Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Heart Disease
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
Here the metaphor comes through strong and clear. One\'s heart should always be in the dance just as in music or any art.
February 2nd, 2025 07:47
The Man I Cannot Hear
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful, the melencholia is palpable. Superb work.
February 1st, 2025 21:22
The Man I Cannot Hear
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
Neville said:
You are really on form and without doubt, a much braver man than me Tristan .. Neville
February 1st, 2025 12:06
The Man I Cannot Hear
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
orchidee said:
A fictional write? Good to see some more of the \'old RC\'. Aghh, not Roman Catholics, but Revelatory Cascades!
February 1st, 2025 11:58
The Man I Cannot Hear
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
sorenbarrett said:
The form of this poem reminded me a the swing of a church bell. As it swings silently in form it can be heard underneath in the words of the poem. Very createive
February 1st, 2025 09:46
The Withered Garden
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
arqios said:
Now this brings me way back. Love poems that are able to transport the reader every which way! 👍🏻🙏🏻🕊
February 1st, 2025 09:02
You
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Whomever inspired this pretty number sounds like a number of individuals who recklessly abandon others to the edge of life, aptly conveyed as lacking any concern for the same. Beautifully rendered with a painfully haunting poignancy. Too many should resonate with this.
January 31st, 2025 18:58
Echoes of Inevitability
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
Cheeky Missy said:
If I said simply, Genesis 3, would it really matter? It\'s a reality fewer realize than aught, since the end is hauntingly coldly eerie when you mistakenly believed you couldn\'t be so alone. Years ago it dawned on me that there\'d be none to advocate for me to the LORD, only Himself. And the reality which pans itself out even now is so devoid of close companions, I find Job\'s words too aprops, \"...Thou hast made desolate all my company--\" (Job 16:7b) Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a superbly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 31st, 2025 17:58
1933/2016/2024
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
I liked how the years are used to mark points in history like coordinates, very effective there , T👍🏻🙏🏻✌🏼
January 31st, 2025 12:49
1933/2016/2024
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful statement and one i totally agree with, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:38
Poetic Licence said:
Powerful statement and one i totally agree with, enjoyed the read
January 31st, 2025 11:38
1933/2016/2024
sorenbarrett said:
I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you well. Powerfully written.
January 31st, 2025 09:12
sorenbarrett said:
I see what you mean in the similarity of our writes today and hear you well. Powerfully written.
January 31st, 2025 09:12
Would It Be?
Tom Dylan said:
Hmmm... a thought-provoking piece. A fine write. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2025 08:35
Tom Dylan said:
Hmmm... a thought-provoking piece. A fine write. Nicely done.
January 31st, 2025 08:35
Would It Be?
arqios said:
It does make one wonder. Almost like the chicken or the egg scenario 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:18
arqios said:
It does make one wonder. Almost like the chicken or the egg scenario 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 31st, 2025 08:18
Would It Be?
Dan Williams said:
The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can accept that and reach some level or contentment or struggle flutily against it. Well said.
January 31st, 2025 00:00
Dan Williams said:
The answer to this is, I think, everything that lives must die. We can accept that and reach some level or contentment or struggle flutily against it. Well said.
January 31st, 2025 00:00
Would It Be?
NinjaGirl said:
to live, to love, to long, to lose ...concern yourself not with what was or what will be... you\'re alive, quite the miracle itself. you have already been born, might as well have fun with it
January 30th, 2025 16:09
NinjaGirl said:
to live, to love, to long, to lose ...concern yourself not with what was or what will be... you\'re alive, quite the miracle itself. you have already been born, might as well have fun with it
January 30th, 2025 16:09
Would It Be?
Poetic Licence said:
Well where would you start, so many equations. For me i survived but i would not want to do it again, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 12:11
Poetic Licence said:
Well where would you start, so many equations. For me i survived but i would not want to do it again, enjoyed the read
January 30th, 2025 12:11
Would It Be?
Cheeky Missy said:
Depends on what follows, I say. If nothing at all, I\'ve nary use for existing. If what the Scriptures promise, then everything is worth the prize. But enough of me. Charmingly rendered in tantalizing brevity with an almost sneakily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 12:06
Cheeky Missy said:
Depends on what follows, I say. If nothing at all, I\'ve nary use for existing. If what the Scriptures promise, then everything is worth the prize. But enough of me. Charmingly rendered in tantalizing brevity with an almost sneakily haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
January 30th, 2025 12:06
Would It Be?
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - would it have been better in the USA to have trusted someone without such a dodgy barnet (hairstyle), or rug on their head, to lead them? Doh!
January 30th, 2025 10:51
orchidee said:
What I want to know is - would it have been better in the USA to have trusted someone without such a dodgy barnet (hairstyle), or rug on their head, to lead them? Doh!
January 30th, 2025 10:51
Would It Be?
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that I am sure have many opinions. As for me I had a good time but wouldn\'t do it again. Fun read
January 30th, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
Great questions that I am sure have many opinions. As for me I had a good time but wouldn\'t do it again. Fun read
January 30th, 2025 10:31
Would It Be?
Thad Wilk said:
Great read,
thought provoking and
wonderful brevity!! 💯
At this point it really
doesn\'t matter to me! 😊
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 30th, 2025 10:29
Thad Wilk said:
Great read,
thought provoking and
wonderful brevity!! 💯
At this point it really
doesn\'t matter to me! 😊
Thanks for sharing my friend!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 30th, 2025 10:29
Would It Be?
Demar Desu said:
Ah the old age philosophical question. Does it even matter… a great artist I know believed nothing even matters… shout out to Lauryn Hill
January 30th, 2025 09:19
Demar Desu said:
Ah the old age philosophical question. Does it even matter… a great artist I know believed nothing even matters… shout out to Lauryn Hill
January 30th, 2025 09:19
Echoes of Inevitability
Tom Dylan said:
Wow, a powerful. thought-provoking piece.
January 30th, 2025 05:16
Tom Dylan said:
Wow, a powerful. thought-provoking piece.
January 30th, 2025 05:16
Echoes of Inevitability
Neville said:
Profound but also imminently understandable .. because we see and because poetry allows us to .. Neville
January 30th, 2025 01:41
Neville said:
Profound but also imminently understandable .. because we see and because poetry allows us to .. Neville
January 30th, 2025 01:41
Echoes of Inevitability
NinjaGirl said:
To love is accepting that one day you will lose, but in the moment you can enjoy their company
January 29th, 2025 19:24
NinjaGirl said:
To love is accepting that one day you will lose, but in the moment you can enjoy their company
January 29th, 2025 19:24
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