Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
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arqios said:
Potent and a darkness burgeoning at every turn ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 09:01
arqios said:
Potent and a darkness burgeoning at every turn ! 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 09:01
ANXIETY
arqios said:
Nice use of Xanthic here! Have to dig up the file wherein xanthine features in one write, haven’t used it since, lol… wonder why (?) Apologies for not getting to this earlier, my schedules changed around this week… still confused 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 08:47
arqios said:
Nice use of Xanthic here! Have to dig up the file wherein xanthine features in one write, haven’t used it since, lol… wonder why (?) Apologies for not getting to this earlier, my schedules changed around this week… still confused 🙏🏻🕊
February 15th, 2025 08:47
ANXIETY
Mutley Ravishes said:
Anxiety
I guess you’re
Always gonna get me
Until this entity
I believe to be me
Is extinguished!
I never heard the word “xanthic” before! Is it from Greek?
Anxiety - surely one of our greatest tests?
Interesting write, Tristan.
February 14th, 2025 17:36
Mutley Ravishes said:
Anxiety
I guess you’re
Always gonna get me
Until this entity
I believe to be me
Is extinguished!
I never heard the word “xanthic” before! Is it from Greek?
Anxiety - surely one of our greatest tests?
Interesting write, Tristan.
February 14th, 2025 17:36
ANXIETY
orchidee said:
Grrr! lol. I was unsure of \'xanthic\' meaning. When I tried to look it up, it requested a dictionary subscription - money-grabbers!
February 14th, 2025 14:38
orchidee said:
Grrr! lol. I was unsure of \'xanthic\' meaning. When I tried to look it up, it requested a dictionary subscription - money-grabbers!
February 14th, 2025 14:38
ANXIETY
Poetic Licence said:
So true, just when you think it cannot get any worse in your head, someone comes along with another lorry load of crap to dump on you. Hit a cord and will do with many, great write
February 14th, 2025 12:47
Poetic Licence said:
So true, just when you think it cannot get any worse in your head, someone comes along with another lorry load of crap to dump on you. Hit a cord and will do with many, great write
February 14th, 2025 12:47
ANXIETY
Cheeky Missy said:
I has to navigate both the interstate and lesser roads with the same characters mentioned above harassing me endlessly, as well as life and after that don\'t know what to tell you. Fascinatingly rendered with excellent imagery and heartbreaking poignancy, thank you for sharing. Hang in there for me, please.
February 14th, 2025 11:28
Cheeky Missy said:
I has to navigate both the interstate and lesser roads with the same characters mentioned above harassing me endlessly, as well as life and after that don\'t know what to tell you. Fascinatingly rendered with excellent imagery and heartbreaking poignancy, thank you for sharing. Hang in there for me, please.
February 14th, 2025 11:28
ANXIETY
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the world keeps turning. A great write telling us in our arrogance and disregard that we are nothing but dust and it will keep going regardless or in spite of us. Nicely said
February 14th, 2025 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed the world keeps turning. A great write telling us in our arrogance and disregard that we are nothing but dust and it will keep going regardless or in spite of us. Nicely said
February 14th, 2025 10:45
Breathtaking
Neville said:
This is amazing .. indeed, you are amazing .. and really on form (excuse the pun) .. If I may, I would like to copy your postscript & digest it at my own leisure .. subsequently awarded the dubble 👍👍N
February 14th, 2025 04:23
Neville said:
This is amazing .. indeed, you are amazing .. and really on form (excuse the pun) .. If I may, I would like to copy your postscript & digest it at my own leisure .. subsequently awarded the dubble 👍👍N
February 14th, 2025 04:23
Turbulence
Cheeky Missy said:
Doesn\'t sound like someone enjoys flying, at this rate. Fascinating and rather intriguing, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Doesn\'t sound like someone enjoys flying, at this rate. Fascinating and rather intriguing, beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you very much for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 18:58
Breathtaking
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write and although filled with wonderful imagery, i found it quite touching and haunting as i get the vision of someone slowly drowning, he and all being reclaimed. Very enjoyable read
February 13th, 2025 12:10
Poetic Licence said:
A very beautiful write and although filled with wonderful imagery, i found it quite touching and haunting as i get the vision of someone slowly drowning, he and all being reclaimed. Very enjoyable read
February 13th, 2025 12:10
Breathtaking
orchidee said:
Phew! I\'m still trying out what those iambic thingys are - pentameters. I might be writing them without knowing it. lol. A fine write T.
February 13th, 2025 12:01
orchidee said:
Phew! I\'m still trying out what those iambic thingys are - pentameters. I might be writing them without knowing it. lol. A fine write T.
