Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Bald Is the New Beautiful
sorenbarrett said:
How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A great poem about jumping to conclusions. A most important point since first impressions are often hard to break.
April 23rd, 2025 07:02
sorenbarrett said:
How frequently our initial perceptions are inaccurate and need revision. A great poem about jumping to conclusions. A most important point since first impressions are often hard to break.
April 23rd, 2025 07:02
Bald Is the New Beautiful
arqios said:
I now have a new image of vulture-type scavengers. (shivers) A very effective poem๐๏ธ๐๐ป
April 23rd, 2025 06:37
arqios said:
I now have a new image of vulture-type scavengers. (shivers) A very effective poem๐๏ธ๐๐ป
April 23rd, 2025 06:37
the agony
NafisaSB said:
the agony is so well described - one can almost hear the clink of the metal chains - beautifully worded
April 23rd, 2025 02:15
NafisaSB said:
the agony is so well described - one can almost hear the clink of the metal chains - beautifully worded
April 23rd, 2025 02:15
The Roads Desire Built
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Wow! Loved the line, \"intelligence obscured by desire\" Very strong!!
April 22nd, 2025 14:38
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Wow! Loved the line, \"intelligence obscured by desire\" Very strong!!
April 22nd, 2025 14:38
The Roads Desire Built
arqios said:
Warning signs could be more updated, but even then as mentioned so appropriately, they are hardly ever heeded๐๐ป๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:15
arqios said:
Warning signs could be more updated, but even then as mentioned so appropriately, they are hardly ever heeded๐๐ป๐
April 22nd, 2025 08:15
The Roads Desire Built
sorenbarrett said:
Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short passage. A lovely bouquet of fragrance that smells of the truth. Loved it a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Strong, logical, philosophical and poetic quite a bunch in one short passage. A lovely bouquet of fragrance that smells of the truth. Loved it a definite Fave
April 22nd, 2025 08:13
what now?
arqios said:
And I was beginning to think that a new style was in its nascent period. Your note marries well with the execution that you intended๐๐๐ป
April 21st, 2025 20:36
arqios said:
And I was beginning to think that a new style was in its nascent period. Your note marries well with the execution that you intended๐๐๐ป
April 21st, 2025 20:36
what now?
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Another fantastic piece! It dazzles me how much depth you put into your poems. โบ
April 21st, 2025 14:43
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Another fantastic piece! It dazzles me how much depth you put into your poems. โบ
April 21st, 2025 14:43
what now?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan many complain but few do anything. Those in power have no interest in change and would give us an artificial light that everything is all right. The last line is quite pertinent (and what now?)
April 21st, 2025 14:24
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan many complain but few do anything. Those in power have no interest in change and would give us an artificial light that everything is all right. The last line is quite pertinent (and what now?)
April 21st, 2025 14:24
what now?
orchidee said:
But things have turned to life, from Easter Sunday onwards! Though we\'ve \'journeyed\' through Holy Week first.
April 21st, 2025 11:06
orchidee said:
But things have turned to life, from Easter Sunday onwards! Though we\'ve \'journeyed\' through Holy Week first.
April 21st, 2025 11:06
light & shadow
NafisaSB said:
true - i agree with you - though i wish it can reach the darkest places in our hearts that need illuminating
April 20th, 2025 23:19
NafisaSB said:
true - i agree with you - though i wish it can reach the darkest places in our hearts that need illuminating
April 20th, 2025 23:19
the penumbral revelation
orchidee said:
There\'s three -umbras thingys, I discovered. Dunno what they are exactly, so I will stop before I dig myself into a hole and become a jibbering wreck! lol.
April 20th, 2025 10:26
orchidee said:
There\'s three -umbras thingys, I discovered. Dunno what they are exactly, so I will stop before I dig myself into a hole and become a jibbering wreck! lol.
