Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Hunger
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much in the world but those who have it will not let it go to those who NEED it. Good write.
March 17th, 2017 02:39
Goldfinch60 said:
There is so much in the world but those who have it will not let it go to those who NEED it. Good write.
March 17th, 2017 02:39
The Hunger
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
why should it be Us who should die?Here in the US the homeless live the way they do because they choose to...very rarely is it not of their own doing...I liked this until the last line, but maybe it is metaphorical ...
March 16th, 2017 21:49
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
why should it be Us who should die?Here in the US the homeless live the way they do because they choose to...very rarely is it not of their own doing...I liked this until the last line, but maybe it is metaphorical ...
March 16th, 2017 21:49
Toward Ultimate Reality
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The Spirit is always there.
March 14th, 2017 03:03
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. The Spirit is always there.
March 14th, 2017 03:03
Bête Noir
Augustus said:
Seems more than bête noir. C\'est dommage. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 15:22
Augustus said:
Seems more than bête noir. C\'est dommage. Nicely done.
March 12th, 2017 15:22
Bête Noir
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We all wear masks for different occasons.
March 12th, 2017 02:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. We all wear masks for different occasons.
March 12th, 2017 02:42
The Philosopher Clown
Hypothesis said:
Brilliant script here my friend. You managed to pull strings together showing the anthology of physics.
Read my piece called Laughing Gas. Its not just about a clown either.
March 11th, 2017 14:12
Hypothesis said:
Brilliant script here my friend. You managed to pull strings together showing the anthology of physics.
Read my piece called Laughing Gas. Its not just about a clown either.
March 11th, 2017 14:12
Book of Horrors
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. In this day and age the world can be an awful place but peace and happiness are out there, sometimes they are not easy to find.
March 9th, 2017 04:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. In this day and age the world can be an awful place but peace and happiness are out there, sometimes they are not easy to find.
March 9th, 2017 04:11
Book of Horrors
Augustus said:
If indeed it was your life then this is cathartic; if not it reminds us of innocence denied and offers hope. So I see this as a winner in either case. I don\'t follow the misunderstanding, maybe that\'s just me.
March 8th, 2017 23:12
Augustus said:
If indeed it was your life then this is cathartic; if not it reminds us of innocence denied and offers hope. So I see this as a winner in either case. I don\'t follow the misunderstanding, maybe that\'s just me.
March 8th, 2017 23:12
Nevermore
MendedFences27 said:
Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and death.Wonderfully presented as the world\'s loss of innocence, with war as the catalyst, you speak in truth about the loss of love among the peoples of this Earth. I do however hold out hope for the future, and I see a bright and shining place where mankind is governed universally and all are treated equally. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 21:00
MendedFences27 said:
Nevermore, the raven of death, closes your austere vision of war and death.Wonderfully presented as the world\'s loss of innocence, with war as the catalyst, you speak in truth about the loss of love among the peoples of this Earth. I do however hold out hope for the future, and I see a bright and shining place where mankind is governed universally and all are treated equally. Loved your poem. - Phil A.
March 7th, 2017 21:00
Pantomime
Goldfinch60 said:
That light in our minds is the one that we should look towards. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 03:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That light in our minds is the one that we should look towards. Good write.
March 3rd, 2017 03:10
Pantomime
Augustus said:
I no longer dance and am quickly running out of wick, so I take your poem very personally. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 19:52
Augustus said:
I no longer dance and am quickly running out of wick, so I take your poem very personally. Nicely done.
March 2nd, 2017 19:52
False Assurance
Augustus said:
Deep philosophical message here. Wow! Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 21:59
Augustus said:
Deep philosophical message here. Wow! Nicely done.
February 28th, 2017 21:59
Bloody Scars
Augustus said:
This is reminding me of a relationship with death. Very suspenseful.\"caressed this face of shadows\" was my favorite. I liked this a lot.
February 27th, 2017 22:44
Augustus said:
This is reminding me of a relationship with death. Very suspenseful.\"caressed this face of shadows\" was my favorite. I liked this a lot.
February 27th, 2017 22:44
Bloody Scars
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 21:59
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 21:59
Bloody Scars
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 15:18
Crow. said:
I can really relate to this. This is a very good write.
Yours,
Kloe
February 27th, 2017 15:18
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