Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
no thing
Teddy.15 said:
The problem is you tried in the first place, being you is what makes you special! 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:26
Teddy.15 said:
The problem is you tried in the first place, being you is what makes you special! 🌹
July 8th, 2026 07:26
no thing
arqios said:
And you are to those that truly accept you all that you ever need to be. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:46
arqios said:
And you are to those that truly accept you all that you ever need to be. 🙏🕊️
July 8th, 2026 06:46
every. single. day
Friendship said:
Your poem resonates deeply as a profound journey of self-discovery intertwined with unbridled optimism, and yet, it inspires a sense of hopeful anticipation within me. You eloquently convey a powerful message of unwavering hope and resilience, gently reminding readers that even amidst life\'s darkest moments, there is always a radiant possibility of joy and illumination on the horizon.
July 7th, 2026 21:15
Friendship said:
Your poem resonates deeply as a profound journey of self-discovery intertwined with unbridled optimism, and yet, it inspires a sense of hopeful anticipation within me. You eloquently convey a powerful message of unwavering hope and resilience, gently reminding readers that even amidst life\'s darkest moments, there is always a radiant possibility of joy and illumination on the horizon.
July 7th, 2026 21:15
every. single. day
arqios said:
everyday, my friend. S.A.D. has been somewhat turbulent this winter/year 🙏🏻🕊️
July 7th, 2026 14:38
arqios said:
everyday, my friend. S.A.D. has been somewhat turbulent this winter/year 🙏🏻🕊️
July 7th, 2026 14:38
every. single. day
orchidee said:
Yes, and every single day, Popeye says \'Spinach, please!\' lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:35
orchidee said:
Yes, and every single day, Popeye says \'Spinach, please!\' lol.
July 7th, 2026 09:35
every. single. day
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me says there is light at the end of the tunnel that beyond the darkness there is hope. Well written my friend.
July 7th, 2026 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
A poem that to me says there is light at the end of the tunnel that beyond the darkness there is hope. Well written my friend.
July 7th, 2026 09:04
every. single. day
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
every cloud has a silver lining my friend
July 7th, 2026 08:23
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
every cloud has a silver lining my friend
July 7th, 2026 08:23
mountain fox
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a lonely weight in these few lines, capturing that strange feeling of being caught between leaving and belonging.
The cardboard mountain is a powerful image—temporary walls holding the heavy search for a place to finally call home.
July 7th, 2026 07:58
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a lonely weight in these few lines, capturing that strange feeling of being caught between leaving and belonging.
The cardboard mountain is a powerful image—temporary walls holding the heavy search for a place to finally call home.
July 7th, 2026 07:58
mountain fox
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem is about your own experience of being out of place or disconnected from a sense of home. The imagery you painted of a \"cardboard mountain fox\" suggests fragility and artificiality, emphasizing themes of impermanence and the longing for stability amid the relentless passage of time. I am here for you, my friend. Hang in there, it will work out over time.❤️🙏🌹🙏
July 6th, 2026 16:43
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem is about your own experience of being out of place or disconnected from a sense of home. The imagery you painted of a \"cardboard mountain fox\" suggests fragility and artificiality, emphasizing themes of impermanence and the longing for stability amid the relentless passage of time. I am here for you, my friend. Hang in there, it will work out over time.❤️🙏🌹🙏
July 6th, 2026 16:43
mountain fox
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, this is quite clever. I really like it.
I had to read it twice, then I read your absence note. After that, the penny dropped, and scrolling further down confirmed that the poem was about moving house and packing your life away into cardboard boxes.
I\'ve only ever moved once in my adult life, and it was incredibly stressful. I don\'t envy you at all.
A very clever, concise poem.
– Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 15:21
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, this is quite clever. I really like it.
I had to read it twice, then I read your absence note. After that, the penny dropped, and scrolling further down confirmed that the poem was about moving house and packing your life away into cardboard boxes.
I\'ve only ever moved once in my adult life, and it was incredibly stressful. I don\'t envy you at all.
