Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
sitting at the café
sorenbarrett said:
Such a senryu I always love when I read something that touches me and I can\'t identify why. Such is the case with this write Tristan. It reaches out of the darkness to the light and with a sense of sadness touches the ethereal.
February 27th, 2025 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
Such a senryu I always love when I read something that touches me and I can\'t identify why. Such is the case with this write Tristan. It reaches out of the darkness to the light and with a sense of sadness touches the ethereal.
February 27th, 2025 08:44
sitting at the café
arqios said:
I do get this! The seasons unawares, come and go and I’m quite taken by all of it, torn apart; hopeful but overly distraught 🙏🏻🕊
February 27th, 2025 08:17
arqios said:
I do get this! The seasons unawares, come and go and I’m quite taken by all of it, torn apart; hopeful but overly distraught 🙏🏻🕊
February 27th, 2025 08:17
Unbelievable
Cassie58 said:
I always found the Queen in Alice and Wonderland really scary. She is just as scary in your poem Tristan. The tea and scones sound delightful though. Loved the references to Alice in Wonderland. Have a happy Thursday dear poet.
February 27th, 2025 02:52
Cassie58 said:
I always found the Queen in Alice and Wonderland really scary. She is just as scary in your poem Tristan. The tea and scones sound delightful though. Loved the references to Alice in Wonderland. Have a happy Thursday dear poet.
February 27th, 2025 02:52
Unbelievable
Mutley Ravishes said:
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
That was a fun (and challenging) read.
February 26th, 2025 18:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
Twinkle, twinkle, little bat!
That was a fun (and challenging) read.
February 26th, 2025 18:25
Unbelievable
Distant View said:
Very Lewis Carroll! Surreal imagery often works well in poetry!
February 26th, 2025 16:30
Distant View said:
Very Lewis Carroll! Surreal imagery often works well in poetry!
February 26th, 2025 16:30
Dark Age Descended
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thinkest thou so, dear friend? What haunts every single reading of this superbly rendered history lesson is the burning, burning of the arts...for it is merely a foretaste of the promised end. As for those in power whom some of the populace cry against and others cherish, we have no record of that world obliterated in the flood, yet apparently are in headlong pursuit of reattaining the same. Food for thought, no? Thank you for sharing your expertise. Expertly rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
February 26th, 2025 14:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Thinkest thou so, dear friend? What haunts every single reading of this superbly rendered history lesson is the burning, burning of the arts...for it is merely a foretaste of the promised end. As for those in power whom some of the populace cry against and others cherish, we have no record of that world obliterated in the flood, yet apparently are in headlong pursuit of reattaining the same. Food for thought, no? Thank you for sharing your expertise. Expertly rendered with excellent imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you again.
February 26th, 2025 14:26
Unbelievable
Cheeky Missy said:
Alice in the netherworld. Even my squirrels are polite to traffic since I begged them to be careful after seeing a squashed one. Ah, Tristan. Charmingly rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:02
Cheeky Missy said:
Alice in the netherworld. Even my squirrels are polite to traffic since I begged them to be careful after seeing a squashed one. Ah, Tristan. Charmingly rendered with exquisite imagery and a damning poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2025 14:02
Unbelievable
Poetic Licence said:
Loved the imagery in this one great read, the picture took me back to being married!!!
February 26th, 2025 13:10
Poetic Licence said:
Loved the imagery in this one great read, the picture took me back to being married!!!
February 26th, 2025 13:10
Unbelievable
NinjaGirl said:
Your rabbit hole sure is different than in the story
February 26th, 2025 12:50
NinjaGirl said:
Your rabbit hole sure is different than in the story
February 26th, 2025 12:50
Unbelievable
Neville said:
Although it might be a bit of a cliché, without wanting to sound like a stuck record, you are on form .. top form mate .. well done You .. Kindest Regards, Me 😎👍
February 26th, 2025 11:38
Neville said:
Although it might be a bit of a cliché, without wanting to sound like a stuck record, you are on form .. top form mate .. well done You .. Kindest Regards, Me 😎👍
February 26th, 2025 11:38
Unbelievable
Demar Desu said:
It takes imagination to read your poems and even then like this one you visually craft for your audience… good stuff
February 26th, 2025 10:52
Demar Desu said:
It takes imagination to read your poems and even then like this one you visually craft for your audience… good stuff
February 26th, 2025 10:52
Unbelievable
sorenbarrett said:
Alice in wonderland was one of my favorites as a child and continues to hold a lot of charm. Through the looking glass and Lewis Carrol\'s the hunting of the Snark. Here there are continual references to Alice. Loved your ending that resolved the rest of this poem. Very nice Tristan
February 26th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
Alice in wonderland was one of my favorites as a child and continues to hold a lot of charm. Through the looking glass and Lewis Carrol\'s the hunting of the Snark. Here there are continual references to Alice. Loved your ending that resolved the rest of this poem. Very nice Tristan
February 26th, 2025 10:33
Dark Age Descended
Neville said:
.................................... Astronomical .. the shape of things to come 🚀🌍🌎🌏🌒🌖😎👍
February 26th, 2025 02:45
Neville said:
.................................... Astronomical .. the shape of things to come 🚀🌍🌎🌏🌒🌖😎👍
February 26th, 2025 02:45
Dark Age Descended
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute: To the richness of the history, about which I know nothing; the validity of our earthbound situation as depicted here, the form and the prose with which it is defined.
