Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
To the Ones Who Go
Poetic Licence said:
In out quest for freedom we have to battle for the knowledge and truth, which if we persevere we will eventually find in the black hole somewhere, enjoyed todays offering, thank you
June 17th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
In out quest for freedom we have to battle for the knowledge and truth, which if we persevere we will eventually find in the black hole somewhere, enjoyed todays offering, thank you
June 17th, 2025 10:44
To the Ones Who Go
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, incredible. Beginning, development, and end. A spectacle. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:06
Damaso said:
Wow, my friend, incredible. Beginning, development, and end. A spectacle. Thanks for sharing. Cheers.
June 17th, 2025 10:06
To the Ones Who Go
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge and the truth will set you free. Salvation by knowledge. The black hole where gravity is so strong that not even light (knowledge) can escape. A very thoughtful write.
June 17th, 2025 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
Knowledge and the truth will set you free. Salvation by knowledge. The black hole where gravity is so strong that not even light (knowledge) can escape. A very thoughtful write.
June 17th, 2025 10:04
Come With Me
NafisaSB said:
it could only be you [no need for \'all rights reserved\' -lol]who could come out with such generosity of spirit offering unconditional love in such a nice and tender way
enjoyed the beautiful rendering of the lovely poem
June 17th, 2025 00:23
NafisaSB said:
it could only be you [no need for \'all rights reserved\' -lol]who could come out with such generosity of spirit offering unconditional love in such a nice and tender way
enjoyed the beautiful rendering of the lovely poem
June 17th, 2025 00:23
And They Call It Science
arqios said:
Here is the ability to see through the façade, to challenge the structures that feel unjust, is powerful. The world sometimes rewards the loudest voices, the most cunning, but real strength lies in clarity, in not getting swept away by manufactured perfection or hollow authority. To keep our fire, keep our perspective, and know that even in a stormy sea to be navigating something real. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:40
arqios said:
Here is the ability to see through the façade, to challenge the structures that feel unjust, is powerful. The world sometimes rewards the loudest voices, the most cunning, but real strength lies in clarity, in not getting swept away by manufactured perfection or hollow authority. To keep our fire, keep our perspective, and know that even in a stormy sea to be navigating something real. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 16th, 2025 20:40
And They Call It Science
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t get any cryptic meanings in this. Should I ask Popeye or Obi? In this case, they may know hidden meanings! heehee.
June 16th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
I wouldn\'t get any cryptic meanings in this. Should I ask Popeye or Obi? In this case, they may know hidden meanings! heehee.
June 16th, 2025 11:11
And They Call It Science
Poetic Licence said:
This is clearly a write that could be deeply anhalised, but for I will keep it simple. There are many dickheads in today\'s world, two or three of them vying for kingship, and I hope they have that trip to hell very quickly, intriguing and enjoyable read
June 16th, 2025 08:48
Poetic Licence said:
This is clearly a write that could be deeply anhalised, but for I will keep it simple. There are many dickheads in today\'s world, two or three of them vying for kingship, and I hope they have that trip to hell very quickly, intriguing and enjoyable read
June 16th, 2025 08:48
And They Call It Science
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Tristan so many ways to take this. But since it seems so blatant let me follow the first thing comes to mind. With phakic form this poem already stiffens then falls as it is pointed downward. To have penis envy you must not have one or maybe one that doesn\'t work. Interesting that it rises, if you don\'t have one how can it rise? (The scent of cons) is that short for condoms? (Fucking piracy) is that butt pirates? (Yo ho ho Mother fuckers) Now that just has to be Freudian psychology and the Oedipal complex. At least is is backed up with the next line speaking of power trip where one kills the father to take over the kingship with the mother. It did bring Oedipus to hell as he put out his eyes and died in exile. Was that another word play on the word come or cum? Well you can see how crazy I am maybe I should go on to a different interpretation
