Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Lazy Loo Logic
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
NinjaGirl said:
I must laugh at the absurdity, but I have often pondered the same topic! however, living a life with only sibling brothers, I must say I prefer a gendered loo, though I am very particular outside my own house! I think I know why I hate camping.
January 2nd, 2025 17:56
Lazy Loo Logic
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
sorenbarrett said:
Reminds me of the two seater on the hill. Once shared a dorm with some other guys where the bathroom had no doors and six toilets with no stalls went wall to wall. Privacy was never an issue just pass down the tissue. A fun read
January 2nd, 2025 13:08
Lazy Loo Logic
Teddy.15 said:
a fun write that tackles the awkwardness some feel, I have no problems with people choosing to be what they wish, but yes, public toilets should probably have labels for ladies and gentlemen and disabled. Ps don\'t ever go to any public toilet in Italy they are the worst. 🤣
January 2nd, 2025 12:15
Teddy.15 said:
a fun write that tackles the awkwardness some feel, I have no problems with people choosing to be what they wish, but yes, public toilets should probably have labels for ladies and gentlemen and disabled. Ps don\'t ever go to any public toilet in Italy they are the worst. 🤣
January 2nd, 2025 12:15
Lazy Loo Logic
Poetic Licence said:
i am with your own loo brigade all day long, do not public toilets at best of times. A very entertaining and fun read about todays way of thinking. Really enjoyed
January 2nd, 2025 10:08
Poetic Licence said:
i am with your own loo brigade all day long, do not public toilets at best of times. A very entertaining and fun read about todays way of thinking. Really enjoyed
January 2nd, 2025 10:08
Lazy Loo Logic
Cheeky Missy said:
Your note piques my curiosity since it slams some party and I suspect I\'m of the same. Humorous and facetious with a hearty twist, I\'m just lacking enough sleep to remain a tad confused. Why they don\'t simply give mankind the bathrooms we grew up with at home, is a topic for further discussion another day, because regular toilets for all seem the most logical. I mean, pardon me if the girls/ women who haven\'t lived with males long enough need to learn both to check whether the seat is down and also not to sit on public toilet seats. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 2nd, 2025 10:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Your note piques my curiosity since it slams some party and I suspect I\'m of the same. Humorous and facetious with a hearty twist, I\'m just lacking enough sleep to remain a tad confused. Why they don\'t simply give mankind the bathrooms we grew up with at home, is a topic for further discussion another day, because regular toilets for all seem the most logical. I mean, pardon me if the girls/ women who haven\'t lived with males long enough need to learn both to check whether the seat is down and also not to sit on public toilet seats. Delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 2nd, 2025 10:04
Lazy Loo Logic
Cassie58 said:
I’m old fashioned. I know what I like. I don’t want to share with all and sundry outside my home. 😂 Indoors, I ain’t bothered. A fun look at loo logic Tristan.
January 2nd, 2025 08:56
Cassie58 said:
I’m old fashioned. I know what I like. I don’t want to share with all and sundry outside my home. 😂 Indoors, I ain’t bothered. A fun look at loo logic Tristan.
January 2nd, 2025 08:56
Lazy Loo Logic
arqios said:
We each have our own.. and in public are hard put to occupy the unfamiliar throne… it’s easier behind some bushes it would seem!
January 2nd, 2025 08:48
arqios said:
We each have our own.. and in public are hard put to occupy the unfamiliar throne… it’s easier behind some bushes it would seem!
January 2nd, 2025 08:48
Resolution
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully a year without destruction, death, rot and decay, but thinking about it without any of those there would be no entropy like a jammed watch time would stand still and we would be stuck in 2025. A fun read my friend
January 1st, 2025 05:28
sorenbarrett said:
Hopefully a year without destruction, death, rot and decay, but thinking about it without any of those there would be no entropy like a jammed watch time would stand still and we would be stuck in 2025. A fun read my friend
January 1st, 2025 05:28
Resolution
Teddy.15 said:
Find the light and move forward in your own personal triumph with courage and faith in yourself, that is what I did long ago. ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:43
Teddy.15 said:
Find the light and move forward in your own personal triumph with courage and faith in yourself, that is what I did long ago. ❤️
January 1st, 2025 04:43
Resolution
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful few words concluding what we all wish for this year, but we live in an ever increasing selfish world and you have to be very careful before you class some one as a friend. Love the picture, really enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2025 04:29
Poetic Licence said:
A powerful few words concluding what we all wish for this year, but we live in an ever increasing selfish world and you have to be very careful before you class some one as a friend. Love the picture, really enjoyed the read.
January 1st, 2025 04:29
Resolution
orchidee said:
It\'s like I - or rather Fido (lol) - was, and is, trying to work out in a recent poem he (Fido) wrote about new years. lol.
January 1st, 2025 03:27
orchidee said:
It\'s like I - or rather Fido (lol) - was, and is, trying to work out in a recent poem he (Fido) wrote about new years. lol.
January 1st, 2025 03:27
Resolution
arqios said:
I agree with Michael here. We went from don’t judge me to no fear, to don’t hate and now it a whole new ball game. The image supplied is stark and emits contradictions. But down the bottom at the very end of the poem is a key 🔐 that may unlock it all quite in a manner we may not expect…. Yes friend, quo vadis?
January 1st, 2025 03:19
arqios said:
I agree with Michael here. We went from don’t judge me to no fear, to don’t hate and now it a whole new ball game. The image supplied is stark and emits contradictions. But down the bottom at the very end of the poem is a key 🔐 that may unlock it all quite in a manner we may not expect…. Yes friend, quo vadis?
