Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Blind
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
Now this poem not only speaks in great metaphor but with a very clever rhyme scheme and intricate meter. This is a rather advanced poem in all areas. A fave
April 8th, 2025 09:33
Blind
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Mourgana of the Fey said:
Hello,
Though this short concise poem gives way to images that vividly open in the minds eye of me as a reader. I felt there still was just that sense of mystery. You lifted just a tip of a veil enough and left the piece like billowing smoke. I enjoyed the read, greetings and blessings,
R
April 8th, 2025 09:19
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Poetic Licence said:
This was a bit of a mind bender for me and took me a while to get my head round it, which kinda makes the read even more enjoyable.
April 7th, 2025 17:35
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
2781 said:
I couldn\'t take a deeper dive, probably my myopia!
April 7th, 2025 13:00
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a hope. It seems that you have covered all the bases and despite all our striving we seem no closer than in the past. I am not sure that such a place exists my friend or ever will. A mind probing work that gives one thought. Nicely done surprised that you found so many words that I had to look up.
April 7th, 2025 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Maybe it is our myopia that impairs a cornucopia of benefits from such a hope. It seems that you have covered all the bases and despite all our striving we seem no closer than in the past. I am not sure that such a place exists my friend or ever will. A mind probing work that gives one thought. Nicely done surprised that you found so many words that I had to look up.
April 7th, 2025 10:02
Defy
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, as children we become shaped and moulded and adapt to be and those roots will always be there. When we become adults we are the same just bigger and that we will always be, sorry if that doesn\'t make any sense,loved the write
April 7th, 2025 09:38
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the read, as children we become shaped and moulded and adapt to be and those roots will always be there. When we become adults we are the same just bigger and that we will always be, sorry if that doesn\'t make any sense,loved the write
April 7th, 2025 09:38
Loop of Lost Tomorrows
arqios said:
Quite a deep dive, very intriguing thoughts🕊🙏🏻
April 7th, 2025 08:21
arqios said:
Quite a deep dive, very intriguing thoughts🕊🙏🏻
April 7th, 2025 08:21
Defy
Cheeky Missy said:
Defy what, precisely, dear friend? Maturity was what they pushed us toward, yet, alas, having likewise introduced us to Peter Pan, which of us didn\'t go that route? So, we\'re adults, can\'t alter that, but yet we\'re children still, either rooted in sand or in the rock. And having taken me on that ride, I\'ll thank you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:53
Cheeky Missy said:
Defy what, precisely, dear friend? Maturity was what they pushed us toward, yet, alas, having likewise introduced us to Peter Pan, which of us didn\'t go that route? So, we\'re adults, can\'t alter that, but yet we\'re children still, either rooted in sand or in the rock. And having taken me on that ride, I\'ll thank you. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting, teasing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 6th, 2025 19:53
Defy
orchidee said:
Yes - I\'m growing down. I\'m taking some pills to stunt my growth. I\'m 3 inches shorter already! lol. Woof! says Fido. \'You\'ve not got the right meaning of this poem\'. heehee.
April 6th, 2025 10:47
orchidee said:
Yes - I\'m growing down. I\'m taking some pills to stunt my growth. I\'m 3 inches shorter already! lol. Woof! says Fido. \'You\'ve not got the right meaning of this poem\'. heehee.
April 6th, 2025 10:47
Defy
arqios said:
Reminds me of the old boys’ club and all that… shivers and cringes🙏🏻🕊liked and Faved🤩
April 6th, 2025 08:38
arqios said:
Reminds me of the old boys’ club and all that… shivers and cringes🙏🏻🕊liked and Faved🤩
April 6th, 2025 08:38
Defy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
Enemy
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
Serpentine Seduction
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
Serpentine Seduction
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
Serpentine Seduction
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
Viscosity
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
Viscosity
Poetic Licence said:
Poetry is the plaster to cover the wounds and pain, that in the real world we would never show. A way of releasing those demons that torment us every day into a relatively safe environment, in the process allowing us to possibly heal but more importantly letting us that we are not alone in our struggles and experiences , enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Poetry is the plaster to cover the wounds and pain, that in the real world we would never show. A way of releasing those demons that torment us every day into a relatively safe environment, in the process allowing us to possibly heal but more importantly letting us that we are not alone in our struggles and experiences , enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 12:33
Viscosity
Cheeky Missy said:
You cull Shakespeare adroutly herein, and too prettily too, my la! \"...in black ink my love--\" and from the initial knowledge of family to the larger reality, weave the fabric of a garment seems the world might wear. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating, intriguing, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 4th, 2025 09:57
Cheeky Missy said:
You cull Shakespeare adroutly herein, and too prettily too, my la! \"...in black ink my love--\" and from the initial knowledge of family to the larger reality, weave the fabric of a garment seems the world might wear. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating, intriguing, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 4th, 2025 09:57
Viscosity
arqios said:
Coagulation? A funny property that kicks in during the healing process, clotting is probably a more accurate term. Could poetry be a scabbing over Lunda that refuse to heal? Mmm… fodder for thoughts🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved🤩
April 4th, 2025 08:46
arqios said:
Coagulation? A funny property that kicks in during the healing process, clotting is probably a more accurate term. Could poetry be a scabbing over Lunda that refuse to heal? Mmm… fodder for thoughts🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved🤩
April 4th, 2025 08:46
Viscosity
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic that speaks to evolution, bonding and family. Very well written Tristan.
April 4th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic that speaks to evolution, bonding and family. Very well written Tristan.
April 4th, 2025 08:21
All I See Is Darkness
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
All I See Is Darkness
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
All I See Is Darkness
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
All I See Is Darkness
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
All I See Is Darkness
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
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