Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
I Am Tittu
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
Poetic Licence said:
A wonderful write, a sense of calm, unity and happiness, enjoyed the read
July 1st, 2025 11:31
I Am Tittu
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
Salvia.S said:
This is absolutely beautiful and heartfelt!!!!! Thank you so much for sharing this!!!!! Love it ❤️ Very nicely written dear Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 1st, 2025 10:41
I Am Tittu
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Simply too good. The last line, in its simplicity worked in a strange way. It is a firm commitment to peace which emerged with a gravity of declaration of war against forces which were hell bent to subvert peace. I am not sure if I could explain myself. But what I wanted say was that your poem worked.
July 1st, 2025 10:05
I Am Tittu
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
Damaso said:
Immense overflowing, an incredible sensation of magnificence sir, thank you very much for sharing it. A pleasure to read. Greetings!
July 1st, 2025 09:44
I Am Tittu
sorenbarrett said:
Unity the key, we are all one, bird or tree, moon or sun. Only the Buda has memories of all past lives. In search of that enlightenment and Nirvana when we no longer need return but still then we are one with all. Just as the Buda is part of us and we of him. A lovely write. A fave
July 1st, 2025 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Unity the key, we are all one, bird or tree, moon or sun. Only the Buda has memories of all past lives. In search of that enlightenment and Nirvana when we no longer need return but still then we are one with all. Just as the Buda is part of us and we of him. A lovely write. A fave
July 1st, 2025 08:17
Pleased to Pass
Cheeky Missy said:
Eesh, mon. What on earth is this, via its eerie conclusion? My late father despised this genre as \"navel-gazing,\" and yet I\'m beginning to become afeared tis even so as Daddy said. Argh. Fascinating, intriguing, and excellently rendered with consummate skill and grand imagery, its sheer poignancy haunting damningly. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 16:04
Cheeky Missy said:
Eesh, mon. What on earth is this, via its eerie conclusion? My late father despised this genre as \"navel-gazing,\" and yet I\'m beginning to become afeared tis even so as Daddy said. Argh. Fascinating, intriguing, and excellently rendered with consummate skill and grand imagery, its sheer poignancy haunting damningly. Thank you for sharing.
June 30th, 2025 16:04
Pleased to Pass
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that appears to be a strong act of defiance against the ongoing push to please. Very nicely thought out and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 09:30
Poetic Licence said:
An interesting write that appears to be a strong act of defiance against the ongoing push to please. Very nicely thought out and crafted, enjoyed the read
June 30th, 2025 09:30
Pleased to Pass
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'vibes\'!! Or it may be E.T. or a couple of guys we know - Obi and Popeye. lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:42
orchidee said:
It\'s those \'vibes\'!! Or it may be E.T. or a couple of guys we know - Obi and Popeye. lol.
June 30th, 2025 07:42
Pleased to Pass
arqios said:
This is such a brilliant act of defiance, drenched in insight and emotional clarity!
June 30th, 2025 07:16
arqios said:
This is such a brilliant act of defiance, drenched in insight and emotional clarity!
June 30th, 2025 07:16
Pleased to Pass
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion encapsulated as line after line referring to the previous linking one thought to another. A thought provoking write Tristan
June 30th, 2025 06:59
sorenbarrett said:
Confusion encapsulated as line after line referring to the previous linking one thought to another. A thought provoking write Tristan
June 30th, 2025 06:59
Stasis Will Replace Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Stasis Will Replace Us
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
Stasis Will Replace Us
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
The Judge
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Stasis Will Replace Us
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Stasis Will Replace Us
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
Stasis Will Replace Us
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply intellectual dive into the cosmos of space and mind. Loved your continued use of format to enhance the feel of the poem. Some big words for a big universe and images as alliteration hypnotizes the reader. The las lines define the poem for me. The use of static is a vision of what remains not causation or even correlation but chaos and accompanying stasis. Very cerebral and chillingly nihilistic
June 29th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply intellectual dive into the cosmos of space and mind. Loved your continued use of format to enhance the feel of the poem. Some big words for a big universe and images as alliteration hypnotizes the reader. The las lines define the poem for me. The use of static is a vision of what remains not causation or even correlation but chaos and accompanying stasis. Very cerebral and chillingly nihilistic
June 29th, 2025 07:28
The Judge
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan, As a person who doesn\'t believe in religion myself, I appreciate this emmencely. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 00:19
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan, As a person who doesn\'t believe in religion myself, I appreciate this emmencely. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 00:19
The Judge
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they, are they likely to harm me in any way, physically or mentally. Me: that act was not up to the standards I aspire to....
I have a slight feeling I may have approached your piece from the wrong direction.....
June 28th, 2025 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they, are they likely to harm me in any way, physically or mentally. Me: that act was not up to the standards I aspire to....
I have a slight feeling I may have approached your piece from the wrong direction.....
June 28th, 2025 20:24
The Judge
arqios said:
Yes, we judge daily and we needn’t confirm but deem and appraise what is worthy to bring with us into tomorrow 🕊️🙏🏻
June 28th, 2025 17:39
arqios said:
Yes, we judge daily and we needn’t confirm but deem and appraise what is worthy to bring with us into tomorrow 🕊️🙏🏻
June 28th, 2025 17:39
The Judge
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is no one who is equipped to judge anyone including judging ourselves, acceptance is a better use of emotion and time, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is no one who is equipped to judge anyone including judging ourselves, acceptance is a better use of emotion and time, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 09:51
The Judge
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Tristan. I believe it a destructive illusion that one can even judge oneself. In actuality I believe that each man does the best he can with the tools that he has and his knowledge of the moment. It is not our fault that some have fewer tools or are not in the same moment as we. What we perceive as evil or bad is nothing more than an empty toolbox or one with the wrong tools and he attempts to sink a bolt with a hammer and tighten a nut with a hacksaw. Good write and a fave
June 28th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Tristan. I believe it a destructive illusion that one can even judge oneself. In actuality I believe that each man does the best he can with the tools that he has and his knowledge of the moment. It is not our fault that some have fewer tools or are not in the same moment as we. What we perceive as evil or bad is nothing more than an empty toolbox or one with the wrong tools and he attempts to sink a bolt with a hammer and tighten a nut with a hacksaw. Good write and a fave
June 28th, 2025 09:28
The Exorcist
arqios said:
Hey T! Your poem storms with vivid fury, dragging shadows into the light and naming them boldly. Yet in its surge of darkness, there\'s a defiant spark—a rallying cry for inner reclamation. The closing lines land like a spell: simple, steadfast, and fiercely redemptive. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 27th, 2025 21:36
arqios said:
Hey T! Your poem storms with vivid fury, dragging shadows into the light and naming them boldly. Yet in its surge of darkness, there\'s a defiant spark—a rallying cry for inner reclamation. The closing lines land like a spell: simple, steadfast, and fiercely redemptive. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 27th, 2025 21:36
The Exorcist
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
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