Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Exorcist
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
The Exorcist
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery in this dark but positive write, to dispel the evil once and for all, great write, very enjoyable
June 27th, 2025 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery in this dark but positive write, to dispel the evil once and for all, great write, very enjoyable
June 27th, 2025 09:25
The Exorcist
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve successfully woven an intricate tapestry concocted as an exorcism in and of itself which yet mystifies me. Fascinating, and intriguing the while it seems familiar, beautifully rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 09:11
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve successfully woven an intricate tapestry concocted as an exorcism in and of itself which yet mystifies me. Fascinating, and intriguing the while it seems familiar, beautifully rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 09:11
The Exorcist
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the demonic it gives a magical mantra to expel the evil. Nicely worded and clearly imaged in vivid forms. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the demonic it gives a magical mantra to expel the evil. Nicely worded and clearly imaged in vivid forms. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 08:08
Forever Breaking Through
arqios said:
This poem hits like a citrus shot to the soul; sharp, electric, immediate. The language punches through pretence, demanding authenticity in a world slick with masks and synthetic sweetness. It’s rebellion wrapped in brightness: “Smile, / Shine your lemon peel,” suggests not just resilience but defiant joy, like daring to be zesty in a system that wants bland. Here is a response in verse for your enjoyment: “Peel Back the Neon”
Spit shine the bitter truth— no sugar coat, no soft landing.
The real rolls in like thunder wearing citrus and static.
We bite back with tongues dyed bright.
Laugh lines splitting through fluorescent doubt.
No algorithm knows how hard we hit when we hit with nothing to prove.
Peel back the neon skin— under it: something too loud to fake.
June 26th, 2025 18:50
arqios said:
This poem hits like a citrus shot to the soul; sharp, electric, immediate. The language punches through pretence, demanding authenticity in a world slick with masks and synthetic sweetness. It’s rebellion wrapped in brightness: “Smile, / Shine your lemon peel,” suggests not just resilience but defiant joy, like daring to be zesty in a system that wants bland. Here is a response in verse for your enjoyment: “Peel Back the Neon”
Spit shine the bitter truth— no sugar coat, no soft landing.
The real rolls in like thunder wearing citrus and static.
We bite back with tongues dyed bright.
Laugh lines splitting through fluorescent doubt.
No algorithm knows how hard we hit when we hit with nothing to prove.
Peel back the neon skin— under it: something too loud to fake.
June 26th, 2025 18:50
Forever Breaking Through
orchidee said:
Ohhhh, only one thing to say to this - F, F, F, and, F, and.....steady on, says Fido! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:44
orchidee said:
Ohhhh, only one thing to say to this - F, F, F, and, F, and.....steady on, says Fido! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:44
The P\'s of Poetry
Salvia.S said:
This is so a powerful and creative !!!! The use of the letter \"P\" is clever and gives it a nice rhythm. Each line shows a different side of what poetry can be. It\'s thoughtful and interesting. Very well written dear Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
June 26th, 2025 11:25
Salvia.S said:
This is so a powerful and creative !!!! The use of the letter \"P\" is clever and gives it a nice rhythm. Each line shows a different side of what poetry can be. It\'s thoughtful and interesting. Very well written dear Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
June 26th, 2025 11:25
Forever Breaking Through
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh this is truly rich indeed! We\'ll swear like sailors, with \"pardon my French,\" in polite company, and pucker up to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, eh? This must be the real reason I forgot this morning when ordering Starbucks to say my usual, missing the lemonade in my drink--because you\'d penned this. After that, I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curiously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh this is truly rich indeed! We\'ll swear like sailors, with \"pardon my French,\" in polite company, and pucker up to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, eh? This must be the real reason I forgot this morning when ordering Starbucks to say my usual, missing the lemonade in my drink--because you\'d penned this. After that, I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curiously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:14
Forever Breaking Through
Poetic Licence said:
Burning away with deceit and lies with the acid from fruit to get to the fact and truth , its a lovely thought but it wouldn\'t it leave a bitter taste in the mouth, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
Burning away with deceit and lies with the acid from fruit to get to the fact and truth , its a lovely thought but it wouldn\'t it leave a bitter taste in the mouth, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 10:59
Forever Breaking Through
Damaso said:
I really like the idea of burning away lies with the acidity of a juicy lemon. It exudes warmth and heals. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:37
Damaso said:
I really like the idea of burning away lies with the acidity of a juicy lemon. It exudes warmth and heals. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:37
Forever Breaking Through
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration alleviates anger angels allege. There seems some irritation in this poem my friend. As for a citrus fix I have been drinking a dozen lemons a day in lemonade fresh squeezed to ward off colds and although correlation is not causation it seems to be working. A fun read whatever the fuck
June 26th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration alleviates anger angels allege. There seems some irritation in this poem my friend. As for a citrus fix I have been drinking a dozen lemons a day in lemonade fresh squeezed to ward off colds and although correlation is not causation it seems to be working. A fun read whatever the fuck
June 26th, 2025 08:13
The P\'s of Poetry
orchidee said:
Good write T. Us two should know another poem - Popeye\'s Progress. Don\'t answer that - or rather, don\'t write that poem! heehee.
