Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Satin Sheets
Thad Wilk said:
A really emotional,
poignant and powerful
poem of unrequited love!
So eloquently penned,
Love this form, 😍!!
Great job my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:38
Thad Wilk said:
A really emotional,
poignant and powerful
poem of unrequited love!
So eloquently penned,
Love this form, 😍!!
Great job my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 23rd, 2025 20:38
Satin Sheets
orchidee said:
Some good more revelatory-wotsits! lol. I\'m caught up with catching any pesky extra syllables that creep into my poem formats. lol. I can\'t truly call it \'metre\' as that involves stressed and unstressed syllables. I would become too stressed over it. lol. And them imabic thingies too - pentameters.
January 23rd, 2025 11:20
orchidee said:
Some good more revelatory-wotsits! lol. I\'m caught up with catching any pesky extra syllables that creep into my poem formats. lol. I can\'t truly call it \'metre\' as that involves stressed and unstressed syllables. I would become too stressed over it. lol. And them imabic thingies too - pentameters.
January 23rd, 2025 11:20
Satin Sheets
sorenbarrett said:
What seems reality is a dream what seems the present only memories of the past. Pleasure becomes pain in this poem of hauting thoughts. Very well expressed.
January 23rd, 2025 10:51
sorenbarrett said:
What seems reality is a dream what seems the present only memories of the past. Pleasure becomes pain in this poem of hauting thoughts. Very well expressed.
January 23rd, 2025 10:51
Satin Sheets
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think i understood the authors comments!!, Those sheets have been through the wringer !!, Enjoy the rest of your day
January 23rd, 2025 10:22
Poetic Licence said:
A very enjoyable read, i think i understood the authors comments!!, Those sheets have been through the wringer !!, Enjoy the rest of your day
January 23rd, 2025 10:22
Satin Sheets
Neville said:
Whilst it is imminently possible to beat an egg & a few other things besides .. it is clearly impossible to beat a Revelatory Cascade Tetrameter .. A seemingly seamless example of the principle showing the unity of opposites in poetic form .. By Jove I think you not only got it, but you just went and done it too .. Life is such a bloomin predicament innit .. in spite of this form being new to me I suspect this example is crafted to perfection and is very impressive .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
Neville said:
Whilst it is imminently possible to beat an egg & a few other things besides .. it is clearly impossible to beat a Revelatory Cascade Tetrameter .. A seemingly seamless example of the principle showing the unity of opposites in poetic form .. By Jove I think you not only got it, but you just went and done it too .. Life is such a bloomin predicament innit .. in spite of this form being new to me I suspect this example is crafted to perfection and is very impressive .. Neville
January 23rd, 2025 10:13
A Cut
Olive Anderson said:
Life is a bunch of cuts. Sometimes there is sweetness added to a cut helps lessen the pain you feel. Other times you get a cut, salt is added and the pain is deeper than it was originally. The one thing cuts have in common is that they eventually close up. I love the way you ended your poem...
January 23rd, 2025 02:03
Olive Anderson said:
Life is a bunch of cuts. Sometimes there is sweetness added to a cut helps lessen the pain you feel. Other times you get a cut, salt is added and the pain is deeper than it was originally. The one thing cuts have in common is that they eventually close up. I love the way you ended your poem...
January 23rd, 2025 02:03
A Cut
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Thad Wilk said:
Awesome poem, 😀
you must have amazing
healing powers¿?😳
Glad it wasn\'t serious! 😁
Great use of form,!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 22nd, 2025 22:31
Inauguration Day
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
Poetic Licence said:
I have never been a crowd follower the sheep mentality drives me insane. Sadly thou i fear we are entering what is going to be a unstable and very frighting period in our history, and for sure social injustice is only going to get worse. A great piece of writing, raising issues we should all pay attention to you.
January 22nd, 2025 21:57
A Cut
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
sorenbarrett said:
I took this literally the first read then I wondered about metaphor. Many times we suffer other times of cuts rather than our literal hand. Mind wandering again
January 22nd, 2025 14:18
A Cut
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
Cheeky Missy said:
At least it\'s a minor abrasion at this rate, nothing like the paring knife through my fingertip, piecing from one side to the other and leaving actual scars. Beautifully eloquent in its rendering with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, it\'s winsome to boot. Thank you for sharing.
January 22nd, 2025 13:18
A Cut
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
Poetic Licence said:
A entertaining read with a serious message, that over time things will heal, but there will always be another cut at sometime, really enjoyed this one.
January 22nd, 2025 12:18
A Cut
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Cassie58 said:
Paper cuts are some of the most painful. Sting like hell. This appears to be deeper and describes the healing process. The all important healing process. Hopefully no scars will be left. Great description here Tristen. Have a happy Wednesday.
January 22nd, 2025 11:52
Descent in D Minor
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
NinjaGirl said:
I perhaps wouldn\'t go as far as to call them devilish notes, but they certainly have dark undertones! The piano, while basic, is a hauntingly beautiful instrument.
January 21st, 2025 22:51
Descent in D Minor
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Thad Wilk said:
Clapping! 👏👏
A magical and
musical write! 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Just \"resonates\'\' with
greatness, to read a delight!! 🎹🎶
Thanks for sharing,
VERY creative!!! 😃
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 21st, 2025 22:16
Descent in D Minor
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
arqios said:
And lingers quite a while still…. Sometimes even for decades…. 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊
January 21st, 2025 17:23
Descent in D Minor
LP2187 said:
Wow, this touches the soul. A very good read!
January 21st, 2025 13:29
LP2187 said:
Wow, this touches the soul. A very good read!
January 21st, 2025 13:29
Descent in D Minor
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
A fine write T. Though my style is mainly to \'ascend\'. Yet we\'re \'heavier\' at some seasons, such as Lent, and not all the Psalms are praise-y in all their verses.
January 21st, 2025 11:22
Inauguration Day
Accidental Poet said:
Even crowds can be lied to, and crowds can be misled. So now we have the blind leading the blind. Well said Tristan. 😉👍
January 21st, 2025 09:24
Accidental Poet said:
Even crowds can be lied to, and crowds can be misled. So now we have the blind leading the blind. Well said Tristan. 😉👍
January 21st, 2025 09:24
Descent in D Minor
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
You have outdone yourself with this poem of music that can be seen. The format was perfect and the words resound in the eye as well as the ear. This is a Fave
January 21st, 2025 08:34
Inauguration Day
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Thad Wilk said:
👍👍
A terrific poem
the thoughts
and message penned!!
Love the form, repeated lines
much enjoyed my friend!!! 🏆
Have a great day!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 20th, 2025 18:27
Inauguration Day
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
arqios said:
And yet it is more than social justice, big as that is as far as issues go, of a cosmological and existential dilemma… some are aware, others chose to ignore the signs.
January 20th, 2025 17:48
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