Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Something in the Mind
Damaso said:
Wow, friend, what a great song! I love that chorus, exploding with the distorted guitar and the totally raw and rebellious lyrics. It\'s incredible. Congratulations. Thanks so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 18th, 2025 13:03
Damaso said:
Wow, friend, what a great song! I love that chorus, exploding with the distorted guitar and the totally raw and rebellious lyrics. It\'s incredible. Congratulations. Thanks so much for sharing. Best regards.
July 18th, 2025 13:03
Something in the Mind
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
From the hip and with gusto as if composed in a fit of pique. Great song, great voice and great music, especially the intro - loved it. Much praise for this one.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 12:13
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
From the hip and with gusto as if composed in a fit of pique. Great song, great voice and great music, especially the intro - loved it. Much praise for this one.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 18th, 2025 12:13
Something in the Mind
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes the darker side is that of truth life isn\'t all roses and diamonds and you show and share with such talent, wonderful lyrics my dear Tristan. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 12:07
Teddy.15 said:
Oh yes the darker side is that of truth life isn\'t all roses and diamonds and you show and share with such talent, wonderful lyrics my dear Tristan. 🌹
July 18th, 2025 12:07
Something in the Mind
Poetic Licence said:
You did live in a dark world back in the day, and when you are there it feels like death is playing with you, it takes hold and squeezes but never enough for it to be final, nicely expressed and written and sung
July 18th, 2025 11:58
Poetic Licence said:
You did live in a dark world back in the day, and when you are there it feels like death is playing with you, it takes hold and squeezes but never enough for it to be final, nicely expressed and written and sung
July 18th, 2025 11:58
Something in the Mind
Priya Tomar said:
Lovely !
Ultimately death is the harsh truth....
Your word play loveable.
July 18th, 2025 11:11
Priya Tomar said:
Lovely !
Ultimately death is the harsh truth....
Your word play loveable.
July 18th, 2025 11:11
Something in the Mind
sorenbarrett said:
And so it does around all of us sooner or later in live\'s game of tag. A suddery poem for a weekend. Lovely
July 18th, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
And so it does around all of us sooner or later in live\'s game of tag. A suddery poem for a weekend. Lovely
July 18th, 2025 09:46
My Dream
Damaso said:
Passionate and sincere, a long-cherished dream that manifests itself. I enjoyed it very much. I hope the character comes to fruition. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 17:48
Damaso said:
Passionate and sincere, a long-cherished dream that manifests itself. I enjoyed it very much. I hope the character comes to fruition. Thanks for sharing. Best regards.
July 17th, 2025 17:48
My Dream
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The innocence of a young lad\'s dream seeking the feminine heart for companionship. To wonder, where is she now, what colour are her eyes, her hair, where is she from, her music, the books she reads but no need for answers - it\'s the beauty of the dream, the excitement and adventure in the wonderings. A lovely, lovely poem and a complete joy to read.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:56
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The innocence of a young lad\'s dream seeking the feminine heart for companionship. To wonder, where is she now, what colour are her eyes, her hair, where is she from, her music, the books she reads but no need for answers - it\'s the beauty of the dream, the excitement and adventure in the wonderings. A lovely, lovely poem and a complete joy to read.
Wishing you the very best,
Tony.
July 17th, 2025 13:56
My Dream
orchidee said:
A fine write T, without reference to Tom, Popeye, Obi, or.......... whowver. lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:21
orchidee said:
A fine write T, without reference to Tom, Popeye, Obi, or.......... whowver. lol.
July 17th, 2025 11:21
My Dream
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A throw back that is well written even then.
July 17th, 2025 10:03
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A throw back that is well written even then.
July 17th, 2025 10:03
My Dream
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
Lyrical love song .
It is not your story but for all young .
Your writing style is very lovely . Your questioning heart touching
July 17th, 2025 09:27
Priya Tomar said:
Very beautiful
Lyrical love song .
It is not your story but for all young .
