Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Requiem Aeternam
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this piece, it flows very well with an eye-opening message to top it off
May 27th, 2019 19:03
lonelyraccoon said:
I love this piece, it flows very well with an eye-opening message to top it off
May 27th, 2019 19:03
Metamorphosis
SoulMeetsBody said:
Interesting concept! Reminds me of a much bleaker version of the lyrics of To Build A Home - the themes of a home disintegrating are subtler, yet still there. Hope you like the song. - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB0ordd2nOI
May 19th, 2019 17:16
SoulMeetsBody said:
Interesting concept! Reminds me of a much bleaker version of the lyrics of To Build A Home - the themes of a home disintegrating are subtler, yet still there. Hope you like the song. - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QB0ordd2nOI
May 19th, 2019 17:16
In the End
Goldfinch60 said:
We may fall down hard but all we need to do is look for the light in our lives and go towards it.
January 8th, 2019 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
We may fall down hard but all we need to do is look for the light in our lives and go towards it.
January 8th, 2019 01:31
In the End
whisperingquill said:
That third stanza
👍🏼 excellent weaving
Really damn potent
January 7th, 2019 23:05
whisperingquill said:
That third stanza
👍🏼 excellent weaving
Really damn potent
January 7th, 2019 23:05
Phantom
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting and well written...please see my poem \"Phantoms\"...take care...Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2019 02:51
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Very interesting and well written...please see my poem \"Phantoms\"...take care...Happy New Year
January 3rd, 2019 02:51
Voyage de l\'enfer
orchidee said:
Oo-er I looked up \'Enfer\'. Wikipedia says it\'s something swoony! heehee.
February 11th, 2018 03:03
orchidee said:
Oo-er I looked up \'Enfer\'. Wikipedia says it\'s something swoony! heehee.
February 11th, 2018 03:03
No Response
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes apathy can be a great weapon.
January 23rd, 2018 01:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, sometimes apathy can be a great weapon.
January 23rd, 2018 01:51
The Walls
Resa71 said:
That was truly amazing! I also suffer from depression. Your poem literally gave me chills.:)
January 10th, 2018 03:21
Resa71 said:
That was truly amazing! I also suffer from depression. Your poem literally gave me chills.:)
January 10th, 2018 03:21
The Walls
kevin browne said:
comfort in despair, what a beautiful line and along side you work here feels just the same. well crafted thought towards a very important condition. I have suffered immensely with depression but use poetry for my medicine which help lots. thanks for giving hope, it\'s well received.
January 9th, 2018 21:49
kevin browne said:
comfort in despair, what a beautiful line and along side you work here feels just the same. well crafted thought towards a very important condition. I have suffered immensely with depression but use poetry for my medicine which help lots. thanks for giving hope, it\'s well received.
January 9th, 2018 21:49
Death Rattle
Louis Gibbs said:
An enticing, enigmatic write, TR. I enjoyed reading it.
January 2nd, 2018 10:20
Louis Gibbs said:
An enticing, enigmatic write, TR. I enjoyed reading it.
January 2nd, 2018 10:20
À la nuit noire
Shadowbox15 said:
Why are you using plural? Also “mort” is masculine.
December 27th, 2017 12:01
Shadowbox15 said:
Why are you using plural? Also “mort” is masculine.
December 27th, 2017 12:01
Death Becomes Me
orchidee said:
Oohh have a nice cup of tea instead, and not be too \'dark\'! The tea should sort out things, along with a slice of cake and a chat with a friend. lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:42
orchidee said:
Oohh have a nice cup of tea instead, and not be too \'dark\'! The tea should sort out things, along with a slice of cake and a chat with a friend. lol.
December 16th, 2017 06:42
Lies
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one you have told to whom.
October 17th, 2017 00:50
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The problem with lies is that you need to remember which one you have told to whom.
October 17th, 2017 00:50
Apparition
Mugsdaddy said:
Really really good I like the flow and the style excellent write.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 21:02
Mugsdaddy said:
Really really good I like the flow and the style excellent write.
Mugsdaddy
October 4th, 2017 21:02
Apparition
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, perfect for this time of year. Very well written. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:20
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, perfect for this time of year. Very well written. ; )
October 4th, 2017 18:20
3
orchidee said:
You run out of \'E\'s on your keyboard?! heehee. A fin3 writ3 (lol) though not really my genre. It\'s odd - I heard of someone spelling their name \'Su3an\'.
October 2nd, 2017 14:32
orchidee said:
You run out of \'E\'s on your keyboard?! heehee. A fin3 writ3 (lol) though not really my genre. It\'s odd - I heard of someone spelling their name \'Su3an\'.
October 2nd, 2017 14:32
A House With No Mirrors
myself and me said:
not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us, so that we could all go blind.
August 15th, 2017 21:57
myself and me said:
not only there is no mirror, but also, the politician provide blind to us, so that we could all go blind.
August 15th, 2017 21:57
Afraid to Love
Night Owl said:
Thought provoking! Makes me remember and feel... Took me places I had buried... Yes this world can be argggggg...
August 5th, 2017 08:04
Night Owl said:
Thought provoking! Makes me remember and feel... Took me places I had buried... Yes this world can be argggggg...
August 5th, 2017 08:04
Unleashed
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of life\'s truest endeavors. I hope you find inspiration here sir, as I have in this poem. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 21:37
Nicholas Browning said:
Finding the key to caging and releasing that demon at will are one of life\'s truest endeavors. I hope you find inspiration here sir, as I have in this poem. Good job.
July 11th, 2017 21:37
Our Eternal Slumber
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, I read this the other day and didn\'t comment. I can\'t remember why I didn\'t. Anyways, this is cool stuff. A fresh style and take on the feeling of being forsaken. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 19:48
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there, I read this the other day and didn\'t comment. I can\'t remember why I didn\'t. Anyways, this is cool stuff. A fresh style and take on the feeling of being forsaken. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 19:48
Our Eternal Slumber
Trev said:
Wow, nice work. I feel like I\'m watching it unfold
July 11th, 2017 00:23
Trev said:
Wow, nice work. I feel like I\'m watching it unfold
July 11th, 2017 00:23
The Walls of Insanity
orchidee said:
That\'ll teach ya for watching the equivalent of \'Neighbours\' here in the UK. I went insane with it years ago! heehee. You see, I refuse to watch a programme that has a character named \'Toadfish\' in it, even though a nickname! lol. It don\'t sound human. Then again, the cast are all made of wood!
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
That\'ll teach ya for watching the equivalent of \'Neighbours\' here in the UK. I went insane with it years ago! heehee. You see, I refuse to watch a programme that has a character named \'Toadfish\' in it, even though a nickname! lol. It don\'t sound human. Then again, the cast are all made of wood!
Good write.
May 9th, 2017 01:51
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