Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



A Tale of Two Altars
sorenbarrett said:

The division between good and evil, selflessness and selfishness. A somewhat dark journey with a bit of word play along the way. Nicely done Tristan

November 14th, 2025 09:59

i. just. can\'t.
Teddy.15 said:

Wonderful and thought provoking, its relatable to many subjects in the times we live. Pain or peace, we are all so different that someone\'s pain maybe someone else\'s peace, and vice versa. Clever now my mind is in overdrive. 🌹 (Hugs dear Tristan) 🌹

November 14th, 2025 02:31

i. just. can\'t.
arqios said:

Superbly raw and open to meanings. The hopelessness can at times be overwhelming πŸ™πŸ•ŠοΈ

November 13th, 2025 21:15

i. just. can\'t.
Doggerel Dave said:

As an inveterate agnostic, I have a list pf plausible possibilities in my head. Heading that list (sometimes in second place), is nothingness…. But does that constitute nirvana? Thanks anyway, Tristan.

November 13th, 2025 16:06

i. just. can\'t.
orchidee said:

Good write T. Bit of French there? Totalitate.
Now there\'s a sentence you hear every day from P. - I just can\'t stop. Stop what? Don\'t answer that! lol. Hint: it relates to spinach, of course.

November 13th, 2025 14:39

i. just. can\'t.
NinjaGirl said:

Who knows? I often wonder if the peace we desire will never be found... Interesting write

November 13th, 2025 14:29

i. just. can\'t.
Paul Bell said:

Nirvana in the small print, one must be careful in the end.
I need to know I\'m coming back before I sign up.

November 13th, 2025 10:16

i. just. can\'t.
sorenbarrett said:

A thought provoking piece Tristan. And indeed the end may in fact be nirvana. Where peace is only obtained in death with nothing there after.

November 13th, 2025 09:07

you know what to paint it
NinjaGirl said:

I recently saw this video of this man who paints in only black--he uses the way the light reflects off of different stroke angles to show a picture. Anyway, black does seem to be one of those universal thoughts and feelings

November 12th, 2025 16:14

you know what to paint it
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t knock black too hard Tristan - I couldn\'t scribe this without it\'s services. Just put it in the naughty corner until it behaves itself...πŸ™ƒ

November 12th, 2025 15:48

you know what to paint it
sorenbarrett said:

Loved this one Tristan that highlights the lack of change despite effort. Black such a good choice that as we know it the sum total of all colors in pigment and the absence of color in light. Well done

November 12th, 2025 11:14

you know what to paint it
Paul Bell said:

It seems strange, but when colour photos came in it was a revelation.
Now we all go back to black for nostalgia, though I might look better in black and white.


November 12th, 2025 10:36

you know what to paint it
orchidee said:

Now that Ol\' Henry Ford didn\'t give us, or rather you in USA, much choice with his cars - \'You can have any colour as long as it\'s black\'. Doh!

November 12th, 2025 10:04

you know what to paint it
orchidee said:

Doh! Turn a light on. Can\'t see a thing in all that blackness. And Popeye and Co can\'t see to.... don\'t finish that! lol.

November 12th, 2025 10:02

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Moral mirror with no hedging. A fave.

November 12th, 2025 06:04

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
Paul Bell said:

The good are included, the bad excluded.
Though many a time I was included, I sort of wished for my street cred to be excluded.

November 11th, 2025 13:31

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
NinjaGirl said:

But most people are! Some people include certain but not others and I think that\'s where the wrongfulness begins. There\'s a theory that if you hate every race, you\'re not racist because you treat them all the same...

November 11th, 2025 13:02

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
orchidee said:

Good write T.
Now look Popeye - it\'s either \'A\' for you, or it\'s \'A\' for you. There\'s only \'A\' to choose. What is \'A\' we ask? Don\'t answer that, but it\'s Popeye\'s occupation for 23 hrs 59 mins each day! lol.
I dunno how I think up this rubbish! heehee.

November 11th, 2025 09:46

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
Thomas W Case said:

Fantastic

November 11th, 2025 09:29

The Mystic Speaks: Either/Or
sorenbarrett said:

A philosophical gordian knot. The picture you posted looked like two eggs. The other day an egg I was making was dark navy blue inside and fell into three others in the bowel. It being included could no longer be excluded so I threw the whole mess out. A great read my friend and a fave

November 11th, 2025 09:10

The Blessing Burns
Doggerel Dave said:

I have absolutely nothing to contribute here Tristan, but without prejudice wish you well in your dispute.....

November 10th, 2025 19:10

The Blessing Burns
NinjaGirl said:

I do really dislike when people claim to be Christian and delight in the devil\'s deeds of hurting others. Congrats on participating in the book!

November 10th, 2025 13:07

The Blessing Burns
orchidee said:

I love to hate - or hate to love - a certain Popeye. Why? Don\'t answer that! lol.

November 10th, 2025 12:42

Mission Impossible
NafisaSB said:

Yes some stories and events are troublesome even today and despair is writ on most faces- but, while there is liege, let not the flame of hope get extinguished

November 10th, 2025 11:41

The Blessing Burns
sorenbarrett said:

Clever wording and the partial use of a well known phrase makes this a gem. Loved it and a fave.

November 10th, 2025 10:11

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Paul Bell said:

Yes, we\'re all god\'s children till we\'re not.
When you point out the obvious, people just think you\'re getting above yourself, and this usually means death.

November 10th, 2025 06:24

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Neville said:



Very cerebral brother T .. I must confess, I had to Google but enjoyed muchly even before resorting to that .. I blame it on the pneumonia induced delirium ..still my temperature is heading the right way .. Take care, Neville πŸ–€πŸ–€πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ–€πŸ‘

November 10th, 2025 04:39

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
Bella Shepard said:

Too often the hypocrisy of the sainted overshadows the good of the truly virtuous. Sadly, you capture the blind idealism of those who rigidly adhere to a blind idealism that is out of touch with reality. I wholly concur with your interpretation, very well done!!

November 9th, 2025 10:55

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
sorenbarrett said:

Every one wants to go to a stoning they used to sell food at the hangings. People do not tolerate well what they don\'t understand. Nicely done Tristan loved the acrostic.

November 9th, 2025 10:19

Three-in-One Times the Effigy
orchidee said:

All I want to know is - is Popeye scholarly? Well, he has studied.......... fully. Don\'t answer that! lol.

November 9th, 2025 09:34

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