Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Inhale/Exhale
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Sigh. Guess I\'ll vicariously indulge and nary further, that realm beyond me, as so much is. In another angle, I daresay I and aught else may well resonate since we\'ve each our own means of inhalation of whatever whereby we sail off dreamily far, far from here, glad to be oblivious. Fascinating and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 4th, 2025 09:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Sigh. Guess I\'ll vicariously indulge and nary further, that realm beyond me, as so much is. In another angle, I daresay I and aught else may well resonate since we\'ve each our own means of inhalation of whatever whereby we sail off dreamily far, far from here, glad to be oblivious. Fascinating and charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and an irresistible poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 4th, 2025 09:39
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem went straight to my heart. I struggle with the concepts of living without fear and having a God who doesn\'t speak through silence. It seems that the foundation of human civilization incorporates fear as one of the mechanisms to wield control over the masses. When we combine that with a silent God we get a perfect recipe for sustained misunderstanding, stress and exploitation. I have seldom come across lines like \"For a year without fear I hope\" and \"To a God who speaks silence\" which speak so eloquently in brevity. Fantastic poem!
January 4th, 2025 04:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This poem went straight to my heart. I struggle with the concepts of living without fear and having a God who doesn\'t speak through silence. It seems that the foundation of human civilization incorporates fear as one of the mechanisms to wield control over the masses. When we combine that with a silent God we get a perfect recipe for sustained misunderstanding, stress and exploitation. I have seldom come across lines like \"For a year without fear I hope\" and \"To a God who speaks silence\" which speak so eloquently in brevity. Fantastic poem!
January 4th, 2025 04:16
We Knew
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I\'ve read and reread, yet remain rather bewildered and confused, intrigued and somewhat fascinated. The grinch of the new year spews his disgust on the suggestion, despite the inevitable reality we all grow older, learning as we do. Interesting. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:38
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. I\'ve read and reread, yet remain rather bewildered and confused, intrigued and somewhat fascinated. The grinch of the new year spews his disgust on the suggestion, despite the inevitable reality we all grow older, learning as we do. Interesting. Charmingly rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
January 3rd, 2025 20:38
We Knew
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is the intended shape, but I see a curly piece of confetti. seems to me like a warning sign throughout the celebration
January 3rd, 2025 20:12
NinjaGirl said:
I don\'t know if this is the intended shape, but I see a curly piece of confetti. seems to me like a warning sign throughout the celebration
January 3rd, 2025 20:12
We Knew
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
Powerful penning
Love it, thank you!!
Absolutely nothing
Would ever
Dare to
remain
true! 😢
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:54
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😲
Powerful penning
Love it, thank you!!
Absolutely nothing
Would ever
Dare to
remain
true! 😢
Thanks for sharing, much enjoyed!
Best regards peace ✌️ Thad
January 3rd, 2025 18:54
We Knew
arqios said:
And the rooster crows yet again in some forsaken backyard like some Groundhog Day scenario. Perhaps we can muddle through like St. Vincent, another unlikely postmodern antihero.
January 3rd, 2025 16:09
arqios said:
And the rooster crows yet again in some forsaken backyard like some Groundhog Day scenario. Perhaps we can muddle through like St. Vincent, another unlikely postmodern antihero.
January 3rd, 2025 16:09
We Knew
TobaniNataiella said:
Confirming that what happens today, tomorrow it is history and it change again after that ( underlined with a hint of anger one suspects !!). Enjoyable read
January 3rd, 2025 11:14
TobaniNataiella said:
Confirming that what happens today, tomorrow it is history and it change again after that ( underlined with a hint of anger one suspects !!). Enjoyable read
January 3rd, 2025 11:14
We Knew
orchidee said:
I am FFFF frustrated by that clock - it\'s 11 something but the other hand has fell off! lol.
January 3rd, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
I am FFFF frustrated by that clock - it\'s 11 something but the other hand has fell off! lol.
January 3rd, 2025 10:47
We Knew
sorenbarrett said:
The only constant is change and so it seems every year. Love the shape of this poem that reminds me of birds in flight
January 3rd, 2025 10:07
sorenbarrett said:
The only constant is change and so it seems every year. Love the shape of this poem that reminds me of birds in flight
January 3rd, 2025 10:07
Lazy Loo Logic
Dan Williams said:
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about sixty or so don\'t need it but a fraction of the time the ladies do. All for it, his and hers.
January 3rd, 2025 01:11
Dan Williams said:
Has a lot to do with plumbing. We lads have it external and till about sixty or so don\'t need it but a fraction of the time the ladies do. All for it, his and hers.
January 3rd, 2025 01:11
Lazy Loo Logic
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and very funny I\'d say!! 😂
You hit it on the nail,
In every way!!🤩👍👍
Thanks for sharing
brought a big smile
to my day!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 2nd, 2025 23:04
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem
and very funny I\'d say!! 😂
You hit it on the nail,
In every way!!🤩👍👍
Thanks for sharing
brought a big smile
to my day!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 2nd, 2025 23:04
Why?
NinjaGirl said:
I believe with the teacher shortages they start to hire cranky old people...I\'m serious I think that\'s what they put on their CV!