That form itself is something to behold, and as I struggle to publish my simple verse, I shall be forever intimidated by thoughts of your monumental effort, Tristan. 🥹
February 25th, 2025 18:46
Doggerel Dave said:
A tribute: To the richness of the history, about which I know nothing; the validity of our earthbound situation as depicted here, the form and the prose with which it is defined.
That form itself is something to behold, and as I struggle to publish my simple verse, I shall be forever intimidated by thoughts of your monumental effort, Tristan. 🥹
February 25th, 2025 18:46
Dark Age Descended
NinjaGirl said:
The shape is beautiful, I can tell a lot of time was put into this and it was worth it! Wonderful writing as well.
February 25th, 2025 13:02
NinjaGirl said:
The shape is beautiful, I can tell a lot of time was put into this and it was worth it! Wonderful writing as well.
February 25th, 2025 13:02
Dark Age Descended
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some piece of writing, knowledge has always been power, that\'s why they like to keep us minions in the dark. If we had more knowledge we would challenge that power. Regarding history it astonishes me how little some people know of the worlds history and the actual facts, if we do not acknowledge our history and learn from it, we can never make progress, a really great read
February 25th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
Now that is some piece of writing, knowledge has always been power, that\'s why they like to keep us minions in the dark. If we had more knowledge we would challenge that power. Regarding history it astonishes me how little some people know of the worlds history and the actual facts, if we do not acknowledge our history and learn from it, we can never make progress, a really great read
February 25th, 2025 09:51
Dark Age Descended
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem pulled me along through this universe of history that I had learned long ago one of many human tragedies that have held us back where we are. A sad commentary on what one man values another sees as not just trash but evil. A wonderful write my friend.
February 25th, 2025 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan quite a write this was and a journey too. The shape of the poem pulled me along through this universe of history that I had learned long ago one of many human tragedies that have held us back where we are. A sad commentary on what one man values another sees as not just trash but evil. A wonderful write my friend.
February 25th, 2025 08:53
Pontiac
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Tristan. I guess there\'s always two sides to a coin - oppression on one side, and (relative) freedom on the other.
February 24th, 2025 18:47
Mutley Ravishes said:
Great write, Tristan. I guess there\'s always two sides to a coin - oppression on one side, and (relative) freedom on the other.
February 24th, 2025 18:47
Pontiac
Poetic Licence said:
The native American Indian history is something i have a great interest in, so I am delighted to see someone giving a nod there way and touching lightly on the way they were and are being treated , Loved the read
February 24th, 2025 11:51
Poetic Licence said:
The native American Indian history is something i have a great interest in, so I am delighted to see someone giving a nod there way and touching lightly on the way they were and are being treated , Loved the read
February 24th, 2025 11:51
Pontiac
sorenbarrett said:
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on Native American history. It has been a long time since I have written about this. Cars well I have to leave that up to my little brother that built funny cars. He had so many tickets that any pocket of his one could be found. A most unique write where lines were woven like an Indian blanket. This must have taken a good deal of time and effort. Lovely and a definite fav
February 24th, 2025 11:06
sorenbarrett said:
As creative as the name, whether car or man. Now you have got me going on Native American history. It has been a long time since I have written about this. Cars well I have to leave that up to my little brother that built funny cars. He had so many tickets that any pocket of his one could be found. A most unique write where lines were woven like an Indian blanket. This must have taken a good deal of time and effort. Lovely and a definite fav
February 24th, 2025 11:06
Dunk Tank
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is possible to over-like the sentiment contained herein .. or to dislike and disapprove of the moron that clearly inspired it more than I do .. Neville 🐝👍
February 24th, 2025 03:46
Neville said:
I don\'t think it is possible to over-like the sentiment contained herein .. or to dislike and disapprove of the moron that clearly inspired it more than I do .. Neville 🐝👍
February 24th, 2025 03:46
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