Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
orchidee said:
If hunger and famine was not such a serious theme, that guy looks a bit under-fed there. Doh!
And then I make some weird comment - \'Oooh, not today, thank you; don\'t fancy the theme of that poem! lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:44
orchidee said:
If hunger and famine was not such a serious theme, that guy looks a bit under-fed there. Doh!
And then I make some weird comment - \'Oooh, not today, thank you; don\'t fancy the theme of that poem! lol.
July 3rd, 2025 09:44
The Cycle of a Dark Seed
sorenbarrett said:
The anger of youth in this poem as well as violence. Even in metaphor it expounds force and the vigor of youth. Energetic and passionate it cries out.
July 3rd, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
The anger of youth in this poem as well as violence. Even in metaphor it expounds force and the vigor of youth. Energetic and passionate it cries out.
July 3rd, 2025 08:45
The P\'s of Poetry
NafisaSB said:
pleasing poem - professionally prepared
A thumbs up here for you..
July 3rd, 2025 06:37
NafisaSB said:
pleasing poem - professionally prepared
A thumbs up here for you..
July 3rd, 2025 06:37
Where Are They Now?
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, my poem is \'Where are they now\' - Popeye and Obi, that is. Don\'t answer that! LOL.
July 3rd, 2025 02:23
orchidee said:
Good write T. Erm, my poem is \'Where are they now\' - Popeye and Obi, that is. Don\'t answer that! LOL.
July 3rd, 2025 02:23
Where Are They Now?
Cheeky Missy said:
Quoth the Girrabbit,\"Wouldn\'t you like to know?!--\" who doesn\'t know shall apparently remain blind until...eternity? The driving cause behind our varied languages and disparity hasn\'t ceased to exist, but morphed throughout the millennia, so far as I know. Charmingly rendered little riddle with grand imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 22:18
Cheeky Missy said:
Quoth the Girrabbit,\"Wouldn\'t you like to know?!--\" who doesn\'t know shall apparently remain blind until...eternity? The driving cause behind our varied languages and disparity hasn\'t ceased to exist, but morphed throughout the millennia, so far as I know. Charmingly rendered little riddle with grand imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 22:18
Where Are They Now?
arqios said:
The physical Babylon lay in ruin but her spirit lives on... a scary thought.💭🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 21:48
arqios said:
The physical Babylon lay in ruin but her spirit lives on... a scary thought.💭🕊️🙏🏻
July 2nd, 2025 21:48
Where Are They Now?
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, though not many words they prick at your conscience with many other questions, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 13:52
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, though not many words they prick at your conscience with many other questions, enjoyed the read
July 2nd, 2025 13:52
Where Are They Now?
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe by the river? Oh my if you could speak any louder through your words you would be shouting, and that my friend is a massive compliment. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 13:49
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe by the river? Oh my if you could speak any louder through your words you would be shouting, and that my friend is a massive compliment. 🌹
July 2nd, 2025 13:49
Where Are They Now?
sorenbarrett said:
They are long gone and the majesty of mighty Babylon lies buried soon to be a myth of culture beyond its time turned to sin by modern believers. A wonderful poem full of metaphor that might take pages to interpret. Nicely worded Tristan
July 2nd, 2025 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
They are long gone and the majesty of mighty Babylon lies buried soon to be a myth of culture beyond its time turned to sin by modern believers. A wonderful poem full of metaphor that might take pages to interpret. Nicely worded Tristan
July 2nd, 2025 12:57
I Am Tittu
Cheeky Missy said:
What an exquisite dedication to a sweet friendship across the miles, across the seas, beautifully born even here! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a very beautiful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 09:34
Cheeky Missy said:
What an exquisite dedication to a sweet friendship across the miles, across the seas, beautifully born even here! How gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a very beautiful poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
July 2nd, 2025 09:34
I Am Tittu
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
I Am Tittu
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
I Am Tittu
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
I Am Tittu
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
I Am Tittu
sorenbarrett said:
Unity the key, we are all one, bird or tree, moon or sun. Only the Buda has memories of all past lives. In search of that enlightenment and Nirvana when we no longer need return but still then we are one with all. Just as the Buda is part of us and we of him. A lovely write. A fave
July 1st, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Unity the key, we are all one, bird or tree, moon or sun. Only the Buda has memories of all past lives. In search of that enlightenment and Nirvana when we no longer need return but still then we are one with all. Just as the Buda is part of us and we of him. A lovely write. A fave
July 1st, 2025 08:17
Pleased to Pass
Cheeky Missy said:
Eesh, mon. What on earth is this, via its eerie conclusion? My late father despised this genre as \"navel-gazing,\" and yet I\'m beginning to become afeared tis even so as Daddy said. Argh. Fascinating, intriguing, and excellently rendered with consummate skill and grand imagery, its sheer poignancy haunting damningly. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 16:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Eesh, mon. What on earth is this, via its eerie conclusion? My late father despised this genre as \"navel-gazing,\" and yet I\'m beginning to become afeared tis even so as Daddy said. Argh. Fascinating, intriguing, and excellently rendered with consummate skill and grand imagery, its sheer poignancy haunting damningly. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 16:04
Pleased to Pass
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that appears to be a strong act of defiance against the ongoing push to please. Very nicely thought out and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 09:30
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that appears to be a strong act of defiance against the ongoing push to please. Very nicely thought out and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 09:30
Pleased to Pass
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'vibes\'!! Or it may be E.T. or a couple of guys we know - Obi and Popeye. lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:42
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'vibes\'!! Or it may be E.T. or a couple of guys we know - Obi and Popeye. lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:42
Pleased to Pass
arqios said:
This is such a brilliant act of defiance, drenched in insight and emotional clarity!
June 30th, 2025 07:16
arqios said:
This is such a brilliant act of defiance, drenched in insight and emotional clarity!
June 30th, 2025 07:16
Pleased to Pass
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion encapsulated as line after line referring to the previous linking one thought to another. A thought provoking write Tristan
June 30th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion encapsulated as line after line referring to the previous linking one thought to another. A thought provoking write Tristan
June 30th, 2025 06:59
Stasis Will Replace Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Stasis Will Replace Us
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
Stasis Will Replace Us
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
The Judge
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Stasis Will Replace Us
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Stasis Will Replace Us
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
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