poem .. think we all need a connection .. friendship / relationships etc
I guess sometimes people might feel like there’s someone’s out there for them .. but they havnt met them yet .
Soulmates / twin flames ..soul connections etc
A good writing ..
July 17th, 2025 08:35
My Dream
Poetic Licence said:
Many a youth has felt the same, wanting contact z love, care, sex, forgetting they have a whole life a head, they what it now, I am even today they do the same, hope your dream arrived eventually, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:35
Poetic Licence said:
Many a youth has felt the same, wanting contact z love, care, sex, forgetting they have a whole life a head, they what it now, I am even today they do the same, hope your dream arrived eventually, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:35
My Dream
arqios said:
This poem is not just a romantic longing, but as a raw emotional artefact: a snapshot if you will of a young person reaching out from a place of isolation, yearning not for physicality, but for intimacy, connection, and presence. This is superbly resonant and relatable. This comment is also hoped to express a deep honouring of the courage it took to share it.
July 17th, 2025 08:24
arqios said:
This poem is not just a romantic longing, but as a raw emotional artefact: a snapshot if you will of a young person reaching out from a place of isolation, yearning not for physicality, but for intimacy, connection, and presence. This is superbly resonant and relatable. This comment is also hoped to express a deep honouring of the courage it took to share it.
July 17th, 2025 08:24
My Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from youth that echoes the feelings of many at that age. A call for a fantasy or intimacy deeper than sex more profound than puppy love. Here I hear a search for a soulmate a piece of oneself. Very nicely written for a youth of that age. Loved it Tristan
July 17th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from youth that echoes the feelings of many at that age. A call for a fantasy or intimacy deeper than sex more profound than puppy love. Here I hear a search for a soulmate a piece of oneself. Very nicely written for a youth of that age. Loved it Tristan
July 17th, 2025 08:00
My Dream
Teddy.15 said:
In 1992 I was 18 and experiencing my first love which well and truly sucked 🤣 this is like I want to scream at my computer? Did you find her???????? I hope you did. I felt a song in here, some great lyrics for a love song. 💜
July 17th, 2025 07:53
Teddy.15 said:
In 1992 I was 18 and experiencing my first love which well and truly sucked 🤣 this is like I want to scream at my computer? Did you find her???????? I hope you did. I felt a song in here, some great lyrics for a love song. 💜
July 17th, 2025 07:53
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