June 16th, 2025 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Oh Tristan so many ways to take this. But since it seems so blatant let me follow the first thing comes to mind. With phakic form this poem already stiffens then falls as it is pointed downward. To have penis envy you must not have one or maybe one that doesn\'t work. Interesting that it rises, if you don\'t have one how can it rise? (The scent of cons) is that short for condoms? (Fucking piracy) is that butt pirates? (Yo ho ho Mother fuckers) Now that just has to be Freudian psychology and the Oedipal complex. At least is is backed up with the next line speaking of power trip where one kills the father to take over the kingship with the mother. It did bring Oedipus to hell as he put out his eyes and died in exile. Was that another word play on the word come or cum? Well you can see how crazy I am maybe I should go on to a different interpretation
June 16th, 2025 08:12
Come With Me
Salvia.S said:
This is truly beautiful—gentle, open, and full of love. It feels like an embrace in words. I absolutely love it. Wonderfully written dear Tittu 🌹
June 15th, 2025 22:54
Salvia.S said:
This is truly beautiful—gentle, open, and full of love. It feels like an embrace in words. I absolutely love it. Wonderfully written dear Tittu 🌹
June 15th, 2025 22:54
Come With Me
Teddy.15 said:
Wow not only special poetry but special to meet your voice, love will come. So very powerful. 🌹
June 15th, 2025 15:43
Teddy.15 said:
Wow not only special poetry but special to meet your voice, love will come. So very powerful. 🌹
June 15th, 2025 15:43
Come With Me
Tony Grannell said:
Looming out of the grace of love, you open your arms to us all. What a beautiful welcome. How could one not resist. I am so delighted, I read this, Tristan, truly.
May the world love you back,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 15:07
Tony Grannell said:
Looming out of the grace of love, you open your arms to us all. What a beautiful welcome. How could one not resist. I am so delighted, I read this, Tristan, truly.
May the world love you back,
Tony.
June 15th, 2025 15:07
Come With Me
orchidee said:
I thought this was about Obi..... Don\'t explain the title to me! LOL.
June 15th, 2025 10:19
orchidee said:
I thought this was about Obi..... Don\'t explain the title to me! LOL.
June 15th, 2025 10:19
Come With Me
Poetic Licence said:
That has a dark and slightly religious feel to it, listening to you reading the poem it reminded of the calm start to a movie that you know is going to end in horror, although about love I can\'t help thinking its a bit sinister, gripping read, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 09:43
Poetic Licence said:
That has a dark and slightly religious feel to it, listening to you reading the poem it reminded of the calm start to a movie that you know is going to end in horror, although about love I can\'t help thinking its a bit sinister, gripping read, enjoyed
June 15th, 2025 09:43
Come With Me
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and broad offering that calls out to all. A most giving and resplendent write that feel almost religious.
June 15th, 2025 07:06
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and broad offering that calls out to all. A most giving and resplendent write that feel almost religious.
June 15th, 2025 07:06
Come With Me
arqios said:
Love the siri voice at the copyright tag! LOL. Good to be hearing you read your poem. There is an intense timbre in your voice, like deeply. imprinted footprints on the shore or fossilised on stone. The background traffic sounds makes such an awesome negative space on this canvas.🙏🏻🕊️
June 15th, 2025 07:05
arqios said:
Love the siri voice at the copyright tag! LOL. Good to be hearing you read your poem. There is an intense timbre in your voice, like deeply. imprinted footprints on the shore or fossilised on stone. The background traffic sounds makes such an awesome negative space on this canvas.🙏🏻🕊️
June 15th, 2025 07:05
The Flag
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful reminder to rise above division, embrace compassion, and let love guide our actions. Well done dear Tittu!
A fave 🌹
June 15th, 2025 03:00
Salvia.S said:
A beautiful reminder to rise above division, embrace compassion, and let love guide our actions. Well done dear Tittu!
A fave 🌹
June 15th, 2025 03:00
The Flag
Doggerel Dave said:
Unfurled indeed - Bullshit sliced diced and analysed here. It delivered truth, Tristan.
Faved of course.
June 14th, 2025 18:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Unfurled indeed - Bullshit sliced diced and analysed here. It delivered truth, Tristan.
Faved of course.
June 14th, 2025 18:12
The Flag
Tony Grannell said:
This poem should be engraved on brass plaques and displayed in every government building on the planet. A poet oozing with humanity and poetic flair. Very well done indeed, Tristan.