January 2nd, 2025 18:09
NinjaGirl said:
I believe with the teacher shortages they start to hire cranky old people...I\'m serious I think that\'s what they put on their CV!
January 2nd, 2025 18:09
UP IN SMOKE AGAIN WITHOUT REASON
NinjaGirl said:
Well a few of those words sent me on a googling spree! I quite like this tragic poem, it is very well written.
January 2nd, 2025 18:06
NinjaGirl said:
Well a few of those words sent me on a googling spree! I quite like this tragic poem, it is very well written.
January 2nd, 2025 18:06
Depth of Height
NinjaGirl said:
in searching for more when do you lose yourself?
January 2nd, 2025 18:01
NinjaGirl said:
in searching for more when do you lose yourself?
January 2nd, 2025 18:01
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if the world just needs more vigilante crime fighters... any organized group is targeted, but an individual, not so much.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder if the world just needs more vigilante crime fighters... any organized group is targeted, but an individual, not so much.
January 2nd, 2025 18:00
Resolution
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve been both fearful and joyful for new goals and opportunities...I can be so excited for myself, but also so worried for myself and others. I suppose in the long run, it\'s just another day, as was yesterday.
January 2nd, 2025 17:58
NinjaGirl said:
I\'ve been both fearful and joyful for new goals and opportunities...I can be so excited for myself, but also so worried for myself and others. I suppose in the long run, it\'s just another day, as was yesterday.
January 2nd, 2025 17:58
Lazy Loo Logic
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
Lazy Loo Logic
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
Lazy Loo Logic
Teddy.15 said:
a fun write that tackles the awkwardness some feel, I have no problems with people choosing to be what they wish, but yes, public toilets should probably have labels for ladies and gentlemen and disabled. Ps don\'t ever go to any public toilet in Italy they are the worst. 🤣
January 2nd, 2025 12:15
Teddy.15 said:
a fun write that tackles the awkwardness some feel, I have no problems with people choosing to be what they wish, but yes, public toilets should probably have labels for ladies and gentlemen and disabled. Ps don\'t ever go to any public toilet in Italy they are the worst. 🤣
January 2nd, 2025 12:15
Lazy Loo Logic
TobaniNataiella said:
i am with your own loo brigade all day long, do not public toilets at best of times. A very entertaining and fun read about todays way of thinking. Really enjoyed
January 2nd, 2025 10:08
TobaniNataiella said:
i am with your own loo brigade all day long, do not public toilets at best of times. A very entertaining and fun read about todays way of thinking. Really enjoyed
January 2nd, 2025 10:08
Lazy Loo Logic
Cheeky Missy said:
Your note piques my curiosity since it slams some party and I suspect I\'m of the same. Humorous and facetious with a hearty twist, I\'m just lacking enough sleep to remain a tad confused. Why they don\'t simply give mankind the bathrooms we grew up with at home, is a topic for further discussion another day, because regular toilets for all seem the most logical. I mean, pardon me if the girls/ women who haven\'t lived with males long enough need to learn both to check whether the seat is down and also not to sit on public toilet seats. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 2nd, 2025 10:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Your note piques my curiosity since it slams some party and I suspect I\'m of the same. Humorous and facetious with a hearty twist, I\'m just lacking enough sleep to remain a tad confused. Why they don\'t simply give mankind the bathrooms we grew up with at home, is a topic for further discussion another day, because regular toilets for all seem the most logical. I mean, pardon me if the girls/ women who haven\'t lived with males long enough need to learn both to check whether the seat is down and also not to sit on public toilet seats. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 2nd, 2025 10:04
Lazy Loo Logic
Cassie58 said:
I’m old fashioned. I know what I like. I don’t want to share with all and sundry outside my home. 😂 Indoors, I ain’t bothered. A fun look at loo logic Tristan.
January 2nd, 2025 08:56
Cassie58 said:
I’m old fashioned. I know what I like. I don’t want to share with all and sundry outside my home. 😂 Indoors, I ain’t bothered. A fun look at loo logic Tristan.
January 2nd, 2025 08:56
Lazy Loo Logic
arqios said:
We each have our own.. and in public are hard put to occupy the unfamiliar throne… it’s easier behind some bushes it would seem!
January 2nd, 2025 08:48
arqios said:
We each have our own.. and in public are hard put to occupy the unfamiliar throne… it’s easier behind some bushes it would seem!
January 2nd, 2025 08:48
Resolution
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully a year without destruction, death, rot and decay, but thinking about it without any of those there would be no entropy like a jammed watch time would stand still and we would be stuck in 2025. A fun read my friend
January 1st, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully a year without destruction, death, rot and decay, but thinking about it without any of those there would be no entropy like a jammed watch time would stand still and we would be stuck in 2025. A fun read my friend
January 1st, 2025 05:28
Resolution
Teddy.15 said:
Find the light and move forward in your own personal triumph with courage and faith in yourself, that is what I did long ago. ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:43
Teddy.15 said:
Find the light and move forward in your own personal triumph with courage and faith in yourself, that is what I did long ago. ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:43
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