February 13th, 2025 12:01
Breathtaking
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Breathtaking
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
Breathtaking
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
The Window Between
Cheeky Missy said:
Are they stone statues?! Has Jaedis, the fabled White Witch of Narnia, visited ere the darling got to the window, leaving but echoes of what was, and nary breath of life?! The use of a refrain hammers home the deadly reality delineated while the answer hangs unresolved. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 14:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Are they stone statues?! Has Jaedis, the fabled White Witch of Narnia, visited ere the darling got to the window, leaving but echoes of what was, and nary breath of life?! The use of a refrain hammers home the deadly reality delineated while the answer hangs unresolved. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 14:19
The Window Between
teardrop said:
This brought tears to my eyes. Maybe I am sensitive but it breaks my heart to se a dog oor any animal hurt or be abused. What is sad it there are people out there that actually do this. I\'m a firm believer, you get an animal, they become family no matter what. Some people don;t deserve pets. Again, great write. Hope your day is going good.
February 12th, 2025 12:30
teardrop said:
This brought tears to my eyes. Maybe I am sensitive but it breaks my heart to se a dog oor any animal hurt or be abused. What is sad it there are people out there that actually do this. I\'m a firm believer, you get an animal, they become family no matter what. Some people don;t deserve pets. Again, great write. Hope your day is going good.
February 12th, 2025 12:30
The Window Between
orchidee said:
From one angle in the picture it looks like the window is open! But a terrible situation in reality.
February 12th, 2025 11:36
orchidee said:
From one angle in the picture it looks like the window is open! But a terrible situation in reality.
February 12th, 2025 11:36
The Window Between
Poetic Licence said:
It should never to animals but equally i think this is about people as well, and how we all to easily banish and cast aside. Poignant and i feel touching read that makes a needed point. Enjoyed the poetry.
February 12th, 2025 10:25
Poetic Licence said:
It should never to animals but equally i think this is about people as well, and how we all to easily banish and cast aside. Poignant and i feel touching read that makes a needed point. Enjoyed the poetry.
February 12th, 2025 10:25
The Window Between
sorenbarrett said:
Exclusion like banishment more sever than a death sentece has been used from time immemorial as the harshist of punishments. Even now in prisons solitary confinement, being put in the hole is reserved for the greatest of offenses. We and dogs are social animals and need contact with our own. A heart wrenching read.
February 12th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Exclusion like banishment more sever than a death sentece has been used from time immemorial as the harshist of punishments. Even now in prisons solitary confinement, being put in the hole is reserved for the greatest of offenses. We and dogs are social animals and need contact with our own. A heart wrenching read.
February 12th, 2025 09:42
The Window Between
Caring dove said:
That’s sad .. animals should never be neglected or discarded like their nothing .
Good writing ..
Makes me feel sorry for the dog .. probably feels sad and unloved
February 12th, 2025 09:39
Caring dove said:
That’s sad .. animals should never be neglected or discarded like their nothing .
Good writing ..
Makes me feel sorry for the dog .. probably feels sad and unloved
February 12th, 2025 09:39
Turbulence
arqios said:
Hope your to and from from your holiday was turbulence free... and that you are just using this as a symbol/metaphor! Good to have you back here at MPS🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 17:33
arqios said:
Hope your to and from from your holiday was turbulence free... and that you are just using this as a symbol/metaphor! Good to have you back here at MPS🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 17:33
Turbulence
Poetic Licence said:
Too many aeroplanes and not enough runways to land, enjoyed the read
February 11th, 2025 12:44
Poetic Licence said:
Too many aeroplanes and not enough runways to land, enjoyed the read
February 11th, 2025 12:44
Turbulence
Cassie58 said:
This poem conjures up many different images in my mind. It also evokes emotions of recent events. Full of metaphor it was a great read. Good to see you are back after your hols Tristen. Hope you had a fabulous time dear poet.
February 11th, 2025 12:07
Cassie58 said:
This poem conjures up many different images in my mind. It also evokes emotions of recent events. Full of metaphor it was a great read. Good to see you are back after your hols Tristen. Hope you had a fabulous time dear poet.
February 11th, 2025 12:07
Turbulence
aDarkerMind said:
dont worry abot the landing Tristan.
keep flying, keep writing....
and enjoy the applause my friend.
February 11th, 2025 11:01
aDarkerMind said:
dont worry abot the landing Tristan.
keep flying, keep writing....
and enjoy the applause my friend.
February 11th, 2025 11:01
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