Your writing style is very lovely . Your questioning heart touching
July 17th, 2025 09:27
My Dream
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem you spoke from your heart, even as in your youth. I think we all have been there in our youth - the desire, the dreams, the compassion, the love that we wanted, and yet I could feel it even to this day. Well written, my friend. Your poem serves as a powerful exploration of desire and the complexities of romantic longing, illuminating the human quest for connection and the pursuit of dreams. It resonates deeply with anyone who has experienced the transformative power of unfulfilled desire or idealized love. The poet serves as a beacon of hope, exploring the intricate dance between dreams and reality, and the profound human longing for connection. It inspires anyone who has ever experienced the bittersweet nature of unfulfilled desire or the redemptive power of idealized love.
July 17th, 2025 08:45
Friendship said:
A very heartfelt poem you spoke from your heart, even as in your youth. I think we all have been there in our youth - the desire, the dreams, the compassion, the love that we wanted, and yet I could feel it even to this day. Well written, my friend. Your poem serves as a powerful exploration of desire and the complexities of romantic longing, illuminating the human quest for connection and the pursuit of dreams. It resonates deeply with anyone who has experienced the transformative power of unfulfilled desire or idealized love. The poet serves as a beacon of hope, exploring the intricate dance between dreams and reality, and the profound human longing for connection. It inspires anyone who has ever experienced the bittersweet nature of unfulfilled desire or the redemptive power of idealized love.
July 17th, 2025 08:45
My Dream
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed poem .. think we all need a connection .. friendship / relationships etc
I guess sometimes people might feel like there’s someone’s out there for them .. but they havnt met them yet .
Soulmates / twin flames ..soul connections etc
A good writing ..
July 17th, 2025 08:35
Caring dove said:
A nicely expressed poem .. think we all need a connection .. friendship / relationships etc
I guess sometimes people might feel like there’s someone’s out there for them .. but they havnt met them yet .
Soulmates / twin flames ..soul connections etc
A good writing ..
July 17th, 2025 08:35
My Dream
Poetic Licence said:
Many a youth has felt the same, wanting contact z love, care, sex, forgetting they have a whole life a head, they what it now, I am even today they do the same, hope your dream arrived eventually, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:35
Poetic Licence said:
Many a youth has felt the same, wanting contact z love, care, sex, forgetting they have a whole life a head, they what it now, I am even today they do the same, hope your dream arrived eventually, enjoyed the read
July 17th, 2025 08:35
My Dream
arqios said:
This poem is not just a romantic longing, but as a raw emotional artefact: a snapshot if you will of a young person reaching out from a place of isolation, yearning not for physicality, but for intimacy, connection, and presence. This is superbly resonant and relatable. This comment is also hoped to express a deep honouring of the courage it took to share it.
July 17th, 2025 08:24
arqios said:
This poem is not just a romantic longing, but as a raw emotional artefact: a snapshot if you will of a young person reaching out from a place of isolation, yearning not for physicality, but for intimacy, connection, and presence. This is superbly resonant and relatable. This comment is also hoped to express a deep honouring of the courage it took to share it.
July 17th, 2025 08:24
My Dream
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from youth that echoes the feelings of many at that age. A call for a fantasy or intimacy deeper than sex more profound than puppy love. Here I hear a search for a soulmate a piece of oneself. Very nicely written for a youth of that age. Loved it Tristan
July 17th, 2025 08:00
sorenbarrett said:
A poem from youth that echoes the feelings of many at that age. A call for a fantasy or intimacy deeper than sex more profound than puppy love. Here I hear a search for a soulmate a piece of oneself. Very nicely written for a youth of that age. Loved it Tristan
July 17th, 2025 08:00
My Dream
Teddy.15 said:
In 1992 I was 18 and experiencing my first love which well and truly sucked 🤣 this is like I want to scream at my computer? Did you find her???????? I hope you did. I felt a song in here, some great lyrics for a love song. 💜
July 17th, 2025 07:53
Teddy.15 said:
In 1992 I was 18 and experiencing my first love which well and truly sucked 🤣 this is like I want to scream at my computer? Did you find her???????? I hope you did. I felt a song in here, some great lyrics for a love song. 💜
July 17th, 2025 07:53
The Paradox of Living
arqios said:
Your lines carve open that narrow seam between presence and remembrance, showing how the very act of holding fast can push the living moment just out of reach. I feel that rift in my own life:
I’ve chased sunsets with a phone in hand only to wonder why the light felt colder when I finally watched the playback.
