Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Doors
Neville said:


When you put it like that, the light seems to flicker more brightly & come on which in turn, shows one the way .. Neville ๐Ÿ‘

December 14th, 2024 12:32

Doors
TobaniNataiella said:

Those with closed minds only hear what they want to hear ( especially if the truth effects them), those with open minds may not agree but will listen. Great read, Thank you Tristan

December 14th, 2024 12:17

Doors
sorenbarrett said:

Wise words that one must loose fear to hear the truth before one can hear it. Nicely done

December 14th, 2024 11:05

One Out of Five
cellinic said:

Poem well-done, easily and eagerly faved, my friend!

December 14th, 2024 06:34

One Out of Five
rebellion_in_sanity said:

WOW! I don\'t know if it is a poem or a painting where disparate segments are made into a whole by the skilful artist. Perception - the grave of reality. \"Loved it\" sounds too lame, but my limited vocabulary can\'t drege up any suitable adornment.

December 14th, 2024 01:45

One Out of Five
Thad Wilk said:

A powerful poem
and I agree! ๐Ÿ‘
We\'re on an uphill
battle definitely! ๐Ÿ˜ข
Great read my friend
penned superbly!! ๐ŸŽ–๏ธ
Best regards โœŒ๏ธ Thad

December 13th, 2024 23:05

One Out of Five
Mutley Ravishes said:

Be careful not to bang your head on the brick wall too much, Tristan!

December 13th, 2024 21:42

One Out of Five
Doggerel Dave said:

This is rich and complex, Tristan. Seems your piece has thrown up many different feelings in the debate here - including some of mine. Canโ€™t help but agree with the general tenor of your depiction of the movement change over several generations. Canโ€™t help but agree with the overall โ€˜progressโ€™. The only point I feel impelled to make is that categorized generalisations are dangerous if they extend themselves beyond poetic limits. The Boomers (and Iโ€™m not one) were as much subjected to political control as any other generation. Some (perhaps almost the majority) fell into line (including going to war) but many did not.
But I think I can agree on the main point: it all seems to be going down the gurgler now.
Take care of yourself.


December 13th, 2024 19:10

One Out of Five
Teddy.15 said:

Unbelievably beautiful powerful and your reeled me in to every line. Superb dear Tristan. ๐ŸŒน

December 13th, 2024 13:37

One Out of Five
orchidee said:

Good write T.

December 13th, 2024 11:58

One Out of Five
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

December 13th, 2024 09:12

One Out of Five
arqios said:

Somehow brought me back to thoughts of the Vietnam War and all other such sociopolitical upheavals that twisted and defined generations. I lost my cousin and best friend during the Gulf War in which he did 2 tours. Iโ€™m sure the poems apply to several other things but that stood out to me for some reason.

December 13th, 2024 09:01

One Out of Five
sorenbarrett said:

Beautiful words and fantastic lines of poetic understanding. A lovely poem that makes its point.

December 13th, 2024 08:35

One Out of Five
TobaniNataiella said:

We need a handbrake on life, then a reverse gear and then we might be going in the right direction. Another enjoyable read Tristan, thank you

December 13th, 2024 08:07

One Out of Five
2781 said:

There making progress, and it speeds up going downhill.

December 13th, 2024 07:55

The Key
teardrop said:

Love, love, love this! Loved the read and really loved your format. You tell a story in itself. Thank you for the read.

December 13th, 2024 05:46

The Key
cellinic said:

Very impressive and persuasive reflection... Mystical sense is interlinked with reality. Thanks!

December 13th, 2024 04:31

A Dance With Death
rebellion_in_sanity said:

Stunning is word which came to my mind during each read of the poem....loved it and read it several times

December 12th, 2024 23:53

The Key
Mutley Ravishes said:

How worth it am I?
Who are these I\'s?
Who am I?
The greatest adventure of all time!
Well, it seems like there\'s no avoiding a trip
To hell!

Great write, Tristan.

December 12th, 2024 18:49

A Dance With Death
NinjaGirl said:

Dance until you drop dead taken literally! On one hand Death is terrifying, but I\'ve heard he likes to flirt.

December 12th, 2024 18:16

The Key
Doggerel Dave said:

I don\'t think I\'m going to emulate, but I can surely appreciate the art, Tristan.

December 12th, 2024 17:32

The Key
Tony36 said:

Excellent write Tristan

December 12th, 2024 14:07

A Dance With Death
Cassie58 said:

Wow I need a torch. Thereโ€™s alot of darkness in this poem Tristan. Pleased to say I know the sunโ€™s warmth and try my best to steer towards the light. A great read though:) Excellent poetry.

December 12th, 2024 13:38

The Key
Cassie58 said:

Fabulous shape poetry. So very clever and well done to all those prompts Tristan. As I have my own fears I donโ€™t think Iโ€™m gonna be tempted to share yours as well๐Ÿ˜‚. That is some journey to contemplate.

December 12th, 2024 13:28

The Key
TobaniNataiella said:

Blimey that is a hell of a journey to go through, Enjoyed the read Tristan

December 12th, 2024 11:38

The Key
sorenbarrett said:

Great form to this poem so nicely done

December 12th, 2024 10:46

First
vicecream said:

That alliterationnn made your words so tangible I felt them in my mouth just from reading them in my mind

December 12th, 2024 09:25

The Key
Neville said:



You sir are an artist and in more ways than one .. ๐Ÿ”‘๐Ÿ—๏ธ๐Ÿ”๐Ÿ”‘๐Ÿ”‘๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ‘

December 12th, 2024 08:49

The Key
orchidee said:

Doh! Now I reply: good write, putrid cloud of gas. heehee. Oh, I don\'t fancy a key that opens such a door.
But to be gloomy - \'Oh cheer up,\' I said to someone: \'When one door opens, another one slams in your face!\' I\'m a barrel of laughs. lol.

December 12th, 2024 08:47

A Dance With Death
arqios said:

Now that\'s a wow! I guess we all have to fill in the hollowness of existence to make it all worthwhile- a challenge to reflect on the deeper truths of existence and our own place in the world. What an intense and evocative poem!



December 12th, 2024 02:21

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