A very clever, concise poem.
– Syd 🍄
July 6th, 2026 15:21
mountain fox
Paul Bell said:
You label those boxes to make things easy at the other side.
Yet for some reason, cutlery isn\'t in the box marked cutlery, and nothing else is either.
Stressed out already.
July 6th, 2026 13:42
Paul Bell said:
You label those boxes to make things easy at the other side.
Yet for some reason, cutlery isn\'t in the box marked cutlery, and nothing else is either.
Stressed out already.
July 6th, 2026 13:42
mountain fox
sorenbarrett said:
Whether those boxes are your moving or for shipping they do have clocks ticking. The transient life of person or belongings is a stress. Well done my friend.
July 6th, 2026 12:13
sorenbarrett said:
Whether those boxes are your moving or for shipping they do have clocks ticking. The transient life of person or belongings is a stress. Well done my friend.
July 6th, 2026 12:13
Every Fiber
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A path one walks alone. To lay one’s life down. A beautiful write.
July 5th, 2026 16:17
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
A path one walks alone. To lay one’s life down. A beautiful write.
July 5th, 2026 16:17
Every Fiber
orchidee said:
Good write T. That\'ll be \'fibre\' (fib-ree) in the UK. Every fibre of Popeye filled with spinach! lol.
July 5th, 2026 10:19
orchidee said:
Good write T. That\'ll be \'fibre\' (fib-ree) in the UK. Every fibre of Popeye filled with spinach! lol.
July 5th, 2026 10:19
Every Fiber
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of giving all, which is what is required to resurrect for until one lays down the old (body or beliefs) no new can arise. Raising the old creates a zombie it takes the fire of destruction of the old to raise a phoenix. The symbolism of Christ required crucifixion and death for there to be a resurrection. All martyrs must die literally or metaphorically to be one. Nicely written my friend
July 5th, 2026 05:35
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful poem of giving all, which is what is required to resurrect for until one lays down the old (body or beliefs) no new can arise. Raising the old creates a zombie it takes the fire of destruction of the old to raise a phoenix. The symbolism of Christ required crucifixion and death for there to be a resurrection. All martyrs must die literally or metaphorically to be one. Nicely written my friend
July 5th, 2026 05:35
Every Fiber
arqios said:
Sometimes it\'s so curious how history folds into itself as justice unfolds. And without this poem James Reeb would continue to be a lesser known light in the aftermath of the 1965 Bloody Sunday. 🙏🕊️(And it isn\'t just beer spelt backwards)
July 5th, 2026 05:31
arqios said:
Sometimes it\'s so curious how history folds into itself as justice unfolds. And without this poem James Reeb would continue to be a lesser known light in the aftermath of the 1965 Bloody Sunday. 🙏🕊️(And it isn\'t just beer spelt backwards)
July 5th, 2026 05:31
Let Freedom Ring
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Freedom to conform\'. Never a better point made. Each and every word has many different connotations attached to it, and each should be clearly defined, as you have here with \'freedom\'. And to rant on a little - This is where I stumble when reading poetry at times.
Anyway, thanks for a good \'un, Tristan.
July 4th, 2026 21:25
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Freedom to conform\'. Never a better point made. Each and every word has many different connotations attached to it, and each should be clearly defined, as you have here with \'freedom\'. And to rant on a little - This is where I stumble when reading poetry at times.
Anyway, thanks for a good \'un, Tristan.
July 4th, 2026 21:25
Let Freedom Ring
orchidee said:
Good write T. And one says - we knows him - let spinach ring! lol.
July 4th, 2026 11:06
orchidee said:
Good write T. And one says - we knows him - let spinach ring! lol.
July 4th, 2026 11:06
Let Freedom Ring
freyaaa said:
This poem brings a light to a message all need to hear. Definitely a fav
July 4th, 2026 10:27
freyaaa said:
This poem brings a light to a message all need to hear. Definitely a fav
July 4th, 2026 10:27
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