Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
INTENTIONS
Neville said:
The message contained within held me throughout & felt so hugely important, that it was only later .. and thanks to your authors footnote, I realised there was an acrostic standing on the sideline .. 😎🖤👍
November 20th, 2024 00:39
Neville said:
The message contained within held me throughout & felt so hugely important, that it was only later .. and thanks to your authors footnote, I realised there was an acrostic standing on the sideline .. 😎🖤👍
November 20th, 2024 00:39
INTENTIONS
arqios said:
Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
November 19th, 2024 17:18
arqios said:
Ooh, “reality analysis“ sends shivers down along the spine!
November 19th, 2024 17:18
INTENTIONS
sorenbarrett said:
They say hell is full of good intentions. Nevertheless, I do believe intentions make some difference otherwise the law would not recognize them. There would be no difference between first-degree murder and manslaughter. A very thought-Provoking poem
November 19th, 2024 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
They say hell is full of good intentions. Nevertheless, I do believe intentions make some difference otherwise the law would not recognize them. There would be no difference between first-degree murder and manslaughter. A very thought-Provoking poem
November 19th, 2024 12:08
LOVE
Cassie58 said:
An acrostic for LOVE. So very thoughtfully conveyed. I like. Well penned Tristan.
November 18th, 2024 17:21
Cassie58 said:
An acrostic for LOVE. So very thoughtfully conveyed. I like. Well penned Tristan.
November 18th, 2024 17:21
LOVE
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely stated in acrostic form. Love is a difficult thing to define in any sense and you have done well
November 18th, 2024 12:08
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely stated in acrostic form. Love is a difficult thing to define in any sense and you have done well
November 18th, 2024 12:08
This Sunday Night
Neville said:
I so get this Tristan .. as a general rule, Sunday nights in November rank among the top four of my overall least favourite nights of the year .. I tend to get a bit of a downer in November and the end of a weekend usually heralds another busy week .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 09:00
Neville said:
I so get this Tristan .. as a general rule, Sunday nights in November rank among the top four of my overall least favourite nights of the year .. I tend to get a bit of a downer in November and the end of a weekend usually heralds another busy week .. Neville
November 18th, 2024 09:00
This Sunday Night
NafisaSB said:
i really hope the dreary mood passes - time really drags and it\'s a lamentable time indeed...
poignant write
November 18th, 2024 08:59
NafisaSB said:
i really hope the dreary mood passes - time really drags and it\'s a lamentable time indeed...
poignant write
November 18th, 2024 08:59
This Sunday Night
orchidee said:
It might help if we think - there\'s only a few weeks to go, the nit starts getting lighter again.
November 18th, 2024 03:25
orchidee said:
It might help if we think - there\'s only a few weeks to go, the nit starts getting lighter again.
November 18th, 2024 03:25
Satanic Panic
NafisaSB said:
good write - and yes, many a time, we tend to believe all that we are fed, especially when young, until the innocence is ripped out.
great work
November 18th, 2024 00:18
NafisaSB said:
good write - and yes, many a time, we tend to believe all that we are fed, especially when young, until the innocence is ripped out.
great work
November 18th, 2024 00:18
Satanic Panic
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful, haunting and
thought provoking Sonnet my friend! 😳
Exhilarating awesomeness, 🧑🎄👿
Love the word cringe you picked to go
with orange, great flow and blend!! 👍
I neva coulda thought of that!!! 😃
Terrific penning, loved it!!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 20:12
Thad Wilk said:
A powerful, haunting and
thought provoking Sonnet my friend! 😳
Exhilarating awesomeness, 🧑🎄👿
Love the word cringe you picked to go
with orange, great flow and blend!! 👍
I neva coulda thought of that!!! 😃
Terrific penning, loved it!!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 20:12
This Sunday Night
Thad Wilk said:
Time change can bring
this melancholy into flight! 😢
More darkness comes,
when there\'s less light! 🕯️
My pleasure to read indeed! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 19:53
Thad Wilk said:
Time change can bring
this melancholy into flight! 😢
More darkness comes,
when there\'s less light! 🕯️
My pleasure to read indeed! 👍 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 17th, 2024 19:53
This Sunday Night
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks to exhaustion not of the physical type, but of the emotional a poem with some depressing overtones
November 17th, 2024 19:29
sorenbarrett said:
The poem speaks to exhaustion not of the physical type, but of the emotional a poem with some depressing overtones
November 17th, 2024 19:29
This Sunday Night
NinjaGirl said:
