Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dark Hallways
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I read the poem several times. Each stanza painted vivid picture and the last stanza brought them together like pieces of a jigsaw puzzles falling in right places to make a whole. Loved it so much. Thanks for sharing Bhaskar
October 14th, 2024 03:50
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I read the poem several times. Each stanza painted vivid picture and the last stanza brought them together like pieces of a jigsaw puzzles falling in right places to make a whole. Loved it so much. Thanks for sharing Bhaskar
October 14th, 2024 03:50
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I won\'t make an attempt at using adjectives to describe my feelings while reading the poem - perhaps saying it drew me into the vortices of the torment would suffice. The combination of brevity and adornment and absence of artificial portrayal make this poem a hard hitter. Thank you for sharing. Regards Bhaskar
October 12th, 2024 22:47
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Hi Tristan, I won\'t make an attempt at using adjectives to describe my feelings while reading the poem - perhaps saying it drew me into the vortices of the torment would suffice. The combination of brevity and adornment and absence of artificial portrayal make this poem a hard hitter. Thank you for sharing. Regards Bhaskar
October 12th, 2024 22:47
Snow Globe
orchidee said:
Can we pinpoint just what, or who, are the basis of our fear, or fears? That\'s surely some step, or steps, to overcoming them.
It seems to me, it\'s like each time that snow globe is shaken, the fears shake up, are fluttered, etc, to agitate, disturb, cause us to be anxious.
We\'re getting psychological now!
October 12th, 2024 11:24
orchidee said:
Can we pinpoint just what, or who, are the basis of our fear, or fears? That\'s surely some step, or steps, to overcoming them.
It seems to me, it\'s like each time that snow globe is shaken, the fears shake up, are fluttered, etc, to agitate, disturb, cause us to be anxious.
We\'re getting psychological now!
October 12th, 2024 11:24
Silent Screams of the Butterfly
orchidee said:
A personal write?
Bit of a silly aside, if it wasn\'t such a serious theme: I don\'t fancy experiencing \'torturous\', but I don\'t suppose any of us do!
October 12th, 2024 02:40
orchidee said:
A personal write?
Bit of a silly aside, if it wasn\'t such a serious theme: I don\'t fancy experiencing \'torturous\', but I don\'t suppose any of us do!
October 12th, 2024 02:40
Dark Hallways
Cheeky Missy said:
Inspired by Edgar Alan Poe indeed! The pit and the pendulum in a remarkably shortened version. My la! Fascinating and macabre, ghastly yet seeming half beautiful with excellent imagery and an appropriately horrifying poignancy.
October 9th, 2024 18:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Inspired by Edgar Alan Poe indeed! The pit and the pendulum in a remarkably shortened version. My la! Fascinating and macabre, ghastly yet seeming half beautiful with excellent imagery and an appropriately horrifying poignancy.
October 9th, 2024 18:59
Dark Hallways
Neville said:
Now hold on a minute .. is that really your bastard twin or your alter ego trying to grab the limelight .. come on, own up, spill the beans, I dubble dare\'s ya .. Dark Hallways indeed .. perfect for the fast approaching Halloween if you ask me .. and correspondingly enjoyed .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:26
Neville said:
Now hold on a minute .. is that really your bastard twin or your alter ego trying to grab the limelight .. come on, own up, spill the beans, I dubble dare\'s ya .. Dark Hallways indeed .. perfect for the fast approaching Halloween if you ask me .. and correspondingly enjoyed .. Neville
October 9th, 2024 09:26
Our Bitter End
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right, the cost of living is death. Pretty much all we can do is try to make the best of it, play with the cards we are dealt. Nice work here.
October 6th, 2024 23:58
Dan Williams said:
Wow. You make me in my resident gloom seem almost cheerful. You are right, the cost of living is death. Pretty much all we can do is try to make the best of it, play with the cards we are dealt. Nice work here.
October 6th, 2024 23:58
Our Bitter End
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
October 6th, 2024 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
The seasons of life contained in this poem. Nicely worded
October 6th, 2024 19:05
Our Bitter End
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Ahh, the weather a tad dismal?! lol.
October 6th, 2024 14:25
Masquerade
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Dan Williams said:
My skeletons seem to find their way out from time to time, sneaky devils. Nice work.
October 6th, 2024 00:17
Masquerade
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
sorenbarrett said:
On death row they would say dead man walking and so are we all from the day we are born until we lay down not to raise again. Nicely written
October 5th, 2024 21:38
Masquerade
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
MendedFences27 said:
So be it. Time for the skeletons to free themselves.
A very deep poem with lots of meaning. Unique in the way you have phrased it. Much enjoyed. - Phil A.
October 5th, 2024 15:21
Black Onyx Eyes
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
orchidee said:
Hope you can find the way through the tunnel soon if this is a personal experience for you at this time :)
October 4th, 2024 02:28
Pen
orchidee said:
Doh! Now a tercet. What\'s that when it\'s \'at home\', as they say?!
Is poetic ignorance of styles, forms, etc, bliss to me? lol.
October 3rd, 2024 02:10
orchidee said:
Doh! Now a tercet. What\'s that when it\'s \'at home\', as they say?!
Is poetic ignorance of styles, forms, etc, bliss to me? lol.
October 3rd, 2024 02:10
The Killing Word
orchidee said:
I dunno about them iambic things, not being into poetry styles much! I\'m sure it\'s a good write, iambic thingy or not! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:11
orchidee said:
I dunno about them iambic things, not being into poetry styles much! I\'m sure it\'s a good write, iambic thingy or not! lol.
September 30th, 2024 13:11
Strangers in the Sun
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. It\'s awesome you noticed that! Thank you so much! I am glad it resonated with you!
September 29th, 2024 22:59
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Indeed. It\'s awesome you noticed that! Thank you so much! I am glad it resonated with you!
September 29th, 2024 22:59
Strangers in the Sun
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions no need to rhyme in rhyme a fun read that gives pause to thought as well
September 29th, 2024 07:03
sorenbarrett said:
Contradictions no need to rhyme in rhyme a fun read that gives pause to thought as well
September 29th, 2024 07:03
All Growed Up
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Puerility mixed with willful senility\' - I knowed people like that....couldn\'t be me, though.......
Fun write.
September 28th, 2024 18:19
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Puerility mixed with willful senility\' - I knowed people like that....couldn\'t be me, though.......
Fun write.
September 28th, 2024 18:19
All Growed Up
Cheeky Missy said:
What initially caught my eye was the language of your title...and here I stupidly thought I was alone in using that terminology. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Too perfect!
September 28th, 2024 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
What initially caught my eye was the language of your title...and here I stupidly thought I was alone in using that terminology. Excellently rendered with awesome imagery and haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing. Too perfect!
September 28th, 2024 17:58
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