January 1st, 2025 03:19
Pottersville
Dan Williams said:
Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white world. Thank you for this.
January 1st, 2025 01:52
Dan Williams said:
Having been born color blind I pretty much live in a black and white world. Thank you for this.
January 1st, 2025 01:52
Resolution
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed what now? I fear the toxic internet is breeding a new human variant full of extemist intolerance and even hatred - but thankfully there are still countless people who hope for a brighter inclusive future - er live in hope.
January 1st, 2025 01:38
Michael Edwards said:
Indeed what now? I fear the toxic internet is breeding a new human variant full of extemist intolerance and even hatred - but thankfully there are still countless people who hope for a brighter inclusive future - er live in hope.
January 1st, 2025 01:38
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
aDarkerMind said:
a new year, a new beginning. we can only hope for better things.
a dark but touching write.
Happy New Year Tristan.
January 1st, 2025 00:01
aDarkerMind said:
a new year, a new beginning. we can only hope for better things.
a dark but touching write.
Happy New Year Tristan.
January 1st, 2025 00:01
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
Thad Wilk said:
A fabulous poem
to end 2024 in!! 🤩
Love this form you
used, it\'s a win,win,win!!🏆
Best wishes 🍀🙏 ✌️ Thad
Happy 2025 !! 🕛🥳🎉🥂
December 31st, 2024 23:13
Thad Wilk said:
A fabulous poem
to end 2024 in!! 🤩
Love this form you
used, it\'s a win,win,win!!🏆
Best wishes 🍀🙏 ✌️ Thad
Happy 2025 !! 🕛🥳🎉🥂
December 31st, 2024 23:13
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen many revelatory cascades, etc. And as they say : \'Your last sentence: Form, etc is not a sentence we hear every day!\' lol.
December 31st, 2024 11:47
orchidee said:
I\'ve not seen many revelatory cascades, etc. And as they say : \'Your last sentence: Form, etc is not a sentence we hear every day!\' lol.
December 31st, 2024 11:47
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
Teddy.15 said:
As an atheist I have no answers except to say we should look for hope and better behaviour from those who cause all this mess and war. Happy New Year dearest Tristan .ay it be as special as you are. 🌹
December 31st, 2024 11:41
Teddy.15 said:
As an atheist I have no answers except to say we should look for hope and better behaviour from those who cause all this mess and war. Happy New Year dearest Tristan .ay it be as special as you are. 🌹
December 31st, 2024 11:41
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
Poetic Licence said:
I echo the sentiments of this piece, i am not of religious thoughts, but i am always amazed that if there is one, why does he sit by and stay silent at all the suffering. Enjoyed the read as always. Happy New Year Tristan to you and all.
December 31st, 2024 11:19
Poetic Licence said:
I echo the sentiments of this piece, i am not of religious thoughts, but i am always amazed that if there is one, why does he sit by and stay silent at all the suffering. Enjoyed the read as always. Happy New Year Tristan to you and all.
December 31st, 2024 11:19
When Fireworks Sound Like Bombs
arqios said:
What a way to start the year! Right and correct.
December 31st, 2024 09:44
arqios said:
What a way to start the year! Right and correct.
December 31st, 2024 09:44
Happy Christmas, O Dear Poets!
NafisaSB said:
a beautiful message penned in acrostic verse
enjoyed it, and yes we are privileged to be part of this wonderful caring community
God bless us all
December 30th, 2024 23:55
NafisaSB said:
a beautiful message penned in acrostic verse
enjoyed it, and yes we are privileged to be part of this wonderful caring community
God bless us all
December 30th, 2024 23:55
Pottersville
arqios said:
And versatile it is, I’m still treading and diving deeper. A true challenge worth the expedition.
December 30th, 2024 22:23
arqios said:
And versatile it is, I’m still treading and diving deeper. A true challenge worth the expedition.
December 30th, 2024 22:23
Pottersville
Thad Wilk said:
WOW! Powerful penning,
really captures the
readers attention I\'d say!!
That form really rocks in
versatility, you\'re right, either way!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 21:01
Thad Wilk said:
WOW! Powerful penning,
really captures the
readers attention I\'d say!!
That form really rocks in
versatility, you\'re right, either way!!
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards Peace Thad
December 30th, 2024 21:01
Pottersville
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite themes are dreams, you make it look so easy, I see music so much music within this dear Tristan, these two lines stand out to me
Where the good get their wish to not be born
Wow a wonderful piece my friend. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 10:30
Teddy.15 said:
One of my favourite themes are dreams, you make it look so easy, I see music so much music within this dear Tristan, these two lines stand out to me
Where the good get their wish to not be born
Wow a wonderful piece my friend. 🌹
December 30th, 2024 10:30
Pottersville
sorenbarrett said:
Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world where there is only wrong and right, good and bad, sane and insane but no we are trapped in a world of color, shades and hues. A nightmare in black and white becomes a dream of serenity in color but also one of confusion with half rights and wrongs. A thought provoking write and I have to admit my knowledge of poetic form is quite limited to sonnets, limericks different rhyme schemes and free verse.
December 30th, 2024 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Some would like us to believe that we live in a black and white world where there is only wrong and right, good and bad, sane and insane but no we are trapped in a world of color, shades and hues. A nightmare in black and white becomes a dream of serenity in color but also one of confusion with half rights and wrongs. A thought provoking write and I have to admit my knowledge of poetic form is quite limited to sonnets, limericks different rhyme schemes and free verse.
December 30th, 2024 10:15
Pottersville
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a very accurate description of the world we already live in, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 30th, 2024 10:06
Poetic Licence said:
It sounds like a very accurate description of the world we already live in, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 30th, 2024 10:06
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