Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
ANTICHRIST
sorenbarrett said:
This has the most classical field to it. It seems to have come right out of a Treaties. I love the dark, feel of it and it rings of poetry.
November 8th, 2024 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
This has the most classical field to it. It seems to have come right out of a Treaties. I love the dark, feel of it and it rings of poetry.
November 8th, 2024 12:20
TYRANT
Dan Williams said:
This accurately describes the chaos I am sometimes quite certain, hoping for fiction.Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
This accurately describes the chaos I am sometimes quite certain, hoping for fiction.Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:20
Frayed Feelings
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing quite like expression taking the form thus given here. Fascinating and a tad intriguing. Very interesting. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing quite like expression taking the form thus given here. Fascinating and a tad intriguing. Very interesting. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:33
Frayed Feelings
NinjaGirl said:
I like the use of more than just the art of writing
November 7th, 2024 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
I like the use of more than just the art of writing
November 7th, 2024 20:06
TYRANT
Doggerel Dave said:
Wilful ignorance and no fear - yet! Yes: Tyrant.
Thanks for the short polished truth.
PS: I would not mind in the least to be proven wrong!
November 6th, 2024 15:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Wilful ignorance and no fear - yet! Yes: Tyrant.
Thanks for the short polished truth.
PS: I would not mind in the least to be proven wrong!
November 6th, 2024 15:37
TYRANT
sorenbarrett said:
Timely and what all fear we will have to wait and see. Hope things go better than I fear. An ominus write
November 6th, 2024 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
Timely and what all fear we will have to wait and see. Hope things go better than I fear. An ominus write
November 6th, 2024 13:50
The ABCs of SAD
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious and real, I would say - ahh, a bad hair day then?! lol (oops).
November 6th, 2024 03:26
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious and real, I would say - ahh, a bad hair day then?! lol (oops).
November 6th, 2024 03:26
The ABCs of SAD
NafisaSB said:
hopefully better days will follow - the circle is still not complete
good write, even if so sombre
November 6th, 2024 00:06
NafisaSB said:
hopefully better days will follow - the circle is still not complete
good write, even if so sombre
November 6th, 2024 00:06
The ABCs of SAD
NinjaGirl said:
it wasn\'t until X when I realized what you were doing! very clever! I specifically appreciate that you didn\'t use the letter once, but sometimes twice as well for alliteration\'s sake. butterflies of dread and fearful flutters certainly sound relatable, though in this season i\'d say sickly spiders, I think it feels as though spiders are in my own body--crawling everywhere. a bit less gentle than butterflies :)
November 5th, 2024 21:24
NinjaGirl said:
it wasn\'t until X when I realized what you were doing! very clever! I specifically appreciate that you didn\'t use the letter once, but sometimes twice as well for alliteration\'s sake. butterflies of dread and fearful flutters certainly sound relatable, though in this season i\'d say sickly spiders, I think it feels as though spiders are in my own body--crawling everywhere. a bit less gentle than butterflies :)
November 5th, 2024 21:24
The ABCs of SAD
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Wow what a captivating,
poignant 😢 and dark
alphabet poem indeed!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed and
a real delight to read!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 5th, 2024 17:42
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Wow what a captivating,
poignant 😢 and dark
alphabet poem indeed!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed and
a real delight to read!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 5th, 2024 17:42
The ABCs of SAD
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a bad day. Graphic images of depression fill this piece and give it a darkness like midnight.
November 5th, 2024 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a bad day. Graphic images of depression fill this piece and give it a darkness like midnight.
November 5th, 2024 14:32
Non-Event Horizon
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great approach to get a bigger picture as the distance is increased and what was at first seen as something different now becomes clear as something else.Ingenious
November 4th, 2024 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great approach to get a bigger picture as the distance is increased and what was at first seen as something different now becomes clear as something else.Ingenious
November 4th, 2024 04:29
Non-Event Horizon
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
Terzenelle of Turmoil
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
Terzenelle of Turmoil
Rin the Magnificent said:
Masterfully written, Tristan!
November 2nd, 2024 00:33
Rin the Magnificent said:
Masterfully written, Tristan!
November 2nd, 2024 00:33
Terzenelle of Turmoil
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem ,cause i can relate to it i feel my life sometimes is like the poem, i fuck up,i watch my dreams flush away then.....its a big star to the writer ,
November 1st, 2024 11:41
isa kemmy said:
i like the poem ,cause i can relate to it i feel my life sometimes is like the poem, i fuck up,i watch my dreams flush away then.....its a big star to the writer ,
November 1st, 2024 11:41
Exclusion
Dan Williams said:
I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get you excluded but sometimes that is a good thing. Excluded from the mass rudeness and stupidity I encounter every day, eh?
October 31st, 2024 23:55
Dan Williams said:
I have spent most of my life striving to be different and yes, it can get you excluded but sometimes that is a good thing. Excluded from the mass rudeness and stupidity I encounter every day, eh?
October 31st, 2024 23:55
Exclusion
NinjaGirl said:
Isn\'t it so interesting to be thought of as weird, just because they don\'t understand us? Our health defining our social status? Our reactions showing our worth? Beautiful work, relatable by many I\'m sure.
October 31st, 2024 22:55
NinjaGirl said:
Isn\'t it so interesting to be thought of as weird, just because they don\'t understand us? Our health defining our social status? Our reactions showing our worth? Beautiful work, relatable by many I\'m sure.
October 31st, 2024 22:55
Exclusion
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. Isolation isn\'t fun nor what most of us desired but it\'s our lot and we must figure out how to exist within its parameters. Excellently rendered with a seeming refrain which is forever useful in driving home whichever point. Thank you for sharing.
October 31st, 2024 09:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to the club. Isolation isn\'t fun nor what most of us desired but it\'s our lot and we must figure out how to exist within its parameters. Excellently rendered with a seeming refrain which is forever useful in driving home whichever point. Thank you for sharing.
October 31st, 2024 09:42
Exclusion
sorenbarrett said:
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others think be you. A poem of an existential nature. We all have our demons to fight and I know that many have fewer and lessor that cause less exclusion and less loneliness. A great write that captures the heart of all that are different and that\'s all of us.
October 31st, 2024 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
If it is a physical restriction that is still you if it is what others think be you. A poem of an existential nature. We all have our demons to fight and I know that many have fewer and lessor that cause less exclusion and less loneliness. A great write that captures the heart of all that are different and that\'s all of us.
October 31st, 2024 09:35
Corridors of Decaying Dreams
Neville said:
Excellent wordsmithing my friend and just ripe for Halloween .. 🎃🦇🦇👻🎃🦇🦇
October 30th, 2024 09:28
Neville said:
Excellent wordsmithing my friend and just ripe for Halloween .. 🎃🦇🦇👻🎃🦇🦇
October 30th, 2024 09:28
Corridors of Decaying Dreams
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky story told. This was a pleasure to read
October 30th, 2024 04:41
sorenbarrett said:
Very well written with great imagery and so seasonal as well. A spooky story told. This was a pleasure to read
October 30th, 2024 04:41
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