Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Now look Popeye - it\'s either \'A\' for you, or it\'s \'A\' for you. There\'s only \'A\' to choose. What is \'A\' we ask? Don\'t answer that, but it\'s Popeye\'s occupation for 23 hrs 59 mins each day! lol.
I dunno how I think up this rubbish! heehee.

November 11th, 2025 09:46

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic

November 11th, 2025 09:29

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
sorenbarrett said:

A philosophical gordian knot. The picture you posted looked like two eggs. The other day an egg I was making was dark navy blue inside and fell into three others in the bowel. It being included could no longer be excluded so I threw the whole mess out. A great read my friend and a fave

November 11th, 2025 09:10

The Blessing Burns
Doggerel Dave said:

I have absolutely nothing to contribute here Tristan, but without prejudice wish you well in your dispute.....

November 10th, 2025 19:10

The Blessing Burns
NinjaGirl said:

I do really dislike when people claim to be Christian and delight in the devil\'s deeds of hurting others. Congrats on participating in the book!

November 10th, 2025 13:07

The Blessing Burns
orchidee said:

I love to hate - or hate to love - a certain Popeye. Why? Don\'t answer that! lol.

November 10th, 2025 12:42

Mission Impossible
NafisaSB said:

Yes some stories and events are troublesome even today and despair is writ on most faces- but, while there is liege, let not the flame of hope get extinguished

November 10th, 2025 11:41

The Blessing Burns
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording and the partial use of a well known phrase makes this a gem. Loved it and a fave.

November 10th, 2025 10:11

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Paul Bell said:

Yes, we\'re all god\'s children till we\'re not.
When you point out the obvious, people just think you\'re getting above yourself, and this usually means death.

November 10th, 2025 06:24

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Neville said:



Very cerebral brother T .. I must confess, I had to Google but enjoyed muchly even before resorting to that .. I blame it on the pneumonia induced delirium ..still my temperature is heading the right way .. Take care, Neville πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ–€πŸ‘

November 10th, 2025 04:39

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Bella Shepard said:

Too often the hypocrisy of the sainted overshadows the good of the truly virtuous. Sadly, you capture the blind idealism of those who rigidly adhere to a blind idealism that is out of touch with reality. I wholly concur with your interpretation, very well done!!

November 9th, 2025 10:55

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
sorenbarrett said:

Every one wants to go to a stoning they used to sell food at the hangings. People do not tolerate well what they don\'t understand. Nicely done Tristan loved the acrostic.

November 9th, 2025 10:19

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
orchidee said:

All I want to know is - is Popeye scholarly? Well, he has studied.......... fully. Don\'t answer that! lol.

November 9th, 2025 09:34

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Tristan. Good write.

November 9th, 2025 09:06

They
Paul Bell said:

If you don\'t want to be a cog, be a spanner in the works.
Cogs can be replaced, creativity has to be harnessed.
Get out there and fly should be your mantra.



November 9th, 2025 06:27

They
orchidee said:

And do \'they\' know P? Oh no, not more to join Obi & Co! lol.

November 9th, 2025 03:12

The Lord\'s Despair
Dan Williams said:

God works in strange ways, eh?

November 9th, 2025 00:52

They
Doggerel Dave said:

It’s advice, which in normal circumstances I’m a wee bit averse to, Tristan. However, (and you might know a more concise term – if so please inform) you have transcended that, modelled and invited the reader to accept a certain attitude, which thanks to the content I’ll give you a πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

November 8th, 2025 17:10

They
orchidee said:

A cucking fog? Whatever that is?! A certain person would know, but he\'s too busy glugging. We know him of course. lol.

November 8th, 2025 13:50

They
Demar Desu said:

To be a cog or not to be a cog that is the question, either way it seems we are a cog. LOL good poem T

November 8th, 2025 13:30

They
arqios said:

Nor a spoke, which shares the weight with others, equally distributed... but the cog carries all that weight... going off on a journey of thought. Thanks for the first-class tickets, T! πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™

November 8th, 2025 09:23

They
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Tristan. I enjoyed the read.

November 8th, 2025 08:59

They
sorenbarrett said:

Machinery rusts and breaks down. A wrench in the works always works showing creativity to the jerks. We all are cogs like it or not in a society too full of moving parts. Good write my friend

November 8th, 2025 08:30

The Lord\'s Despair
Paul Bell said:

Faith is great and anyone with god on their side, brill.
It\'s always been the opulence of the church that\'s got me.
It\'s like in total contrast to the contract of the poor shall inherit the earth.

November 8th, 2025 06:25

The Lord\'s Despair
Doggerel Dave said:

All hail to the first two lines - the rest an impressively poemed forgone conclusion.
A Lord\'s Prayer pastiche to remember, Tristan.


November 7th, 2025 18:38

The Lord\'s Despair
Bella Shepard said:

How did we become so smug and self possessed, a transformation that we have aided and abetted to our shame. A powerful and introspective take on a prayer taught us by the quintessential prophet of peace. Kudos!

November 7th, 2025 09:51

The Lord\'s Despair
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good write, Tristan. Making fun of ourselves is a lot of fun.

November 7th, 2025 08:38

The Lord\'s Despair
orchidee said:

A hymn-writer got it right in saying \'Til earth\'s proud empires fade away\'. This sounds like a fine prayer for hypocrites. But Ol\' Tom and Co. are true to their profession. What\'s their profession? Don\'t answer that! lol.

November 7th, 2025 08:37

The Lord\'s Despair
sorenbarrett said:

A blessing for bounty, a curse for those we hate, a prayer to begin and end the day. Satire in prayer poetically said a follower of Mark Twain and his prayers I suppose. Well done Tristan watch out for rabid religious nuts they have over populated and are looking for new pastures.

November 7th, 2025 08:36

The Lord\'s Despair
arqios said:

Sad how that is how it is with far too many, the lord is their belly and vanity. It\'s so easy to make fools of ourselves in matters of faith. Perhaps it\'s tainted with delusion and such. πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

November 7th, 2025 08:23

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