Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Turbulence
Cassie58 said:

This poem conjures up many different images in my mind. It also evokes emotions of recent events. Full of metaphor it was a great read. Good to see you are back after your hols Tristen. Hope you had a fabulous time dear poet.

February 11th, 2025 12:07

Turbulence
aDarkerMind said:

dont worry abot the landing Tristan.
keep flying, keep writing....
and enjoy the applause my friend.

February 11th, 2025 11:01

Turbulence
Distant View said:

An inventive, thought-provoking poem!

February 11th, 2025 10:25

Turbulence
sorenbarrett said:

What a great metaphor. Our mind flies from place to place often through dangerous thoughts and there is no landing with some thoughts only a crash. Nicely done

February 11th, 2025 09:33

Midwinter Vacation
Simurgh said:

I enjoyed it truly, what a wonderful twist of words!!

Wait for my haiku, coming after few hours only.

February 10th, 2025 08:58

Midwinter Vacation
Simurgh said:

Wonderful haiku, Tristan!!
Much appreciated.🌹🌹❤️

With regards
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India

February 10th, 2025 08:56

The Man I Cannot Hear
teardrop said:

Excellent write of lonliness (if I read this right) Love your format, made it interesting even more. Thanks for the read, I truly enjoyed it.

February 10th, 2025 03:05

Depth of Height
Simurgh said:

Beautiful Haiku that instantly touched my poetic self, Tristan!❤️🌹🌹
Excellent work here. Much appreciated!

With regards,
Simurgh

February 9th, 2025 08:36

The Gaza Plaza
Simurgh said:

Very relevant poem in the present context. Wonderfully executed words, beautiful Tristan! I enjoyed reading your poem.
Dangerous and insane proposals for Gaza by Donald Trump is perfect madness.
They are trying to create the world of haters. Alas! What a pity!
Happy holiday my friend. Hope you enjoy your time!

February 7th, 2025 03:31

The Gaza Plaza
Doggerel Dave said:

A shout, a scream. Should be more of it, Tristan.

February 6th, 2025 01:28

The Gaza Plaza
NinjaGirl said:

Yes of course, the most logical thing is to just take over the Gaza strip and turn it into part of the U.S....

February 5th, 2025 18:48

The Gaza Plaza
Mutley Ravishes said:

Don Orange and Sleepy Joe
Put on a show
Called \"Triumphant Road to Woe\"
Who\'s willing to follow
Them into arms
Of Ahri____?

Great write, Tristan


February 5th, 2025 18:32

The Gaza Plaza
Cassie58 said:

A well executed poem dear Tristen. I think Trumps suggestions for Gaza are madness and should be executed too. (In a different way). Whatever is he thinking of? Happy holiday my friend.

February 5th, 2025 15:05

The Gaza Plaza
arqios said:

Like a political correspondent living in dangerous times! Gives the feel of a real Indiana Jones, minus the archeology ✌🏼🕊️

February 5th, 2025 12:49

The Gaza Plaza
Poetic Licence said:

There is no hope for the criminally insane !!!, enjoyed the read

February 5th, 2025 10:37

The Gaza Plaza
sorenbarrett said:

Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim Jones, David Koresh or savior god. What need fixing are the supporters that are willing to follow fanatics into hell. A heart felt write

February 5th, 2025 10:33

The Gaza Plaza
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

February 5th, 2025 10:21

Midwinter Vacation
Thomas W Case said:

Excellent haiku.

February 3rd, 2025 10:50

Midwinter Vacation
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

February 3rd, 2025 10:41

Heart Disease
Tom Dylan said:

A thought-provoking piece. Works on a few levels. Nicely done.

February 3rd, 2025 09:37

Midwinter Vacation
sorenbarrett said:

Now days children get out of school for snow days. We never had that when I was a child so no vaction. Hope you have a great time and return soon.

February 3rd, 2025 04:00

Midwinter Vacation
orchidee said:

Good wishes T.

February 3rd, 2025 03:15

Midwinter Vacation
Poetic Licence said:

Have a good one

February 3rd, 2025 03:13

Heart Disease
Poetic Licence said:

If someone cannot be fully committed or give their whole heart to something or someone, it is better off leaving alone. enjoyed the read

February 3rd, 2025 02:43

Heart Disease
Michael Edwards said:

In simple terms if its worth doing its worth doing well - your super shorty captures this with elegance.

February 3rd, 2025 02:23

Midwinter Vacation
arqios said:

Oh nice! Somewhere warm or somewhere snowy… it shall be revealed whence thou returneth… Have a good one!

February 3rd, 2025 01:25

Heart Disease
orchidee said:

Doh! if there\'s deep meanings in poems, I often don\'t get their meaning and may put my big foot in it! Or maybe, as you say, poems can be open to different interpretations.

February 2nd, 2025 14:48

Heart Disease
Cheeky Missy said:

Ooh! How charmingly rendered in dearest Will\'s inimitable fashion, laced with such tantalizing intrigue to captivate, its haunting poignancy nearly culls swooning. La dee! Superb! Applicable on multiple points, this is too good and expertly crafted. Thank you very much for sharing.

February 2nd, 2025 12:31

Heart Disease
Cassie58 said:

Hello Tristen. A nicely penned brevity here with layers. This is how I interpreted your words. Put your heart and soul into everything you do to reap the full benefits. Anything less, particularly when it comes to love is going to give you heart ache. Heart disease is a common complaint these days. Hope your Sunday is going well. Another fine write from your talented pen.

February 2nd, 2025 11:59

rejected
accross_world_with_u said:

When we just don’t fit! It’s not that we don’t we are just in the wrong puzzle box…❤️

February 2nd, 2025 08:55



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