Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Obscuration of Salvation
orchidee said:
Nothing obscure about what Popeye & Co get up to, though of course we can\'t say why here! lol.
September 2nd, 2025 11:21
orchidee said:
Nothing obscure about what Popeye & Co get up to, though of course we can\'t say why here! lol.
September 2nd, 2025 11:21
The Obscuration of Salvation
sorenbarrett said:
So much history in rocks that have seen with blind eyes more still. Some see as evil others see as nature all one and the same beauty and virtue. Nicely done my friend
September 2nd, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
So much history in rocks that have seen with blind eyes more still. Some see as evil others see as nature all one and the same beauty and virtue. Nicely done my friend
September 2nd, 2025 08:45
The Obscuration of Salvation
arqios said:
Oh , that brought me back to a gorge down south called Devil’s Kitchen!
September 2nd, 2025 08:31
arqios said:
Oh , that brought me back to a gorge down south called Devil’s Kitchen!
September 2nd, 2025 08:31
The Window
NafisaSB said:
i am truly happy that the nightmares have ended and you have evolved, and write more hopeful and happy verse - though the description here is truly terrifying and yet truly intense
September 2nd, 2025 01:10
NafisaSB said:
i am truly happy that the nightmares have ended and you have evolved, and write more hopeful and happy verse - though the description here is truly terrifying and yet truly intense
September 2nd, 2025 01:10
Unknown
Neville said:
probably my greatest fear .. I think its one of the main reasons I write & always carry a notepad with me and my name scrawled all over the front .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛👍
September 2nd, 2025 00:20
Neville said:
probably my greatest fear .. I think its one of the main reasons I write & always carry a notepad with me and my name scrawled all over the front .. 🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛👍
September 2nd, 2025 00:20
Unknown
Bella Shepard said:
It seems unconscionable that there are those who fought and died, without a trace left of who they were. You do justice to this sad memorial, in reflecting on the human toll. A very reflective and respectful poem.
September 1st, 2025 14:52
Bella Shepard said:
It seems unconscionable that there are those who fought and died, without a trace left of who they were. You do justice to this sad memorial, in reflecting on the human toll. A very reflective and respectful poem.
September 1st, 2025 14:52
Unknown
Teddy.15 said:
So poweful, not so long ago in Ireland there was an entire cemetery found which has hundreds of newborns the place was a Convent ironically. This has so much power and makes the reader dive deep. 🌹
September 1st, 2025 14:25
Teddy.15 said:
So poweful, not so long ago in Ireland there was an entire cemetery found which has hundreds of newborns the place was a Convent ironically. This has so much power and makes the reader dive deep. 🌹
September 1st, 2025 14:25
Unknown
NinjaGirl said:
\"Untitled\" still means the noun was known, something, some quality about it... but \"unknown,\" how much more hollow. Beautifully written
September 1st, 2025 11:19
NinjaGirl said:
\"Untitled\" still means the noun was known, something, some quality about it... but \"unknown,\" how much more hollow. Beautifully written
September 1st, 2025 11:19
Unknown
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that the United States, Brittan and France have tombs of the unknown soldier. I just watched the other day how Brittan\'s came about. We will all be forgotten one day and in this we are all brothers. Very nicely done Tristan
September 1st, 2025 08:48
sorenbarrett said:
It seems that the United States, Brittan and France have tombs of the unknown soldier. I just watched the other day how Brittan\'s came about. We will all be forgotten one day and in this we are all brothers. Very nicely done Tristan
September 1st, 2025 08:48
What Actually Holds Sway
Neville said:
Near held me spellbound .. and I love how you tweaked the accompanying image and made it all yours .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤😎👍
September 1st, 2025 05:36
Neville said:
Near held me spellbound .. and I love how you tweaked the accompanying image and made it all yours .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤😎👍
September 1st, 2025 05:36
What Actually Holds Sway
Doggerel Dave said:
..... and they died for that...
Your context clarifies it all, Tristan.
August 31st, 2025 18:35
Doggerel Dave said:
..... and they died for that...
Your context clarifies it all, Tristan.
August 31st, 2025 18:35
What Actually Holds Sway
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder how much liberty there is in death
August 31st, 2025 15:16
NinjaGirl said:
I wonder how much liberty there is in death
August 31st, 2025 15:16
What Actually Holds Sway
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye holds sway in....... we can\'t say! lol.
August 31st, 2025 12:32
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye holds sway in....... we can\'t say! lol.
August 31st, 2025 12:32
What Actually Holds Sway
sorenbarrett said:
The pendulum of freedom swings in the history of mankind from too free, if one can be, to enslaved. Too free means freely stepping on others toes while enslaved meaning an owner stepping on yours. If people would learn sensitivity and respect for others there would be no need for such a swing. People are willing to sell their freedom for the promise of security and that is not what freedom is about. A fine write my friend
August 31st, 2025 08:06
sorenbarrett said:
The pendulum of freedom swings in the history of mankind from too free, if one can be, to enslaved. Too free means freely stepping on others toes while enslaved meaning an owner stepping on yours. If people would learn sensitivity and respect for others there would be no need for such a swing. People are willing to sell their freedom for the promise of security and that is not what freedom is about. A fine write my friend
August 31st, 2025 08:06
Holy People\'s Town
Teddy.15 said:
Well you know me... Wouldn\'t be my cup of tea but an adventure in any case. lol 🌹
August 31st, 2025 04:20
Teddy.15 said:
Well you know me... Wouldn\'t be my cup of tea but an adventure in any case. lol 🌹
August 31st, 2025 04:20
Holy People\'s Town
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that old time religion....... I really don\'t know what to pray.... no I mean say.... or maybe... I don\'t. The variation in social norms and religious observance across America will forever confuse me.