And I’ve lain on grass, eyes unfiltered, heart thumping to the hum of insects, yet later fumbled for words when asked “What was it like?”
Your paradox reminds me that the truest capture isn’t a pixel or a phrase, but a muscle memory; a humming in the chest that no photograph can steal away.
Thank you, Tristan, for holding that tension so cleanly. I’d love to hear where you find yourself more at home in the instant you live, or the one you return to? Or both in their own unique way?
July 16th, 2025 19:14
arqios said:
Your lines carve open that narrow seam between presence and remembrance, showing how the very act of holding fast can push the living moment just out of reach. I feel that rift in my own life:
I’ve chased sunsets with a phone in hand only to wonder why the light felt colder when I finally watched the playback.
And I’ve lain on grass, eyes unfiltered, heart thumping to the hum of insects, yet later fumbled for words when asked “What was it like?”
Your paradox reminds me that the truest capture isn’t a pixel or a phrase, but a muscle memory; a humming in the chest that no photograph can steal away.
Thank you, Tristan, for holding that tension so cleanly. I’d love to hear where you find yourself more at home in the instant you live, or the one you return to? Or both in their own unique way?
July 16th, 2025 19:14
The Paradox of Living
orchidee said:
Just because Popeye..... oh, don\'t finish that! lol.
July 16th, 2025 12:20
orchidee said:
Just because Popeye..... oh, don\'t finish that! lol.
July 16th, 2025 12:20
The Paradox of Living
Bella Shepard said:
Life truly is one big paradox, thank God we have poetry to make sense of it. Loved the write, and the paradox. I could really use a pair-of-docs write now. lol
July 16th, 2025 11:08
Bella Shepard said:
Life truly is one big paradox, thank God we have poetry to make sense of it. Loved the write, and the paradox. I could really use a pair-of-docs write now. lol
July 16th, 2025 11:08
The Paradox of Living
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
I love how this captures the tension between being present and trying to hold onto a moment. Short, but really powerful. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ 🌹
A fave as well 🌹
July 16th, 2025 10:46
Salvia.S 🌹 said:
I love how this captures the tension between being present and trying to hold onto a moment. Short, but really powerful. Very nicely written dearest Tittu ❤️ 🌹
A fave as well 🌹
July 16th, 2025 10:46
The Paradox of Living
Poetic Licence said:
So true you have to feel life not just document it, great write
July 16th, 2025 10:00
Poetic Licence said:
So true you have to feel life not just document it, great write
July 16th, 2025 10:00
The P\'s of Poetry
Priya Tomar said:
Magnum opus.
You spent your all litrary treasure.
ALLITERATION ..... praiseworthy
July 16th, 2025 09:10
Priya Tomar said:
Magnum opus.
You spent your all litrary treasure.
ALLITERATION ..... praiseworthy
July 16th, 2025 09:10
The Paradox of Living
Priya Tomar said:
So true.
Deep philosophy lies in these lines....
July 16th, 2025 08:32
Priya Tomar said:
So true.
Deep philosophy lies in these lines....
July 16th, 2025 08:32
The Paradox of Living
Tony Grannell said:
What a sagacious verse, petite yet dynamic, composed in a most winsome manifestation. To be of the moment, is one of my philosophies in life, the other is: how to be of the moment? An excellent verse.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 08:12
Tony Grannell said:
What a sagacious verse, petite yet dynamic, composed in a most winsome manifestation. To be of the moment, is one of my philosophies in life, the other is: how to be of the moment? An excellent verse.
Do take care now,
Tony.
July 16th, 2025 08:12
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