April 20th, 2025 10:26
the penumbral revelation
sorenbarrett said:
How appropriate for the day. This poem through the mouths of ancient Greeks to Ecclesiastes archetypes and bible images appear. A fun use of space in this text adds flavor. Very nicely don my friend.
April 20th, 2025 08:52
sorenbarrett said:
How appropriate for the day. This poem through the mouths of ancient Greeks to Ecclesiastes archetypes and bible images appear. A fun use of space in this text adds flavor. Very nicely don my friend.
April 20th, 2025 08:52
the penumbral revelation
arqios said:
Oh wow, feels like a progression from the last poem. Keep \'em coming ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 08:35
arqios said:
Oh wow, feels like a progression from the last poem. Keep \'em coming ๐๐ป๐๏ธ
April 20th, 2025 08:35
holy nothing
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of entropy and decay, where blackness is the only light. What a powerful thought. A poem of nothingness that is so powerful and emphatic leaving little hope. Nicely worded it is inwardly metaphoric. Usually metaphors go from a single item to a bigger concept but in this case it goes from the universe to the individual as well. The feeling of nothing.
April 19th, 2025 07:53
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of entropy and decay, where blackness is the only light. What a powerful thought. A poem of nothingness that is so powerful and emphatic leaving little hope. Nicely worded it is inwardly metaphoric. Usually metaphors go from a single item to a bigger concept but in this case it goes from the universe to the individual as well. The feeling of nothing.
April 19th, 2025 07:53
Bed Dread
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
This was a delightful read! Reminds me if something I read once, though I\'m not sure what :p
April 19th, 2025 06:48
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
This was a delightful read! Reminds me if something I read once, though I\'m not sure what :p
April 19th, 2025 06:48
the skull called place
teardrop said:
Hi Triston, Excellent, excellent write. I read this twice and my mind absorbed each word written. And as I was saying WOW to one stanza, along came another one just as good if not better than the words I just read. Seriously, excellent write!
April 19th, 2025 06:05
teardrop said:
Hi Triston, Excellent, excellent write. I read this twice and my mind absorbed each word written. And as I was saying WOW to one stanza, along came another one just as good if not better than the words I just read. Seriously, excellent write!
April 19th, 2025 06:05
The Pecking
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Utterly exquisite!
April 18th, 2025 15:12
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Utterly exquisite!
April 18th, 2025 15:12
the skull called place
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Utterly captivating!
April 18th, 2025 11:26
๐ฆเพเฝฒโ๐ช๐๐ต๐ฎ๐ฒ๐ฐ๐ฑ ๐ฆเพเฝฒ said:
Utterly captivating!
April 18th, 2025 11:26
the skull called place
Poetic Licence said:
The dark inner struggle gathering pace through the write only to be then slowed down to arrive at its destined conclusion, no nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 11:15
Poetic Licence said:
The dark inner struggle gathering pace through the write only to be then slowed down to arrive at its destined conclusion, no nicely expressed and written
April 18th, 2025 11:15
the skull called place
orchidee said:
If it was just an entirely \'dark\' poem for the sake of it, I could say \'Ahh, so you\'ve spent one while day with KP?!\' heehee.
April 18th, 2025 10:36
orchidee said:
If it was just an entirely \'dark\' poem for the sake of it, I could say \'Ahh, so you\'ve spent one while day with KP?!\' heehee.
April 18th, 2025 10:36
the skull called place
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tristan! By night or day, the misery finds an eloquent scribe to tell of that internal struggle none but feel, yet fewer can put into words as deliciously as yourself. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, that particular delight of poets in consonance and assonance, and a gripping, haunting, familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:16
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang, Tristan! By night or day, the misery finds an eloquent scribe to tell of that internal struggle none but feel, yet fewer can put into words as deliciously as yourself. La dee! Gorgeously rendered with nigh exquisite imagery, that particular delight of poets in consonance and assonance, and a gripping, haunting, familiar poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 18th, 2025 10:16
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