In the meantime, there\'s no denying the entertainment I got from this yarn in your trademark inimitable style, Tristan.
August 30th, 2025 20:50
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh that old time religion....... I really don\'t know what to pray.... no I mean say.... or maybe... I don\'t. The variation in social norms and religious observance across America will forever confuse me.
In the meantime, there\'s no denying the entertainment I got from this yarn in your trademark inimitable style, Tristan.
August 30th, 2025 20:50
Holy People\'s Town
NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha! Sounds like you had quite the experience!
August 30th, 2025 19:57
NinjaGirl said:
Hahaha! Sounds like you had quite the experience!
August 30th, 2025 19:57
Holy People\'s Town
orchidee said:
I knew a group devoted to Popeye. What were they devoted to? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 30th, 2025 10:07
orchidee said:
I knew a group devoted to Popeye. What were they devoted to? Don\'t answer that! lol.
August 30th, 2025 10:07
Holy People\'s Town
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to reality. Some parts of the world aren\'t as \"liberal\" as the Chicago area is famed for being, and every man\'s style of worshipping his chosen deity isn\'t tolerated freely everywhere. This pretty number is very nearly a riot. Guess you weren\'t so much surprised as intent on ruffling feathers, were you?
August 30th, 2025 09:17
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to reality. Some parts of the world aren\'t as \"liberal\" as the Chicago area is famed for being, and every man\'s style of worshipping his chosen deity isn\'t tolerated freely everywhere. This pretty number is very nearly a riot. Guess you weren\'t so much surprised as intent on ruffling feathers, were you?
August 30th, 2025 09:17
Holy People\'s Town
Bella Shepard said:
I was not aware of Holy People\'s Town, and googling its history was quite informative. First of all I love the presentation of this poem, the tiny graphics with each stanza add a powerful subtleness to the whole situation. It possesses a peaceful easy flow, and calls out the foolishness of inflexibility. Beautifully done!!
August 30th, 2025 09:15
Bella Shepard said:
I was not aware of Holy People\'s Town, and googling its history was quite informative. First of all I love the presentation of this poem, the tiny graphics with each stanza add a powerful subtleness to the whole situation. It possesses a peaceful easy flow, and calls out the foolishness of inflexibility. Beautifully done!!
August 30th, 2025 09:15
Holy People\'s Town
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting change with time. Culture changes and with it laws and expectations. The peace and joy I had as a child I have to leave society for today and live a solitary life to enjoy. Nicely done Tristan
August 30th, 2025 08:03
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting change with time. Culture changes and with it laws and expectations. The peace and joy I had as a child I have to leave society for today and live a solitary life to enjoy. Nicely done Tristan
August 30th, 2025 08:03
Holy People\'s Town
arqios said:
Certainly not on my bucket 🪣 list 📝 to visit! So sorry you had to experience that though.
August 30th, 2025 08:01
arqios said:
Certainly not on my bucket 🪣 list 📝 to visit! So sorry you had to experience that though.
August 30th, 2025 08:01
Death Pact
Teddy.15 said:
Ozzie Osborne would be proud. Definitely lyrics , and yes freaky frolics indeed. 🤣 🌹
August 30th, 2025 03:17
Teddy.15 said:
Ozzie Osborne would be proud. Definitely lyrics , and yes freaky frolics indeed. 🤣 🌹
August 30th, 2025 03:17
The Window
Salvia.S said:
This is hauntingly vivid!!!
The imagery and atmosphere are really immersive, and the twist at the end about it being a nightmare is chilling. Great job capturing the emotions and sensations! Well done dearest Tittu ❤️
August 29th, 2025 23:57
Salvia.S said:
This is hauntingly vivid!!!
The imagery and atmosphere are really immersive, and the twist at the end about it being a nightmare is chilling. Great job capturing the emotions and sensations! Well done dearest Tittu ❤️
August 29th, 2025 23:57
Death Pact
Alex Arnot said:
Cool! I always love finding new music. That coupled with reading poetry, 2 of my favorite things in one place.
August 29th, 2025 15:00
Alex Arnot said:
Cool! I always love finding new music. That coupled with reading poetry, 2 of my favorite things in one place.
August 29th, 2025 15:00
Death Pact
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulation Tristan for having the courage to try new things. Nicely done my friend.
August 29th, 2025 13:36
sorenbarrett said:
Congratulation Tristan for having the courage to try new things. Nicely done my friend.
August 29th, 2025 13:36
The Window
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is...well not sure how to describe. Seemed like a motion was captured in still lines. Has to be a fave.
August 29th, 2025 01:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
This one is...well not sure how to describe. Seemed like a motion was captured in still lines. Has to be a fave.
August 29th, 2025 01:13
The Window
NinjaGirl said:
But nobody heard the break on the edge of death. I like the poem, it\'s so interesting to see how you have changed over the years, though still remain your dark academic self!
August 28th, 2025 23:11
NinjaGirl said:
But nobody heard the break on the edge of death. I like the poem, it\'s so interesting to see how you have changed over the years, though still remain your dark academic self!
August 28th, 2025 23:11
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