Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Those Who Lie In Wait
Tony36 said:

Love it

September 7th, 2024 10:50

Those Who Lie In Wait
Cassie58 said:

Lovely imagery conveyed in this shape poem. Much enjoyed. Have a happy Saturday.

September 7th, 2024 09:02

The Tempest\'s Strike
Doggerel Dave said:

I felt the surface atmospherics forcefully. In fact such was the painful intensity, that I really had no wish to investigate the underlying emotional plane below.
A very strong write.

September 5th, 2024 21:20

The Tempest\'s Strike
orchidee said:

Ahh, a poem about a bad hair day! lol.

September 5th, 2024 08:51

The Tempest\'s Strike
sorenbarrett said:

Descriptive and vivid in imagery. These images accompany the emotions of the poem and foretell the ending. Very powerful.

September 5th, 2024 08:19

The Sullen Swimmer
Dan Williams said:

Very tasteful. I think E.A. Poe would approve.

September 2nd, 2024 00:39

The Sullen Swimmer
Cheeky Missy said:

Haha. Looks reminiscent of... surely not Charlie Chapman?! He\'s too dressed to enjoy skinny dipping, that must be it.

September 1st, 2024 21:18

The Sullen Swimmer
aDarkerMind said:

top marks from me Tristan.

a most impressive write;

September 1st, 2024 12:45

The Sullen Swimmer
orchidee said:

Good write T.

September 1st, 2024 11:30

Flytrap
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 31st, 2024 10:12

Flytrap
sorenbarrett said:

What I felt when I heard Mozart\'s Lacrimosa the first time. A dark and wonderful write

August 31st, 2024 09:31

To Sophie
orchidee said:

RIP Sophie. Looks just like one of our cats, though it\'s a black tom cat.
Maybe get a replacement cat in time?
You won\'t be a traitor to the memory of Sophie if you do.

August 30th, 2024 01:42

To Sophie
Cheeky Missy said:

Aww, I\'m so sorry! While your purring sweetheart tries to console you, the ache and pain refuse to be silenced. Beautifully expressive and poignant. Thank you for sharing.

August 29th, 2024 20:18

The Endless Muse
sorenbarrett said:

Death is just part of life and is as much a friend as is birth

August 26th, 2024 15:59

The Endless Muse
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thank you! I\'m glad the poem made an impact. I\'d love to hear more about what stood out to you!

August 26th, 2024 15:34

The Endless Muse
Cheeky Missy said:

Whoa!

August 26th, 2024 14:02

Meltdown
aDarkerMind said:

a most impressive write Tristan.

thoroughly enjoyed the read.

August 25th, 2024 08:21

Meltdown
orchidee said:

A fine write T. Erm, I\'m not exactly writing a major epic, but shall carry on poet-ing!

August 24th, 2024 01:35

Meltdown
Doggerel Dave said:

Slightly more than a dissociative spell then?
I must say your write plus picture left me feeling slightly…Vague memories of similar many moons ago.


August 23rd, 2024 17:07

Meltdown
sorenbarrett said:

It does reflect the issue of melt down well. Very nice

August 23rd, 2024 17:01

An Ode to Heartache
sorenbarrett said:

Infatuation with the unobtainable is gasoline on fire and then the fire extinguisher. Very nice

August 15th, 2024 19:53

An Ode to Heartache
Doggerel Dave said:

Her emotions are so overwhelming that tight control is the only way she manages to keep her passion under control.
Look deeper; I\'m sure that................

August 15th, 2024 18:26

The Planet
Doggerel Dave said:

Message received. Can you get home? Clearly we won\'t be returning.

August 14th, 2024 16:49

The Planet
Tony36 said:

Beautiful write

August 14th, 2024 16:46

The Planet
sorenbarrett said:

Beautifully stated that nature has no sense of fairness or justice it has its own rules. Brilliant!!

August 14th, 2024 13:07

Tomb of Obscurity
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

August 11th, 2024 12:46

Tomb of Obscurity
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful word nicely said in a sort verse

August 11th, 2024 12:44

Inclusive
jarcher54 said:

At some point universal love is the only thing that can achieve inclusivity. I recall having sympathy for the likes of bin Laden or former governor of Alabama the segregationist George Wallace. Sympathy that they were so twisted and had been lead astray. I am not religious but find that the teachings of wise folks like Jesus (whether real or a character) or the Dali Lama are the source (or inspiration?) of my own version of inclusiveness. But alas it is a one-way street. I suspect there are many who would not accept me!

August 8th, 2024 03:43

Inclusive
orchidee said:

Hmm, that\'s a rather inclusive poem! lol.

August 8th, 2024 02:02

Inclusive
sorenbarrett said:

On the surface it seems so clear cut, prejudice is wrong but it is not so simple we all hold prejudices maybe not racial, gender or about religion but what of against murderers, rapists, liars, the ugly, obnoxious, those that hold different opinions than us. A wonderful write one that needs addressing.

August 7th, 2024 18:20



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