Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Labeled
sorenbarrett said:
I hate labels. I think they do a great disservice to anything that they are placed on. They serve as a dichotomy, good versus bad, perfect versus imperfect normal versus abnormal. I don’t like them at all very nicely written and falls right in line with how I feel.
November 26th, 2024 12:04
sorenbarrett said:
I hate labels. I think they do a great disservice to anything that they are placed on. They serve as a dichotomy, good versus bad, perfect versus imperfect normal versus abnormal. I don’t like them at all very nicely written and falls right in line with how I feel.
November 26th, 2024 12:04
Labeled
Neville said:
I\'ve never been one for labels .. unless they are on the tin or packet of grub .. then they are important .. but that\'s about it .. there aren\'t may positive labels, are there .. I think you have posted something quite important here Tristan and hope that when folk come along, they will take on board much of what you have left here for them to digest .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 11:02
Neville said:
I\'ve never been one for labels .. unless they are on the tin or packet of grub .. then they are important .. but that\'s about it .. there aren\'t may positive labels, are there .. I think you have posted something quite important here Tristan and hope that when folk come along, they will take on board much of what you have left here for them to digest .. Neville
November 26th, 2024 11:02
First
NafisaSB said:
ideas worth pondering about for sure...thanks for sharing
November 26th, 2024 00:41
NafisaSB said:
ideas worth pondering about for sure...thanks for sharing
November 26th, 2024 00:41
Echoes
Cassie58 said:
Good to read you again Tristan. Quite taken with your very colorful posted image as well. All the best.
November 25th, 2024 16:55
Cassie58 said:
Good to read you again Tristan. Quite taken with your very colorful posted image as well. All the best.
November 25th, 2024 16:55
Echoes
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar words maybe it was an echo I heard before or maybe just déjà vu nice poem Tristan
November 25th, 2024 12:59
sorenbarrett said:
Familiar words maybe it was an echo I heard before or maybe just déjà vu nice poem Tristan
November 25th, 2024 12:59
Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Buildup and negative feelings expressed in the first part of the poem or all turned around by the last lines. It is not what others think but what we think that matters. Nicely stated.
November 25th, 2024 05:06
sorenbarrett said:
Buildup and negative feelings expressed in the first part of the poem or all turned around by the last lines. It is not what others think but what we think that matters. Nicely stated.
November 25th, 2024 05:06
Love Song
Caring dove said:
Very good writing ) love the rhyming in this and the words used .. nice read )
November 25th, 2024 03:35
Caring dove said:
Very good writing ) love the rhyming in this and the words used .. nice read )
November 25th, 2024 03:35
Enough
Neville said:
Everyone whether they like it, or admit to it even have a similar kind of turmoil or inner battle going on with themselves .. I enjoyed my visit which served to reinforce much of what I have already just stated .. well that\'s my story any old how and I\'m gonna stick to it .. Neville
November 25th, 2024 00:57
Neville said:
Everyone whether they like it, or admit to it even have a similar kind of turmoil or inner battle going on with themselves .. I enjoyed my visit which served to reinforce much of what I have already just stated .. well that\'s my story any old how and I\'m gonna stick to it .. Neville
November 25th, 2024 00:57
Enough
Cassie58 said:
That final line, was great to find. She is enough for herself. Wonderfully expressed lines Tristan. All the best.
November 24th, 2024 17:25
Cassie58 said:
That final line, was great to find. She is enough for herself. Wonderfully expressed lines Tristan. All the best.
November 24th, 2024 17:25
Enough
Thad Wilk said:
👏 👏 Clapping!
Living can sometimes
be rough! 😔
Like the
hope filled ending and
that you found, you were enough! 😀
Eloquently expressed my friend!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 24th, 2024 17:09
Thad Wilk said:
👏 👏 Clapping!
Living can sometimes
be rough! 😔
Like the
hope filled ending and
that you found, you were enough! 😀
Eloquently expressed my friend!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 24th, 2024 17:09
Enough
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and thank goodness for your last line as you are definitely enough, and then some. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:32
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and thank goodness for your last line as you are definitely enough, and then some. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:32
Enough
Caring dove said:
I wrote poem the other day about feeling insecure and not enough .. yeah we can all feel like that sometimes, I think
A well written poem like how it started off with ‘ not being enough ‘ to realising she is enough
November 24th, 2024 07:47
Caring dove said:
I wrote poem the other day about feeling insecure and not enough .. yeah we can all feel like that sometimes, I think
A well written poem like how it started off with ‘ not being enough ‘ to realising she is enough
November 24th, 2024 07:47
Enough
arqios said:
Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking, otherwise all other things are fleeting and inessential.
November 24th, 2024 07:35
arqios said:
Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking, otherwise all other things are fleeting and inessential.
November 24th, 2024 07:35
Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Greed versus gratitude has always been a continual strife. This is nicely expressed in this poem and as well resolved by finding one self as enough. Well expressed.
November 24th, 2024 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Greed versus gratitude has always been a continual strife. This is nicely expressed in this poem and as well resolved by finding one self as enough. Well expressed.
November 24th, 2024 07:24
First
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you, Tristan I appreciate so much your comments. They are very helpful.
November 23rd, 2024 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you, Tristan I appreciate so much your comments. They are very helpful.
November 23rd, 2024 19:05
First
Teddy.15 said:
LOL so creative and as i almost only ever write in free verse I say I absolutely love this. Kudos a very creative piece. ☘️ 💙
November 23rd, 2024 17:35
Teddy.15 said:
LOL so creative and as i almost only ever write in free verse I say I absolutely love this. Kudos a very creative piece. ☘️ 💙
November 23rd, 2024 17:35
First
orchidee said:
There\'s a little bridge called Troll Bridge, but I\'ve not seen one yet! lol.
November 23rd, 2024 12:57
orchidee said:
There\'s a little bridge called Troll Bridge, but I\'ve not seen one yet! lol.
November 23rd, 2024 12:57
First
Neville said:
This would appear crammed with truths that I am not afraid to admit I share .. 👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:47
Neville said:
This would appear crammed with truths that I am not afraid to admit I share .. 👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:47
First
arqios said:
The digital word processor saved me! Actual physical pages always challenge me to first time perfection, to write only when I was at the point of a near polished draft, never earlier than that. Your success and situation is enviable!
November 23rd, 2024 08:34
arqios said:
The digital word processor saved me! Actual physical pages always challenge me to first time perfection, to write only when I was at the point of a near polished draft, never earlier than that. Your success and situation is enviable!
November 23rd, 2024 08:34
Personal Paroxysm
Thad Wilk said:
A terrorIFIC chain of
haiku\'s thank you!! 👍
Love the 4th one,
so hope filled and
uplifting too!! 🙏
Much enjoyed poet!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 22nd, 2024 17:58
Thad Wilk said:
A terrorIFIC chain of
haiku\'s thank you!! 👍
Love the 4th one,
so hope filled and
uplifting too!! 🙏
Much enjoyed poet!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 22nd, 2024 17:58
Personal Paroxysm
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Personal Paroxysm
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
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