Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Endless Spectator
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
A deep,dark and delving write!! 🤔
Love that last stanza
it was really dynamite!! 🧨 👍
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 9th, 2024 20:41
The Endless Spectator
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
sorenbarrett said:
A deep issue with thoughts to mull over. My favorite lines were
To cease to be is the culmination of life.
It\'s the cessation of the curse that
Incubates in the womb and is born
Into a world that feeds on failure.
Thought provoking and challenging
December 9th, 2024 15:11
The Endless Spectator
Poetic Licence said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
Poetic Licence said:
I can connect with this on so many levels Tristan, as always i find your poetry a very interesting read, Thank you
December 9th, 2024 11:42
Lies
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
Caring dove said:
Yeah , some people lie then lie again and again .. and at some point they need to tell the truth . It doesn’t help the person who is lying or the person being lied to
December 9th, 2024 04:39
A Tale of Two Journeys
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
Teddy.15 said:
An epic. So very well written, a subject that especially at this time of year is difficult for those who are alone. Timeless piece. 🌹
December 9th, 2024 03:44
Maria\'s Last Dance
Teddy.15 said:
An amazing and outstanding piece of poetry dear Tristan, kudos on the emotion and language my friend 💜
December 8th, 2024 18:24
Teddy.15 said:
An amazing and outstanding piece of poetry dear Tristan, kudos on the emotion and language my friend 💜
December 8th, 2024 18:24
A Tale of Two Journeys
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, rendered with a haunting poignancy dropping like blood down, down the page, so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 18:01
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, rendered with a haunting poignancy dropping like blood down, down the page, so beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
December 8th, 2024 18:01
Maria\'s Last Dance
cellinic said:
\'And here we are
In a parking lot of past regret—broken dreams—
Stuck between then and everything after.\' - really very impressively and poetically narrated story... best wishes,
December 8th, 2024 09:41
cellinic said:
\'And here we are
In a parking lot of past regret—broken dreams—
Stuck between then and everything after.\' - really very impressively and poetically narrated story... best wishes,
December 8th, 2024 09:41
Maria\'s Last Dance
Dan Williams said:
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about mental health, having struggled to find my way in it for too many years now. Very nice work here.
December 8th, 2024 01:26
Dan Williams said:
Such a well described and heartfelt lament. And you are so right about mental health, having struggled to find my way in it for too many years now. Very nice work here.
December 8th, 2024 01:26
Crowing Time
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me a bit of this image: https://img.huffingtonpost.com/asset/596a6f352100008860fc70c1.jpg?ops=scalefit_500_noupscale Music is medicine...words for those of us who can\'t find our own.
December 7th, 2024 22:16
NinjaGirl said:
Reminds me a bit of this image: https://img.huffingtonpost.com/asset/596a6f352100008860fc70c1.jpg?ops=scalefit_500_noupscale Music is medicine...words for those of us who can\'t find our own.
December 7th, 2024 22:16
A Tale of Two Journeys
NinjaGirl said:
Great to know the name for a poem like this! Amazing successful writing of one!
December 7th, 2024 22:12
NinjaGirl said:
Great to know the name for a poem like this! Amazing successful writing of one!
December 7th, 2024 22:12
Maria\'s Last Dance
NinjaGirl said:
How easy is it, to ignore one\'s screams, when chasing our own dreams? How tragic is it, that one must die, for us to realize what was a cry? Failing to understand their pain is a burden we carry, aren\'t you glad we didn\'t give anyone a burden for us?
December 7th, 2024 22:08
NinjaGirl said:
How easy is it, to ignore one\'s screams, when chasing our own dreams? How tragic is it, that one must die, for us to realize what was a cry? Failing to understand their pain is a burden we carry, aren\'t you glad we didn\'t give anyone a burden for us?
December 7th, 2024 22:08
Maria\'s Last Dance
arqios said:
Like the echoes of a bell just rung or the after image of a candle’s flickering flame, so does this poem and its last stanza remain imprinting indelibly at the core: “ And,
Tragically,
She cannot hear
A ghost who’s never
Really
Been there.”
It has completely undone me.
December 7th, 2024 15:17
arqios said:
Like the echoes of a bell just rung or the after image of a candle’s flickering flame, so does this poem and its last stanza remain imprinting indelibly at the core: “ And,
Tragically,
She cannot hear
A ghost who’s never
Really
Been there.”
It has completely undone me.
December 7th, 2024 15:17
Maria\'s Last Dance
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful, moving and
heart rendering write!! 😢
Suicide lines and those
mental health resources,
really do help in this fight!! 🙏
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ 🕊️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:48
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful, moving and
heart rendering write!! 😢
Suicide lines and those
mental health resources,
really do help in this fight!! 🙏
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ 🕊️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:48
Maria\'s Last Dance
sorenbarrett said:
As human beings, we all share, and experiences, though they have their many differences. This poem pulls from my past many threads that weave a worn fabric. It evoked many emotions which is the sign of true art. It is highly emotional and dark as well. Very nicely written Tristan. It shows an artists care.
December 7th, 2024 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
As human beings, we all share, and experiences, though they have their many differences. This poem pulls from my past many threads that weave a worn fabric. It evoked many emotions which is the sign of true art. It is highly emotional and dark as well. Very nicely written Tristan. It shows an artists care.
December 7th, 2024 13:42
Maria\'s Last Dance
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful that you were inspired by two different songs to create this master piece. The subject matter touches so many families. Thank you for raising awareness to mental health problems. Loved the alliteration in the first stanza. That set up the whole piece and it was a delight to read Tristan. Have a good Saturday.
December 7th, 2024 12:40
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful that you were inspired by two different songs to create this master piece. The subject matter touches so many families. Thank you for raising awareness to mental health problems. Loved the alliteration in the first stanza. That set up the whole piece and it was a delight to read Tristan. Have a good Saturday.
December 7th, 2024 12:40
Maria\'s Last Dance
aDarkerMind said:
there is not a single book of poetry in the world, that this write would not belong Tristan.
an outstanding write on mental health my friend.
an outstanding write of poetry.....!
take a bow and enjoy the applause.
December 7th, 2024 10:11
aDarkerMind said:
there is not a single book of poetry in the world, that this write would not belong Tristan.
an outstanding write on mental health my friend.
an outstanding write of poetry.....!
take a bow and enjoy the applause.
December 7th, 2024 10:11
Maria\'s Last Dance
Poetic Licence said:
Something close to my heart Mental health, i found the poem fascinating and questioning and thoroughly enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 7th, 2024 08:51
Poetic Licence said:
Something close to my heart Mental health, i found the poem fascinating and questioning and thoroughly enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 7th, 2024 08:51
Maria\'s Last Dance
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
A Tale of Two Journeys
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
A Tale of Two Journeys
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
A Tale of Two Journeys
Poetic Licence said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
Poetic Licence said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
A Tale of Two Journeys
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Crowing Time
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
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