Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Endless Sea
Edthepoet said:
Reminds me of an Alan watts quote \"imagine what it\'s like to wake up, having never been to sleep\" excellent poem, really enjoyed it.
January 23rd, 2017 12:42
Edthepoet said:
Reminds me of an Alan watts quote \"imagine what it\'s like to wake up, having never been to sleep\" excellent poem, really enjoyed it.
January 23rd, 2017 12:42
Willow Tree
Pintu Mahakul said:
Very amazing poem is composed in rhyme manner. With the weeping tears of a willow tree this conveys interesting message.
January 20th, 2017 20:26
Pintu Mahakul said:
Very amazing poem is composed in rhyme manner. With the weeping tears of a willow tree this conveys interesting message.
January 20th, 2017 20:26
The Anxious Morning
NB said:
brilliant.. the last two lines really make it :)
January 20th, 2017 07:46
NB said:
brilliant.. the last two lines really make it :)
January 20th, 2017 07:46
Lurking Demons
Augustus said:
I always feel subject to temptations and have at times give in to the dark side. I pray there is forgiveness in the end. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 13:02
Augustus said:
I always feel subject to temptations and have at times give in to the dark side. I pray there is forgiveness in the end. Nicely done.
January 18th, 2017 13:02
The Withered Garden
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Excellent structure. Hope to read more tomorrow! Again, great job!--Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:20
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! Excellent structure. Hope to read more tomorrow! Again, great job!--Christina
January 17th, 2017 12:20
The Withered Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a very elegant poem with a very wintry tale. I am sad that your poem is not just about a Winter dormant garden (with anticipation of resurrection in the Spring) but a WITHERED GARDEN that is well past its \"sell by date\". It is even sadder when such a Garden was once the playground of our verdant Youth. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
January 17th, 2017 10:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS FRIEND ~ For a very elegant poem with a very wintry tale. I am sad that your poem is not just about a Winter dormant garden (with anticipation of resurrection in the Spring) but a WITHERED GARDEN that is well past its \"sell by date\". It is even sadder when such a Garden was once the playground of our verdant Youth. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)
January 17th, 2017 10:11
The Withered Garden
Michael Edwards said:
A pleasure to read - I hope you will be posting more.
January 17th, 2017 01:59
Michael Edwards said:
A pleasure to read - I hope you will be posting more.
January 17th, 2017 01:59
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