the answer is- do something everyday that makes you happy...then you have something to look forward to and It makes facing the next day a bit more bearable
November 17th, 2024 17:16
NinjaGirl said:
the answer is- do something everyday that makes you happy...then you have something to look forward to and It makes facing the next day a bit more bearable
November 17th, 2024 17:16
This Sunday Night
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh does not wike dreary nights? Winter must be a cruel drag. I mean, I struggle every January anyway, but it\'s only November and you\'s lamenting its \"dreary\" sight. I wishes you success in charming off its nastiness. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 17th, 2024 17:15
Cheeky Missy said:
Ooh does not wike dreary nights? Winter must be a cruel drag. I mean, I struggle every January anyway, but it\'s only November and you\'s lamenting its \"dreary\" sight. I wishes you success in charming off its nastiness. Lovely and beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
November 17th, 2024 17:15
Satanic Panic
NinjaGirl said:
in my state, there was a candidate on the ballot named \"Lucifer\" and I often wonder if it would have been better or worse under him..? Obviously unlikely to win, but a funny prospect
November 17th, 2024 17:03
NinjaGirl said:
in my state, there was a candidate on the ballot named \"Lucifer\" and I often wonder if it would have been better or worse under him..? Obviously unlikely to win, but a funny prospect
November 17th, 2024 17:03
Satanic Panic
James Michael said:
“Stealing souls for Satan to deflower.”, resonates.
Glad to see you’re still cranking ‘em out!
November 16th, 2024 22:40
James Michael said:
“Stealing souls for Satan to deflower.”, resonates.
Glad to see you’re still cranking ‘em out!
November 16th, 2024 22:40
Satanic Panic
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be terribly depressing - Santa is an anagram of..... argh!! No relation though. Phew! Bit of Luther there, in the other comment?
November 16th, 2024 12:51
orchidee said:
I\'m gonna be terribly depressing - Santa is an anagram of..... argh!! No relation though. Phew! Bit of Luther there, in the other comment?
November 16th, 2024 12:51
Satanic Panic
MendedFences27 said:
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the effort to learn the truth. If Satan exists it is in the hearts of those who fill the crap-trough.
The orange-man leads the way. He cannot exist a day without telling us several lies. He is, in fact Evil incarnate. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2024 11:38
MendedFences27 said:
So true. We all are fed crap to devour, and too many will not put in the effort to learn the truth. If Satan exists it is in the hearts of those who fill the crap-trough.
The orange-man leads the way. He cannot exist a day without telling us several lies. He is, in fact Evil incarnate. - Phil A.
November 16th, 2024 11:38
Satanic Panic
Neville said:
I think it is imperative that I take to my bunker as soon as it is fully stocked .. and hide down there awhile where it is thought to be satan proof (please note satan with a small s) .. Hell yeah, down there where I think I\'ll be pretty safe .. for a while anyway .. I thought orange was the new black by the way .. or maybe that was fake news too .. Neville 🐧👍
November 16th, 2024 10:30
Neville said:
I think it is imperative that I take to my bunker as soon as it is fully stocked .. and hide down there awhile where it is thought to be satan proof (please note satan with a small s) .. Hell yeah, down there where I think I\'ll be pretty safe .. for a while anyway .. I thought orange was the new black by the way .. or maybe that was fake news too .. Neville 🐧👍
November 16th, 2024 10:30
Satanic Panic
Teddy.15 said:
I truly feel this in all it\'s force. Kudos. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 09:04
Teddy.15 said:
I truly feel this in all it\'s force. Kudos. 🌹
November 16th, 2024 09:04
Satanic Panic
sorenbarrett said:
A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews out its message with power
November 16th, 2024 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
A commentary on the political times? Nicely disguised and imaged it spews out its message with power
November 16th, 2024 08:30
RESIST
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
Neville said:
Sound advice .. and from a sociological perspective, purposefully & poetically splendid too 😎👍
November 16th, 2024 02:54
HATE
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
Bigguy said:
There is an intensity here, but I feel like you could sharpen it further. Perhaps instead of \"Humans\" you could write about the reader? Just a thought, well done!
November 16th, 2024 01:53
RESIST
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Yes Tristan that will definitely do for a start.👍
November 15th, 2024 23:31
HATE
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
Thad Wilk said:
Great Acrostic and
warning too!! 😮
Artfully expressed
a superb read thank you!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 14th, 2024 18:03
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