All the very best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:10
Tony Grannell said:
This poem should be engraved on brass plaques and displayed in every government building on the planet. A poet oozing with humanity and poetic flair. Very well done indeed, Tristan.
All the very best,
Tony.
June 14th, 2025 14:10
The Flag
orchidee said:
Only Popeye bows to spinach! How on earth is that related to line 2 of this poem - erm, don\'t answer that! lol. Now, Popeye, how come you seem to get into every comment? heehee.
June 14th, 2025 12:25
orchidee said:
Only Popeye bows to spinach! How on earth is that related to line 2 of this poem - erm, don\'t answer that! lol. Now, Popeye, how come you seem to get into every comment? heehee.
June 14th, 2025 12:25
The Flag
Poetic Licence said:
Many words and advice of wisdom in this write, how i wish they would be listened to but I know it will just roll on and on until it is to late, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 08:14
Poetic Licence said:
Many words and advice of wisdom in this write, how i wish they would be listened to but I know it will just roll on and on until it is to late, nicely expressed and written
June 14th, 2025 08:14
The Flag
arqios said:
‘Nations over neighbours,’ now there is a deep and far reaching thought! 🙏🏻🕊
June 14th, 2025 08:11
arqios said:
‘Nations over neighbours,’ now there is a deep and far reaching thought! 🙏🏻🕊
June 14th, 2025 08:11
The Flag
sorenbarrett said:
A fave Tristan for the wisdom behind such words that speak as scripture that deserves more worship than old dogmatic verse.
June 14th, 2025 07:59
sorenbarrett said:
A fave Tristan for the wisdom behind such words that speak as scripture that deserves more worship than old dogmatic verse.
June 14th, 2025 07:59
The Fence in the Boy
arqios said:
Poor kid... could\'ve been me at that age as well... when death became me. Powerful write T... and Justice has been slow at its heels🙏🏻🕊️
June 13th, 2025 21:01
arqios said:
Poor kid... could\'ve been me at that age as well... when death became me. Powerful write T... and Justice has been slow at its heels🙏🏻🕊️
June 13th, 2025 21:01
The Fence in the Boy
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone\'s spontaneous combustion. lol. Maybe Popeye or Obi, in a way. 🙄🤣
June 13th, 2025 12:47
orchidee said:
Sounds like someone\'s spontaneous combustion. lol. Maybe Popeye or Obi, in a way. 🙄🤣
June 13th, 2025 12:47
The Fence in the Boy
sorenbarrett said:
Bloody, gruesome, horrific it delivers a picture of terror but is far worse in the discovery. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Bloody, gruesome, horrific it delivers a picture of terror but is far worse in the discovery. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 11:33
The Fence in the Boy
Poetic Licence said:
This is like a nightmare coming to life, all the demons of your past congregating and tormenting, very dark and sad in context, but a gripping read, welcome back
June 13th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
This is like a nightmare coming to life, all the demons of your past congregating and tormenting, very dark and sad in context, but a gripping read, welcome back
June 13th, 2025 10:55
The Fence in the Boy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Engrossed, intrigued, beguiled and horrified as I read through this poem and then to discover it was you along as a boy on the trashing floor of your own past. As if composed out of a nightmare. You have a unique way with words, on edge poetry, as it were, holding the reader\'s attention with poetic acumen and the fierceness that can be found therein. A gifted poet, you are. Excellent!
Do take care now,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:56
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Engrossed, intrigued, beguiled and horrified as I read through this poem and then to discover it was you along as a boy on the trashing floor of your own past. As if composed out of a nightmare. You have a unique way with words, on edge poetry, as it were, holding the reader\'s attention with poetic acumen and the fierceness that can be found therein. A gifted poet, you are. Excellent!
Do take care now,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:56
The Fence in the Boy
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man! From whence spring these ghastly, macabre, devilish murmurs?! La dee. Superbly rendered with exceptional imagery and a devilish, intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 13th, 2025 08:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man! From whence spring these ghastly, macabre, devilish murmurs?! La dee. Superbly rendered with exceptional imagery and a devilish, intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 13th, 2025 08:42
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