Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Fall Vespers
arqios said:
So true about that closeness/nearness at certain points in time/seasons! 👍🏻🤩🙏🏻🕊️
October 3rd, 2026 07:20
arqios said:
So true about that closeness/nearness at certain points in time/seasons! 👍🏻🤩🙏🏻🕊️
October 3rd, 2026 07:20
Fall Vespers
sorenbarrett said:
So short but lovely in wording and feeling. This one hits home
October 3rd, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
So short but lovely in wording and feeling. This one hits home
October 3rd, 2026 06:46
Hooking the Looking Glass
Paul Bell said:
I suppose when you start with the basis, everyone is forgiven, it opens the door to the dark.
In saying that, the church has looked after itself for thousands of years, and you don\'t do that without someone dying.
October 3rd, 2026 04:13
Paul Bell said:
I suppose when you start with the basis, everyone is forgiven, it opens the door to the dark.
In saying that, the church has looked after itself for thousands of years, and you don\'t do that without someone dying.
October 3rd, 2026 04:13
Hooking the Looking Glass
arqios said:
Historically, institutional hypocrisy trumps religion itself. What makes it so intense is that the primary internal mechanism of religion is the most intimate expression of the inner self in both personal and societal milieus.
October 2nd, 2026 16:56
arqios said:
Historically, institutional hypocrisy trumps religion itself. What makes it so intense is that the primary internal mechanism of religion is the most intimate expression of the inner self in both personal and societal milieus.
October 2nd, 2026 16:56
Hooking the Looking Glass
Teddy.15 said:
Devilishly dreadful indeed, hey you should know Steven King this is haunting. 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 13:58
Teddy.15 said:
Devilishly dreadful indeed, hey you should know Steven King this is haunting. 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 13:58
Hooking the Looking Glass
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most finely put my friend
October 2nd, 2026 11:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most finely put my friend
October 2nd, 2026 11:34
Hooking the Looking Glass
Salvia.S said:
Love the title \" Hooking\" the Looking Glass\", not just looking. Like you\'re forcing it to see. The last 2 lines stayed with me. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 11:13
Salvia.S said:
Love the title \" Hooking\" the Looking Glass\", not just looking. Like you\'re forcing it to see. The last 2 lines stayed with me. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 11:13
Hooking the Looking Glass
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now a horror story about spinach, knitting needles, and sabres. Or a film starring........ oh, we knows them! lol.
October 2nd, 2026 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now a horror story about spinach, knitting needles, and sabres. Or a film starring........ oh, we knows them! lol.
October 2nd, 2026 11:12
Hooking the Looking Glass
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now this one can be taken two ways my friend. Were the devils residents welcome in the church before the destruction or did the church bring on the tempest to rid itself of them. A good read Tristan
October 2nd, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now this one can be taken two ways my friend. Were the devils residents welcome in the church before the destruction or did the church bring on the tempest to rid itself of them. A good read Tristan
October 2nd, 2026 10:36
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh. I\'m with Tony (above) here. I have a frozen right shoulder which sends my head and kneck to the riight where they get buffeted by a permant twitch.
Lighten up a little, please Tristan...🙃
October 1st, 2026 20:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh. I\'m with Tony (above) here. I have a frozen right shoulder which sends my head and kneck to the riight where they get buffeted by a permant twitch.
Lighten up a little, please Tristan...🙃
October 1st, 2026 20:39
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Tony Grannell said:
Enough of this now, Tristan, I nearly soiled myself. Yoy\'re too good at this, such horror, a creeping horror and no let up, no popcorn break. I\'m out of here!
Fond regards from under the bed,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:13
Tony Grannell said:
Enough of this now, Tristan, I nearly soiled myself. Yoy\'re too good at this, such horror, a creeping horror and no let up, no popcorn break. I\'m out of here!
Fond regards from under the bed,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:13
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year again when the heavy machine gun comes out.
They keep saying you can\'t kill a Zombie, but that doesn\'t mean I shouldn\'t try.
Mind you, could kill them with sugar with the amount of sweeties they get.
October 1st, 2026 14:34
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year again when the heavy machine gun comes out.
They keep saying you can\'t kill a Zombie, but that doesn\'t mean I shouldn\'t try.
Mind you, could kill them with sugar with the amount of sweeties they get.
October 1st, 2026 14:34
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Teddy.15 said:
Move over blare witch project here come Tristan 🤣 what a spooky read my friend. Loved your ending it\'s hilarious! 🌹
October 1st, 2026 13:24
Teddy.15 said:
Move over blare witch project here come Tristan 🤣 what a spooky read my friend. Loved your ending it\'s hilarious! 🌹
October 1st, 2026 13:24
The Last Trick-or-Treater
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s in on it too of course, with the green stuff - spinach - and scaring us with glugging sounds! lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s in on it too of course, with the green stuff - spinach - and scaring us with glugging sounds! lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:17
The Last Trick-or-Treater
arqios said:
Oh it’s that month again. The shops are beginning to display their ghoulish stock, again!
October 1st, 2026 08:13
arqios said:
Oh it’s that month again. The shops are beginning to display their ghoulish stock, again!
October 1st, 2026 08:13
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn nasty Halloween turn here, because the poem keeps shifting the reader’s perception from ordinary shadows and tricks of the dark toward something increasingly personal and genuinely horrifying. The final reveal is the killer—after all the red eyes, dead voices, and green teeth, discovering that the thing on the porch is the very person he buried gives the whole poem one hell of a satisfying, macabre snap.
October 1st, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn nasty Halloween turn here, because the poem keeps shifting the reader’s perception from ordinary shadows and tricks of the dark toward something increasingly personal and genuinely horrifying. The final reveal is the killer—after all the red eyes, dead voices, and green teeth, discovering that the thing on the porch is the very person he buried gives the whole poem one hell of a satisfying, macabre snap.
October 1st, 2026 07:53
The Last Trick-or-Treater
sorenbarrett said:
The question Tristan is whether the one buried is friend or foe, a real or imagined soul, one once out or within. A lovely start to that month of Halloween
October 1st, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
The question Tristan is whether the one buried is friend or foe, a real or imagined soul, one once out or within. A lovely start to that month of Halloween
October 1st, 2026 07:42
The Last Trick-or-Treater
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I bet theres a few under the porches my friend, enjoyed
October 1st, 2026 07:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I bet theres a few under the porches my friend, enjoyed
October 1st, 2026 07:36
anyway
arqios said:
Much like the anticlimax and the antihero, the anti-celebration! 👍🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 17:51
arqios said:
Much like the anticlimax and the antihero, the anti-celebration! 👍🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 17:51
the fading
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
the fading
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
the fading
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
the fading
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
the fading
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
anyway
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
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