June 26th, 2025 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write T. Us two should know another poem - Popeye\'s Progress. Don\'t answer that - or rather, don\'t write that poem! heehee.
June 26th, 2025 02:09
The P\'s of Poetry
Doggerel Dave said:
Alliterative masterpiece, You know where I stand on the rest...........😜
June 25th, 2025 23:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Alliterative masterpiece, You know where I stand on the rest...........😜
June 25th, 2025 23:53
The P\'s of Poetry
arqios said:
Yay! Double Fave: poetry is peripatetic. Poetry, like the peripatetic thinker, never stands still. It walks—sometimes lightly, sometimes burdened—through time, memory, landscape, and language. To say poetry is peripatetic by nature is to acknowledge its instinct to roam: from mind to page, from reader to reader, from private confession to universal revelation.
June 25th, 2025 17:37
arqios said:
Yay! Double Fave: poetry is peripatetic. Poetry, like the peripatetic thinker, never stands still. It walks—sometimes lightly, sometimes burdened—through time, memory, landscape, and language. To say poetry is peripatetic by nature is to acknowledge its instinct to roam: from mind to page, from reader to reader, from private confession to universal revelation.
June 25th, 2025 17:37
The P\'s of Poetry
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man. Guess you had a fun time with that letter. Almost as if you\'ve drawn up the framework for a much larger, fuller piece hereby, what a curious, intriguing, fascinating, pretty little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 25th, 2025 14:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man. Guess you had a fun time with that letter. Almost as if you\'ve drawn up the framework for a much larger, fuller piece hereby, what a curious, intriguing, fascinating, pretty little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 25th, 2025 14:56
The P\'s of Poetry
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
so creative! I\'d like to hear someone rap this lol 💜
June 25th, 2025 13:11
🦇ྀིℋ𝓪𝔂𝓵𝓮𝓲𝓰𝓱 🦇ྀི said:
so creative! I\'d like to hear someone rap this lol 💜
June 25th, 2025 13:11
The P\'s of Poetry
sorenbarrett said:
Positively perfect alliteration nicely done Tristan. Every once in a while I get this alliteration urge it becomes like a chocolate binge. Loved this one P\'s are not that easy.
June 25th, 2025 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
Positively perfect alliteration nicely done Tristan. Every once in a while I get this alliteration urge it becomes like a chocolate binge. Loved this one P\'s are not that easy.
June 25th, 2025 11:59
The P\'s of Poetry
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very clever, bet that wasn\'t easy, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 10:49
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s very clever, bet that wasn\'t easy, enjoyed the read
June 25th, 2025 10:49
The Corpse\'s Creed
orchidee said:
Ahh! I can read it now. I see it\'s a story about some mother-inlaws! heehee.
June 24th, 2025 02:00
orchidee said:
Ahh! I can read it now. I see it\'s a story about some mother-inlaws! heehee.
June 24th, 2025 02:00
God Cares
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and gets directly to the point - well done
extremely commendable
June 24th, 2025 01:27
NafisaSB said:
short, sweet, and gets directly to the point - well done
extremely commendable
June 24th, 2025 01:27
The Corpse\'s Creed
sorenbarrett said:
A ghoulish write full of foul and rancid images that slither off the page. Love your use of format to emphasize the words broken word on silence flowing words and the gurgles. A ghastly view of embalming and the surreal, fanciful life still present. I have never accompanied an actual embalming but had a neighbor that was a mortician and he had the most dark and bizarre sense of humor.
June 23rd, 2025 13:01
sorenbarrett said:
A ghoulish write full of foul and rancid images that slither off the page. Love your use of format to emphasize the words broken word on silence flowing words and the gurgles. A ghastly view of embalming and the surreal, fanciful life still present. I have never accompanied an actual embalming but had a neighbor that was a mortician and he had the most dark and bizarre sense of humor.
June 23rd, 2025 13:01
The Corpse\'s Creed
Poetic Licence said:
Thats my aspirations to be a funeral director gone, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 11:34
Poetic Licence said:
Thats my aspirations to be a funeral director gone, enjoyed the read
June 23rd, 2025 11:34
The Corpse\'s Creed
orchidee said:
Did you type / post this a different way? It\'s all come up, literally. \'All Greek to me!\' The only word I recognised was \'Popeye\'. (Eh??).
June 23rd, 2025 09:28
orchidee said:
Did you type / post this a different way? It\'s all come up, literally. \'All Greek to me!\' The only word I recognised was \'Popeye\'. (Eh??).
June 23rd, 2025 09:28
The Corpse\'s Creed
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
arqios said:
Brought me back to my Gran’s anatomy lab. Vivid writing🙏🏻🕊️
June 23rd, 2025 07:32
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